Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
so lets go

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Arjun Singh 72 · Jul 2, 2020

Super update
Pahle book phir sex scene bhi aach likhe ho
Keep posting

Asif khan · Jul 2, 2020

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UPDATE- 77

Ab tak

Varsha sabko apni kahani sunna rahi thi par usko bich mein hi band karna pada kyun ki sabhi ko koi na koi kaam aa gaya tha.

Aage

Chaliye pahle hum Kiran and party ke saath chalte hai jo uss jagah pahuchi hui thi jaha uss ladki ko bahut buri haalat mein dekha gaya tha.

Wo waha puch tach kar rahi thi Mohini bhi ussi mein lagi hui thi wahi Rita bas Kiran ke saath saath chal rahi thi.

Kuch hi der mein ussi jagah par Paridhi bhi pahucti hai.

Paridhi- Kiran ma'm pata nahi kuch bahut hi ajeeb hai iss case mein par samajh nahi aa raha kaise bataun.

Kiran- kya baat hai batao

Paridhi- Ma'm jo ladki hai jispe inn sab khuno ke charge lage hue hai wo mere hisab se to khuni ho hi nahi sakti

Mohini- Kyun aisa kya hua.

Paridhi- Wo ladki andhi hai she is blind iss baat ki reports hai uske ghar mein uski Maa ne dikhayi mujhe maine cross check bhi kiya aur wo sahi the.

Mohini- Par jaisa ki cctv camera mein dikha raha kisi bhi angle se wo andhi to nahi lag rahi.

Paridhi- Yaha par bhi kuch aisa milla hai mujhe ki wo mujhe aur confuse karta jaa raha hai.

Paridhi ne apna phone nikala aur uss CCTV ki videos dikhane lagi usne pahle wo clip dikhayi jisme wo ladki kisi jaanvar ki tarah unn ladko ko maar rahi thi.

Rita- Ye koi insan nahi main daawe se kah sakti hu.

Kiran- Nahi Rita tum jitna insano ko sheeda samajh rahi ho wo utne seedhe nahi hote wo jab girne par aa jaate hai to kisi bhi had tak gir sakte hai arre insano ne to ek hatni jo pregnent thi usko bhi badi buri tarah maar diya wo bhi sirf mazze ke liye kya bataun insano ki daridagi ka aalam tumhe roj rape ho rahe hai muders ho rahe hai ladkiyon ko jalaya jaa raha hai dahej ke naam par aur bhi naa jaane kya kya. Agar batane baith gayi to kuch din beet jaaye saatyad yaa fir mahine yaa saal bhi lag sakte hai kyun ki main tumhe jab ek case batati rahungi ussi tarah ke 20 aur cases hote rahenge....are main bhi kaha ki baat pakad kar baith gayi. Paridhi isse to kuch pata nahi chal raha . Aakhir kya kahna chahti ho tum.

Paridhi- Ruko abye clip dekho jab wo crime spot par pahuchi thi.

Paridhi ne video chalu kiya aur isko dekh kar to sabhi ke hosh udde rah gaye bas ek Rita ko chod kar.

Clip mein dikh raha tha ki wo ladki ek stick ( jo blind logo ke liye hoti hai na wo) uske sahare waha par aa rahi thi. Aankho par wo bada sa jo kala chasmahota hai wo laga hua tha.

Paridhi ne video pause ki aur haatho par zoom kiya.

Paridhi- Iss waqt dekho iss ladki ke naakhon. Bilkul chote chote hai lagta hai aaj hi kata hoga.

Kiran- Hmm ye to sach hai par fir 20 minute mein aiske naakhun kaise aa gaye... Kahi kii iska chahra to nahi use kar raha tha.

Paridhi- Nahi aap iske haath mein wo breslet dekho. Ye iski Dadi ne diya tha isko. Suna hai khandali breslet hai ye in logo ka ek hi hai jo iss ladki ke haath mein hai. Maanti hu koi iski copy bhi bana lega par ab uske haath ki sabse.choti ungli ko dekho waha par shujan dikhayi de rahi hai thodi thik aisi hi shujan isse pahle wale video mein bhi hai matlab ye to pakka hai ki 2no ek hi hai. Par ye clear nahi hai ki isko sab dikhne kaise lag gaya.

Mohini- Video aage play karo.

Paridhi ne clip chalu kar diya. Aage ke clip ko dekh kar to waha par khade sabhi ka khoon hi khol gaya.

Aage ke video mein ye dikh raha tha ki wo jin ladko ka murder hua hai unn sab ne drink ki rakhi thi aur uss ladki ke andhepan ka faayda utha rahe the wo saare usko yaha waha chu rahe the. Jisse bachnevke liye ladki ne shor bhi machaya par koi bhi aage nahi aaya kyunki waha par ke sabhi unn ladko ko jaante the unke baap ko jaante the. Jab koi madad ke liye nahi aaya na tab wo ladki khud hi waha se roote hue jaane lagi par unn ladko se ye bhi naa dekha gaya unhone uski stick fek di ek taraf aur uss ladki ko bhi wahi dhaka de diya.

Iske baad video mein kuch gadbad hua matlab ek pal ko kuch dikhne hi nahi laga bas kuch hi der baad wo ladki unn sab ke saamne khadi thi aur uske naakhun bade hue the aur bhi bahut kuch badla hua tha. Fir kya uss ladki ne ek ek kar ke unn ladko ko nochna shuru kiya aur unn sab ko badi hi berahmi se maar diya.

Mohini- Main inn ladko ko sheedha samajh rahi thi par ye to....

Kiran- Dekha Rita yaha par insan se battar koi nahi hai.

Rita- Hmm samajh gayi Kiran par saayad tumne kuch miss kar diya hai.

Kiran- Hmm pata hai mujhe bhi lag raha hai uss ladki ko kuch to hua tha tabhi wo acchanak se...

Rita- Haa aur pata nahi kyun par mujhe ye kuch jaana pahchana sa laga kahi aur bhi kuch aisa dekh chuki hu mein saayad par yaad nahi aa raha.

Paridhi- Ma'm ab aage kya kare.

Kiran- Ek kaam karo pahle to ye jo clip hai naa jisme wo ladki iss ladki ko pareshan kar rahe the yaha waha touch kar rahe the usko social media par viral kar do bahut dekh liya inke baap logo ko kaise inke naam par naa jaane kya kya bakke jaa rahe hai iss video ke baad unke muh par tala lagega. Tum ye kaam abhi se shuru kar do.

Paridhi bhi haa bol waha se chali gayi.

Mohini- Bhabhi pata hai Saurya ko jab maine iss case ke baare mein kuch bataya tha na to usne kaha tha apni power ka use karo iss baar. To kya hume karna chahiye aisa.

Rita- Tum dono sochte raho main to kar rahi hu.

Rita ne apni aakhen band kari aur video mdein jis ladki ko diekh rahe the uske baare mein sochne lagi par jaise hi usko uss ladki ka pata chala uske haalat ka pata chala wo ek dum se shock rah gayi.

Mohini- Kya pata chala tumko uske baare mein.

Kiran- Ye chahra aisa kyun banaya hua hai.

Rita- Aap dono car mein baitho aur mere bataye hue raasre par chalte jaao.

Dono ne bahut se sawal kiye par Rita ne ek bhi sawal ka uttar nahi diya.

Kuch der ke driving ke baad wo pahuch gaye ek jungle ke pass gadi ka rukna tha ki Rita turant hi car se utri aur daudh laga di ek oor ussi ke piche chal di baaki ki dono aur jab baaki ke dono waha pahuche naa to unke muh khula rah gaya.

Wo ladki ek bade se ped par tangi hui thi. Uske sarir se saayad saara khoon hi nikal liya gaya ho.

Rita- Kisne kiya hoga iss bechari ke saath ye sab iske ander kaa wo dard samajh paa rahi hubmein kitna dard kitna dard hua hoga.

Kiran- Jo bhi hoga usko jhum chodenge nahi. Mohini lagta hai humko apna power use k....

Abhi wo baat puri kar hi rahe the ki Saurya waha gaa gaya.

Saurya- iski jarurat nahi hai iss case ko mein khud dekhunga ab se aur agar jarurat padi to help le lunga ab tum saare ghar chalo main iss nbody koniske ghar pahuchne kr laayak bana deta hu aur waha pahucha dunga.

Wo sab jaana to nahi chahte the par maine unko bhej hi diya.

Unke jaane ke baad.

Main- Saifali uss kitab ne ek jaan le li hai.

Saifali- Kya...Accha mein dekhti hu usko tum bas wo gudiya ek baar usse chutkara le lo.

Main- Hmm thk hai hum lal hi nikalne wale hai.

Saurya yahi baatein karta raha wahi Kiran and party wapas ghar aa chuke the. Mood tinno ka hi kharab tha ho bhi kyun naa ye sab jo dekh liya tha.

Par ye jyada der nahi raha hua kuch yun ki Margret aur Sangeeta dono wapas aa gaye the sayad bahar gaye ho Headmaster ke saath.

Fir kya tha Margret ne sabko bola aage ki kahani sunne ke liye pahle to inn eno ne manna kiya phir kuch jor dene par maan gaye aur toli phir se chal padi Varsha ke room ki oor jaha par Alex Varsha se kuch baatein kar raha tha ki tabhi gate knock hua.

Alex ne gate khola aur jab puri mandali ko dekha to wo samajh gaya ki ab khichayi hogi to pahle to usne wahi rukne ka faisla kiya par Varsha ne khud usko jaane ko bol diya aur wo chala gaya.

Bas aur kya fir shuru ho gayi wahi katha par iss baar thoda piche se hi chala gaya kissing ke time se ye Matgret ka kahna tha ki ye aari baatein ek baar mein puri sunne par hi asli mazza aata hai bas fir kya tha.

Flasback continues

Alex mujhe kiss karne laga main bhi uska shaat dene lagi hum dono tab tak kiss karte rahe jab tak dono ki saanse naa ukhadne lagi fir.

Alex- Tum bahut shunder ho

Main- Tumhe nahi lagta ye pahle kahna chahiye tha.

Alex- Kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha kya bolu kya nahi bas ab aur intezar nahi hota.

Aur fir se wo mujhe kiss karne laga aur iss baar mere kapdon ke uper se hi mere stano ko bhi daba raha tha issi wajah se mere ander ek naya sa romanch paida ho raha tha jiska parinam ye hua ki main usko aur jor jor se kiss karne lagi.

Fir se hum dono ki saasen fulne lagi par hum alag nahi hue usne mujhe guffa ke ek dewar mein chipka diya ab meri pith uske saamne thi pahle to wo bas dekhta raha fir dhere se ek kiss meri pith par ki aur fir apne haatho se meri blouse ki doriyon ko kholne laga aur main bas lambi lambi saanse hi le rahi thi.

Dekhte hi dekhte meri blouse usne utar di aur fir mujhe apni oor ghumaya.

Alex- Arre ye kya hai mujhse bhi chipaogi inhe hm.

Main- Nahi par...

Alex ne mere haath pakde aur unko neeche kar diye aur mere sthano ko dekhne laga aur bas dekhta raha.

Main- Aise kya dekh rahe ho.

Alex - Tum sach mein bahut hi sunder ho aur iss insani roop ka to pucho hi maat.

Bas itna hi kaha usne aur mere sthano par ana haath rakh unko dabane laga. Meri shiskiyan nikal rahi thi.

Main- Hmm aaaraaam se hmmm oohhh dheeree

Usne apna muh rakh diya mere nipple par aur fir jeeb se usse khelne laga.

Main bas shiskiyan leti rahi.

Wo pata nahi kab tak bas aisa hi karta raha ki tabhi mujhe Kiran didi ki baat yaad aayi ki mujhe bhi usko khush karna hai to maine bhi darte hue apna haath uske pant ke paas kiya aur uska wo mere haathon mein touch hua aur maine jhat se apna haath khinch liya.
Meri saanse achanak bahut tej ho gai thi aur usi ke sath maine apni ankhe bhi jor se band karli.

Alex- Kya hua

Main- K...kuch nahi kuch bhi nahi.

Alex- Arre daro nahi waise bhi aaj kuch karne ko nahi kahunga tumhe bas jo mein karta rahu saath deti rahna.

Alex ne fir meri niche ke kapdon ko utara ab mein uske samne bilkul hi nangi khadi thi.

Alex bas dekhe hi jaa raha tha mujhe par wo abhi bhi kapdon mein hi tha.

Main- Tum bhi to utaro apne kapde.

Mera bolna tha bas aur wo bilkul hi nanga ho gaya aur mere saamne khada ho gaya.

Main himmat kar ke fir se uske uss ko chune ke liye apna haath aage karne lagi to usne naa mein sar hillaya aur bola jaise mein kahu bas waise hi karo.

Main- hmm

Alex- Chalo ab let jao.

Main bhi binna kuch bole let gayi mujhe pata tha ki ab kya hoga mujhe sab kuch Kiran didi aur Rita ne bata jo diya tha. To maine apne pair khol liya par apni uss jagah ko apne hathon se dhak rakha tha jisko dekh Alex ko hassi aa gayi.

Wo aaya mere pass aur mere hateli ko chum kar usko waha se hata diya fir meri uss par kiss kiya jisse mujhe bahut hi ajeeb laga.

Alex- Tum to bilkul gilli ho gayi ho.

Main kuch bhi nahi boli.

Alex ne apni jeebh meri uss jagah rakhi aur fir usko chumne aur chatne laga. Main isse chatpatane lagi bahut hi ajeeb lag raha tha par accha bhi sayad bas issi liye mera haath khud uske sar par gayi aur usko daba diya.

Wo bahut der tak waha chumta aur chatta raha. aur mai maze se dohri hoti jaa rahi thi mujhe pata nahi tha ki insaani sharir is mamle me itna sukun deta hoga
Alex laga raha aur har pal mera maza badhta gaya thodi der baad mujhe aisa lagne laga ki mere andar se kuch nikalne wala hai maine alex ke sar ko aur jor se pakda mai jhtapata rahi thi anand se us anokhe ehsas se

Mai jaldi se us sukh ke charam tak pahuchna chahti thi
Aur kuch hi kshan me wo hota bhi lekin ain waqt par alex ne mujhe chhod diya
Mujhe samjh nahi aaraha tha ki akhir ye mere sath kya huwa
Abhi toh mai hawa mai ud rahi thi us adbhut anand ko prapt karne wali thi aur fir achanak ye kya ho gaya

Maine ankhe khol ke dekha toh samne alex mujhe dekh ke muskura raha tha
Use aisa karte dekh ke mujhe itna gussa aaya ki apni aag se use jala deti lekin ye bhi yaad tha ki wo mera sathi hai mai ab use koi hani pahucha nahi sakti

Haa lekin baki chije toh kar sakti hu naa jese tum sab aur har insani aurat karti hai
Wahi gussa hone pe naraj hona ya ruthna bas maine bhi wahi kiya apni ankhe ek taraf karke use band kar diya ab kuch bhi ho usse toh mai baat nahi karne wali thi

Shayad alex bhi ye baat samjh gaya tha

Alex - kya huwa...?

Lekin maine uske baat ka koi jawab nahi diya tab wo upar ki taraf aaya meri dono pair viprit disha me khule huwe they aur wo unke bich me mere upar aaya tha ek baar ko toh uska wo meri yoni ko tuch huwa toh mera pura sharir kaamp gaya aur maine jor se use apni baho me bhich liya

Alex - kya huwa bataogi

Mai - tum.. Tum ruke kyu

Meri baat sunke wo thoda sa hansa lekin meri baat koi jawab diye bager mujhe kiss karne laga aur mai bhi mantrmughdha ho uska sath de rahi thi
Kiss ke sath hi alex mere pure sharir ko sehla raha tha jo kisi bhatti ki tarha tap raha tha
Aisa karte huwe alex ne apna ek hath niche le jake apne usko pakad ke fir se meri yoni pe ghisa wo itna sakht tha ki mai fir se sihar gai aur uske sath hi meri pakad alex ke pith par aur badh gai

Thodi wo der aise hi ragadne ke baad usne kiss todi
Alex - varsha ankhe kholo

Maine ankhe khol ke uski taraf dekha toh aisa laga jese wo kuch mujhse puchna chahta ho
Use aisa dekh kar maine apne honth fir se uske honto se mila liye aur ham fir se kiss karne lage

Meri baat samjh ke usne apna wo meri yoni pe mukh ke lagaya
Jesa tum logo ne bola tha us hisab se mujhe pata tha ki aage kya hoga
Aur huwa bhi wahi

Alex ne ek jor ka dhakka mar ke uska kuch hissa mere andar dal diya mujhe toda dard huwa lekin alex ruka nahi aur fir dusra aur fir tisra aise karte huwe usne pura mere andar dal diya aur uske sath hi alex ki hunkar ki awaj aayi wo bhi pure dragon ki aur meri bhi apne wesi hi awaj nikali jo shayad yaha se bahar tak sunai di hohi

Mujhe tab itna dard huwa tha ki mai apna dragon rup lene ke liye jhatpata rahi thi lekin alex ne mujhe sambhal liya
Uska khud par pura control tha
Warna koi bhi dragon milan ke waqt bekabu ho jate hai
Thodi der wo wese hi ruka raha fir jab mera dard kam huwa toh alex ne apni kamar hilani shuru kar di wo bahut dhire se ye kar raha tha

Lekin mujhe maze ke sath dard bhi bahut ho raha tha lekin thodi hi der me mera dard khatam ho gaya aur bas reh gaya toh wo maze ka ehsas

Ham dono dragon hunkar bharte ek dusre ko chumte tab tak lage rahe jab tak hamara sharir akad nahi gaya aur hame wo apratim sukh prapt nahi huwa

Iske baad jo hua wo bahut hi adbhut tha hum dono ke sharis se 2 gole nikle aur fir hawa msin hi dono ek ho gaye aur thodi der baad wo gola 2 tukdo mein bat kar hum dono ke under samna gayi.

Jab ye hua tha naa tab to meri haalat ka pucho hi maat sharir hadd se jyada dard karne laga dimmag sunn sa pad gaya aur fir ek flash ki tarah hua aakhon ke samne aur sab wapas normal par ye hobe mein bhi bahut time laga tha.. Alex ka bhi saayad yahi haallat tha.

Flashback ends

Varsha- Pata hai kal hi saayad Alex aur Saurya jaa rahe hai uss gudiya ko thikhane lagane.

Mohini- Kya kal par mujge to nahi bataya.

Kiran - Arre batane wala hoga ab tu naraz mat ho jaana bas samjhi.

AJJ KE LIYE ITNA HI ISS UPDATE KO LIKHNE MEIN MERIADAD KI HAI MERE DOST Love 1994 JI NE TO UNKA BAHUT BAHUT DHANYAWAD.

Agle update mein dekhte hai Sun par kya hota hai aur bhi bahut kuch to bane rahiye.

Ek baat aur kuch readers ka kahna hai mein reply nahi de raha. Has ye sach hai par ab se main koshish karunga ki aisa naa ho. Main aaj hi reply dene wala tha par net problem ki wajah se ye update 4the baar mein saayad post ho jaaye to kal se main replydene wala hu

Very good interesting update

Akil · Jul 2, 2020

Update mast raha bro ab dekhte hain aage kya kya hoga

Love 1994 · Jul 2, 2020

Story kafi fast si bhaga rahe ho kuch details aur suspense kam karo toh thik rahega

Ristrcted · Jul 2, 2020

Arjun Singh 72 said:
Super update
Kahi B's faasa to nahi RHA h
Keep posting

Nahi aisa kuch nahi hai bhai wo to aapko aage ke updates mein kuch kuch pata chal gaya hoga
Sorry reply nahi kiya bahut time se kuch complications thi jinki wajah se par ab se aisa nahi hoga

Ristrcted · Jul 2, 2020

Abbasi said:
Very nice, fantastic, amazing update ..............
keep it up bro ................
Waiting for next update ................

Thanks bro
Sorry reply nahi kiya bahut time se kuch complications thi jinki wajah se par ab se aisa nahi hoga

Ristrcted · Jul 2, 2020

Devil0420 said:
Awesome update bro

Thanks bro
Sorry reply nahi kiya bahut time se kuch complications thi jinki wajah se par ab se aisa nahi hoga

Ristrcted · Jul 2, 2020

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Killerpanditji(pandit) said:
Jabardast update

Thanks bro
Sorry reply nahi kiya bahut time se kuch complications thi jinki wajah se par ab se aisa nahi hoga

Ristrcted · Jul 2, 2020

Killerpanditji(pandit) said:
Jabardast update

Thanks bhai
Sorry reply nahi kiya bahut time se kuch complications thi jinki wajah se par ab se aisa nahi hoga

Ristrcted · Jul 2, 2020

Chinturocky said:
बेहतरीन अपडेट,
अब गुरूजी शैतानी किताब के चंगुल में कैसे फस गये?

Hmmm ye question bahut hi accha hai aur jawab jald hi milega
Sorry reply nahi kiya bahut time se kuch complications thi jinki wajah se par ab se aisa nahi hoga

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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

nahi aise hi sahi hai

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Love 1994

1000 years of death jutsu

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Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds

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Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds

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Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds

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Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds

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Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds