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Incest Samraat ..The Tales of Debauchery, Hate & Revenge

Daksh The King

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Covid Se Pahle....

covid se pahle meri busyness kuch aisi thi.. mere liye lunch ka samay nikaal pana mushkil tha... mera kaam hi aisa tha.. upar ki krpa se sab koshal mangal tha.. par covid ne aisa disturb kiya.. kuch aise halat kharab hue.. karze ke bojh tale ja daba.. jo abhi tak utar nahi saka... life jaise taise kat rahi rahi thi..
samay freee tha bohut free tha.. so XP ko khub samay dia maine...

parrr abbb

uparwale ki krpa se mera dhanda firse apni routine par aane laga ha... aise me samay ki firse kami ho gayi ha mere paasss....
ab aap sab se juda hon to to juda rahunga.... update ki speed kabhi zayda samay mila to zayada likh kar post kar dia karnga....
kam mila to kammm...

jaise hi last kuch days se udpate likhna to door ki baat.. likhna kya ha. wo bhi nahi sochne ka samay tha mere paas..

aaj kuch din me samay mila.. to socha kya likha jaaye.. fir abhi dedh ghante me update likh daala... aur post bhi kar di...

so update let ho to mayus nahi hona.. updates aate rahenge.. der se sahi.. par aap ka sath bana rahega...

Thanks For You Love......
 
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Imagination Story.. All words are my own thoughts.. kisi jevit ya marit ka is kahani se koi sambandh nahi ha..

all sentences of this story are for only intertainment.. kahani padh kar maza len. There is no need to think anything else..

I have noticed that good writers get good support... toh maine bhi socha kuch apna brainwa me chal rahi story ko words ki suratwa me aap sab ke saamne prastut kar dia jaaye.. kitna achha writer ban sakunga, nahi jaanta. par achha likhne la prayaas jarur karunga.


story earth aur ek dusre planet se judi hui hogi. dusra palnet jiska naam nimoonica ha.. us planet par rehne walun ko nimoon kaha jata tha..


i can give 2 or 3 updates in a week..


Dhanyavaad!!
Great thoughts and keep it up...
 
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Update 01



South Atlantic Ocean me apni manzil ki or badh raha Harmony Of The Seas nami ship, us ship ke antim floor ki chhat par khada hua Thakur Daksh Singh.

apne desh se hazaron mile door, apnu se 6 saal se door ek marine life ji raha tha daksh. sab uske liye mar chuke the aur wo sab ke liye..


6 years.....

6 saalon se daksh thakur ne kisi ki koi bhi khabar nahi li thi. wahan se nikale jaane ke baad (dhutkar kar, zaleel karke nikaale jaane ke baad) kon is dunya me aaya aur kon is dunya se gaya. daksh thakur nahi janta tha.

dada, dadi, maa, papa, bhai behen, chacha chachi, unke bachhe aur dusre sab abhi bhi ji rahe han ya mar gaye han. daksh thakur nahi janta tha. aur na hi jaanna chahta tha. daksh thakur kisi ke baare me jaanne ki zarurat bhi nahi samjhta thi.

everyone hated him and he hated everyone

saalon se sabse door tha daksh fir bhi.. wo awazen, wo cheekhen, wo alfaz, wo nafrat wo dhutkaar, usay aaj bhi yaad thi. jab bhi un awazon ki goonj uske andar goonjti thi to wo pagal sa hone lagta hon.


zindagi......

zinda rehne ko dil nahi chahta tha daksh ka. par mar bhi nahi sakta tha.. itna dard bhar dia gaya tha uske andar. apne sharir ke andar se aatma tak ko nikaal bahar karne ke liye daksh thakur kya kuch nahi kar jaya karta tha. dunya ka konsa aisa khatarnaak kaam tha, jo daksh thakur ne na kiya ho. samudra ki us gehraai tak wo ja pohnchaa tha, jahan tak pohnch paana shayad kisi ke liye mumkin na raha ho..

par daksh thakur.....

daksh thakur bina kisi darr khauf ke har khatarnaak gehraai me utar jaya karta tha. suicide karne ki koshish kabhi nahi ki thi daksh thakur ne. haan jis kaam me uski jaan jaane ke 80%-90% bhi chances karte to wo zarur kar jaya karta tha.

dunya me koi bhi kaam 100% dangerous nahi tha daksh thakur ke liye.. agar hota to wo kab ka mar chuka hota.. usay mila dard usay is dunya ko chhod kar jaane bhi nahi deta tha.

Diksh became a multi-talented man because of the dangers he faced.


shayad wo marna bhi nahi chahta tha. agar mar jata to fir wo usay kaise hasil kar pata. ek wahi to thi jiske liye wo marna nahi chahta tha.. wo bhi daksh se nafrat karti thi..
she hated him immensely.....

wahi thi jiski waja se daksh ki zindagi barbad ho gai thi, wahi thi jiski waja se daksh thakur ko maut nahi aa rahi thi. wahi thi jiske milne ki aas liye daksh thakur hamesha hi khatron se lad jaya karta tha. jahan yakeeni maut hua karti thi, daksh thakur wahan se bhi bach jaya karta tha.

wahi thi jisne daksh thakur ko barbad kar dia tha.. wahi thi jise paane ke liye daksh thakur hamesha se betaab raha tha. wahi thi, jo shayad kabhi badal kar daksh thakur ki zindagi me firse bhi aa jaaye to daksh thakur kabhi bhi usay na apna sakun..

kuch aise hi vichar daksh thakur ke the.

kaisi ajeeb baat thi, jise daksh thakur beinteha chahta tha, jise paane ke liye daksh thakur marna bhi nahi chahta tha. jise paane ke liye daksh thakur zinda tha. agar kabhi wo daksh thakur ki zindagi me aa bhi jaati to daksh thakur usay paaye bina side se nikal jata..

jis tarha se daksh thakur ko dhutkaar dia gaya tha. shayad wo bhi kabhi moka milne par usay dhutkaar deta..


"mujhe nafrat ha tumse shadeed nafrat... i hate you daksh.. i hate you.. And I will always hate you.. mar jana par kabhi mujhse apni surat matt dikhana thuuuuuuuuuu.."

"tumm.. tumm.. mere bhai nahi ho sakte daksh.. nahi.. nahi.. tum mere bhai nahi ho sakte.. aisi neech harkat karne wala kabhi mera bhai ho hi nahi sakta.. dafa ho jaao hamari zindagi se hamesha hamesha ke liye.. kabhi apni ghattiya surat leke mere saamne bhi matt aana"

"tu meri kokh me hi kyun nahi mar gaya paapi.. kaash mujhe pata hota tu aisa nikle ga. toh main khud tujhe apne hathon se apni kokh me hi maar deti.. agar aisa kiya hota to aaj aisa din dekhna naseeb nahi hota"

"kitna chah thi mujhe ek waris ki.. kitni khushiyan manaai thi hum sab ne tere janam din par.. par tum.. tum to hamara khun kehlwane layak nahi ho. dafa ho jaao meri haveli se.. fir kabhi yahan matt aana"

"hamesha hi main khud par garv kiya karta tha tujhe apna beta paa kar.. par tu.. par tu hi mere aur mere khandan ki izzat ko mitti me mila gaya.. apne hi ghar ki bahu betiyon ki izzat ke sath khelne laga.. thuuuuuu ha tujh par.. nikalllll jaaa mere ghar se.. nikal ja hum sab ki zindgiyon se..


"nikallll jaa"

"nikallll jaa"

"nikallll jaa"

"nikallll jaa"




aakash me badal nahi the, chandni raat thi, stars chamak rahe the. thandi thandi hawa chal rahi thi. mausam suhana tha, toofan ke aane ka koi amkaan nahi tha.. par jo tofaan baar baar daksh thakur ke andar aane lagta tha. wo samudri toofan se kahin badh kar tha..

kuch bhi to nahi bhula tha daksh thakur.. sab kuch aise yaad tha daksh thakur ko, jaise kuch samay pehle ki baat ho.. firse sab yaad aane laga to uske andar ki aag firse badhne lagi. aise samay me koi kam hi uske saamne aaya karta tha.. wehshi ban jaya karta tha daksh thakur. wo pagal to nahi hota tha. lekin pagal pan ki hadd se bhi kahin badh jaya karta tha.

daksh thakur ship par pichhle 3 saal se as a engineer kaam kar raha tha. is kaam me bhi daksh thakur slefmade tha. dekh kar sab sekh gaya tha. bina degree ke hi wo ship par as a negineer kaam kar raha tha...


daksh thakur ke andar ki ghutan badhne lagi to chhat chhat par maujud intercom se neeche call karke batane laga

"main samudra me utarna chahta hon"

daksh thakur ki baat ka dhayan hamesha hi rakha jata tha. kuch der me ship dheere hokar samudra me hi ruk gaya..


raat ka akhri pehr tha. toh ship ke staf ke siva sare passengers so rahe the.. apne kapdee utaar kar, ek underwear me chhat par rehte hue hi ek long jump lagaya daksh thakur ne aur dono hath aage karte hue seedha samudra ke paani me ja pohnchaa..

paani ko cheerte hue wo bohut neeche tak gaya... fir wapis upar ki or uthne laga.. jald hi wo paani ki satah par tha. daksh thakur firse paani me jane hi wala tha keh upar asmaan se ek tez roshni ki lakeer si chamakti hui neeche apni or aate hue daksh ko dikhi..

roshni ki us lakeer ki speed bohut zayada thi. daksh heran hota usse pehle hi wo roshni ki lakeer niche aate hi usse takra gai..

roshni ke takrane se daksh thakur ko 440 volt ka jhatka laga.. daksh bina tadpe hi paani me bohut neeche jaa kar behosh ho gaya... high voltage se lagne wala jhatka wo sehn nahi kar paya tha.


hosh aane par daskh ne ankh khol kar pehle right fir left dekha.. khud ko sahil par lete hue paya to firse ankhen band kar leen.. first to daksh ko yaad hi nahi raha tha raat wo ship par tha aur samudra me naha raha tha..

jaise hi usay sab yaad aaya woh ek jhatke me uth baitha.. uthte hi wo firse piche ki or gir pada.

daksh khud se.. ye mujhe itni weekness kyun feel ho rahi ha. aise jaise main saalon se bhuka hon. jaise maine apne andar ki sari shakti ka upayug kar liya ho. daksh jaise bhi karke khud ke andar bachi khushi shakti ko ikatha karne laga.. wo ladkhadate huye uth khada hua. daksh aas paas dekhne laga.. dekhne par paya keh wo to ek mini island par tha.


what is this.. how is this possible.. main toh ship ke paas naha raha tha. yahan kaise aa gaya..

daksh samudra kinare khada island ko dekhne lagta toh kabhi samudra me.. door door tak usay wo ship nazar nahi aa raha tha.. wahan ek island ke siva kuch bhi nahi tha. kuch tha toh charon or samudra ka paani tha.


"tum bhul gaye ho daksh, tum samudra me naha rahe the.. main asmaan se girte hue tumse takra gai thi..tumse takrate hi main tumme samati chali gai thi.. tum meri power ko sehn nahi kar paaye aur behosh ho gaye"

ladki ki awaz sunkar daksh firse ladkhada gaya.. woh charon dishaon me dekhne laga.. par koi aas paas nahi tha.

"yahan tumhare aas paas koi nahi ha daksh. jo tumhe nazar aayega. yahan is sansan island par tum ho aur ek main hon"

daksh ki hairat kam hi nahi ho rahi thi.

daksh : tum kahan ho, tum mujhe nazar kyun nahi aa rahi.. kya tum invisible ho..


"main tumhare andar hon"

daksh : what nonsense.. aisa kaise ho sakta hai. koi kisi ke andar kaise samaa sakta ha. tum zarur invisible ho. aur mujhse jhut bol rahi ho.

"i'm not lying daksh.. main sach me hi tumhare andar hon.. raat main tumse takrate hi tumme samaa gai thi. yahi waja bani jo mere dushman mujhe pa nahi sake"

daksh firse baith gaya.. apne sarr ko dono hathon se thaam kar wo us awaz wali se bola

daksh : are you still kidding me?


"nahi daksh mujhe kya zarurat ha.. tumse mazak karne ki"

daksh : to mujhe bataao, tum... tum kaise mere andar samaa sakti ho aur tum ho kon, asmaan se kaise aa sakti ho tum.. asmaan se aane wala aise to nahi aata. koi aa bhi jaaye to uska zinda bach pana mumkin nahi ha.

"Ehehehehe.. ek sath itne sawal"

daksh : to batao mujhe, khud se hi sab bata do..

"universe me itne secrets han, kisi bhi planet par rehne wale pure universe ke secrets nahi jaan sakte.. main bhi aise hi palnet se aai hon"

daksh : This is all nonsense.. aisa kuch bhi nahi ha.. prithvi ke siva kisi aur planet par zindagi mumkin nahi ha. agar ha toh prithvi par uska pohnch pana mumkin nahi ha..

"daksh thakur is universe me sab mumkin ha.. apni dunya ke baare me bataao, hazaron saal pehle rehne wale kisi ek bhi viyakti ko zinda karke aaj ki dunya dikha di jaaye to wo dekh kar yahi kahega "asambhav" ye nahi ho sakta.. daksh everything is possible in this universe.. aise bohut se secrets han, jinhe koi pa nahi saka"

uski baaten sunkar daksh ke sarr me dard hone laga tha.

daskh : mujhe bas itna bata do, agar tum sach me hi mere andar ho to mai tumhe mehsus kyun nahi kar pa raha.


" daksh main tumhare andar se bahar nikal kar to tumhare saanme visible nahi ho sakti. haan tum mujhe dekh sakte ho"

daksh : wo kaise?

"wo aise keh tum apni ankhen band kar apni dono ankhon ke bech me dekho"

daksh uski baat sunkar ankhen band kar gaya.. fir wo usi ke bataye huwe par amal karne laga

daskh : ye kya mujhe to white white dikh raha ha sab


"ab apni ankhon par dono hath rakh kar dekho"

daksh ne apni ankhon me dono hath rakh kar dekha toh

daksh : oh my God tum to mujhe sach me dikh rahi ho.. tumhari surat mujhe puri kyun nahi dikha de rahi. tumhara cherha dhundla dhundla kyun dikha de raha ha mujhe.


"tum abhi mujhe clear nahi dekh sakte.. uske liye tumhe apni brain power badhani hogi.. daksh tumne apni kam ho chuki power ko bhul chuke ho"

daksh : haan ye baat to main sach me bhul hi gaya tha. tumne mujhe kuch sochne layak chhoda hi kahan tha. tumhe apne andar paa kar main shock ho gaya tha.

"tum behosh ho gaye the to main apne dushmano ki pohnch se door hone ke liye apni power ka use karte hue, behoshi me hi tumhe is island par le aai.. ye island us ship se 300 mile door ha.. isi waja se tumhari power down hui ha daksh.. jitni speed maine use kari ha, wo tumhari power se kahin badh kar ha"

apne dono hath hata kar daksh ne apni ankhen khol deen..
Great starting..👍
 

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Update 01



South Atlantic Ocean me apni manzil ki or badh raha Harmony Of The Seas nami ship, us ship ke antim floor ki chhat par khada hua Thakur Daksh Singh.

apne desh se hazaron mile door, apnu se 6 saal se door ek marine life ji raha tha daksh. sab uske liye mar chuke the aur wo sab ke liye..


6 years.....

6 saalon se daksh thakur ne kisi ki koi bhi khabar nahi li thi. wahan se nikale jaane ke baad (dhutkar kar, zaleel karke nikaale jaane ke baad) kon is dunya me aaya aur kon is dunya se gaya. daksh thakur nahi janta tha.

dada, dadi, maa, papa, bhai behen, chacha chachi, unke bachhe aur dusre sab abhi bhi ji rahe han ya mar gaye han. daksh thakur nahi janta tha. aur na hi jaanna chahta tha. daksh thakur kisi ke baare me jaanne ki zarurat bhi nahi samjhta thi.

everyone hated him and he hated everyone

saalon se sabse door tha daksh fir bhi.. wo awazen, wo cheekhen, wo alfaz, wo nafrat wo dhutkaar, usay aaj bhi yaad thi. jab bhi un awazon ki goonj uske andar goonjti thi to wo pagal sa hone lagta hon.


zindagi......

zinda rehne ko dil nahi chahta tha daksh ka. par mar bhi nahi sakta tha.. itna dard bhar dia gaya tha uske andar. apne sharir ke andar se aatma tak ko nikaal bahar karne ke liye daksh thakur kya kuch nahi kar jaya karta tha. dunya ka konsa aisa khatarnaak kaam tha, jo daksh thakur ne na kiya ho. samudra ki us gehraai tak wo ja pohnchaa tha, jahan tak pohnch paana shayad kisi ke liye mumkin na raha ho..

par daksh thakur.....

daksh thakur bina kisi darr khauf ke har khatarnaak gehraai me utar jaya karta tha. suicide karne ki koshish kabhi nahi ki thi daksh thakur ne. haan jis kaam me uski jaan jaane ke 80%-90% bhi chances karte to wo zarur kar jaya karta tha.

dunya me koi bhi kaam 100% dangerous nahi tha daksh thakur ke liye.. agar hota to wo kab ka mar chuka hota.. usay mila dard usay is dunya ko chhod kar jaane bhi nahi deta tha.

Diksh became a multi-talented man because of the dangers he faced.


shayad wo marna bhi nahi chahta tha. agar mar jata to fir wo usay kaise hasil kar pata. ek wahi to thi jiske liye wo marna nahi chahta tha.. wo bhi daksh se nafrat karti thi..
she hated him immensely.....

wahi thi jiski waja se daksh ki zindagi barbad ho gai thi, wahi thi jiski waja se daksh thakur ko maut nahi aa rahi thi. wahi thi jiske milne ki aas liye daksh thakur hamesha hi khatron se lad jaya karta tha. jahan yakeeni maut hua karti thi, daksh thakur wahan se bhi bach jaya karta tha.

wahi thi jisne daksh thakur ko barbad kar dia tha.. wahi thi jise paane ke liye daksh thakur hamesha se betaab raha tha. wahi thi, jo shayad kabhi badal kar daksh thakur ki zindagi me firse bhi aa jaaye to daksh thakur kabhi bhi usay na apna sakun..

kuch aise hi vichar daksh thakur ke the.

kaisi ajeeb baat thi, jise daksh thakur beinteha chahta tha, jise paane ke liye daksh thakur marna bhi nahi chahta tha. jise paane ke liye daksh thakur zinda tha. agar kabhi wo daksh thakur ki zindagi me aa bhi jaati to daksh thakur usay paaye bina side se nikal jata..

jis tarha se daksh thakur ko dhutkaar dia gaya tha. shayad wo bhi kabhi moka milne par usay dhutkaar deta..


"mujhe nafrat ha tumse shadeed nafrat... i hate you daksh.. i hate you.. And I will always hate you.. mar jana par kabhi mujhse apni surat matt dikhana thuuuuuuuuuu.."

"tumm.. tumm.. mere bhai nahi ho sakte daksh.. nahi.. nahi.. tum mere bhai nahi ho sakte.. aisi neech harkat karne wala kabhi mera bhai ho hi nahi sakta.. dafa ho jaao hamari zindagi se hamesha hamesha ke liye.. kabhi apni ghattiya surat leke mere saamne bhi matt aana"

"tu meri kokh me hi kyun nahi mar gaya paapi.. kaash mujhe pata hota tu aisa nikle ga. toh main khud tujhe apne hathon se apni kokh me hi maar deti.. agar aisa kiya hota to aaj aisa din dekhna naseeb nahi hota"

"kitna chah thi mujhe ek waris ki.. kitni khushiyan manaai thi hum sab ne tere janam din par.. par tum.. tum to hamara khun kehlwane layak nahi ho. dafa ho jaao meri haveli se.. fir kabhi yahan matt aana"

"hamesha hi main khud par garv kiya karta tha tujhe apna beta paa kar.. par tu.. par tu hi mere aur mere khandan ki izzat ko mitti me mila gaya.. apne hi ghar ki bahu betiyon ki izzat ke sath khelne laga.. thuuuuuu ha tujh par.. nikalllll jaaa mere ghar se.. nikal ja hum sab ki zindgiyon se..


"nikallll jaa"

"nikallll jaa"

"nikallll jaa"

"nikallll jaa"




aakash me badal nahi the, chandni raat thi, stars chamak rahe the. thandi thandi hawa chal rahi thi. mausam suhana tha, toofan ke aane ka koi amkaan nahi tha.. par jo tofaan baar baar daksh thakur ke andar aane lagta tha. wo samudri toofan se kahin badh kar tha..

kuch bhi to nahi bhula tha daksh thakur.. sab kuch aise yaad tha daksh thakur ko, jaise kuch samay pehle ki baat ho.. firse sab yaad aane laga to uske andar ki aag firse badhne lagi. aise samay me koi kam hi uske saamne aaya karta tha.. wehshi ban jaya karta tha daksh thakur. wo pagal to nahi hota tha. lekin pagal pan ki hadd se bhi kahin badh jaya karta tha.

daksh thakur ship par pichhle 3 saal se as a engineer kaam kar raha tha. is kaam me bhi daksh thakur slefmade tha. dekh kar sab sekh gaya tha. bina degree ke hi wo ship par as a negineer kaam kar raha tha...


daksh thakur ke andar ki ghutan badhne lagi to chhat chhat par maujud intercom se neeche call karke batane laga

"main samudra me utarna chahta hon"

daksh thakur ki baat ka dhayan hamesha hi rakha jata tha. kuch der me ship dheere hokar samudra me hi ruk gaya..


raat ka akhri pehr tha. toh ship ke staf ke siva sare passengers so rahe the.. apne kapdee utaar kar, ek underwear me chhat par rehte hue hi ek long jump lagaya daksh thakur ne aur dono hath aage karte hue seedha samudra ke paani me ja pohnchaa..

paani ko cheerte hue wo bohut neeche tak gaya... fir wapis upar ki or uthne laga.. jald hi wo paani ki satah par tha. daksh thakur firse paani me jane hi wala tha keh upar asmaan se ek tez roshni ki lakeer si chamakti hui neeche apni or aate hue daksh ko dikhi..

roshni ki us lakeer ki speed bohut zayada thi. daksh heran hota usse pehle hi wo roshni ki lakeer niche aate hi usse takra gai..

roshni ke takrane se daksh thakur ko 440 volt ka jhatka laga.. daksh bina tadpe hi paani me bohut neeche jaa kar behosh ho gaya... high voltage se lagne wala jhatka wo sehn nahi kar paya tha.


hosh aane par daskh ne ankh khol kar pehle right fir left dekha.. khud ko sahil par lete hue paya to firse ankhen band kar leen.. first to daksh ko yaad hi nahi raha tha raat wo ship par tha aur samudra me naha raha tha..

jaise hi usay sab yaad aaya woh ek jhatke me uth baitha.. uthte hi wo firse piche ki or gir pada.

daksh khud se.. ye mujhe itni weekness kyun feel ho rahi ha. aise jaise main saalon se bhuka hon. jaise maine apne andar ki sari shakti ka upayug kar liya ho. daksh jaise bhi karke khud ke andar bachi khushi shakti ko ikatha karne laga.. wo ladkhadate huye uth khada hua. daksh aas paas dekhne laga.. dekhne par paya keh wo to ek mini island par tha.


what is this.. how is this possible.. main toh ship ke paas naha raha tha. yahan kaise aa gaya..

daksh samudra kinare khada island ko dekhne lagta toh kabhi samudra me.. door door tak usay wo ship nazar nahi aa raha tha.. wahan ek island ke siva kuch bhi nahi tha. kuch tha toh charon or samudra ka paani tha.


"tum bhul gaye ho daksh, tum samudra me naha rahe the.. main asmaan se girte hue tumse takra gai thi..tumse takrate hi main tumme samati chali gai thi.. tum meri power ko sehn nahi kar paaye aur behosh ho gaye"

ladki ki awaz sunkar daksh firse ladkhada gaya.. woh charon dishaon me dekhne laga.. par koi aas paas nahi tha.

"yahan tumhare aas paas koi nahi ha daksh. jo tumhe nazar aayega. yahan is sansan island par tum ho aur ek main hon"

daksh ki hairat kam hi nahi ho rahi thi.

daksh : tum kahan ho, tum mujhe nazar kyun nahi aa rahi.. kya tum invisible ho..


"main tumhare andar hon"

daksh : what nonsense.. aisa kaise ho sakta hai. koi kisi ke andar kaise samaa sakta ha. tum zarur invisible ho. aur mujhse jhut bol rahi ho.

"i'm not lying daksh.. main sach me hi tumhare andar hon.. raat main tumse takrate hi tumme samaa gai thi. yahi waja bani jo mere dushman mujhe pa nahi sake"

daksh firse baith gaya.. apne sarr ko dono hathon se thaam kar wo us awaz wali se bola

daksh : are you still kidding me?


"nahi daksh mujhe kya zarurat ha.. tumse mazak karne ki"

daksh : to mujhe bataao, tum... tum kaise mere andar samaa sakti ho aur tum ho kon, asmaan se kaise aa sakti ho tum.. asmaan se aane wala aise to nahi aata. koi aa bhi jaaye to uska zinda bach pana mumkin nahi ha.

"Ehehehehe.. ek sath itne sawal"

daksh : to batao mujhe, khud se hi sab bata do..

"universe me itne secrets han, kisi bhi planet par rehne wale pure universe ke secrets nahi jaan sakte.. main bhi aise hi palnet se aai hon"

daksh : This is all nonsense.. aisa kuch bhi nahi ha.. prithvi ke siva kisi aur planet par zindagi mumkin nahi ha. agar ha toh prithvi par uska pohnch pana mumkin nahi ha..

"daksh thakur is universe me sab mumkin ha.. apni dunya ke baare me bataao, hazaron saal pehle rehne wale kisi ek bhi viyakti ko zinda karke aaj ki dunya dikha di jaaye to wo dekh kar yahi kahega "asambhav" ye nahi ho sakta.. daksh everything is possible in this universe.. aise bohut se secrets han, jinhe koi pa nahi saka"

uski baaten sunkar daksh ke sarr me dard hone laga tha.

daskh : mujhe bas itna bata do, agar tum sach me hi mere andar ho to mai tumhe mehsus kyun nahi kar pa raha.


" daksh main tumhare andar se bahar nikal kar to tumhare saanme visible nahi ho sakti. haan tum mujhe dekh sakte ho"

daksh : wo kaise?

"wo aise keh tum apni ankhen band kar apni dono ankhon ke bech me dekho"

daksh uski baat sunkar ankhen band kar gaya.. fir wo usi ke bataye huwe par amal karne laga

daskh : ye kya mujhe to white white dikh raha ha sab


"ab apni ankhon par dono hath rakh kar dekho"

daksh ne apni ankhon me dono hath rakh kar dekha toh

daksh : oh my God tum to mujhe sach me dikh rahi ho.. tumhari surat mujhe puri kyun nahi dikha de rahi. tumhara cherha dhundla dhundla kyun dikha de raha ha mujhe.


"tum abhi mujhe clear nahi dekh sakte.. uske liye tumhe apni brain power badhani hogi.. daksh tumne apni kam ho chuki power ko bhul chuke ho"

daksh : haan ye baat to main sach me bhul hi gaya tha. tumne mujhe kuch sochne layak chhoda hi kahan tha. tumhe apne andar paa kar main shock ho gaya tha.

"tum behosh ho gaye the to main apne dushmano ki pohnch se door hone ke liye apni power ka use karte hue, behoshi me hi tumhe is island par le aai.. ye island us ship se 300 mile door ha.. isi waja se tumhari power down hui ha daksh.. jitni speed maine use kari ha, wo tumhari power se kahin badh kar ha"

apne dono hath hata kar daksh ne apni ankhen khol deen..
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daksh : theek ha maine dekh liya tum mere andar samaai hui ho.. kripya ab mere andar se bahar tashreef le aayen.

"sorry daksh main bahar nahi aa sakti"

daksh : wo kis khushi me miss!

"mera naam shimuna hai"

daksh : khoob, achha naam ha.. lekin main apne wajud ko kisi ka thikana nahi banne de sakta.

shimuna : daksh agar main bahar nikli to mere dushman jaan jaayenge, main kahan hon. nahi plz mujhe apne andar hi rehne do. main lozan ke kabze me nahi jana chahti, agar wo mujhe pakad kar wapis planet par le gaye toh mera pura maar diya jaayega.. shimuna sisak padi thi.. daksh ladkiyon par daya karna bhul chuka tha. lekin shimuna par daksh ko daya aa gayi. shimuna ek dusre planet se thi, daksh ko uspar daya aa gai.

daksh : achha achha nahi nikalne ko bolta..

daksh ko chakkar se aane lage the, wo let gaya

shimuna : sorry daksh meri waja se tumhari aisi halat hui ha.

daksh : its ok shimuna.. ab meri ye weekness kaise door hogi, aur kitne samay me door hogi.

shimuna : daksh main tumhari earth par upalabdh shakti badhane wali cheezon baare nahi jaanti. tum mujhe samudra me mile the, tum jaante hoge, samudra me kya kuch aisa ha, jisse se tum khud ko recover kar sakte ho.. aur

daksh : aur kya shimuna?

shimuna : daksh har planet par bohut kuch aisa bhi paya jata ha, jo har dhund nahi pata. aisi cheezon ke upayog se shakti ko kai guna badhaya bhi ja sakta ha.

daksh : ye baat to main bhi samjhta hon shimuna. hamare samudra ki gehraiyo me bohut kuch aisa ha, jinke baare me pustken bhari padi han.. par samudra ki gehraai me paayi jane wali un jadi bootiyon tak kisi ki rasayi mumkin nahi ha.

shimuna : abb mumkin ha daksh.

daksh shimuna ki baat heran reh gaya.

shimuna : tum bhul rahe ho daksh, daskh tum island par kaise aaye. jab tak main tumhare andar hon. tum samudra ki kisi bhi gehraai me ja sakte ho.. dekh sakte ho, saans le sakte ho, khaa pi sakte ho.

daksh : kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa?

shimuna : haan daksh ye mumkin ha.. aur tumhe aisa hi karna padega daksh, mujhe bhi zarurat ha is sab ki. tum jitni khud ki power badhaoge daksh, utni safe main bhi rahungi.

daksh : is baat ka kya matlab hua shimuna

shimuna : daksh main bahar reh kar bhi khatre me hon aur tumhare andar reh kar bhi.

daksh : bahar rehte tumhe apne hi planet walun se khatra hoga. mere andar rehte hue bhala kaisa khatra?

shimuna : mujhe earth par aate hue earth ke space center se dekh liya gya hoga. mere peeche aa rahe nimoons bhi earth walun ki nazron se bach nahi sake honge daksh. another planet se judi hui koi bhi info ho, sab uski chhan been me lag jaate han. hum to fir bhi insano se milte julte han. humen kaise nahi earth wale dhundenge.. main to tumhare andar reh kar sabki nazron se ojhal ho gayi han. par dusre nimoons kisi ki nazron se chhup nahi sakenge.. kyun ki wo meri tahra se kisi dusre me sama nahi sakte. nimoons ne pehle to tumhe samudra me dhunda hoga. na milne par tumhari khoj ki hogi. tum kon ho kahan se aaye ho.. kaiyon ko maara hoga unho ne tumhare baare me jaanne ke liye. nimoons mere piche the. mujhe tumme samate hue wo dekh chuke honge. ab wo tumhari khoj me honge. aise wo sabki nazron me aa gaye honge. agar aisa ho chuka ha daksh toh nimoons baare saari earth wale jaan chuke honge.

daksh : mujhe kyun dhunden shimuna, wo ye bhi to soch sakte han, tum mere andar se nikal kar kisi aur me bhi sama sakti ho.

shimuna : unhe turant hi pata chal jaayega daksh, jab bhi main tumhare andar se bahar niklongi. baar baar kisi me samaane se meri power bhi kam hoti ha. aur mujhe earth par reh kar taqat hasil karni ha, na keh kam.. lozan ko maar kar firse apne meesa ko king banana ha mujhe.

daksh : meesa?

shimua : hamare planet par pita ko meesa kehte han daksh

daksh : aur maa ko?

shimuna : Ehehehe meesi

daksh : hahaha "meesa".."meesi"

shimuna : chalo daksh ab yahan se chalte han. kis country me jana chahoge tum.

daksh : pehle to samandar me rehte hue hi mujhe apni shakti wapis paani hogi.

shimuna : paani hi nahi badhani bhi hogi.. tumhe fighting aati ha daksh?

daksh : street fighting aati ha kisi had tak. bohut kam kisi se ladne ka chance bana ha mera.

shimuna : tumhe apni earth ke hisab se ladna seekhna hoga daksh. warna tumhare liye mere liye bohut mushkil ho jayegi. aur sach kahun to tumhare wajud ke best thikana mujhe kisi aur wajud me nahi milega. apne liye mere liye khud ko powerfull banaao daksh.

daksh : ab to aisa hi karna padega.. chalo chalte han samudra me

daksh utha ldakhada hua samudra me utar gaya. samudra me utarte hi daksh ko khud me kuch energy mehsus hone lagi..

kuch gehraai me jaate hi daksh ne ankhen khol kar saans lene ki koshish ki. sach me hi usay koi pareshani nahi bani. saans lene se paani uski naak me nahi gaya. aisa sab daksh ke liye hairat angez tha. daksh fir samudra ke paani me lambe lambe saans lene laga..

shimuna : maine kaha tha na daksh tumse.. paani me tumhe kisi kisam ki koi preshani nahi hogi. haan agar koi preshani ban sakti ha to wo ha samudri jeev se. khud ko usse bachane ki koshish karna. tum kisi bhi samudra jeev se zayada speed se ter kar sakte ho.

daskh : ye sab mere liye bada ajeeb ha shimuna

shimuna : ajeeb to hoga hi. tum thehre insaan, ek insan paani me saans le raha ho. uske liye ajeeb to hoga hi.. chalo ab aage badho aur neeche gehri me utro..

daksh : gehraai me abhi khatra zayada hoga. pehle khud ko recover kar lun..

daksh normal gehraai me rehte hue hi wapsi ka safar tay karne laga. aage africa tha. ship par wo laut nahi sakta tha. aage ja nahi sakta tha. abb se uski life ke maanings badal gaye the. shimuna uske andar se nikal bhi jaati to bhi dunya wale usay zinda jaan kar uske piche pad jaate.




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shimuna ne jaisa daksh se kaha tha, hua bhi bilkul vaisa hi. puri dunya me khalbali mach gayi thi. NASA walun ne shimuna samet paanch aur nimoons ko earth par aate hue dekh liya tha. ye khabar turant hi american president ko di gai. wahan se khabar pure world ki media ko de di gai.

fir to jaise puri dunya ke news channel wale is khabar ko nashar karne lage.

sattelite cameras ko zoom karke sabko dekh liya gaya sivaye shimuna ke. paancho nimoons akaar me to dikhayi de rahe the lekin unke face clear nahi the. shimuna roshni me lipti hui dikhai de rahi thi. baaki nimoons bina roshni ke the.

samudra ke jis hisse ki or wo sab utarte dikhaai diye the. wahan se guzar rahe sabhi ships par contact kiya jane laga. jald hi daksh wale ship baare bhi sab jaan gaye. us ship par hue nimoons ke hamle ki khabar bhi pata chal gai thi. is khabar ke sath hi ship par liye gaye nimoons ke snap bhi all world me viral hote chale gaye.. passnegers ship tha. kaiyon ne snaps liye nimoons ke toh kaiyon ne videos bana li thi.

ship par nimoons ke hue hamle baare shimuna bhi daksh ko bata chuki thi. nimoons daksh ki detail paane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte the. aur hua bhi wahi.

daksh jab samudra me naha raha tha. shimuna ko daksh me samate toh koi nahi dekh saka. lekin ship ke staf shimuna ke aane ki jhalak dekh gaya tha. shimuna ke baad dusre 5 nimoons bhi jab samudra me gire to ek zordar awaz hui thi. paani ke chheente bohut door tak gaye the.. jise ship par dekh liya gaya tha.. foran hi siren baja kar sabko saavdhan bhi kar dia gaya..

nimoons jab samudra me shimuna ko nahi pa sake. daksh ke sath wo samudra me hi rehte hue kahin door bohut door chali gai thi. wo shimuna ka peecha nahi kar paaye.. daksh ki detail hasil karne ke liye wo ship par chad gaye. nimoons ke akaar dekh kar sab dar gaye. ship ke guards jinke paas latest guns thee. un guns ka rukh nimoons ki or kar dia gaya..

ship ke captain bhi jaan gaya tha, asmaan se tapke hue insan nahi ho sakte.. unke akaar bhi insaano se bade the. captain ne security incharge ko dekha to incharge ne guards ko hamla karne ko bol dia.

ek jung chhid gayi thi ship par. bohut se guards maare gaye. nimoons ke liye earth walun se ladai asaan nahi thi. goliyan lagne se wo bhi zakhmi hone lage.. unme jo leader tha. wo sabko samudra me koodne ke liye bol gaya..

sab samudra me koodne lage.. nimoons leader ne ek guard ko pakad aur uske mathe se mathe jod kar daksh baare info lene laga.. lekin usay kuch hasil nahi hua. daksh ko ship par sab DK ke naam se jaante the.. daksh kahan se aaya tha, kahan rehta tha, koi nahi jaanta tha. daksh ne bhi apni info sahi se kisi ko nahi bataai thi.. apna ghar aur apne sab wo chhod chuka tha. toh kisi ko apne baare se sab batane ki zarurat bhi usne mehsus nahi ki thi..

nimoons leader bhi samudra me utar gaya.. woh shimuna ko paane me nakam ho gaya tha. daksh baare detail bhi wo paa nahi saka tha. kuch to karna hi tha, khali hath to wo bhi wapis nahi lautne wale the.


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ship me banaai gai nimoons ki pics nd videos amercian CIA ko bhej di gai..

Power.....

jiske paas power hoti, usi ke andar mazeed power ka lalach sabse badh kar hota hai..
planet koi bhi ho, usme rehne wale kaise bhi hon. har koi sabse badhkar khud ko powerfull dekhna chahta ha.

dusre planet se aaye huon ke liye sari dunya pagal hone lagi thi. dunya ke sabse powerfull country kisi ek bhi nimoon ko hasil kar lena chahte the. ek to space baare bohut se secrets unke hath lagte dusre wo nimoons par research karke bohut si power bhi hasil kar sakte the.

bade bade deshon ki intelligence companies ke sath sath underworld wale bhi aisi khabar sunkar lalach me aa gaye the. wo bhi nimoons ke liye sar garam hone lage..




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Fantastic story

Aapne concept to bahut hi jabarjast chuna hai dekhte hai Aapki lekhni yha ke readero ko khush kr pati hai ya nhi...
2 planet ke Bich story Chalne vali hai, daksh ke andar ye jo aai hai kya hai vo koi yantra, ladki ya alian... Uska pichha Kon kr rha tha kya vo bhi uske hi Jaise hai ya fir vo kuchh or hi hai, kya uske dushman ne bhi kisi human ke andar ghuskr panah li hai ya vo vatavaran me swatantra rahkr hi kaam karenge... Sawal to bahut hai pr Vo sabhi baad me... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Nic
Nice updates

Nice start😍😍😍

Bahot hi behtarin kahani he bhai

Nice update bhai

Awesome start

:congrats: For New Thread

:congrats:bro for new thread

Good concept revenge at its best
Yehi trend chal raha hai abhi xfroum mai

Congratulations for new thread bro

Awesome👍👏, fabulous
Congratulations🎉🥳👏 for new story

kahani achchi hai ..kuch jagah spelling mystake hai wo sahi kar sakte hai aap .


daksh ke pariwar ne usko dhutkar diya hai kuch reasons ke wajah se ,shayad usne ghar ki aurto ko buri najar se dekha ho par ye puri tarah sach hai ye bhi abhi pata nahi .

samunder me kudne par bijli ka uski taraf aana aur ab wo bijli numa shaks baat kar raha hai daksh se .
dekhte hai kya rahasya chhupa hai us shaks ke ander aur daksh uska sahi se istemal kar pata hai ya nahi .

Awesome...
Unanswered, excellent & unique concept

Update please

Good update


Great thoughts and keep it up...

Great starting..👍

Awesome update

Story is different but concept same as badshah story
But this story update 1 is good keep it up


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Guys Episode 2 posted
 
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