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Incest Samay se Pare
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Nice and beautiful introduction of the story.....Update 1 [small introduction]
Mera naam Rohan hai,
Age 17 saal, and abhi 12th ki padhai khatam ki hai.
Mere Mother and Father ki love marriage hui thi aaj se takriban 25 saal pahele. Dono aaj tak ekdusre se bahot pyaar karte hai, jaise Do jism Ek jaan.
Meri mummy ek zamaane ki beauty queen thi apne college ke time pe sabhi ladki including college ke staff unpe line marte the aur voh bahot achhi Classical dancer bhi thi.
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Yeh hai meri mummy Anamika, Jo aaj lagbhag 40 saal ki ho chuki hai.
Ham 2 bhai bahen hai me bahen mujse chhoti hai.
Puri Kahani Mummy pe based hau voh kahani ki mukhya naayika hai aur me Nayak.
Aur kahani ka main theme hai time travel, aur thodi si mystery and simple si love story included.
Isme aur bhi characters include honge with the progression of story.
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Nice and beautiful starting of the story...Update - 2 (Incident)
Meri bahen Lavanya jo muj se 1 saal chhoti hai and kafi cute and introvert hai isliye ladko se jyada baate nahi karti Uski ek hi best friend hai jo uski classmate hai.
Ham dono ek hi school me padhte hai voh abhi 11th me hai and hamari exam khatam hui aur vacation chal raha hai.
DAY OF INCIDENT
Papa Nishant Singh meri Dadi ko dekhne Rampur gaye the jo ki hamara gaav hai, unko gaye hue 5 din hue the, Dadi ki tabiyat achanak kharab hone se unko vaha Bulaya gaya tha but pata chala ki voh abhi theek hai to aaj voh morning me vapis ane ke liye nikle the, aur mummy besabri se unka wait kar rahi thi.
At home
Me aur Lavanya TV par Netflix pe horror series dekh rahe the aur mummy kitchen me papa ka fav khana bana rahi thi kyuki aaj 5 din ke baad unko dekhegi.
Mummy: Abhi tum dono yeh tv band karo subah se chala rahe ho aur Bittu tum muje help kara kitchen me tumhare papa aate hi honge (pet name of lavanya)
Lavanya: Nahi mummy abhi vacation hai ab to chhor do muje
Me: Are Bittu mummy kabse kaam kar rahi hai i think ham dono ko unki help karni chahiye
Lavanya: Tum to ho hi unke laadle tabhi hamesha unki baat maan lete ho aur fas me jati hu
Mummy: Tum dono band kar rahe ho TV ya me aau bahar.
Itne me landline ki ring baji aur mene tv pause karke uthaya samne se kisi uncle ki avaz aai aur unhone mummy ko phone pe bulane ko kaha.
Mene Mummy ko avaz lagai, voh aai aur phone leke baat karne lagi thodi der baat karte karte mummy zor se chillai aur shock me thi bilkul.
Mummy : Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta bol do ki jooth hai yeh sab, aisa mazaak muje pasand nahi.
Thodi der baad baat karke mummy phone rakhke vahi Beth gai aur rone lagi.
Me aur Lavanya gabhra gaye aur mummy se puchha ki mummy kya hua lekin voh roye ja rahi thi tab mene unke pass jake unko hold karke puchha please mummy batao kya hua.
Mummy: (with hesitation) voh...voh.. beta... tumhare papa ka acci... accident.
Aage ki Kahaani next update me, kindly reply and appreciate my effort.
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Nice and lovely update....Update - 3 (Ocean of Sorrow)
Mene Mummy ko zor se hug kiya and console karne laga
Lavanya bhi rone lagi. Mene dono ko chup karane ki koshish kari but I was unsuccessful.
Me: Mummy please puri baat batao kya hua, aise roti rahogi to kaise chalega... please apne aapko sambhalo aur batao kya hua
Mummy: Beta voh koi bhaiya the unhone bola ki Surdhara highway-5 pe unki gaadi aur truck ki takkar hui aur gaadi ke chithde ud gaye... aur tumhare papa.... (crying loudly).
Lavanya sobbing...
Me: Aur mummy?? Papa ko kya hua (mummy ko pakad ke hilate hue) mummy kya hua papa ko?
Mummy: Tumhare papa nahi bach paye beta... (crying)
Lavanya: Mummy aisa kaise ho sakta hai papa ne bola tha me aate waqt tumhare liye Rampur ke Angoor leke aaunga...
Isi mahol ke bich me mene dono ko sambhal ne ki koshish ki halaki me bhi dukhi tha par abhi me tut nahi sakta tha kyuki is ghar me mard me akela hi bacha tha.
bahot mahenat ke baad dono ko shant kiya mene.
Baad me mene apne uncle aunty call karke sari baat batai aur unhone muje aage ko procedure samjhai ki kaise body ko collect kar sakte hai.
Fir me aur chacha body collect karke hamare gaav vale ghar pe gaye.
uske baad Kunaal chacha, Minu chachi aur bahot se rishtedar aaye ghar pe thode samay ke Antral par pura ghar bhar gaya.
Minu Chachi (Name- Minal) ( Occupation: Scientist)
she's from south india.
Dadi (Suguna)
Minu chachi aur chacha ne sab funeral ka bandobast kiya tha hamare gaav ke ghar rampur me.
sabke rone ki avaze aa rahi thi jaise dadi ne muje dekha voh mujse zor se lipat kar rone lagi, mene unko shant karaya aur pani pilaya.
arthi ka samay ho raha tha jaise ham usko uthane gaye mummy zor se papa ki deadbody ko pakad li aur jor jor se rone lagi mene aur chacha ne unko door kiya aur ham arthi leke smashan ki aur nikal gaye
Mummy hame jate hue dekh rahi thi aur ro rahi thi aur muje unko rote hue dekh bahot dukh ho raha raha tha.
Smashan me sab kriyakaram karke ham vapis aa gaye aur sabhi aage ki process karke me thak ke chair pe betha tha aur mere mummy aur lavanya ke future ke baare me soch raha tha.
Vaise to papa ke naam par 1 cr ka insurance tha jo hame milne vala tha but papa ki kami ko voh pura nahi kar payega yeh ham sab jante the.
Isi bich me notice kar raha tha jabse me gaav me aya hu chachi muje stare kar rahi thi shuruat me muje laga ham 5 saal baad mil rahe hai isliye shayad voh dekh rahi hai but ab yeh zyada ajeeb lag raha tha kyuki ek pal ke liye bhi voh mujse nazar nahi hatati thi.
Jab bhi meri nazar unse milti thi to unki voh tikhi nazar se me sharma jata tha.
Muje unko puchhne ka man hua but socha jab sab nahi hone tab akele me puchhunga but us se pahele voh chal ke mere pichhe aake khadi ho gai aur mere gale me bahen daal kar khadi ho gai muje kuchh ho raha tha body me kyuki yeh paheli baar tha kisi lady ne muje is tarah chhua ho mummy ke alava.
Unhone asspass dekha aur chupke se kaan me bola: " raat ko 12 baje muje aam ke bagiche vale cabin ke chhat par milna jab sab so jaye."
Me kuchh react karta us se pahele voh vaha se chali gai.
To be continued...
(Dosto me jo part jaroori nahi hai uska sirf overview dunga, as voh itna important nahi hai story ke perspective se.)
Aise samay bhi koi kaise asia bol skata hai apne bhatije ko..agele update main dekte hain..Pls give next update soon
Update 1 [small introduction]
Mera naam Rohan hai,
Age 17 saal, and abhi 12th ki padhai khatam ki hai.
Mere Mother and Father ki love marriage hui thi aaj se takriban 25 saal pahele. Dono aaj tak ekdusre se bahot pyaar karte hai, jaise Do jism Ek jaan.
Meri mummy ek zamaane ki beauty queen thi apne college ke time pe sabhi ladke including college ke staff members bhi unpe line marte the aur voh bahot achhi Classical dancer bhi thi.
sab & t
Yeh hai meri mummy Anamika, Jo aaj lagbhag 40 saal ki ho chuki hai.
Ham 2 bhai bahen hai meri bahen mujse chhoti hai.
Puri Kahani Mummy pe based hai voh kahani ki Mukhya Naayika hai aur me Mukhya Nayak.
THEME OF THE STORY
Time Travel, Mystery, & Love Story
Isme aur bhi characters include honge with the progression of story.
Update - 2 (Incident)
Meri bahen Lavanya jo muj se 1 saal chhoti hai and kafi cute and introvert hai isliye ladko se jyada baate nahi karti Uski ek hi best friend hai jo uski classmate hai.
Ham dono ek hi school me padhte hai voh abhi 11th me hai and hamari exam khatam hui aur vacation chal raha hai.
DAY OF INCIDENT
Papa Nishant Singh meri Dadi ko dekhne Rampur gaye the jo ki hamara gaav hai, unko gaye hue 5 din hue the, Dadi ki tabiyat achanak kharab hone se unko vaha Bulaya gaya tha but pata chala ki voh abhi theek hai to aaj voh morning me vapis ane ke liye nikle the, aur mummy besabri se unka wait kar rahi thi.
At home
Me aur Lavanya TV par Netflix pe horror series dekh rahe the aur mummy kitchen me papa ka fav khana bana rahi thi kyuki aaj 5 din ke baad unko dekhegi.
Mummy: Abhi tum dono yeh tv band karo subah se chala rahe ho aur Bittu tum muje help kara kitchen me tumhare papa aate hi honge (pet name of lavanya)
Lavanya: Nahi mummy abhi vacation hai ab to chhor do muje
Me: Are Bittu mummy kabse kaam kar rahi hai i think ham dono ko unki help karni chahiye
Lavanya: Tum to ho hi unke laadle tabhi hamesha unki baat maan lete ho aur fas me jati hu
Mummy: Tum dono band kar rahe ho TV ya me aau bahar.
Itne me landline ki ring baji aur mene tv pause karke uthaya samne se kisi uncle ki avaz aai aur unhone mummy ko phone pe bulane ko kaha.
Mene Mummy ko avaz lagai, voh aai aur phone leke baat karne lagi thodi der baat karte karte mummy zor se chillai aur shock me thi bilkul.
Mummy : Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta bol do ki jooth hai yeh sab, aisa mazaak muje pasand nahi.
Thodi der baad baat karke mummy phone rakhke vahi Beth gai aur rone lagi.
Me aur Lavanya gabhra gaye aur mummy se puchha ki mummy kya hua lekin voh roye ja rahi thi tab mene unke pass jake unko hold karke puchha please mummy batao kya hua.
Mummy: (with hesitation) voh...voh.. beta... tumhare papa ka acci... accident.
Aage ki Kahaani next update me, kindly reply and appreciate my effort.
Update - 3 (Ocean of Sorrow)
Mene Mummy ko zor se hug kiya and console karne laga
Lavanya bhi rone lagi. Mene dono ko chup karane ki koshish kari but I was unsuccessful.
Me: Mummy please puri baat batao kya hua, aise roti rahogi to kaise chalega... please apne aapko sambhalo aur batao kya hua
Mummy: Beta voh koi bhaiya the unhone bola ki Surdhara highway-5 pe unki gaadi aur truck ki takkar hui aur gaadi ke chithde ud gaye... aur tumhare papa.... (crying loudly).
Lavanya sobbing...
Me: Aur mummy?? Papa ko kya hua (mummy ko pakad ke hilate hue) mummy kya hua papa ko?
Mummy: Tumhare papa nahi bach paye beta... (crying)
Lavanya: Mummy aisa kaise ho sakta hai papa ne bola tha me aate waqt tumhare liye Rampur ke Angoor leke aaunga...
Isi mahol ke bich me mene dono ko sambhal ne ki koshish ki halaki me bhi dukhi tha par abhi me tut nahi sakta tha kyuki is ghar me mard me akela hi bacha tha.
bahot mahenat ke baad dono ko shant kiya mene.
Baad me mene apne uncle aunty call karke sari baat batai aur unhone muje aage ko procedure samjhai ki kaise body ko collect kar sakte hai.
Fir me aur chacha body collect karke hamare gaav vale ghar pe gaye.
uske baad Kunaal chacha, Minu chachi aur bahot se rishtedar aaye ghar pe thode samay ke Antral par pura ghar bhar gaya.
Minu Chachi (Name- Minal) ( Occupation: Scientist)
she's from south india.
Dadi (Suguna)
Minu chachi aur chacha ne sab funeral ka bandobast kiya tha hamare gaav ke ghar rampur me.
sabke rone ki avaze aa rahi thi jaise dadi ne muje dekha voh mujse zor se lipat kar rone lagi, mene unko shant karaya aur pani pilaya.
arthi ka samay ho raha tha jaise ham usko uthane gaye mummy zor se papa ki deadbody ko pakad li aur jor jor se rone lagi mene aur chacha ne unko door kiya aur ham arthi leke smashan ki aur nikal gaye
Mummy hame jate hue dekh rahi thi aur ro rahi thi aur muje unko rote hue dekh bahot dukh ho raha raha tha.
Smashan me sab kriyakaram karke ham vapis aa gaye aur sabhi aage ki process karke me thak ke chair pe betha tha aur mere mummy aur lavanya ke future ke baare me soch raha tha.
Vaise to papa ke naam par 1 cr ka insurance tha jo hame milne vala tha but papa ki kami ko voh pura nahi kar payega yeh ham sab jante the.
Isi bich me notice kar raha tha jabse me gaav me aya hu chachi muje stare kar rahi thi shuruat me muje laga ham 5 saal baad mil rahe hai isliye shayad voh dekh rahi hai but ab yeh zyada ajeeb lag raha tha kyuki ek pal ke liye bhi voh mujse nazar nahi hatati thi.
Jab bhi meri nazar unse milti thi to unki voh tikhi nazar se me sharma jata tha.
Muje unko puchhne ka man hua but socha jab sab nahi hone tab akele me puchhunga but us se pahele voh chal ke mere pichhe aake khadi ho gai aur mere gale me bahen daal kar khadi ho gai muje kuchh ho raha tha body me kyuki yeh paheli baar tha kisi lady ne muje is tarah chhua ho mummy ke alava.
Unhone asspass dekha aur chupke se kaan me bola: " raat ko 12 baje muje aam ke bagiche vale cabin ke chhat par milna jab sab so jaye."
Me kuchh react karta us se pahele voh vaha se chali gai.
To be continued...
(Dosto me jo part jaroori nahi hai uska sirf overview dunga, as voh itna important nahi hai story ke perspective se.)
Nice updates bhai, a really good start with a fabulous concept.
Incest in time travel is quite interesting
To chachi scientist hai, maybe she will have an important role in whole time travel thing.
Waiting for next update
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