Chotebabu
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Hello manikmittalme07
I m reading ur story as a silent reader. Kahani ka plot bahut acha tha bss wo mehak ka uske baap wala seen out of box tha bcoz kisi ne wo socha bhi nhi tha aur kafi logon ko pasand bhi nhi aya. Lekin shyad ho sakta hai aapne kuch soch ke wo seen likha ho akhir me aapki story hai aur aap sutrdhar ho toh nyay bhi aap kroge story ke saath.
Aur aapne kaha bhi tha ki aane wale update me kuch uthalputhal dekhne ko mil sakte hai.
Lagta hai shuruat ho gye hai. Kaafi time se lgg rha tha ki Sneha ke saath vinay galat kr rha hai sachai chupa ke. Ab toh sneha ko bhi pta chl chuka hai ab dekhna hoga kya hota hai.
Waise ek cheeg poochni the kya kahani apne antim charan me chl rhe hai kya
I m reading ur story as a silent reader. Kahani ka plot bahut acha tha bss wo mehak ka uske baap wala seen out of box tha bcoz kisi ne wo socha bhi nhi tha aur kafi logon ko pasand bhi nhi aya. Lekin shyad ho sakta hai aapne kuch soch ke wo seen likha ho akhir me aapki story hai aur aap sutrdhar ho toh nyay bhi aap kroge story ke saath.
Aur aapne kaha bhi tha ki aane wale update me kuch uthalputhal dekhne ko mil sakte hai.
Lagta hai shuruat ho gye hai. Kaafi time se lgg rha tha ki Sneha ke saath vinay galat kr rha hai sachai chupa ke. Ab toh sneha ko bhi pta chl chuka hai ab dekhna hoga kya hota hai.
Waise ek cheeg poochni the kya kahani apne antim charan me chl rhe hai kya