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bhai ek baat kahun aapko...aap jaise abhi aaye ho comment karne meri expectation hoti hai ke mujhe apne update ke baad dher saare comments mile. par milte hain...kabhi 6-7 aur maximum 10. aap logon ki expectations itni hain. par do char lines ka comment nahi karte kabhi. waise aapko batana chahunga ke is kahani mein jo chal raha hai use waise hi chalne do. aap logon ko abhi mere writing style ke baare mein knowledge nahi hai. is story mein abhi kuchh aisa hone wala hai jo ke aap logon ko pasand aayega. aap log wait to karo kahani mein kuchh twist ayenge. par mujhe lagatar suggestions mil rahe hain. main baar baar hints de raha hun ke kahani mein kuchh mod ayenge. par koi is baat ko manne ko taiyar nahi hai. to kya main aap logon ko ek do lines mein hi kahani ke un twists ko bata ke ek hi episode mein kahani band kar dun kya...bolo...Sara maza khrab kar dia mehak ko papa se chudwa kar ab read kar ne ka dil nai kar raha story ko titles ke hisab se nai gai story.