Incest SAAND

[anandsngh12]

ekdum badhya... mujhe meri sajoo aur neha bahu wali story yaad agayi thoda bahot eise halaat hein weise unn ko bhi yahan post karne wala hoon kuch dinon mein
weise yeh plot mazedaar laga mujhe, bahot khub likha hai

Vaise bhi yaha meri already 4 stories pahle se hi running hain
Isko main other site par chala raha tha lekin logo ki demand par yaha post kar raha hu
Aap jaise behtareen writers ke saniddhya me mujhe bhi kuch sikhne ka saubhagya prapta hoga

 

[anandsngh12]

aap ke running wale par iss liye kabhi nahin gaya kyun ke bahot aguey jaa chuka hai story, khud ke itne thread chalana aur jo thread aguey badh gaye hein utna padhna mushkil hota hai issi liye dusre thread par nahin gaya...yeh wala new hai to agaya

Apki baat sarvatha uchit hai
Maine apki sajju aur neha wali story bhi read ki huyi hai
Apki class bahut top level ki hai
vaha tak pahuchna to khair mere liye sirf ek khwab jaisa hi hai
Xp ki lagbhag sabhi stories meri read ki huyi hain
Aaj main bhi jo toota foota likh pa raha hu usme un stories aur unke writers ka bahut aham yogdan hain jinse mujhe kuch sikhne ko mila

 

[Casinar]

Apki baat sarvatha uchit hai
Maine apki sajju aur neha wali story bhi read ki huyi hai
Apki class bahut top level ki hai
vaha tak pahuchna to khair mere liye sirf ek khwab jaisa hi hai
Xp ki lagbhag sabhi stories meri read ki huyi hain
Aaj main bhi jo toota foota likh pa raha hu usme un stories aur unke writers ka bahut aham yogdan hain jinse mujhe kuch sikhne ko mila

lage raho. achcha likhte ho. main kuch bada vada nahin hoon. buss mamooli sa writer hoon. haan bahot sare readers aur chahne wale mil gaye to sabhi stories super hit ho gaye to naam ho gayi...
tumse jo ban pade likho. readers ko passand aaye yehi kaafi hai.
lage raho aur aguey badho.

all the best

 

[Casinar]

SAAND
UPDATE*3​

Main meenu didi ko lekar kamre me aa gaya….baki dono bahne school ja chuki thi….hamara combined pariwar tha….lekin kamre alag alag the….


Didi bistar par baith gayi…mai bhi unke pass aa gaya…..

Meenu—dekh Raj jyada samay nahi hai.....jaldi se chod le ...lekin mujhe pahle theek se tera lund dekhna aur chusna hai.....

Maine jaldi se apne kapde utar nanga ho gaya....mera lund chodne ka naam sunkar hi poore josh me aakar tan tana gaya tha....

Meenu didi bade gaur se mere lund ko dekh rahi thi....

Mai—ab dekhti hi rahogi....mujhe bhi to kuch dikhao...apna maal..

Meenu—mujhe sharam aati hai....tu khud apne hath se mere kapde utar ke mujhe poori nangi kar le

Maine didi ko khada khada kiya aur sab se pahle unka kurta upar kar ke nikalne laga…unhone apne hath upar kar kurta utarne me mera sath diya…

Kurta nikalte hi bra me kaid unki badi badi chuchiya mere samne aa gayi….jo us bra me sama nahi rahi thi maine bra ke upar se hi un par hath rakh ke ferne laga…..

Meenu—bra bhi utar de.....aur achche se dekh le apni didi ki chuchi.... jinko dekhne ke liye tu mara ja raha tha....

Mai—tumhe kaise malum.... ?

Meenu—mai sab janti hu....jab mai jhadu lagati hu...tab kaise ankhe phad kar roj inko dekhta hai jaise poora nichod lega....

Mai—mai to sach me apki chuchi kab se nichodna chahta tha....apko poori nangi dekhne ko tadap raha tha...

Meenu—to bra utar ke nichod le aaj meri chuchiyo ko......raj...ek baat sach batayega

Mai—kya....

Meenu—yahi ki tu mujhe roj nangi dekhta tha na.....jab mai nahati hu....

Mai—ha....didi

Meenu—mai tujhe nangi achchi lagti hu....

Mai—mat puch didi....tumhara nanga jism mujhe kitna pasand hai....

Meenu—sach me---

Mai—ha….

Meenu—to phir kar na jaldi se mujhe nangi…mai bhi to jan bujh kar nangi nahati hu…jab tu mujhe jhankta hai nahate huye….bata nahi sakti mujhe kitna maza aata hai….tere samne nangi hone me

Mai—tumhe sab malum tha…

Meenu—ha...mere bhai....mai to chahti hu ki ki tu mujhe roj apne hatho se kayi baar nangi kare.....mai baar baar kapne pahnu aur tu jab bhi thoda sa bhi mouka mile to mujhe pakad ke nangi kar de...

Mai—sach kah rahi ho didi....

Meenu—ha...mere bhai....mera bahut mann karta hai tere hatho se nangi hone ka....bol ab se tu mujhe karega na roj nangi....roj mujhe kam se kam 10-15 baar nangi karega na...

Mai—ha...didi...mai tumhe...din bhar nangi karunga......aur phir apna lund har baar tumhari bur ko chodne wale chhed me ghused dunga.... mujhe ghusedne dogi na didi...apni bur me...

Meenu—ha..raj....roj ghusedna apna lund.....khub chodna meri bur....mai to kab se tujhe apni bur dena chahti thi....

Mai—ab se roj pelunga teri bur didi....

Meenu—ha bhai....roj khoob pelna apna lund...apni didi ki bur me ghused ghused kar.....baar baar ghusedna....thoda sa bhi mouka milne par ghused dena apna lund meri bur me....bol roj har do do ghante me lund ghusayega na apni didi ki bur ke chhed me...

Mai—ha..didi...roj pel pel ke teri bur ko bhosda bana dunga

Meenu—to jaldi se mujhe poori nangi kar na.....aur chod daal meri bur

Maine didi ke bache kuche kapde bhi nikal diye....vo ab mere samne poori nangi khadi thi....unke bade bade doodh kayamat dha rahe the.....maine dono doodh apni mutthi me daboch liye aur unhe berahmi se masalne laga....

Meenu—aaaahhhh....haaa.....aise hi khub jor jor se mees mere doodh...... meri hamesha se khwahish thi ki tu mujhe khub berahmi se chode....khub jor jor se mere doodh dabaye...aaaaaa...aaaa....masal aur daba ...bhai...apni didi ke doodh....

Mai—didi....bahut mast doodh hai tere....

Meenu—tere dabane ke liye hain bhai...teri didi ke ye bade doodh....roj dabayega na mere doodh bhai

Mai—ha...didi....poora din dabaunga...

Meenu—aaaaaaahhhhh......dard...ho...raha....hai.....aaaaaahhhaa

Mai—theek thoda dhire dhire dabata hu ab....

Meenu—nahi....aaaaaa...mere bhai....mujhe dard me hi maza aata hai.... mujhe aise hi poori berahmi se masal daal ....khoob bedardi se meri bur ko phadna aaj....aur jor...se....daba...bhai....ha....aise hi..uuuuii maaa...mar....gayi....aaaaahhhh

Mai poore adha ghante tak didi ki chuchiyo ko berahmi se masalta raha.....poori lal ho gayi thi..didi...ki gori gori chuchiya.....vo chillati rahi....mai masalta raha...

Meenu—aaaaahhh...bhai...koi aa...jayega...jaldi se ab....meri bur ka bhi udghatan kar de.....dekh tere lund se fatne ke liye tadap rahi hai....

Mai dono doodh meeste huye apna chehra niche laya....didi ki dono jangho ke beech....jaha meri sagi badi bahan ki bur thi...

Mai dekhta hi rah gaya...didi ki bur ko...vaise to maine meenu didi ki bur kayi baar dekh chuka tha..lekin itne pass se dekhne ka ye pahla mouka tha....

Poori bur ghani ghani jhaanto se dhaki huyi thi....

Mai—didi…apne chhote bhai ko…apni bur dikhao na…

Meenu—tere samne hi to hai...dekh na...

Mai—tum apne hatho se phaila ke dikhao….

Meenu—theek hai…ye..le mere bhai…dekh le achche se apni didi ki bur ko….

Didi ne apne dono hatho se apni bur ki dono faanko ko faila faila kar bur dikhane lagi...bur ki dono faanke apas me chipki huyi thi...bur ke andar lal lal dikhayi de raha tha...poori geeli ho chuki thi

Mai—ye itni geeli kyo hai didi..

Meenu—kyo ki teri didi ki bur bahut chudasi hai mere bhai...isiliye geeli ho gayi hai

Mai—isme to do do chhed hain....chodne wala koun sa hai....

Meenu (bur ko aur failate huye)—ye dekh….ye upar yaha par ye chhed jo hai na…vo teri didi ke mutne ka chhed hai……ab uske niche dekh …niche vala chhed ….ha..yahi….ye chhed teri didi ki bur ko chodne ke liye hai…. ab samajh gaya na bhai

Mai—ha didi…samajh gaya….bahut pyari bur hai meri bahan ki……mai is chhed ko apne lund se chod chod kar aur bada kar dunga…..

Meenu—kar dena bhai….jitna bada karna ho utna bada kar de apni bahan ki bur ke chodne wale chhed ko…..ab jaldi se mujhe chod dal mere bhai…. iske pahle ki koi aa jaye…..

Mai—theek hai didi

Maine apne lund ka supada didi ke bur ke muhane par tika diya…..

Mai—tel laga lu kya thoda……

Meenu—nahi re....tel lagane se asani se ghusega.....jyada dard nahi hoga bur fatne ka......mujhe khub dard chahiye....tu aise hi sukha sukha ghused de ......aur poori bur ko achche se phad daal ki teri bahan ki bur chithada ho jaye.....

Maine ek jor ka jhatka diya lekin lund phisal kar niche chala gaya....do tin baar dalne par bhi nahi ghusa bahut tight choot thi didi ki.....

Meenu—ruk aise nahi ghusega ......vaise bhi tera gadhe ka lund hai... admi ka thode hi hai jo itna jaldi ghus jayega......mai bur ki faanke failati hu....tu poori taqat se dhakka laga ke ghused de....

Mai—theek hai...

Didi ne apni bur ki faanko ko dono hatho se khub faila diya.....maine ek bar phir se bur ke chhed par lund tikaya aur poori taqat se dhakka maar diya......lund bur ko cheerta hua teen inch andar ghus gaya.... didi ki cheekh nikal gayi

Achchha hua koi ghar me nahi tha...nahi to sab ko pata chal jata.....uski ankho se anshu bahne lage...aur ankho ke aage andhera chha gaya....mujhe uski is haalat par taras aa gaya...akhir meri bahan thi vo...

Mai—lund nikal lu bahar...didi

Meenu—nahi....bilkul nahi....tu andar ghusedta ja aur bur phadta ja bas.....tujhe meri kasam hai jo tune bur ko phade bina lund bahar nikala to......mai kitna bhi dard se tadpu tu bur phadne se mat rukna....bas phadta ja.....phadta ja...mere bhai....aur ghused...

Maine bhi ab raham ki or sochna chhod kar lagatar do teen tagde dhakke jad diye bur me.....didi ki bur ne khoon ki ulti kar di….poora lund bur ko kakdi ki tarah phadte huye unki bachchedani se ja takraya

Meenu (jor se)—aaaaaaaaaaahhhh....maaaaaa.....mar...gayi......aaaaaaaaaaa.......aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Aur vo chillate huye behosh ho gayi.....maine jaldi se pass me rakhe jug se unke chehre par pani dala jisse vo hosh me aakar rone lagi.....

Meenu (rote huye)—meri bur fat gayi..bhai......bahut dard ho raha hai....aaaaa

Mujhe to didi ne kasam de di thi to maine ab dhire dhire chodna chalu kar diya…..sath me unki chuchi bhi pine laga…..ek hath se chuchi masalta bhi ja raha tha….

Dohre hamle se vo jaldi hi phir se garam ho gayi aur apni gaand upar uthane lagi….mai samajh gaya ki didi ab full chodasi ho gayi hain….

Maine dono chuchiyo ke nipple marodte huye apne dakko ki speed badha di bur me….aur de dana dan apni didi ki bur pelne laga….

Meenu—aaaahh… ……aaahhhh…..haa…bhai….aise…hi….aur…jor…se……pel meri bur ko…..meri chuchi bhi khub jor jor se meesta ja bhai…….. mere doodh me kaat de……mere nipple bhi apne daanto se kaat bhai..ha…aise hi bhai…..

Mai—bahut mast bur hai didi…tumhari….ab to…roj pelunga……pelne dogi na roj didi apni bur....

Meenu—aaaaahhh….aaaahhhh…..ha…bhai……roj mujhe…aise hi poori nangi kar ke pelna……mai tujhse apni sabhi saheliyo ki bur chudwaungi……..

Mai—sach me didi…..

Meenu—ha mere bhai…..tu sab ko chodna…….sab ki bur aise hi phadna……

Mai—aa didi.....bahut maza hai teri bur me....

Meenu—aaahhh......aur chod bhai...apni bahan ko aur chod.........ye bur ab teri hai..bhai...jab mann kare chod lena meri bur.......

Lagbhag aise hi ek ghante tak hum dono ki palang tod chudai chalti rahi.....is dauran meenu didi char bar khad chuki thi....mera bhi ab hone wala tha....

Mai—didi mera ab hone wala hai...nikalu bahar

Meenu—nahi andar hi gira de apna beej.....kar de mujhe gabhin....mai sambhal lungi sab....

Mai ab lhub dhakkam pel didi ki bur ko chodne laga.....didi poori mast ho gayi thi pahli chudai me hi

Meenu—aaaahhaaa....maza aa gaya bhai....tu mujhe aise hi roj 5-6 baar chod dala kar...

Mai—jarur didi....

Meenu—mujhe khub ganda ganda bola kar din bhar....mujhse khub gandi gandi bate kiya kar bur chodne ki....

Mai—apko gandi bate pasand hain...

Meenu—bahut....tere muh se gandi gandi bate sunna mujhe bahut achcha lagta hai bhai....

Mai—aur kya pasand hai apko....

Meenu—mujhe didi mat bola kar...

Mai—to kya bolu apko...

Meenu—mujhe na...tu....bur ya phir bur chodi kah ke bulaya kar

Mai—mujhe apki gaand bhi bahut pasand hai didi

Meenu—kal maar lena apni didi ki gaand bhi bhai aur mujhe roj subah shaam gaay ke jaise mera doodh nikala kar...jaise cow ka nikalte hain vaise hi...

Mai—theek hai meri bur chodi bahan…..ye le…

Meenu—aaahhaaa....gira de...andar..hi bhai......kar de gabhin.....apni bur chodi bahan ko

Mai—mai aaya...ye le....burchodi.........

Aur phir mere lund ne meenu didi ki bur ko apne pani se bharna chalu kar diya.....ek ke baad ek na jane kitni lambi pichakariya chhutne lagi didi ki bur me...poori labalab bhar gayi unki bur.......

Jhadne ke baad mai meenu didi ke upar hi let gaya.....

bahot achche.....
magar sirf ek baat kehna hai - dusri update mein tum story suna rahe the, yahan tum khud 1st person mein likh rake ho matlab tum raj ho
khair yeh tumhare likhne ka style hai, mujhe behtar lagta (ya main hota to main relate karta ke raj ne kia kia kiya aur keise kiya.....
aur conversation bahut ziada nahin hai iss update mein?
descriptive narations ko bahut ziada mazaa ata hai padhne mein....
magar ab tumhare readers ko aadat hein eise likhe hue padhna to ok thik hai...
ek example deta hoon... mere chawla family wale thread ki aakhri update number 17 padho agar time hai to.... dekho uss mein main ne kiss tarah se donon characters ko describe kiya hai aur unn donon ke beech hote actions ko narrate kiya hai
weise agar issko already likh chuke ho to ab kuch nahin badla jaa sakta
par main sirf apne point of view de raha hoo,
keep it going
very nice in the whole

 

[Nishi431990]

Mast fadu update hai yara

 

[Nishi431990]

Konsi dusre site pe ye stori chalu hai bhai please batao na

 

[anandsngh12]

bahot achche.....
magar sirf ek baat kehna hai - dusri update mein tum story suna rahe the, yahan tum khud 1st person mein likh rake ho matlab tum raj ho
khair yeh tumhare likhne ka style hai, mujhe behtar lagta (ya main hota to main relate karta ke raj ne kia kia kiya aur keise kiya.....
aur conversation bahut ziada nahin hai iss update mein?
descriptive narations ko bahut ziada mazaa ata hai padhne mein....
magar ab tumhare readers ko aadat hein eise likhe hue padhna to ok thik hai...
ek example deta hoon... mere chawla family wale thread ki aakhri update number 17 padho agar time hai to.... dekho uss mein main ne kiss tarah se donon characters ko describe kiya hai aur unn donon ke beech hote actions ko narrate kiya hai
weise agar issko already likh chuke ho to ab kuch nahin badla jaa sakta
par main sirf apne point of view de raha hoo,
keep it going
very nice in the whole

Meri sabse badi problem yahi par aati hai ki mujhse start karte nahi aata
Ye haal is story ka hi nahi hai lagbhag sabhi stories ka hai jinhe maine likha hai
sab me starting ke 3 to 4 updates goes only in trailor type..
Their after starts my origional story
Ye abhi yahi tak hi likhi hai only for Trailor
Agar Trailor se response milta hai 1% bhi to phir main apni actual language use karna start karta hu
I also agree with your point....but I'm weak to handling this issue
And now I'm going to read that above mentioned update for solving this issue
Thank u so much for this support Bro

 

[anandsngh12]

Mast fadu update hai yara

Thanks Dear for Reading

 

[anandsngh12]

Konsi dusre site pe ye stori chalu hai bhai please batao na

Other sites ki jankari dena allow nahi hai

 

[Nishi431990]

Other sites ki jankari dena allow nahi hai

Ok bro koi baat nahi yara.