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Dophar me main aur sadhana uski ganga mousi ke yaha jane ke liye nikal gaye…idhar hamare jane ke baad sheetal room me kuch dhoondte huye pareshan ho rahi thi.
Sheetal (pareshan, mann me)—meri diary kaha gayi…? Lagta hai ki maine sheetal ko apna jo bag diya tha, usme hi chali gayi…kahi sheetal uss diary ko kori samajh kar usme kuch likhna na shuru kar de…mere liye vo diary bahut anmol hai.. apna mobile bhi to maine use de diya hai…
Ab aage……
Gadi chalate huye maine ek jagah sunsan area dekh kar gadi rok di au sadhana ko apni baho me bhar liya aur use chumne laga…..aise achanak gadi rok kar chumne se sadhana thoda hadbada gayi.
Sadhana—aaahhh..chhodo na..ye kya karne lag gaye tum…?
Raj (raste me)—sadhana, yaar kiss karne do na…
Sadhana (Real)—kyaa…pagal to nahi ho gaye kahi tum…? Jo aise beech raste me kiss karne ko bol rahe ho..
Raj—pagal hi to hu tumhare pyar me…tum nahi janti ki kitna tadpa hu tumhare liye…ek ek maine kaise gujara hai tumhare bina, iska andaza bhi nahi laga sakti tum..
Sadhana (udas)—to main koun sa khush thi…tumhare bina..tum to phir bhi ladke ho, bahar apne dosto ke sath ghum phir kar apna mann bahla sakte ho lekin main kaha jati, andar hi andar ghutne ke siwa kuch nahi kar sakti thi.
Raj—tabhi to kah raha hu ki thoda sa pyar kar lete hain…vaise bhi kal sheetal didi ke beech me aa jane se main tumko achche se dekh bhi nahi paya tha…
Sadhana—kitna kuch to kar liya tha kal…
Raj—kaha kuch kiya tha…jee bhar ke tumhare inn hotho ko chum bhi nahi paya tha..
Maine ek bar phir se sadhana ko pakad kar chumne laga…usne thoda virodh kiya lekin phir khud hi meri agosh me simatti chali gayi..adhro se adhar mil gaye..aisa laga jaise ki poori kaynat hi simat kar meri baaho me aa gayi ho…aaj ke chumban me mujhe apni vahi pahle wali sadhana ka ehsaas ho raha tha jabki kal ke kiss me ek naya hi taste tha jiska anubhav mere liye behad aloukik kar dene wal tha…kintu aaj sadhana ke hotho ka sparsh karte hi mere dimag me bar bar meri sheetal didi ki tasveer ubhar rahi thi kyon ki same aisa hi ehsaas mujhe unke sath bhi hamesha hota aaya hai…sheetal didi jab kabhi bhi mere karib aati thi to anayas hi mere jehan me sadhana ki chhavi panapne lag jati thi.. lekin aisa kyo tha ye meri samajh ke bahar hai.
Hum dono pagal premi ek duje me khoye apne aas paas ki duniya se bekhabar ek alag hi sansar me pahuch gaye the.. dono me se kisi ko kuch hosh nahi tha…tabhi kuch gadiyo ke horn ki awaz sun kar hum swarg log se sidhe dharti par utar aaye.
Maine palat kar dekha to kuch aas paas ke log apni bakriyo ko le kar vaha se gujar rahe the jiski vajah se avagaman avaruddh ho raha tha.
Raj—inn bakri walo ki maa ko chodu..madarchodo ko abhi hi bakri le kar yaha se nikalna tha..
Sadhana—hihihihihi…chhee kitna ganda ganda bolne lage ho tum…tumhare romance ke darr se vo bechare kya apni bakri bhi na charaye…?
Raj—arey charaye…lekin yahi ek rasta bacha tha unke liye…? Ghar me sheetal didi hanuman ki pooch ki tarah tumse har dam chipki rahti hain..kuch karne ka chance hi nahi milta..badi mushkil se ab ja ke mouka mila to ye chutiye beech me haddi ban ke aa gaye…
Sadhana—unn garibo ko gaali mat do…ab chalo yaha se..(mann me)..baap re..ye raj to beech raste se hi chalu ho gaya… achcha hua ki maine sheetal ko samjha bujha kar vahi ghar me rok diya…agar kahi vo aati to raj, ye sab uske sath karta.. uski mousi ke ghar tak pahuchte pahuchte tak to na jane kya kya karta uske sath…meri to zindagi hi barbad ho jati..
Aise hi chhed chhad karte huye hum raat hote hote sadhana ki ganga mousi ki area me pahuch gaye…vaha pahuch hamne logo se puch kar unka ghar pata kiya aur phir unke yaha chal pade….ganga mousi ko surprise dene ke irade se hamne apne yaha aane ke baare me kuch nahi bataya tha.
Ghar pahuchte hi gadi se utar kar sadhana ne darwaje par laga alarm bajaya to kuch der baad kisi tann maal aurat ne darwaja khola…darwaja kholte hi vo buri tarah se chounk gayi…
Raj (mann me)—wow..! main to soch raha tha ki sadhana ki mousi koi budhiya hogi lekin ye to mast pelne layak piece hai re baba….par ye bhosdi to meri taraf dekh hi nahi rahi hai….lagta hai jab bhosdi ka bhosda bana dunga tabhi dekhegi..?
Main aur sadhana use hi dekh rahe the aur vo sirf sadhana ko…main to use hi ganga mousi samajh raha tha..kuch der tak ankhe phade dekhne ke baad na jane usko kya hua ki jor se cheekhte huye bhitar bhag gayi.
“Badi mem saab…dekho choti mem saab aa gayi…” usne chillate huye kaha.
Raj (hairan)—yaar, ye tumhari ganga mousi pagal hai kya …?
Sadhana—vo ganga mousi nahi balki ghar ki naukrani maya hai..
Raj—jab iss ghar ki naukrani itni mast hai to phir mousi kitni sexy nahi hongi..
Sadhana (gusse me ghur kar)—kyaaa kaha... ? agar kuch ulta sidha socha bhi na to maar maar ke muh tod dungi tumhara..
Raj (shocked)—sheetal didi.... ‼!
Sadhana (baat ko sambhalte huye)—nahi, vo kya hai na ki sheetal ne mujhse kaha tha ki agar raj koi aisi vaisi harkat kare to aise bolna usko….sorry, agar tumhe bura laga to..(mann me)..bach gayi..warna abhi pakdi jati..
Raj (lambi saans le kar)—ohh..to ye baat hai…tumne to meri phad ke hi rakh di thi…ek pal ko to main bhi darr gaya tha ye soch kar ki sheetal didi kaha se aa gayi…? Ye didi bhi na, badi khatarnak hai…yaha bhi mera picha nahi chhod rahi, khud ko yaha aane ka mouka nahi mila to tumhe sab sikha padha diya apne lakshan..dekh abhi tak mera dil dhak dhak kar raha hai..
Tabhi vaha ek admi aur ek aurat apni mote mote chutad hilate huye aur bhagte huye aaye, unke piche vo naukrani maya bhi thi…main samajh gaya ki ye hai ganga mousi…aate hi usne sadhana ko apne gale se laga diya.
Ganga (chill kar)—sadhana..meri bachchi…tu kaha chali gayi thi…
Raj (dhire se)—wow..! kya ekdam mast solid gaand wali mousi hai..
Sadhana (gusse se dekhte huye)—(mann me)..ye to mousi ko bhi gandi nigah se dekhne laga…hey bhagwan, aaj ki raat bas ganga mousi aur maya ko iss saand se bacha lena…kal subah hote hi main isko le kar yaha se chali jaungi aur phir yaha lout ke vapis hi nahi aaungi.
Main ganga mousi ki mast gadarayi gaand ko ghurte huye dhire dhire bolte huye uski gaand ki tarif kar raha tha lekin pata nahi kaise ye sab sadhana ne sun liye aur vo mujhe gusse se dekhne lagi..uske iss tarah dekhte hi mere mann me ek bar phir se sheetal didi ki tasveer ubhar aayi aur maine hadbada kar jaldi se apni nigah dusri taraf kar li.
Raj (mann me)—arey yaar aise sheetal didi ki tarah meri taraf mat dekh….kyo meri gaand phadne par tuli huyi hai…? Ye sheetal didi marte dum tak mera picha nahi chhodengi lagta hai…?
Ganga—kaha chali gayi thi beti..bina kuch bataye…?
Amit—pahle usko andar to aa jane do…
Sadhana—raj, andar aa jao…
Tab kahi ja kar sab ki nazre meri taraf inayat huyi…phir main aur sadhana andar aa gaye…sadhana to apni ganga mousi ke sath unke room me chali gayi aur main vahi haal me amit ke sath baith gaya…lekin pata nahi kyo, par andar aate hi mujhe kuch ajib sa feel ho raha tha..khair maine isko ignore kar diya aur amit ke sath baato me ulajh gaya.
Raj—agar main galat nahi hu to aap sadhana ke amit fufa ji hain..
Amit—ji haan,..lekin maine tumhe nahi pahchana…
Raj—ji mera naam raj hai..
Amit—kaha rahte ho aur sadhana tumhe kaha mili.... ?
Maine unko apna address aur sadhana mujhe kaha mili sab sach sach bata diya..lekin jab maine usko sadhana ki pichli life ke baare me bataya to vah shocked ho gaya.
Amit (shocked)—(chillate huye)..whattt.. ! kya bakwas kar rahe ho ye.. ? ye kaise ho sakta hai…? Main janta hu ki tum jaise log ladkiyo ko phansane ke liye kya kya jaal bunte ho…? Behtar yahi hoga tumhare liye ki nikal jao yaha se…get out
Uski baate sun kar to meri jhaante hi sulag gayi…main uth kar uske kaan ke niche bajane hi wala tha ki tabhi chillane ki awaz sunte hi sadhana aur ganga mousi vaha pahuch gayi.
Sadhana (gusse me, jor se)—fufa jiii….aap kya bol rahe hain, koi hosh hai aap ko…..?
Ganga—sadhana beti, shant ho ja..main baat karti hu na…..(palat kar)..kya baat hai amit…?
Amit—ganga..ye ladka bol raha hai ki vo sadhana ko bachpan se janta hai aur to aur usse pyar bhi karta hai…pucho koi saboot hai iske paas apni baat ka…? Sidhe jail me band karwa dunga, samajh gaye..
Ganga—sadhana beti, ye ladka kya bol raha hai….?
Sadhana (gusse me)—mousi, raj sach bol raha hai…aur fufa ji, aap jisko jail me band karwane ki baat kar rahe hain, vo khud hi police department me sp hai..
Sab (shocked)—kyaaaaa…?
Sadhana—haan…aur aap ki jankari ke liye bata du ki raj ki vajah se hi mujhe apni asli pahchan ka pata chala..yahi nahi raj ne hi chinky ko gundo se bachaya tha….aur aap log uski hi beizzati kar rahe hain..?
Amit (hath jod kar)—mujhe maaf kar dena sir…mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi…anjane me maine bina sach jane aap ko kya kuch nahi bol diya…main darr gaya tha ki agar kuch ulta sidha ho gaya to main sadhana ke maa baap ko kya muh dikhaunga…bas isliye galti kar baitha..
Raj—it’s ok…aap ki jagah koi bhi hota to shayad yahi karta….aap sadhna ke fufa hain to mere bhi fufa ji huye…mujhe sir nahi, balki raj hi boliye….sadhana ke papa dayachand ko jisne arrest kiya tha, vo police officer khud main hi hu.
Vo dono ek bar phir se hairan ho gaye…thodi der baad poora mahoul normal ho gaya…hum sab vahi baith kar baate karne lage…ganga mousi bhi ab khul chuki thi.
Ganga—sadhana beti, fresh ho jao…phir khana lagwa deti hu..
Sadhana—theek hai mousi…raj, tum bhi fresh ho jao..
Ganga—raj beta, tum mere room ka bathroom use kar lo….maya, mera room bata de raj ko..
Sadhana—maya, pahle mera room khol dena
Maya ne sadhana ka room khol diya aur uske baad mujhe le kar ganga ke room me aa gayi…vo mere aage aage chal rahi thi..chalte huye meri nazar maya ke left right karte hilte huye dono chutado par tiki huyi thi…aisa lag raha tha jaise ki dono chutdo ke beech jyada se jyada hilne ka compition chal raha ho..
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