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Incest SAAJAN

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anandsngh12

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kuch der ke liye hi sahi bhairav nath wahan se chala gaya... priyadarshini k asli roop ko sahan naa kar pane ke wajah se...
Hmm yeh achha hua ki raj ab jald hi ush raskak ko dhundh lega..... ush Naag nagin ke badoulat...
Brilliant update Anand ji..... Great going
Shukriya Naina Ji Iss besh-kimti khubsurat prati kriya ke liye.
Aapka kahna sarvatha uchit hai bhairav nath ke sandarbh me.
Kal ke update me pata chal jayega ki raj kaha tak kamyab ho pata hai apne maqsad me..
 
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anandsngh12

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Bahut bahut shukriya bhai... Or ye kahna to katai galat hai ki aap ne ye pahla kuchh likha ho... Apke likhne ka andaz suppeerr hai... Or atiuttam.. Thanks dought clear karne hetu..... Ye meri taraf se aapke liye...

रात को चांद दिन ही सुदीनकर बनो
दुख में धरती बनो सुख में अंबर बनो
और नित्य करते रहो उत्तरोत्तर प्रगति
आज दरिया हो कल समंदर बनो
आज दरिया हो कल समंदर बनो..!!
सुप्रभात मित्रों.
Thanks Tiwari_baba bhai iss encouraging review ke liye.
Saajan meri first story hai jiski vajah se isme kayi galtiya bhi huyi hain mujhse.
 

anandsngh12

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Atyi uttam sundar update bhai... Ye log to uss pathriledanav ko or bada kar rahe... Baad me raj ko marne me dikkat hogi.... Or yaha to rakshak ka mrityu swayam hi mil gaya.... Ab dekhte hain aage kya hota hai.... Waiting bhai
Thanks Tiwari Baba ji for liking the update.
Apka kahna bilkul sahi hai
Uss bhairav nath ke upar jitna hamla karenge vo utna hi jyada taqatwar hota jayega.
 
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