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Ab jo bhi dikkat thi, usko paar karne ka tarika yahi tha ki pahle uss dikkat ko hi dekhu jiske karan main yaha se aage nahi badh pa raha tha...maine apni iss dikkat se paar pane ke liye uss andhere hisse me roshni karne ka faisla kiya..roshni ko uss hisse me lane ke liye maine apni mani ka prayog kiya magar koi fayda nahi hua...tab maine idhar udhar bikhre chamkile pattharo me se kuch ko utha kar andhere hisse ki dahleez tak le aaya...par iska bhi koi fayda nahi hua.
Mani ki roshni ki tarah hi unn chamkile pattharo ki roshni to jaise uss andhere tak pahuchte hi kisi adrishya shakti ke madhyam se sokh li ja rahi thi...aage jane ki apni koshish me maine kuch chamkile patthar uss andhere me andar ki taraf bhi phenk kar dekh liye..magar vo bhi sab bekar...vo patthar khud uss hisse ke andhere me jane kidhar kho gaye... ?
Ab aage....
Tarah tarah ki koshish kar ke bhi koi hal na nikalte dekh kar maine apne badan par pahni huyi shirt ko utara aur use niche rakh kar ek chamkile patthar ko uss par ragadne laga...chattani jamin par uss patthar ko ragadne se usme se nikli chingariyo se shirt ne pal bhar me hi aag pakad li...aag ki roshni phailte hi andhera maano chhu mantar ho kar gayab ho gaya.
Aag ki roshni me jo dikh raha tha, usko dekh kar ek bar to mere bhi rongte khade ho gaye….abhi tak andhere se bhare samne ki gufe ke uss hisse me chakile patthar ke charo taraf lal khoon ka ek talab tha...uss khoon bhare talab me kayi tarah ke magar machchha, ghadiyal, aur na jane kitni tarah ke ajibo garib khatarnak janwar apna jabda phaile tair rahe the...agar ek bar ko bhi mera pair uss talab me pad gaya hota to ab tak shayad main bhi uss lal rang ke talab me bhare khoon ka hissa ban chuka hota.
Aur agar kisi tarah main andar jane par pani ke unn shaitano se bach bhi jata to gufa ke iss hisse ki deeware mout ki kahani likhne me pal bhar ka bhi waqt na leti...vo deeware jahrile pathrile saanpo ke ke rengne se bani thi.
Unn saanpo me se har saanp itna jahrila tha ki unki jahar bujhi saanso se kamre ki hawa lagatar kali ho rahi thi...vahi kalapan kamre ki roshni tak ko sokh lene wala andhera tha...aur to aur shartiya taur par jahar ke gadhepan se hi gufa ke uss hisse ki hawa itni gadhi ho gayi thi ki har andar aane wale ke liye ek deewar jaisa kaam kar rahi thi...ya phir shayad bade chamkile patthar ki suraksha ke inn sab khatarnak upaayo se gufa ke jivit logo ki suraksha hoti rahi, isliye vaha ek adrishya deewar thi.
Itna sab dekh lene ke baad ab mere paas niskarsh tha…ye sab kuch, jo itna darawana tha, sab kewal gufa ke uss kone tak hi simit tha....matlab saaf tha ki itna sab, kewal uss bade se chamkile patthar ko surakshit rakhne ke liye kiya gaya bandobast tha.. vo bandobast kyo kiya gaya tha, ye baat ab kewal uss suraksha ghere ko tod kar hi pata ki ja sakti thi...maine vaise bhi gufa me ab tak jo dekha tha, uske hisab se gufa se nikalne ka aur koi rasta nahi tha.
Main ab tak faisla le chuka tha..ab bas mujhe iss suraksha ghere ko todne ke vishay me sochna tha….gufa me charo taraf bikhre pade chamkile pattharo ko maine la la kar khooni talab ke apne wale chhor par rakhna shuru kar diya...phir jab meri yojna ke hisab se jarurat bhar ke patthar vaha ekattha ho gaye to maine uske baad gufa me bhari padi besh kimti cheezo ke beech se ek bada sa kapda talash kar ke laya aur usme chingariyo se aag pakda kar use bade chamkile patthar ki taraf uchhal phenka.
Aag ki roshni me samne jabde phailaye dikh rahe pani ke janwaro ke muh par maine hatho me bhar bhar kar vo chamkile patthar phenkne shuru kar diye....main unn janwaro par vo patthar itni der tak phenkta raha ki vo saare janwar meri iss harkat se pareshan ho gaye.
Iss beech pattharo ki iss badi sankhya ne khoon ke uss talab par iss paar se uss chamile patthar ke chhor tak lagbhag ek pul taiyar kar diya….maine phir bina koi pal ganwaye uss pul ke upar se sidhi daud laga di.
Aag ki roshni me gufa ke uss hisse ke muhane par moujud adrishya deewar bhi jaise be-asar ho gayi thi aur shayad sara ird gird ka jahar bhi jalkar be-asar ho gaya tha...maine lambi chhalang bharte huye sidhe uss bade chamkile patthar tak ja pahucha... patthar ko apni pahuch me dekhte hi maine use uthane ke liye apne hath uss par tika diye.
Maine abhi uss chamkile patthar ko touch kiya hi tha ki tabi pal bhar me hi uss patthar ki sari chamakdar roshni mere hatho ke jariye mere jism me samane lagi...patthar ki vo chamakdar roshni mere hatho ke jariye badan me samate hi poore badan ki banawat ekdam se badalne lagi....chand palo me jo bhi badlav ghate, uske asar se main kuch pal ke liye behosh ho gaya..jab hosh aaya to maine apne badan ko kisi chattan ki tarah kathor mahsoos kiya.
Chamkile bade patthar ki taqat mere andar aane ke baad patthar ke ird gird ka poora darawana nazara badal kar gufa ke baki hisso jaisa ho gaya...vah bada patthar mere baithne ke liye ek singhasan ke roop me badal gaya...
Badan me aur charo taraf ye badlav aane ke baad main gufa ke andar jidhar bhi nazar dalta to gufa ki har deewar par ek aisa hissa ban jata, jisme se kuch mujhe nazar aane ki koshish karta...lekin vo dikhne wala nazara kya tha, main kuch samajh nahi pa raha tha.
Udhar Mrinal ki baat sunte hi sabhi ki hasi yakayak ruk gayi….sab shocked ho kar ek dusre ka chehra dekhne lage…maha pret pushpak khud hairan ho kar kabhi mrinal ko to kabhi baki preto ki taraf dekhne laga….
Ek pret (dhire se)—ye ladki to aap ko napunsak bol rahi hai... ?
Pushpak (gusse se)—chup raho..
Mitaly (tension)—ye kaha aa kar phans gaye...rajj bhi nahi hai yaha...ab kya hoga... ?
Mrinal—aap log daro mat...kuch nahi hoga..bhala inse kya darna…ye to napunsak (pushpak) bhaiya hai…ye bahut bade napunsak hain....
Pushpak (mann me)—ye kaisi ladki hai...ek maha pret ko dekh kar darne ki jagah ye ulta mujhe napunsak bol kar sabke samne mera majak uda rahi hai…jaldi hi iska kuch karna padega nahi to inme se koi bhi mujhse nahi darega phir..
Mrinal—napunsak maha pret ji...itne bade napunsak maha pret ho kar aapko ye shobha nahi deta...chhod do hum sab ko..
Pushpak (gusse se)—Jhablaaa....jao aur pakad ke khich lao iss badatmiz ladki ko....bahut der se ye meri be-izzati kiye ja rahi hai..jao..
Ek pret (Jiska naam jhabla hai)—hihihihi...abhi laya..
Mrinal (mann me)—achcha to ye tabla ( jhabla ) hai….
Jhabla bhayanak hasi haste huye mrinal ki taraf badhne laga...jabki mrinal ke mann me to kuch aur hi khichdi pak rahi thi..uske paas aate hi jaise hi jhabla ne usko pakadne ke liye hath aage badhaya vaise hi mrinal ne usko sir ko jor jor se tabla samajh kar bajana shuru kar diya.
Mrinal (sir me thappadmarte huye)—chatt...chatt....chattt....chattt...hihihihi...arey ye to sach much ka tabla hai...bahut din se kisi ka takla nahi bajaya tha...aaj asli tabla mila hai bajane ko...khoob maza aa raha hai...hhihihihi....chatt...chattt...chattt
Jhabla (dard me)—aaaaaaaaaaaaa....bachaoooo....iss pagal ladki se bachaoooo.....aaaaaaaaaaa
Mrinal—chatt...chattt...mast bajta hai….chatt…aaj tere tabla ko itna bajaungi ki aage tu apna naam tabla se badal kar jhabla rakh lega...chattt...chattt
Mrinal ne usko aisa bajaya ki vo vahi gir kar nipat gaya...ye dekh pushpak bahut gusse me aa gaya..usne baki preto ko, sab ko ghasit kar le chalne ko kaha ...pushpak ka adesh milte hi vo pret sab ki taraf lapke.
Mrinal—ye balatkari....tu inke sath thoda balatkar (chamatkar) kar na..tu to bahut bada balatkari hai na…pakad le jo bhi paas aaye..
Pret (mann me)—balatkari hai.. !
Mrinal ki baato ka natiza ye hua ki jo pret veer ki taraf ja rahe the..vo ulte pair piche khisak gaye...ye dekh kar pushpak ka kroadh aur badh gaya.
Pushpak (chillate huye)—tum log lout kyo aaye...jao pakdo use..
Ek pret—hum uske paas nahi jayenge…aapne suna nahi ki uss ladki ne usko hame pakad kar ulta hamara hi balatkar karne ke liye kaha hai…hum uss balatkari ke paas nahi jayenge..
Pushpak (chilla kar)—tumse kuch nahi hoga..mujhe hi kuch karna padega ab..
Unn preto me se ek ne jaise hi divya ko pakadne ki koshish ki to usko aisa jhatka laga ki vo udte huye na jane kidhar gaya..dusre ne pakadne ka prayas kiya to uske sath bhi yahi hua…uske baad koi uske karib jane ki himmat nahi juta paya…
Kintu baki pret anya logo ke sath badsaluki karne lage..ye dekh kar veer, aur priyadarshini, ka gussa unki bardast ke bahar ho gaya...aur phir...
Excellent update bhai bahut hi shandar aur lajawab mind blowing, chamkile Patthar Ki sari Chamak Raj ke andar Sama gayi ,,,,, Or dusri Taraf mrinal ki comedy to Dhamal macha rahi hai uski baten sunkar pret bhi Veer ke najdeek jaane se dar gaye, khair dekhte hain ab aage kya hota hai.....
Waiting for next update_____