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5th Janam Ki Love Story Continues...

Ye kaam kisi janwar ka ho sakta hai, mujhe vishwash nahi ho raha tha…kyon ki jaha tak maine suna hai iss jungle ke baare me to iss jungle me na to koi sher hai aur na hi cheeta….phir koun sa yeh vichitra prani hai….?

Vahi ek dusri jagah ek ladki kisi ki tasveer ko hatho me liye huye usse kuch baate kiye ja rahi thi..

"Mana Ki Kismat Par Mera Koi Jor Nahi,
Par Ye Sach Hai Ki Mohabbat Meri Kamjor Nahi,
Tere Dil Me, Teri Yaado Me Koi Aur Hai, Lekin,
Meri Har Saans Me Tere Siwa Koi Aur Nahi."

AB AAGE.........

Vo ladki kabhi uss tasveer yuvraj jitu ki thi, usko kabhi chumti to kabhi tasveer dekhte huye mushkurane lagti to kabhi usse shikayat karne lagti...badi hi ajeeb manodasha thi uski.

Ladki—mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai vo din jab tumne mujhe pahli bar sparsh kiya tha...ek ajib si sansanahat mere jism me daud gayi thi....uss chhuwan me kuch to tha...akasmat hua vah sparsh, lekin aisa laga maano mere jism me anginat phoolo ki khushbu bas gayi ho...barish ki halki halki fuharo ka ehsaas tha uss chhuwan me....kabhi kabhi kshan bhar me bhi jeevan ke anant palo ko ek sath jiya ja sakta hai, maine uss pal vahi mahsoos kiya.

Ladki—khubsurti aur ichcha ka sangam..bhar si gayi thi main uss sparsh se....kise pata tha ki vah ek chhuwan meri zindagi ki disha hi badal dega.. ? dher saare rang bhar kar phir use....nahi abhi vah sab nahi, warna khubsurti ka marm kam ho jayega... kuch pal ankho me tairta pyar bhi kabhi kabhi poori zindagi jeene ke liye kafi hota hai...lekin sirf khushnuma lamhe ko jeene wale hi iss baat ko samajh sakte hain.

Ladki—jab maine pahli bar tumhari awaz suni to aisa laga ki jaise ek sath kayi ghantiya baj gayi ho…jaise jharna kal kal karta hua bahne laga ho...jaise kisi ne baansuri par mithi taan chhed di ho...tumne mujhse pani manga to main hadbada gayi thi aur ussi hadbadahat me tumhe pani dete huye hath chhu bhar gaya tha tumse...uss chhuwan se mere jism me ek madak lahar daud gayi thi.

Ladki—bharpoor nazro se dekha tha maine tumhe...na jane kya ho gaya tha mujhe uss pal.. ? na koi sankoch, na darr, na kisi kism ki jhijhak, kuch bhi to uss waqt nahi tha mere mann me...awaz aur chhuwan ki tarah chehre me bhi ek kashish thi, jaise ki khud kaam devta mere samne khade ho...haan, yahi khyal to aaya tha tab mere dil me.

Ladki—pani de di, kaam khatam...lekin mann tha ki mujhe vahi thahre rahne ke liye majbur kar raha tha...baat karne ke liye bhi to koi vishay ya bahana chahiye hota hai...agar meri koi sakhi saheli hoti to dus baate, nirarthak, kuch bhi ki ja sakti hain ya phir bevajah hasi ke thahake hi lagaye ja sakte hain..lekin tum to hone wale yuvraj the....uss par pahli mulaqat, vah bhi bina parichay ke..phir bhi main dheeth bani vahi khadi rahi.

Ladki—baat karne ka kya andaz tha...maano har shabd kadam taal karta chal raha ho..jaise fisalne ki jaldi na ho shabdo ko bhi.. mujhe aise ektak ghurte dekh kar tumhare chehre par mushkan phail gayi thi...ohhh.. ! uss samay mere dil me aaya ki kisi tarah se tumhari iss mushkan ko apni hatheliyo me qaid kar ke hamesha ke liye apne paas sanjo kar rakh lu.

Mera Sajna Sanwarna Gajab Ho Gaya
Khushbuo Ka Bikharna Gajab Ho Gaya
Teri Ankho Me Kab Tak Main Rahti Bhala
Mera Dil Me Utarna Gajab Ho Gaya.


Har Taraf Pyar Hai, Ghum Kar Dekhiye
Iss Nashe Me Jara Jhoom Kar Dekhiye
Meri Khushbu Se Tum Bhi Mahak Jaoge
Bas Hatheli Jara Choom Kar Dekhiye.

Ladki—jab main apni tez chalti saanso ko niyantrit karte huye tumse door huyi to aisa mahsoos hua jaise ki meri antratma ka koi hissa piche chhut gaya ho...pahli bar to maine kisi purush ko nahi dekha tha..magar mere dil me kisi ko dekh kar aisa jwar bhata pahle kabhi nahi utha tha...maine bahut koshish ki apna dhyan tumhare upar se hatane ki kintu har pal aisa lag raha tha jaise ki tumhari vo ek chhuwan mere dil me bas gayi hai aur use sahla rahi hai.

Ladki—maine apne unn hatho ko dekha jisko tumne sparsh kiya tha...sab kuch bahut sangeetmay lag raha tha mujhe…payal ki chhan chhan mere hriday ke taaro ke sath lay mila rahi thi...shishe ke samne khade ho kar jab maine swayam ko nihara to mere gaalo par gulab ki pankhudiyo ka rang chadh gaya tha..ankho me sapne khumaar ban kar tair rahe the tumhare.

Ladki—agle din jab meri neend khuli to mahssos hua ki raat bhar me main badal si gayi thi…meri alhadta aur bindaspan ko viram sa lag gaya tha...ankho me shararat ki bajaye tumhari talash sama gayi thi.

Ek Adhuri Kahani To Mujh Me Bhi Hai
Dhadke Dil Vo Jawani To Mujh Me bhi Hai
Tum Jo Chhu Lo, Shiwalay Banu Prem Ka
Ek Meera Deewani To Mujh Me Bhi Hai.

Vahi dusri taraf main mukhiya ji ki laash milne ke baad hatyare ko aas paas hi dhoondte huye uss ghane jungle ke kafi andar tak ghusta chala gaya….badi hi darawani raat lag rahi thi…hawa ka rukh kuch saaf nazar nahi aa raha tha…ajib si hararat thi jungle me…shaam apne charam par thi….chandrama apni chandni bikher raha tha aur bhediye na jane kise pukar rahe the.

Achanak mujhe mere paas ki jhadiyo se aisa laga ki jaise koi mujh par nazre jamaye huye hai…magar maine mud kar nahi dekha. Vaha ek ajib si gandh joro se aa rahi thi..main apni jagah se hila nahi kyon ki shayad main bhi janta tha ki agar hila to mera bhi sir dhad se alag milega.

Mgar phir bhi maine himmat kar ke apna hath jhadiyo ki taraf jaise hi badhaya..mujhe uss vichitra prani ki chandni raat me chamakti huyi lal chamakdar ankhe nazar aa gayi…vah prani mujhe dekh kar chounka aur main bhi usko dekh kar chounk gaya.

Maine ekdam se apni talwar se uss jhadi par vaar karna shuru kar diya magar meri kismat ne mera sath nahi diya aur vo vaha se achanak gayab ho gaya…maine apne kadam jaise hi unn jhadiyo ki taraf badhaye vaise hi vo na jane kaha se aaya aur meri peeth par apne nakhuno se ghaav kar ke chala gaya…mujhe itna tez dard mahsoos hua jaise ki main abhi yahi dum tod dunga.

Andhera hone ke karan main uss janwar ka chehra dhang se to nahi dekh paya magar uske pair ke nishan jo ki kafi had tak insaan ke pair ke nishan jaise hi the..magar main bina piche dekhe raat bhar jungle me yaha vaha uski talash karta raha…vo bhi janwar shayad mera picha kar raha tha…magar raat ke andhere me vo mujhe kahi dikh nahi raha tha.

Main ghayal avastha me poori raat bhatakta raha aur ant me mukhiya ji ki laash ko le kar vapis gaon lout aaya…main jaise hi mukhiya ji ke ghar pahucha to mujhe vaise hi gandh mahsoos huyi jaisi ki maine jungle ke andar mahsoos ki thi…jisse mujhe aisa laga jaise ki vo janwar pahle bhi yaha kayi bar aa chuka ho.

Mukhiya ji ki laash dekhte hi unki patni jor jor se chhati peet kar rone lagi..kuch hi der me vaha logo ki bheed jama hone lagi.. unki patni ke chehre ko dekh kar mujhe aisa abhaas hua jaise ki vo kuch chhupa rahi ho lekin maine kuch nahi kaha aur apne shiwir lout aaya.

Sainiko ne mere ghaav par haldi chandan ka lep lagaya..ghaav bahut gahra tha jise bharne me kafi samay lagega…phir main dainik kriya se mukt ho kar raat ki ghatna ke baare me hi sochne laga.

Jitu (mann me)—akhir vo vichitra sa janwar kaha chhup jata hai….? Aur iske pairo ke nishan insano ki tarah kyo hain... ? kya hai ye bala…? Koi janwar hai ya phir koi manav .... ? aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki vo nishan mere hi pairo ke ho kintu itne bade pairo ke nishan mere to kya, kisi aur manav ke bhi nahi ho sakte hain....kaash ! main uska chehra dekh pata...lekin kismat ko kuch aur hi manzur tha...mujhe apne ghaav ki fikra nahi hai..kisi bhi tarah mujhe uss katil tak pahuchna hi hoga...na jane kaha chhupa hoga vo.. ?

Dimag pareshan tha to isliye maine aaj raat phir se uss jungle me jane ka faisla kiya aur phir aashram ki oar chal pada unn rishiyo ke yagya ki suraksha ke liye.

Sorry Friends, Update bahut chhota hai..Lekin aaj office se aane me hi bahut late ho gaya tha to jitna bhi likh paya..utna post kar diya.
Always have a classic update,
 

Akil

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SAAJAN
UPDATE- 216
5th Janam Ki Love Story Continues...

Ye kaam kisi janwar ka ho sakta hai, mujhe vishwash nahi ho raha tha…kyon ki jaha tak maine suna hai iss jungle ke baare me to iss jungle me na to koi sher hai aur na hi cheeta….phir koun sa yeh vichitra prani hai….?

Vahi ek dusri jagah ek ladki kisi ki tasveer ko hatho me liye huye usse kuch baate kiye ja rahi thi..

"Mana Ki Kismat Par Mera Koi Jor Nahi,
Par Ye Sach Hai Ki Mohabbat Meri Kamjor Nahi,
Tere Dil Me, Teri Yaado Me Koi Aur Hai, Lekin,
Meri Har Saans Me Tere Siwa Koi Aur Nahi."

AB AAGE.........

Vo ladki kabhi uss tasveer yuvraj jitu ki thi, usko kabhi chumti to kabhi tasveer dekhte huye mushkurane lagti to kabhi usse shikayat karne lagti...badi hi ajeeb manodasha thi uski.

Ladki—mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai vo din jab tumne mujhe pahli bar sparsh kiya tha...ek ajib si sansanahat mere jism me daud gayi thi....uss chhuwan me kuch to tha...akasmat hua vah sparsh, lekin aisa laga maano mere jism me anginat phoolo ki khushbu bas gayi ho...barish ki halki halki fuharo ka ehsaas tha uss chhuwan me....kabhi kabhi kshan bhar me bhi jeevan ke anant palo ko ek sath jiya ja sakta hai, maine uss pal vahi mahsoos kiya.

Ladki—khubsurti aur ichcha ka sangam..bhar si gayi thi main uss sparsh se....kise pata tha ki vah ek chhuwan meri zindagi ki disha hi badal dega.. ? dher saare rang bhar kar phir use....nahi abhi vah sab nahi, warna khubsurti ka marm kam ho jayega... kuch pal ankho me tairta pyar bhi kabhi kabhi poori zindagi jeene ke liye kafi hota hai...lekin sirf khushnuma lamhe ko jeene wale hi iss baat ko samajh sakte hain.

Ladki—jab maine pahli bar tumhari awaz suni to aisa laga ki jaise ek sath kayi ghantiya baj gayi ho…jaise jharna kal kal karta hua bahne laga ho...jaise kisi ne baansuri par mithi taan chhed di ho...tumne mujhse pani manga to main hadbada gayi thi aur ussi hadbadahat me tumhe pani dete huye hath chhu bhar gaya tha tumse...uss chhuwan se mere jism me ek madak lahar daud gayi thi.

Ladki—bharpoor nazro se dekha tha maine tumhe...na jane kya ho gaya tha mujhe uss pal.. ? na koi sankoch, na darr, na kisi kism ki jhijhak, kuch bhi to uss waqt nahi tha mere mann me...awaz aur chhuwan ki tarah chehre me bhi ek kashish thi, jaise ki khud kaam devta mere samne khade ho...haan, yahi khyal to aaya tha tab mere dil me.

Ladki—pani de di, kaam khatam...lekin mann tha ki mujhe vahi thahre rahne ke liye majbur kar raha tha...baat karne ke liye bhi to koi vishay ya bahana chahiye hota hai...agar meri koi sakhi saheli hoti to dus baate, nirarthak, kuch bhi ki ja sakti hain ya phir bevajah hasi ke thahake hi lagaye ja sakte hain..lekin tum to hone wale yuvraj the....uss par pahli mulaqat, vah bhi bina parichay ke..phir bhi main dheeth bani vahi khadi rahi.

Ladki—baat karne ka kya andaz tha...maano har shabd kadam taal karta chal raha ho..jaise fisalne ki jaldi na ho shabdo ko bhi.. mujhe aise ektak ghurte dekh kar tumhare chehre par mushkan phail gayi thi...ohhh.. ! uss samay mere dil me aaya ki kisi tarah se tumhari iss mushkan ko apni hatheliyo me qaid kar ke hamesha ke liye apne paas sanjo kar rakh lu.

Mera Sajna Sanwarna Gajab Ho Gaya
Khushbuo Ka Bikharna Gajab Ho Gaya
Teri Ankho Me Kab Tak Main Rahti Bhala
Mera Dil Me Utarna Gajab Ho Gaya.


Har Taraf Pyar Hai, Ghum Kar Dekhiye
Iss Nashe Me Jara Jhoom Kar Dekhiye
Meri Khushbu Se Tum Bhi Mahak Jaoge
Bas Hatheli Jara Choom Kar Dekhiye.

Ladki—jab main apni tez chalti saanso ko niyantrit karte huye tumse door huyi to aisa mahsoos hua jaise ki meri antratma ka koi hissa piche chhut gaya ho...pahli bar to maine kisi purush ko nahi dekha tha..magar mere dil me kisi ko dekh kar aisa jwar bhata pahle kabhi nahi utha tha...maine bahut koshish ki apna dhyan tumhare upar se hatane ki kintu har pal aisa lag raha tha jaise ki tumhari vo ek chhuwan mere dil me bas gayi hai aur use sahla rahi hai.

Ladki—maine apne unn hatho ko dekha jisko tumne sparsh kiya tha...sab kuch bahut sangeetmay lag raha tha mujhe…payal ki chhan chhan mere hriday ke taaro ke sath lay mila rahi thi...shishe ke samne khade ho kar jab maine swayam ko nihara to mere gaalo par gulab ki pankhudiyo ka rang chadh gaya tha..ankho me sapne khumaar ban kar tair rahe the tumhare.

Ladki—agle din jab meri neend khuli to mahssos hua ki raat bhar me main badal si gayi thi…meri alhadta aur bindaspan ko viram sa lag gaya tha...ankho me shararat ki bajaye tumhari talash sama gayi thi.

Ek Adhuri Kahani To Mujh Me Bhi Hai
Dhadke Dil Vo Jawani To Mujh Me bhi Hai
Tum Jo Chhu Lo, Shiwalay Banu Prem Ka
Ek Meera Deewani To Mujh Me Bhi Hai.

Vahi dusri taraf main mukhiya ji ki laash milne ke baad hatyare ko aas paas hi dhoondte huye uss ghane jungle ke kafi andar tak ghusta chala gaya….badi hi darawani raat lag rahi thi…hawa ka rukh kuch saaf nazar nahi aa raha tha…ajib si hararat thi jungle me…shaam apne charam par thi….chandrama apni chandni bikher raha tha aur bhediye na jane kise pukar rahe the.

Achanak mujhe mere paas ki jhadiyo se aisa laga ki jaise koi mujh par nazre jamaye huye hai…magar maine mud kar nahi dekha. Vaha ek ajib si gandh joro se aa rahi thi..main apni jagah se hila nahi kyon ki shayad main bhi janta tha ki agar hila to mera bhi sir dhad se alag milega.

Mgar phir bhi maine himmat kar ke apna hath jhadiyo ki taraf jaise hi badhaya..mujhe uss vichitra prani ki chandni raat me chamakti huyi lal chamakdar ankhe nazar aa gayi…vah prani mujhe dekh kar chounka aur main bhi usko dekh kar chounk gaya.

Maine ekdam se apni talwar se uss jhadi par vaar karna shuru kar diya magar meri kismat ne mera sath nahi diya aur vo vaha se achanak gayab ho gaya…maine apne kadam jaise hi unn jhadiyo ki taraf badhaye vaise hi vo na jane kaha se aaya aur meri peeth par apne nakhuno se ghaav kar ke chala gaya…mujhe itna tez dard mahsoos hua jaise ki main abhi yahi dum tod dunga.

Andhera hone ke karan main uss janwar ka chehra dhang se to nahi dekh paya magar uske pair ke nishan jo ki kafi had tak insaan ke pair ke nishan jaise hi the..magar main bina piche dekhe raat bhar jungle me yaha vaha uski talash karta raha…vo bhi janwar shayad mera picha kar raha tha…magar raat ke andhere me vo mujhe kahi dikh nahi raha tha.

Main ghayal avastha me poori raat bhatakta raha aur ant me mukhiya ji ki laash ko le kar vapis gaon lout aaya…main jaise hi mukhiya ji ke ghar pahucha to mujhe vaise hi gandh mahsoos huyi jaisi ki maine jungle ke andar mahsoos ki thi…jisse mujhe aisa laga jaise ki vo janwar pahle bhi yaha kayi bar aa chuka ho.

Mukhiya ji ki laash dekhte hi unki patni jor jor se chhati peet kar rone lagi..kuch hi der me vaha logo ki bheed jama hone lagi.. unki patni ke chehre ko dekh kar mujhe aisa abhaas hua jaise ki vo kuch chhupa rahi ho lekin maine kuch nahi kaha aur apne shiwir lout aaya.

Sainiko ne mere ghaav par haldi chandan ka lep lagaya..ghaav bahut gahra tha jise bharne me kafi samay lagega…phir main dainik kriya se mukt ho kar raat ki ghatna ke baare me hi sochne laga.

Jitu (mann me)—akhir vo vichitra sa janwar kaha chhup jata hai….? Aur iske pairo ke nishan insano ki tarah kyo hain... ? kya hai ye bala…? Koi janwar hai ya phir koi manav .... ? aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki vo nishan mere hi pairo ke ho kintu itne bade pairo ke nishan mere to kya, kisi aur manav ke bhi nahi ho sakte hain....kaash ! main uska chehra dekh pata...lekin kismat ko kuch aur hi manzur tha...mujhe apne ghaav ki fikra nahi hai..kisi bhi tarah mujhe uss katil tak pahuchna hi hoga...na jane kaha chhupa hoga vo.. ?

Dimag pareshan tha to isliye maine aaj raat phir se uss jungle me jane ka faisla kiya aur phir aashram ki oar chal pada unn rishiyo ke yagya ki suraksha ke liye.

Sorry Friends, Update bahut chhota hai..Lekin aaj office se aane me hi bahut late ho gaya tha to jitna bhi likh paya..utna post kar diya.
Kaun hai woh jo aise logon ko maarta fir raha hai aur kyon?
Yeh ladki kaun hai? Aur iski aur yuvraj ki mulaqaat kab aur kaise hui aur kahan hui?
 
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Siraj Patel

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Excellent update bhai bahut hi shandar aur lajawab mind blowing, Aakhir Vo Ladki kaun hai Jo Yuvraj Jitu ki tasvir Dekhte Huye khudse baten kar rahi thi, Or dusri Taraf jungle mein Yuvraj Jitu par Jis Janwar Ne Hamla Kiya vah sach mein koi Janwar hai ya Koi Insan aur Mukhiya ji ki patni bhi Kuch Chhupa rahi hai Aakhir kya baat ho sakti hai.? Khair dekte Hain Aage Kya hota hai or yeh sab kya Majra hai.....

Waiting for next update_____
 

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kamal ka update tha yah.
Adbhut h bhai adbhut.

Kya kahani h ekdam romanchit kar dene wali.
Bahut hi behtareen update yaara.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar


SAAJAN
UPDATE- 280

Agar sach kaha jaye to manav me vichar hi mukhya hain…vicharo ke anusar sanskar bante hain aur sanskar ke adhaar par jeevan ka nirman hota hai…marne ke baad achche vichar, aise sukhad aur anand dayak vatavaran ka nirman kar dete hain ki jinhe hum swarg kah sakte hain…jabki bure vicharo se klesh, yatna aur mansik kashto ka vatavaran taiyar hota hai, vahi nark hai.

Achche vichar aursanskar jeevan ko pane ka ek mulyavan avsar hai…iss avsar ke jariye jeevan paya bhi ja sakta hai aur khoya bhi ja sakta hai…manav jeevan kitna mulyavan aur mahatvapurna hai, ye tabhi samajh me aata hai, jab mar kar hum dono ko kho baithte hain.

chalte chalte akhir hum unn pahado ke nikat pahuch hi gaye jiske dusri taraf vo qila tha….mere hath me uss divya talwar ab bhi thi jiski roshni ke karan hame rasta dekhne me koi pareshani nahi ho rahi thi.

Unn pahado ko paar karne ke liye hamne apne kadam aage badhaye hi the ki tabhi….

Ab Aage…….

Kuch akritiyo ne achanak hi vaha prakat ho kar hame gher liya…sirf parchhayi hi nazar aa rahi thi unki…ye dekh kar sab ek bar phir se dahshat me aa gaye.

Neha—ye…ye…ab kya hai…?

Raj—daro mat chalte raho..ye shapit jagah hai to yaha kuch na kuch to chalta hi rahega..

Madhu—lekin ye hai kya bala... ? koi dikhayi kyo nahi de raha hai... ?

Raj—ye shapit jagah hai to yaha kuch na kuch to chalta hi rahega...mere hote huye kisi ko darne ki jarurat nahi hai..

Paridhi—mama ji aur munni ko bachane ke liye tumne apni power kyo use nahi ki pahle... ? dekho mami kitni dukhi hain... ?

Raj—kyon ki ye ek mayajaal hai, jisse ki hum isme hi ulajh kar rah jaye...main shaktiyo ka prayog karta bhi to unhe nahi bacha pata kyon ki vo na to asli mama the aur na hi asli munni..

Sabhi (shocked)—kya matlab... ?

Raj—matlab ye ki pahle maine bhi ye sab sach hi samajh raha tha lekin jab maine mama ji ko uss pret ke changul se chhudane ke liye unka hath pakda to mujhe sari sachchayi malum ho gayi...unka hath pakadte hi mujhe aisa laga jaise ki maine bina maans ke kisi haddi ko pakda hua hai...isliye maine dubara unko bachane ke liye apni power ka use nahi kiya.

Rooplay (bhavuk)—iska matlab ki tere mama jinda hain... ?

Raj—mami, ummid to yahi lagti hai..

Roopaly—to chal beta sabse pahle tere mama ko bachate hain..

Raj—mami, abhi hum chah kar bhi kuch nahi kar sakte..kyon ki ye sab mayajaal hai aur isko tode bina mama ji tak pahuchna lagbhag namumkin hi hai..

Priyadarshini—to phir ye jaal tootega kaise…?

Raj—inn sabhi ghatnao ka sambandh uss qile se hi hai…jo bhi hoga uss qile me pahuch kar hi ho sakta hai..

Hum baate karte huye chalte ja rahe the…maine sabhi ke charo taraf ek adrishya suraksha kawach bana diya tha jisse koi adrishya shakti kisi tarah ka nuksan na pahucha sake…vo parchhaiya bhi lagatar hamare sath sath hi chal rahi thi.

Payal—lekin ek baat samajh me nahi aayi ki itne saare raj kaise paida kiye tune…?

Veer—kya vo sab tera ansh hain…?

Raj—pahli baat to ye ki ansh ka matlab vahi nahi hota hai…ansh ka matlab hota hai ki usse hi uttapann hua…arthat jisse vo uttapann hua vo uska janak kahlaya…jaise ki hanuman ji bhagwan shiv ke ansh hain to kya hanuman ji mata parvati ko apni patni kahne lagenge…? Nahi na, jo roop jiska ansh hota hai unn dono me pita putra ka sambandh hota hai, dono ek hi nahi hote hain….jo ek hi hote hain unhe avtar ya pratichhaya (pratiroop) kahte hain…har putra apne pita ka ansh hota hai…apna ansh khud nahi hota….ye sabhi mere hi shakti dwara uttapann pratiroop the.

Mamta—maine hi tujhe apni kokh se paida kiya lekin khud bhi aaj tak tujhe samajh nahi payi..

Raj—aisa mat kaho maa, ek putra ko uski maa se jyada dusra koi nahi samajh sakta..shayad isliye hi iss brhmand me maa ka sthan sabse upar hai….yaha har kisi ka karz utara ja sakta hai lekin maa ke karz se putra kabhi bhi karz mukt nahi ho sakta.

Maa ke bina zindagi ki har baat hai bilkul kori,

Duniya ka sabse sundar sangeet hai maa ki lori.

Aise hi baate karte huye hum qile tak pahuch gaye…sabhi uss mahal numa qila ko dekh kar hairan the…maine sab ko apne piche aane ka ishara kar ke aage aage chalte huye uss khidki tak aa pahucha jaha par vahi tilismi kaanch laga hua tha jisse andar jhankne par past ki ghatnaye dikhayi deti hain.

Maine talwar ki madad se uss kaanch ko niche gira diya aur khidki ke raste bhitar ghus gaya…dhire dhire meri dekha dekhi sabhi andar aa gaye…sab ke bhitar aate hi vo kaanch apni jagah par pahle ki tarah hi apne aap khidki me fit ho gaya….ye chamatkar dekh kar sab ashcharya chakit rah gaye lekin divya ne sab ko uss kaanch ki vishesta ke baare me bata diya jisse unki hairani aur bhi jyada badh gayi….

Geeta mami—hey ram..! jane aur kya kya ajoobe dekhne ko milenge…?

Mamta—aap sahi kahti ho bhabhi..kabhi socha bhi na tha ki aisa din bhi dekhne ko milega…dharti ke bahar bhi koi duniya ho sakti hai jaha log rahte honge aur ek din hum bhi vaha jayenge, ye sab kab socha tha kisi ne..?

Kiran—haan aur sabse badi hairani ki baat to raj bhaiya ke paas supernatural powers ka hona hai…

Diksha—wow..ab to main bina padhe hi top kar sakti hu class me..bhaiya ki power ki help se..

Raj—aisa kabhi khwab me bhi mat sochna ki main iss kaam me tumhari koi madad karunga..

Diksha (kaan me)—bhaiya..main apki biwi bhi to hu bahan hone ke sath sath…kya apni biwi ki madad bhi nahi karoge aap…?

Raj (kaan me)—biwi ki madad dher saare bachche paida karne me karunga…exam me nakal karne me nahi..samjhi.

Veer—yaha se aage jane ka koi rasta hai hi nahi yaar..ye mata mahakali ki vishal murti bahut purani lagti hai..

Raj—abhi dikh jayega rasta bhi..

Maine turant uss talwar ko maa mahakali ke ek khali hath me pakda diya..agle hi kshan uss murti se ek tez prakash prakashit hua aur phir sab kuch shant ho gaya..ab vaha roshni ke sath darwaja bhi nazar aane laga tha...sabne uss murti ko jhuk kar pranam kiya.

Veer—wow..rasta bhi ban gaya..

Raj—sab aa jao andar…veer tum piche rahna sab ke…aur alert rahna kisi bhi khatre ke liye...vaise to ummid kam hai abhi koi khatre ki phir bhi kuch kaha nahi ja sakta..

Veer—tum chinta mat karo…main sambhal lunga..

Hum sab vaha se andar jane wale raste se bhitar chale gaye…main sidha sabse pahle vaha bane uss kamre me aaya jaha mujhe minakshi mili thi….andar ghuste hi kuch ko chhod kar baki sab chounk gaye uss kamre me meri aur divya ki tasveer dekh kar jisme pichle janam ki janam aur mrityu ki date likhi huyi thi.

Sabhi (shocked)—ye…ye..to mahak aur raj ki tasveer hai…ye tasveer yaha kaise…? Aur iss par ye date kaisi likhi hai…? Isme raj ka naam jitu (saajan) kyo likha hai…?

Mamta (hairan)—beta ye sab kya hai…?

Veer—haan raj..ye sab kya hai…?

Payal—maa, ye raj aur divya ke pichle janam ki tasveer hai..tab raj ka hi naam jitu tha aur vo yaha ka yuvraj tha..aur divya uski premika..iss jagah par hi dono ki mrityu huyi thi.

Sab (shocked)—kyaaaaaaa….?

Payal—hmmmm

Neha—haan didi, payal sahi bol rahi hai…

Ruchi (shocked)—to kyaa…to kya, raj hi vo saajan hai jiska naam le kar gudiya achanak cheekh kar neend se raat me uth jati thi..?

Payal—haan

Mitaly—ye kaisa sambandh hai…? Gudiya to raj ki choti bahan hai..phir ye kaise ho sakta hai…?

Geeta—bhabhi vo pichle janam ki baat hai…iss janam me vo uski bahan hai..

Mamta (mann me)—hey bhagwan ye kaisa adbhut chamatkar hai…kahi gurudev ki baat sach to nahi..?

Ruchi—betu—tu kuch bol na..

Raj—didi, abhi nahi baad me…yaha jab sab aa hi gaye hain to vaise hi sab kuch malum ho hi jayega…chalo ab yaya se…

Sabhi mere aur divya ke punar janam ki baat se hairan the..vo to achcha hua ki payal didi ya neha chachi ne apne baare me koi baat nahi batayi warna musibat ho jati…sab ko le kar main niche tahkhane me utar aaya…ki tabhi vaha kisi ko dekh kar vo sabhi chounk gaye..

“Aao saajan, main kab se tumhare aane ki pratiksha kar rahi thi.” Vaha tahkhane me ek singhasan par baithi ek aurat ne kaha.

Mamta (chounk kar)—ye koun hai beta..?

Raj—maa, ye rajlaxmi hai…iss mahal ki choti rani aur jitu yani ki meri patni..main yaha iski hi mukti ke liye aaya hu..

Sab (shocked)—kyaaaa…?

Rajlaxmi—saajan satya bol rahe hain maa ji…mera pranam swikar kare..

Roopaly—mukti, kaisi mukti…?

Mitaly—vo to hamare samne khadi hai..

Raj—nahi maa, rajlaxmi mar chuki hai..ye to sirf uski aatma hai jo yaha qaid hai…

Geeta (darte huye)—kyaaa mar chuki hai …? Iska matlab ki ye bhoot hai…? Bhago jaldi yaha se…

Raj—kisi ko rajlaxmi se darne ki jarurat nahi hai…vo kisi ko nuksan nahi pahuchayegi..vo to bechari khud hi bebas hai..

Mamta—kisne qaid kiya hai use... ?

Raj—yahi janne to aaya hu main yaha…jisne bhi qaid kiya hai uska hi hath sab ko gayab karne me bhi hai..agar uss tak pahuch gaya to rajlaxmi ki mukti ke sath sath baki gayab huye log aur mama ji bhi mil sakte hain agar unme se koi jivit hua to.

Veer—koun hai vo aur uss tak pahuchenge kaise hum…? Aur sabse badi baat ki vrihadpur ka tilism tootega kaise…?

Rajlaxmi—jisne iss tilism ki rachna ki hai vahi upaay bhi bata sakta hai isko todne ka..

Divya—kisne ki thi iss tilism ki rachna…?

Rajlaxmi—aapke pita kanva rishi ne aap dono ke sath yaha huyi ghatna se kroadhit ho kar ye tilism banaya tha..aur phir uss tilism me sabhi ko qaid kar diya tha.

Divya—kya..pita shri ne banaya tha…? Kaha milenge vo…mujhe unse milna hai…?

Rajlaxmi—iss jagah ko tilism se badhit karne ke pashchat vo yaha se chale gaye the..unke baare me to mujhe kuch bhi gyat nahi hai ki vo kaha mil sakte hain..lekin unhone uss tamra patra me saajan ke liye kuch likha tha…maine unse jab vinti ki thi to unhone kaha tha ki ek din saajan yaha ayenge tabhi meri mukti hogi

Raj—chalo abhi sote hain kal subah dekhenge..aur sab ek hi room me sona alag alag nahi..rajlaxmi inhe mere kaksh me le jao.

Rajlaxmi—theek hai saajan..

Payal—kyo tu nahi chalega…?

Raj—haan chal raha hu main bhi..

Rajlaxmi sab ko mere kaksh me le aayi....vaha aate hi chanchal ki ankhe bhar aayi..shayad use sab yaad aane laga tha...aur sandhya ko bhi...magar uske chehre par dukh ki jagah gussa umad raha tha...vo gusse se divya ki taraf dekh rahi thi..ye samajhte huye maine jaldi se sandhya ko apne seene se laga kar chipka liya...lekin vo khud ko mujhse chhuda kar uss pahle wale kamre me bhag gayi....chanchal bhi rote huye mere paas aa gayi to maine use bhi apni baho me qaid kar liya..ye dekh kar phir se sabhi hairan ho gaye..

Chanchal—saajannn...

Mamta (hairan)—ab ye sab kya hai... ?

Payal—main batati hu maa....(phir payal didi ne pichle dono janam ki kahani sab ki batayi)

Pichle janam ki kahani sun kar sabhi ki ankhe hairani se khuli rah gayi...unhe iss baat par vishwash karna mushkil sa ho gaya magar sach to samne tha...na chahte huye bhi unki ankho se aviral jaldhara pravahit hone lagi.

Main vaha se nikal kar sandhya ke paas gaya to vah deewar par tangi meri tasveer ko hath me pakde dekh rahi thi..uski ankhe gusse se ekdam lal thi...mujhe dekhte hi usne tasveer ko deewar me patak kar tod diya.

Sandhya (gusse me)—jao yaha se...tumne har bar mujhe dhokha diya hai...lekin...lekin iss bar main nahi hone dungi...divya ko marna hoga...main use chhodungi nahi...aur tum bhi nahi bachoge...mere sath huye har ek julm ka tumhe hisab chukana hoga.. iss bar bhi tumne vahi kiya...pahle mujhse pyar karne ka natak kiya aur phir divya ke milte hi mujhe apni zindagi se doodh me padi makkhi ki tarah nikal phenka...ab to jo bhi mere raste me ayega, unn sab ko marna hoga...suna tumne saajan, sab ko marna hoga..kisi ko nahi chhodungiii...

Aur phir sandhya dusri taraf muh kar ke rone lagi...maine use samjhana chaha to usne mera hath jhatak diya...main bahar aa kar darwaje ke paas khada ho ke chupchap use dekhne laga.

"Vo Roye To Bahut, Par Mujhse Muh Mod Kar Roye,
Koi Majburi Hogi To Dil Tod Kar Roye,
Mere Samne Kar Diye Meri Tasveer Ke Tukde,
Pata Chala Mere Piche Vo Unhe Jod Kar Roye."

Tabhi...

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