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Naughtyrishabh

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Veer ko Mrinal ne bacha hi liya lekin halat critical h.
Raaj bhi wahan sare kaam postpone karke yaahan aa gya .
Mrinal ke aage abhi vo use dhanyawad kar hi raha tha ki vidya gussa ho gyi.
Or usne jo bura-bhala kaha Raaj ko to lagta h Payal aa gyi h apne prachand roop me.
Ek baar fir bade hi nirale andaz me dikhaya h aapne is update ko.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar


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UPDATE- 251

Udhar dusri taraf dharti lok me vidhya ke behosh hote hi yamraj uske charo taraf chakkar kaatne laga, iss pratiksha me ki kab usko hosh aaye aur vo apna shikar kare.

Yamraj—Ye to behoshhhh ho gayiiiii.....mareee…huyeee ko..kyaaa maarnaaa……aise me mera khauf logo ke dil se kam ho jayega.....mujhe logo ki ankho me mout ka darr dekhne me bahut maza aata hai.....hoshhh me aane ke baaddd phirr aunga.. tab takkk koiii dusraa shikar dekhta huu.

Yamraj vaha se gayab ho gaya....vahi veer lagatar apni dhun me gadi chalaye ja raha tha....tab tak uss sher ki parchhayi ne uss jagah ko apni giraft me le liya.

Veer ki gaadi jaise hi narmada nadi ke ek lambe pul ke upar pahuchi...tabhi uss sher ki parchhayi ne apna vishal muh khola aur ussi samay samne se tezi se aa rahe tuck ke driver ko usne side se hi khich liya aur vo uske muh me hath pair maarte chillate huye samata chala gaya....uss parchhayi ne usko nigal liya.

Ye dekh kar veer ke hath pair phool gaye....veer kuch samajh pata ki tabhi vo bina driver ka truck badi tezi se veer ki car se takra gaya……takrane ke baad car kafi upar tak uchhali aur phir BOOOOMMMM kar ke hawa me hi blast ho gayi….vo truck nadi me ja gira….tabhi….

"Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr"

Ab aage.....

Truck se takrate hi jaise hi car hawa me udti huyi upar gayi vaise hi blast hone se pahle side window toot kar niche girne se veer bhi niche girne laga aur ussi kshan car me blast ho gaya.

Jaise hi car me blast hua tabhi mrinal adrishya halat me vaha pahuch gayi aur jor se veeerrrr kah ke cheekh uthi jo ki niche girte huye bas pul ki railing se takrane hi vala tha ki vaise hi mrinal ne jaldi se bhag kar usko pakad liya.

Mrinal ne usko railing me takrane aur nadi me girne se to bacha liya lekin samne se truck ki takkar ki vajah se usko behad gambhir chote aayi thi….veer ke sir se bahut jyada khoon bah raha tha aur vah behoshi ki halat me tha.

Mrinal ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki vo kya kare.... ? shaktiya to uski bandhi huyi thi to unka prayog kar ke theek karne me asmarth thi….yaha kshan prati kshan veer ki hriday gati dheemi hoti ja rahi thi….antatah usne adrishya halat me hi turant usko le kar hospital aa gayi aur visible ho kar usko god me uthaye tezi se andar bhagi aur doctor ke cabin me ghus gayi jaha vahi takla doctor baitha tha….uske aise achanak tezi se andar aane aur phir veer ki halat dekhte hi vo bhi chounk gaya.

Mrinal (chillate huye)—ye…takle dok tarrrr…jaldi se ilaz kar nahi to tera ye takla aaj phod dalungi….dekh kya raha hai…vaha khade khade….? Chal jaldi se ilaz kar.

Sabhi veer ko achchi tarah se jante the ki ye maa cement industries ka malik hone ke sath sath raj ka best friend bhi hai..isliye usne turant harkat me aate huye aanan fanan me veer ko Operation theatre me bhijvaya….sath me police ko bhi inform karwa diya, jisse baad me koi problem na ho.

Veer ke accident hone ki khabar aag ki tarah kuch hi minutes ke andar poore city me phail gayi….har news channels ki main head lines ban gayi ye khabar.

Pahle paridhi ki kharab tabiyat, phir raj ko jaan se maarne ki sazish me nani aur vidhya ka hath hone ki sachchayi jaan kar, phir chanchal ka sach samne aana aur inn sab ke karan mamta ki bigadti halat se abhi sabhi khud ko sambhal bhi nahi paye the theek se ki veer ke sath huyi iss durghatna ne sab ke hath pair hi jaise jamin se alag kar diye.

Thakur pariwar ek baar phir se gum ke athaah sagar me doob gaya…..sab ek dusre se lipat kar ro rahe the…sab buri tarah se ab tak ki ghatnao se toot chuke the.

Mamta (rote huye)—ye kis ki buri nazar lag gayi mere pariwar ko….? Kya meri kismat me zindagi bhar apne bachcho ke liye rona hi likha hai….? Isse achcha to ye din dekhne se pahle main marr hi jati to achcha hota.

Ruchi (anshu bahate huye)—maaaa….aisa mat kaho....agar tum bhi aisa kahogi to hame koun sambhalega…? Betu ko koun samjhayega….? Ab to kisi par bharosa bhi nahi rah gaya..maa

Nani (rote huye)—aisa mat bol ruchi beta…..main apne kiye par bahut sharminda hu…aaj jo bhi kuch hua uska mujhe bhi behad dukh hai.

Andar abhi bhi veer ka operation chal raha tha….police bhi aa chuki thi….chunki vo sabhi ruchi ke under me kaam kar chuke hain to kisi ne bhi jyada bahas nahi ki aur sirf formility poori kar ke chale gaye….doctor’s aur nurses ka bar bar O.T, ke andar bahar aana jana laga hua tha….lekin koi bhi kuch bata nahi raha tha ki veer ki condition kaisi hai.

Sabhi pareshan bahar khade ho kar prarthana kar rahe the veer ki salamti ke liye….tabhi ek bar phir se cabin ka darwaja khula aur ek doctor bahar aaya.

Meera—dr. ab kaisi hai veer ki halat….?

Doctor—dekhiye unki halat bahut hi nazuk hai….sir me bahut jyada chot aayi hai unke….khoon bhi bahut bah chuka hai… agar aap me se kisi ka blood group*** hai to pls jaldi se check karwa ke bataiye…..warna bahut der ho jayegi.

Soniya—mera blood group bhi yahi hai doctor….aap mera khoon le lijiye

Doctor—theek hai…aap andar aaiye mere sath.

Soniya ne apna blood veer ko diya….udhar vidhya ko jaise hi hosh aaya to turant uske samne behosh hone se pahle ki vah bhayanak ghatna yaad aa gayi.

Vo jaldi se khadi huyi aur darr se chillate huye darwaja khol kar tezi se bahar bhagi….uske jehan me abhi tak Yamraj ka darr aur uski dahshat buri tarah se haavi thi…vo har kisi ke kamre me ja kar awaz laga kar apni jaan bachane ke liye madad ki bheekh maangne lagi…kintu usko ye kya pata tha ki vo sab to raat se hi hospital me hain…kyon ki vidhya to ussi samay se apne room se bahar hi nahi nikli thi.

Bhagte huye vo gate me gayi jaha guard ne usko sab bataya ki vo sab hospital me hain….to vo bhi ek driver ko le kar turant hospital ke liye nikal gayi.

Hospital pahuchte hi jab usko veer ke baare me malum hua to vo bhi jor jor se rone lagi….idhar chanchal bhi raat bhar mandir me hi rahne ke baad subah bhagwan ke darshan kar ke hospital pahuch gayi….jaha uski maa abhi bhi bistar me hi leti huyi thi…lekin chanchal unme se kisi ke paas nahi gayi aur door se hi chhup kar sab ko dekhti rahi.

Vahi dusri taraf minakshi ka antim sanskar karne ke uparant jaise hi mani mere andar vileen huyi vaise hi meri aur divya ki ankho ke samne pichle janam ki sari baate aur ghatnaye kisi chalchitra ki bhanti tarotaza ho gayi….hum dono ki ankho me pani aa gaya tha…divya rote huye mujhse lipat gayi.

Vahi haal paridhi ka bhi…usko bhi apne 6th janam ki minakshi se judi sabhi yaade smaran ho chuki thi..vo bhi mujhse lipat gayi thi….payal didi 5th janam ke bare me janna chahti thi lekin maine unko ye kah diya ki uss kitab ko raat me ghar jane ke baad padh lena.

Main kuch der tak uss samadhi sthal ko hi dekhta raha …uske baad phir se hum ussi murti vale kamre me aa gaye achanak meri nazar khidki par lage shisha ki oor chali gayi jisme mujhe kuch dikhayi dene laga usko dekhte hi main thoda serious ho gaya.

Payal—kya baat hai raj…? Tum kuch chintit lag rahe ho…..?

Raj—nahi aisa kuch nahi hai…mera khyal hai ki ab hame ghar chalna chahiye.

Neha—hmmmm…vaise bhi yaha ka tilism to ab toot hi gaya hai.

Raj—abhi tilism poori tarah se nahi toota hai….kuch bhag abhi bhi baki hai…haa ab ye qila shapit jarur nahi hai

Paridhi—to kya hum ab yaha se bahar ja sakte hain.... ?

Raj—hmmmm....ye qila shapit isliye tha kyon ki ye murti khandit dasha me thi jab ki ye maa mahakali ki jeevant pratima hai.

Rajlaxmi—to phir mera kya hoga saajan.... ?

Raj—tumhe kuch samay aur intazar karna hoga….main bahut jald vapis aunga….abhi iss qile se judi bahut si mahatvapurna jankariya hasil karni hain mujhe.

Rajlaxmi—theek hai….jaha itne saal intazar kiya hai vahi kuch din aur sahi lekin din ko saal mat banne dena..saajan

Raj—maine kaha na ki jaldi hi aunga.....vaise bhi abhi kisi se purana hisab kitab chukta karna baki jo hai…. Aur phir yaha ki maharani se kiya hua vada bhi to abhi poora karna hai….aana to padega hi mujhe.

Payal—lekin hum yaha se bahar niklenge kaise….?

Raj—iss khidki se….jaise andar aaye the vaise hi….?

Neha—hum kisi darwaje se bhi to bahar ja sakte hain…? Phir khidki hi kyo…?

Divya—kyon ki abhi raj sabha se juda tilism tootna baki hai…vo paheli hal ho jane se hum yaha se bahar ja sakte hain ab aur shayad black hole se bhi.

Raj—hmmmm…sahi hai…chalo ab

Maine uss khidki me lage shisha ko nikal diya aur sab ko uske jariye bahar kar ke vo talwar vapis nikal li aur khidki se bahar kood gaya jaldi se…..sabne palat ke dekha to vo shisha phir se khidki me fit ho chuka tha.

Payal (shocked)—ye shishe ka kya tilism hai….? Ye kyo bar bar apne aap hi fit ho jata hai nikal ke door rakh dene ke baad bhi….? Aur isme se jo maine dekha tha vo sab kya rahasya hai…?

Raj—ye shisha trikal darshi hai.....agar isme bahar se andar dekhoge to bhoot kaal (past) dikhayi dega aur agar andar se bahar ki taraf dekhoge to bhavishya kaal me hone wali ghatnaye dikhengi isme se.

Payal (shocked)—to iska matlab ye hua ki maine shaam ko jo kuch bhi dekha tha vo sab yaha pahle hi ghatit ho chuka tha... ?

Raj--hmmmmm

Neha—lekin mujhe to kuch bhi nahi dikha ek baar bhi..jabki maine bhi to kayi baar uski taraf dekha tha... ?

Raj—ye shisha usko hi kuch dikhata hai jo ki yog sadhna karta ho aur jisne kundalini jagrit ki ho...

Payal—lekin maine to kabhi koi yog sadhna nahi ki to phir ye mujhe kyo dikha…?

Raj—aap ne nahi ki to kya hua par pari ne to ki hai….aur ye shisha kabhi tootega nahi chahe iske upar train bhi chadha do tab bhi nahi tootega.

Paridhi—ye talwar tumne kyo nikal li phir se..isse to vo murti phir khandit ho jayegi….?

Raj—ye talwar maine isliye nikal li kyon ki jisse koi na to andar ja sake aur na hi andar se koi bahar aa sake… bina iss talwar ke qile me koi nahi ja sakta aur na bahar aa sakta hai.

Maine sab ko ek sath ghere me le kar teleport ho gaya aur sidha hospital pahuch gaya…shishe me mujhe veer ka hi accident dikhayi diya tha…jiske karan mujhe qile ka kaam adhura chhod kar beech me hi aana pada.

Mujhe hospital me dekh kar sab chounk gaye…aur sath me paridhi ko sahi salamat dekh kar unki hairani aur bhi badh gayi…maine ek nazar maa ki oor dekha jo ki so gayi thi shayad unko need ka injection diya gaya tha.

Ruchi (mujhe dekh bhagte huye)—betuuu…tu aa gaya…..

Sab bhag kar mujhse lipat gaye….ruchi didi sabse adhik ro rahi thi…maine unko apni baho me samet kar samjhaya tab vo chup huyi….vahi mujhe dekh kar chanchal bhi kuch khush huyi lekin agle hi pal vo phir se udas ho gayi.

Ruchi (rote huye)—betuu...vo..veerrr

Raj—didi…main aa gaya hu..na…kuch nahi hoga veer ko….main hu na….mere jane ke baad kya hua yaha…? Maaki ye halat kyo hai…?

Maine bari bari se sab ko samjhaya….kisi ne kuch bhi nahi bataya ki mere jane ke baad kya hua….? Veer ki halat dekh kar meri bhi ankhe dabdaba uthi….Mujhe mrinal dikhi to main uske samne baith gaya.

Raj (nam ankhe)—tum nahi janti mrinal..ki tumne aaj mere upar kitna bada upkar kiya hai….veer sirf mera dost hi nahi..vo mera bhai…nahii…bhai se badhkar hai…vo meri saans hai….veer mera gurur, mera abhiman hai vo…usko bacha kar aaj tumne apne karz ke bojh se daba diya mujhe….

Vidhya (gusse me jor se)—band karrr apni ye bakwas…..aaj teri hi vajah se mere bete ki ye halat hai….na jane kitno ko kha kar tu marega….bachpan me tere seene me itne khanjar maare maine phir bhi tu bach gaya…..mere bete ki halat ka jimmedar tu aur teri ye maa hai…..tum dono ke dono hi manhoos ho…. dhyan rakhna…agar mere veer ko kuch bhi hua to main teri jaan le lungiiii.

Aur yahi vidhya ne gusse me aa kar bahut hi jyada badi galti kar di…….uski iss teekhi baat se mere paas me hi khade kisi shakhs ke rom rom me gusse ki lahar doud gayi.. jin ankho me abhi kuch der pahle pani tha …ab unme prachand kroadh ki jwala dahak uthi…..hath pair aur naak sab gusse se kaampne lage aur ankho me chingariya nikalne lagi.
 

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5th Janam Ki Love Story Continues….

Vrihadpur rajya ke niwasi din bhar ke raag-rang, nritya-sangeet aur aamod-pramod se thak kar apne gharo me gahri need so chuke the....vrihadpur ke vishal durg me bhi gahri khamoshi aur khumari chha gayi thi, jise kabhi kabhi pahredaro ke kadmo ki aahte rah rah kar bhang kar deti thi.

Aaj se theek ek din baad vrihadpur ke maharaja shailendra singh apne ekloute putra rajkumar Jitendra Singh ko yuvraj ke pad par aasin karne wale the....isliye pichhle ek saptah se vrihadpur ke raj mahal aur rajdhani hi nahi balki poora rajya tarah tarah ke utsavo aur samaroho me sarobar tha.

Agle din ki subah vrihadpur ke liye bahut khas thi….kafi samay ke intazar ke pashchat unhe ek yuvraj milne wala hai unhe aaj ke din.

Vrihadpur ek vishal rajya hai…..bahut door door tak uss rajya ki seemaye phaili huyi thi….rajya ki vishal sena thi… maharaj shailendra singh ek dharma parayan aur praja vatsal raja hain…..maharani deepmala unke har dharmik aur rajnayik karyo me barabar ka sahyog pradan karti thi.

Har taraf khush hali aur khushi ka vatavaran tha….agar kuch dukh tha to sirf itna ki dono itni umra gujar jane ke baad bhi santaan heen the….rajya ke varis ko le kar dono hamesha chinta me doobe rahte the…ki akhir unke baad kya hoga iss rajya ka…..?

Vaise maharaj ke do bhai aur bhi the….ek unse bade Tyagi singh…aur ek chhote Khardusan singh…..tyagi singh ko rajpaat me koi dilchaspi nahi thi….isliye shailendra singh pahle yuvraj aur baad me maharaj bane.

Tyagi singh to vivah bhi karne ke paksh me nahi the tathapi parivar jano ke samjhane ke baad badi mushkil se shadi ke liye raji huye…kintu shadi ke do varsh baad hi vo chupke se apni patni gomti aur ek varsh ki putri vinita ko chhod kar kahi chale gaye…uske baad unka aaj tak kuch pata nahi chal saka….unke jane ke baad shailendra aur deepmala ne hi vinita aur gomti ki jimmedari le li.

Jabki maharaj ke chhote bhai khardusan singh ka swabhav apne bade bhai ke bilkul vipreet tha….vo aur uski patni bulbul dono ke mann me bas yahi ek ichcha thi ki maharaj aur maharani ko koi santaan na ho aur unka bada putra Vishraj singh ko vo apna yuvraj ghosit kar de.

Vaise dono ki do aulad aur bhi thi..ek ladka..Buddhi singh, jiska kewal naam hi buddhi tha baki uska sir bina buddhi ka hi tha…..dusri ladki thi…Rati.

Vishraj aur rati dono hi apne mata pita par gaye the….lalch aur ghamand unke andar koot koot kar bhara hua tha…vishraj to apne naam ki tarah hi vish se bhara tha….sharab aur shabab ka behad shoukin tha….halanki veerta me vo kisi se kam nahi tha.

Rati ko apni sundarta ka ghamand tha….yaha tak ki vo apni chacheri bahan vinita ko bhi heen bhavna se dekhti thi.. jaise jaise vo badi hoti gayi, uski sundarta aur ghamand ek samaan anupat me badhte gaye.

Khair, aaj raaj mahal ko kisi dulhan ki tarah sajaya gaya tha….subah hote hi maharani deepmala bistar se uth kar sabse pahle apne hone wale yuvraj putra Jitu ke kaksh me gayi jaha vo abhi gahri need ki baaho me leta hua tha.

Paas pahuch kar deepmala ne jitu ke sirahne baith kar pahle to kuch der tak to uske mukh mandal ko hi dekhti rahi, phir mushkurate huye uske sir ke baalo me hath pherne lagi aur jhuk kar uske mathe ko chum liya….uske baad apni ankho me lage kajal ko ek ungli me laga kar jitu ke sir me kala tika laga kar ek baar aur chum ke vaha se chali gayi.

Ye unka prati din ka kaam tha…subah uthne ke baad vo jitu ke kamre me ja kar usko jee bhar dekhti thi aur phir apni ankho ke kajal se uske mathe par ek kala tika laga kar vapis lout jati thi…jisse usko kisi ki nazar na lage…din ki shuruwat se hi….vaise ye Jitu naam bhi unka hi diya hua tha….Beshak uska naam Jitendra Kumar Singh tha lekin deep mala ke liye vo Jitu hi tha….bina uska chehra dekhe vo dusra koi kaam karti hi nahi thi….aur na hi kisi ko uske kamre me khud se pahle kisi ko jane hi deti thi…yaha tak ki maharaj ko bhi nahi.

Maharani ke jane ke kuch der baad jitu ki ankh khuli to uth kar sabse pahle samne lage darpan me khud ko dekha aur phir mushkurate huye niche utar kar jaha maharani ne apne pair jamin par rakhe the, uss jagah ko dono hath jod kar pranam kiya aur apna sir uss jagah par rakh diya…..aur phir se ja kar bistar me let gaya.

Idhar deepmala dainik kriya se nivritt hone ke baad phir se uske kamre me aayi aur usko jagane lagi…need se uthne ka natak karte huye jitu bhi apni maa ki god me sir rakh diya.

Deepmala (sir sahlate huye)—ab uth bhi jao beta….aaj tumhe yuvraj banna hai…bahar sabhi tumhara intazar kar rahe hain…. Itni der tak sona ek yuvraj ko shobha nahi deta hai.

Jitu (god me sir rakhe huye)—yuvraj ko shobha deta ho ya na deta ho……lekin ek bete ko to apni maa ki god me sir rakh ke sone ka haq hai na…..?

Deepmala—bilkul hai….lekin vo beta iss rajya ka yuvraj bhi to hai….aur uss par praja ka adhikar ek maa se kahi jyada hota hai.

Jitu—main to kuch nahi janta…main aise hi rahunga…..agar yuvraj ka pad mujhe maa ki god ki kimat par mil raha hai to mujhe nahi banna koi yuvraj.

Deepmala—ek maa ki god to hamesha hi apni santaan ke liye hi hoti hai….uss par sirf aur sirf uska hi haq hota hai. Ye adhikar to ek maa se swayam bhagwan bhi nahi cheen sakte…..ab chal uth ja jaldi se….maharaj tumhara intazar rahe hain….jaldi se naha dhokar bhagwan ke charno me pranam kar ke unka ashirwad le le.

Jitu—maa…apko pata hai na ki main srasti ke kisi bhagwan ko nahi manta…..mera bhagwan to sirf meri maa hai..ha maa mere liye bhagwan shiv bhi aap ho, vishnu aur brahma ji bhi aap hi ho…aap hi mere liye mahakali, mahalaxmi aur maha saraswati ho….aap ke inn charno me hi mujhe inn sabhi ke darshan ho jate hain….phir main kisi aur bhagwan ki aaradhna kyo karu….? Aap ka ashirwad milne ke baad mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise ki inn sabhi ne bhi mujhe ashirwad pradan kar diya ho.

Deepmala (has kar)—achcha baba..teri jo marzi aaye vo kar…..par pahle ja kar taiyar to ho ja.

Jitu—theek hai maa….agar aap kahti hain to uth jata hu…..aur haa…vo rajsabha me aap bhi mere sath me chalna… warna main akele nahi jaunga vaha.

Deepmala—he bhagwan…ye ladka bhi na…jane kab bada hoga……kya zindagi bhar main hi tere sath chalti rahungi har jagah…..? yuvraj bante hi ab jaldi hi teri shadi kar dungi to apni patni ko sath lekar jana har jagah.

Jitu (naraz ho kar)—jao…mujhe nahi banna yuvraj…main chala sone.

Deepmala (haste huye)—achcha baba….mujhe maaf kar de…main chalungi rajsabha me tere sath….ab chal natak band kar ye.

Jitu (uth kar)—to pahle kyo mana kar diya aap ne….?….

Deepmala—ab to haan…kah di na…..ja jaldi se naha le ab

Jitu—lekin main pahnuga kya.... ?

Deepmala—tu ja kar naha to....main tab tak tere kapde nikalti hu.

Jitu—phir theek hai

"Kya baate ho rahi hain maharani...dono maa bete me itni der se.... ? akhir kuch hame bhi to pata chale., aur ye rajkumar abhi tak taiyar huye ki nahi... ?." maharaj shailendra singh ne kamre me pravesh karte huye kaha.

Deepmala—apko matlab..... ? ye hum dono maa bete ke beech ki baat hai....vo nahane gaya hai.

Shailendra—arey bhai…! Akhir hum bhi to uske pita hain…hame bhi to janne ka adhikar hai.

Deepmala—yahi to baat hai ki aap uske pita hone ke sath sath ek raja bhi hain…..lekin maa apne putra ke liye har paristhiti me sirf maa hi hoti hai.

Shailendra—achcha maharani aap jiti aur main hara….rajkumar ko taiyar kar ke rajsabha me bhej dijiyega…main chalta hu….(dhire se)—ajib baat hai….iss rajya ka raja ho kar bhi mujhe mahal ke andar darr ke rahna padta hai…kya sab ki patniya aisi hi hoti hogi….?

Kuch der baad rajkumar taiyar ho kar maharani deepmala ke sath pooja ghar me chale gaye jaha maharani ankhe band kar ke bhagwan se apne putra ke liye prarthana karne lagi to vahi jitu ne vo phool deepmala ke pairo me rakh ke dono hath jod liye bhagwan par chadhane ki jagah.

"Twamev Mata Cha Pita Twamev, Twamev Cha Bandhu Cha Sakha Twamev...
Twamev Vidhya Cha Dravidam Twamev, Twamev Sarvam Mam Dev Dev..."

Deepmala ko ye dekh kar uss par bahut pyar umad aaya aur usne sir chum ke vahi apni ankho ke kajal ka kala tika uske mathe par laga diya aur sabha ki oor chal pade.

Sath me gomti aur vinita bhi unke sath ho liye…jitu ne unn dono ke bhi pair chhuye…..vahi dusri taraf….khardusan kisi se dhire dhire baate kar raha tha.

Khardusan (dhire se)—ab ki baar ye kaam ho hi jana chahiye…..apne sapno ko main aise hi matiyamet hone nahi dunga….

 

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Awsome bhai , bariya , ek maa or bete ke bich prem ko kitne bariya tarike se dikhaya ap ne .... maa hoti hi aysi hai ....


Bhai ek baat samajh mai nahi aya agar raja sailendra singh and deepmala Santan heen thai toh jitendra singh kon hai ?
 

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Vidhya (gusse me jor se)—band karrr apni ye bakwas…..aaj teri hi vajah se mere bete ki ye halat hai….na jane kitno ko kha kar tu marega….bachpan me tere seene me itne khanjar maare maine phir bhi tu bach gaya…..mere bete ki halat ka jimmedar tu aur teri ye maa hai…..tum dono ke dono hi manhoos ho….dhyan rakhna…agar mere veer ko kuch bhi hua to main teri jaan le lungiiii.

Aur yahi vidhya ne gusse me aa kar bahut hi jyada badi galti kar di…….uski iss teekhi baat se mere paas me hi khade kisi shakhs ke rom rom me gusse ki lahar doud gayi.. jin ankho me abhi kuch der pahle pani tha …ab unme prachand kroadh ki jwala dahak uthi…..hath pair aur naak sab gusse se kaampne lage aur ankho me chingariya nikalne lagi.

Aur phir tabhi tadaaakkkkk……tadaaakkkkk…..thappad ki goonj poore hospital me prati dwanit ho gayi….hum sab ka dhyan iss achanak thappad ki goonj ne apni oor khich liya…..ye sab itna jaldi hua ki kisi ko kuch samajhne ka mouka hi nahi mil paya….kab payal didi mere bagal se bijli ki furti se vidhya ke pahuchi aur tadatad jaldi jaldi anginat thappad unke gaalo par rasid kar diye.

Payal (rote huye gusse me)—to vo ajnabi shakhs tu thiii,,,jisne mere masoom raj ke seene me khanjar ghopa tha… tadaakkkk…..tujhe ek chote bachche ke rote huye masum chehre par jara bhi daya nahi aayi….tadaakkk….aur kya kaha tuneeee….? Tu mere rajjj ki jaan legi….? Tadaakkkk…..aaj ke baad tu jinda hi nahi rahegi…..rajj ki jaan legi…mere rajj ko maregiiii..hmnnnn…tadaakkkkkk

Meera (jor se)—rajjjj..rokoo payal kooo…nahii to vo aajjj sach me hi jaan se maar degiii

Raj (chillate huye)—payal didiii…nahiiii…chhod dooo…unkoooo

Hum sab jaldi se bhage payal didi ko pakadne ke liye…tab tak unhone vidhya ke baal pakad ke cabin me lage kaanch par jor se uska sir de mara….shisha toot kar bikhar gaya…kaanch ke kuch tukde vidhya aur payal ke jism me bhi ghus gaye jaha se khoon bahne laga.

Sabse pahle nani jo ki vidhya ke adhik nazdik khadi thi….jaldi se payal ko rokne ki koshish ki to didi ne gusse me unko jor se unko laat se dhakka de diya..jisse vo door ja giri….maine turant piche se ja kar unko khich liya apni taraf aur baki logo ne vidhya aur nani ko sambhala.

Payal (chhutne ki koshish karte huye)—mujhee chhod….main kutiyaa ko jaan se maar dungiii…usne tujhe mara…

“Agar aap iss tarah se yaha shor aur jhagda karenge to hum mariz ka ilaz nahi kar payenge.” Operation theatre se ek doctor ne bahar aate huye kaha.

Raj—sorry doctor….ab kaisi tabiyat hai veer ki…..?

Doctor—dekhiye..abhi hum kuch kah nahi sakte….operation abhi chal raha hai…halat behad nazuk hai kyon ki unke sir me gambhir chote aayi hain.

Raj—ok..doctor..

Doctor andar chala gaya….maine vidhya aur nani ko treatment ke liye kajal bua ko doctor ke paas le jane ko kaha….tabhi mujhe vaha khade dekh himmat kar ke chanchal darte darte meri taraf aane lagi….lekin uss par bhi payal didi ki nazar pad hi gayi….unka gussa phir bhadak gaya.

Payal (gusse me)—ohhhh…to tu bhiiii aa gayii yahaa….? Lagta hai ki sabne mil ke ek sath phir mere raj ko maarne ki planning ki haiii….? Aa ja…tujhe bhi batati hu aaj….rajjj tuu chhoddd mujheeee...sunaa nahiii tuneee.... ?

Payal meri pakad se nikalne ke liye kasmasane lagi......payal ki teekhi baate sunte hi uske kadam vahi ruk gaye aur uski ankho me pani aa gaya....vo mud kar jane lagi...jo ki mujhe achcha nahi laga.

Raj (thoda jor se)—ruk jaooo….vapis aao idhar……main hu na yaha par….kuch nahi hoga.

Payal (gusse me)—haan…haan…aa ja ab teri hi chatni banaungi.

Raj (jor se)—payal didiii……ye mat bhuliye ki usko maine hi bulaya hai……vo koi gair nahi haii balki aap ki apni sagi badi bahan hai…samajh gayi aap……aaj se vo bhi hamare sath hi rahengi…..that’s ok…..sab ko samajh aaya.

Payal (shocked)—kyaaaaaa……?

Neha (shocked)—whattttt…..sagi bahan…..par….?

Chanchal bhag kar mere paas aa gayi aur mujhse lipat ke joro se rone lagi….maine usko bhi kisi tarah se shant kiya… phir maine unko sari baat batayi chanchal ke bare me….tab kahi payal didi ka gussa kuch halka hua lekin thanda nahi.

Main unko lekar doctorke paas le gaya aur unka bhi treatment karwaya….unke jism se kaanch ke tukde alag karwaye.. halanki main chahta to apni shaktiyo se bhi unko aur veer ko theek kar sakta tha lekin vyaktigat hito ke liye inn shaktiyo ka prayog karna mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi tha…jab tak ki behad jaruri na ho jaye.

Lagbhag paanch ghante chale operation ke baad akhir doctor aur saloni nikal ke bahar aaye….jisko ki maine yaha aate hi andar operation theatre me veer ke ilaz ke liye bhej diya tha….sab apne apne sawal usse karne lage…akhir me maine sab ko shant rahne ko kaha.

Doctor—dekhiye operation to hamne kar diya hai….aur vo kamyab bhi ho gaya hai upar wale ki daya se….saloni ji ne hamari kafi pareshaniya solve ki…..lekin operation kitna kamyab hua hai ye unke hosh me aane ke baad hi pata chal payega….jab tak unko hosh nahi aa jata tab tak vo khatre se bahar nahi hain.

Raj—veer ko kab tak hosh aa jayega doctor……?

Saloni—sir me chot gahri hai aur medicines ka bhi asar rahega veer ki body me….to kal subah se pahle uska hosh me aana sambhav nahi hai…..aap sab log ghar jaiye…kal subah aa jana….yaha main hu…chinta karne ki koi baat nahi hai. Agar koi problem huyi to main raj ko call kar lungi.

Magar tabhi vidhya ne veer ko abhi bhi khatre me sun kar gusse me apna aapa khote huye usne vo galti kar di jo usko nahi karni chahiye thi….iss ghatna se kuch logo ke dil me gusse ka jwalamukhi ubal utha.

Vidhya (gusse me)—chattaakkkk….veer ka accident karwane ke baad agar tu ye sochta hai ki tu bach jayega to teri bhool hai…..main tujhe jinda nahi rahne dungiii

Payal (jor se)—kutiyaaaaaaa…tuneee mereeeerajjjj parrr hathhh uthayaaaaa…….chhod do mujheeee

Avni—mummyyyyyyy

Ruchi—vidhyaaaaaaaa

Sandhya—vidhyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Divya--vidhyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Maine payal didi ko apne se chipka rakha tha…..jisse vo kewal gusse se tadap kar rah gayi….vidhya ke iss thappad se sab stabdh rah gaye…mere prati uske dil me itni nafrat dekh kar.

Tab tak maa ko bhi hosh aa gaya tha…..unhe koi aur dukh na pahuche isliye maine kajal bua ko nani aur vidhya ko turant ghar le jane ko kaha…..vidhya ghar jane ka naam sunte hi ek baar phir se uske dil me yamraj ka vahi darr aur khauf havi ho gaya…usne ghar jane se mana kar diya…lekin phir badi mushkil se sab ke sath jane ko razi huyi…halanki usne ghar jane se darne ki koi vajah kisi ko nahi batayi.

Vo vaha se mujhe gusse me ghurte huye sab ke sath chali gayi aur main baki logo ke sath maa ke paas aa gaya mujhe aur paridhi ko sahi salamat dekh kar vo bahut khush huyi aur hum dono ko gale se laga liya.

Lekin agle hi pal sab kuch yaad aate hi unki ankhe chhalak aayi….mere piche chanchal bhi chupchap khadi thi…vo bechari kuch bolne ki himmat bhi nahi juta pa rahi thi.

Raj—maa inko bhi maaf kar do….jo kuch hua vo sab karne me inki umra ki nadani thi….meri khatir hi sahi maaf kar do.

Meri baat sunte hi maa ke sabra ka baandh toot gaya….ek maa ki mamta bhala apni aulad se kab tak roothi rah sakti hai…..aur unhone chanchal ke liye apni baahe phaila di.

Ye dekh kar to jaise chanchal ko sab kuch mil gaya….vo jor se doudte huye maa se chipak gayi aur phoot phoot ke rone lagi…maine unn dono ko rone diya…jisse dono ka mann kuch halka ho jaye.

Raj—maa…ab se ye bhi hamare sath rahengi.

Mamta (rote huye)—hmmmm…..aaj se meri beti mere sath hi rahegi…..lekin ab hum yaha nahi rahenge…..sab kuch chhod kar yaha se bahut door chale jayenge….main ab apne bachcho ki zindagi ke sath kisi ko khelne nahi dungi.

Raj—theek hai maa…jaisa aap kaho…..veer ke theek hote hi hum kahi aur chale jayenge.

Saloni—well..raj ab tum aa gaye ho to inki tabiyat me bhi sudhar aa jayega…agar tum chaho to inko ghar le ja sakte ho.

Raj—thanks doctor…kya main ek baar veer ko dekh sakta hu….?

Saloni—ok

Veer ko check karne ke baad main cabin se bahar aa gaya….tab tak maa ka discharge paper saloni ne ready karwa diya tha to main maa ko baki logo ke sath le kar ghar lout aaya.

Dinner maine order kar ke sabhi ke liye manga liya…..aaj huye ghatna kram se sabhi dukhi the….isliye chupchap kha kar apne room me sone chale gaye…vidhya ka khana maine uske room me hi bhijwa diya.

Maine aur ruchi didi ne maa ko khana khila kar medicines khilayi…..medicines ke asar se vo bhi jaldi hi so gayi to main divya aur mrinal se kuch der baat karne ke baad apne room me aa gaya….jaha payal didi ankhe band kiye chupchap padi thi.

Raj—didi…so gayi kya…..?

Payal—(no response)

Payal didi ko koi jawab na dete dekh main bhi unko apni baho me chipka ke so gaya…..baki log bhi so chuke the kintu kuch logo ki ankho me need ka koi namo nishan tak nahi tha…..unki ankho me abhi bhi gusse ka jwalamukhi ubal raha tha.

Mere sote hi payal didi ne apni ankhe khol di…..unki ankho se abhi bhi anshu tapak rahe the aur ankhe gusse se tamtama rahi thi…unhone chupchap bed ke niche se meri vahi dairy nikal kar padhne lagi jisme mujhe khanjar se mara gaya tha.

“Payal didiiii….ye log mujhe mujhe maar denge…aaaaaaaahh…payal didiiii…agar meri payal didi yaha hoti to vo kisi ko mujhe maarne nahi deti…..mujhe bachaaaa looooooo…aaaaaaaa..didiiiii aur uss anjan shakhs ne uss masum ke seene me jaldi jaldi 10-12 baar khanjar se gahrayi tak vaar kiya aur usko khayii me dhakka de diya”

Iske aage usne padhna band kar diya aur diary ko band kar ke phir se bed ke niche chhupa diya….ab tak unki ankhe gusse se ekdam lal ho chuki thi.

Payal didi ne ek baar mujhe check kiya aur phir dhire se bed ke niche hath daal ke apni kulhadi nikal kar chupchap kamre se bahar nikal ke darwaja band kar diya aur ek kamre ki taraf badh gayi.

Ab Mujhse Tujhe Koun Bachayega.....?

Agle hi pal haweli me kuch dardnak jordar cheekhe goonj uthi jisne poori haweli ko hila kar rakh diya……….

 
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