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Bahut hi jabardast update diya he bhai. To adha tilasam tut gya ab to sirf minakshi ko hi chudana baki reh gya. Bhadiya he. Payal di to fir se suru ho gayi.
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Maine dekha ki uss murti ke baki sabhi saat hatho me koi na koi hathiyar avashya tha sirf ek hath aisa tha jo ki bilkul khali tha…lekin uss hath ki ungliya mudi huyi thi.

Raj (mann me)—ye murti khandit kyo hai….? Baki sabhi hatho me kuch na kuch hathiyar hain to ye khali kyo hai…? Koun sa hathiyar hona chahiye iss hath me…..? chakra bhi hai, trishul, gada, dhanush, chabuk, khopdi, khappar, ye sabhi hain…..haan talwar nahi hai……

Maine turant uss talwar ko yaad kiya aur agle hi pal vo mere hatho me aa gayi…..maine mata rani ko pranam kar ke vo talwar unke uss khali hath me pakda di……aur phir tabhi….

Ab aage…….

Murti ke khali hath me talwar pakdate hi vo talwar roshni se chamakne lagi….uski chamak samne khidki me lage shishe par padne lagi aur paravartit hone lagi shishe me takrane ke baad……(theek vaise hi jaise ki surya ki roshni me agar kisi kaanch ko rakh diya jaye to vo bhi roshni bikherne lagta hai) ….shishe me se roshni ke paravartit hote hi murti apni jagah se ghumne lagi.

Murti ke ghumte hi mujhe mata rani ke pairo ke paas jo jagah murti hatne se khali huyi vaha par kuch nazar aaya… maine paas ja kar dekha to vaha se kisi tahkhane ka rasta dikhayi diya…..maine uth kar ek nazar uss khidki me lage shishe aur phir uss murti ki taraf dekha…aur talwar ko nikal liya murti ke hath se.

Talwar nikalte hi jaise uss shishe ki roshni uss jagah par padni band huyi vaise hi vo murti ghum kar phir se pahle jaisi position me aa gayi aur vo tahkhane ka rasta murti ke pairo ke niche band ho gaya.

Maine ek bar phir se talwar murti ke hatho me thama di aur phir vaise hi hua jaise pahle hua tha….main jyada der na karte huye uss tahkhane me andar ghus gaya….andar jate hi mujhe ek button dikhi jise press karte hi murti phir se ghum kar yathavat avastha me aa gayi aur tahkhane ka dwar band ho gaya.

Andar bahut andhera tha lekin mujhe vaha dekhne me koi pareshani pesh nahi ho rahi thi….niche utarne ke liye sidhiya bani huyi thi….main unke sahare niche utarta chala gaya.

Jaise hi main jamin par pahucha to vaha par mujhe ek surang nazar aayi….main uske andar ghus gaya….mujhe ab tak koi nahi mila tha….shayad tahkhana band hone ki vajah se yaha koi aa hi nahi paya, kyon ki tahkhane ko kholne ki chabi matlab vo talwar kisi ke hath lagi hi nahi thi.

Khair maine inn vicharo ko tyag kar nirantar uss surang ke andar badhta chala gaya….na jane kitni der chalne ke baad mujhe vaha do raste nazar aaye…kuch pal ruk kar main yahi sochta raha ki pahle koun se raste par jau…kya pata koun sa rasta kitna lamba hai….?

Phir mann me nirnay kar ke ek raste me chal pada…..kuch door jane par hi mujhe ek kamra mila…..maine usko kholne ki koshish ki lekin vo nahi khula…..akhir me maine usko tod diya.

Lekin jaise hi kamre ke andar kadam rakha to vaise hi kisi ne mujhe lapet liya……maine dekha to ye ek vishal paanch fano wala naag tha, jisne darwaje ke andar aate hi mujh par hamla kar diya tha….main lagatar khud ko uske changul se chhudane ki koshish me laga hua tha aur vo dhire dhire apna muh philata ja raha tha mujhe dasne ke liye.

Usne jaise hi jor se fufkar marte huye mere sir me hamla kiya to maine apne sir ko tirchha kar liya….isliye uska vaar khali gaya…lekin vo gussa ho kar apne paancho muh se hamla karne laga…mere hath pair usne jakad rakhe the jiski vajah se main kewal apna sir hilane ke siwa kuch bhi nahi kar pa raha tha.

Magar sir bhi kab tak idhar udhar karta jabi vo jaldi jaldi apne sabhi fano se lagatar hamle kar raha tha….lihaja maine apni ankhe band kar li aur shant ho kar sidha khada ho gaya….vo lagatar hamle karta raha par ab uske vaar ka mujh par koi asar nahi ho raha tha….dhire dhire mera sharir badhne aur phailne laga jisse uski pakad dheeli hoti gayi. Aur phir mere jism se aag ki lapte nikalne lagi.

Aag ki lapte jaise hi mere jism se nikalna shuru huyi to vo jaldi se mujhe chhod kar door ho gaya lekin ye aag itni tez ho chuki thi ki uski lapte poore kamre me har kone tak ja rahi thi...vo iss aag me jhulasne laga aur bachne ke liye idhar udhar bhagne laga kintu ab uske yaha se bhagne ka koi marg shesh nahi tha kyon ki darwaje ke paas to main hi khada hua tha.....antatah vo iss aag me jal kar bhasm ho gaya aur uske jalte hi ek roshni uske andar se nikal kar mere jism me sama gayi aur vo jalkar rakh ka dher ban gaya.

Uske bhasm hote hi maine apne sharir ko normal kar liya.....ab vo kamra anekanek ratnabhusno se prakashit ho raha tha....akoot khazana bhara pada tha uss kamre me.....heere, jawahraat, sona, chandi, mani, manikya aur bhi na jane kitne hi prakar ke ratna aur abhusan ka bhandar laga hua tha.

Maine ek bar phir se ankhe band kar ke apna ek hath aage kiya to mere hath se roshni nikalne lagi jo uss khazane ke upar ja kar padne lagi aur phir vapis mere hatho me sama gayi.....ab vaha koi bhi khazana nahi tha...maine usko apne andar samahit kar liya tha.

Ab mera uss kamre ka kaam khatam ho chuka tha to vapis vaha se lout kar dusri surang me ghus gaya.....kafi door tak jane ke baad vaha mujhe ek darwaja nazar aaya...jo mere hath lagate hu khul gaya....lekin uske andar mujhe kuch nahi dikha to main vapis loutne ke liye palta hi tha ki tabhi meri nazar kisi aisi cheez par padi ki main bhi dekh kar chounk gaya.

Maine uske karib ja kar dhyan se dekha to vo ek bahut chota locket tha….shayad dhool mitti me vo daba hua tha lekin mera pair padne se uske upar ki parat hat gayi hogi jisse vo thoda thoda chamakne laga tha…bilkul jugnu ki tarah.

Maine usko hath me utha liya aur jab khola to dang rah gaya....kuch der tak main vaha vaise hi ankhe band kiye khada raha aur phir vapis lout aaya...surang se bahar nikal maine tahkhane me hi lage deewar me se ek jagah ke patthar ko khiskaya to vaha ek khidki dikhne lagi...maine uske andar ghus kar uss khidki ko band kar diya.

Idhar saloni ne jaise hi uss laash ko door phenka to vo bhayanak ladki phir se saloni ke samne aa gayi aur kuch budbudane lagi...magar isse pahle hi saloni ne ek maha pret ko uske upar chhod diya jisne uss ladki ko utha kar patak diya...apne samne maha pret ko dekh kar vo bhayanak ladki adrishya ho gayi...uske adrishya hote hi maha pret bhi gayab ho gaya.

Lekin agle hi pal vo ladki phir se aa gayi, shayad uska mantra poora ho chuka tha aur agle hi kshan ek maha pishash ne saloni ko piche se aa kar daboch liya..saloni uski pakad se bebas ho chuki thi..vo pishach uska bhakshan karne hi wala tha ki tabhi ek thappad uske gaalo par jor se pada aur vo udte huye deewar se ja takraya...saloni aur uss ladki ne chounk kar udhar dekha to vaha mujhe khade huye paya.

Vo ladki—oohhhh..tummm...lekin tummm jindaa kaisee hoo sakte ho.... ? aur yaha tak pahuche kaise... ?

Raj—mujhse bhidne se pahle mere baare me jaan lete to achcha hota.....koi baat nahiii, ab achche se jaan jaogee

Saloni—rajjjjj tumm aa gaye...shukra hai.

Ladki (gusse me)—achcha hua ki tum khud hi yaha aa gaye....ab tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta.

Raj—theek hai...lekin jara jaldi karna..mere paas time nahi haai teri inn bakwash baato ke liye...isliye tere paas jitni bhi shaktiya hain unhe ek baar me hi jagrit kar le.....main tujhse vada karta hu, jab tak tu vaar karte karte thak nahi jayegi main tujh par koi vaar nahi karunga..aur jab karunga to kewal ek hi vaar karunga dusra nahi.

Ladki (jor se)—maha pishach utho...apne lakshya ko poora karo...jao..khatam kar do usko

Raj—vo ab kabhi nahi uthega...pret yoni se mukt ho gaya hai vo ab..kewal haddiyo ka dhancha bacha hai...kisi aur ko bula jo isse bhi jyada taqatwar ho.

Ladki—ab dekh tu tera kya haal karti hu main...

Agle hi pal usne ek brahma rakshash ka smaran kiya aur vo kuch hi der hi attahas karta hua vaha prakat ho gaya.. usne usko meri taraf jane ka ishara kar diya...vo ishara milte hi tezi se meri oor aaya aur phir beech raste se hi jitni tezi se aaya tha uski double tezi se vapis lout kar gayab ho gaya....ye dekh kar vo hairan rah gayi ki aisa kaise ho sakta hai kyon ki kisi brahma rakshash ko siddh karna aur usko harana bahut badi baat hai.

Uske paas jitni bhi shaktiya thi lagbhag sabhi ka usne aahvahan kar liya lekin koi kuch nahi kar saka...bhoot, pret, chudail, dakini, shakini, betal, pishach, maha pret, mashan, brahma betal.aadi.....aadhe se jyada se mujhe dekhte hi vapis bhag gaye aur jo paas aaye vo mere thappad ki maar kha kar uss yoni se mukt ho ke yamlok pahuch gaye.

Raj—bas ab tera kaam khatam.....ab vaar karne ki bari meri.

Ladki (ghabra kar)—kkk...koun ho tummm..... ? meri koi bhi shakti tumhe nuksan kyo nahi pahucha saki….? Mujhe maaf kar do... ?

Raj—maine tumhe pahle bhi kaha tha ki mere baare me jaan lete to achcha hota.....ab der ho chuki hai.

Saloni—saajannn…hum isse yaha ke bare me jankari hasil kar sakte hain.

Raj—koi jarurat nahi hai…….iska samay khatam hota hai ab.

Vo ladki (shocked)—kyaaaaaa…? Tummmm saaajjjjjaaann hoooo…..?

Aur maine apna hath aage kar diya aur agle hi pal mere hatho se aag nikalne lagi jisne uss ladki ko apne ghere me le liya aur phir uski dardnak cheekhe vaha goonjne lagi…..in cheekho ki awaz sun kar neha bhi hosh me aa gayi aur jaise hi usne uss aag ki roshni me mujhe dekha to uth kar turant mujhse chipak kar rone lagi.

Neha (rote huye)—rajjj…isne mujhe bahut mara….dekh khoon bhi bah raha hai.

Raj—koi baat nahi…ab vo khatam ho chuki hai….sab theek ho jayega.

Maine apna ek hath unke sir par rakh diya aur agle hi pal unka ghaav bharne laga tezi se aur kuch hi kshan me vo poori tarah se theek ho gayi.

Neha (hairan)—arey…ye itna jaldi kaise theek ho gaya….?

Raj—vo sab chhodo aur chalo yaha se ab

Saloni—lekin baki logo ko hum kaha talash karenge.... ?

Raj—chalo...mujhe pata hai vo kaha milenge.

Main dono ko sath lekar ussi kund ke paas aa gaya.....jaha mujhe kisi ki parchhayi dikhi thi....main vaha ek disha me chalne laga...dono mera hath pakad kar chal rahi thi..kuch door chalne ke baad hame kisi ke aane ki aahat sunayi di to main udhar mud gaya....tabhi mujhe dusri taraf se divya aati huyi dikhi...mere awaz dete hi vo bhag kar aayi aur mujhse amarbel ki tarah lipat gayi.

Divya (sisakte huye)—mujhe laga tha ki kahi phir se na kho du tumhe.... ? kya karu doodh ka jala chhachh ko bhi phoonk phoonk kar pita hai na.

Raj—tumhare rahte bhala mujhe koi maar sakta hai....chalo aao

Neha—payal aur paridhi jane kaha hongi.... ?

Raj—samne wale tahkhane me...chalo dono vahi milengi

Hum chalte huye samne ek chote se tahkhane jaise kamre me aa gaye…jaha dono ek kone me behosh padi thi…bandhi huyi….maine dono ko jaldi se khol kar seene se lagaya….mere seene se lagte hi dono ko hosh aa gaya..maine roshni phaila rakhi thi jisse vo turant mujhe dekhte hi chipak ke rone lagi..badi mushkil se dono ko samjha kar shant kiya maine.

Raj—tum dono yaha kaise….?

Payal (sisakte huye)—pata nahi kisi ne hame yaha la kar patak diya andhere me.....hamne ek bar yaha se bhagne ki koshish ki to kisi ne phir se hame ghasit kar baandh diya aur phir pata nahi kaise hum behosh ho gayi.

Raj (mann me)—ohhh..to inn dono ki parchhayi dikhi thi mujhe uss kund se upar aate samay.

Raj—khair ab main aa gaya hu...chinta ki koi baat nahi hai.

Payal (sisakte huye)—tu kaha chala gaya tha, mujhe chhod kar...agar tujhe kuch ho jata to..ab hum yaha nahi rukenge

Raj—bina iss tilism ko tode hum yaha se bahar nahi nikal sakte.

Payal—kyo nahi nikal sakte....vo darwaja ya phir uss khidki se bahar ja sakte hain.

Raj—tilism me kewal andar aane ka rasta hota hai, usko tode bina bahar jane ka koi rasta nahi hota...sab raste band hote chale jate hain, jaise jaise hum andar jate jate hain uske.

Neha—to phir kaise tootega ye tilism….?

Raj—chalo mere sath….mujhe pata hai ki ye kaise tootega…..? lekin usse pahle mujhe minakshi tak pahuchna hoga.

Divya—minakshi kaha hai….?

Raj—chalo dekhte hain usko bhi…

Main sab ko lekar uss kund me dhire dhire utarne laga……jaise hum niche pahuche to sab hairan rah gayi….main singhasan ke karib pahuch kar niche bane tahkhane me sab ke sath jane laga ab.

Neha—iss qile me kitne tahkhane hain baap re….?

Andar utarte huye akhir hum niche pahuch hi gaye…..tabhi meri nazar ek kamre par gayi…ye vahi kamra tha jisko maine behoshi ke dauran dekha tha kintu iske andar kya hai ye dikhayi dene se pahle hi mujhe hosh aa gaya tha.

Main jaise hi uss kamre ke karib pahucha to…achanak vahi madhur geet phir se mujhe sunayi dene laga

Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Me Hain Dil Ke Afsaane

Afsaano Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane

Payal—ye to phir se aa gayi yaha bhi gana gaate…picha hi nahi chhod rahi hai, kalmuhi…. meri kulhadi ghar me bhool gayi warna isko batati…..mujhe ghasit rahi thi, tabhi gardan kaat deti iss karamjali ki

Maine ankhe band kiya to ek hath me mombatti aur dusre hath me machis aa gayi……maine usko jalakar divya ko pakda diya….vo geet vaha goonjta raha.

Raj (jor se)—Rajlaxmi samne aa jaooo

Neha (shocked)—ye rajlaxmi koun hai..... ?

Raj—vahi jo payal chhankate huye gaana ga rahi hai…..Rani Rajlaxmi

Aur phir payal ki chhan…chhan karti awaz paas me aane lagi……aur phir vo hamare samne aa gayi…ye vahi aurat hai jisko maine singhasan par baithe dekha tha.

Rajlaxmi—to aapne mujhe akhir pahchan hi liya saajan

Payal—tum isko kaise jante ho….? Kab mile the tum isse….? Kya rishta hai tumhara iss kalmuhi se…?

Raj—didi..shantt…..sab samajh jaogi……aur vo sirf ek aatma hai

Neha (shocked)—kyaaaa…? Ye chudail hai…..?

Raj—ab aap shuru mat ho jana….yaha jis kaam ke liye aaye hain pahle vo karne do mujhe

Maine dhire se uss kamre ka darwaja khol diya…aur aage badhne laga…..kuch door jane par ek karagar dikhayi diya.. jaise hi main karagar ke karib pahucha to meri nazar salakho ke andar qaid bediyo se jakdi huyi ek ladki par padi jo apna sir jhukaye huye baithi thi…..karagar ke charo taraf mombatti jal rahi thi….charo deewar aur jamin par bas ek hi baat likhi huyi thi…vahi geet ke bol….jo shayad minakshi ne hi likhe the.

Raj (dard)—Minakshiiiiiiiiii

Meri awaz sunte hi vo turant apna sir upar ki aur phir vo mujhe dekhte hi chounk gayi….idhar ye sab bhi buri tarah se chounk gayi minakshi ko dekh kar (divya aur saloni ko chhod) kyon ki uski shakal aur paridhi ki ek jaisi thi.

Neha (shocked)—ye to paridhi ki hamshakal hai

Paridhi (hairan)—ye to mainnn hii huuu

Divya—haa didi…aap hi minakshi ho…lekin apne pichhle janam me

Minakshi kuch der tak aise hi mujhe ghurti rahi aur phir jor se cheekh maar kar rone lagi aur uth kar bhagne ki koshish ki to zanzeer me bandhi hone ke karan vahi dhadam se gir gayi.

Minakshi (cheekhte huye)—saajannnnnnnnnnn

Raj—minakshiiiii

Main jaise hi uss karagar ko kholne ke liye hath lagaya to kisi adrishya shakti ne mujhe piche dhakel diya..maine teen char baar prayas kiya lekin har baar asafal hi raha.

Raj (jor se)—koun hai …samne aao….?

"Hahahaha.....swagat hai saajannnn....akhirrr tummm aa hi gayeeee....mujheee ish din ki kab se pratiksha thiii..hahaha" aur phir vahi bhayanak sadhu hamare samne aa gaya jisko payal didi ne dekha tha.

Payal (bhag kar mujhse chipak ke)—rajjjj...ye....ye....ye...to vahiii sadhuuu haiii...jisko..maine uss bachche ki hatya karte huye dekha thaa.

"Haaaaa...vo main hi thaaaa....abbbb mainnn tummm sabkiiii baliii dungaaaa....hahahahaha .... aaj meraaa intazarrr khatam huaaa"

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Maine dekha ki uss murti ke baki sabhi saat hatho me koi na koi hathiyar avashya tha sirf ek hath aisa tha jo ki bilkul khali tha…lekin uss hath ki ungliya mudi huyi thi.

Raj (mann me)—ye murti khandit kyo hai….? Baki sabhi hatho me kuch na kuch hathiyar hain to ye khali kyo hai…? Koun sa hathiyar hona chahiye iss hath me…..? chakra bhi hai, trishul, gada, dhanush, chabuk, khopdi, khappar, ye sabhi hain…..haan talwar nahi hai……

Maine turant uss talwar ko yaad kiya aur agle hi pal vo mere hatho me aa gayi…..maine mata rani ko pranam kar ke vo talwar unke uss khali hath me pakda di……aur phir tabhi….

Ab aage…….

Murti ke khali hath me talwar pakdate hi vo talwar roshni se chamakne lagi….uski chamak samne khidki me lage shishe par padne lagi aur paravartit hone lagi shishe me takrane ke baad……(theek vaise hi jaise ki surya ki roshni me agar kisi kaanch ko rakh diya jaye to vo bhi roshni bikherne lagta hai) ….shishe me se roshni ke paravartit hote hi murti apni jagah se ghumne lagi.

Murti ke ghumte hi mujhe mata rani ke pairo ke paas jo jagah murti hatne se khali huyi vaha par kuch nazar aaya… maine paas ja kar dekha to vaha se kisi tahkhane ka rasta dikhayi diya…..maine uth kar ek nazar uss khidki me lage shishe aur phir uss murti ki taraf dekha…aur talwar ko nikal liya murti ke hath se.

Talwar nikalte hi jaise uss shishe ki roshni uss jagah par padni band huyi vaise hi vo murti ghum kar phir se pahle jaisi position me aa gayi aur vo tahkhane ka rasta murti ke pairo ke niche band ho gaya.

Maine ek bar phir se talwar murti ke hatho me thama di aur phir vaise hi hua jaise pahle hua tha….main jyada der na karte huye uss tahkhane me andar ghus gaya….andar jate hi mujhe ek button dikhi jise press karte hi murti phir se ghum kar yathavat avastha me aa gayi aur tahkhane ka dwar band ho gaya.

Andar bahut andhera tha lekin mujhe vaha dekhne me koi pareshani pesh nahi ho rahi thi….niche utarne ke liye sidhiya bani huyi thi….main unke sahare niche utarta chala gaya.

Jaise hi main jamin par pahucha to vaha par mujhe ek surang nazar aayi….main uske andar ghus gaya….mujhe ab tak koi nahi mila tha….shayad tahkhana band hone ki vajah se yaha koi aa hi nahi paya, kyon ki tahkhane ko kholne ki chabi matlab vo talwar kisi ke hath lagi hi nahi thi.

Khair maine inn vicharo ko tyag kar nirantar uss surang ke andar badhta chala gaya….na jane kitni der chalne ke baad mujhe vaha do raste nazar aaye…kuch pal ruk kar main yahi sochta raha ki pahle koun se raste par jau…kya pata koun sa rasta kitna lamba hai….?

Phir mann me nirnay kar ke ek raste me chal pada…..kuch door jane par hi mujhe ek kamra mila…..maine usko kholne ki koshish ki lekin vo nahi khula…..akhir me maine usko tod diya.

Lekin jaise hi kamre ke andar kadam rakha to vaise hi kisi ne mujhe lapet liya……maine dekha to ye ek vishal paanch fano wala naag tha, jisne darwaje ke andar aate hi mujh par hamla kar diya tha….main lagatar khud ko uske changul se chhudane ki koshish me laga hua tha aur vo dhire dhire apna muh philata ja raha tha mujhe dasne ke liye.

Usne jaise hi jor se fufkar marte huye mere sir me hamla kiya to maine apne sir ko tirchha kar liya….isliye uska vaar khali gaya…lekin vo gussa ho kar apne paancho muh se hamla karne laga…mere hath pair usne jakad rakhe the jiski vajah se main kewal apna sir hilane ke siwa kuch bhi nahi kar pa raha tha.

Magar sir bhi kab tak idhar udhar karta jabi vo jaldi jaldi apne sabhi fano se lagatar hamle kar raha tha….lihaja maine apni ankhe band kar li aur shant ho kar sidha khada ho gaya….vo lagatar hamle karta raha par ab uske vaar ka mujh par koi asar nahi ho raha tha….dhire dhire mera sharir badhne aur phailne laga jisse uski pakad dheeli hoti gayi. Aur phir mere jism se aag ki lapte nikalne lagi.

Aag ki lapte jaise hi mere jism se nikalna shuru huyi to vo jaldi se mujhe chhod kar door ho gaya lekin ye aag itni tez ho chuki thi ki uski lapte poore kamre me har kone tak ja rahi thi...vo iss aag me jhulasne laga aur bachne ke liye idhar udhar bhagne laga kintu ab uske yaha se bhagne ka koi marg shesh nahi tha kyon ki darwaje ke paas to main hi khada hua tha.....antatah vo iss aag me jal kar bhasm ho gaya aur uske jalte hi ek roshni uske andar se nikal kar mere jism me sama gayi aur vo jalkar rakh ka dher ban gaya.

Uske bhasm hote hi maine apne sharir ko normal kar liya.....ab vo kamra anekanek ratnabhusno se prakashit ho raha tha....akoot khazana bhara pada tha uss kamre me.....heere, jawahraat, sona, chandi, mani, manikya aur bhi na jane kitne hi prakar ke ratna aur abhusan ka bhandar laga hua tha.

Maine ek bar phir se ankhe band kar ke apna ek hath aage kiya to mere hath se roshni nikalne lagi jo uss khazane ke upar ja kar padne lagi aur phir vapis mere hatho me sama gayi.....ab vaha koi bhi khazana nahi tha...maine usko apne andar samahit kar liya tha.

Ab mera uss kamre ka kaam khatam ho chuka tha to vapis vaha se lout kar dusri surang me ghus gaya.....kafi door tak jane ke baad vaha mujhe ek darwaja nazar aaya...jo mere hath lagate hu khul gaya....lekin uske andar mujhe kuch nahi dikha to main vapis loutne ke liye palta hi tha ki tabhi meri nazar kisi aisi cheez par padi ki main bhi dekh kar chounk gaya.

Maine uske karib ja kar dhyan se dekha to vo ek bahut chota locket tha….shayad dhool mitti me vo daba hua tha lekin mera pair padne se uske upar ki parat hat gayi hogi jisse vo thoda thoda chamakne laga tha…bilkul jugnu ki tarah.

Maine usko hath me utha liya aur jab khola to dang rah gaya....kuch der tak main vaha vaise hi ankhe band kiye khada raha aur phir vapis lout aaya...surang se bahar nikal maine tahkhane me hi lage deewar me se ek jagah ke patthar ko khiskaya to vaha ek khidki dikhne lagi...maine uske andar ghus kar uss khidki ko band kar diya.

Idhar saloni ne jaise hi uss laash ko door phenka to vo bhayanak ladki phir se saloni ke samne aa gayi aur kuch budbudane lagi...magar isse pahle hi saloni ne ek maha pret ko uske upar chhod diya jisne uss ladki ko utha kar patak diya...apne samne maha pret ko dekh kar vo bhayanak ladki adrishya ho gayi...uske adrishya hote hi maha pret bhi gayab ho gaya.

Lekin agle hi pal vo ladki phir se aa gayi, shayad uska mantra poora ho chuka tha aur agle hi kshan ek maha pishash ne saloni ko piche se aa kar daboch liya..saloni uski pakad se bebas ho chuki thi..vo pishach uska bhakshan karne hi wala tha ki tabhi ek thappad uske gaalo par jor se pada aur vo udte huye deewar se ja takraya...saloni aur uss ladki ne chounk kar udhar dekha to vaha mujhe khade huye paya.

Vo ladki—oohhhh..tummm...lekin tummm jindaa kaisee hoo sakte ho.... ? aur yaha tak pahuche kaise... ?

Raj—mujhse bhidne se pahle mere baare me jaan lete to achcha hota.....koi baat nahiii, ab achche se jaan jaogee

Saloni—rajjjjj tumm aa gaye...shukra hai.

Ladki (gusse me)—achcha hua ki tum khud hi yaha aa gaye....ab tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta.

Raj—theek hai...lekin jara jaldi karna..mere paas time nahi haai teri inn bakwash baato ke liye...isliye tere paas jitni bhi shaktiya hain unhe ek baar me hi jagrit kar le.....main tujhse vada karta hu, jab tak tu vaar karte karte thak nahi jayegi main tujh par koi vaar nahi karunga..aur jab karunga to kewal ek hi vaar karunga dusra nahi.

Ladki (jor se)—maha pishach utho...apne lakshya ko poora karo...jao..khatam kar do usko

Raj—vo ab kabhi nahi uthega...pret yoni se mukt ho gaya hai vo ab..kewal haddiyo ka dhancha bacha hai...kisi aur ko bula jo isse bhi jyada taqatwar ho.

Ladki—ab dekh tu tera kya haal karti hu main...

Agle hi pal usne ek brahma rakshash ka smaran kiya aur vo kuch hi der hi attahas karta hua vaha prakat ho gaya.. usne usko meri taraf jane ka ishara kar diya...vo ishara milte hi tezi se meri oor aaya aur phir beech raste se hi jitni tezi se aaya tha uski double tezi se vapis lout kar gayab ho gaya....ye dekh kar vo hairan rah gayi ki aisa kaise ho sakta hai kyon ki kisi brahma rakshash ko siddh karna aur usko harana bahut badi baat hai.

Uske paas jitni bhi shaktiya thi lagbhag sabhi ka usne aahvahan kar liya lekin koi kuch nahi kar saka...bhoot, pret, chudail, dakini, shakini, betal, pishach, maha pret, mashan, brahma betal.aadi.....aadhe se jyada se mujhe dekhte hi vapis bhag gaye aur jo paas aaye vo mere thappad ki maar kha kar uss yoni se mukt ho ke yamlok pahuch gaye.

Raj—bas ab tera kaam khatam.....ab vaar karne ki bari meri.

Ladki (ghabra kar)—kkk...koun ho tummm..... ? meri koi bhi shakti tumhe nuksan kyo nahi pahucha saki….? Mujhe maaf kar do... ?

Raj—maine tumhe pahle bhi kaha tha ki mere baare me jaan lete to achcha hota.....ab der ho chuki hai.

Saloni—saajannn…hum isse yaha ke bare me jankari hasil kar sakte hain.

Raj—koi jarurat nahi hai…….iska samay khatam hota hai ab.

Vo ladki (shocked)—kyaaaaaa…? Tummmm saaajjjjjaaann hoooo…..?

Aur maine apna hath aage kar diya aur agle hi pal mere hatho se aag nikalne lagi jisne uss ladki ko apne ghere me le liya aur phir uski dardnak cheekhe vaha goonjne lagi…..in cheekho ki awaz sun kar neha bhi hosh me aa gayi aur jaise hi usne uss aag ki roshni me mujhe dekha to uth kar turant mujhse chipak kar rone lagi.

Neha (rote huye)—rajjj…isne mujhe bahut mara….dekh khoon bhi bah raha hai.

Raj—koi baat nahi…ab vo khatam ho chuki hai….sab theek ho jayega.

Maine apna ek hath unke sir par rakh diya aur agle hi pal unka ghaav bharne laga tezi se aur kuch hi kshan me vo poori tarah se theek ho gayi.

Neha (hairan)—arey…ye itna jaldi kaise theek ho gaya….?

Raj—vo sab chhodo aur chalo yaha se ab

Saloni—lekin baki logo ko hum kaha talash karenge.... ?

Raj—chalo...mujhe pata hai vo kaha milenge.

Main dono ko sath lekar ussi kund ke paas aa gaya.....jaha mujhe kisi ki parchhayi dikhi thi....main vaha ek disha me chalne laga...dono mera hath pakad kar chal rahi thi..kuch door chalne ke baad hame kisi ke aane ki aahat sunayi di to main udhar mud gaya....tabhi mujhe dusri taraf se divya aati huyi dikhi...mere awaz dete hi vo bhag kar aayi aur mujhse amarbel ki tarah lipat gayi.

Divya (sisakte huye)—mujhe laga tha ki kahi phir se na kho du tumhe.... ? kya karu doodh ka jala chhachh ko bhi phoonk phoonk kar pita hai na.

Raj—tumhare rahte bhala mujhe koi maar sakta hai....chalo aao

Neha—payal aur paridhi jane kaha hongi.... ?

Raj—samne wale tahkhane me...chalo dono vahi milengi

Hum chalte huye samne ek chote se tahkhane jaise kamre me aa gaye…jaha dono ek kone me behosh padi thi…bandhi huyi….maine dono ko jaldi se khol kar seene se lagaya….mere seene se lagte hi dono ko hosh aa gaya..maine roshni phaila rakhi thi jisse vo turant mujhe dekhte hi chipak ke rone lagi..badi mushkil se dono ko samjha kar shant kiya maine.

Raj—tum dono yaha kaise….?

Payal (sisakte huye)—pata nahi kisi ne hame yaha la kar patak diya andhere me.....hamne ek bar yaha se bhagne ki koshish ki to kisi ne phir se hame ghasit kar baandh diya aur phir pata nahi kaise hum behosh ho gayi.

Raj (mann me)—ohhh..to inn dono ki parchhayi dikhi thi mujhe uss kund se upar aate samay.

Raj—khair ab main aa gaya hu...chinta ki koi baat nahi hai.

Payal (sisakte huye)—tu kaha chala gaya tha, mujhe chhod kar...agar tujhe kuch ho jata to..ab hum yaha nahi rukenge

Raj—bina iss tilism ko tode hum yaha se bahar nahi nikal sakte.

Payal—kyo nahi nikal sakte....vo darwaja ya phir uss khidki se bahar ja sakte hain.

Raj—tilism me kewal andar aane ka rasta hota hai, usko tode bina bahar jane ka koi rasta nahi hota...sab raste band hote chale jate hain, jaise jaise hum andar jate jate hain uske.

Neha—to phir kaise tootega ye tilism….?

Raj—chalo mere sath….mujhe pata hai ki ye kaise tootega…..? lekin usse pahle mujhe minakshi tak pahuchna hoga.

Divya—minakshi kaha hai….?

Raj—chalo dekhte hain usko bhi…

Main sab ko lekar uss kund me dhire dhire utarne laga……jaise hum niche pahuche to sab hairan rah gayi….main singhasan ke karib pahuch kar niche bane tahkhane me sab ke sath jane laga ab.

Neha—iss qile me kitne tahkhane hain baap re….?

Andar utarte huye akhir hum niche pahuch hi gaye…..tabhi meri nazar ek kamre par gayi…ye vahi kamra tha jisko maine behoshi ke dauran dekha tha kintu iske andar kya hai ye dikhayi dene se pahle hi mujhe hosh aa gaya tha.

Main jaise hi uss kamre ke karib pahucha to…achanak vahi madhur geet phir se mujhe sunayi dene laga

Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Me Hain Dil Ke Afsaane

Afsaano Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane

Payal—ye to phir se aa gayi yaha bhi gana gaate…picha hi nahi chhod rahi hai, kalmuhi…. meri kulhadi ghar me bhool gayi warna isko batati…..mujhe ghasit rahi thi, tabhi gardan kaat deti iss karamjali ki

Maine ankhe band kiya to ek hath me mombatti aur dusre hath me machis aa gayi……maine usko jalakar divya ko pakda diya….vo geet vaha goonjta raha.

Raj (jor se)—Rajlaxmi samne aa jaooo

Neha (shocked)—ye rajlaxmi koun hai..... ?

Raj—vahi jo payal chhankate huye gaana ga rahi hai…..Rani Rajlaxmi

Aur phir payal ki chhan…chhan karti awaz paas me aane lagi……aur phir vo hamare samne aa gayi…ye vahi aurat hai jisko maine singhasan par baithe dekha tha.

Rajlaxmi—to aapne mujhe akhir pahchan hi liya saajan

Payal—tum isko kaise jante ho….? Kab mile the tum isse….? Kya rishta hai tumhara iss kalmuhi se…?

Raj—didi..shantt…..sab samajh jaogi……aur vo sirf ek aatma hai

Neha (shocked)—kyaaaa…? Ye chudail hai…..?

Raj—ab aap shuru mat ho jana….yaha jis kaam ke liye aaye hain pahle vo karne do mujhe

Maine dhire se uss kamre ka darwaja khol diya…aur aage badhne laga…..kuch door jane par ek karagar dikhayi diya.. jaise hi main karagar ke karib pahucha to meri nazar salakho ke andar qaid bediyo se jakdi huyi ek ladki par padi jo apna sir jhukaye huye baithi thi…..karagar ke charo taraf mombatti jal rahi thi….charo deewar aur jamin par bas ek hi baat likhi huyi thi…vahi geet ke bol….jo shayad minakshi ne hi likhe the.

Raj (dard)—Minakshiiiiiiiiii

Meri awaz sunte hi vo turant apna sir upar ki aur phir vo mujhe dekhte hi chounk gayi….idhar ye sab bhi buri tarah se chounk gayi minakshi ko dekh kar (divya aur saloni ko chhod) kyon ki uski shakal aur paridhi ki ek jaisi thi.

Neha (shocked)—ye to paridhi ki hamshakal hai

Paridhi (hairan)—ye to mainnn hii huuu

Divya—haa didi…aap hi minakshi ho…lekin apne pichhle janam me

Minakshi kuch der tak aise hi mujhe ghurti rahi aur phir jor se cheekh maar kar rone lagi aur uth kar bhagne ki koshish ki to zanzeer me bandhi hone ke karan vahi dhadam se gir gayi.

Minakshi (cheekhte huye)—saajannnnnnnnnnn

Raj—minakshiiiii

Main jaise hi uss karagar ko kholne ke liye hath lagaya to kisi adrishya shakti ne mujhe piche dhakel diya..maine teen char baar prayas kiya lekin har baar asafal hi raha.

Raj (jor se)—koun hai …samne aao….?

"Hahahaha.....swagat hai saajannnn....akhirrr tummm aa hi gayeeee....mujheee ish din ki kab se pratiksha thiii..hahaha" aur phir vahi bhayanak sadhu hamare samne aa gaya jisko payal didi ne dekha tha.

Payal (bhag kar mujhse chipak ke)—rajjjj...ye....ye....ye...to vahiii sadhuuu haiii...jisko..maine uss bachche ki hatya karte huye dekha thaa.

"Haaaaa...vo main hi thaaaa....abbbb mainnn tummm sabkiiii baliii dungaaaa....hahahahaha .... aaj meraaa intazarrr khatam huaaa"

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bhai words nhi h tareef k liye
one of the bestest update
mazza hi aagya
rani rajlaxmi ki kahani sunne mein mazza aayega
meenakshi bhi mil gyi
lekin achanak hero ko sab kuch kiase malum hogya tilism k baare mein
aisa kya tha us locket mein

brilliant update bhai
keep rocking :)
 

king of darkness0411

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Wow bhai ky khubsurat tarikhe se apne tilism ko toda hai
Wo nag khajane ki surakcha ke liye tha.
Aur jo ladki Raj laxmi sayad y raja ki beti hogi
To akhir paheli ka raz kul gaya aur minakshi bhi mil gai
Aur us locket Mae kiski photo thi
Ab dekhte hai ki raj us admi ka samne kese karta hai aur kon hai wo admi jo salo se raj as saajana ka intjar kar raha hai

Waiting for another great update



 
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