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Fantasy RUDRADIP- The God And Devil

Black water

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Waiting bhai
 

sorbobhuk

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Hello Dosto.... Waise mai Yaha par bahut dino baad yaha likh raha hu... Uske liye sorry mai aap sab ka Jawab nahi de paya... Wo kya hai na mai kuch soch nahi pa raha tha story ke bare me... To socha kuch din aram hi kar lu... Waise bhi ab sabhi aur chutti ka hi Mahol hai to mai kuch din apne story ke bare me soch raha tha... Aur lo mai hazir ho gaya... Deri ke liye Sorry... Par abhi mai ye Story Continue kar raha hu.. aur ha mai pahle ki tarah hi likhu ye meri puri koshish rahegi...2-3 din se mai update Dena Start karunga.... Update daily honge ye baat hai... Chalo ab Bye milte hai direct Update me RD ke sath.....?
kya khabar di bhai dil khush ho geya hai.....waiting for next update
 

Rizwan

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Hello Dosto.... Waise mai Yaha par bahut dino baad yaha likh raha hu... Uske liye sorry mai aap sab ka Jawab nahi de paya... Wo kya hai na mai kuch soch nahi pa raha tha story ke bare me... To socha kuch din aram hi kar lu... Waise bhi ab sabhi aur chutti ka hi Mahol hai to mai kuch din apne story ke bare me soch raha tha... Aur lo mai hazir ho gaya... Deri ke liye Sorry... Par abhi mai ye Story Continue kar raha hu.. aur ha mai pahle ki tarah hi likhu ye meri puri koshish rahegi...2-3 din se mai update Dena Start karunga.... Update daily honge ye baat hai... Chalo ab Bye milte hai direct Update me RD ke sath.....?
Wady Bala thanks g apka welcome back
 

Iron Man

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Black water

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RD193

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UPDATE 56

Mai B Ansh se Naraj bhi tha Aur man me ek Tarah ki Khushi bhi ho rahi thi.

Kyu ki Aaj bahut Dino Baad Mujhe Kachi Kali mili thi..

Par pata nahi kyu Mujhe Ansh ne jo Kaha uspar ek baar sochna padega...

Nahi to Pata nahi ye aur kya kya karega Mera aisa Mind Block karke...

Maine Mrunali ko side me kiya aur vaha se uthne ki koshish karne laga Tabhi usne mera hath pakda...

Mrunali- Kidhar chale Barkhuddar... Mujhe is haal me chodkar....

Mai-(itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi hickichate huye) Mmaaaiiii.....wool....fresh hone ja raha hu...

Mrunali- waise Mujhe laga nahi tha Tum aise ladke hoge ek ladki ko dekhte hi Us par tut pado aur aise ki Mera sara badan (Dard se karhate huye) dard kar raha hai...

Mai-Soorryyy.... Mruuuu.... Wo kya hai na Mujhe tumko is halat me dekh control hi nahi raha..

(Man me) ab kya bolu yahi bolna padega ...

Tabhi B Ansh apni Kamini Hasi haste huye kahta hai..

B Ansh- Abe wo Tujhe Chutiya bana rahi hai Usko bhi Bahut Maja aa raha hai....

Mai-(Jor se...) Kkyyayaaa...

Mrunali-Kya huva Tum kyu itne Jor se chilla rahe ho...balki chillana To mujhe chahiy.

Waise us B Ansh ki Baat se mujhme thodi himmat aa gayi thi isliye mai Mrunali se puchta hu..

Mai-Acha sach Batao Tumhe Maja nahi aya kya In Sab me... Jo itne nakhre kar rahi ho ab... Batao...

Mrunali- Waise pahle to Bahut Gussa aya Mujhe tum par phir baad me na jane Tumne mujhpar kya jaadu kiya...

pata nahi ki mai Tujhme bas khoti hi chali gayi... Aur abhi haal aisa hai ki Mera man ab Tumhare bina nahi lag raha hai... I Love You dipu...

Mai-I Love you Too... Chalo Tum bhi fresh ho jao...

Usne uthne ki koshish ki par wo uth hi nahu saki kyu ki uski bahut dard ho raha tha hilne se.

Sala meri hi ansh ne is tarah use rondh diya tha ki wo move bhi nahi kar pa rahi hai...

Phir mai hi usko bathroom lekar gaya aur usko ache se ready kiya wo bahut hi Sharma rahi thi..

par waise nahate huye bhi usko aisi Halat me dekh mai Control nahi kar paya...

Aur maine usko Nahate huye bhj bahut masla aur wo garam bhi ho gayi thi par usse jyada kuch nahi kiya maine...

Phir bahar akar usko ek Tablet de di Pain killer ki aur usko Apne magic se uska Kuch dard bhi halka kar diya...

jisse usko jyada dard bhi na ho aur use pata bhi nahi chale ye maine kiya hai.

Aur usko aram karne ka kahkar mai vaha se apne ghar nikal gaya...

Ghar me gaya to Papa bahar sofe par baithkar news dekh rahe the..

Mai Jab Un Tino ko(Sonam,Rasika aur Ritika) us Aghori ke changul se Bachakar subah le aya tha..

par uske pahle mai Apne real wale Family se milne Gaya tha vaha se lautne ke baad maine unko bachaya aur Ghar aya tha unko lekar...

(Ye sab Maine Aap sab logo ko yaad dilane ke liye kah raha hu...)

Subah jab mai aya Tha To papa se mulakat nahi ho payi thi wo kisi kaam se bahar gaye the..

lekin unko jaise hi pata chala ki mai wapas aa gaya hu waise hi wo Apna Pura Kaam chodkar aa gaye...

Mujhe dekhte hi wo Apne Jagah se uth gaye aur mai bhi Unke taraf gaya aur unko Jor se gale lagaya...

Mujhe dekhkar unki ankhe nam hi gayi thi par unhone apne ansu chupa liye...

Waise ab mujhe sab sach pata chal gaya tha par maine unko batana munasib nahi samja..

aur unko agar pata chal gaya to unke man me bhi kuch na kuch chalta hi rahega... Isliye maine unko kuch nahi bataya is bare me...

Papa- Kaise ho beta Kaha gaye the itne din... Na kuch Khabar aur na hi Tum batakar gaye is baar...

Mai- wo kya hai na Papa Bahut hi important kaam aa gaya tha Isliye chala gaya tha...

Papa-Chahe kitna Bhi Important kaam kyu na ho par age se dhyan rakhna ki apne papa ko Bolkar hi Jana hume bhi Tumhara Khayal rahta hai Beta Baap hu na...

Unke chehare aur bato se hi Jhalak raha tha unko bhi meri bahut fikar hai aur mere Liye Pyaar dikh raha tha Unki Bato se mujhe...

isliye mujhe un par aur bhi Pyaar aa raha tha... Isi pyaar ki Bajah se mujhe apne dono Family me koi Antar nahi dikhayi de raha tha...

Mai- Ha Papa Jarur... Lekin kabhi gaya bhi to bas mujhe yaad karna mai apko bata dunga ki mai Kaha hu.. wo kya hai na Papa....

Papa- Pata hai Mujhe agar kisi ke pass Kuch special hai To usko Kuch special aur Jaruri kaam bhi hota hai..

Wo kahte hai shaktiyo ke sath Kuch jimmedariya bhi ati hai pata hai Mujhe..

bas ye yaad rakhna ki usko nibhate nibhate apne family ko mat bhul jana...

Mai-Ha jarur papa... Mai ye baat Yaad rakhunga...

Ye kahkar maine Phir se papa ko gale lagaya Tabhi Ek abaj ayi Jo meri Pyari Mom ki thi....

Mom- wahh... Apne Papa par hi Aaj Bahut pyaar aa raha hai kabhi Hamare taraf bhi dekha karo...

Mere kuch bolne se pahle hi Papa bolte hai..

Papa-Aji... Hum hai na Tumhare taraf dhyan dene ke liye...

Mom-(Sharmate huye) Shhiii...Kuch to Sharam karo Beta hai samne hamare...

Ab maine Jakar Mom ki Gale lagaya...Tabhi mere man se Abaj ati hai Jo B Ansh ki Hoti hai..

B Ansh- ye Tere is Baap ko Bata Ki mere Maal par ankhe mat dala kar....

Mai-uski Baat par mujhe gussa to aya par mai abhi Usko kah bhi nahi sakta socha usko baad me dekhta hu...

Mai-Aap dono mere liye Best ho aur mai Aap dono se bhi Pyaar karta hu....

Tabhi Jiski Kami thi wo Aa gayi yani ki Meri Chipkali...

Ritu- Ye Tune Mere Mom-Dad ko hug kaise kiya huva hai Chal Chod Unhe...

Ek to pata nahi kaha kaha Ghumta rahta hai aur Yaha akar Hamare Mom-Dad ko Humse Chura raha hai...

B Ansh-Aa gayi meri Tej tarrab Rani....

Mai-(Uski Bato ko Ignore karte huye) Ye Hello... Kisne kaha Ye tere Mom-Dad hai Ye mere hai aur Bhul mat Mai Tujhse bada hu...

Isliye ye sabse Pahle mere hai Phir agar Number aya To.....

Ritu-Abe hat.... Bada aya... Kayka Khak Bada hai Tu... Tujhse badi mai hu Samje isliye Mera Pahla Haq hai Inpar ...

Ye lo suru ho gayi Hamari Tutu maimai... aur hamesha ki Tarah sab Maja lete huye Dekh rahe the...

Lekin tabhi hum sabme ek aisa Vyakti bol padti hai jiska Kabhi koi soch bhi nahi sakta.. Yani ki meri Jaan Di...

Di- Tum Dono Shant baitho Tum dono Se badhi mai Hu isliye sabse pahla haq mera Banta hai Mom-Dad par...

Hum dono to Di ke aise bich me kudne se surprise hi ho gaye... Lekin Bolna to Tha hi Unka Bhi haq banta hai..

Abhi mai Kuch Bolne ja hi raha tha Ki Hume Door ke taraf se ek abaj ati hai jinka Bich me ana Asambhav tha par wo aa gaye the to wo Abaj thi ..

Bhai- Koi Kuch nahi Bolega.. is Ghar ka sabse bada Ladka mai Hu..

Isliye mom-Dad sabse Jyada Pyaar mujhe karte hai .. Aur mera Unpar Pahla Haq hai...

Ab To aisa Kahne se sab log hi Surprise ho gaye the ..kisi ne bhi ye expected nahi kiya tha Bhaiya aise Hamare Bich me ayenge aur ye kahenge..par ye Huva kaise ye to...

B Ansh-Abe ghochu... Jyada socha mat kar wo kaam mera hai Tu to Bas maje liya kar...

mujhe to bahut Maja aa raha tha is Game me to Phir mai unhe kyu vaha akele rahne deta isliye le aya inhe Yaha....

Mai-Tuuuuu......

Ritu- Kya kaha Tune Bhai Ko ...

Mai- Nahi Maine Bhai se nahi maine To...Mera Matlab... Ha Bhai se..lekin Tu Nahi... Tum... Nahi... aap...

Mai Tumhe kyu Batau maine Bhai se kis Naam se bulaya.. jane de...

(Bhai ki Taraf Jate huye) Bhai Aap Yaha Kaise... Aap to....

Bhai-ye Kya Rudra Tu hi mujhe yaha leke aya aur Ab bol raha hai.....

Mai-(man me ) Ab sale Kale ..pitwayega kya Age se Bata ke kiya kar) ha Mai hi apko yaha lekar aa gaya...

Socha yaha sab Apna Haq Jata rahe hai To Aap kyu Piche rahte...

Mom- Kaisa Haq kuch nahi...Mera koi bhi Beta Chota ho ya Bada Ya phir Beti...

Lekin hamare Liye sab Ek hi hai aur Ham Tum Charo se nahi Tum sabse Ek saman hi Pyaar karte hai.

Aur tum sabka Saman haq hai hum par aur hamara to hai hi...

Ye Baat sunte hi Hum sab Mom- Dad ki Taraf daud pade aur jaise Unpar Tut pade waise unko sab Hug karne lage...

Aur Hug karne ke baad Ritu Jhagadte huye Mera Hath hatane Lagi... To maine uska aur Di ka hath hataya...

Aaj to Di ko bhi Maja aa raha tha to usne Bhaiya aur Bakiyo ka Hath hatane Lagi.... Tabhi Mom Haste huye kahti hai...

Mom- Arrrreeee..... Maine abhi kya kaha tha aur Tum Phir se Jhagadne lage....

Ye Sunkar Sab Haste huye Phirse Unko Gale lagaya...

Phir kya aisa hi Pyaar bhara Mahol ho gaya tha vaha par...

Kuch der hum Sab vaha baithkar Pyaar bhari Bate kar rahe the... Is bich meri aur Ritika ki Nokjhok chalti rahi...

Aur Di aur Bhai bhi hamara Sath de rahi thi in sabme...

Aur idhar Humse Bahut dur ye Vahi Jagah thi Jis bare me maine Apko bataya tha...

Lekin sab Bhul gaye honge to mai Apko yaad dila deta hu ...

Kuch Scientist Project Green par Kaam kar rahe the Jo Logo ki Bhalai ke liye ho raha tha...

par Kuch Saitani soch wale scientist walo ne us Project me kuch aise Changes kar diye the.. Jo batana aur dhund pana Impossible hai...

1-2 Update pahle maine Bata diya tha waha par Jitne Bhi Janwaro ki Sanse ek dum se badh gayi thi...

aur Achanak se ruk gayi.. Aur Phir usi waqt Vaha Par rakhi 24 Hours ki Clock ka Time Kam ho raha tha...

Ye dekhte huye vaha Par Baithe kuch Scientist log Ek meeting lene ke liye hi vaha ke secure room me chale gaye...

ab Chalo sunte hai Unme Kya bate ho rahi hai... Par philal mai unko S1, S2 ke Naam se bulaunga...

S1- Dekho Aaj Jo bhi Humne dekha wo Mujhe Kuch acha nahi Laga aur Mujhe lagta hai ki...

Project Green me kuch Gadbadi ho gayi hai.. aur Uska Output kuch bhi ho sakta hai...

To hume satark hona padega aur humee Hamara Project Green Kahi chupana hoga...

Ya kuch din hume unko apni Nigrani me rakhna padega nahi to logo ke liye kya karenge hume Pata nahi...

mai kya kahna chahata hu aap sabko samaj aa raha hai na...

S2- Ha sir.. samaj me aa raha hai isliye mai kya kahta hu.. Kyu na Hum un sabko hamari Dusri Jagah lekar chale jaye...

Jisse agar kuch hoga bhi to wo yaha nahi hoga aur usse jyada Hamara Nuksan bhi nahi hoga...

S1- Ha ye Baat sach hai to chalo Phir apne Kaam par Lag jao..

Aur Phir wo Meeting khatam ho jati hai aur wo Sab Vaha se jane lagte hai lekin unme se koi ek Tha...


jiska Saitani Dimag me to kuch aur hi plan chal raha tha to chalo sunte hai wo Kya kahne ki Koshish jar raha hai...

S3-(Man me) Tum Kuch bhi karo S1 Lekin humne to hamara Khel pahle hi Khel diya hai...

ab To bas ye 24 Hours Khatam ho jaye... Ye Good News to mujhe Boss ko batani hi hogi...

Ye kahte huye wo bhi us Room se chala jata hai aur udhar sara Mahol shant ho jata hai ...

Idhar mai Apne room me aa gaya tha kyu ki Mujhe us B Ansh se baat karni thi...

Kyu ki Agar usse Baat nahi ki to Na jane ye Sala aud kya kya karega aur Mujhse kya kya karwayega.................................
 
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