Fantasy RUDRADIP- The God And Devil

[RD193]

Lajwab update bhai

Shandaar update

Thanks Bhai ab se daily updates dene ki koshish karna. Aaj to GoT ka bhi episode a gaya aur apne bhi story update kardi great brother

Lajawab super fantastic update Bhai

Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
ab rd ko apne baare me pata chalne wala hai

Bht hi badhiya bhai
Ab hero ka raaz khulega
Main to aapko wapas dekh kar zyada khushi hui
Bhai ab regular hojana jaisa aapne kha h
Aapki se story bht achi h

Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai

Behad Shandar Update Bhai




Waiting...

Thanks Bhailog....
Agla update Kuch hi der me....
Aur ha Story ko ab Continue karne ki koshiKo karunga

 

[RD193]

Waise Dosto mujhse Aapse ek baat kahani hai Ye Jo Hero ka Flashback hai Wo Short de du ya Maine jaise socha hai waise...
Ye Aap Sab bataiye mujhe Kya karna chahiye... Mai intzaar karunga

 

[Jitu kumar]

Waise Dosto mujhse Aapse ek baat kahani hai Ye Jo Hero ka Flashback hai Wo Short de du ya Maine jaise socha hai waise...
Ye Aap Sab bataiye mujhe Kya karna chahiye... Mai intzaar karunga

Bhai aapne jaisa socha hai vaisa hi flashback dijiye,
agle update ka intajaar rahega

 

[RD193]

UPDATE 29

Ritu- Kaha se Shuru karu kuch samaj nahi aa raha.. Kyu ki Tumhare bare me batane ki kahani hi alag hai.. Aur jitna batau utna Kam...

Mai-Kuch bhi batao mujhe mere pichle janam ke bare me.................................


AGE............................


Ritu-(Jor se) Tumhara Koi bhi pichla Janam nahi hai Jo bhi hai yahi hai Tumhara Sirf ek hi Janam hai koi dusra tisra nahi samje....

Ritu ke is baat se Mai Shock ho Gaya tha Kya kahu aur Kya nahi kuch sujh nahi raha tha..

Balki Mai kuch der ke liye to Statue banke khada ho Gaya tha...

Ritu ne Jo kaha mujhe uspar Bharosa hi nahi ho raha tha.. Kyu ki usne kaha hi kuch Aisa tha jispe Bharosa karna to Dur usse manna bhi asambhav tha...

Mai to full shock me khada tha...Mujhe to tab hosh Aya jab Ritu ne mujhe hilaya...

Ritu-kaha kho Gaye the Tum.. Mai yaha kuch kah rahi thi Tumse...

Mai- Tttt.....tum...Tumne Abhi Kya kaha Mera......

Ritu-(Serious) Ha Sach hi to kaha hai Maine...

Mai- Nahi tum mujhse Majak Kar rahi ho na ye Sach nahi hai na.. Yaar Mai Tumse Sach Bolne ko kah raha hu aur Tumse Majak Kar rahi ho...

Ritu-(Serious) Mai Tumse Majak nahi Kar rahi hu Abhi Dipu. Ye sach hai...

Ye sunkar mere ankho me Ansu aa Gaye the Pata nahi Kyu par Maine Rote huye hi Ritu se kahne laga...

Mai- to Kya Mai Bachpan se yaha rah raha hu wo Sab Jhuth hai.. mujhe Mom ne Janam diya wo Sab Jhuth hai..

Tum Meri Judwa ho Kya wo hi Jhuth hai... Ab Tak Mai jinko Mom Dad kah raha tha Kya wo bhi Mere Mom Dad nahi hai....

Meri is Pariwaar ke Sath Jo Bachpan ki yaade hai Kya wo bhi jhuthi hai...

Mera Rona Dekh Ritu ke bhi ankho me Ansu aa Gaye the to wo bhi ro rahi thi..

Aur mere aise Sawal karne se Kuch Gussa bhi to to wo kuch Jor se mujhse kahti hai...

Ritu-(Rote huye Jor se) Ha ha Nahi hai Tumhara koi bhi yaha... nahi Mom nahi Dad aur Mai bhi Tumhari koi Judwa- tudwa nahi hu..

Nahi hai hamara koi Khun ka Rishta...nahi hai....nahi hai..... Nahi hai....

Ye kahne ke baad to wo aur bhi rone lagi.. aur Mera to ye sunne ke baad bahut hi bura haal ho Gaya tha...

Kyu ki agar aap kabhi jaan Jaye ki Bachpan se Aap jiske sath rah rahe hai Wo Tumhare asli maa- Baap nahi hai to Kya haal hota hoga Us Bache par...

Kuch waisa hi haal ho raha tha Rudra par .. wo ye baat sahan hi nahi Kar pa raha tha..

aur Kare bhi to kis muh se Kare.. Use to ab Kya Kare aur Kya na Kare Aisa haal hote ja raha tha...

Uske ankho me ansu the.. Par Abhi wo kisi angar se Kam nahi lag rahe the..

mere andar ek Gussa badhta ja raha tha aur wo bhi khud par ...

Iske Chalte Mera itna Gussa Badh Gaya ki Mai Upar muh karte huye aur Apne Dono hath phailyae itne Jor se Chillaya ki....

Mai- Nnaaaahhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.........................................

Mere aise chillane se vaha ki Puri Dharti Hil gayi thi... Yaha Tak mere andar jitna bhi Gussa lavha bankar tadap raha tha wo Sab Bahar aa Gaya..

Aur vaha ki Puri Dharti ko Jala Diya.. Meri Abaj itne Jor se thi Jaha par itna sannata tha ab vaha par Charo aur Meri hi abaj Ghum rahi thi...

Jaha par Kuch der pahle Hariyali hi Hariyali thi... Jo Jagah sabse Sundar thi..

ab wo Kabristaan ban chuki thi.. Matlab Sab Rakh me badal chuki thi... Pani sukh Gaya tha vaha ka.Charo taraf Aag hi Aag thi..

Lekin is Gusse me Maine Ritu ki taraf Dhyan hi nahi Diya.. Halanki wo bhi mere Gusse ki Aag me jal jati..

par Usko iska pahle se andasa tha Aisa hi kuch hoga to usne pahle hi Apne Charo aur kawach banaya huva tha..

Ab Mai Phir se Rone laga.. Lekin Tabhi Ritu mere pass ayi aur usne mere Sir ke upar se hath phiaraya..

Meri Najar uski taraf gayi.. usko Meri taraf dekha bhi nahi ja raha tha.. Kyu ki Meri Dono ankhe Aag me jal rahi thi...

Meri Puri Body kisi Suraj ki tarah tap rahi thi.. Lekin Phir bhi jaise hi Maine Ritu ko dekha...

To kuch had Tak Mera Gussa Shant ho Gaya.. aur Meri Jo Lal ankhe thi wo ab Dhire Dhire Nili hoti ja rahi thi...

Matlab vaha ka Pura mahol Shant hote ja raha tha...Shayad isiliye Ritu ne mujhe laya hoga..

aur usne isiliye kaha hoga ki Hamari bajah se kisi aur ko disturb na ho...

Waise Mai To Apne Ghar se bahut Dur tha.. Par mere aise chillane se thodi si Dharti to Hil gayi thi.. Par vaha Jyada mahsus na huva...

Maine Ritu ko dekhte hi uske Gale me lagkar Phir se rone laga.. Jab Mera Gussa Shant huva..

Tab mujhe ahsas huva ki asal me yaha huva Kya.. Tab Maine Ritu ke Gale se chutkkar use muh ko aur use Charo taraf se dekhne laga...

Mai- Tumhe kuch huva to nahi na Ritu Meri bajah se kahi Chot to nahi na ayi...

Ritu-Nahi fiqar ki koi baat nahi hai Mai Thik hu mujhe kuch bhi nahi huva..

Mujhe Pata tha Aisa hi kuch hoga Isliye Mai Pahle hi side ho gayi thi...

Mai- Ye Sab Meri bajah se huva mujhe itna Gussa nahi karna chahiye tha par Kya karu Mai Apne Aap ko rok na saka..

Tumne Jo bataya uske liye Mera Dimag maan hi nahi raha hai...

Ritu- wo Isliye Kyu ki Tumhe Jo Dikh raha hai tum use hi Sach maan rahe ho.. balki Sach to kuch aur hai..

Mai- Mai kaise maan lu sab kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai..

Ritu-Pahle tum Apne Dimag ko Shant Karo.. uske baad hi tum Sab samaj Paoge aur use acept Kar Paoge...

Mai-Kaise karu mere man par Mera kabu hi nahi ho pa raha hai... Mujhe lagta hai Mai kuch der ke liye akela rahna chahata hu...

Ritu- Par Dipu....

Maine uski taraf aise Najar se dekha ki wo shant ho gayi aur kahne lagi

Ritu- Thik hai Par Subah hone se pahle Ghar aa Jana...

Ye kahkar wo vaha se Chali gayi par Jane se pahle wo Jagah jaise thi waise karke Chali gayi..

Aur ab sirf vaha the Mai Aur Mera Akelapan. Jo Maine accept Kiya tha...

Kab Raat se Subah ho gayi kuch Pata hi nahi chala.. Jab Suraj ki Kirne mere Chehare par padi...

tab mujhe ahsas huva ki Subah ho gayi hai aur mujhe Ghar chalna chahiye...

Par konse Ghar Jo Mera kabhi tha hi nahi.. Mai kis Haq se vaha jau Jo Mera kabhi tha hi nahi..

Kis muh se jau Mai us Ghar... Par akhir mere pair usi Ghar ki taraf chal pade...

Subah Subah Sab Apne kaam me lage huye the.. Mom ne mujhe Bahar se ate huye dekha..

To unhe Laga ki Mai Kasrat karke Aya hu to unhone bhi kuch nahi bola..

Aur Mera to kuch kahne ka hi Mood nahi tha.. Mai jaise taise Apne Room me Gaya..

Fresh huva aur Phir se kisi ko kuch na kahte huye Chal pada Ghar se Bahar...

Subah ka Breakfast bhi nahi Kiya waise hi Ek aise Jagah Chala Gaya Jaha par Mujhe koi dhunde na aur mujhe koi disturb na Kare...

Idhar Mom Pareshan thi Kyu ki Pahli Baar Mai Ghar se Subah jaldi nikal Gaya tha aur wo bhi Nashta na karke..

Halanki Ritu ko ye baat samaj aa gayi thi Maine aisa Kyu kiya aur mujh par Kya bit rahi hai..

Usne mujhse Contact karne ki Koshish ki par Maine Sabhi Contact band Kiye huye the yaha Tak Dimag ke bhi..

Yaha Tak Rasika ne bhi mujhe Contact aur Apne Magic se mujhe dhundne ki Koshish ki par wo mujhe Dhund nahi payi..

Kyu ki aaj Hum Dono ko Vaha par Jana tha Jaha par Chika the..

Mai ek sunshan Jagah Baitha tha Jaha par koi bhi nahi tha.. aur vaha par Baithe baithe Apne hi bare me Soch raha tha...

Mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi hai Phir..Mera to ek hi Janam tha to Aisa kaise ho sakta hai...

Mai Bachpan se kaise yaha par hu..Mujhe to Sirf Dharti ki yaade yaad ati hai usse pahle ki kyu nahi.

Ye Sab mere Jindagi me Kya ho raha hai Wo sab Sach hai ya Koi sapna..

kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha.. kitni achi Life thi Meri par jinko Mai Apna manta tha..

wo mere Apne hi nahi hai aur jinko Maine kabhi dekha hi nahi nahi wo mere Apne hai aur wo bhi kaha hai kuch Pata nahi..
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Na Jane kaise waqt bit Gaya aur Subah se Raat ho gayi..

Ab to mere Pet me bhi chuhe daud rahe the.. Aur Ghar jau bhi to kis muh se.. To mai bahar se hi kuch Khakar Chala Gaya...

Ghar Gaya to Sab log Meri bajah se Pareshan the.. Kyu ki Subah se Mai Gayab tha..

aur ab Aya hu to Bahar se Khakar Aya hu.. Sabne mujhse puchne ki Bahut koshish ki..

par Mai unhe ignore karte huye sidha Apne Room me Chala Gaya..

aur andar se Room Lock Kar Diya Kyu ki koi magic se bhi mere room me nahi aye....

Aise hi kuch din bit Gaye na Mai kisi sr ache se baat karta tha aur nahi din bhar Ghar me rahta tha..

Subah hote hi Ghar se Bahar aur Raat hone ke baad Ghar me.. mere is rawaiye se Sab Pareshan the..

Aur sabne mujhe Puchne ki bhi koshish ki par Maine kisi ko bhi kuch Jawab nahi Diya. balki sabko talta Chala Gaya..

mujhe Un sabse baat karne ki Himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi...

Kabhi kabhi to mujhe bahut Rona aata tha Ritu ko Lagta tha ye sab uske hi Karan ho raha hai Use Batana hi nahi chahiye tha..

par kabhi na kabhi mujhe pata to chalta na tabhi bhi kuch Aisa hi hota...

In sabke bich Mai Apne Gharwalo se bahut Dur ho Gaya tha mai un sabse duriya badhane laga na Jane kyu...

Akele hi Mai Sochne lag jata ki mere Maa Baba Kon hai kaha honge kaise honge lekin in sawalo ke Jawab mere pass nahi the...

Aur in sawalo ke Jawab me dhundna chahata tha..

To mujhe in sawalo ke Jawab sirf ek hi person de sakta hai Aur wo hai Ritika..

Kyu ki Ansh se Maine ek Baar koshish ki thi par wo mujhe is bare me kuch bhi nahi batana chahata tha...

Aur Aaj ke Din Mai kisi bhi Haal me Ritika se mere Sawalo je Jawab chahata hi tha...

to Maine use usi Jagah bulaya Jaha par hamari pichli baate adhuri rah gayi thi.................................

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Boht achi update thi

 

[Raguhalkal]

Waise Dosto mujhse Aapse ek baat kahani hai Ye Jo Hero ka Flashback hai Wo Short de du ya Maine jaise socha hai waise...
Ye Aap Sab bataiye mujhe Kya karna chahiye... Mai intzaar karunga

Bhai update chahe jitna chahe likho koi bi kadi miss kiye bina jitna spasht roop se tum likh sakte ho likho short maza nahi ayega kyunki hum log yaha entertain karne ke liye hi ate he to writer ke nathe apka farz banta hai hum logonko entertain kare bura mat manna bhai mere kahi baaton per kyunki maine eirf such bataya hai baki apki marzi

Cristel clearly bolu to aap jaise sochete waise hi likho

 

[Reza]

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

 

[Pta nhi]

Super bro

 

[Avi12]

Waise Dosto mujhse Aapse ek baat kahani hai Ye Jo Hero ka Flashback hai Wo Short de du ya Maine jaise socha hai waise...
Ye Aap Sab bataiye mujhe Kya karna chahiye... Mai intzaar karunga

Bhai jaisa socha hai waisa likhiye apne man se

 

[aks 21]

Excellent one bhai