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Fantasy RUDRADIP- The God And Devil

RD193

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Wonderful Update Bhai

√ Hero ne sonam ko uska hak dhak dekar bohot achchha kiya, wo bechari kab se is pal ke liye mari ja rahi thi, ab uski mohobbat or zyada gehri ho jayegi... Or uska sharmana... To bas keher dha raha tha...
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Ab ye scientist kon aa gaye, or kiski lab hai ye, kiska symbol mile hain inhen...??
Kya karna chahte hain ye scientist?
Kya hai ye project green??
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Hero ne aaj apni asli maa ko dekha, jise dekhkar uski aakhon me aaunsu bhi aa gaye,
Main to ye sochkar pareshan hun, ki jab hero ko pata chalega ki jinko vo apne asli maa baao manta hai,
Wo uske asli maa baap nahin hain
To kya guzregi hero ke dil par?
Par isse ek bada fayda hero ko future me ho sakta hai... Or wo hai hero ki di or ritu se shadi...
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mom ko sach me kuchh pata to nahin chal gaya, hero or sinam ke baare me... Ya unhone aise hi bol diya tha..
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Ritu or Rashika bhi aa chuki hain,
Apni aadat ke anusaar phir se ladai hogi RD or ritu ke beech,
Wo bhi kya din the, jab Ritu RD ke liye apni jaan dene ke liye jharne ke oopar se kood gayi thi,
Par hai badi ziddi,
Kabhi kabhi hero se iski ladai, bohot achchhi lagti hai, to kqbhi - kabhi bohot gussa bhi aata hai...
Ab aapki lekhni hi aisi hai ki kabhi aap hame gussa dilate ho to kabhi khushi...
Yahi to ek asli writer ki pehchan hai...
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Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai...
Or isi liye aage ka intzaar..
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KEEP POSTING:checkpm:
&
KEEP SMILING :wink::smile:
Thanks Baba Bhai...
 

RD193

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Story slow nahin hai... Normal speed me hai... Or isko aisa hi rehne do..
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Bhai aapse ek request or hai...
Jaisa ki aapne bataya ki ek heroin ko marna hoga... To bhai...

Divya & Di in dono ko baksh dena...
Kyonki abhi tak.
story se ye hi jaan paya hun ki sabse zyada payaar hero ko.
yahi dono karti hain...
Baaki aap kisi ko bhi uda do.. koi dukh na hoga...
Or sonam ka charecter clear karke aaone bohot achchha kiya, kyonki is question ko lekar main bhi confuse tha...
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KEEP WRITING BHAI
Thanks Bro....
 
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UPDATE 21

Phir Maine Chika ko liya aur vaha se Dharti ki taraf nikal pada hum Dono kuch hi der me Dharti par aa Gaye............................

AGE............................


Waise Maine to Dharti par Chika ko laya to tha par uska rahne ka koi Abhi Tak intzaam nahi Kiya tha..

aur sabse badi baat Chika ek Nili chamdi Wala alien hai..To use aise Yaha par ghumane to nahi de sakte..

aur Abhi hum logo ko kahi Jana bhi to hai to Isliye Mai Chika ko vaha se Apne secret Jagah le Gaya...

Ye vahi secret Jagah thi jaha par Bhai mujhe pahli Baar le Gaye the..

Jaha par mujhe unhone The Rock ke bare me Sab kuch Bata Diya tha..

Ye Jagah Chika ke liye bahut hi nayi thi.. aur Unki Jagah se technology ke mamle me bahut hi piche..

to sidhi si baat hai wo aise Dekhega hi na Sab aur.Tabhi ek abaj ati hai.. Jo Simran ki thi..

ab Aap logo ko yaad hi hogi Simran.. Jo vaha par hone wale The Rock ke har ek Kaam me help karti hai..

Lekin wo Koi Aurat nahi hai wo to Bus ek Programming Robo hai bus Physically nahi hai..

Simran - Good Evening RD.. Bahut Dino baad aye ho Aap yaha...

Mai- Ha kuch kaam me busy ho Gaya tha kuch Jyada hi lekin ab Daily yaha aaunga...

Simran- Ha mujhe Pata hai Aapki yaddast Chali gayi thi.. aur Maine Reports bhi check Kiye the..

par us bare me Mai koi Help nahi Kar payi thi Lekin ye huva kaise.. Matlab Aap Thik...

Mai- bus yahi samaj lo Tumhare Pyaar ki bajah se Mai Thik ho Gaya.

Simran- Kyu Majak Kar rahe ho RD... Ye Sab to Aap hi ki den hai..

Jo Mai Aapse itna free bol pa rahi hu.. Varna pahle to sirf Kaam ki hi baate hoti rahti thi...

Mai- Ye to Sirf Shuruwat hai Simran.. ab Dekho Mai Tumhe kaise Update karta hu.. Lekin usme ye hamari help karenge...

Simran- Lekin ye to dikhne se mujhe koi alien Dikhte hai...

( Ab Aap sab Soch rahe honge ki Ye physically nahi hai to sabko dekh kaise rahi hai to Vaha par Jo camera fit Kiye huye hai Unki madad se..)

Mai- ha Sahi kaha Tumne.. Ye vahi hai Par hamare friend hai Aur ab se ye Hamari help bhi karenge...

Chika to bus us Abaj ko sune ja raha tha.. Kyu ki use na to Hamari bate samaj me aa rahi thi..

aur na hi wo samaj pa rahe the ki Abaj kaha se aa rahi hai..

par wo itna to samaj Gaye the ki ye kisi Robot ki Abaj hai Jo yaha ye Sab handle kar rahi hai..

Ye Aisa System Unke yaha to aam baat hai.. Kyu ki Unke yaha aisi chije bacho ka khyal rakhti hai.. ya agar koi Chota-bada Kam ho to usme iska use hota hai...

To ab Mai Chika se kahta hu....

Mai- Chika Tumhe yaha aakar kuch Jyada problem to nahi ho rahi hai na Matlab yaha ke Environment ki...

Chika-No RD.. Matlab kuch hai par Jyada nahi.. Kyu ki Mai usi tayari se hi yaha Aya tha..

Usne Apne ek Bag ko bada Kiya aur unme se kuch to nikala Jo wo mujhe dikhate huye bola..

Chika-Ye Dekho RD.. Ise khane se Hum kahi bhi kisi bhi environment me 6month Tak jinda rah sakte hai..

Kyu ki ye Hamare Body ko us Jagah ke natural environment se match karne me help karti hai...

Aur sath hi vaha par jaise aliens Matlab log rahte hai Unke Body structure Matlab Colour se lekar Language Tak Sab change Kar deti hai...

Mai to Chika ke is baat se kuch der ke liye Shock hi rah Gaya.. halanki mujhe in sab chijo ki jarurat nahi thi...

Par aisi bhi chije hai ye Sunkar Mai kuch surprised huva...

Lekin us waqt mere Dimag me ek sawal Aya to Maine Chika se pucha...

Mai- To Chika mujhe ek Baat batao.. Tum wo Chij khane se Tumhari Body yaha ke environment ko match karegi..

Matlab tolerate karegi. Tumhare body ka colour hamare Jaisa ho jayega.. Par language ka kuch samaj nahi Aya..

halanki Mai Abhi bhi tumhare language me baat Kar raha hu par Tum hamare.. Matlab kaise....

Chika- Mujhe Pata tha RD Aap ye sawal jarur puchoge.. mujhe bhi pata hai Aapko aise chijo ki jarurat nahi hai

Par hum Aap jaise to nahi hai To suniye iska Jawab.. to iska Sidha sa Jawab hai..

ye Jo Chij hai uske Khane se Hamare Dimag par bhi Asar hone lagta hai..

aur hum jis bhi Jagah hum chale Jaye to Jab Hum kisi aliens ko dekh lete hai..

To wo Chij khane ke baad Humari Body ka structure Usi ki tarah ho jata hai...

Aur uske pass jitna bhi knowledge hai us Jagah ke bare me Wo Hume Gyat ho Jata hai.. plus Hamara khud ka knowledge....

Mai- Wahh.. Chika Bhai Apne Kya samajya hai mujhe..Mai to full samaj Gaya jaise..

Waise Aap vaha koi professor ho Kya.. kis tarah samajaya hai Apne...

Agar aisi technology Sach me Apke yaha hai to hum Sach me bahut piche hai apse...

Chika- Aap nahi yaha ke log... Balki ye to Sab Aap hi ki den hai Hume... Aur jaha se Aap hai Vaha par to aise chijo ka koi mol hi nahi hai...

Mai- uske bare me Tumse baad me baat karunga Mai.. pahle batao Ab Tum kiska Roop Lena chahate ho...

Chika- koi Aisa do..Jisko yaha ke bare me sabkuch malum hai..

har ek language ati ho aur yaha ke technology ke bare me bhi Janta hai..

Mai sochne laga ki aisa kon hai Jo is catagary me fit hota hai...

Mai-Chika koi Photo bhi Chalegi Kya Unki ya Body hi chahiye...

Chika- Ha RD Photo hi Chalegi lekin full honi chahiye...

To ab Mai sochne laga ki ise aise Kon de Diya Jaye tabhi mere Dimag me Gita ki baat yaad ati hai..

Jo mujhe wo uske Papa ke bare me Bata rahi thi.. Uske Papa ko Sab language ati thi..

aur sath hi Unko Naye Naye technology ke bare me janne me Bahut dilchaspi thi..

to Maine Socha Kyu na Chika ko Gita ke father me change Kar Diya Jaye ...

To Mai Jhat se Gita ke Ghar Gaya aur Vaha se Gita ke Father ek Pic lekar Chika ke pass vaha aa gaya..

Mai- Chika ye lo ye Picture hai.. Tum inke body ka structure le sakte ho...

Chika ne wo picture mere hatho se li aur ek Baar use dekha to Chika mujhse kahta hai...

Chika-Thik hai RD Mai iska Body structure bana leta hu... Par uske liye mujhe 18 hours lagenge..

Kyu ki inke Body ka structure plus inke Dimagi Knowledge ke bare me jaan saku...

Aur in 18 hours me Mai Behosh rahunga.. aur iske liye mujhe ek Shant Jagah bhi chahiye...

Mai-Tumhe Jitna waqt Lena hai le lo... Mai Kal isi time par yaha aata hu.. Tab Tak Aap Ready ho jayenge I think...

Chika-Ha jarur RD.. tum fiqar mat karo. Usi ke sath yaha par mujhe dikh hi raha hai ki...

Yaha par bahut se aise equipment hai jinki mujhe jarurat padegi to kya Mai ye use Kar sakta hu...

Mai-Kyu nahi Chika(Simran ko Abaj dete huye) Simran Chika ko Unke kaam me full help karna..

Mai inhe full Authority deta hu yaha ki Ab se tum inki sari bate manogi...

Simran- ji RD...

Mai- Aur ha Starting me Tumhe Unki Language samaj me Nahi ayegi..

to Tumhare Andar Mai Inke language ki jankari daal deta hu..

jisse Tumhe inki Language samajne me asani ho Aur tum inki full help par Sako...

Phir mai ek PC ke samne Gaya aur usme kuch karne laga aur vahi par Hath rakhne ke liye ek Jagah thi...

vaha par Apna hath rakhkar Chika ke language ke bare me gyan Simran ko dene laga...

Do minutes baad Simran ko full Gyan dene ke baad Maine Apna hath piche khich liya to ab Simran full ready thi..

To Maine Chika ki taraf dekha aur unse kahne laga...

Mai-Ab Aap yaha par Apni tarah se kaam Kar sakte hu aur wo bhi Apne hi language me..

Maine Apki language Is System me daal di hai.. ab Aap Jo bhi kahegi ye System sunegi..

Aur usme Aap ka full support karegi aur agar kuch problem hogi to Batayegi bhi...

Chika- ji RD.. ab Aap yaha se chale jayiyega ab hum Kal Subah hi mileage Naye Roop ke sath...

Mai Chika ke is baat par smile dekar vaha se nikal pada Apne Ghar..............................
 
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