Fantasy RUDRADIP- The God And Devil

[Aj1980]

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[Raja thakur]

UPDATE 20

Tabhi piche se Ritu aur Rasika bhi sath aate huye dikhayi dete hai Mujhe to Mai kuch kahte huye vahi Ruk Jata hu..............................

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Ritu-Kyu be Mote aaj bada jaldi Uth Gaya...

Mai- Ha Maine Socha ki bahut din huye kisi ka sada huva muh nahi Dekh to Socha aaj Dekh hi lu...

Ritu-(Gusse se) Kisko bol raha hai Tu..

Mai- Nahi Meri Chipkali Mai tujhe kabhi kahunga Kya itne jaldi marna nahi hai mujhe..

Mai to Aaj college Jane Wala tha na to Usi ke bare me hi bata raha tha...

Ritu-Phir Thik hai par Agar tune mere bare me Socha bhi na to Acha nahi hoga yaad rakhna..

Hum Dono ki nokjhok aise pure khana khate huye chal rahi thi.. aur Sab hamare aise bate sunte huye maja le rahe the..

Uske baad Mai college Chala Gaya... Aise hi 5-6 din Gujare..

ab Baba ko Naye Ghar me shift Kiya tha to Mai Roj vaha jakar aa Jata...Ab to Rani se bhi Meri pahle ki tarah bate ho rahi thi..

Lekin Abhi Tak Rani me koi me badlav nahi Aya tha.. wo pahle jaise thi waisi Abhi bhi hai..

aur Baba ka ek Jo Beta tha uska Naam Sunil tha.. wo Abhi Tak mujhe dikha nahi to Maine Baba se uske bare me pucha...

To unhone kaha ki Sunil kahi kisi kaam se Bahar Gaya hai... Wo kuch din me aa jayega Tab usse mil Lena..

aur Vaha se sidha Mai Gita ki taraf Jata usse Milne...

Ab to Sab Sahi chal raha tha.. ab to mere exam bhi najdik aye huye the.. uske baad 2 month chutti..

To us 2 Month me Kya hoga Kya nahi wo to Baad me pata Chalega..

Ab ate hai Di par.. to Mere life me itna kuch ho raha tha ki iski bajah se Di se Meri Jyada bate hi nahi ho rahi thi..

Aur mujhe bhi ye mahsus ho raha tha.. To ab maine Jyada tar samay Di ke sath Gujarne ka soch raha tha..

Par usse pahle mere palle Jo kaam pade hai unko niptane ki soch raha tha.. aur Ab waqt aa chuka tha mere Kaam ki Shuruwat karne ka...

Waise bhi in Ladkiyo ko jitna bhi Time du Kam hi padta hai..

aur jab in ladkiyo ko ek Dusre ke bare me pata lagega tab Kya haal hoga Mera..Sab se Jyada to mujhe Ritu se dar tha..

Na Jane wo Kya Kar baithe jab usko in sab ke bare me pata lagega..

Aur rahi Sonam ki baat yaha Sonam ne bhi Apni tayari kar li thi..Matlab usne Bhaiya aur Papa ke mind padh liye the..

Aur use Sab Pata chal Gaya tha hamare business ke bare me aur Unke ideas...

Lekin unko dikhne ke liye Sonam Kabhi Kabhi Papa se to Kabhi Bhaiya see Chote ho ya badhe kuch bhi sawal puchti thi..

Aur wo Dono bhi khulkar us sawal ka Jawab de dete the.. halanki Sonam ko us sawal ka Jawab pahle se pata tha..

Aur rahi Rasika ki baat to use kuch karne ka tha hi nahi..Wo to hai hi Ek Jin..

Isliye wo Chutkiyo me Sab pa sakti hai.. waise bhi in Dino me Mera aur Rasika ka jyada sampark nahi huva hai..

Aaj mujhe Jana tha Chicka ko lane ke liye.. waise Aapko Chika to yaad hoga na..

Agar nahi hai to kuch yaad dila du Chika vahi hai Jo Dharti se bahut Dur Rahta hai Aur wo vaha ka bahut bada scientist bhi hai..

Jab Meri Yaddast Chali gayi thi tab mai Unse Mila tha..Aur Phir yaddast laut ane ke baad unke Grah ko bachaya bhi tha...

Waise Kal hi Maine Chika ko message Kar Diya tha ki Mai aa raha hu ready ho.. To Chalo ab waqt aa chuka hai...

Mai Subah ready huva aur Phir khana khakar Bahar nikalne hi Wala tha Tabhi mujhe Di dikhayi di to Maine unhe roka..

Di- Kya huva Dipu.. Kya baat hai aaj itne jaldi kaha ja raha hai...

Mai- kuch nahi Di wo kuch kaam se ja raha hu ane me der ho jayegi.. to agar koi puche to Aap sambhal lena..

Di- Ha ha Thik hai sambhal lungi.. (Tana marte huye) aur waise bhi aaj Kal tu Ghar se Jyada Bahar hi Dhyan de raha hai...

Ye bolte huye Di ne Ajib sa muh Kiya tha.. jaise mujhse bahut Gussa ho..

is bare me Mai Di se baat to karna chahata tha par Socha ye Kam Kar ke aau phir di se Aram se baat karta hu...

Phir Mai vaha se Bahar aa Gaya aur Pal bhar me hi vaha se Gayab ho Gaya...

Ab mujhe kahi Jane ke liye Ansh ki madad to nahi Leni padti thi...

Aur bahut Dino se mujhe Ansh bhi nahi dikhayi Diya..usse bhi baad me baat karenge Abhi chalte hai Chika ke Ghar ki taraf...

Kuch 5 second baad hi Mai vaha pahucha Gaya.. Jaha par Chika Rahta tha.. aur Mai upar se hi us Puri Duniya ko dekhne laga..

Humne jaisi chodi thi waisi ki waisi hi thi.. Sab Log Apne kaam me busy ho Gaye the...

Aur Sab technology se chal rahe the.. yaha par Sab Shanti se chal raha tha..

To Mai vaha se Chika Ghar ki taraf nikal pada.. Jab Mai vaha pahucha to Sab ka Dhyan kahi aur hi tha..

Matlab vaha par Sab log milkar khana kha rahe the.. Tabhi Pika aur Mika Jo Chika ke Bache the..

unka Dhyan Meri aur Gaya to wo Dono khana chodkar Meri aur Bhagkar ane lage...

Unko Aisa chillate huye ane se Chika aur Wita Jo Chika ki wife hai uska Dhyan bhi Meri aur Gaya..

to wo Dono bhi Meri Aur dekhte huye Apna khana chodkar khade ho Gaye...

Mika aur Pika ne to ate hi Mujhe gale laga liya...

Pika- Bhaiya Aap aa Gaye... Pata hai Maine Apko kitna miss Kiya.. jitna kisi ne nahi Kiya ho...

Mika- Ye pika Tujhse Jyada Maine mids Kiya hai...

Pika- Nahi Maine Kiya hai...

Mai-tum Dono ladna band Karo Kyu ki tum Dono se Jyada Maine Tum sabko miss Kiya hai samje...

Ye baat sunkar Vaha ke sabke chehare par smile thi.. to pika kahta hai ..

Pika-To Bhaiya Aap sirf Chika ko hi Kyu sath le ja rahe ho.. Hume Kyu nahi Hume bhi to Ana hai aapke Ghar...

Mai- Jarur Mai Tum Sab logo ko Apne Ghar le jaunga . Par usse pahle mujhe kuch kaam hai vaha..

to Chika ke sath vaha ka kaam hote hi Mai tum Sab ko yaha se Apne Ghar le jaunga...

Mika- Sachi Bhaiya... Aap Sach kah rahe ho ..

Mai- Maine kabhi jhuth bola hai Tum logo se nahi na Phir...

Chika- Chalo bacho Bhaiya itne Dur se aye hai unhe khana to khane do...

Mai-(Chika ki taraf jate huye). nahi Chika Mai Abhi ghar se khakar ho...

Ye sunte hi Sab shock ho Gaye Aur Meri taraf ajib sj najar se dekhne lage to Chicka kahta hai..

Chika- (Shock hote huye) Abhi Matlab kab nikale Aap apke Ghar se...

Mai- Abhi kuch 5 minutes ho Gaye honge...

Ye sunkar to Sab aur bhi shock ho Gaye to Phir se ek Baar lekin is Baar Chika haste huye kahta hai...

Chika- Hum to Bhul hi Gaye the ki hum kisse baat Kar rahe hai..Jo God of Speed hai unse...

Mai- itna bhi kuch bada nahi hu Mai.. Mai to ek Normal sa Insan hu...

Wita- nahi RD tum Apne Aap ko Insan samajne ki Bhul mat Karo tum unse bhi pare ho..

jab Tumhe is baat ka ahsas hoga na tab Tumhe Hamari baat Sach lagegi..

Mai- (Pika se) Waise aaj Tum Dono school nahi Gaye...

Wita-Kaise jate Aaj un Dono ke Dad pahli baar yaha se itna dur Jo ja rahe hai...

Ye kahte huye Unki Ankho se kuch ansu nikalne lage to Chicka ne jakar Wita ko gale lagaya aur uske Ansu puche to Mai kahne laga..

Mai-Nahi ji Hum Sab Apse Dur hokar bhi pass hai.. jab bhi Aap Hume bulaogi..

uske dusre hi Kshan me hum yaha pahucha jayenge.. Isliye Aap ye mat samjiye hum apse Dur hai...

Aise hi Kuch der Unki Family bate chalti rahi phir Maine Chika ko chalne ko kaha to Wo bhi ready ho Gaya..

par Uski bag mujhe nahi dikh rahi thi.. to Maine Chika se pucha..

Mai-Waise Chika tumhari bags nahi dikh rahe hai mujhe. Tumne kuch saman nahi liya Apne sath..

Chika-liya hai na bahut liya hai Dekhna chahiye to ye Dekho...

Ye kahte huye Chika ne Apne Jeb me hath dala Aur vaha se bahut hi chothe chote Bags nikale..

itne chote ki Apni ungli itne Aur unme ek press ka key bhi thi.. to Chika ne ek bag ko press kiya..

To wo bag bhi bahut bada huva.. ye Dekhkar to Mai Shock hi rah Gaya..

aur mere Chehare par ek ajib si muskurahat bhi aa gayi ye dekhte huye...

Phir Maine Chika ko liya aur vaha se Dharti ki taraf nikal pada hum Dono kuch hi der me Dharti par aa Gaye............................

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[Raj]

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[Siraj Patel]

Excellent update bhai ekdum jhakaas dhamakedaar mind-blowing

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[Siraj Patel]

Bhai story ko Maine Abhi to restart Kiya hai uske kuch 19 update hi huye honge...
Aur isi 19 update me dusre part ko pahle part se Milana bhi to padta hai...aur ab koi Bhul Jaye to Aap hi bolte ho ye Kon aa Gaya bich me... Isliye Aapko Aisa lag raha hai lekin Mai Puri kosjisk karunga..
Aur rahi Sonam ki baat to Sonam ab Dharti par aa gayi hai... To sidhi si baat hai ki usne uski taraf se Pati bhi maan liya ho par yaha ki parampara bhi ab wo janti hai...
Aur wo bhi ek ladki hi hai na..Aur Ladkiyo ja to Sharma Inka gehana hota hai... Konsi bhi nayi dulhan ho ya koi bhi first Time to wo na nukur to karegi hi na...
Phir age jakar wo free ho jati hai...
Ha Mai ye baat manta hu ki Di ke bare me Kyu ki pahle Mai bhi khud confused tha lekin Abhi sure hu Kya karna hai to wo bhi Jald hi aa jayengi...
Aur RD ki asliyat bhi jab wo Apne Mom se milega tab jitna ho sake utna batane ki koshish karunga.. aur Usi me Ritika ka bhi Past aa jayega...
Aur rahi Ladkiyo ki baat to Unke liye Mai khud kuch confuse hu... Lekin Jald wo bhi solve Kar dunga...
Lekin Aap Sab se Abhi se ek baat kahna chahata hu future ke bare me ki Koi to ek hai Jo heroin maregi..
Lekin wo kon hai aur kab.. uske liye Abhi bahut Time hai tab Tak Aap Sab enjoy Kare...
Aur agar Aap sabko ye story bahut hi slow dikh rahi hai to Aap batao Mai iss bhaga deta hu...
Ab Aap hi bataiye mujhe Sab...........

Koi baat nahi bhai aap bilkul sahi ja rahe ho aapne Story ka end Jis Tarah Se Soch Rakha Hai Waise hi continue karo.
Lekin update Daily diya karo bhai aur ho sake to kabhi kabhi mega update bhi diya karo please.

 

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UPDATE 20

Tabhi piche se Ritu aur Rasika bhi sath aate huye dikhayi dete hai Mujhe to Mai kuch kahte huye vahi Ruk Jata hu..............................

AGE............................


Ritu-Kyu be Mote aaj bada jaldi Uth Gaya...

Mai- Ha Maine Socha ki bahut din huye kisi ka sada huva muh nahi Dekh to Socha aaj Dekh hi lu...

Ritu-(Gusse se) Kisko bol raha hai Tu..

Mai- Nahi Meri Chipkali Mai tujhe kabhi kahunga Kya itne jaldi marna nahi hai mujhe..

Mai to Aaj college Jane Wala tha na to Usi ke bare me hi bata raha tha...

Ritu-Phir Thik hai par Agar tune mere bare me Socha bhi na to Acha nahi hoga yaad rakhna..

Hum Dono ki nokjhok aise pure khana khate huye chal rahi thi.. aur Sab hamare aise bate sunte huye maja le rahe the..

Uske baad Mai college Chala Gaya... Aise hi 5-6 din Gujare..

ab Baba ko Naye Ghar me shift Kiya tha to Mai Roj vaha jakar aa Jata...Ab to Rani se bhi Meri pahle ki tarah bate ho rahi thi..

Lekin Abhi Tak Rani me koi me badlav nahi Aya tha.. wo pahle jaise thi waisi Abhi bhi hai..

aur Baba ka ek Jo Beta tha uska Naam Sunil tha.. wo Abhi Tak mujhe dikha nahi to Maine Baba se uske bare me pucha...

To unhone kaha ki Sunil kahi kisi kaam se Bahar Gaya hai... Wo kuch din me aa jayega Tab usse mil Lena..

aur Vaha se sidha Mai Gita ki taraf Jata usse Milne...

Ab to Sab Sahi chal raha tha.. ab to mere exam bhi najdik aye huye the.. uske baad 2 month chutti..

To us 2 Month me Kya hoga Kya nahi wo to Baad me pata Chalega..

Ab ate hai Di par.. to Mere life me itna kuch ho raha tha ki iski bajah se Di se Meri Jyada bate hi nahi ho rahi thi..

Aur mujhe bhi ye mahsus ho raha tha.. To ab maine Jyada tar samay Di ke sath Gujarne ka soch raha tha..

Par usse pahle mere palle Jo kaam pade hai unko niptane ki soch raha tha.. aur Ab waqt aa chuka tha mere Kaam ki Shuruwat karne ka...

Waise bhi in Ladkiyo ko jitna bhi Time du Kam hi padta hai..

aur jab in ladkiyo ko ek Dusre ke bare me pata lagega tab Kya haal hoga Mera..Sab se Jyada to mujhe Ritu se dar tha..

Na Jane wo Kya Kar baithe jab usko in sab ke bare me pata lagega..

Aur rahi Sonam ki baat yaha Sonam ne bhi Apni tayari kar li thi..Matlab usne Bhaiya aur Papa ke mind padh liye the..

Aur use Sab Pata chal Gaya tha hamare business ke bare me aur Unke ideas...

Lekin unko dikhne ke liye Sonam Kabhi Kabhi Papa se to Kabhi Bhaiya see Chote ho ya badhe kuch bhi sawal puchti thi..

Aur wo Dono bhi khulkar us sawal ka Jawab de dete the.. halanki Sonam ko us sawal ka Jawab pahle se pata tha..

Aur rahi Rasika ki baat to use kuch karne ka tha hi nahi..Wo to hai hi Ek Jin..

Isliye wo Chutkiyo me Sab pa sakti hai.. waise bhi in Dino me Mera aur Rasika ka jyada sampark nahi huva hai..

Aaj mujhe Jana tha Chicka ko lane ke liye.. waise Aapko Chika to yaad hoga na..

Agar nahi hai to kuch yaad dila du Chika vahi hai Jo Dharti se bahut Dur Rahta hai Aur wo vaha ka bahut bada scientist bhi hai..

Jab Meri Yaddast Chali gayi thi tab mai Unse Mila tha..Aur Phir yaddast laut ane ke baad unke Grah ko bachaya bhi tha...

Waise Kal hi Maine Chika ko message Kar Diya tha ki Mai aa raha hu ready ho.. To Chalo ab waqt aa chuka hai...

Mai Subah ready huva aur Phir khana khakar Bahar nikalne hi Wala tha Tabhi mujhe Di dikhayi di to Maine unhe roka..

Di- Kya huva Dipu.. Kya baat hai aaj itne jaldi kaha ja raha hai...

Mai- kuch nahi Di wo kuch kaam se ja raha hu ane me der ho jayegi.. to agar koi puche to Aap sambhal lena..

Di- Ha ha Thik hai sambhal lungi.. (Tana marte huye) aur waise bhi aaj Kal tu Ghar se Jyada Bahar hi Dhyan de raha hai...

Ye bolte huye Di ne Ajib sa muh Kiya tha.. jaise mujhse bahut Gussa ho..

is bare me Mai Di se baat to karna chahata tha par Socha ye Kam Kar ke aau phir di se Aram se baat karta hu...

Phir Mai vaha se Bahar aa Gaya aur Pal bhar me hi vaha se Gayab ho Gaya...

Ab mujhe kahi Jane ke liye Ansh ki madad to nahi Leni padti thi...

Aur bahut Dino se mujhe Ansh bhi nahi dikhayi Diya..usse bhi baad me baat karenge Abhi chalte hai Chika ke Ghar ki taraf...

Kuch 5 second baad hi Mai vaha pahucha Gaya.. Jaha par Chika Rahta tha.. aur Mai upar se hi us Puri Duniya ko dekhne laga..

Humne jaisi chodi thi waisi ki waisi hi thi.. Sab Log Apne kaam me busy ho Gaye the...

Aur Sab technology se chal rahe the.. yaha par Sab Shanti se chal raha tha..

To Mai vaha se Chika Ghar ki taraf nikal pada.. Jab Mai vaha pahucha to Sab ka Dhyan kahi aur hi tha..

Matlab vaha par Sab log milkar khana kha rahe the.. Tabhi Pika aur Mika Jo Chika ke Bache the..

unka Dhyan Meri aur Gaya to wo Dono khana chodkar Meri aur Bhagkar ane lage...

Unko Aisa chillate huye ane se Chika aur Wita Jo Chika ki wife hai uska Dhyan bhi Meri aur Gaya..

to wo Dono bhi Meri Aur dekhte huye Apna khana chodkar khade ho Gaye...

Mika aur Pika ne to ate hi Mujhe gale laga liya...

Pika- Bhaiya Aap aa Gaye... Pata hai Maine Apko kitna miss Kiya.. jitna kisi ne nahi Kiya ho...

Mika- Ye pika Tujhse Jyada Maine mids Kiya hai...

Pika- Nahi Maine Kiya hai...

Mai-tum Dono ladna band Karo Kyu ki tum Dono se Jyada Maine Tum sabko miss Kiya hai samje...

Ye baat sunkar Vaha ke sabke chehare par smile thi.. to pika kahta hai ..

Pika-To Bhaiya Aap sirf Chika ko hi Kyu sath le ja rahe ho.. Hume Kyu nahi Hume bhi to Ana hai aapke Ghar...

Mai- Jarur Mai Tum Sab logo ko Apne Ghar le jaunga . Par usse pahle mujhe kuch kaam hai vaha..

to Chika ke sath vaha ka kaam hote hi Mai tum Sab ko yaha se Apne Ghar le jaunga...

Mika- Sachi Bhaiya... Aap Sach kah rahe ho ..

Mai- Maine kabhi jhuth bola hai Tum logo se nahi na Phir...

Chika- Chalo bacho Bhaiya itne Dur se aye hai unhe khana to khane do...

Mai-(Chika ki taraf jate huye). nahi Chika Mai Abhi ghar se khakar ho...

Ye sunte hi Sab shock ho Gaye Aur Meri taraf ajib sj najar se dekhne lage to Chicka kahta hai..

Chika- (Shock hote huye) Abhi Matlab kab nikale Aap apke Ghar se...

Mai- Abhi kuch 5 minutes ho Gaye honge...

Ye sunkar to Sab aur bhi shock ho Gaye to Phir se ek Baar lekin is Baar Chika haste huye kahta hai...

Chika- Hum to Bhul hi Gaye the ki hum kisse baat Kar rahe hai..Jo God of Speed hai unse...

Mai- itna bhi kuch bada nahi hu Mai.. Mai to ek Normal sa Insan hu...

Wita- nahi RD tum Apne Aap ko Insan samajne ki Bhul mat Karo tum unse bhi pare ho..

jab Tumhe is baat ka ahsas hoga na tab Tumhe Hamari baat Sach lagegi..

Mai- (Pika se) Waise aaj Tum Dono school nahi Gaye...

Wita-Kaise jate Aaj un Dono ke Dad pahli baar yaha se itna dur Jo ja rahe hai...

Ye kahte huye Unki Ankho se kuch ansu nikalne lage to Chicka ne jakar Wita ko gale lagaya aur uske Ansu puche to Mai kahne laga..

Mai-Nahi ji Hum Sab Apse Dur hokar bhi pass hai.. jab bhi Aap Hume bulaogi..

uske dusre hi Kshan me hum yaha pahucha jayenge.. Isliye Aap ye mat samjiye hum apse Dur hai...

Aise hi Kuch der Unki Family bate chalti rahi phir Maine Chika ko chalne ko kaha to Wo bhi ready ho Gaya..

par Uski bag mujhe nahi dikh rahi thi.. to Maine Chika se pucha..

Mai-Waise Chika tumhari bags nahi dikh rahe hai mujhe. Tumne kuch saman nahi liya Apne sath..

Chika-liya hai na bahut liya hai Dekhna chahiye to ye Dekho...

Ye kahte huye Chika ne Apne Jeb me hath dala Aur vaha se bahut hi chothe chote Bags nikale..

itne chote ki Apni ungli itne Aur unme ek press ka key bhi thi.. to Chika ne ek bag ko press kiya..

To wo bag bhi bahut bada huva.. ye Dekhkar to Mai Shock hi rah Gaya..

aur mere Chehare par ek ajib si muskurahat bhi aa gayi ye dekhte huye...

Phir Maine Chika ko liya aur vaha se Dharti ki taraf nikal pada hum Dono kuch hi der me Dharti par aa Gaye............................

is update me bhai tumne sabhi ko yaad karliya kisiki baat ka itna ghusa nikal woh bhi sahi dhang se matlab baato ka jawab tumne writing sevde diya...
tumne gita,di,chika,pika,mika aur wita aur us se mehatvpurn apne ansh ka bhi jikr is update me kardiya headsoff

 

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