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Adultery Rudra (adventure story) ( Completed )

Kya me is story me magic aur super natural power add karu

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Dhamesh singh (dad) died

Jyoti singh (mom) died

Rudra (hero)

Rahul (side hero)

Anjali (rudra's love interest and sister of rahul) died

Sanjana (mother of rahul and anjali) died

Siddharth (father of rahul) died

Bade papa= sujit singh sodhi (died but his body captured by igris) unexplored character

Mahamahim (friend of igris) unexplored character

Sura (friend of igris) unexplored character

Aacharya (friend of igris) unexplored character

Balveer (son of sujit singh sodhi) 1st villain

niraj pandey (rahul ke chacha) 2nd villain

Choudhary (died but his body captured by myasur) unexplored character 3rd villain

Mr. X (kaal) slave of mayasur 4th villain

Mohini (another asur and slave of mayasur) 5th villain

Daitya (somer relationship with rahul and rudra) unexplored character

Paritosh thakur (famous business man friend of raj singh) unexplored character

Raj singh (city ka mla) unexplored character

abhay = CBI chief ki post par hai (friend of siddharth)

Abhi (cbi officer and friend of Rudra)

Sam cbi officer and junior of abhi

Arun cbi officer and junior of abhi

Dev cbi officer and junior of abhi

Sangeeta cbi officer and junior of abhi

Ram sharma (criminal killed by rudra (beast) brother of sahdev)

Sahdev UCA ka agent "agent lion" and friend of rudra

Some secret police services

STF (secret task force)

SST (secret service team)

UCA (under cover agency)

Bhau another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Ranga another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Lucky hacker from underworld killed by bhau

Shankar mahadevan (olg PM of india killed by abhi slave of bhau)

Trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra and also slave of mohini

Ojha slave of trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra

Sukka guardian of rudra in isla planet

Zeba guardian of rudra in isla planet

Friends of rudra in isla planet

harry isla ke main city ka prince unexplored character

simona Sirius desh ki princess unexplored character

somi Sirius desh ki second princess unexplored character

kayko argon desh ka prince unexplored character

sayli sinour desh ki princess unexplored character

Another characters

Lord of the spiritual beasts (rahul)

Lord of dragons

Lord of demon warriors (agrasen)

Lord of demon magicians

Professor albus principal of royal magic academy in isla

Professor snape professor and co founder of royal magic academy in isla

Professor Hagrid professor in royal magic academy in isla

Professor oak professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

Professor nura professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

There are more characters are comming in story

Main villain???
 
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Phir jab rudra ne sukka aur zeba ke andar se nikalte hue urja ko mahsus kiya toh woh har baar ki tarah us urja ko sokne laga aur jald hi uski sari thakan mit jati hai toh woh waha se uthkar wapas apne ghar ke andar chala jata hai aur jaise hi woh apne bed pe laita use nind aa gayi aur woh wahi bed par so gaya

Wahi dusri taraf

Jab zeba aur sukka ne apna dhyan lagane ke baad apni aakhe kholi toh apne saamne rudra ko na dekh kar dono bhi shocked ho gaye aur dono turant hi use aawaj dene lage lekin apne rudra mahashay toh mast ghode bech ke so rahe the

Wahi aawaj dene ke baad me bhi jab rudra ka koi jawab nahi aaya toh dono aur bhi jyada chintit ho gaye aur sukka turant ghar ke pass ke jagahon par dhundhne laga aur zeba use ghar ke andar dhundne lagi

Jaise hi zeba apne ghar ke darwaje pe pahuchi toh use rudra wahi sote hue dikha sote waqt rudra ka masoom sa chehara dekh ke woh darwaje pe hi jam gayi jab sukka ne zeba ko ek tak ghar ke andar ghurte dekha toh woh bhi uske pass pahuch gaya aur jab usne bhi andar ka nazara dekha toh woh bhi rudra ke masoom chehre me kho gaya

Aur jab sukka aur zeba dono ne bhi ek dusre ko dekha toh dono ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi phir uske baad zeba apne kaam karne ghar ke andar chali gayi aur sukka ghar ke bahar chala gaya apni kheti karne

Aise hi hasi mazak karte hue aur 5 saal nikal gaye ab rudra aur rahul dono bhi 10 saal ke ho gaye the

In 10 saalon me rudra ko apne BR ne ache se train kar diya tha abhi rudra ki speed kisi bhi aam aadmi se 100 guna jyada aur uska dimag bhi ab shant rahne laga tha ab rudra ne us hare urja gole se kai sare stones nikal ke apne andar sama liye the uske pass kon kon si shaktiya thi ye toh woh khud bhi nahi jaanta tha lekin ab uski taakat aur uska sharir 10 varsh ke baalak se atyadhik jyada shakti shaali aur pari purn tha

Rudra ab BR pe itna bharosha karne laga tha ki woh jo bhi bole woh rudra ke liye pathar ki lakeer thi aur rudra ne bhi apni shaktiya aur apna samarthya bahut ache se sab se chupa ke rakha tha yaha tak zeba aur sukka ko bhi is baat ka pata nahi chalne diya tha ab rudra ka mind itna power ful ho gaya tha ki woh jab chahe tab bina dhyan me baithe bhi BR se baate kar sakta aur jab bhi rudra ko kisi shakti ki jarurat hoti toh BR hi uski shaktiyon ko jarurat ke hisab se pravahit karta

Iske piche ka reason ye hai ki jab bachpan me rudra chupke se ghar ke bahar nikal gaya tha tab apne masti mud me CR ne lagbhag aadha jungle jala diya tha lekin sahi samay me BR ne aag par control kar liya aur apne jadu se sab kuch theek kar diya aur jungle ko bhi pahle jaisa kar diya tha

Tab se leke ab tak BR ne sari jadui shaktiyon pe apna control le liya tha aur saath hi woh rudra ko aur bhi bahut si shaktiya aur vidyaon ki jaankari CR ko deta rahta tha jisse CR jald hi apne ap ko aur taakatwar bana raha tha lekin khud CR ko bhi pata nahi tha ki usne kitni aur konsi shaktiyon par kabu pa liya hai

Wahi dusri taraf

Rahul ne bhi in 10 salon me apni shaktiyon ko ache se kabu kar liya tha usne dragons ke sare powers aur kalaon ko bhi sikh liya tha na sirf usne sikha tha balki usne un sabhi me maharat hasil kar li thi

Wahi D. K aur D. Q ne jo rahul ki urja shakti ko badhane ke liye jo kuch bhi prayas kiye the woh sab ka fal bhi unhe mil gaya tha ab rahul ki urja D. K ke barabar ho gayi thi jisse woh itni si umar me jyadatar dragons ko hara chuka tha

Wahi dragons lok par is waqt ek bade jwalamukhi ke andar lava ke samudra ke bicho bich ek maidan bana hua tha jaha is waqt 2 log khade the jin mese ek toh apna rahul hi tha aur dusra aadmi kon tha ye pata nahi hai wahi dragon lok ke sare dragons us jwalamukhi ke muh par khade ho kar niche un dono ko dekh rahe the

Woh dono niche khade kewal ek dusre ko dekh rahe the jaise ki aakhon se hi ek dusre ko maar denge

Abhi sab log niche dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi achanak se woh dono ek dusre ke taraf daud pade aur dekhte hi dekhte dono ek dusre se ulajh gaye uper khade log toh bas chillane ka kaam kar rahe the unhe bhi ghanta samajh aa raha hai ki niche kon kise baja raha hai

Chalo hum slow motion me dekhte hai

Toh jaise hi woh dono ek dusre ke pass pahuche waise hi us aadmi ne apna puch rahul ke chehre ke taraf badha diya lekin rahul ne niche jhuk kar us punch ko dodge kar diya aur khud uske piche aakar use kamar se uthakar niche patak diya

Lekin woh aadmi jald hi khada ho gaya aur usne phir se ek punch rahul ke chehre ke taraf badha diya jise dekh rahul phir se niche jhuk gaya lekin jaise hi woh niche jhuka us aadmi turant apna ghutna uske muh pe baja diya jisse is baar rahul jamin pe ja gira

Lekin ab rahul bhi phir se khada ho gaya aur phir usne apne punches ki jhadi hi lagadi lekin woh aadmi bhi kam nahi tha woh rahul ke jyada tar punches ko aaram se block kar raha tha jab rahul ke punches kuch slow hue toh turant hi us aadmi ne bhi apne punches ki bullet train start kar di jise ab rahul ne block karna start kar diya

Aise hi thodi der tak punches ko block karne ke baad rahul ne bhi phir se apne punches ki barish suru kar di ab dono bhale hi ek hi jagah khade the lekin dono ke bhi hath itne tej chal rahe the ki kisi ko unke hath dikh hi nahi rahe the dono ke bhi hath ek dusre se takara rahe the ki tabhi us aadmi ka ek puch jake rahul ke muh pe laga jisse woh udta hua sidha us maidan ke border par jake gira aur abhi woh niche lava ke andar girne hi wala tha ki tabhi us aadmi ne use bacha liya aur rahul ko uthake wahi lekin maidan ke andar ki taraf uske pith ke bal patak diya

Uske aisa karte hi uper khade sabhi log joro se chillane lage

Aadmi (rahul se) :- toh prince pahla dav mere naam hua

Rahul (uthte hue) :- sirf pahla dav abhi 2 dav baki hai senapati ji

Senapati :- bachpan se koshis kar rahe ho prince har baar haarte aaye hue ho aaj bhi haroge

Rahul :- bachpan aur ab me 5 salon ka antar hai senapati ji

Senapati :- toh dusre dav ki shuruwat kare

Rahul :- bilkul

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Update 111 (part 1)

Phir jab rudra ne sukka aur zeba ke andar se nikalte hue urja ko mahsus kiya toh woh har baar ki tarah us urja ko sokne laga aur jald hi uski sari thakan mit jati hai toh woh waha se uthkar wapas apne ghar ke andar chala jata hai aur jaise hi woh apne bed pe laita use nind aa gayi aur woh wahi bed par so gaya

Wahi dusri taraf

Jab zeba aur sukka ne apna dhyan lagane ke baad apni aakhe kholi toh apne saamne rudra ko na dekh kar dono bhi shocked ho gaye aur dono turant hi use aawaj dene lage lekin apne rudra mahashay toh mast ghode bech ke so rahe the

Wahi aawaj dene ke baad me bhi jab rudra ka koi jawab nahi aaya toh dono aur bhi jyada chintit ho gaye aur sukka turant ghar ke pass ke jagahon par dhundhne laga aur zeba use ghar ke andar dhundne lagi

Jaise hi zeba apne ghar ke darwaje pe pahuchi toh use rudra wahi sote hue dikha sote waqt rudra ka masoom sa chehara dekh ke woh darwaje pe hi jam gayi jab sukka ne zeba ko ek tak ghar ke andar ghurte dekha toh woh bhi uske pass pahuch gaya aur jab usne bhi andar ka nazara dekha toh woh bhi rudra ke masoom chehre me kho gaya

Aur jab sukka aur zeba dono ne bhi ek dusre ko dekha toh dono ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi phir uske baad zeba apne kaam karne ghar ke andar chali gayi aur sukka ghar ke bahar chala gaya apni kheti karne

Aise hi hasi mazak karte hue aur 5 saal nikal gaye ab rudra aur rahul dono bhi 10 saal ke ho gaye the

In 10 saalon me rudra ko apne BR ne ache se train kar diya tha abhi rudra ki speed kisi bhi aam aadmi se 100 guna jyada aur uska dimag bhi ab shant rahne laga tha ab rudra ne us hare urja gole se kai sare stones nikal ke apne andar sama liye the uske pass kon kon si shaktiya thi ye toh woh khud bhi nahi jaanta tha lekin ab uski taakat aur uska sharir 10 varsh ke baalak se atyadhik jyada shakti shaali aur pari purn tha

Rudra ab BR pe itna bharosha karne laga tha ki woh jo bhi bole woh rudra ke liye pathar ki lakeer thi aur rudra ne bhi apni shaktiya aur apna samarthya bahut ache se sab se chupa ke rakha tha yaha tak zeba aur sukka ko bhi is baat ka pata nahi chalne diya tha ab rudra ka mind itna power ful ho gaya tha ki woh jab chahe tab bina dhyan me baithe bhi BR se baate kar sakta aur jab bhi rudra ko kisi shakti ki jarurat hoti toh BR hi uski shaktiyon ko jarurat ke hisab se pravahit karta

Iske piche ka reason ye hai ki jab bachpan me rudra chupke se ghar ke bahar nikal gaya tha tab apne masti mud me CR ne lagbhag aadha jungle jala diya tha lekin sahi samay me BR ne aag par control kar liya aur apne jadu se sab kuch theek kar diya aur jungle ko bhi pahle jaisa kar diya tha

Tab se leke ab tak BR ne sari jadui shaktiyon pe apna control le liya tha aur saath hi woh rudra ko aur bhi bahut si shaktiya aur vidyaon ki jaankari CR ko deta rahta tha jisse CR jald hi apne ap ko aur taakatwar bana raha tha lekin khud CR ko bhi pata nahi tha ki usne kitni aur konsi shaktiyon par kabu pa liya hai

Wahi dusri taraf

Rahul ne bhi in 10 salon me apni shaktiyon ko ache se kabu kar liya tha usne dragons ke sare powers aur kalaon ko bhi sikh liya tha na sirf usne sikha tha balki usne un sabhi me maharat hasil kar li thi

Wahi D. K aur D. Q ne jo rahul ki urja shakti ko badhane ke liye jo kuch bhi prayas kiye the woh sab ka fal bhi unhe mil gaya tha ab rahul ki urja D. K ke barabar ho gayi thi jisse woh itni si umar me jyadatar dragons ko hara chuka tha

Wahi dragons lok par is waqt ek bade jwalamukhi ke andar lava ke samudra ke bicho bich ek maidan bana hua tha jaha is waqt 2 log khade the jin mese ek toh apna rahul hi tha aur dusra aadmi kon tha ye pata nahi hai wahi dragon lok ke sare dragons us jwalamukhi ke muh par khade ho kar niche un dono ko dekh rahe the

Woh dono niche khade kewal ek dusre ko dekh rahe the jaise ki aakhon se hi ek dusre ko maar denge

Abhi sab log niche dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi achanak se woh dono ek dusre ke taraf daud pade aur dekhte hi dekhte dono ek dusre se ulajh gaye uper khade log toh bas chillane ka kaam kar rahe the unhe bhi ghanta samajh aa raha hai ki niche kon kise baja raha hai

Chalo hum slow motion me dekhte hai

Toh jaise hi woh dono ek dusre ke pass pahuche waise hi us aadmi ne apna puch rahul ke chehre ke taraf badha diya lekin rahul ne niche jhuk kar us punch ko dodge kar diya aur khud uske piche aakar use kamar se uthakar niche patak diya

Lekin woh aadmi jald hi khada ho gaya aur usne phir se ek punch rahul ke chehre ke taraf badha diya jise dekh rahul phir se niche jhuk gaya lekin jaise hi woh niche jhuka us aadmi turant apna ghutna uske muh pe baja diya jisse is baar rahul jamin pe ja gira

Lekin ab rahul bhi phir se khada ho gaya aur phir usne apne punches ki jhadi hi lagadi lekin woh aadmi bhi kam nahi tha woh rahul ke jyada tar punches ko aaram se block kar raha tha jab rahul ke punches kuch slow hue toh turant hi us aadmi ne bhi apne punches ki bullet train start kar di jise ab rahul ne block karna start kar diya

Aise hi thodi der tak punches ko block karne ke baad rahul ne bhi phir se apne punches ki barish suru kar di ab dono bhale hi ek hi jagah khade the lekin dono ke bhi hath itne tej chal rahe the ki kisi ko unke hath dikh hi nahi rahe the dono ke bhi hath ek dusre se takara rahe the ki tabhi us aadmi ka ek puch jake rahul ke muh pe laga jisse woh udta hua sidha us maidan ke border par jake gira aur abhi woh niche lava ke andar girne hi wala tha ki tabhi us aadmi ne use bacha liya aur rahul ko uthake wahi lekin maidan ke andar ki taraf uske pith ke bal patak diya

Uske aisa karte hi uper khade sabhi log joro se chillane lage

Aadmi (rahul se) :- toh prince pahla dav mere naam hua

Rahul (uthte hue) :- sirf pahla dav abhi 2 dav baki hai senapati ji

Senapati :- bachpan se koshis kar rahe ho prince har baar haarte aaye hue ho aaj bhi haroge

Rahul :- bachpan aur ab me 5 salon ka antar hai senapati ji

Senapati :- toh dusre dav ki shuruwat kare

Rahul :- bilkul

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Update 111 (part 2)

Aadmi (rahul se) :- toh prince pahla dav mere naam hua

Rahul (uthte hue) :- sirf pahla dav abhi 2 dav baki hai senapati ji

Senapati :- bachpan se koshis kar rahe ho prince har baar haarte aaye hue ho aaj bhi haroge

Rahul :- bachpan aur ab me 5 salon ka antar hai senapati ji

Senapati :- toh dusre dav ki shuruwat kare

Rahul :- bilkul

Rahul ke itna bolte hi woh senapati rahul se ulti disha me bhagne lagta hai thik waise hi rahul bhi us senapati ke jaise hi ulti disha me daudne lagta hai aur dono ek saath us maidan se niche ki taraf jump laga dete hain jise dekh uper khade sare log joro se chikhne chillane lagte hai jaise unhe pata tha ki aage kya hoga

Abhi woh log chilla hi rahe the ki tabhi us jwalamukhi ke andar se 2 dragons udte hue bahar nikale jinhe dekh kar sab phir se D. P. Aur senaapati ke naam ke naare lagane lagte hai

Woh dono dragons koi aur nahi balki rahul aur senapati hi the apne dragin form me

Dono jaise hi aasman me saman unchayi pe pahuche waise hi senapati ne apne panjon se rahul ke chehre pe war kia lekin rahul usse bach gaya aur side hat gaya lekin turant hi usne palat war karte hue senapati ke gardan ko apne jabde me pakad liya

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Lekin senapati bhi iske liye taiyar tha tabhi toh jaise hi rahul ne uske gardan ko pakada toh usne turant hi apne muh ko khol ke ek bhayanak aag ka humla kiya itne pass se aati aag ko rahul sah nahi paya aur uski pakad dheeli ho gayi aur ant me rahul use jyada der hold nahi kar paya jisse woh senapati chut ke aasman me udne laga use udta dekh rahul ne bhi khudko sambhala aur uske piche udte hue jane laga

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Jab senapati ne rahul ko apne piche aate dekha toh woh aur tezi se udne lage aur jaldi hi unchayi pe jake tezi se niche ki taraf udte hue aane lage

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Niche ki taraf jab woh aa rahe the tabhi unhone tezi se apne aag ka humla kiya

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Lekin is baar rahul bhi taiyar tha usne jaise hi senapati ko aag ka humla karte dekha toh usne bhi bina dair kia apne muh ko khol kar senapati par aag ka humla kiya

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Un dono ki hi aag jab ek dusre se takrayi toh aas pass puri aasman me jaise aag si lag gayi thi jab niche khadi praja ne aasman me dekha toh unhe waha aisa laga ki do dragon suraj ke pass khade ho kar lad rahe hai

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Dheere Dheere dono ek dusre ke pass pahuch rahe the jiske wajah se unki hi aag ab unke liye mushkile taiyar kar rahi thi lekin un dono me se kosi ko bhi chot nahi lag rahi thi lagti bhi kaise dono mahan dragon warriors jo the lekin unki aag se waha niche khade logon ki haalat jaroor kharab hone lagi thi pura aasman unki aag se lal rang ka ho gaya tha

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Phir jab dono me se koi bhi rukne ko taiyar nahi tha aur na hi haar manne ko toh senapati ne turant hi bada aag ke gole ko rahul ki aur chod diya jisse rokne ke liye rahul ne apni puri jaan laga kar us gole ko apni aag se rok diya lekin is sab me uska dhyan senapati se hat gaya aur usi ka fayda utha kar senapati itni der me uske barabari pe pahuch gaya tha aur usne apne pure jor se apni puch ke war se rahul pe humla kiya jise na rahul samajh paya aur na rok paya aur us humle ke wajah se woh niche girne laga ki tabhi senapati ne use piche se pakad liya aur use udate hue sidha aasman me le gaye aur aasman me le kar gol gol ghumane laga jisse rahul ka jo bacha kucha dhyan tha woh bhi tut gaya
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Aur phir aise hi kuch der ghumne ke baad senapati ne rahul ko niche dharti ke taraf pheck diya jisse rahul sidha jake niche dharti se takrane laga

Wahi rahul ko niche girta dekh sare log dar ke mare yaha waha bhagne lage lekin ek ladke ki kismat kharab thi jis taraf woh bhag raha tha thik wahi pr rahul ja gira

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Lekin woh bhi ek dragon tha jis wajah se use koi chot nahi lagi thi

Toh wahi dusri taraf

Ab rahul ke girne ke wajah se use chot lagi thi jiske dard ko mahsus karke uska gussa ab aur bhi jyada bad gaya tha jiski wajah se ab use bas kaise bhi karke senapati ko harana tha toh woh turant uth khada hua aur tezi ke sath phir se senapati par humla karne laga lekin is baar uska humla alag tha is baar woh aag se nahi balki vidyut ke istemaal karne laga tha

Wahi rahul ko vidyut ka istemaal karte dekh senapati ne bhi turant apne aag se humla karne laga

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Lekin is baar senapati ki aag rahul ke vidyut ko rok na saki aur rahul ke attack se senapati ghayal hoke niche gir gaye unhone uthne ki koshis ki lekin woh uthate usse pahle hi Rahul unke uper aa gira jisse unhe aur bhi chot aa gayi

Phir kuch der baad phir se rahul aur senapati ek dusre ke saamne khade the apne human form me

Rahul :- toh senapati ji ye dav toh me jit gaya ab kya karoge

Senapati :- jite toh ho prince lekin chal se yaha sabko pata hai ki sare dragons sirf aag tatva ka istemaal kar sakte hai lekin aapne apne samarthya (talent) se 5 cho tatvon ko apne adhin kar liya hai jis wajah se hum sabko aap par garv hai lekin hum dono ke bich jo mukabla ho raha tha woh maitri purn tha aur aapke is tarah bich yudh me vidyut ka istemaal karne se meri ya agar koi dusre dragon ki jaan khatre me pad sakti thi

Rahul :- maaf karna senapati ji lekin me apne krodh me bhul gaya tha

Senapati :- koi bat nahi agli baar kisi se bhi yudh karne se pahle apne krodh ko kabu karna

Rahul :- (kuch soch kar) waise aapne aakhir me jo humla kia tha woh konsa tha aaj se pahle toh dekha nahi

Senapati :- woh seismic toss hai dragons ka sabse khatarnak aur purana humla jisse koi bhi shatru jivit nahi bachta

Rahul :- lekin

Senapati :- aapka sawal me jaanta hoon aap ko sirf mamooli chote isiliye aayi kyunki ye ek maitri purn yudh tha na koi aamne samne wala yudh toh ab tisre dav ki baari hai ab jo jitega wahi vijeta hoga

Rahul :- nahi me haar maanta hu mujhe abhi apne krodh ko kabu karna padega phir aapko haraunga

Itna bolke woh phir se apne dragon form me transfer hoke ud gaya

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Update 111 (part 2)

Aadmi (rahul se) :- toh prince pahla dav mere naam hua

Rahul (uthte hue) :- sirf pahla dav abhi 2 dav baki hai senapati ji

Senapati :- bachpan se koshis kar rahe ho prince har baar haarte aaye hue ho aaj bhi haroge

Rahul :- bachpan aur ab me 5 salon ka antar hai senapati ji

Senapati :- toh dusre dav ki shuruwat kare

Rahul :- bilkul

Rahul ke itna bolte hi woh senapati rahul se ulti disha me bhagne lagta hai thik waise hi rahul bhi us senapati ke jaise hi ulti disha me daudne lagta hai aur dono ek saath us maidan se niche ki taraf jump laga dete hain jise dekh uper khade sare log joro se chikhne chillane lagte hai jaise unhe pata tha ki aage kya hoga

Abhi woh log chilla hi rahe the ki tabhi us jwalamukhi ke andar se 2 dragons udte hue bahar nikale jinhe dekh kar sab phir se D. P. Aur senaapati ke naam ke naare lagane lagte hai

Woh dono dragons koi aur nahi balki rahul aur senapati hi the apne dragin form me

Dono jaise hi aasman me saman unchayi pe pahuche waise hi senapati ne apne panjon se rahul ke chehre pe war kia lekin rahul usse bach gaya aur side hat gaya lekin turant hi usne palat war karte hue senapati ke gardan ko apne jabde me pakad liya

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Lekin senapati bhi iske liye taiyar tha tabhi toh jaise hi rahul ne uske gardan ko pakada toh usne turant hi apne muh ko khol ke ek bhayanak aag ka humla kiya itne pass se aati aag ko rahul sah nahi paya aur uski pakad dheeli ho gayi aur ant me rahul use jyada der hold nahi kar paya jisse woh senapati chut ke aasman me udne laga use udta dekh rahul ne bhi khudko sambhala aur uske piche udte hue jane laga

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Jab senapati ne rahul ko apne piche aate dekha toh woh aur tezi se udne lage aur jaldi hi unchayi pe jake tezi se niche ki taraf udte hue aane lage

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Niche ki taraf jab woh aa rahe the tabhi unhone tezi se apne aag ka humla kiya

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Lekin is baar rahul bhi taiyar tha usne jaise hi senapati ko aag ka humla karte dekha toh usne bhi bina dair kia apne muh ko khol kar senapati par aag ka humla kiya

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Un dono ki hi aag jab ek dusre se takrayi toh aas pass puri aasman me jaise aag si lag gayi thi jab niche khadi praja ne aasman me dekha toh unhe waha aisa laga ki do dragon suraj ke pass khade ho kar lad rahe hai

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Dheere Dheere dono ek dusre ke pass pahuch rahe the jiske wajah se unki hi aag ab unke liye mushkile taiyar kar rahi thi lekin un dono me se kosi ko bhi chot nahi lag rahi thi lagti bhi kaise dono mahan dragon warriors jo the lekin unki aag se waha niche khade logon ki haalat jaroor kharab hone lagi thi pura aasman unki aag se lal rang ka ho gaya tha

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Phir jab dono me se koi bhi rukne ko taiyar nahi tha aur na hi haar manne ko toh senapati ne turant hi bada aag ke gole ko rahul ki aur chod diya jisse rokne ke liye rahul ne apni puri jaan laga kar us gole ko apni aag se rok diya lekin is sab me uska dhyan senapati se hat gaya aur usi ka fayda utha kar senapati itni der me uske barabari pe pahuch gaya tha aur usne apne pure jor se apni puch ke war se rahul pe humla kiya jise na rahul samajh paya aur na rok paya aur us humle ke wajah se woh niche girne laga ki tabhi senapati ne use piche se pakad liya aur use udate hue sidha aasman me le gaye aur aasman me le kar gol gol ghumane laga jisse rahul ka jo bacha kucha dhyan tha woh bhi tut gaya
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Aur phir aise hi kuch der ghumne ke baad senapati ne rahul ko niche dharti ke taraf pheck diya jisse rahul sidha jake niche dharti se takrane laga

Wahi rahul ko niche girta dekh sare log dar ke mare yaha waha bhagne lage lekin ek ladke ki kismat kharab thi jis taraf woh bhag raha tha thik wahi pr rahul ja gira

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Lekin woh bhi ek dragon tha jis wajah se use koi chot nahi lagi thi

Toh wahi dusri taraf

Ab rahul ke girne ke wajah se use chot lagi thi jiske dard ko mahsus karke uska gussa ab aur bhi jyada bad gaya tha jiski wajah se ab use bas kaise bhi karke senapati ko harana tha toh woh turant uth khada hua aur tezi ke sath phir se senapati par humla karne laga lekin is baar uska humla alag tha is baar woh aag se nahi balki vidyut ke istemaal karne laga tha

Wahi rahul ko vidyut ka istemaal karte dekh senapati ne bhi turant apne aag se humla karne laga

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Lekin is baar senapati ki aag rahul ke vidyut ko rok na saki aur rahul ke attack se senapati ghayal hoke niche gir gaye unhone uthne ki koshis ki lekin woh uthate usse pahle hi Rahul unke uper aa gira jisse unhe aur bhi chot aa gayi

Phir kuch der baad phir se rahul aur senapati ek dusre ke saamne khade the apne human form me

Rahul :- toh senapati ji ye dav toh me jit gaya ab kya karoge

Senapati :- jite toh ho prince lekin chal se yaha sabko pata hai ki sare dragons sirf aag tatva ka istemaal kar sakte hai lekin aapne apne samarthya (talent) se 5 cho tatvon ko apne adhin kar liya hai jis wajah se hum sabko aap par garv hai lekin hum dono ke bich jo mukabla ho raha tha woh maitri purn tha aur aapke is tarah bich yudh me vidyut ka istemaal karne se meri ya agar koi dusre dragon ki jaan khatre me pad sakti thi

Rahul :- maaf karna senapati ji lekin me apne krodh me bhul gaya tha

Senapati :- koi bat nahi agli baar kisi se bhi yudh karne se pahle apne krodh ko kabu karna

Rahul :- (kuch soch kar) waise aapne aakhir me jo humla kia tha woh konsa tha aaj se pahle toh dekha nahi

Senapati :- woh seismic toss hai dragons ka sabse khatarnak aur purana humla jisse koi bhi shatru jivit nahi bachta

Rahul :- lekin

Senapati :- aapka sawal me jaanta hoon aap ko sirf mamooli chote isiliye aayi kyunki ye ek maitri purn yudh tha na koi aamne samne wala yudh toh ab tisre dav ki baari hai ab jo jitega wahi vijeta hoga

Rahul :- nahi me haar maanta hu mujhe abhi apne krodh ko kabu karna padega phir aapko haraunga

Itna bolke woh phir se apne dragon form me transfer hoke ud gaya

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Update 111 (part 2)

Aadmi (rahul se) :- toh prince pahla dav mere naam hua

Rahul (uthte hue) :- sirf pahla dav abhi 2 dav baki hai senapati ji

Senapati :- bachpan se koshis kar rahe ho prince har baar haarte aaye hue ho aaj bhi haroge

Rahul :- bachpan aur ab me 5 salon ka antar hai senapati ji

Senapati :- toh dusre dav ki shuruwat kare

Rahul :- bilkul

Rahul ke itna bolte hi woh senapati rahul se ulti disha me bhagne lagta hai thik waise hi rahul bhi us senapati ke jaise hi ulti disha me daudne lagta hai aur dono ek saath us maidan se niche ki taraf jump laga dete hain jise dekh uper khade sare log joro se chikhne chillane lagte hai jaise unhe pata tha ki aage kya hoga

Abhi woh log chilla hi rahe the ki tabhi us jwalamukhi ke andar se 2 dragons udte hue bahar nikale jinhe dekh kar sab phir se D. P. Aur senaapati ke naam ke naare lagane lagte hai

Woh dono dragons koi aur nahi balki rahul aur senapati hi the apne dragin form me

Dono jaise hi aasman me saman unchayi pe pahuche waise hi senapati ne apne panjon se rahul ke chehre pe war kia lekin rahul usse bach gaya aur side hat gaya lekin turant hi usne palat war karte hue senapati ke gardan ko apne jabde me pakad liya

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Lekin senapati bhi iske liye taiyar tha tabhi toh jaise hi rahul ne uske gardan ko pakada toh usne turant hi apne muh ko khol ke ek bhayanak aag ka humla kiya itne pass se aati aag ko rahul sah nahi paya aur uski pakad dheeli ho gayi aur ant me rahul use jyada der hold nahi kar paya jisse woh senapati chut ke aasman me udne laga use udta dekh rahul ne bhi khudko sambhala aur uske piche udte hue jane laga

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Jab senapati ne rahul ko apne piche aate dekha toh woh aur tezi se udne lage aur jaldi hi unchayi pe jake tezi se niche ki taraf udte hue aane lage

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Niche ki taraf jab woh aa rahe the tabhi unhone tezi se apne aag ka humla kiya

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Lekin is baar rahul bhi taiyar tha usne jaise hi senapati ko aag ka humla karte dekha toh usne bhi bina dair kia apne muh ko khol kar senapati par aag ka humla kiya

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Un dono ki hi aag jab ek dusre se takrayi toh aas pass puri aasman me jaise aag si lag gayi thi jab niche khadi praja ne aasman me dekha toh unhe waha aisa laga ki do dragon suraj ke pass khade ho kar lad rahe hai

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Dheere Dheere dono ek dusre ke pass pahuch rahe the jiske wajah se unki hi aag ab unke liye mushkile taiyar kar rahi thi lekin un dono me se kosi ko bhi chot nahi lag rahi thi lagti bhi kaise dono mahan dragon warriors jo the lekin unki aag se waha niche khade logon ki haalat jaroor kharab hone lagi thi pura aasman unki aag se lal rang ka ho gaya tha

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Phir jab dono me se koi bhi rukne ko taiyar nahi tha aur na hi haar manne ko toh senapati ne turant hi bada aag ke gole ko rahul ki aur chod diya jisse rokne ke liye rahul ne apni puri jaan laga kar us gole ko apni aag se rok diya lekin is sab me uska dhyan senapati se hat gaya aur usi ka fayda utha kar senapati itni der me uske barabari pe pahuch gaya tha aur usne apne pure jor se apni puch ke war se rahul pe humla kiya jise na rahul samajh paya aur na rok paya aur us humle ke wajah se woh niche girne laga ki tabhi senapati ne use piche se pakad liya aur use udate hue sidha aasman me le gaye aur aasman me le kar gol gol ghumane laga jisse rahul ka jo bacha kucha dhyan tha woh bhi tut gaya
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Aur phir aise hi kuch der ghumne ke baad senapati ne rahul ko niche dharti ke taraf pheck diya jisse rahul sidha jake niche dharti se takrane laga

Wahi rahul ko niche girta dekh sare log dar ke mare yaha waha bhagne lage lekin ek ladke ki kismat kharab thi jis taraf woh bhag raha tha thik wahi pr rahul ja gira

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Lekin woh bhi ek dragon tha jis wajah se use koi chot nahi lagi thi

Toh wahi dusri taraf

Ab rahul ke girne ke wajah se use chot lagi thi jiske dard ko mahsus karke uska gussa ab aur bhi jyada bad gaya tha jiski wajah se ab use bas kaise bhi karke senapati ko harana tha toh woh turant uth khada hua aur tezi ke sath phir se senapati par humla karne laga lekin is baar uska humla alag tha is baar woh aag se nahi balki vidyut ke istemaal karne laga tha

Wahi rahul ko vidyut ka istemaal karte dekh senapati ne bhi turant apne aag se humla karne laga

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Lekin is baar senapati ki aag rahul ke vidyut ko rok na saki aur rahul ke attack se senapati ghayal hoke niche gir gaye unhone uthne ki koshis ki lekin woh uthate usse pahle hi Rahul unke uper aa gira jisse unhe aur bhi chot aa gayi

Phir kuch der baad phir se rahul aur senapati ek dusre ke saamne khade the apne human form me

Rahul :- toh senapati ji ye dav toh me jit gaya ab kya karoge

Senapati :- jite toh ho prince lekin chal se yaha sabko pata hai ki sare dragons sirf aag tatva ka istemaal kar sakte hai lekin aapne apne samarthya (talent) se 5 cho tatvon ko apne adhin kar liya hai jis wajah se hum sabko aap par garv hai lekin hum dono ke bich jo mukabla ho raha tha woh maitri purn tha aur aapke is tarah bich yudh me vidyut ka istemaal karne se meri ya agar koi dusre dragon ki jaan khatre me pad sakti thi

Rahul :- maaf karna senapati ji lekin me apne krodh me bhul gaya tha

Senapati :- koi bat nahi agli baar kisi se bhi yudh karne se pahle apne krodh ko kabu karna

Rahul :- (kuch soch kar) waise aapne aakhir me jo humla kia tha woh konsa tha aaj se pahle toh dekha nahi

Senapati :- woh seismic toss hai dragons ka sabse khatarnak aur purana humla jisse koi bhi shatru jivit nahi bachta

Rahul :- lekin

Senapati :- aapka sawal me jaanta hoon aap ko sirf mamooli chote isiliye aayi kyunki ye ek maitri purn yudh tha na koi aamne samne wala yudh toh ab tisre dav ki baari hai ab jo jitega wahi vijeta hoga

Rahul :- nahi me haar maanta hu mujhe abhi apne krodh ko kabu karna padega phir aapko haraunga

Itna bolke woh phir se apne dragon form me transfer hoke ud gaya

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Aaj ke liye itna hi

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Update 111 (part 2)

Aadmi (rahul se) :- toh prince pahla dav mere naam hua

Rahul (uthte hue) :- sirf pahla dav abhi 2 dav baki hai senapati ji

Senapati :- bachpan se koshis kar rahe ho prince har baar haarte aaye hue ho aaj bhi haroge

Rahul :- bachpan aur ab me 5 salon ka antar hai senapati ji

Senapati :- toh dusre dav ki shuruwat kare

Rahul :- bilkul

Rahul ke itna bolte hi woh senapati rahul se ulti disha me bhagne lagta hai thik waise hi rahul bhi us senapati ke jaise hi ulti disha me daudne lagta hai aur dono ek saath us maidan se niche ki taraf jump laga dete hain jise dekh uper khade sare log joro se chikhne chillane lagte hai jaise unhe pata tha ki aage kya hoga

Abhi woh log chilla hi rahe the ki tabhi us jwalamukhi ke andar se 2 dragons udte hue bahar nikale jinhe dekh kar sab phir se D. P. Aur senaapati ke naam ke naare lagane lagte hai

Woh dono dragons koi aur nahi balki rahul aur senapati hi the apne dragin form me

Dono jaise hi aasman me saman unchayi pe pahuche waise hi senapati ne apne panjon se rahul ke chehre pe war kia lekin rahul usse bach gaya aur side hat gaya lekin turant hi usne palat war karte hue senapati ke gardan ko apne jabde me pakad liya

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Lekin senapati bhi iske liye taiyar tha tabhi toh jaise hi rahul ne uske gardan ko pakada toh usne turant hi apne muh ko khol ke ek bhayanak aag ka humla kiya itne pass se aati aag ko rahul sah nahi paya aur uski pakad dheeli ho gayi aur ant me rahul use jyada der hold nahi kar paya jisse woh senapati chut ke aasman me udne laga use udta dekh rahul ne bhi khudko sambhala aur uske piche udte hue jane laga

images

Jab senapati ne rahul ko apne piche aate dekha toh woh aur tezi se udne lage aur jaldi hi unchayi pe jake tezi se niche ki taraf udte hue aane lage

images

Niche ki taraf jab woh aa rahe the tabhi unhone tezi se apne aag ka humla kiya

images

Lekin is baar rahul bhi taiyar tha usne jaise hi senapati ko aag ka humla karte dekha toh usne bhi bina dair kia apne muh ko khol kar senapati par aag ka humla kiya

images

Un dono ki hi aag jab ek dusre se takrayi toh aas pass puri aasman me jaise aag si lag gayi thi jab niche khadi praja ne aasman me dekha toh unhe waha aisa laga ki do dragon suraj ke pass khade ho kar lad rahe hai

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Dheere Dheere dono ek dusre ke pass pahuch rahe the jiske wajah se unki hi aag ab unke liye mushkile taiyar kar rahi thi lekin un dono me se kosi ko bhi chot nahi lag rahi thi lagti bhi kaise dono mahan dragon warriors jo the lekin unki aag se waha niche khade logon ki haalat jaroor kharab hone lagi thi pura aasman unki aag se lal rang ka ho gaya tha

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Phir jab dono me se koi bhi rukne ko taiyar nahi tha aur na hi haar manne ko toh senapati ne turant hi bada aag ke gole ko rahul ki aur chod diya jisse rokne ke liye rahul ne apni puri jaan laga kar us gole ko apni aag se rok diya lekin is sab me uska dhyan senapati se hat gaya aur usi ka fayda utha kar senapati itni der me uske barabari pe pahuch gaya tha aur usne apne pure jor se apni puch ke war se rahul pe humla kiya jise na rahul samajh paya aur na rok paya aur us humle ke wajah se woh niche girne laga ki tabhi senapati ne use piche se pakad liya aur use udate hue sidha aasman me le gaye aur aasman me le kar gol gol ghumane laga jisse rahul ka jo bacha kucha dhyan tha woh bhi tut gaya
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Aur phir aise hi kuch der ghumne ke baad senapati ne rahul ko niche dharti ke taraf pheck diya jisse rahul sidha jake niche dharti se takrane laga

Wahi rahul ko niche girta dekh sare log dar ke mare yaha waha bhagne lage lekin ek ladke ki kismat kharab thi jis taraf woh bhag raha tha thik wahi pr rahul ja gira

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Lekin woh bhi ek dragon tha jis wajah se use koi chot nahi lagi thi

Toh wahi dusri taraf

Ab rahul ke girne ke wajah se use chot lagi thi jiske dard ko mahsus karke uska gussa ab aur bhi jyada bad gaya tha jiski wajah se ab use bas kaise bhi karke senapati ko harana tha toh woh turant uth khada hua aur tezi ke sath phir se senapati par humla karne laga lekin is baar uska humla alag tha is baar woh aag se nahi balki vidyut ke istemaal karne laga tha

Wahi rahul ko vidyut ka istemaal karte dekh senapati ne bhi turant apne aag se humla karne laga

images

Lekin is baar senapati ki aag rahul ke vidyut ko rok na saki aur rahul ke attack se senapati ghayal hoke niche gir gaye unhone uthne ki koshis ki lekin woh uthate usse pahle hi Rahul unke uper aa gira jisse unhe aur bhi chot aa gayi

Phir kuch der baad phir se rahul aur senapati ek dusre ke saamne khade the apne human form me

Rahul :- toh senapati ji ye dav toh me jit gaya ab kya karoge

Senapati :- jite toh ho prince lekin chal se yaha sabko pata hai ki sare dragons sirf aag tatva ka istemaal kar sakte hai lekin aapne apne samarthya (talent) se 5 cho tatvon ko apne adhin kar liya hai jis wajah se hum sabko aap par garv hai lekin hum dono ke bich jo mukabla ho raha tha woh maitri purn tha aur aapke is tarah bich yudh me vidyut ka istemaal karne se meri ya agar koi dusre dragon ki jaan khatre me pad sakti thi

Rahul :- maaf karna senapati ji lekin me apne krodh me bhul gaya tha

Senapati :- koi bat nahi agli baar kisi se bhi yudh karne se pahle apne krodh ko kabu karna

Rahul :- (kuch soch kar) waise aapne aakhir me jo humla kia tha woh konsa tha aaj se pahle toh dekha nahi

Senapati :- woh seismic toss hai dragons ka sabse khatarnak aur purana humla jisse koi bhi shatru jivit nahi bachta

Rahul :- lekin

Senapati :- aapka sawal me jaanta hoon aap ko sirf mamooli chote isiliye aayi kyunki ye ek maitri purn yudh tha na koi aamne samne wala yudh toh ab tisre dav ki baari hai ab jo jitega wahi vijeta hoga

Rahul :- nahi me haar maanta hu mujhe abhi apne krodh ko kabu karna padega phir aapko haraunga

Itna bolke woh phir se apne dragon form me transfer hoke ud gaya

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Aaj ke liye itna hi

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