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Adultery Rudra (adventure story) ( Completed )

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Dhamesh singh (dad) died

Jyoti singh (mom) died

Rudra (hero)

Rahul (side hero)

Anjali (rudra's love interest and sister of rahul) died

Sanjana (mother of rahul and anjali) died

Siddharth (father of rahul) died

Bade papa= sujit singh sodhi (died but his body captured by igris) unexplored character

Mahamahim (friend of igris) unexplored character

Sura (friend of igris) unexplored character

Aacharya (friend of igris) unexplored character

Balveer (son of sujit singh sodhi) 1st villain

niraj pandey (rahul ke chacha) 2nd villain

Choudhary (died but his body captured by myasur) unexplored character 3rd villain

Mr. X (kaal) slave of mayasur 4th villain

Mohini (another asur and slave of mayasur) 5th villain

Daitya (somer relationship with rahul and rudra) unexplored character

Paritosh thakur (famous business man friend of raj singh) unexplored character

Raj singh (city ka mla) unexplored character

abhay = CBI chief ki post par hai (friend of siddharth)

Abhi (cbi officer and friend of Rudra)

Sam cbi officer and junior of abhi

Arun cbi officer and junior of abhi

Dev cbi officer and junior of abhi

Sangeeta cbi officer and junior of abhi

Ram sharma (criminal killed by rudra (beast) brother of sahdev)

Sahdev UCA ka agent "agent lion" and friend of rudra

Some secret police services

STF (secret task force)

SST (secret service team)

UCA (under cover agency)

Bhau another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Ranga another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Lucky hacker from underworld killed by bhau

Shankar mahadevan (olg PM of india killed by abhi slave of bhau)

Trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra and also slave of mohini

Ojha slave of trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra

Sukka guardian of rudra in isla planet

Zeba guardian of rudra in isla planet

Friends of rudra in isla planet

harry isla ke main city ka prince unexplored character

simona Sirius desh ki princess unexplored character

somi Sirius desh ki second princess unexplored character

kayko argon desh ka prince unexplored character

sayli sinour desh ki princess unexplored character

Another characters

Lord of the spiritual beasts (rahul)

Lord of dragons

Lord of demon warriors (agrasen)

Lord of demon magicians

Professor albus principal of royal magic academy in isla

Professor snape professor and co founder of royal magic academy in isla

Professor Hagrid professor in royal magic academy in isla

Professor oak professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

Professor nura professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

There are more characters are comming in story

Main villain???
 
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Raat ko sab khana khane ke baad rohit aur anjali mere kamre me aate hai us waqt me bhi apna homework kar raha tha
Me :- aagaya rohit chal baith bata konse subject se start kare are ankali tum bhi aayi hi kyu tumhe bhi dar lag raha hai kya fail hone se
Anjali :- me toh bas ye dekhne aayi thi ki tum log padhai ke badle masti na karo
Me :- ok rahul bol kaha se start kare
Rahul :- aap ke favorite subject se
Me :- mera favorite toh maths hai
Rahul :- maths kaise kisi ko pasand ho sakta hai woh kitna boaring subject hota hai
Me :- ab mujhe pasand hai toh hai
Rahul :- theek hai
Me :- ek kaam karte hai geography se start karte hai
Rahul :- ok
Me :- toh bata geography me kya pasand hai
Rahul :- woh maps me location find karne wala game
Me :- me topic ki baat kar raha hu
Rahul :- bhai aaj wohi khelte hai na study kal se karenge
Me :- nahi study ke time sirf study
Rahul :- theek hai bhai
Me :- chal humare pass sirf 2 din hai phir shop ki puja udghatan fir tiffin service ki opening hume study ke liye jara bhi time nahi milega
Rahul(muskurate hue) :- ha bhai waise aap sahi bol rahe hai 15 ko time nahi milega bahut kaam hai
Me :- ha lekin tu itna muskura kyu raha hai
Rahul :- kuch nahi bhaiya party ke baare me soch raha tha
Me (hairani se) :- konsi party mujhe kyu nahi pata
Itna sunte hi rahul ko ehsas ho jata hai ki usne kya bola aur wohi anjali ne apna matha pit liya🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️
Anjali (gusse se) :- are gadhe ise surprise ke baare me nahi batana tha
Me (man me) :- ghar me party woh bhi surprise party mere se chupke rudra abhi nahi pata lagaya toh malum hi nahi padega
Anjali :- chal ab yaha kya kar raha hai chal room me
Me :- ruk rahul history ki textbook nikal
Rahul :- history lekin hum geography padhne wale the na
Me :- ha lekin mera history ka homework bhi hai toh dono ka kam ho jayega
Rahul :- theek hai bhai
Anjali (man me) :- lagta hai rudra ne kuch nahi suna acha hi hai ab inki padhai hone tak yahi rukna hoga
Me (man me) :- jab tak anjali yaha hai kuch pata nahi chalega
Me :- anjali jara dekh toh bade papa abhi tak sone ke liye kyu nahi aaye aur mere liye jara pani leke aa
Anjali :- theek hai
Phir anjali chali gayi
Me :- rahul pata hai history me sabse important kya hota hai
Rahul :- ha dates aur names
Me :- sahi kaha tujhe pata hai mujhe ye dates hi yaad nahi rehte
Rahul :- ha bhai pata hai
Me :- tujhe kaise pata
Rahul :- abhi ka dekh lijiye aap ko 15 tarikh ka kaha kuch yaad hai
Me :- acha tujhe bada yaad hai
Rahul :- ha yaad hai
Me(notebook me dekhte hue) :- bata kya hai
Rahul(bina dhyan diye) :- aapka birthday
Me (man me) :- kya mera birth day aur me hi bhool gaya acha hua abhi pata chal gaya nahi toh har bar ki tarah ma baba mera majak udate abhi iske samne kuch react kia toh ye sabko bata dega abhi shant rehna padega nahi toh inka surprise me inko hi surprise dunga
Rahul :- kya hua bhai kya soch rahe ho
Me :- kuch nahi soch raha tha ki tu kitna smart hai phir bhi anjali tujhe gadha kyu bolti hai shayad wo teri smartness se jalti hai
Rahul :- ha bhaiya mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai bhaiya
Me :- ek baat yaad rakhna hum ne jo baate ki uske bare me kisi ko mat batana nahi toh wo tujhe hi budhu bolenge
Rahul :- nahi bhai me budhu thode hi hu jo sabko bolunga
Me :- well done my smart brother
Tabhi anjali aa jati hai aur uske piche bade papa bhi aajate hai
Anjali :- ho gayi kya padhayi
Rahul :- ha chaliye sone chalte hai
Phir woh dono chale gaye
Bade papa :- kya hua aaj itni jaldi yaad aagayi bade papa ki
Me :- ha bade papa baat hi aisi hai aaj maine jo Compitation ke baare me bataya tha woh mujhe jitna hai kisi bhi kimat pe isliye me chahta hu ki aap meri training double kar dijiye
Bade papa :- hmm theek hai kya tum is faisle ke baare me dubara sochna chahte ya tum taiyar ho
Me :- ji bade papa me taiyar hu
Bade papa :- theek hai chal soja
Bade papa :- (man me) matlab jo maine socha tha wo bilkul sahi hai rudra hi wo ho sakta hai jo hume shrap se mukti de lekin shayad ye jaldbaji ka faisla hoga aur kuch saal iski training ko continues rakhta hu agar ye wohi hai toh iski kismat khud use dusre padaw par le jayegi chalo jo hoga dekha jayega
Isi ke saath ye raat bhi bit gayi
At morning

Aaj subah yoga ke baad turant bade papa mujhe ground par le aaye aur ye me bhi janta tha ki aaj se meri band bajni tay hai
Bade papa :- toh rudra aaj se tumhari training duble hogi
Me :- ji bade papa
Phir bade papa ne mere sharir se 1 kg ki belt utar ke 5 kg ki belt pehna di aur uske baad training bhi dugni kar di jisse meri band baj gayi khair me thak hara school pahuch gaya

waha dusra bomb mere sir pe phutne ko taiyar tha hume pata chala ki jo trials kal hone wale the wo aaj hi shedule kar diye hai kyunki kal se diwali ki chuttiya chalu hone wali thi jo 1 mahina chalti thi isi bich humara competition bhi hone wala tha isliye mene jaldi se apna form submit kar diya wohi santosh sir ne mujhe kuch tips di phir jab selection ke liye ground pe pahuche toh me 10th number pe qualify kiya
kyunki subah ki training se me pahle hi thaka hua tha aur mere body 5 kg ka extra weight bhi laga tha phir jab ghar pahucha toh phir se mera torcher start hua bade papa ke hatho phir malish ke baad mujhe hi pata nahi chalta ki me kab so gaya
jab aankh khuli toh dinner ka time ho gaya tha tab mene sabko mere school chutti ke bare me bataya

jise sun kar anjali aur rahul ka mood off ho gaya kyunki jab me school jata tabhi wo mere liye gift lene jane wale the lekin ab wo nahi ja payenge
toh wohi ye sab dekhte hue baba ne mujhe 14 aur 15 ko dukan aane ko kaha madad ke liye mujhe ye samajh aa gaya tha ki ye log surprise ki taiyari ke liye ye sab kar rahe hai isliye me bhi turant maan gaya kyuki mene mera surprise bhi soch liya tha
Aise hi din bitte gaye aur meri training aur hard hoti gayi jisse ye hua ki ab me 5 ki jagh 6 kg weight uthane laga ab aaj mera birthday tha isliye me subah se ghar me ho rahi bhagdaud ko dekh raha tha jaha maa aur mosi tifin service ka bahana dekar mere liye cake aur bhi kai sare tarh tarh ke pakwan ban rahe the toh bade papa aur baba apni sari taiyari jitna jaldi ho sake utne jaldi kar rahe the kyunki mujhe ghar se bahar rakhne ki jimmedari unhe mili thi
Wohi anjali sabse jyada mehanat kar rahi thi sab se pahle woh maa ke sath cake banaya phir mosi ki khana banane aur cake ko sajane me help ki lekin kuch bhi usse perfect nahi ho raha tha wohi rahul bas order de raha tha jisse anjali kafi gusse me thi wohi me sabke maje le raha tha phir me bhi baba ke saath dukan ke liye nikal gaya
Wohi mere nikal te hi bade papa aur anjali ne pura ghar saja diya aur wohi dukan me sara kaam bhi ache se hogaya aur dukan bhi ache se chal padi wohi dupehar ke time jab lunch time hota hai tab bade papa mujhe leke humare yaha ke ek hotel me le gaye jaha humne bhar pet khana khaya
At evening
The time pf celebration
Ab jab me aur bade papa ghar pahuche tab ghar me har jagah sirf andhera hi andhera tha Tabhi light aagayi aur sab jagah ujala ho gaya aur ghar bhi achi tarah se sajaya tha ab time tha mere surprise ka

Jaha ye sab ho rha hai wohi dur kahi jangal me do saye khade the aisa lag raha hai ki wo do insaan na hoke aatma hai usme se ek aatma ka color orange toh wohi ek ka black hai
O. A. :- toh shayad woh mil gaya hai mujhe mehsus ho raha hai ki ab humare lord bahut jald humare saath honge aur phir shuru hogi barbaadi
B. A. :- ji orange beast aapne sahi kaha jis din humare lord ko woh mani mil gayi tab is duniya pe sirf aur sirf barbadi hogi
Orange beast . :- ha black beastlekin hume humare uddeshya se bhatkna nahi chahiye yaad rakhna lord humesha kehte the ki jab bhi kuch karo toh soch samajh ke karna
Black beast :- ji aapne sahi kaha isiliye toh aaj tak hum 3no shaant hai nahi toh us mamuli pret ko marna konsi badi baat hai
Orange beast :- ha lekin us pret ki maut toh bas ek shurwaat hogi phir hogi barbadi sare dushmano ki barbaadi bas kuch saal aur jilo
Hahahaha
Watawarn me gunji ye darawani hasi kisi ke bhi pran lene ke liye paryapt hai

At home

Jaise hi sab mujhe surprise dene aaye waise hi me bade papa se gale ja mila aur jo bola use toh sabhi shock hi ho gaye
Me :- happy birthday to you bade papa
Bade papa :- are
Me :- nahi aaj aap ko birthday celebrate karna hi hoga dekhiye sabhi ne kitna acha surprise plan kiya hai
Bade papa :- are lekin meri baat toh sun nahi koi kuch nahi bolega aap sab ko meri kasam ab sab log bade papa ka birthday celebration karenge chaliye bade papa
Ab meri kasam dene ke baad koi kuch nahi bola lekin sab ke chehre bata rahe the ki sabka mood off ho gaya tha aur jaha me sab ke chehre dekh kar mand hi mand has raha tha wohi bade papa ne cake kaat ke sab ko khila diya aur jab meri bari aayi tab itni der se cotrol ki hui hasi chut gayi
Me (haste hue) :- kaisa laga mera surprise
Sab :- kyaaa
Me :- ha sabko kya laga mere birthday celebration ka plan mere bina hi banaoge aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chlega
Anjali (gusse se) :- matlab
Me (man me) :- ab yaha se nikal na padega nahi toh anjali ka gussa mere pe hi niklega kya karu? Ha idea sorry mere bhai)
Anjali :- kya soch raha hai
Me (rahul ke kandhe pe hath rakhte hue) :- are jab mere pass itna smart bhai hai toh koi mujhe kaise koi budhu bana sakta hai ha bhai bol tere jaisa smart bhai hote hue koi bhi mujhe budhu bana sakta hai kya
Rahul :- nahi bhai
Usne itna bola hi tha ki anjali ka gusa uspe phut pada woh bichara pure ghar me yaha se waha bhagta raha
Rahul :- are didi muje kyu maar rahi ho
Anjali :- subah se hukum pe hukum diye ja raha hai aur ab puri birthday party bhi kharab kar di
Ab tak anjali ne sabke sath mil ke rohit ko pakad liya aur ab woh mujhe marne ke liya mere tarf badh hi rahi thi ki me mere kamre me ghus gaya ab bade papa aaye aur mujhe kamre se bahar nikala aur phir sab ne meri ache se khabar li phir mera birthday celebration hua phir aise hi aaj ka din bhi khatam ho gaya


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Nexr day

Aaj subah sabne muje mere gifts diye jinhe dekh ke me shock ho gaya kyuki jo chije mujhe chahiye thi wohi unhone mujhe gift diye the
Jaha maa baba ne mujhe naye kapde diye the wohi rahul ne mujhe video game diya tha
Sanjana mosi ne mujhe wrist wacth di thi
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wahi bade papa ne mujhe sports shoes and cloths diye the
Wohi anjali ne ek mouth organ diya tha
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jo ki bhut pyara tha aur mujhe bhi pasand aaya tha
Aise hi din nikalte gaye aaj mera competition ka din tha
Sabse pehla competition tha race usme abhi time tha tabhi santosh sir aaye mujhe tips dene lage
Sir :- mene jo bhi bola use dhyan rakhna aur daudte waqt jyada nervous mat hona
Me :- ok sir
Abhi sir kuch bolte bade papa aagaye
Bade papa :- taiyaar hai mere sher apne life ke pahle competition ke liye
Me :- ji bade papa
Bade papa :- shabash mere sher muje barosa hai ki tu hi jitega mene jo bola hai hai woh dhyan hai na
Me :- ji bade papa dhyan hai
Sir :- Rudra tumhare competition ka time ho gaya hai
Me :- ji sir (sir ke pair chute hue) aashirwaad dijiye sir
Sir (mere sar pe hath rakhte hue) :- mene us din jo kaha tha use yaad rakhna
Me :- ji sir (phir bade papa ke pair chute hue) bade papa mujhe aashirwaad dijiye ki me hi jitu
Bade papa :- arey in bacho ke Compitation ke bare me kyu tension le raha hai woh toh tu hi jitega
Phir me waha se nikal jata hu wahi bade papa sir ko dekhte hue
Bade papa :- ab boliye kya problem hai
Sir :- matlab
Bade papa :- mujhe sidha point pe aane ki aadat hai jab me rudra se baat kar raha tha tab aapko dekha tha aap ki aakho me gussa dikh raha tha
Sir :- toh theek hai seedhi baat aap ko sharm nahi aati itne chote bache ko aap mentally torture kar rahe hai
Bade papa :- kya matlab
Sir :- us chote bache pe itna pressure dal rahe hai ki use ek all the best bhi nahi bola aur use ye competition bacho ka khel bol rahe ho arey ye competition usse double age ke bacho ke liye bhi hard hai aap uspe pressure dal rahe hai
Bade papa :- acha laga i like it
Sir :- kya….. Kya matlab aapka
Base papa :- yahi ki rudra ke sir uske liye itni chinta karte hai ye dekh ke acha laga
Sir :- aap ke dimag me ghus raha hai kuch ya aisa hai ki me hi bakbak kiye ja raha hu
Bade papa :- ghus bhi raha hai aur samajh me bhi aaraha hai lekin ye faisla rudra ka hai kisi ne uspe jor nahi dala hai isliye iska anjaam jo bhi ho iska jimmedar wo hi hoga
Sir:- aapka bolne me kya jayega mehanat toh woh karega jab woh harega khaskar tab jab sab log uspe ummid laga ke honge tab pata hai woh kitna tut jayega
Bade papa :- usme humari galti nahi hai jab sab ki ummid 1 se lagi hoti hai tab un sab ki taakat bhi us 1 me aajati hai agar woh phir bh haar gaya toh isme galti uski hi hai 1 lohar bas talwar banata hai lekin uska istemaal kaha karna hai kaise karna hai woh ye nahi jaanta ye bas woh yodha janta hai jiske pass woh sword hoti hai
Sir :- bate achi banate ho lekin rudra shayad in bato ke liya chota hai
Bade papa :- rudra mere bete jaisa hai me wohi karta hu jo uske liye sahi hoga
Sir :- bete se yaad aaya aapka 1 beta abhi jinda hai na kya naam hai uska ha balveer suna hai usne aapke sar pe banduk tan di thi taki aap property ke papers pe sign kar sake so sad
Sir :- me jaisa dikhta hu waisa hu nahi dua hi karna ki mere se kabhi takkar na ho fight me national level winner hu (bade papa ke kandhe pe hath rakhte hue) its just for your information
Sir bahar jahi rahe the ki tabhi


Wohi ground me meri race start ho gayi thi aur meri daily exercise ki wajah se meri speed badh gayi thi lekin aaj bhi bade papa ne mujhe belts utarne ki permission nahi di thi balki 1 kg badha diya tha
Ab starting me extra weight ki wajah se me thodi mushkil hui lekin me jald hi weight ke saath adjust ho gaya
Ab jaha me lagbhag last hi tha wohi me ab 9th position pe aa gaya tha
Aise last ke round tak me 2nd aagaya tha aadhe se jyada student to thakne ki wajah se haar gaye aur baki ko mene peeche chod diya
Ab hum dono hi finish line ke najdik the ki tabhi


Wohi changing room me


Sir bahar jahi rahe the ki tabhi
Bade papa :- ravi patil aapka student aapka ek lauta beta
use janm dete waqt aapki patni mar gayi isliye aapke gharwalo ne use manhoos man ke paida hote hi mar ne ki koshis ki but aap use leke bhag gaye
aur yaha aagaye yaha aane ke baad bache ko palne ke liye aapne school me nokri hasil kari lekin phir bhi aapke pass jyada paisa nahi tha toh aap ne fight ke mukable me hissa lena shuru kia
aapke bete ko bhi aapne 5 saal ki umr se national level winner banne ke liye train kia aap uske liye hero the isliye woh bhi bina sawal kiye aap jaisa bolte waisa hi karta
aise hi 15 saal aur nikal gaye
ab tak aapka beta state level competition ke liye select ho gaya tha aur jit bhi jata lekin apne pita ke apne pita ke apne prati vishwas ko dekh ke use dar lagne laga ki woh haar gaya toh uska hero uske baare me kya sochega isliye woh drugs lene laga
lekin uska bad luck competition ke sirf 1 ghante pehle drugs lete hue pakda gaya aur use humesha ke liye suspend kar diya jisse uske pita ne usse baat karne se mana kar diya
Ye woh sah na paya aur sucide kar liya
Ye sab sunne ke baad sir ki aakho me gussa aur nami saaf saaf dikh rahi thi
Sir:- aapko kaise pata
Bade papa (muskurate huye) :- me jaisa dikh raha hu waisa hu nahi (sir ke khande pe hath rakhte hue) aap bhale hi national level winner ho lekin me pure universe ka best fighter ka khitab jit chuka hu mujhse panga mat lena kahi mera ek haath pad gaya toh apne bete ke pass na phuch jao
Sir :- mana mene ravi ke saath galat kia lekin is sab me mujhe bhi ek sikh mil gayi ki 'agar mukabla jeeto toh use apne dimag me mat chadhao aur agar haar jao toh dil me mat lagao' lekin lagta hai aap me ghamand jyada hi hai
Bade papa :- aadha gyan agyanta se jyada bura hota hai
Ye sach hai ki jeet ka ghamand aur haar ne ka dar bura hai lekin wohi yodha ko maha yodha banata hai
Sir :- kaise
Bade papa (muskurate huye) :- abhi bache ho jab bade hoge tab pata lagana
Itna bolke bade papa nikal gaye
Wohi ground me
Hum dono finish line ke najdik the ki tabhi us dusre ladke mujhe girane ke liye dhaka diya lekin mene achanak speed badha di aur wo khud hi gir gaya natija me jit gaya
Tab tak sir aur bade papa bhi aagaye
Me :- sir,bade papa dekhiye me jit gaya
Sir :- bhut ache i am proud of you
Bade papa :- itni jaldi khush mat ho ye toh bas 1 part hai 2 part abhi bache hai
Me (mayush hote hue) :- ji bade papa
Phir bade papa chale gaye
Sir :- dekho rudra jo tumne aaj kiya woh kabile tarif hai bhale me match nahi dekha lekin commentary se pata chala kaise tumne sako haraya sabse aakhir me se first position pe
Me (khush hote hue) :- ye bhi bade papa ki hi idea hai ki kabhi kisi competition me shuru me hi apni taakat mat dikhao balki pahle apne apko kamjor dikhao phir dheere dheere apni takat dikhao phir aakhir me apni sari taakat ko ek saath samne lao phir hum hi jeetenge
Phir me bhi waha se chala gaya
Sir (man me) :- aakhir ye aadmi chahta hai kya itne chote bache ko jung ke daav pech shikha raha hai

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My 1st story

Rudra (adventure story)


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Update 8



Jab me sir se milke maa baba se milne ja raha tha ki tabhi rahul aake mere gale lagke congratulations dene laga
Anjali (taunt marte hue) :- jita rudra hai tu nahi jo itna khush ho raha hai
Rahul :- bhai jite ya me baat ek hi hai lekin aap kyu jal rahi ho
Me :- rahul mujhe maa baba se toh milne de
Rahul :- sorry bhai
Me :- are isme sorry ki kya baat hai tu bhai hai mera
Rahul :- ji bhai
Phir me waha se maa baba ke pass chala gaya aur sabse pehle maa baba aur mosi ke pair chue aur unka aashirwad liya phir unhone meri tarif ki aur uske baad hum sab hotel me jaake jit celebrate ki uske baad sham ko ghar aa gaye jab me room me sone ja raha tha tab bade papa ne mujhe training karne me liye bulaya me mana karne laga toh wo mujhe utha kar le gaye phir mene bhi haar mankar beman se training karne laga usme saam ke 7 baj gaye race aur training karne se me itna thak gaya tha ki bed pe let te hi nind aa gayi jo sidha raat ko khane ke time khuli aur me fresh hoke khana khane baith gaya
Rahul (khana khate huye):- kal konsa competition hai bhai
Me :- kal nahi parso kal rest aur preparation ke liye diya hai
Rahul :- toh kya kal me aapke saath aapki help kar sakta hu wase bhi me baithe baithe boar ho jata hu
Me :- ha kyu nahi
Anjali:- agar tu iski madada karega toh yeh pakka har jayega
Baba :- are chup raho tum dono aur khana khao
Dono :- ji mama(rahul aur anjali baba mama maa ko mami kahte hai)
Phir sab ne khana khaya aur raat ko sote samay bade papa ne mujhe ghar ke library me bulaya jo ki har waqt band hi rahti thi jab me gaya toh mujhe waha bahut se weapons dikhe sare bhi antiques the
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Me :- bade papa ye itne sare wepons aapke pass kaise aur kyu
Bade papa :- woh aise ki ye ye sab mere hi hai aur jab samay aayega tab inka use bhi me tumhe sikha dunga
Me :- lekin bade papa aap mujhe itna train kyu karte hai jaise ki mujhe kisi jung me jana hai
Bade papa :- ye me tumhe tumhari training ke baad bataunga
Me :- kyu abhi kyu nahi
Bade papa :- kyuki duniya me har chij ka samay tay hota hai aur us samay se pahle kuch bhi agar aisa ho gaya jo nahi hona chahiye toh woh sabke liye bhut khatarnak bhi ho sakta hai samjhe tum ha bade papa
Bade papa :- mene tumhe yeh kitabe dene ke liye bulaya hai
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inhe har din yoga ke baad aur sone se pahle padhna aur jab man kare tab bhi padh sakte ho lekin in dono time tumhe padhna hi hai chahe jo bhi ho
Me :- ok bade papa
Bade papa :- aur ha sote waqt jo kitab padh rahe ho use apne takiye ke niche rakhna aur ye hum dono ka top secret hai is ke baare me kisi ko bhi mat batana
Me :- ji bade papa
Aur phir me apne room me jake woh kitab padhne laga 1-1.5 ghanta padhne ke baad mujhe jab nind aane lagi to me sone hi wala tha ki rahul aur anjali padhai ke liye mere room me aa gaye
Rahul :- bhai aap so rahe the kya
Me :- nahi re me toh bas sone ja raha tha
Anjali :- toh theek hai hum kal baat karenge
Me :- are nahi tum batao kya baat hai
Rahul :- aap hume padhane wale the na
Me :- sorry rahul aaj kafi thak gaya hu
Rahul :- are isme sorry ki kya baat hai bhai
Me :- good night rahul & anjali
Dono :- good night
Tabhi bade papa room me aa gaye
Rahul :- bade papa mujhe aapse baat karni thi akele me
Bade papa :- ha chalo
Phir bade papa aur rahul chale gaye me bhi anjali se kuch der baat ki phir woh bhi chali gayi phir bade papa room me aaye
Me :- kya hua
Bade papa :- sab theek hai aur koi sawal nahi jo bhi hoga sahi samay par pata chal jayega
Me :- ji bade papa
Bade papa :- aaj konsi book padh rahe ho
Me :- gupt yogatmik shakti
Bade papa :- theek hai ab jab tak ye kitab puri padhkar nahi hoti dusri kitab ko hath bhi nahi lagana
Me :- ok
Phir hum dono so gaye
Wohi dusri taraf aaj phir wo do beast jama huye the
Orange beast :- lord ki koi khabar
Black beast :- nahi aacharya(orange beast ka naam) lekin itna pata chal chuka hai ki unhone manav yoni me janm liya hai aur ab apne master ke saath jivan vytit kar rahe hai
Aacharya :- kya master ne bhi janm liya hai ye sab aakhir kyu ho raha hai kahi na koi bada shadyantra racha ja raha hai jisse hum abhi anjan hai
Tabhi waha 1 aur saya aata hai woh pura blue colour ka tha uske sharir se blue kirne aise nikal rahi thi ki mano aag ki lapte nikal rahi hi
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Use dekh te hi dono saye dar se kapne lage aur apne ghutno par baith gaye aur eksaath bolne lage
Dono :- mahamahim ko hamara salam
M.M :- acharya aur sura(black beast) aap dono dharti pe kya kar rahe ho
Sura :- mahamahim hume kuch varsho pahle kisi shakti shali shaktikunj ka anumaan hua tha dharti par tabhi hum 3no dharti par aa gaye
M.M :- 3no matlab
Aacharya :- humare saath igris bhi aaya hai
M. M:- aur kya pata chala us shakti ke baare me
Sura :- lord ne phirse janm liya hai manavyoni me aur unke saath master hone ki bhi sambhavna hai
M. M:- ho kya raha hai dharti par lord aur master ek saath agar unhe sambhala nahi gaya toh dhrti me narsanhar hone der nahi lagegi
Awaj :- aisa nahi hoga mahamahim
Abhi koi kuch aur bolta ki waha ek white saya aagaya wo aage aake mahamahim ke samne jhuk kar salam karne laga
M. M :- khade ho jao igris, aur batao kyu aisa nahi hoga jab lord ko purani bate yaad aagayi toh unke krodh ko koi nahi sambhal payeg
Igris :- kyunki unki krodhgni unke pass nahi hai jab yudh khatm hua tha tab lord ki krodhgni itni badhi thi ki khud master ne unki krodhagni ko apne andar sama li thi isliye is janm me unki krodhagni unke pass nahi master ke pass hai
M. M:- aur agar master ka krodh jagrit hua toh
Igris :- lord ke pass bhale hi unki krodhagni nahi hai lekin use shant karne ki urja jarur hai aur wohi master ke krodh ko shant kar sakenge
M. M:- theek hai jab sahi samay aayega tab mujhe bulana un dono ki prathamik shaktiya ko unhe de dunga
Igris :- mafi mahamahim lekin isbaar unhe unki shaktiya aasani se nhi milegi unhe us shakti ko pana hoga khudko unke kabil sabit karna hoga yahi shrap mila tha unhe yaad hai na
M. M :- ha kaise bhul sakta hu wo manhus din jab pure bramhand me khoon ki nadiya bahi thi
Igris :- abhi hume jana hoga suryodya hone wala hai
Phir woh charo saye waha se gayab ho gaye
Next dat
At morning
Aaj me jab utha aur kitab me se 1-2 yoga try kar raha tha tab mujhe kuch alag sa laga jaise ki me aag me jal raha hu lekin jab aakh khuli toh dekha ki sab sahi hai kidher bhi kuch bhi nahi hua isliye me aakhe band karke phirse yoga karne laga phir se aisa hi laga ki me jal raha hu lekin aakh kholi sab normal hi tha aisa 5-6 baar hua ab me thak har kar bina kisi tarf dhyan diye yoga karne laga aise hi 1 ghanta beet gaya lekin me toh jaise yoga karne me doob chuka hu ab aise hi yoga kar raha tha ki achanak meri aakhe khul gayi aaspass dekha toh kuch nahi tha ab mera yoga kane ka man nahi tha toh me phorse wahi kitab padhne laga 500-600 pages honge usme aur abhi toh me 8-9 pe hi pahucha tha ki training ka samay ho gaya
Tha jab me training ground pe pahucha toh ek surprise mera intezaar kar raha tha aur woh tha rahul jo ki pahle se training karne me laga hua tha
Me :- rahul tum yaha
Rahul (dudte hue) :- ha bhai me soch raha tha ki me bhi training karu aap ki tarah me bhi sikhunga bilkul aap ki tarah
Me (uske sath daudte hue) :- ye toh achi baat hai ab mujhe bhi partner milega
Rahul :- ha ab hum dono har waqt sath honge
Me :- ha
Aise hi bade papa ne aur bhi training karai jaha pe mujhe strictly train kia ja raha tha wohi rahul pe thodi kam sakhti dikhayi ja rahi thi aaj training ke baad me competition ke liye padhne laga wohi rahul bhi mere bag se kitab nikal ke padhne laga
Me :- kya padh raha hai
Rahul(bina book ka cover dekhte hue) :- history
Me :- boaring history padhne se acha mer help hi karde waise bhi book ulti pakdi hai aur woh science hai
Rahul :- me isi ka toh intezaar kar raha tha ki aap kab mujhse madad mange
Me :- waise tu anjali ke saath kyu nahi khelta woh toh teri sagi bahan hai me toh tujhe 1 se 1.5 mahine pahle hi mila hu
Rahul :- aapko acha nahi lagata kya aisa nahi hai lekin soch woh teri badi bahan hai use bhi lagta hoga ki uska bhai uske saath khele uske sath padhai kare
Rahul :- ha bhai mujhe bhi lagta hai ki me unke saath bhi apke saath karta hu waise msati karu padhai karu lekin woh har waqt mujhe tana marti rehti hai toh me kya karu
Me :- acha theek hai senti mat ho me hu na tere saath
Rahul :- ha bhai chalo competition ka preparation karte hai
Me :- waise tu training kyu kar raha hai
Rahul :- aapko dekhte dekhte mujhe bhi man hone laga toh mene bhi socha ki aapki tarah training karne laga
Me :- chal ab mujhe help kar(gk ki book iske taraf karte hue) ye deka yaha se yaha tak tu jitne ya jaise bhi question puch
Rahul(book lete hue) :- theek hai bhai
Phir uske baad rahul ne mujhse sawal puchne laga jiska answer me de deta aise hi din aur book dono complete ho gaye sham ko hum dono ko sath training karte dekh sab hairan ho gaye phir sab ko samjhane ke baad sab ne sath milke khana khaya jaha rohit har din se jyada khana kha raha tha me bhi uska sath dete hue aaj jyada khaya phir sab sone gaye me pahle gk ka revision karke yoga book padhne laga jab bade papa aaye tab unse kaha ki meri training slow kar dijiye jab tak rahul bhi mere level pe na aajaye thoda bahut manane ke baad bade papa bhi man gaye phir hum so gaye subah hum dono ne mil ke training ki uske baad me school nikal gaya jaha pe mera competition tha aaj hume mcq types question diye the
Jab me test deke ghar ja raha tha tab pata chala ki humara next competition bhi aaj hi hoga toh ab hum kya bole to hum bhi test ke liye ruk gaye jo ki mera bahut acha gaya sab mujhe pahle hi aata tha abhi 2 hafte wait karna tha jiske baad competition ka result announce hoga
Aise hi 2 hafte nikal gaye isme kuch khas nahi hua me aur rahul subah uthke sath exercise karte rahul ko yoga ke baare me nahi pata tha isliye me yoga apne kamre me hi karta tha us din ke baad ab tak har din kitab me likhi yoga karte waqt lagta ki mere har taraf aag lagi hai lekin sab ko ignore karke yoga karta rehta phir exercises ke baad pura di. Me aur rahul khelte rehte ya phir padhayi karte aur anjali maa aur mosi ki help karti thi kaam me aur phir humare sath khelti bhi thi
Aaj jab me yoga karke utha phir rahul ke sath exercise karta aur aaj hum brakfast kar hi rahe the ki doorbell baj uthi rahul ne jab darwaja khula toh waha humare school ka peon khada tha peon ne 1 letter diya aur chala gaya
Maa :- aisa kya kiya jo ghar tak school ke letter aane lage
Baba :- are padh toh lo ho sakta hai competition ka result ho
Maa :- ha me dekhti hu
Phir maa ne letter khola toh woh competition ka result hi tha
Me first tha aur first hone ka price tha ki is saal ki meri fees maaf ho jayegi is competition ke bare me santosh sir ne bataya tha
Ab sab mujhe badhayi de rahe the phir sabne breakfast kia phir har din ki tarah me aur rahul padhai karne lage phir sham ko training aise 13 saal nikal gaye
In 13 salo me bahut kuch ho gaya
1. rudra aur rahul dono ki training complete ho gayi (training me kya hua ye aapko time to time pata chalta jayega)
2. Rahul aur anjali ne bhi school me admission le liya woh teeno 1 hi class me padhte hai ab hal ye tha ki jaha anjali ache marks se pass hote hai waha rahul aur rudra pure school me top karte hai
Rudra jis bhi competition me part leta rahul bhi usi me leta aur dono ek dusre ko tough competition dete lekin har baar rudra hi 1st aata aur rahul 2nd
3. Rudra aur rahul dono ko ab yoga karte waqt kafi kuch mehsoos hota jo wo dono ek dusre se discuss karte lekin kisi aur ko nahi batate(jo ki aapko aage pata chalega)
4. Rudra aur anjali ek dusre ko pyar karne lage lekin is baare me dono jante hai lekin abhi tak kisi ne izhaar nahi kiya inke baare me ghar me rahul ko chod ke kisi ko nahi pata
4. Rudra jaha ekdum gussail hai use gussa aata nahi lekin jab aata hai samne wale ko chodta nahi iska gussa sirf anjali aur rahul hi shant kar sakte hai
5. Sujit (bade papa) ne inhe duniya ke sare fighting techniques aur har weapon ka use shikhaya hai
6. Jo kitabe inhe bade papa ne di thi jisse inhe kuch aisa chijo ka gyan mila hai jo samay ke anusar me aapko bata dunga
7. Aur bhu bahut si bate badli lekin woh aapko time to time flash back me pata chalregi
Ab apna phase 1 idher end ho chuka hai
Aur next update se phase 2 start hoga jo ki ful action aur thril se bhara hoga suspense bhi hoga aur ye humare story ka one of important part hoga aur isiliye me chahta hu ki aap mera sath aise hi dete rahe aur agar kuch suggestions ho toh wo bhi bataye
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My 1st story

Rudra (adventure story) :-

please read if you like then support and you dont like then please tell me where is my mistake
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Raat ka time tha ghanghor andhera
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us andhere ko chirte hue 1 bike jispe 2 ladke baithe the
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woh speed se ja rahi thi aur unke piche kuch gadiya speed se un bike sawaro ko pakadne ke hetu se unka picha kar rahe the

Aise hi picha karte karte wo bike aake 1 khai ke samne ruki aur bike ke rukte hi
Screeech
Screeech
Sari cars ne bhi achanak break mari
Aur un cars se 1 ke baad 1 aadmi nikle wo kul 25-30 aadmi the woh dikhne se hi gunde lag rahe the unke utarte hi woh dono bike sawar bhi bike se utar gaye
Gundon ka g kake aur ldkon ko l1 and l2 karke bulaunga.
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki usse pahle hi l2 kone nikal bhagta hai jise dekh kar sare gunde hasne lagte hai.
G :- ye kya ye toh bhag gaya ab tum akele hamara kya bigad lega
L1 :- jaise kal tere boss ki factory udayi waise hi tumhe bhi uda dunga
G :- acha toh tum ho woh umr se toh kam ho lekin puri factory udadi
L1 :- umr se kya hota hai aise kam karne ke liye jigra chahiye jo hai ham dono me
G :- wah bate toh badi hai teri lekin tera dost toh tujhe chod kar bhag gaya
Tabhi piche se l2 bolta hai
L2 :- are jara piche bhi dekho na tab bolo kon bhaga
G :- acha tu wapas aa gaya
L2 :- me gaya hi kab tha me toh ghum kar picbe aaya tha taki koi bach ke na nikal paye
L1 :- chal jyada time pass mat kar waise bhi ye humare kisi kaam ke nahi
L2 :- ji bhai
G :- are ye kya…..
Dhishkyon…..
Dhishkyon…..
Dhishkyon…..
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki usse pahle hi ek ke baad ek goliya chali aur ye goliya chalane wale wahi 2 ladke the
Hua ye ki jaise hi us gunde ne kuch bolne ke liye mu khola waise hi un do ladko ne apni jeb se 2-2 gun bahar nikal ke sab pe fire karna shuru kar diya

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Jisse jaha abhi kuch der pahle 25-30 aadmi the wohi ab lashon ka dher laga tha har tarf bas khoon aur lashe hi

L2 :- bhai agar inke leader kuch puchtach karte toh shayad aur pata chalta shayad
L1 :- nahi kuch pata nahi chalta sab bhade ke tatoo hai inhe kuch nahi pata
L2 : hume toh bas kuch hi addo ke baare me pata hai agar un haramio ko puri tarh se barbaad karna hai toh unke sare addon ke baare me pata hona chahiye
L1 :- jaise in sab addon ke baare me pata chala waise hi baki ke thikano ka bhi pata chal jayega
Tring-tring…
Abhi koi kuch aur bolta ki waha gire lasho mese kisi ka phone paja shayad ye unka leader tha
L2 ne phone uthake l1 ko diya aur l1 ne call utha liya
Samne se :- hello
Me :- (shanti se)
Samne se :- mardiya usko
Me :- jinse ap baat karna chahte ho wo abhi badlo ke rath se yampuri ja rahe hai aap bhi apna sara kaam pura karke rakhe kyunki kuch dino aap bhi usi rath me sawar honge
Samne se :- jis din tu samne aaya usi din tujhe maar dunga
L1 :- mar gaye mujhe marne wale
Samne se :- tujhe toh me dekh lunga
L1 :- agar dekhna hai toh hume milna hoga
Samne se :- Agar himmat hai toh samne aake dikha
L1 :- tu khud pata nahi kis bill me chupa hai aur mujhe lalkar raha hai ye toh wohi baat ho gayi ki chuha khud apne bill me dubak kar baitha hai lekin phir bhi bahar ke hathi ko maidane jung ke liye bula raha hai
Samne se :- teri itni himmat ki mujhe chua bola ruk tu abhi tujhe dhumdhke mar dunga
L1 :- are maine toh bola hi nahi ki tu chua hai lagta hai ki tune teri asliyat swikaar kar li hai acha hai waise bhi tu kis bill me chupa hai woh bata me khud aa jata hu tere pass
Samne se :- agar himmat hai toh laga pata me kaha chipa hu chal tujh pe ahsaan karta hu jis factory ko tune udaya usi ke basement me hu aa aur dikha himmat
Ye sunte l1 pta nahi kyu halka sa muskura deta hai lekin turant serious hote hue
L1 :- apne liye 4 kandho ka intezaam kar le kyunki agle 24 ghante khatm hone se pahle me teri chita ko agni dunga
Itna bolte hi l1 ne wo phone wohi khai se niche phek diya
L1 (l2 ki taraf dekhte hue) :- le ab usi harami se uske thikano ke address puchna
L2 :- me sahdev ko bolke backup ready rakhne ke liye bolta hu
Kuch der baad woh dono ladke ek bade haweli ke samne khade the puri tarah khoon se lathpath agar un dono ko koi kamjor dil wala dekh le toh tabhi mar jaye
Un dono ladko ke haath me talwar aur samne kate pade karib 30-35 aadmio ki lashe ye saaf bata rahi thi ki abhi kitni bhayanak ladai hui hogi waise khoon se sane huye woh do ladke chalte huye us haweli ke andar jate hai jaha 1 aadmi aaram se baitha tha jaise bahar kuc ho raha hai use kich pata hi na ho
L1 :- are tuti hui factory ke neeche kya mast basement banaya hai is ko banane wale karigar ka number de na mujhe
Wo aadmi :- raghu raghu
Wo aadmi apne guards ya gundon ko bulane laga
L2 :- koi fayda nahi sab mare gaye waise sach me tu chuha nikla wo bhi kam akal
L1 :- tune jhuta address deke toh hume bomb se udane ka mast plan banaya lekin sale agar hum tere jaise underworld don ki itni baja sakte hai ki wo khud dar ke mare apne aap ko house arrest kar sakta hai toh soch na ki humara dimag kitna tej hoga
Wo aadmi :- matlab
L1 :- tune apne original number se phone lagaya jise track karke hum yaha aa gaye
L2 :- kitna chutiya hai tu aaj tera marna tay hai agar jinda bachna hai toh hunare sawalo ka jawab de
Itna bolke l2 ne apni jeb se gun nikal ke uske pair pe goli mar di
Wo aadmi (dard se bil bilate hue) :- mmmm…. Mujhe maf kardo me sare sawalo ka jawab deta hu
L2:- pahle professional sawal
Tere sare thikano ka pata bata
Aadmi :- nahi wo log mujhe maar denge
Dishkiyaoon
Itna sunte hi l2 ne apni gun se uke kandhe par fire kar diya
Aadmi :- mat maro pls…. Mai bata hu
Phir woh aadmi ne rote hue sab bata diya jo l1 apne phone me record kar raha tha
L2 :- ab personal sawal (kuch photos phekte hue) in sab ko jante ho
Phir woh aadmi un photos wale logo ke bare me jitna use pata tha bata deta hai
Aur bhi kuch sawal jawab hue lekin jab sawal jawab ka daur ruka tab sabse pable l1 ne apni jeb se 1 cutter nikal kar sabse pahle us admi ki 20 ki 20 ungliya kat di phir jab us admi dard kam hua toh l1 ne uske sine pe pair rakh kar uske 2no hath ukhad pheke phir se dard kam hote uske 2no pair bhi ukhad pheke phir us aadmi ke kan ke pass jakar
L1 :- sabka hisab hoga koi naahi bachega bachenge toh bas wo log jo umsab ke gharwale jinki galti nahi hai lekin wo bhi aisi jindagi jiyenge ki us jindagi se jyada achi unhe maut lagegi aur shurwat hogi tere family se teri maut ke baad bhale hi woh alishaan bangle me rahe lekin khana toh dur pani ke liye bhi bheek magni padegi unhe chal ab soja subah sab log diwali ki spl news sunenge bas sunenge nahi balki manayenge bhi ek aisi diwali jo dekhne wala apne pure jivan kal me nahi bhulega
Itna bolke l1 aadmi ke sir ko dhad se ukhad pheck diya
L1 (l2 se) :- sari jagah check kar jo bhi kam ki chiz mile uthale aur agar koi insaan dikhe toh hath pair kat kar jinda chod dena
L2 :- ji bhai
L1 :- sahdev ko sab thikano ki list de aur
bol diwali celebration ki taiyari karo
L2 :- theek hai
Kuch hi der baad woh dono ladke aur unke sath aur 3 jan bhi the jinmese 2 ladke aur ek ladki thi wo sab ek aisi jagah par the ki jaha se pura shahar dikh sake
L1 jab l2 ki taraf dekhta hai toh l2 ki akho me aasu the
L1 :- kya hua aise ro kyu raha hai
L2 :- aaj hi ke din wo
Itna bolte hi l2 l1 ke gale lag kar rone laga
L1 :- shant hoja mere bhai shant ho ja rahul
Ji sahi samjhe l2 apna hi rahul hai aur l1 rudra
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki tabhi pure shahr me ek ke baad ek dhamake hone lagte hai jo kahi aur nahi balki unhi thikano par ho rahe the jin thokano ka address unhone nikala tha

Aakhir aisa kya hua rudra aur rahul ke saath jo masoom se bacho se murderer banne par majboor ho gaye

Kon hai wo log jo wo dono khel rahe is khooni khel me unka sath de rahe hai

Akhir kon tha wo aadmi jise rudra ne itni berahmi se mara

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My 1st story
Rudra (adventure story)
very nice update
 

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2 saal pahle


Aaj haweli me sab bade khush hai kyunki aaj rudra ka 18va janmdin hai
Har saal ki tarah ghar sajane ki jimmedari baba aur bade papa ki thi
Khana banane ki jimmedari maa aur mosi ne uthayi thi
Aur rudra ko busy rakhne ki jimmedari anjali aur rahul ne uthayi thi
Morning time
At home
Rahul aur rudra ki training 2 mahine pahle hi complete ho chuki thi isliye wo dono exercise sirf week me 1-2 baar hi karte the
But yoga wo daily morning me karte the 2 ghanta phir vapas so jate yehi un dono ki routine thi dono ki
Aaj subah 5 baje rudra aaram se soya hua tha ki tabhi uske room ka darwaja dheere se khula aur bina aawaj kiye koi uske kamre me ghus gaya aur rudra ki taraf badh hi raha tha ki tabhi achanak se rudra ki nind khul jati hai aur wo use khich kar bed par sula deta hai
hua yu ki aaj rudra ko yoga karte hue hi 5 baj gaye tabhi use apne kamre ke bahar halchal hoti mahsus huyi isliye wo turant bed pe lete lete sone ka natak karne laga
Rudra jab use bed pe leta deta hai tab wo bhag na jaye isliye uspar baith jata hai phir jab uska chehra dekhta hai toh muskura deta hai
Kyunki wo koi aur nahi anjali thi jo rudra ko sabse pahle wish karne aayi thi
Rudra :- kya baat hai aaj humara naseeb hi khul gaya ki khud pariyo ki rani humare room me padhari
Anjali :- uth saand kahike nahi toh me tere niche hi dab jaungi
Ab rudra uske uper se uth toh jata hai lekin phir use apne se chipaka kar so jata hai
Anjali :- ab ye kya chood mujhe
Rudra :- ab hum toh nahi chodne wale aakhir aap humari girlfriend hai aur hone wali wife
Anjali :- wo wife ke bache pahle prupose kar phir gharwalo ko mana phir me sochti hu ki tujhse shadi karu ya nahi
Rudra :- he bhagwan shadi se pahle itne nakhre shadi ke baad kya hoga mujh bechare ka
Anjali(ada ke sath) :- wohi hoga jo manjure anjali hoga
Rudra :- hye ye ada kisi din humari jaan jarur le legi waise aaj ye aasman ki hoor hum per bijli girane humare kamre me kyu aayi
Anjali :- aaj humare sartaj ka janmdin hai unhi ko wish karne aaye hai
Rudra :- acha lekin madam aapke is khel ke chakar me pata hai kya time hua kuch hi der me sara pariwaar darwaje pe khada hoga
Tabhi darwaja bajne laga
Anjali :- ab kya kare
Rudra :- wohi jo har din karte hai
Phir anjali rudra ke bathroom se 1 mug pani la kar rudra pe udel diya phir darwaja khola jab sabne kamra aur rudra ki halat dekhi toh sab hasne lage
Rahul :- are didi aap yaha kamse kam aaj toh bhai ko baksh deti
Anjali :- kyu aisa kya bada teer mar liya ki itne der tak sone diya
Rudra:- rehne de rahul apna bhi time aayega
Anjali :- jaise har kutte ka din aata hai waise hi inka bhi aayega kyu sahi kaha na
Bade papa :- band karo tum dona suraj uga nahi ki ladna suru
Maa :- sahi kaha bhaiya rudra beta happy birthday
Rudra :- thanks maa
Rahul :- happy birthday
Rudra :- thanks brother
Ph8r sab ne wish kiya uske baad sab breakfast karte hue aaj ki planning karne lage jab breakfast over hua tab Anjali aur rahul rudra ko leke sabse pahle mandir gaye waha se phir woh mall gaye jaha anjali ladies section me gyi
Rahul :- bhai aap cafe me baitho me abhi aaya
Rudra :- kaha ja raha hai
Rahul :- abhi aaya 2 minute bas
Rudra :- thik hai ja jaldi aana
Phir rudra cafe me jake wait karne laga jab rudra wait kar raha tha tabhi waha kuch 2 ladkiya aa gayi jo theek rudra ke samne baithe the
Jab un mese 1 ladki nazar rudra pe padi toh wo apne baki dosto se bolne lagi
1st ladki :- hye dekho kitna handsome ladka hai
2nd ladki :- kaha neha (toh 1st ladki ka naam neha hai)
Neha(rudra ki taraf point karte hue) :- are priya tere piche woh dekh samne
2nd ladki (priya) :- are ha kya handsome dikhta hai agar dad ne meri shadi sahil ke saath nahi fix ki hoti toh isi ko apna boyfriend bana leti
Abhi ye log kuch bolte ki tabhi waha 3 ladke aagaye aur un mese 1 ladke ne priya ko gale laga liya
Ladka :- hello priya what a present surprise
Priya :- ha sahil woh neha se milne aayi thi
Sahil :- hi neha inse milo ye mere dost sam aur sid
Neha :- hello sam hello sid
Phir 5 cho jan bate karne lage phir kuch der baad neha aur priya waha se uth kar order dene gayi tab wo 3 ladke kuch plan karne lage jo sunke rudra ko gussa aaraha tha ki abhi uth kar 3no ki haddi tod de lekin tabhi rudra ko idea aata hai aur wo unka sara plan apne phone me record kar deta hai phir jab dono ladkiya waha aati hai tab rudra waha jata hai
Rudra :- hello everyone
Sahil :- hi sorry hum ne pehchaana nahi aap kon hai
Rudra :- are pehchanoge kaise kabhi mile hi nahi aur me aap 3no se nahi in dono ladkiyon se baat karne aaya hu
Priya :- ji kahiye aap kon hum ne pehchana nahi
Rudra :- are abhi toh bola ki kabhi hum mile hi nahi toh pehchanoge kaise
Mai toh aapko birthday gift dene aaya tha
Neha :- lekin yaha kisi ka birthday nahi hai
Rudra :- aise kaise nahi hai aaj mera birthday hai isliye me aap logo ko 1 gift dene aaya tha
Neha :- are aapka birthday hai toh aap hume kyu gift denge
Rudra :- are aisa gift aapko puri life me kisine nahi diya hoga yakin maniye
Sahil :- abey oye sales man he kya
Rudra :- me pahle hi bola hu mujhe in dono se baat karni hai toh tu kyu bich me kud raha hai
Ab sahil ko gussa aa raha tha
Priya :- acha me bhi dekho aisa kya gift hai
Phir rudra unhe wo abhi ki recording dikhane laga jisme woh log planing kar rahe the unka plan tha ki abhi wo kisi bhi tarah unki coffe me nashi dawai dalke phir unka mms bana ke unhe blackmail karenge
Ye sab sunne aur dekhne ke baad sidha priya sahil ko 1 jordaar thapad jad diya jisse sahil aur uske dosto itne waqt se jo gussa kabu kiya wo ab chut gaya
Sahil :- sali kamini mujhe marti hai rook abhi batata hu tujhe
Rudra :- are bhai ladkiyo pe hath uthake kya fayda himmat hai toh mujhse lad
Sid(sahil ka dost) :- sahil bhai aap us randi ko sambhalo hum dono ise dekh lenge
Jaise hi wo dono mujhe marne ke liye aage badhe waise hi maine apne takat ka istemal karke dono ke pet me ek sath jordar punch mara ki dono khoon ki ulti karne lage aur wahi pet pakad ke tadpne lage
Apne dosto ka aisi halat dekh ke sahil bhi mujhe marne aaya woh jab aaya tab maine uske bhi pet me punch mara jisse wo apna pet pakadke wahi jamin pe beth gaya
Sahil (karahte hue) :- tujhe nahi malum tune kispe hath uthaya hai
Jab wo sambhal gaya toh usne apna phone nikal ke kisi ko call mila ke mall me bula liya
Kuch hi der baad mall me lathi aur hockey stick ke sath 5 gunde enter hue
Gunda leader sahil ke pass pahuch gaya aur sab halat samjhne laga phir sahil ne un sab gundo ko mujhpe hamla karne ko bola phir suru hua 1 vs 5 ka mukabla
Gunda 1 ne mujh pe apni hockey stick se hamla kiya lekin mene uski stick pakad ke us ke mu par punch mara jisse uske 2 dat sahid ho gaye aur uske hath se stick chut kar mere hath me aa gayi phir us hockey stick ke madad se me baki gundon ko andha dhund mar raha tha jisse kuch hi der me sare gunde adhmare ho gaye jab me aakhri gunde ko maar raha tha tabhi sahil ne mujh pe piche se war kiya
lekin uski kharab kismat tabhi rahul ki entry hui jab usne mujh pe hamla hote hue dekha toh wahi pass ka flower pot uthake sahil ke hath pe de mara jisse jis hockey stick se mujh pe humla kar raha tha wahi uske hath se chut gayi
Jab sab tham gaya tab police ki entry hui wohi aas pass ke logo mese kisi ne call kiya tha jab police aayi tab sab se puchtach hui tab sab ne bataya ki mene aur sahil ke bicb fight suru thi jab police officer ne sahil ko dekha toh uske tote hi ud gaye kyuki sahil is area ke mla ka eklauta beta tha tab usne promotion ke chakkar me sahil par janlewa hamla karne ke apradh me mujhe arrest karne laga lekin tabhi


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Sweetkaran

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2 saal pahle


Aaj haweli me sab bade khush hai kyunki aaj rudra ka 18va janmdin hai
Har saal ki tarah ghar sajane ki jimmedari baba aur bade papa ki thi
Khana banane ki jimmedari maa aur mosi ne uthayi thi
Aur rudra ko busy rakhne ki jimmedari anjali aur rahul ne uthayi thi
Morning time
At home
Rahul aur rudra ki training 2 mahine pahle hi complete ho chuki thi isliye wo dono exercise sirf week me 1-2 baar hi karte the
But yoga wo daily morning me karte the 2 ghanta phir vapas so jate yehi un dono ki routine thi dono ki
Aaj subah 5 baje rudra aaram se soya hua tha ki tabhi uske room ka darwaja dheere se khula aur bina aawaj kiye koi uske kamre me ghus gaya aur rudra ki taraf badh hi raha tha ki tabhi achanak se rudra ki nind khul jati hai aur wo use khich kar bed par sula deta hai
hua yu ki aaj rudra ko yoga karte hue hi 5 baj gaye tabhi use apne kamre ke bahar halchal hoti mahsus huyi isliye wo turant bed pe lete lete sone ka natak karne laga
Rudra jab use bed pe leta deta hai tab wo bhag na jaye isliye uspar baith jata hai phir jab uska chehra dekhta hai toh muskura deta hai
Kyunki wo koi aur nahi anjali thi jo rudra ko sabse pahle wish karne aayi thi
Rudra :- kya baat hai aaj humara naseeb hi khul gaya ki khud pariyo ki rani humare room me padhari
Anjali :- uth saand kahike nahi toh me tere niche hi dab jaungi
Ab rudra uske uper se uth toh jata hai lekin phir use apne se chipaka kar so jata hai
Anjali :- ab ye kya chood mujhe
Rudra :- ab hum toh nahi chodne wale aakhir aap humari girlfriend hai aur hone wali wife
Anjali :- wo wife ke bache pahle prupose kar phir gharwalo ko mana phir me sochti hu ki tujhse shadi karu ya nahi
Rudra :- he bhagwan shadi se pahle itne nakhre shadi ke baad kya hoga mujh bechare ka
Anjali(ada ke sath) :- wohi hoga jo manjure anjali hoga
Rudra :- hye ye ada kisi din humari jaan jarur le legi waise aaj ye aasman ki hoor hum per bijli girane humare kamre me kyu aayi
Anjali :- aaj humare sartaj ka janmdin hai unhi ko wish karne aaye hai
Rudra :- acha lekin madam aapke is khel ke chakar me pata hai kya time hua kuch hi der me sara pariwaar darwaje pe khada hoga
Tabhi darwaja bajne laga
Anjali :- ab kya kare
Rudra :- wohi jo har din karte hai
Phir anjali rudra ke bathroom se 1 mug pani la kar rudra pe udel diya phir darwaja khola jab sabne kamra aur rudra ki halat dekhi toh sab hasne lage
Rahul :- are didi aap yaha kamse kam aaj toh bhai ko baksh deti
Anjali :- kyu aisa kya bada teer mar liya ki itne der tak sone diya
Rudra:- rehne de rahul apna bhi time aayega
Anjali :- jaise har kutte ka din aata hai waise hi inka bhi aayega kyu sahi kaha na
Bade papa :- band karo tum dona suraj uga nahi ki ladna suru
Maa :- sahi kaha bhaiya rudra beta happy birthday
Rudra :- thanks maa
Rahul :- happy birthday
Rudra :- thanks brother
Ph8r sab ne wish kiya uske baad sab breakfast karte hue aaj ki planning karne lage jab breakfast over hua tab Anjali aur rahul rudra ko leke sabse pahle mandir gaye waha se phir woh mall gaye jaha anjali ladies section me gyi
Rahul :- bhai aap cafe me baitho me abhi aaya
Rudra :- kaha ja raha hai
Rahul :- abhi aaya 2 minute bas
Rudra :- thik hai ja jaldi aana
Phir rudra cafe me jake wait karne laga jab rudra wait kar raha tha tabhi waha kuch 2 ladkiya aa gayi jo theek rudra ke samne baithe the
Jab un mese 1 ladki nazar rudra pe padi toh wo apne baki dosto se bolne lagi
1st ladki :- hye dekho kitna handsome ladka hai
2nd ladki :- kaha neha (toh 1st ladki ka naam neha hai)
Neha(rudra ki taraf point karte hue) :- are priya tere piche woh dekh samne
2nd ladki (priya) :- are ha kya handsome dikhta hai agar dad ne meri shadi sahil ke saath nahi fix ki hoti toh isi ko apna boyfriend bana leti
Abhi ye log kuch bolte ki tabhi waha 3 ladke aagaye aur un mese 1 ladke ne priya ko gale laga liya
Ladka :- hello priya what a present surprise
Priya :- ha sahil woh neha se milne aayi thi
Sahil :- hi neha inse milo ye mere dost sam aur sid
Neha :- hello sam hello sid
Phir 5 cho jan bate karne lage phir kuch der baad neha aur priya waha se uth kar order dene gayi tab wo 3 ladke kuch plan karne lage jo sunke rudra ko gussa aaraha tha ki abhi uth kar 3no ki haddi tod de lekin tabhi rudra ko idea aata hai aur wo unka sara plan apne phone me record kar deta hai phir jab dono ladkiya waha aati hai tab rudra waha jata hai
Rudra :- hello everyone
Sahil :- hi sorry hum ne pehchaana nahi aap kon hai
Rudra :- are pehchanoge kaise kabhi mile hi nahi aur me aap 3no se nahi in dono ladkiyon se baat karne aaya hu
Priya :- ji kahiye aap kon hum ne pehchana nahi

Rudra :- are abhi toh bola ki kabhi hum mile hi nahi toh pehchanoge kaise
Mai toh aapko birthday gift dene aaya tha
Neha :- lekin yaha kisi ka birthday nahi hai
Rudra :- aise kaise nahi hai aaj mera birthday hai isliye me aap logo ko 1 gift dene aaya tha
Neha :- are aapka birthday hai toh aap hume kyu gift denge
Rudra :- are aisa gift aapko puri life me kisine nahi diya hoga yakin maniye
Sahil :- abey oye sales man he kya
Rudra :- me pahle hi bola hu mujhe in dono se baat karni hai toh tu kyu bich me kud raha hai
Ab sahil ko gussa aa raha tha
Priya :- acha me bhi dekho aisa kya gift hai
Phir rudra unhe wo abhi ki recording dikhane laga jisme woh log planing kar rahe the unka plan tha ki abhi wo kisi bhi tarah unki coffe me nashi dawai dalke phir unka mms bana ke unhe blackmail karenge
Ye sab sunne aur dekhne ke baad sidha priya sahil ko 1 jordaar thapad jad diya jisse sahil aur uske dosto itne waqt se jo gussa kabu kiya wo ab chut gaya
Sahil :- sali kamini mujhe marti hai rook abhi batata hu tujhe
Rudra :- are bhai ladkiyo pe hath uthake kya fayda himmat hai toh mujhse lad
Sid(sahil ka dost) :- sahil bhai aap us randi ko sambhalo hum dono ise dekh lenge
Jaise hi wo dono mujhe marne ke liye aage badhe waise hi maine apne takat ka istemal karke dono ke pet me ek sath jordar punch mara ki dono khoon ki ulti karne lage aur wahi pet pakad ke tadpne lage
Apne dosto ka aisi halat dekh ke sahil bhi mujhe marne aaya woh jab aaya tab maine uske bhi pet me punch mara jisse wo apna pet pakadke wahi jamin pe beth gaya
Sahil (karahte hue) :- tujhe nahi malum tune kispe hath uthaya hai
Jab wo sambhal gaya toh usne apna phone nikal ke kisi ko call mila ke mall me bula liya
Kuch hi der baad mall me lathi aur hockey stick ke sath 5 gunde enter hue
Gunda leader sahil ke pass pahuch gaya aur sab halat samjhne laga phir sahil ne un sab gundo ko mujhpe hamla karne ko bola phir suru hua 1 vs 5 ka mukabla
Gunda 1 ne mujh pe apni hockey stick se hamla kiya lekin mene uski stick pakad ke us ke mu par punch mara jisse uske 2 dat sahid ho gaye aur uske hath se stick chut kar mere hath me aa gayi phir us hockey stick ke madad se me baki gundon ko andha dhund mar raha tha jisse kuch hi der me sare gunde adhmare ho gaye jab me aakhri gunde ko maar raha tha tabhi sahil ne mujh pe piche se war kiya
lekin uski kharab kismat tabhi rahul ki entry hui jab usne mujh pe hamla hote hue dekha toh wahi pass ka flower pot uthake sahil ke hath pe de mara jisse jis hockey stick se mujh pe humla kar raha tha wahi uske hath se chut gayi
Jab sab tham gaya tab police ki entry hui wohi aas pass ke logo mese kisi ne call kiya tha jab police aayi tab sab se puchtach hui tab sab ne bataya ki mene aur sahil ke bicb fight suru thi jab police officer ne sahil ko dekha toh uske tote hi ud gaye kyuki sahil is area ke mla ka eklauta beta tha tab usne promotion ke chakkar me sahil par janlewa hamla karne ke apradh me mujhe arrest karne laga lekin tabhi


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2 saal pahle


Aaj haweli me sab bade khush hai kyunki aaj rudra ka 18va janmdin hai
Har saal ki tarah ghar sajane ki jimmedari baba aur bade papa ki thi
Khana banane ki jimmedari maa aur mosi ne uthayi thi
Aur rudra ko busy rakhne ki jimmedari anjali aur rahul ne uthayi thi
Morning time
At home
Rahul aur rudra ki training 2 mahine pahle hi complete ho chuki thi isliye wo dono exercise sirf week me 1-2 baar hi karte the
But yoga wo daily morning me karte the 2 ghanta phir vapas so jate yehi un dono ki routine thi dono ki
Aaj subah 5 baje rudra aaram se soya hua tha ki tabhi uske room ka darwaja dheere se khula aur bina aawaj kiye koi uske kamre me ghus gaya aur rudra ki taraf badh hi raha tha ki tabhi achanak se rudra ki nind khul jati hai aur wo use khich kar bed par sula deta hai
hua yu ki aaj rudra ko yoga karte hue hi 5 baj gaye tabhi use apne kamre ke bahar halchal hoti mahsus huyi isliye wo turant bed pe lete lete sone ka natak karne laga
Rudra jab use bed pe leta deta hai tab wo bhag na jaye isliye uspar baith jata hai phir jab uska chehra dekhta hai toh muskura deta hai
Kyunki wo koi aur nahi anjali thi jo rudra ko sabse pahle wish karne aayi thi
Rudra :- kya baat hai aaj humara naseeb hi khul gaya ki khud pariyo ki rani humare room me padhari
Anjali :- uth saand kahike nahi toh me tere niche hi dab jaungi
Ab rudra uske uper se uth toh jata hai lekin phir use apne se chipaka kar so jata hai
Anjali :- ab ye kya chood mujhe
Rudra :- ab hum toh nahi chodne wale aakhir aap humari girlfriend hai aur hone wali wife
Anjali :- wo wife ke bache pahle prupose kar phir gharwalo ko mana phir me sochti hu ki tujhse shadi karu ya nahi
Rudra :- he bhagwan shadi se pahle itne nakhre shadi ke baad kya hoga mujh bechare ka
Anjali(ada ke sath) :- wohi hoga jo manjure anjali hoga
Rudra :- hye ye ada kisi din humari jaan jarur le legi waise aaj ye aasman ki hoor hum per bijli girane humare kamre me kyu aayi
Anjali :- aaj humare sartaj ka janmdin hai unhi ko wish karne aaye hai
Rudra :- acha lekin madam aapke is khel ke chakar me pata hai kya time hua kuch hi der me sara pariwaar darwaje pe khada hoga
Tabhi darwaja bajne laga
Anjali :- ab kya kare
Rudra :- wohi jo har din karte hai
Phir anjali rudra ke bathroom se 1 mug pani la kar rudra pe udel diya phir darwaja khola jab sabne kamra aur rudra ki halat dekhi toh sab hasne lage
Rahul :- are didi aap yaha kamse kam aaj toh bhai ko baksh deti
Anjali :- kyu aisa kya bada teer mar liya ki itne der tak sone diya
Rudra:- rehne de rahul apna bhi time aayega
Anjali :- jaise har kutte ka din aata hai waise hi inka bhi aayega kyu sahi kaha na
Bade papa :- band karo tum dona suraj uga nahi ki ladna suru
Maa :- sahi kaha bhaiya rudra beta happy birthday
Rudra :- thanks maa
Rahul :- happy birthday
Rudra :- thanks brother
Ph8r sab ne wish kiya uske baad sab breakfast karte hue aaj ki planning karne lage jab breakfast over hua tab Anjali aur rahul rudra ko leke sabse pahle mandir gaye waha se phir woh mall gaye jaha anjali ladies section me gyi
Rahul :- bhai aap cafe me baitho me abhi aaya
Rudra :- kaha ja raha hai
Rahul :- abhi aaya 2 minute bas
Rudra :- thik hai ja jaldi aana
Phir rudra cafe me jake wait karne laga jab rudra wait kar raha tha tabhi waha kuch 2 ladkiya aa gayi jo theek rudra ke samne baithe the
Jab un mese 1 ladki nazar rudra pe padi toh wo apne baki dosto se bolne lagi
1st ladki :- hye dekho kitna handsome ladka hai
2nd ladki :- kaha neha (toh 1st ladki ka naam neha hai)
Neha(rudra ki taraf point karte hue) :- are priya tere piche woh dekh samne
2nd ladki (priya) :- are ha kya handsome dikhta hai agar dad ne meri shadi sahil ke saath nahi fix ki hoti toh isi ko apna boyfriend bana leti
Abhi ye log kuch bolte ki tabhi waha 3 ladke aagaye aur un mese 1 ladke ne priya ko gale laga liya
Ladka :- hello priya what a present surprise
Priya :- ha sahil woh neha se milne aayi thi
Sahil :- hi neha inse milo ye mere dost sam aur sid
Neha :- hello sam hello sid
Phir 5 cho jan bate karne lage phir kuch der baad neha aur priya waha se uth kar order dene gayi tab wo 3 ladke kuch plan karne lage jo sunke rudra ko gussa aaraha tha ki abhi uth kar 3no ki haddi tod de lekin tabhi rudra ko idea aata hai aur wo unka sara plan apne phone me record kar deta hai phir jab dono ladkiya waha aati hai tab rudra waha jata hai
Rudra :- hello everyone
Sahil :- hi sorry hum ne pehchaana nahi aap kon hai
Rudra :- are pehchanoge kaise kabhi mile hi nahi aur me aap 3no se nahi in dono ladkiyon se baat karne aaya hu
Priya :- ji kahiye aap kon hum ne pehchana nahi
Rudra :- are abhi toh bola ki kabhi hum mile hi nahi toh pehchanoge kaise
Mai toh aapko birthday gift dene aaya tha
Neha :- lekin yaha kisi ka birthday nahi hai
Rudra :- aise kaise nahi hai aaj mera birthday hai isliye me aap logo ko 1 gift dene aaya tha
Neha :- are aapka birthday hai toh aap hume kyu gift denge
Rudra :- are aisa gift aapko puri life me kisine nahi diya hoga yakin maniye
Sahil :- abey oye sales man he kya
Rudra :- me pahle hi bola hu mujhe in dono se baat karni hai toh tu kyu bich me kud raha hai
Ab sahil ko gussa aa raha tha
Priya :- acha me bhi dekho aisa kya gift hai
Phir rudra unhe wo abhi ki recording dikhane laga jisme woh log planing kar rahe the unka plan tha ki abhi wo kisi bhi tarah unki coffe me nashi dawai dalke phir unka mms bana ke unhe blackmail karenge
Ye sab sunne aur dekhne ke baad sidha priya sahil ko 1 jordaar thapad jad diya jisse sahil aur uske dosto itne waqt se jo gussa kabu kiya wo ab chut gaya
Sahil :- sali kamini mujhe marti hai rook abhi batata hu tujhe
Rudra :- are bhai ladkiyo pe hath uthake kya fayda himmat hai toh mujhse lad
Sid(sahil ka dost) :- sahil bhai aap us randi ko sambhalo hum dono ise dekh lenge
Jaise hi wo dono mujhe marne ke liye aage badhe waise hi maine apne takat ka istemal karke dono ke pet me ek sath jordar punch mara ki dono khoon ki ulti karne lage aur wahi pet pakad ke tadpne lage
Apne dosto ka aisi halat dekh ke sahil bhi mujhe marne aaya woh jab aaya tab maine uske bhi pet me punch mara jisse wo apna pet pakadke wahi jamin pe beth gaya
Sahil (karahte hue) :- tujhe nahi malum tune kispe hath uthaya hai
Jab wo sambhal gaya toh usne apna phone nikal ke kisi ko call mila ke mall me bula liya
Kuch hi der baad mall me lathi aur hockey stick ke sath 5 gunde enter hue
Gunda leader sahil ke pass pahuch gaya aur sab halat samjhne laga phir sahil ne un sab gundo ko mujhpe hamla karne ko bola phir suru hua 1 vs 5 ka mukabla
Gunda 1 ne mujh pe apni hockey stick se hamla kiya lekin mene uski stick pakad ke us ke mu par punch mara jisse uske 2 dat sahid ho gaye aur uske hath se stick chut kar mere hath me aa gayi phir us hockey stick ke madad se me baki gundon ko andha dhund mar raha tha jisse kuch hi der me sare gunde adhmare ho gaye jab me aakhri gunde ko maar raha tha tabhi sahil ne mujh pe piche se war kiya
lekin uski kharab kismat tabhi rahul ki entry hui jab usne mujh pe hamla hote hue dekha toh wahi pass ka flower pot uthake sahil ke hath pe de mara jisse jis hockey stick se mujh pe humla kar raha tha wahi uske hath se chut gayi
Jab sab tham gaya tab police ki entry hui wohi aas pass ke logo mese kisi ne call kiya tha jab police aayi tab sab se puchtach hui tab sab ne bataya ki mene aur sahil ke bicb fight suru thi jab police officer ne sahil ko dekha toh uske tote hi ud gaye kyuki sahil is area ke mla ka eklauta beta tha tab usne promotion ke chakkar me sahil par janlewa hamla karne ke apradh me mujhe arrest karne laga lekin tabhi


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Bahot hi badiya update he bhai....

To ye sab mar pit aur apni team banane aur gundo ko barbad karne ki suruat Rudra ke 18th birthday pe hi hui...

Aur ye Rudra aur Anjali abhi tak ghar walo ko apne pyaar ke bare me bataye nahi...

Lagta Ye sala MLA ke beta Sahil hi Rudra ki life ki bhasad ki wajah he par ab kya hoga jab police Rudra ko arrest kar rahi he...

Kya MLA ki vajah se Rudra ki family ko nuksan pahochega ya kuchh aur...

Bhai agle update ka besabri se intzaar rahega...
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