Adultery Rudra (adventure story) ( Completed )

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Spoiler: CHARACTER GUIDELINES

Dhamesh singh (dad) died

Jyoti singh (mom) died

Rudra (hero)

Rahul (side hero)

Anjali (rudra's love interest and sister of rahul) died

Sanjana (mother of rahul and anjali) died

Siddharth (father of rahul) died

Bade papa= sujit singh sodhi (died but his body captured by igris) unexplored character

Mahamahim (friend of igris) unexplored character

Sura (friend of igris) unexplored character

Aacharya (friend of igris) unexplored character

Balveer (son of sujit singh sodhi) 1st villain

niraj pandey (rahul ke chacha) 2nd villain

Choudhary (died but his body captured by myasur) unexplored character 3rd villain

Mr. X (kaal) slave of mayasur 4th villain

Mohini (another asur and slave of mayasur) 5th villain

Daitya (somer relationship with rahul and rudra) unexplored character

Paritosh thakur (famous business man friend of raj singh) unexplored character

Raj singh (city ka mla) unexplored character

abhay = CBI chief ki post par hai (friend of siddharth)

Abhi (cbi officer and friend of Rudra)

Sam cbi officer and junior of abhi

Arun cbi officer and junior of abhi

Dev cbi officer and junior of abhi

Sangeeta cbi officer and junior of abhi

Ram sharma (criminal killed by rudra (beast) brother of sahdev)

Sahdev UCA ka agent "agent lion" and friend of rudra

Some secret police services

STF (secret task force)

SST (secret service team)

UCA (under cover agency)

Bhau another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Ranga another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Lucky hacker from underworld killed by bhau

Shankar mahadevan (olg PM of india killed by abhi slave of bhau)

Trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra and also slave of mohini

Ojha slave of trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra

Sukka guardian of rudra in isla planet

Zeba guardian of rudra in isla planet

Friends of rudra in isla planet

harry isla ke main city ka prince unexplored character

simona Sirius desh ki princess unexplored character

somi Sirius desh ki second princess unexplored character

kayko argon desh ka prince unexplored character

sayli sinour desh ki princess unexplored character

Another characters

Lord of the spiritual beasts (rahul)

Lord of dragons

Lord of demon warriors (agrasen)

Lord of demon magicians

Professor albus principal of royal magic academy in isla

Professor snape professor and co founder of royal magic academy in isla

Professor Hagrid professor in royal magic academy in isla

Professor oak professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

Professor nura professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

There are more characters are comming in story

Main villain???

 

[VAJRADHIKARI]

kijiye ki ek 5 year ka baccha 5-5 kg ka weight kaise carry kar skta hai. Ek baar ko kahe agar carry bhi kar skta hai to itni jldi to karne se raha.

Sabse pahle shykriya rider sir jo ap is nachij ke story pe apni ray di
Aur aapke is line ka jawab story me aage milega

 

[VAJRADHIKARI]

Aur 5 year ka bacha geography thodi read krega history thodi read karega aisi book bhai itne chote claass me kaha hota hi ?

Ha bhai yaha meri galti jarur hui lekin aage me ise sudhar lunga

 

[VAJRADHIKARI]

Aur ek chij mujhe ye bhi achi nahi lagi ki aapne itna khubsurat bachpan ka part abhi hi khtam kar diya. Aapko ise abhi aur jyada chalne dena cahiye tha. At least 15 Upadte tak to rahne hi dete.

Bhai me ne bhi socha tha ki aisa hi ho lekin jab man chaha responce na mila toh mujhe laga ki thodi mature chije dikhayenge jase ki action chasing suspense and by any chance sex toh shayad aur reader aaye aur phir dheere dheere flashback me bachpan ke scense dikhaye jaye aur isiliye mene ye kiya abhi aage aapko flash back bhut se bachpan ke scense dekhne milenge

 

[VAJRADHIKARI]

Sbse phle aapko Sukriya bhai ki aap bhi readers se writers ki list me aa gaye haj. Aur Bahut hi khub bhai aapki story mujhe abhi tak bahut hi jyada pansd aayi. Overall aapka concept naya hai. Aur aapke likhne ka tarika aur words nahi bahut lajwab hai.
Aapki story me abhi to kai sawal aa gaye hai jinka jawab hme aage hi milega.
Story ka hero bahut ache se build hua hai. Uski bate bhi bahut sahi aur majedar ladi. Lakin mai kuch bato me aapko kahunga ki logic bhi thoda use kijiye ki ek 5 year ka baccha 5-5 kg ka weight kaise carry kar skta hai. Ek baar ko kahe agar carry bhi kar skta hai to itni jldi to karne se raha.
Aur 5 year ka bacha geography thodi read krega history thodi read karega aisi book bhai itne chote claass me kaha hota hi ? Ha aap uske bade papa ke through use wo book de kar read krne ko kahte to alag baat hai. Ki ye soch ja skta tha ki hero ka dimak alag hi level par hai isi liye wo ye smjhne laga hai.
Aur ek chij mujhe ye bhi achi nahi lagi ki aapne itna khubsurat bachpan ka part abhi hi khtam kar diya. Aapko ise abhi aur jyada chalne dena cahiye tha. At least 15 Upadte tak to rahne hi dete.
Aur aapko ek chij phle hi mai bata du ki ya to aap 1st Update se ya starting ke Update se hi agar aap sex dikhate to aapko views aur COMMENT. Bahut se milte lakin agar aap sex ke bina koi story start karte hai wo bhi ek new writer ho kar to aapke story ko hype milne me thoda time lagega jaise ki aap meri hi story utha kar dekh lijiye. Use bhi logo ka pyar milne me thoda time laga tha. To bas aise hi likhte jaiye aur sabar kijiye aapko bhi bahut sara pyarjarur milega.

Phir se 1 baar aapka bahut bahut Thanks शुक्रिया धन्यवाद मंडल आपला आभारी आहे

 

[Dark.King]

Nice Update for all

 

[VAJRADHIKARI]

Nice Update for all

Thanks brother

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro

 

[VAJRADHIKARI]

Update today at 10 - 10:30 pm

 

[VAJRADHIKARI]

Update 9 (phase 2)



Raat ka time tha ghanghor andhera

us andhere ko chirte hue 1 bike jispe 2 ladke baithe the

woh speed se ja rahi thi aur unke piche kuch gadiya speed se un bike sawaro ko pakadne ke hetu se unka picha kar rahe the
Aise hi picha karte karte wo bike aake 1 khai ke samne ruki aur bike ke rukte hi
Screeech
Screeech
Sari cars ne bhi achanak break mari
Aur un cars se 1 ke baad 1 aadmi nikle wo kul 25-30 aadmi the woh dikhne se hi gunde lag rahe the unke utarte hi woh dono bike sawar bhi bike se utar gaye
Gundon ka g kake aur ldkon ko l1 and l2 karke bulaunga.
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki usse pahle hi l2 kone nikal bhagta hai jise dekh kar sare gunde hasne lagte hai.
G :- ye kya ye toh bhag gaya ab tum akele hamara kya bigad lega
L1 :- jaise kal tere boss ki factory udayi waise hi tumhe bhi uda dunga
G :- acha toh tum ho woh umr se toh kam ho lekin puri factory udadi
L1 :- umr se kya hota hai aise kam karne ke liye jigra chahiye jo hai ham dono me
G :- wah bate toh badi hai teri lekin tera dost toh tujhe chod kar bhag gaya
Tabhi piche se l2 bolta hai
L2 :- are jara piche bhi dekho na tab bolo kon bhaga
G :- acha tu wapas aa gaya
L2 :- me gaya hi kab tha me toh ghum kar picbe aaya tha taki koi bach ke na nikal paye
L1 :- chal jyada time pass mat kar waise bhi ye humare kisi kaam ke nahi
L2 :- ji bhai
G :- are ye kya…..
Dhishkyon…..
Dhishkyon…..
Dhishkyon…..
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki usse pahle hi ek ke baad ek goliya chali aur ye goliya chalane wale wahi 2 ladke the
Hua ye ki jaise hi us gunde ne kuch bolne ke liye mu khola waise hi un do ladko ne apni jeb se 2-2 gun bahar nikal ke sab pe fire karna shuru kar diya

Jisse jaha abhi kuch der pahle 25-30 aadmi the wohi ab lashon ka dher laga tha har tarf bas khoon aur lashe hi
L2 :- bhai agar inke leader kuch puchtach karte toh shayad aur pata chalta shayad
L1 :- nahi kuch pata nahi chalta sab bhade ke tatoo hai inhe kuch nahi pata
L2 : hume toh bas kuch hi addo ke baare me pata hai agar un haramio ko puri tarh se barbaad karna hai toh unke sare addon ke baare me pata hona chahiye
L1 :- jaise in sab addon ke baare me pata chala waise hi baki ke thikano ka bhi pata chal jayega
Tring-tring…
Abhi koi kuch aur bolta ki waha gire lasho mese kisi ka phone paja shayad ye unka leader tha
L2 ne phone uthake l1 ko diya aur l1 ne call utha liya
Samne se :- hello
Me :- (shanti se)
Samne se :- mardiya usko
Me :- jinse ap baat karna chahte ho wo abhi badlo ke rath se yampuri ja rahe hai aap bhi apna sara kaam pura karke rakhe kyunki kuch dino aap bhi usi rath me sawar honge
Samne se :- jis din tu samne aaya usi din tujhe maar dunga
L1 :- mar gaye mujhe marne wale
Samne se :- tujhe toh me dekh lunga
L1 :- agar dekhna hai toh hume milna hoga
Samne se :- Agar himmat hai toh samne aake dikha
L1 :- tu khud pata nahi kis bill me chupa hai aur mujhe lalkar raha hai ye toh wohi baat ho gayi ki chuha khud apne bill me dubak kar baitha hai lekin phir bhi bahar ke hathi ko maidane jung ke liye bula raha hai
Samne se :- teri itni himmat ki mujhe chua bola ruk tu abhi tujhe dhumdhke mar dunga
L1 :- are maine toh bola hi nahi ki tu chua hai lagta hai ki tune teri asliyat swikaar kar li hai acha hai waise bhi tu kis bill me chupa hai woh bata me khud aa jata hu tere pass
Samne se :- agar himmat hai toh laga pata me kaha chipa hu chal tujh pe ahsaan karta hu jis factory ko tune udaya usi ke basement me hu aa aur dikha himmat
Ye sunte l1 pta nahi kyu halka sa muskura deta hai lekin turant serious hote hue
L1 :- apne liye 4 kandho ka intezaam kar le kyunki agle 24 ghante khatm hone se pahle me teri chita ko agni dunga
Itna bolte hi l1 ne wo phone wohi khai se niche phek diya
L1 (l2 ki taraf dekhte hue) :- le ab usi harami se uske thikano ke address puchna
L2 :- me sahdev ko bolke backup ready rakhne ke liye bolta hu
Kuch der baad woh dono ladke ek bade haweli ke samne khade the puri tarah khoon se lathpath agar un dono ko koi kamjor dil wala dekh le toh tabhi mar jaye
Un dono ladko ke haath me talwar aur samne kate pade karib 30-35 aadmio ki lashe ye saaf bata rahi thi ki abhi kitni bhayanak ladai hui hogi waise khoon se sane huye woh do ladke chalte huye us haweli ke andar jate hai jaha 1 aadmi aaram se baitha tha jaise bahar kuc ho raha hai use kich pata hi na ho
L1 :- are tuti hui factory ke neeche kya mast basement banaya hai is ko banane wale karigar ka number de na mujhe
Wo aadmi :- raghu raghu
Wo aadmi apne guards ya gundon ko bulane laga
L2 :- koi fayda nahi sab mare gaye waise sach me tu chuha nikla wo bhi kam akal
L1 :- tune jhuta address deke toh hume bomb se udane ka mast plan banaya lekin sale agar hum tere jaise underworld don ki itni baja sakte hai ki wo khud dar ke mare apne aap ko house arrest kar sakta hai toh soch na ki humara dimag kitna tej hoga
Wo aadmi :- matlab
L1 :- tune apne original number se phone lagaya jise track karke hum yaha aa gaye
L2 :- kitna chutiya hai tu aaj tera marna tay hai agar jinda bachna hai toh hunare sawalo ka jawab de
Itna bolke l2 ne apni jeb se gun nikal ke uske pair pe goli mar di
Wo aadmi (dard se bil bilate hue) :- mmmm…. Mujhe maf kardo me sare sawalo ka jawab deta hu
L2:- pahle professional sawal
Tere sare thikano ka pata bata
Aadmi :- nahi wo log mujhe maar denge
Dishkiyaoon
Itna sunte hi l2 ne apni gun se uke kandhe par fire kar diya
Aadmi :- mat maro pls…. Mai bata hu
Phir woh aadmi ne rote hue sab bata diya jo l1 apne phone me record kar raha tha
L2 :- ab personal sawal (kuch photos phekte hue) in sab ko jante ho
Phir woh aadmi un photos wale logo ke bare me jitna use pata tha bata deta hai
Aur bhi kuch sawal jawab hue lekin jab sawal jawab ka daur ruka tab sabse pable l1 ne apni jeb se 1 cutter nikal kar sabse pahle us admi ki 20 ki 20 ungliya kat di phir jab us admi dard kam hua toh l1 ne uske sine pe pair rakh kar uske 2no hath ukhad pheke phir se dard kam hote uske 2no pair bhi ukhad pheke phir us aadmi ke kan ke pass jakar
L1 :- sabka hisab hoga koi naahi bachega bachenge toh bas wo log jo umsab ke gharwale jinki galti nahi hai lekin wo bhi aisi jindagi jiyenge ki us jindagi se jyada achi unhe maut lagegi aur shurwat hogi tere family se teri maut ke baad bhale hi woh alishaan bangle me rahe lekin khana toh dur pani ke liye bhi bheek magni padegi unhe chal ab soja subah sab log diwali ki spl news sunenge bas sunenge nahi balki manayenge bhi ek aisi diwali jo dekhne wala apne pure jivan kal me nahi bhulega
Itna bolke l1 aadmi ke sir ko dhad se ukhad pheck diya
L1 (l2 se) :- sari jagah check kar jo bhi kam ki chiz mile uthale aur agar koi insaan dikhe toh hath pair kat kar jinda chod dena
L2 :- ji bhai
L1 :- sahdev ko sab thikano ki list de aur
bol diwali celebration ki taiyari karo
L2 :- theek hai
Kuch hi der baad woh dono ladke aur unke sath aur 3 jan bhi the jinmese 2 ladke aur ek ladki thi wo sab ek aisi jagah par the ki jaha se pura shahar dikh sake
L1 jab l2 ki taraf dekhta hai toh l2 ki akho me aasu the
L1 :- kya hua aise ro kyu raha hai
L2 :- aaj hi ke din wo
Itna bolte hi l2 l1 ke gale lag kar rone laga
L1 :- shant hoja mere bhai shant ho ja rahul
Ji sahi samjhe l2 apna hi rahul hai aur l1 rudra
Abhi koi kuch bolta ki tabhi pure shahr me ek ke baad ek dhamake hone lagte hai jo kahi aur nahi balki unhi thikano par ho rahe the jin thokano ka address unhone nikala tha

Aakhir aisa kya hua rudra aur rahul ke saath jo masoom se bacho se murderer banne par majboor ho gaye

Kon hai wo log jo wo dono khel rahe is khooni khel me unka sath de rahe hai

Akhir kon tha wo aadmi jise rudra ne itni berahmi se mara

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My 1st story
Rudra (adventure story)

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro