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[Abhi123]

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[Siraj Patel]

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[The_Punisher]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.


To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[Sandy307]

Hello guys....
Mein koi professional writer nahi hu fir bhi mein is story se kuch naya try karna chata hu.yeh story thodi bohot ANIME se bhi inspire hai.waise mein ne bohot si stories read ki hai lekin mujhe jis story ne andar tak hila ke rakh diya vo hai VJ4U ki ATTITUDE is story ne......waise wada toh nahi kar sakta ke mein DAILY UPDATES dunga but mein try karunga ke week ke 2-3 updates zaroor aaye...........so friends mujhe apne opinion dete rehna ke mein sahi jaa raha hu ya nahi..

A Beautiful Well Written Story Jay Sutar Bhai

Mujey Pata Hai Ye Story Kabki Complete Ho Chuki Hai, Main Xf Par Itna Active Nahi Rehta Abi Apni Story Ki Vaja Se Vapis Ayea Hun To Socha Koyi Badiya Si Anime Ya Chinese, Japanese Novel Se Inspired Story Apni Language Me Padhi Jaye.

Free Time Me Jada Tar Main Unki Novels Hi Padhta Hun Jo English Aur Other Language Me Hoti, Dusari Language Jada Padhne Se Kayi Baar Dimag Ka Dahi Ho Jata Hai, Dimag Ko Relax Karne Ke Liye Main Xf Par Story Ki Khoj Karne Laga.

Khoj Karte Huye Apki Story Samne Aa Gayi Jo Complete Thi, Jisey Dekh Maine Socha Jo Insan Meri One Of The Favorite Novels(Tales Of Gods And Demons) Se Inspired Hoke Itni Khubsurat Aur Badiya Story Likh Sakta Hai Uske Duvara Likhi Gayi Dusari Story Bi Badiya Hi Hogi.

Padhte Vakt Maine Koyi Review Aur Reaction Nahi Diya Vo Bi Is Liye Kyoki Ye Ek Complete Story Thi Aur Maine Ye Socha Tha Ki Agar Story Badiya Hogi To Hi Review Aur Update Par Reaction Dunga.

Aj Main Hajir Hun Story Complete Read Karne Baad Jay Bhai Wakaye Apki Story Bohat Hi Badiya Thi, Apni Bhasa Me Kahu To 1 No.

Sabi Story Elements Ko Apne Bohat Hi Khubsurati Se Story Me Piroya Hai Jis Vaja Se Story Me Kisi Chij Ki Koyi Kami Nahi Thi, Jis Jagha Par Jis Element Ka Istemal Karna Tha Apne Vaha Bohat Hi Bakhubi Se Istemal Kiya Hai.

Last Me Bs Itna Hi Kahu Ga Ki Apka Bohat Bohat Sukriya Hamare Samne Eysi Khubsurat Aur Lajawab Story Ko Hame Padhne Ka Moka Deyne Ke Liye.

Best Of Luck For Future Project
Keep Writing
Xièxiè

 

[Dipesh21]

Nice

 

[ASA786]

nice update

 

[ASA786]

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UPDATE 5
Us pahad ke dhool banana ke kuch din baad rajpalace mein rajsabha thi is Vishay ke upar maaharaj ko malum tha ke yeh ek na ek din zaroor hoga unhone apne pita se is ke bare mein suna tha ke swarnadesh ke pahadi janglon mein ek shaitani mage ko kaid kar ke rakha gaya hai saalo pehle……..

Sabhi mantri aa gaye the sabha mein….

Maharaj-aap sab ko malum hi hoga ke mein ne yeh rajsabha achanak kyo bulayi gayi hai……..jis shaitani mage ke bare mein ham sabhi sadiyon se sunte aa rahe hai vo ab aazad ho gaya hai lekin abhi tak ham yeh pata nahi kar paye hai ke vo ab kaha hai……..

Tabhi ek mantri bolta hai
Mantri-maharaj toh ab hame iss ke bare mein baki ke 6 deshon ko bhi batana hoga unhe satark rehne ke liye kahna hoga kyo ki agar vo aazad hua hai toh kahi bhi jaa sakta hai….
Maharaj- hamne bhi iss bare mein socha tha issi liye kal hi mein ne sabhi desho ko Sandesh bhej diya hai……..
Tabhi maha mantri kuch kehte hai
Maha mantri- lekin maharaj abhi tak aapke puvajo ki sword kisine nahi nikali hai aapke purvajo ne kaha tha ke jo bhi iss sword ko nikalega vahi rakshak kehlayega…..
Maharaj-abhi uss cheej ke liye waqt nahi bacha hai maha mantri……..ab hame yeh sab dekhna hoga hame toh ye bhi pata nahi hai ke us sword ko nikalne wala kabhi aayega bhi ke nahi…..
Aise hi yeh sabha chalti rahi idhar school ke headmaster ko bhi is baat ka pata chal chuka tha abhi vo issi bare mein kuch soch rahe the……

Swarnadesh ke capital ki seem ke jungle ke taraf se koi aa raha tha usne apne upar sar se leke paou tak ek kapda odh liya tha waha khade sainiko ne usse roka aur usse puchtach karne lage vo unki kisi baat ka javab nahi de raha tha tabhi usne ek chutki bajayi aur vo dono sainik khade khade hi behosh ho gaye vo aadmi fir aage badhta gaya……

Yeh jab ho raha tha tab raj aur uske dost class mei the tabhi raj aur Aditya ne kuch mehsus kiya dono ne ek dusre ki aur dekha dono ko pata chal gaya tha ke koi powerful person ne city mein enter kar gaya hai aur yeh jo bhi hai kaali shaktoyon se bharpur hai vo aadmi bhi chalte hue university ki taraf aa raha tha vo university ke gate pe khada ho jata hai aur yaha waha dekhne lagta hai vo abhi dusri taraf dekh hi raha tha ke uske samne achanak koi aa jata hai yeh aur koi nahi head master the…
Head master-koun ho tum aur yaha kya karne aaye ho……..tum jo bhi ho chale jao yaha se warna tumhare liye achha nahi hoga ye meri pehli aur aakhari chetawni hai…

Vo aadmi yeh sun ke hasne laga aur bola….
Aadmi- Toh ab tum ho us sword ke rakhwale…..hahahaha mujhe rok pana tumhari bas ki baat nahi jab vo buddha mujhe nahi rok paya toh tum kya rok paaoge…..tum mujhe us buddhe ke jitney bhi takadwar nahi lagte…..hahahahaha
Tab tak sabhi teachers mein se kuch teachers waha aa gaye the unhone bhi us aadmi ke negative powers ko feel kar liya tha un teachers mein prof.vishal bhi the vo jaake head master ke baju mein khade ho gaye……
Us aadmi ki khabar palace tak bhi pohoch gayi thi waha maharaj Shekhar aur Deepak issi baat pe kuch charcha kar rahe the jab unhe yeh baat pata chali ke vo abhi university ke gate pe khada hai toh unhe jhatka laga vo dono hi jaht se waha jane ke liye nikal gaye….
Yaha us aadmi ne apne upar se vo kapda hata diya jaise hi vo kapda uske body par se hata vo sabko nazar aane laga vo body toh yaha ke pehle rajguru ki thi par us body ke andar koi aur hi tha vo aadmi fir se hasne laga
Admi-kya hua chouk kyo gaye yeh tumhare koi rajguru nahi hai yeh toh unka bas shareer hai usmein ab mein hu ADHAKAASUR……hahahhaha.......

Wahi head master ne apne piche puri university ko ek magical shield se cover kar liya tha sabhi students bahar aa ke yeh sab dekh rahe the…

Abhi sab ek dusre ko dekh hi rahe the ke tabhi adhkaasur ne ek sword se head master ke upar war kiya par prof.vishal ne vo apne sword se bich mein rok liya sabhi bas yeh dekh rahe the tabhi piche se maharaj Shekhar aur Deepak dono hi saath mein university mein aa gaye unho ne dekha ke students safe hai tab vo us adhakaasur ke taraf badh gaye unke aane tak yaha prof.vishal aur adhakaasur mein ladai shuru ho chuki thi…….itne saalo ke liye kaid ho jane ke karan adhakaasur thik se ladh nahi paa raha tha vo jab bhi prof.vishal pe war karta vo usse rok dete yeh dekh ke vo gussa hone laga wahi raj aur baki students bhi yeh dekh rahe the……prof.vishal ke war ab ghatak hote jaa rahe the adhakaasur ab piche hat raha tha tabhi ussne ek chal chali aur apne 4 clone banaye aur unpe apna kaala magic use karne laga ek saath itne hamlo se prof.vishal khud ko thik se sambhal nahi paye aur unmein se ek do hamle unhe lag gaye unke haath se swrd niche gir gayi thi yeh dekh ke adhakaasur hasa aur usne unke upar war kiya lekin uska yeh war bhi bich mein rok diya gaya…..yeh war rokne wala Deepak tha usne usse ek kick mari aur door dhakel diya ab un dono mein ladai shuru hui jaise ki mein ne kaha tha ke raj ne sword chalana apne pita se sikha tha aur unki sword hamesha hawa se baate karti hai jab vo chalti hai yaha bhi wahi hua yaha Deepak combo pe combo attack kiye jaa raha tha usse adhakaasur ko ab kafi jagah lag chuka tha vo toh Deepak ke war bhi dekh nahi paa raha tha maharaj ne prof.vishal ko waha se unhe safe duri pe le gaye raj aaj apne pita ko fight karte hue pehli baar dekh raha tha usne sabhi logon se suna tha ke uske pita jaise sword koi nahi chala sakta…….ab Deepak ne apne sword combo ke saath magic ka hbi use karne laga usne pehle wind magic use kiya aur adhakaasur ko piche dhakela fir earth magic use karke usse aaju baju ke mitti mein jakad ne laga adhkaasur ko ab bohot hi gussa aa raha tha usne bhi ab apni puri powers ko release kiya aur Deepak ki taraf badh gaya raj ne yeh mehsus kar liya tha ke adhakaasur ne apni puri powers ko release kar diya hai yeh sabhi ke liye ghatak ho sakta hai usse kya kare yeh samjh nahi aa raha tha tabhi usse kuch apni aur fir se attract karne laga yeh sensation usse ek hi cheej se aata tha jab bhi vo uske paas jata yeh wahi sword thi raj waha se chupke se nikal gaya us sword ki taraf jab usne us sword ke daire me apna pehla kadam rakah thabhi usse malum hua ke sword ka force field bohot hi concentrated hai usse apne pair uthane mein bhi both time lag raha tha fir bhi jaise taise karke vo us sword ki taraf pohoch hi gaya usne us sword ke handle ko pakada aur jaise hi usne yeh kiya wahi head master ko yeh samjh gaya vo waha se gayab ho ke raj ke samne aa gaye aur kehne lage…

Head master- nahi raj abhi tum usse nahi nikal sakte tum uss sword ko powers ko abhi handle nahi kar sakte lekin raj abhi kuch bhi sun ne ke mood mein nahi tha balki us tak head master ki aavaj bhi nahi jaa paa rahi thi raj ne apne haatoh ki pakad sword ke handle ke upar majboot ki vo usse upar khichne ki koshish kar raha tha lekin vo bahar hi nahi aa rahi thi aur jab raj yeh sab kar raha tha aasman mein kale badal chane lage jor se lightning hone lagi sabhi isse dekh kar aasman ki taraf dekhne lage issi baat ka fayda adhakaasur ne uthaya aur Deepak ke upar bhi apna black magic se war kiya lekin Deepak bohot hi self-aware tha usne waqt rehte apne earth magic use kiya aur adhakaasur ke kiye war ke saamne ek diwaar khadi kardi par fir bhi vo magic uski diwaar ko todte hue Deepak ko lag gaya aasmaan mein Deepak ki cheenkh gunjh gayi aur isse ab raj ne bhi sun liya tha vo ab gussa ho ne laga usne bhi apni puri powers ko release kar diya tha isse waha khade sabhi ne mehsus kiya….sahbi yaha waha dekhne lage yaha tak ke adhakaasur ne bhi isse mehsus kiya vo bhi usse dhund ne lag gaya wahi raj ke gussa hote hi aasmaan mein aur jor se lightning hone lagi raj ne fir se apani puri taakad lagadi sword ko us patthar se nikal ne ki vo ismein ab kamyaab hone laga sword ab halki haki bahar aane lagi tabhi raj jor se chillaya aur uski body se bohot hi jyada matra mein light bahar aane lagi sabhi students waha jama ho agye sabhi bas raj ko hi dekh rahe the har badhte pal ke saath raj ki chamak aur bad rahi thi aur sword bhi bahar aati jaa rahi thi…

Wahi adhakasur abhi bhi ussi disha mein dekh raha tha jaha se light aa rahi thi maharaj ka dhyan iss baat pe gaya aur unhone apne magic se usse ek cage mein kaid kar liaya adhakaasur yeh dekh ke gussa ho gaya vo cage ko todne ki koshish kar raha tha par maharaj aisa hone nahi de rahe the vo jante the ke abhi agar adhakaasur bahar aaya toh vo sab kuch tabaah kar dega……

Wahi raj ne almost vo sword us patthar se nikal hi di thi kisi ko bhi kuch dikh nai paa raha tha uske chamakne ki wajah se sabhi teachers aur students ne apne aankhe band kar li thi yaha tak ke head master ne bhi tabhi jaha raj khada tha waha ek lightning bolt giri us bolt ne head master ki shield ko bhi tod diya tha ab thodi thodi chamak kam hone lagi sabhi fir se raj ki taraf dekhne lage uski aankhe band thi sabhi ne dekha ke raj ke haanton mein vo sword hai jo us patthar mein thi vo abhi bhi chamak hi rahi thi tabhi hawa mein kisis ki cheekh gunj gayi raj ne bhi is cheekh ke saath apni aankhe kholi sabhi bahar aaye aur unhone jab samne dekha tab sabhi ko bohot hi bada jhatka laga maharaj us adhakaasur se kuch duri par gire hue the Roshni ne jab yeh dekha tab vo behosh ho gayi adhakaasur jor jor se hase jaa raha tha….achanak uske samne koi khada hua usse jab mehsus hua adhakaasur do kadam piche hat gaya uske samne ab raj khada tha usne apni sword pe mutthi kas li usne jab apne aaju baju dekha tab usse apne baba niche gire hue dikhe yeh dekh ke toh uska gussa toh saatve aasman mein pohoch gaya aur usne ek chutki bajayi usse jo bhi ground mein the vo sabhi university ke andar aa gaye unke saath saath maharaj aur Deepak bhi head master ne maharaj aur Deepak pe apna healing magic use kiya aur unhe thik karne lage wahi bahar ab raj aur adhakaasur aamne samne khade the adhakaasur uski aankho mein dekh raha tha usse pata nahi kyo raj se dar lag raha tha suddenly raj ne apni sword se uspe war kiya….raj ke war karne ki speed itni fast thi ke adhakaasur ko sochne ka bhi mouka nahi mila raj ne war uske chest pe kiya tha side ways adhakaasur ke chest se khoon behne laga fir usne bhi raj pe apne war karne chalu kar diye lekin adhakaasur soche jaa raha tha k ek bacha usse itani takkar kaise de sakta hai ab vo apne black magic use karne laga lekin raj ne abhi tak koi bhi magic nahi use kiya tha vo bas apne sword se hi uske attack deflect kar raha tha yeh dekh ke adhakaasur ka gussa badh gaya aur usne ab sochna hi chod diya usne suddenly raj se duri banayi aur apne magic ko ek jagah par concentrate kane laga raj abhi bhi usse dekh raha tha adhakaasur apne magic se ek black energy ka gola banaya aur jor jor se hasne laga usne raj se kaha…..
Adhakaasur- kya hua bachhe dar gaye abhi toh mujhse ladh rahe the ha……lekin bachhe mujhe koi bhi nahi hara sakta fir chahe vo bhagwaan hi kyo na ho hahahahhaha…….

Raj bas usse dekhe jaa raha tha sabhi university se dekh rahe the koi bhi kuch kar nahi paa raha tha kyo ki abhi raj ne unhe shield ke andar rakha tha raj ke dost usse dekh rahe the….fir raje ne kuch kaha…

Raj-yahi tum chuk gaye adhakaaasur……..tum soch rahe ho ke kuch shaktiya shaitan se paa ke tum sabse taakadwar ho gaye lekin yeh bhul gaye ke us param pita Parmeshwar ke ijaajat je bina ped ka ek patta bhi nahi girta aur tum apne aap ko unke barabar soch rahe ho….

Yeh sunke adhakaasur ne apne haatoh ko aage kar diya aur vo magical gola raj pe chod diya sabhi bas dekhte hi reh gaye raj ne bhi dekh ke vo gola usske paas aata jaa raha hai usne ek nazar sabhi pe daali is waqt uske baba bhi usse dekh rahe the jab un dono ki nazar mili toh raj ne thoda smile kiya aur fir samne dekh k eek spell bola

PARTICLE STYLE- ATOMIC DISMANTILATION
yeh kehte hi raj ke haatho se ek white colour ki energy ray nikali aur jake us gole ko lagi………uske gole ke lagte hi vo gola destroy hone laga aur us ray ka kuch hissa adhakaasur ko bhi laga isse vo bohot hi jyada jakhanmi ho gaya aur niche gir gaya vo gola ab tak destroy ho gaya tha raj ab saamne dekh raha tha adhakaasur uske saamne khada tha vo raj ko gusse se ghure jaa raha tha usne raj se kaha….
Adhakaasur- bachhe yeh tumhe bohot mehnga padne wala hai dekhna mein iska badla zaroor lunga….mein wapas zaroor aunga dekh lena
Yeh keh ke vo gayab ho gaya.

ce update

 

[ASA786]

nice update

 

[ASA786]

nice update

 

[ASA786]

nice update