Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update 217

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Update 1

Mandawa—


Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar

Chcha -shaitan singh

Chachi-indra devi

Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h

Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h

Name----- surendra singh

gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega

Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh

Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.

Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h

Badi beti--
mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai
Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari h inke bich bhai bahan ke pyar se jayda he h ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h

Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3 saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h
Ab Intro ---pariwar ke kaam ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h


Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan

jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h


Dadi ---sumitra devi

Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..
Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko

Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge

Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .

Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate

Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunke gusa ho jati h aur kahne wali he hoti h ki dhekti h. chacha chale gaye toh man mai kahti ana to sham ko ghar pe he h aur kahti h wo kalank ka tikka harmkhore Raj kanha h aya ni abi tak ane do phir batati hu

Raj – chachi main agaya

Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..

Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h

Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h

Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi

Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.


Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......

Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai

Words mistake ho toh maaf kijiyega

Zabardast update

 

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[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update 37

Fleshback --- Deepika ke ghar se breakfast karke nikalne ke baad raj aur sonali baat karte huve ek plan bana ke commissioner office pahuchte h aur apna plan implement karte h ...jo ki bilkul fit baith ta h aur jaggu ko news milte he wo sab gundo ko ashram wali road pe laga deta h raj ke liye aur dusri traf raj sonali dono sonali ke ghar par hote h .....

Ab agai.......


Main--- mam khana toh acha banaya h apne ...

Commissioner—are bhai aj tumhare ane ki khusi mai isne ye paneer aur kheer etc banaya h. ...warna muje toh Daal chawal he khilati h....

Sonali--- sir ap h na bahut sikayat karte ho main aunty ko bolungi..

Commissioner—kyo meri hasti khelti surat achi ni lagti kya jo aisa kaam karne ki soch rahi h...

Main aur sonali hasne lage ..

Main---- uncle ap apni police ko alert pe rakhna aur sirf kabil aur imandar logo ko he chahe kanhi aur se bulane h toh bula lo par imandar chahiye aj se 4 din baad strike hogi ap ki police force ko sonali mam guide karengi aur i think muje lagta h agar jaggu ka khel khatm huva toh mam ka bi permotion ho jayega

Commissioner—beta main arrange kar lunga aur yanha ke local police walo ko sonali dhek legi ki koun best rahega aur ha permotion toh confirm hoga jaggu koyi mamuli criminal ni h pure heemachal mai uska gang h

Main—jald he uska kaam khatm hoga

Commissioner – ok beta ab main chalta hu kuch change ho toh sonali inform kar degi aur apni gun bina license wali sath rakhana

Sonali-- ji sir aur gate tak chod ke agayi ....

Commissioner ke jane ke baad raj ke bagal mai baith gayi ...

Sonali--- so whats the plan

Raj – filhaal muje sweet khana h

Sonali--- bus

Aur uthkar uski god mai baith gayiii aur Raj ko kiss karne lagi raj ne sonali ki kamar pakad rakhi thi aur full support mai kiss kar rahe the ek dusre ko jab sanso ne dikat di tab alag huve

Raj ---abi muje ashram jana hoga

Sonali--- 3 baje h abi toh baad mai chale jana .. yanhi ruk jao aj mumkin h toh..

Maine sonali ke chehre ko apne hatho mai liya aur kaha jaggu ka matter nipat jaye tab yanhi rukunga hum sath milke celebrate karenge ....par abi jana hoga warna guruji naraj ho gaye toh mera nikalna band......

Insab ke bich 9 se 2 baje tak school mai kya huva jaan lete h

Ravi – shweta raj ni aya city gaya h kya

Sunil

Shweta – ni toh wo toh aj ashram he h sunil ne bataya tha na

Kriti --- sad mood se ok..

Sunil--- kya huva ravi city se kuch mangana h kya muje bata de main deepika di se mangwa deta hu...

Javed – are ni ye toh bus aise he uske bare mai puch raha tha..

Shweta--- achaaa....maine toh kuch aur he socha.....

Sunil—vaise 3 4 din baad pti sir ke pass jane ki bol raha tha wo aur wanhi rukega agle din movie ke programme ke liye bol raha tha

Ye sun kar ravi javed ke chahre pe smile agai thi
Toh
Sunil ke chahre pe bi ek kutil muskaan thiii

Aur jab ye sab alag ho gaye tab

Shweta—dhekha meri acting

Sunil—bandariya over acting karne lagi thi

Shweta --- rahne de tu .. ye log sochte h humare chere pe toh chuuu

Sunil,-- chup meri maa bahut bolne lagi h agli baar aisa bola toh tange tod dunga tuje pata h na hum dono ko he galiya pasand ni h

Shweta – sorry sorry ab ayega maza....

Aur chutti ho gayi school ki aur sab chale gaye apni apni jagah

In shweta room


Richa--- yaar ye kabi ata h kabi ni muje raj ke aise kaam bilkul pasand ni h...

Shweta--- sabka ek persnal space hota h raj ko bandh mat warna pata ni koyi aur agayi toh baithi rah jayegi..

Richa – oh hello koyi aur agayi toh main kounsa uske liye baithi rahungi.. ladko ki line lagi h line...ek se badhkar ek paisa aur power walo ki...

Shweta--- man mai main toh khud chahti hu tu dur ho jaye kyoki tu ek gamandi ladki h aur muje pata h bhai ki life mai koyi aa bi rahi h wo tujse toh bahut achi h aur phir boli jo dikhta h wo kabi hota ni h....

Actualy raat ko shweta aur deepika ne bi raj ko sonali ki banho mai sota dhek liya tha

Time. 5 pm
Training ground

Raj ki dhunayi oh sorry sorry traing ho rahi thi Xabhi sir aur Raj ke moves ab quickle exchange ho rahe the but abi bi maar padh rahi thi raaj ko jo ki raj sah raha tha

Xabhi sir – good agar aise he heemat aur man laga ke training karoge toh 2 months mai tum close combat ke king ho jaoge

Piche se awaj ayi acha
Maine aur sir ne dhekha toh guruji khade the unka ek hath piche muda huva tha

Guruji--- jara dikhao muje ki kya sikha h choose karo ..attack ya defance ...

Main-defence

Guruji itna sunte he tezi ke sath ek hath mara meri chest pe jo itna tez laga ki kayi feet dur gira aur khada huva bi ni tha ki guruji ne piche se meri t shirt pakad ke fenka phir dur gira main khada huva jump laga ke unki kick ayi fast maine 2no hath se block kiya phir ek punch right dikhage diya left wala mu par maine block kiya aur thoda piche huva mere piche hote he again kick padi chest pe kayi feet dur khisakta huva piche gira

Mere toh hosh he ud gaye ki main 3 saal se hard training kar raha hu aur ek 70 ke near by age ke person ne aise dhoya h ki main jaise koyi bejaan ruii hu

Guruji --- abhi bahut jayda gunjaish h raj.mera 2 waar rok liya h matlb tumahari training achi ja rahi h Raj no one is perfect in world so always ready to learn ......main phir check karunga

Main --- ji guruji ...kuch ruk kar apse baat karni h

Guruji--- Raat 8 baje aur us bachi ko bi bula lo kya naam h sonali...Xabhi tum bi aoge
Xabhi ji guruji...

Time 8 pm guruji room

8 pm se 8.15 pm ho gaye the sab chup the

Main – gurujiii

Guruji --shant raho bus 5 minut
Knock knock ...

Guruji --- agar tumhe aj bi mujse saja lene mai itna he anand ata h toh yahi sahi tumhe saza milegiii jarur milegi...

Wo shaks ---- kayi saal se ni mili h saza apke hatho se isiliye late aya hu muje sab manjur h

Guruji – tikh h baitho aur inse milo.. ek kaam h jo tumhe inke sath pura karna h

Wo shaks –guruji ap kaanhe...ma...i..n na.....ka..r..u..chonkar ye yanha kya kar raha h

Guruji – iske sath he milkar karna h

Wo --- main nahi bilkul ni matlb no never impossible hum dono sath kabhi ni muje marna manjur h par iske sath ni karunga kaam.

Xabhi sir – muje kounse khujli wale kutte ne kata h jo main mar raha hu tere sath kaam karne ke liye muje bi ni karna h
Wo—tu marta bi hota toh bi ni karu tere sath

Xabhi—main bi nahi karna chahta hu samja tere sath puri planning ki maa bahan kardeta h tuu

Wo --- abe toh aise koun plan karta h ek ek ko marne ke liye pura din ni h mere pass

Xabhi --- toh puri jagah ko koun jalata h udata h information naam ki chidiya h wo leke ani hoti h.

Wo—abe murgi ko he maar do toh ande he ni degi kahe ki information ka jhanjhat

Main aur sonali aur sunil 3no garden ko kabhi idhar toh kabhi udhar kar rahe the kafi dair bardast no huva toh main bola

Main—ok ap dono rahne do hum khud karlenge..

Wo dono ek sath--- bache dubara hamare bich bola toh tuje ulta latka denge...aur koyi utarne bi ni ayega samja

Xabhi --abe Aag tera hamesa ka h ye

Aag --kya hamesa ka h pura din ni hota h mere pass petrol bomb laga aur jala de ni toh bum se uda de aur ghar rawana bus itna he hota h

Xabhi ---toh puri duniya ko batana jaruri h ki kuch karne aye h

Aag ----Aag toh jalti h tab duniya ko pata lagta he h apna simple fanda h ya toh jala ke maardo ya bum se udake gaad do...

Guruji--- chup ho jao dono Warna mujse bura koyi ni hoga beta raj jara wo goli dena pichli baar bi indono ke sath rahne pe he li thi aur aj bi ...ab agar tum dono lade toh dhek lena
Xabhi main kanha ladta hu ye he ladta h

Aag – tu meri baat ni manta h
Guruji chup ho jao aur uthkar ghumne lage

Xabhi aur aag sir—guruji

Guruji – chup chup bilkul chup tum dono bilkul chup koyi ni bholega dono mai se ...

10 mint sannata chaya raha phir Guruji bole

Guruji --- puri baat sunna Aag bich mai mat bolna isai milo ye h raj..pura naam Raj singh nirwaan
Aag sir nirwaan sir name sun ke dhayan se dhekne lage kabhi muje toh kabhi guruji ko

Guruji --- Baap ka naam Sahdev singh aur ye vidya ka beta h ....abi shant raho aur sunte raho isai abhi Xabhi training de raha h phir tumhe deni h
Aag sir shanti se Raj ko dhekte huve bus ha mai gardan hila dete h
Aur phir 5ke bich planning hoti h thodi dair baad jab Aag sir notmal hote h tab

Aag – guruji itno ki kya jarurat h ye kasm toh ye xabhi ki aur ishara karke ye akela bi kar sakta h na isliye muje iske sath kaam ni karna hota h kachuve jaisi chal se chalta h..
Xabhi--- dheklo guruji ye phir shuru gaya is sai shanti se kaam ni hota h...har baar shor sharaba karna jaruri hota h

Guruji – aj tum dono ander rahoge hum sab bahar ja rahe h aur tum dono ko sath kaam karna h aur planing ache se karke ana aur is fight mai training bi deni h toh ......jab bahar ao toh perfect plan hona chahiye aur sath milke hona chahiye bina lade...guruji aur hum sab undono ko chod kar gaye toh time 10 baj rahe the ......aur aur aur jab wo bahar aye subhe ke 5 baj rahe the Kyoki ek Aag ki trah violent h toh dusra planning master water ki trah perfect cool sahmati bante time lag gaya par abi bi ek shanti se kaam karna chahta tha toh dusra dhamake daar entry....



Aj ke liye itna he.....
Agai dhekte h ek aag h aur dusra pani ka tufan aur bich mai raj......solid lagne wali h.....

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update posted.....

 

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Bhai update kb tk ayega ?

Koi baat nahi bhai...

Hum intezar kar sakte hai

Waiting Sandeep bhai

Update posted bro

 

[Rocky666]

nice update