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Update 98

Finding past—begins

Police vs crimnal vs Raj




Police side .....scene 1

Kal ki huvi takrar se sonali and shivani kafi pareshan thi baat ab unki izzat par agayai thi wo behad gusai mai subhe he car ko leke haridwar nikal gayi uska gusa dekh kar shivani bi chup he baithi rahi .....Wo kuch bolti usai pahle sonali ka phone ring hona laga ....aur us phone ke ane se sonali ke chehre ke expression he change ho gaye the ab gusai ki jagah chahre pe sweet smile agayi.......

Hello....

Samne se --- kya kar rahi ho ..

Sonali--- kaam kar rahi thi aj apko bada time mila warna call karne se bi uthate nahi ho..

Samne se--- sorry kaha na apse Again sorry sorry...jald he milta hu sari sikayat dur kar dunga really apko bahut miss kar raha hu...

Sonali--- ne raj ke ye sabd sune toh uska dil ghabra gaya usi chinta mai usne puch liya kya huva koyi baat h raj ......

Shivani--- raj.....man mai oh toh andar jo baat suni thi wo sach h matlb madam really usai like karti h aisa kya h usmai par jo bi h madam ka ab mood tikh h...

Kuch pal baad call cut ho gaya ab sonali ke chehre pe jo gusai ki sikan thi wanha khayali muskan thi ....aur uske dimag mai ek he baat ghum rahi thi ki jald he milta hu aur sari sikayat dur karta hu ....car mai baithi khuli ankho se milne ka sapna dkhne lagi aur akhir kyu na dekha kounsi premika apne premi se milne ki laalsa tadap na rakhti ho...inhi khayalo mai .....Kab haridwar pahuche sonali ko pata he nahi laga.....

Shivani pure raste mai ye jaan gayi ki sonali puri trah raj ke pyar mai h aur raj unki jindgi mai bahut ahmiyat rakhta h ...

Jaise he sonali car se niche utari wo pyar ki duniya se nikal kar wapas hakikat ki duniya mai agayi...

Kumbh ke mele mai bhari security ka intezaam kiya huva tha state ki kafi police jagah jagah tainat thi har jagah talashi li ja rahi thi .....taki har sambhavit durghatna ko roka ja sake ..

Sonali aur shivani sidhi cyber monitoring room mai gayi ..janha wo cyber incharge se mile

Incharge – welcome mam sab controle mai h ..

Shivani---man mai ek toh karela upar se neem chada .... maut sir par h aur ye sab controle mai kahkar bhukhi sherni ko ched raha h din bhar gaye h iske......

Sonali--- achaa sach... muuch... fir jor se listen every one kisi bi choti si choti chij pe nighaye rakho jo bi suspectual lage turant bataye chahe kuch bi matlb kuch bi bomb blast ki planning h mele mai isliye koyi bi careless nahi rahega....check every one and everything ....

Shivani --- main yanha rukti hu check karti hu ki kya pata kuch dikh jaye ..

Sonali--- good aur main mele ke assspass check karti hu ...

Wo inspecter ke sath nikal padi mela check karne aur har jagah check karne lagi shops bus stand taxi stand ...subhe se sham ho gayi thi par kuch bi suspecious nahi mila tha...

Toh monitoring room mai shivani bi har jagah nighaye rakhe huve thi taxi stand bus stand...railway har jagah uski nighaye thi .....par majburan usai bi khali he rahna pada.....




Criminal side.......scene 2



Raka jor jor se hans raha tha kyoki uski manjil pass arahi thi ....aur wo pathan ko har tarike se khus rakh raha tha....

Raka--- police ko bhanak tak nahi h....bewakufo ki koyi kami nahi desh mai.....ao ek baar apko dikha lata hu ...

Aur raka ke admi alag tarah mele mai enter huve aur raka pathan bhaiyo ko jagah dikhata gaya jismai bomb blast plan kiya huva tha...raka ko pata tha ki uspe kisi ko sak nahi hoga isliye bedhadak wo ghum raha tha har jagah police ke samne par khali hath dekh kisi ne usai check nahi kiya ... ..Na uski identity pe sak kiya

Raka wapas pahuchkar jaise he blast hoga baghdadh mach jayegi aur hamare admi jo bus stand ke asspass chupe honge wo police ke liye nare bazi aur pather bazi shuru kar denge jisai dange suru ho jayenge ....

Pathan--- oye habibi dil khus kar diya tum. hamko bahut maza ayi tumhari baate sunke ham tumhari sifarish karegi....vithal se

Raka ko aur kya chahiye tha yahi toh sapna tha uska....

Raka bus kal hamare 100 admi jagah jagah fail jayenge aur hathiyar kachre wali gadi mai honge he bus intezaar hoga sahi waqt ka .....kal ka din jo hoga wo itihas mai likha jayega kal ki subhe barbadi layegi....




Deepika--- Scene 3 hostel...

Anjana--- morning 5 baje bus niklegi muje bi jaga dena yaar...aur tum sab bi so jao

Deepika--- ha jaga dungi yaar bhai se mile huve kaafi waqt ho gaya h....uski bahut yaad aarahi h...

Anjana--- so ja mahine he huve h saal nahi ......

Baki ladkiya deepika ko chedne lagi ki unhe uske bhai se milna h...kyoki raj ki taraf he itni suni thi .fir wo sab bi apne room mai chali gayi....

Deepika--- good night aur man mai main arahi hu bhai apke liye ek suprise leke..is baar apke dil ka ek dard main dur kar dungi apko apki kavita mamta ki photo dikha kar ..bus jald he milenge hum aur jald he miloge ap kavita mamta se....wo bi jald ayengi....




Scene 4.....Raj...



Raj sure ho ki subhe he ye kaam karoge...

Raj—us waqt pashupati ke log careless honge aur subhe ka ye waqt he aisa hota h jab sab nind mai honge ...

Ajju--- sab ready h ...hathiyaar etc bus nikalne ki dair h.....

Rajeev---ok toh wanha hume total 40 50 ke ass pass 2 jagah log milenge hum 2 team mai work karenge .....ek team Raj aur ajju ki hogi aur baki hum 3 honge aur ek he time dono jagah attack karenge.....

Raj—ok done.....rest karo....subhe nikalte h..

Gharpar

Ap fir ja rahe ho abhi toh ap recover huve ho chot se bhai...

Raj—tuje pata h na sab.acha yanha aa tu mere jane ke baad dhayan rakhegi khud ka ...

Phir uska matha chumkar chal khana khate h bhuk lagi h ....

Shwata tikh main lagati hu...

Subhe 3 baje fortuner se raj and party mission par ja rahi thi...ek ka motive tha pashupati ko secretly barbaad karna toh ek ka udeshya tha badla....badla apne pariwar ko khatm karne walo se usmai pahla number pashupati ka he tha ....destiny sab ki ek thi par wajah alag alag...raj jo shanti se bus soch raha tha ...uske man mai kya tha ye koyi nahi jaan sakta tha par rajeev janta tha kyoki kuch bate sonali ne batayi thi aur jitna usne bataya tha aur jitna raj ko janta tha usai ek baat tay thi ki agai jo kuch bi hoga wo bahut bhayanak hoga......2 hours ka rasta 1.5 hours mai he pura ho gaya .......gadi ko dheere se side mai laga ke ..

Rajeev---raj ab tum aur ajjuu sambhalo yanha half hour baad attack karna ...ok

Raj—ok... hum sambhal lenge baad mai isi highway pe 10 km agai milenge aur yaad rahe safety pahle ....ok ..

Raj aur ajju paidal he nikal pade aur ghar ki char deewari ke pass pahuch gaye...

Ajju--- ruk kyo gaye hum ...

Raj—hamesa pahle ache se check karlena chahiye wo samne dekh chain dikh rahi h wo kutte ki h aur uski motayi se pata lag raha german suffered ya bulli dog kisi ki toh h ...dikhte he shoot kar dena ok....

Ajju--- ne gardan hilayi aur dhundhne laga jo aur mil bi gaya usai ek koune mai ped ke niche so raha tha ek clikkkk....ki awaj huvi aur silncer pistal se nikli goli kutte ke sir ke aar paar ho gayi....

Phir dono boundary wall se khudkar andar agaye ....aur makan ko aram se charo taraf se dekhne lage karib 10 kamre bane huve the 2 manjila makaan mai...Sab kuch check karne ke baad...

Raj--± main jab kahu granade ko main gate pe fod dena jisai sabka dhayan agai hoga jab tak main piche se upar floor par chad jaunga phir tum ...samne ruk ruk kar firing karna sabka dhayan tumhari taraf rahaga....

Kuch der baad bhadammmm boommmm ki awaj huvi aur isi ka reaction dekhne ko mila ghar ke andar se tez shor ane laga bhagne ki awaj ayi aur sab log bahar ki taraf dekhne lage ki dhamke ka shor kanha huva h aur kuch he palo mai wo samaj gaye ki gate ki taraf se aya h aur bahar dekha toh gate ki chitde ude huve the...kuch log jo bahar ki taraf bhage the unmai se ek ko goli lagi uske niche girte he sab ruk gaye aur wapas bhag kar chuup gaye...aur cross firing karne lage

Itni goliya ek sath firing ate dekh....

Ajju--- one vs one suna tha two bi suna three bi suna par one vs itne itne sare filmo mai he dekha h ....hey uparwale bachana.......haar baar team galat he kyo mil jati h ....




Ajju bi ruk ruk kar fire karta raha ....raj jo upar pahuch chuka tha apna dagger nikala aur upar se jo firing kar raha tha uska gala kaat diya....phir dheere se room ki taraf bhada aur andar seediyo ko dekha ki uske pass toh nahi h na ...aur sure hote he andar agaya laghbhag sab niche the bus 5 jane jo niche taka jhanki kar rahe the unhe hawa he nahi lagi ki koyi unke piche bi h...

Pahla – ye koun aagaya h marne ke liye bc inhe pata na h ki jawalapur pashupati mla ka h ...

Dusra—chutiye jo bi h usai pata h ki ye makan kiska h apne sade se muu se kaam ki baat bol...

Par pahle wale se koyi jawab na aya toh us taraf dekha aur ankhe choudi ho gayi aur wo kuch bolta usai pahle niche se usai cheerta huva khanjar sir se bahar agaya.......aur jald he pancho farsh par pade huve the...

Niche floor par...

Lagta h ek he admi h kalu ...lambu patlu tum deewar kudh ke jane ki kosis karo aur maar do

Sab nikal gaye tabi ek petrol bomb jalta huva upar se niche aya aur andar sab chilla pade patlu lambu jo bahar nikake the unhone jaise he mud ke dekha ek jalti huvi chij unki taraf ayi aur boom ...ki awaj se fat gayi aur wo bi jalne lage kuch log khidki khol bahar agaye ....aur bahar yamraj unka wait kar raha tha wo koyi reaction dikhate usai pahle he raj ne bina ruke unhe kaatna suru kar diya wo hath ghumate hath kat ta tang ghumate tang kat ti fire karte toh apno ko he goli lagti karib 10 minut mai sab niche gire pade the....

Ajju--- ye awaj ani band kyo ho gayi bc main mar toh nahi gaya ya kaan kharab ho gaye h....

Usne andar jhank kar dekha toh sab niche gire pade the ....wo khada hoke andar aya

Raj andar jao aur dekho kya kaam ka h jo bi ho utha ke le ao ...

Wanhi dusri taraf

Shruti abhay aur rajeev ne alag he kaand kiya pahle jagah ko dekha fir main gate pe aag lagayi aur baad mai har kamre mai petrol bomb fenk diye pure ghar ko he jala dala ..arahi thi toh sirf chillane ki awaje ...

Shuruti—raj ne sach kaha tha jitna tadpaoge utna sukun paoge in log ne kitno ko mara h rape kiya h aj inki tadap dekh dil se khusi ho rahi h .......

Rajeev--- rang chadne laga h sangat ka....

Sab chal diye wapas ....

Ajju aur rajeev paidal he bhage ja rahe the kache rasto se highway ki taraf unhe searching mai bahut sare jameen ke kaagaj mile unhe usne jala diye ...aur karib ek cr ke asspass cash mila usai tang liya pith mai....

Ek hour baad highway pe wo pahuche toh samne unhe rajeev mil gaye...

Rajeev--- ye pith mai kya h....

Raj—inam h hamari mehnat ka 50 lakh ap baant lijiye baki rajeev sir garib bachiyo ke liye jo bi imandaar trust h usmai daal dijiye ...

Shuruti raj ko emotional nazar se dekh kar tum wakayi Nek dil ho raj

Rajeev--- chalo chalte h...Yanha rukna tikh nahi h....




Haridwar -----

Ye kya h baba yanha toh itni bheed h maine toh kabhi nahi dekhi itni bheed

Baba--- ha ha ha beti ye 10 saal mai ek baar hota h kahte h is samay mai dubki lagane se aatma sudh ho jati h aur uski atma ke liye swarg ke dwar khul jate h ...

Poonam ye sab dekh kar bahut khus aur excited thi wo aj pahli baar apni city se bahar ayi thi uske liye sab romanchak tha jaise ek chote bache ko utsukta rahti h waise he uske dil mai thi aur uski ankho mai ye utsukta aur chamak asani se dekhi ja sakti thi.....

Chachi--- ab chalo bi jaldi se hotel mai rukne ne ki vyavasta karte h subhe jaldi snan ke liye jana bi hoga na ..

half hour baad ek hotel ki khidki se poonam raat ki jagmagat dekh rahi thi...

Usne sirf filmo mai he itni lighting aur badi city dekhi thi par aj wo sab hakikat mai dekh rahi thi ....

Usi hotel ki dusri khidki se ek shaks aur bahar ki jagmahat dekh raha tha uski ankho mai ek khali pan tha tabi usai awaj ayi...

Raj.....

Raj—huuu....

Rajeev--- next pashupati ka support h uska beintiha paisa jo uske pass h ..

Raj—aur usi ke liye he hum yanha h...ajju details samjha do...

Aur wo room ke bahar bani lobby mai city view ke liye agaya aur ek baar fir wo apne khayalo mai kho gaya....par usne dhayan na diya ki ek aur thi jo pass ke room se bahar usi ki trah chakachond mai dube sahar ko dekh rahi thi par dono ko dekhne Ke najariye mai fark tha....janha ek ki ankho mai khalipan tha toh dusre ki ankho mai utsukta thi....

Par kismat ne aj unhe karib la diya tha sirf ek deewar ki he duri thi par fir bi dono anjaan the ek dusre se ....

Ek apne baba ke sath itni dur haridwar agayi ...

Toh raj apni maa ke katilo ko barbaad karne itni dur agaya.....kya ye bi itefaq tha ya koyi rishta jo itni dur se dono ko pass khinch le aya....fir bi dono ek dusre se anjaan kuch kadmo ki duri pe he khade h anjane banke ..... kya hota h inki kismat mai ....par waqt ka ek khel aur khela ja raha h raj ki bua jisai wo dhundta fir raha h wo bi haridwar he agayi.... ..kya wo takrayegi raj se..agar is baar raj chuk gaya toh sayad fir kabhi apni bua se wo dubara mil he nahi payega......kya wo nikal payegi yanha se ya fir koyi musibat ane wali h....




Aj ke liye itna he .....

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Tadap......



Fleshback---

Sonali--- itne pass agaiye mere muje call tak nahi ki pata h na main tumse dur muje he pata h main kaise rahti hu...par tum ho ke kuch samajte he nahi ho......phir uske hoto par kiss kari.....tum mere dil ki halat kab janoge raj ki how much i love u jabse maine tumhe samja main samaj gayi ki mere. Liye tumse acha koyi nahi hoga...aur muje pata h main tumse age mai badi bi hu...par main kya karu main tumhe beintiha pyar karti hu .. i love u so much ....aur khubsari kiss raj ko kari .....




Bahar koyi saya ye sab sun aur dhek raha tha....aur uske chahre ke bhav koyi nahi samaj sakta tha na dhek sakta.....saya phir wanha se hat gaya....



Sonali--- main apne pyar se tumhe paungi raj main sirf tumhari hu....good night bolke ek hour apna dil ka haal suna ke wo wapas kamre mai agayi...uske dil mai pura viswaas tha ki ek din Raj uske pyar ko samjega aur usai uska hak uska pyar milega ....aur wo ant tak raj ke pyar ko pane ke liye kosis karti rahegi....



Ab agaiiiiiii



Subhe ke waqt jab meri nind khuli to subhe ke 6 baj gaye the main fresh huva aur nahane chala gaya...Phir jab naha ke aya toh sonali ek jeans aur Top mai bed pe baithi thi maine unhe toh usne muje dhekha aur uske chehra pe smile agayi....

Sonali--- jab tum gaanv agaye toh muje call kyo nahi kiya...ya itna he lagav tha mujse ....

Sonali ki lagav wali baat sunke muje richa ki baat yaad agayi jab start mai jab kriti mujse flirt karti thi tab richa kahti thi bus itna he pyar aur lagaav tha mujse jo ab ye chudail tumhe pasand agayi h..

Mere utare huve chahre ko dhek ke sonali sayad kuch kuch samaj gayi wo mere pass chalte huve ayi aur mere gaal pe hath rakh ke

Sonali--- main sirf tumhe tang kar rahi thi tum aise ho he nahi ho ki kisi ko bi bhul jao tum wo ho jo har rishta sambhal ke sahej ke rakhta h...koyi badnaseeb he hoga jo aise heere ko galat samje..ao yanha baitho..mere samne...mere pass...

Aur phir muje baitha ke khud samne ghutno ke bal baithke muje apne gale laga liya..

Main--- ap jo kah rahi ho sabko nahi lagta h yakeen har kisi ko nahi hota h aur hota bi h toh sabko yahi lagta h ki koyi kisi dusre ladke ya ladki ke sath h ya kisi se pyar h toh wo Bus matlab ka h...

Sonali--- Raj jindgi mai har trah ke insaan h kisi ke liye uska sacha viswaas he uski jindgi h toh kisi ke liye uska sacha pyar he uski saanse h raat din bus wo apne pyar ke liyesochta ya sochti rahti h....kuch bi hojaye kisi bi halat mai wo uspe viswaas bana ke rakhta h ya rakhti h.... Isliye har insaan ki soch alag h ...




Main--- ap jo kah rahi h ye sab sirf kitabo aur kisai mai he hota h. jiska hakikat mai koyi wajud nahi h ...

Sonali—man mai ek baar ankhe utha ke dekho raj sache pyar ka wajood tumhare samne h main karti hu na tumhe pyar beintiha pyar main karti hu tum pe viswas apni jaan se jayda mere rahte tumhe kabhi pyar ki kami mahsus nahi hogi....tumhe jo karna h karo msin rakhungi na tumpe viswas meri sanse chalengi tab tak....

Phir sonali raj se

Sonali--- kisi ek ke dokhe se kabhi pyar khatm nahi hota h raj muje pata h ...tumhare sath kya huva h ..Par trust me richa ko jab sachayi pata lagegi na uski man dil ki halat kya hogi bus muje he pata h jab apne pyar ko ap pa nahi sakte aur uske khone ka dar kya hota h ye main bhali bhanti janti hu .....aur uski halat bi bin pani ki machli ki trah hogi jo na toh jee payegi aur na mar payegii..uska dard bus roj usai tadpayega...

Main—ho sakta h ap sahi ho par ab uske liye meri jindgi mai koyi jagah nahi h aur na pyar ke liye. pyar sirf matlabi aur dhokhe ka naam h jo apko kamjor banata h aur main ab is pyar naam ki kamjori se hamesa dur rahunga...

Sonali—pyar kamjori nahi takat hoti h ye ek din tum jarur janoge pyar kya hota h ye bi janoge waqt sab bata dega....tumhe pad raj bus itna yaad rakhna pyar wo takaat h jo mare huve insaan ko jinda kar deti h ,jo insaan na umid hota h usai umid deti h, pyar wo takat h jo apko rah dikhati h.....




Main---Ap itni positive kaise rah pati ho aur ap meri itni care kyo karti ho muje pata h ap deepika didi aur sunil se hamesa mere bare mai pata karti ho....

Sonali--- becouse becouse phir khud ke man mai i love u idiot i love u so much my life ...

Main—batao na....

Sonali--- hadbada kar becouse u r mine i care you becouse i like you...

Main--- gale laga ke i like you too..muje apse achi dost kabhi nahi milegii jo itni care karegi meri.....ap hamesa mera sath dena

Sonali--- Man mai main toh puri jindgi biwi banke tumhari lover banke care karna chahti hu ek baar ha bolke dhekho koyi kami nahi ane dungi tumhari jindgi mai ...

Phir dono mai shanti cha gayi kyoki dono ke dil mai ek TADAP thi jo dono ki alag alag thi ...par dono ka dil he be intiha Tadap raha tha ...




Tabi deepika enter huvi..

Hum dono ko aise dekhkar

Deepika---Ahhhmmmm ahhhmmm kya chal raha h aur Raj tum bina t shirt gale lagaye baithe ho .. thodi toh sharm karo agar pasand h toh...

Main---Diiij aur sharma kar t shirt aur apni jeans utha ke bathroom mai bhag gaya..

Sonali--- tu sudhregi nahi na...

Deepika--- wao kya love moment tha aur oye hoye chahere pe chamak he alag h aj toh lagta h kuch khass kar diya h bhai ne ..

Sonali--- shut up abi college life mai ayi h aur bigad gayiii h ...

Tabi ...ek awaj aur ayi..

Shweta--- koun bigad gayi h....

Sonali aur derpika---Tum bigad gayii ho ...

Shweta---he he he main main toh sidhi si bachi hu masum si bholi si aur phir apni palke jhapkane lagi...

Deepika – muje pata h tu kitni masum h teri sari bate pata h jo tu karti rahti h .... aur sb toh jhoot bolna bi sikh gayi h thahar tu main batati hu tuje...

Toh udhar Sp office mai....

Shivani ka office telephone baje ja raha tha bari bari aur yahi halat commissioner ki bi thi itne police walo mai se kisi ne kal raat he agai mla tak inform kar diya tha aur yahi haal sabhi ka tha...aur shivani sir pakad ke baithi thi.....kyoki ek toh upar se itna pressure aur upar se special officer wo bi rajasthan mai toh sabki halat kharab thi ki kya hoga aur upar se ye case wo personaly handle karegi toh sabko dar tha ki kya hoga...kyoki heemachal wale kaand se leke delhi kaand ki sonali ki achievements pure bharat police department mai faili huvi thi.....

Thodi dair baad hum sab nashta kar rahe the aj hum sab late the 8 baj gaye the sabke uthte uthte toh dadaji ne bi mehmano ke kaaran kisi ko nahi kaha kuch

Dadaji--- toh sp sahiba...

Sonali—Dadaji ap muje beti ya dantkar jo bi chahe jaise chahe kahle par ye sp ya sp sahiba nahi.....

Dadaji---- tikh h beti toh Raj apko heemachal mai mila aur tabse ap inke sath jud gayi ....

Sonali---jii dadaji mulakat buri thi par galat fahmi dur hote he hum dost ban gaye...Raj ek behad samajhdar aur dusro ki izzat karne wale h...

Dadaji – dhayan se dhek ke tikh h ap kuch dair baad humse hamare room mai akele milyega apse jaruri baat karni h.

Sonali--- dadaji hum dopahar ko baat kare aj kal wali harkat ke liye pahle police commissioner office jana h..jara dhekhu ki apki taraf Aur raj ko hathkadi lagane ki heemat bhi kaisi ki..

Dadaji--- uski jarurat nahi padegi humne phone kar diya tha raat ko he...

Sonali--- Dadaji ap muje apni poti bi mante ho aur apke phone se uski noukri chali jayegi wo imandaar officer h par kuch bate usai samjani h wo main samjaungi usai sayad usai hari singh ki sachayi pata nahi hogi kyoki muje pata h raj kabhi bewajah itni maarpeet nahi karta h ...

Dadaji--- tikh hum dono sath chalenge aur baki sab yanhi rahenge taki hum raste mai baat bhi kar sake....




Dadaji ke jane ke baad mere room mai main leta huva tha aur mere ek taraf shweta aur ek taraf deepika leti huvi thi ...aur dono se he bahut sari baate huvi ...phir Deepika raj ke balo mai hath ferte huve ..

Deepika--- toh ab janab ab Uttarakhand jayenge ...

Main---main di ko gale lagate huve di ap tane mat maro meri kuch jimaidari h isliye main delhi nahi aa sakta hu padhne apko pata h na... Par ha jane se pahle is chipkali ghar jana h saman lene toh jarur chalenge taki ap bi unse bi mil lo ...

Deepika--- sab samjti hu tuje main agar aisi baat h toh is bandariya ko kyo chipkaye rakhta h..

Shweta--- Dii apne muje bandariya kaha main apka khun pi jaungi.....

Aise he inke bich baate hoti rahi aur bahan bhai ki nokh jhok aur masti bi ....raj bi kaafi dino baad bahut khus tha....

Dur UTTRAKHAND mai-----

Rajiv --- Dekh raka teri dushmani mujse h tu mere pariwar ko mat gashit maine bahut kosis ki par tere bhai ka kuch pata nahi lag raha h bus itna pata laga h ki wo shimla se dehradhun wale highway se aya tha city ki taraf par pahucha nahi ..

Raka--- ha ha ha mere bhai ko main dhund lunga main bus un carodo ke drugs aur hathiyaro ki baat kar raha hu jo tune gayab karke rakhe h...aur unhe jama nahi jaraye h police mai .tuje pata nahi h wo kiska maal tha samja...

Rajeev--- maine nahi pakda tha unhe aur main kaise chupa sakta hu...

Raka---- maine tuje pahle he bahut din de diye h ab sif tere pass 10 Din h . pahle bi warning di thi abki bar apni family ko city se bahar bheja toh jaan se maar dunga aur agar tune mera maal muje nahi diya toh teri biwi aur ye beti is duniya ke kisi randi khane mai milengi samja .....aur tu chah kar bhi inhe dundh nahi payega

Itna kah raka chala gaya par rajeev kya kar sakta tha usne drugs aur hathiyar sab jala diye the aur bekar huve hathiyaro ko gaad diya tha aj wo khud ko bahut bebas mahsus kar raha tha...par usai upar wale pe viswas tha ki wo jarur koyi rah nikalega.....




Same time commissioner office..

Neeli batti se Dadaji aur sonali niche utare toh bahar sab police wale salute marne lage pura mahkma khada tha .....Jab dono andar pahuche toh commissioner mla ne abhiwadan kiya aur shivani ne salute mara....

Sonali – Report ......

Phir shivani ne report di...thodi dair report ko padhne ke baad ..

Sonali--- miss shivani toh where is your witness..and where is your complaint report yanha ye sab missing kyo h...

Sp shivani--- main kosis kar rahi witness mil jayega ....

Sonali---R u sick aur R u blind miss shivani ...

Sp shivani – mam par...

Sonali---maine kya kaha abhi aur raat ko bhi kaha tha ap yanha abhi sirf Aur sirf isi liye kyoki main nahi chahti thi ek imandar police officer department mai se kam ho warna apko suspend ka order raat ko he commissioner sir ke pass achuka h puch lijiye...

Shivani--- ki halat toh waise he kharab ho gayi thi.....

Sonali--- aur apke tranfer order apko mil jayenge ok ye apka punishment h ap yanha se dur pakistan border jaisalmer district mai jayengi ....ye apke liye sabak h kabhi kabhi sahi karne ke liye galat karna padta h dhayan rakhna.....hamari mulat dubara jarur hogi yaad rakhna main kuch bi aise he nahi karti hu ..phir piche mudkar chale dadaji .

Commissioner – ap yanha rukti toh acha hota..

Sonali—nahi main yanha dadaji aur raj se milne ayi hu toh wanhi ghar par he rukungi ...

Aur phir dono ghar agaye bich raste mai kya baate huvi ye kisi ko bi nahi pata thi par sonali ke chehre pe ek duniya bhar ka sukun tha ......

Jab dono wapas pahuche toh sonali ne dhekha ki teeno bhai bahan aram se ek dusre ki banho mai letr huve h toh wo bi side mai aake late gayii...

Sonali--- chamakti ankho se mere sath delhi chalo na kuch din wanha bi rahlo .....

Sonali ki ankho mai ek pyar bhari request thi..

Main---muje yanha 20 din ho gaye h toh 2 din ruk kar chalte h taki ye badmaas bi wanha mummy papa se mil legi aur packing kar legi....aur ek week wanhi delhi he rahunga toh apke pass bi rakhunga ....

Deepika--- sonali ki ankho ki khusi saaf padh sakti thi toh usne chedne ke liye ka toh phir tikh h jab bhai apke pass ayega tab main bi apke pass rahungi

Ye sunke sonali ke chahre ka rang utar gaya jisai dekh deepika muskarayi main ek kaam karungi apse toh milti rahti hu is baar main anjana ke sath shweta ke ghar rukungi aur uncle unty se bi mil lungi...

Shweta--- wao di i m so happy phir toh delhi shoping masti movie pub jayenge....

Main--- shant gadha dhari bhedm shant ho ja ...

Aj sonali ka dil khusiyo se bhara tha kyoki kuch din raj akela uske pass rshega toh wo usko benitiha payar degi




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Finding past—begins

Police vs crimnal vs Raj




Police side .....scene 1

Kal ki huvi takrar se sonali and shivani kafi pareshan thi baat ab unki izzat par agayai thi wo behad gusai mai subhe he car ko leke haridwar nikal gayi uska gusa dekh kar shivani bi chup he baithi rahi .....Wo kuch bolti usai pahle sonali ka phone ring hona laga ....aur us phone ke ane se sonali ke chehre ke expression he change ho gaye the ab gusai ki jagah chahre pe sweet smile agayi.......

Hello....

Samne se --- kya kar rahi ho ..

Sonali--- kaam kar rahi thi aj apko bada time mila warna call karne se bi uthate nahi ho..

Samne se--- sorry kaha na apse Again sorry sorry...jald he milta hu sari sikayat dur kar dunga really apko bahut miss kar raha hu...

Sonali--- ne raj ke ye sabd sune toh uska dil ghabra gaya usi chinta mai usne puch liya kya huva koyi baat h raj ......

Shivani--- raj.....man mai oh toh andar jo baat suni thi wo sach h matlb madam really usai like karti h aisa kya h usmai par jo bi h madam ka ab mood tikh h...

Kuch pal baad call cut ho gaya ab sonali ke chehre pe jo gusai ki sikan thi wanha khayali muskan thi ....aur uske dimag mai ek he baat ghum rahi thi ki jald he milta hu aur sari sikayat dur karta hu ....car mai baithi khuli ankho se milne ka sapna dkhne lagi aur akhir kyu na dekha kounsi premika apne premi se milne ki laalsa tadap na rakhti ho...inhi khayalo mai .....Kab haridwar pahuche sonali ko pata he nahi laga.....

Shivani pure raste mai ye jaan gayi ki sonali puri trah raj ke pyar mai h aur raj unki jindgi mai bahut ahmiyat rakhta h ...

Jaise he sonali car se niche utari wo pyar ki duniya se nikal kar wapas hakikat ki duniya mai agayi...

Kumbh ke mele mai bhari security ka intezaam kiya huva tha state ki kafi police jagah jagah tainat thi har jagah talashi li ja rahi thi .....taki har sambhavit durghatna ko roka ja sake ..

Sonali aur shivani sidhi cyber monitoring room mai gayi ..janha wo cyber incharge se mile

Incharge – welcome mam sab controle mai h ..

Shivani---man mai ek toh karela upar se neem chada .... maut sir par h aur ye sab controle mai kahkar bhukhi sherni ko ched raha h din bhar gaye h iske......

Sonali--- achaa sach... muuch... fir jor se listen every one kisi bi choti si choti chij pe nighaye rakho jo bi suspectual lage turant bataye chahe kuch bi matlb kuch bi bomb blast ki planning h mele mai isliye koyi bi careless nahi rahega....check every one and everything ....

Shivani --- main yanha rukti hu check karti hu ki kya pata kuch dikh jaye ..

Sonali--- good aur main mele ke assspass check karti hu ...

Wo inspecter ke sath nikal padi mela check karne aur har jagah check karne lagi shops bus stand taxi stand ...subhe se sham ho gayi thi par kuch bi suspecious nahi mila tha...

Toh monitoring room mai shivani bi har jagah nighaye rakhe huve thi taxi stand bus stand...railway har jagah uski nighaye thi .....par majburan usai bi khali he rahna pada.....




Criminal side.......scene 2



Raka jor jor se hans raha tha kyoki uski manjil pass arahi thi ....aur wo pathan ko har tarike se khus rakh raha tha....

Raka--- police ko bhanak tak nahi h....bewakufo ki koyi kami nahi desh mai.....ao ek baar apko dikha lata hu ...

Aur raka ke admi alag tarah mele mai enter huve aur raka pathan bhaiyo ko jagah dikhata gaya jismai bomb blast plan kiya huva tha...raka ko pata tha ki uspe kisi ko sak nahi hoga isliye bedhadak wo ghum raha tha har jagah police ke samne par khali hath dekh kisi ne usai check nahi kiya ... ..Na uski identity pe sak kiya

Raka wapas pahuchkar jaise he blast hoga baghdadh mach jayegi aur hamare admi jo bus stand ke asspass chupe honge wo police ke liye nare bazi aur pather bazi shuru kar denge jisai dange suru ho jayenge ....

Pathan--- oye habibi dil khus kar diya tum. hamko bahut maza ayi tumhari baate sunke ham tumhari sifarish karegi....vithal se

Raka ko aur kya chahiye tha yahi toh sapna tha uska....

Raka bus kal hamare 100 admi jagah jagah fail jayenge aur hathiyar kachre wali gadi mai honge he bus intezaar hoga sahi waqt ka .....kal ka din jo hoga wo itihas mai likha jayega kal ki subhe barbadi layegi....




Deepika--- Scene 3 hostel...

Anjana--- morning 5 baje bus niklegi muje bi jaga dena yaar...aur tum sab bi so jao

Deepika--- ha jaga dungi yaar bhai se mile huve kaafi waqt ho gaya h....uski bahut yaad aarahi h...

Anjana--- so ja mahine he huve h saal nahi ......

Baki ladkiya deepika ko chedne lagi ki unhe uske bhai se milna h...kyoki raj ki taraf he itni suni thi .fir wo sab bi apne room mai chali gayi....

Deepika--- good night aur man mai main arahi hu bhai apke liye ek suprise leke..is baar apke dil ka ek dard main dur kar dungi apko apki kavita mamta ki photo dikha kar ..bus jald he milenge hum aur jald he miloge ap kavita mamta se....wo bi jald ayengi....




Scene 4.....Raj...



Raj sure ho ki subhe he ye kaam karoge...

Raj—us waqt pashupati ke log careless honge aur subhe ka ye waqt he aisa hota h jab sab nind mai honge ...

Ajju--- sab ready h ...hathiyaar etc bus nikalne ki dair h.....

Rajeev---ok toh wanha hume total 40 50 ke ass pass 2 jagah log milenge hum 2 team mai work karenge .....ek team Raj aur ajju ki hogi aur baki hum 3 honge aur ek he time dono jagah attack karenge.....

Raj—ok done.....rest karo....subhe nikalte h..

Gharpar

Ap fir ja rahe ho abhi toh ap recover huve ho chot se bhai...

Raj—tuje pata h na sab.acha yanha aa tu mere jane ke baad dhayan rakhegi khud ka ...

Phir uska matha chumkar chal khana khate h bhuk lagi h ....

Shwata tikh main lagati hu...

Subhe 3 baje fortuner se raj and party mission par ja rahi thi...ek ka motive tha pashupati ko secretly barbaad karna toh ek ka udeshya tha badla....badla apne pariwar ko khatm karne walo se usmai pahla number pashupati ka he tha ....destiny sab ki ek thi par wajah alag alag...raj jo shanti se bus soch raha tha ...uske man mai kya tha ye koyi nahi jaan sakta tha par rajeev janta tha kyoki kuch bate sonali ne batayi thi aur jitna usne bataya tha aur jitna raj ko janta tha usai ek baat tay thi ki agai jo kuch bi hoga wo bahut bhayanak hoga......2 hours ka rasta 1.5 hours mai he pura ho gaya .......gadi ko dheere se side mai laga ke ..

Rajeev---raj ab tum aur ajjuu sambhalo yanha half hour baad attack karna ...ok

Raj—ok... hum sambhal lenge baad mai isi highway pe 10 km agai milenge aur yaad rahe safety pahle ....ok ..

Raj aur ajju paidal he nikal pade aur ghar ki char deewari ke pass pahuch gaye...

Ajju--- ruk kyo gaye hum ...

Raj—hamesa pahle ache se check karlena chahiye wo samne dekh chain dikh rahi h wo kutte ki h aur uski motayi se pata lag raha german suffered ya bulli dog kisi ki toh h ...dikhte he shoot kar dena ok....

Ajju--- ne gardan hilayi aur dhundhne laga jo aur mil bi gaya usai ek koune mai ped ke niche so raha tha ek clikkkk....ki awaj huvi aur silncer pistal se nikli goli kutte ke sir ke aar paar ho gayi....

Phir dono boundary wall se khudkar andar agaye ....aur makan ko aram se charo taraf se dekhne lage karib 10 kamre bane huve the 2 manjila makaan mai...Sab kuch check karne ke baad...

Raj--± main jab kahu granade ko main gate pe fod dena jisai sabka dhayan agai hoga jab tak main piche se upar floor par chad jaunga phir tum ...samne ruk ruk kar firing karna sabka dhayan tumhari taraf rahaga....

Kuch der baad bhadammmm boommmm ki awaj huvi aur isi ka reaction dekhne ko mila ghar ke andar se tez shor ane laga bhagne ki awaj ayi aur sab log bahar ki taraf dekhne lage ki dhamke ka shor kanha huva h aur kuch he palo mai wo samaj gaye ki gate ki taraf se aya h aur bahar dekha toh gate ki chitde ude huve the...kuch log jo bahar ki taraf bhage the unmai se ek ko goli lagi uske niche girte he sab ruk gaye aur wapas bhag kar chuup gaye...aur cross firing karne lage

Itni goliya ek sath firing ate dekh....

Ajju--- one vs one suna tha two bi suna three bi suna par one vs itne itne sare filmo mai he dekha h ....hey uparwale bachana.......haar baar team galat he kyo mil jati h ....




Ajju bi ruk ruk kar fire karta raha ....raj jo upar pahuch chuka tha apna dagger nikala aur upar se jo firing kar raha tha uska gala kaat diya....phir dheere se room ki taraf bhada aur andar seediyo ko dekha ki uske pass toh nahi h na ...aur sure hote he andar agaya laghbhag sab niche the bus 5 jane jo niche taka jhanki kar rahe the unhe hawa he nahi lagi ki koyi unke piche bi h...

Pahla – ye koun aagaya h marne ke liye bc inhe pata na h ki jawalapur pashupati mla ka h ...

Dusra—chutiye jo bi h usai pata h ki ye makan kiska h apne sade se muu se kaam ki baat bol...

Par pahle wale se koyi jawab na aya toh us taraf dekha aur ankhe choudi ho gayi aur wo kuch bolta usai pahle niche se usai cheerta huva khanjar sir se bahar agaya.......aur jald he pancho farsh par pade huve the...

Niche floor par...

Lagta h ek he admi h kalu ...lambu patlu tum deewar kudh ke jane ki kosis karo aur maar do

Sab nikal gaye tabi ek petrol bomb jalta huva upar se niche aya aur andar sab chilla pade patlu lambu jo bahar nikake the unhone jaise he mud ke dekha ek jalti huvi chij unki taraf ayi aur boom ...ki awaj se fat gayi aur wo bi jalne lage kuch log khidki khol bahar agaye ....aur bahar yamraj unka wait kar raha tha wo koyi reaction dikhate usai pahle he raj ne bina ruke unhe kaatna suru kar diya wo hath ghumate hath kat ta tang ghumate tang kat ti fire karte toh apno ko he goli lagti karib 10 minut mai sab niche gire pade the....

Ajju--- ye awaj ani band kyo ho gayi bc main mar toh nahi gaya ya kaan kharab ho gaye h....

Usne andar jhank kar dekha toh sab niche gire pade the ....wo khada hoke andar aya

Raj andar jao aur dekho kya kaam ka h jo bi ho utha ke le ao ...

Wanhi dusri taraf

Shruti abhay aur rajeev ne alag he kaand kiya pahle jagah ko dekha fir main gate pe aag lagayi aur baad mai har kamre mai petrol bomb fenk diye pure ghar ko he jala dala ..arahi thi toh sirf chillane ki awaje ...

Shuruti—raj ne sach kaha tha jitna tadpaoge utna sukun paoge in log ne kitno ko mara h rape kiya h aj inki tadap dekh dil se khusi ho rahi h .......

Rajeev--- rang chadne laga h sangat ka....

Sab chal diye wapas ....

Ajju aur rajeev paidal he bhage ja rahe the kache rasto se highway ki taraf unhe searching mai bahut sare jameen ke kaagaj mile unhe usne jala diye ...aur karib ek cr ke asspass cash mila usai tang liya pith mai....

Ek hour baad highway pe wo pahuche toh samne unhe rajeev mil gaye...

Rajeev--- ye pith mai kya h....

Raj—inam h hamari mehnat ka 50 lakh ap baant lijiye baki rajeev sir garib bachiyo ke liye jo bi imandaar trust h usmai daal dijiye ...

Shuruti raj ko emotional nazar se dekh kar tum wakayi Nek dil ho raj

Rajeev--- chalo chalte h...Yanha rukna tikh nahi h....




Haridwar -----

Ye kya h baba yanha toh itni bheed h maine toh kabhi nahi dekhi itni bheed

Baba--- ha ha ha beti ye 10 saal mai ek baar hota h kahte h is samay mai dubki lagane se aatma sudh ho jati h aur uski atma ke liye swarg ke dwar khul jate h ...

Poonam ye sab dekh kar bahut khus aur excited thi wo aj pahli baar apni city se bahar ayi thi uske liye sab romanchak tha jaise ek chote bache ko utsukta rahti h waise he uske dil mai thi aur uski ankho mai ye utsukta aur chamak asani se dekhi ja sakti thi.....

Chachi--- ab chalo bi jaldi se hotel mai rukne ne ki vyavasta karte h subhe jaldi snan ke liye jana bi hoga na ..

half hour baad ek hotel ki khidki se poonam raat ki jagmagat dekh rahi thi...

Usne sirf filmo mai he itni lighting aur badi city dekhi thi par aj wo sab hakikat mai dekh rahi thi ....

Usi hotel ki dusri khidki se ek shaks aur bahar ki jagmahat dekh raha tha uski ankho mai ek khali pan tha tabi usai awaj ayi...

Raj.....

Raj—huuu....

Rajeev--- next pashupati ka support h uska beintiha paisa jo uske pass h ..

Raj—aur usi ke liye he hum yanha h...ajju details samjha do...

Aur wo room ke bahar bani lobby mai city view ke liye agaya aur ek baar fir wo apne khayalo mai kho gaya....par usne dhayan na diya ki ek aur thi jo pass ke room se bahar usi ki trah chakachond mai dube sahar ko dekh rahi thi par dono ko dekhne Ke najariye mai fark tha....janha ek ki ankho mai khalipan tha toh dusre ki ankho mai utsukta thi....

Par kismat ne aj unhe karib la diya tha sirf ek deewar ki he duri thi par fir bi dono anjaan the ek dusre se ....

Ek apne baba ke sath itni dur haridwar agayi ...

Toh raj apni maa ke katilo ko barbaad karne itni dur agaya.....kya ye bi itefaq tha ya koyi rishta jo itni dur se dono ko pass khinch le aya....fir bi dono ek dusre se anjaan kuch kadmo ki duri pe he khade h anjane banke ..... kya hota h inki kismat mai ....par waqt ka ek khel aur khela ja raha h raj ki bua jisai wo dhundta fir raha h wo bi haridwar he agayi.... ..kya wo takrayegi raj se..agar is baar raj chuk gaya toh sayad fir kabhi apni bua se wo dubara mil he nahi payega......kya wo nikal payegi yanha se ya fir koyi musibat ane wali h....




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Update 98

Finding past—begins

Police vs crimnal vs Raj




Police side .....scene 1

Kal ki huvi takrar se sonali and shivani kafi pareshan thi baat ab unki izzat par agayai thi wo behad gusai mai subhe he car ko leke haridwar nikal gayi uska gusa dekh kar shivani bi chup he baithi rahi .....Wo kuch bolti usai pahle sonali ka phone ring hona laga ....aur us phone ke ane se sonali ke chehre ke expression he change ho gaye the ab gusai ki jagah chahre pe sweet smile agayi.......

Hello....

Samne se --- kya kar rahi ho ..

Sonali--- kaam kar rahi thi aj apko bada time mila warna call karne se bi uthate nahi ho..

Samne se--- sorry kaha na apse Again sorry sorry...jald he milta hu sari sikayat dur kar dunga really apko bahut miss kar raha hu...

Sonali--- ne raj ke ye sabd sune toh uska dil ghabra gaya usi chinta mai usne puch liya kya huva koyi baat h raj ......

Shivani--- raj.....man mai oh toh andar jo baat suni thi wo sach h matlb madam really usai like karti h aisa kya h usmai par jo bi h madam ka ab mood tikh h...

Kuch pal baad call cut ho gaya ab sonali ke chehre pe jo gusai ki sikan thi wanha khayali muskan thi ....aur uske dimag mai ek he baat ghum rahi thi ki jald he milta hu aur sari sikayat dur karta hu ....car mai baithi khuli ankho se milne ka sapna dkhne lagi aur akhir kyu na dekha kounsi premika apne premi se milne ki laalsa tadap na rakhti ho...inhi khayalo mai .....Kab haridwar pahuche sonali ko pata he nahi laga.....

Shivani pure raste mai ye jaan gayi ki sonali puri trah raj ke pyar mai h aur raj unki jindgi mai bahut ahmiyat rakhta h ...

Jaise he sonali car se niche utari wo pyar ki duniya se nikal kar wapas hakikat ki duniya mai agayi...

Kumbh ke mele mai bhari security ka intezaam kiya huva tha state ki kafi police jagah jagah tainat thi har jagah talashi li ja rahi thi .....taki har sambhavit durghatna ko roka ja sake ..

Sonali aur shivani sidhi cyber monitoring room mai gayi ..janha wo cyber incharge se mile

Incharge – welcome mam sab controle mai h ..

Shivani---man mai ek toh karela upar se neem chada .... maut sir par h aur ye sab controle mai kahkar bhukhi sherni ko ched raha h din bhar gaye h iske......

Sonali--- achaa sach... muuch... fir jor se listen every one kisi bi choti si choti chij pe nighaye rakho jo bi suspectual lage turant bataye chahe kuch bi matlb kuch bi bomb blast ki planning h mele mai isliye koyi bi careless nahi rahega....check every one and everything ....

Shivani --- main yanha rukti hu check karti hu ki kya pata kuch dikh jaye ..

Sonali--- good aur main mele ke assspass check karti hu ...

Wo inspecter ke sath nikal padi mela check karne aur har jagah check karne lagi shops bus stand taxi stand ...subhe se sham ho gayi thi par kuch bi suspecious nahi mila tha...

Toh monitoring room mai shivani bi har jagah nighaye rakhe huve thi taxi stand bus stand...railway har jagah uski nighaye thi .....par majburan usai bi khali he rahna pada.....




Criminal side.......scene 2



Raka jor jor se hans raha tha kyoki uski manjil pass arahi thi ....aur wo pathan ko har tarike se khus rakh raha tha....

Raka--- police ko bhanak tak nahi h....bewakufo ki koyi kami nahi desh mai.....ao ek baar apko dikha lata hu ...

Aur raka ke admi alag tarah mele mai enter huve aur raka pathan bhaiyo ko jagah dikhata gaya jismai bomb blast plan kiya huva tha...raka ko pata tha ki uspe kisi ko sak nahi hoga isliye bedhadak wo ghum raha tha har jagah police ke samne par khali hath dekh kisi ne usai check nahi kiya ... ..Na uski identity pe sak kiya

Raka wapas pahuchkar jaise he blast hoga baghdadh mach jayegi aur hamare admi jo bus stand ke asspass chupe honge wo police ke liye nare bazi aur pather bazi shuru kar denge jisai dange suru ho jayenge ....

Pathan--- oye habibi dil khus kar diya tum. hamko bahut maza ayi tumhari baate sunke ham tumhari sifarish karegi....vithal se

Raka ko aur kya chahiye tha yahi toh sapna tha uska....

Raka bus kal hamare 100 admi jagah jagah fail jayenge aur hathiyar kachre wali gadi mai honge he bus intezaar hoga sahi waqt ka .....kal ka din jo hoga wo itihas mai likha jayega kal ki subhe barbadi layegi....




Deepika--- Scene 3 hostel...

Anjana--- morning 5 baje bus niklegi muje bi jaga dena yaar...aur tum sab bi so jao

Deepika--- ha jaga dungi yaar bhai se mile huve kaafi waqt ho gaya h....uski bahut yaad aarahi h...

Anjana--- so ja mahine he huve h saal nahi ......

Baki ladkiya deepika ko chedne lagi ki unhe uske bhai se milna h...kyoki raj ki taraf he itni suni thi .fir wo sab bi apne room mai chali gayi....

Deepika--- good night aur man mai main arahi hu bhai apke liye ek suprise leke..is baar apke dil ka ek dard main dur kar dungi apko apki kavita mamta ki photo dikha kar ..bus jald he milenge hum aur jald he miloge ap kavita mamta se....wo bi jald ayengi....




Scene 4.....Raj...



Raj sure ho ki subhe he ye kaam karoge...

Raj—us waqt pashupati ke log careless honge aur subhe ka ye waqt he aisa hota h jab sab nind mai honge ...

Ajju--- sab ready h ...hathiyaar etc bus nikalne ki dair h.....

Rajeev---ok toh wanha hume total 40 50 ke ass pass 2 jagah log milenge hum 2 team mai work karenge .....ek team Raj aur ajju ki hogi aur baki hum 3 honge aur ek he time dono jagah attack karenge.....

Raj—ok done.....rest karo....subhe nikalte h..

Gharpar

Ap fir ja rahe ho abhi toh ap recover huve ho chot se bhai...

Raj—tuje pata h na sab.acha yanha aa tu mere jane ke baad dhayan rakhegi khud ka ...

Phir uska matha chumkar chal khana khate h bhuk lagi h ....

Shwata tikh main lagati hu...

Subhe 3 baje fortuner se raj and party mission par ja rahi thi...ek ka motive tha pashupati ko secretly barbaad karna toh ek ka udeshya tha badla....badla apne pariwar ko khatm karne walo se usmai pahla number pashupati ka he tha ....destiny sab ki ek thi par wajah alag alag...raj jo shanti se bus soch raha tha ...uske man mai kya tha ye koyi nahi jaan sakta tha par rajeev janta tha kyoki kuch bate sonali ne batayi thi aur jitna usne bataya tha aur jitna raj ko janta tha usai ek baat tay thi ki agai jo kuch bi hoga wo bahut bhayanak hoga......2 hours ka rasta 1.5 hours mai he pura ho gaya .......gadi ko dheere se side mai laga ke ..

Rajeev---raj ab tum aur ajjuu sambhalo yanha half hour baad attack karna ...ok

Raj—ok... hum sambhal lenge baad mai isi highway pe 10 km agai milenge aur yaad rahe safety pahle ....ok ..

Raj aur ajju paidal he nikal pade aur ghar ki char deewari ke pass pahuch gaye...

Ajju--- ruk kyo gaye hum ...

Raj—hamesa pahle ache se check karlena chahiye wo samne dekh chain dikh rahi h wo kutte ki h aur uski motayi se pata lag raha german suffered ya bulli dog kisi ki toh h ...dikhte he shoot kar dena ok....

Ajju--- ne gardan hilayi aur dhundhne laga jo aur mil bi gaya usai ek koune mai ped ke niche so raha tha ek clikkkk....ki awaj huvi aur silncer pistal se nikli goli kutte ke sir ke aar paar ho gayi....

Phir dono boundary wall se khudkar andar agaye ....aur makan ko aram se charo taraf se dekhne lage karib 10 kamre bane huve the 2 manjila makaan mai...Sab kuch check karne ke baad...

Raj--± main jab kahu granade ko main gate pe fod dena jisai sabka dhayan agai hoga jab tak main piche se upar floor par chad jaunga phir tum ...samne ruk ruk kar firing karna sabka dhayan tumhari taraf rahaga....

Kuch der baad bhadammmm boommmm ki awaj huvi aur isi ka reaction dekhne ko mila ghar ke andar se tez shor ane laga bhagne ki awaj ayi aur sab log bahar ki taraf dekhne lage ki dhamke ka shor kanha huva h aur kuch he palo mai wo samaj gaye ki gate ki taraf se aya h aur bahar dekha toh gate ki chitde ude huve the...kuch log jo bahar ki taraf bhage the unmai se ek ko goli lagi uske niche girte he sab ruk gaye aur wapas bhag kar chuup gaye...aur cross firing karne lage

Itni goliya ek sath firing ate dekh....

Ajju--- one vs one suna tha two bi suna three bi suna par one vs itne itne sare filmo mai he dekha h ....hey uparwale bachana.......haar baar team galat he kyo mil jati h ....




Ajju bi ruk ruk kar fire karta raha ....raj jo upar pahuch chuka tha apna dagger nikala aur upar se jo firing kar raha tha uska gala kaat diya....phir dheere se room ki taraf bhada aur andar seediyo ko dekha ki uske pass toh nahi h na ...aur sure hote he andar agaya laghbhag sab niche the bus 5 jane jo niche taka jhanki kar rahe the unhe hawa he nahi lagi ki koyi unke piche bi h...

Pahla – ye koun aagaya h marne ke liye bc inhe pata na h ki jawalapur pashupati mla ka h ...

Dusra—chutiye jo bi h usai pata h ki ye makan kiska h apne sade se muu se kaam ki baat bol...

Par pahle wale se koyi jawab na aya toh us taraf dekha aur ankhe choudi ho gayi aur wo kuch bolta usai pahle niche se usai cheerta huva khanjar sir se bahar agaya.......aur jald he pancho farsh par pade huve the...

Niche floor par...

Lagta h ek he admi h kalu ...lambu patlu tum deewar kudh ke jane ki kosis karo aur maar do

Sab nikal gaye tabi ek petrol bomb jalta huva upar se niche aya aur andar sab chilla pade patlu lambu jo bahar nikake the unhone jaise he mud ke dekha ek jalti huvi chij unki taraf ayi aur boom ...ki awaj se fat gayi aur wo bi jalne lage kuch log khidki khol bahar agaye ....aur bahar yamraj unka wait kar raha tha wo koyi reaction dikhate usai pahle he raj ne bina ruke unhe kaatna suru kar diya wo hath ghumate hath kat ta tang ghumate tang kat ti fire karte toh apno ko he goli lagti karib 10 minut mai sab niche gire pade the....

Ajju--- ye awaj ani band kyo ho gayi bc main mar toh nahi gaya ya kaan kharab ho gaye h....

Usne andar jhank kar dekha toh sab niche gire pade the ....wo khada hoke andar aya

Raj andar jao aur dekho kya kaam ka h jo bi ho utha ke le ao ...

Wanhi dusri taraf

Shruti abhay aur rajeev ne alag he kaand kiya pahle jagah ko dekha fir main gate pe aag lagayi aur baad mai har kamre mai petrol bomb fenk diye pure ghar ko he jala dala ..arahi thi toh sirf chillane ki awaje ...

Shuruti—raj ne sach kaha tha jitna tadpaoge utna sukun paoge in log ne kitno ko mara h rape kiya h aj inki tadap dekh dil se khusi ho rahi h .......

Rajeev--- rang chadne laga h sangat ka....

Sab chal diye wapas ....

Ajju aur rajeev paidal he bhage ja rahe the kache rasto se highway ki taraf unhe searching mai bahut sare jameen ke kaagaj mile unhe usne jala diye ...aur karib ek cr ke asspass cash mila usai tang liya pith mai....

Ek hour baad highway pe wo pahuche toh samne unhe rajeev mil gaye...

Rajeev--- ye pith mai kya h....

Raj—inam h hamari mehnat ka 50 lakh ap baant lijiye baki rajeev sir garib bachiyo ke liye jo bi imandaar trust h usmai daal dijiye ...

Shuruti raj ko emotional nazar se dekh kar tum wakayi Nek dil ho raj

Rajeev--- chalo chalte h...Yanha rukna tikh nahi h....




Haridwar -----

Ye kya h baba yanha toh itni bheed h maine toh kabhi nahi dekhi itni bheed

Baba--- ha ha ha beti ye 10 saal mai ek baar hota h kahte h is samay mai dubki lagane se aatma sudh ho jati h aur uski atma ke liye swarg ke dwar khul jate h ...

Poonam ye sab dekh kar bahut khus aur excited thi wo aj pahli baar apni city se bahar ayi thi uske liye sab romanchak tha jaise ek chote bache ko utsukta rahti h waise he uske dil mai thi aur uski ankho mai ye utsukta aur chamak asani se dekhi ja sakti thi.....

Chachi--- ab chalo bi jaldi se hotel mai rukne ne ki vyavasta karte h subhe jaldi snan ke liye jana bi hoga na ..

half hour baad ek hotel ki khidki se poonam raat ki jagmagat dekh rahi thi...

Usne sirf filmo mai he itni lighting aur badi city dekhi thi par aj wo sab hakikat mai dekh rahi thi ....

Usi hotel ki dusri khidki se ek shaks aur bahar ki jagmahat dekh raha tha uski ankho mai ek khali pan tha tabi usai awaj ayi...

Raj.....

Raj—huuu....

Rajeev--- next pashupati ka support h uska beintiha paisa jo uske pass h ..

Raj—aur usi ke liye he hum yanha h...ajju details samjha do...

Aur wo room ke bahar bani lobby mai city view ke liye agaya aur ek baar fir wo apne khayalo mai kho gaya....par usne dhayan na diya ki ek aur thi jo pass ke room se bahar usi ki trah chakachond mai dube sahar ko dekh rahi thi par dono ko dekhne Ke najariye mai fark tha....janha ek ki ankho mai khalipan tha toh dusre ki ankho mai utsukta thi....

Par kismat ne aj unhe karib la diya tha sirf ek deewar ki he duri thi par fir bi dono anjaan the ek dusre se ....

Ek apne baba ke sath itni dur haridwar agayi ...

Toh raj apni maa ke katilo ko barbaad karne itni dur agaya.....kya ye bi itefaq tha ya koyi rishta jo itni dur se dono ko pass khinch le aya....fir bi dono ek dusre se anjaan kuch kadmo ki duri pe he khade h anjane banke ..... kya hota h inki kismat mai ....par waqt ka ek khel aur khela ja raha h raj ki bua jisai wo dhundta fir raha h wo bi haridwar he agayi.... ..kya wo takrayegi raj se..agar is baar raj chuk gaya toh sayad fir kabhi apni bua se wo dubara mil he nahi payega......kya wo nikal payegi yanha se ya fir koyi musibat ane wali h....




Aj ke liye itna he .....

Jald he milte .....likes aur revoes mai kanjusi na rakhne ka ... megha update 99
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दोस्त तुम्हारी कहानी बहुत अच्छी जा रही अब तक सब चीज सही और perfect है

बस एक चीज जो मुझे थोड़ी awkward लगती है वो ये है की इस कहानी में जरूरत से ज्यादा लड़किया है, मुझे लगता है पूनम का कैरेक्टर अगर add ना हुआ होता तो सही होता
एक हीरो के लिए २ से ज्यादा हीरोइन होना थोड़ा weird लगता है


रिचा से राज बहुत प्यार करता है रिचा भी उतना ही करती है, उसकी गलती भी बहुत बड़ी नहीं है तो वो तो राज को deserve करती ही है

अभी तक के कहानी में सोनाली का प्यार जितना शुद्ध है ना राज के लिए उस हिसाब से राज को सोनाली के प्यार की जरूरत ज्यादा है ना की सोनाली को राज के प्यार की, lead heroine होना भी सोनाली deserve करती है


ज्यादातर लोगो को कहानी में लड़के और लड़कियों के कैरेक्टर में बैलेंस बना रहता है तभी मज़ा आता है, ज्यादा लड़की होना भी सही नहीं है और ज्यादा लड़का होना भी

वैसे भी इस कहानी में ज्यादा सेक्स घुसाने की जरूरत नहीं, suspence इतना अच्छा है इस कहानी का अगर नही भी डालोगे तो काम चल जाएगा


बाकी राज का कैरेक्टर शायद अब तक जितनी भी कहानी पढ़ा हूं उसमे सबसे top की है

और क्या शैतान सिंह (राज के बड़े पापा और उसकी ताई) ने जो उसके मर्डर के लिए आदमी भेजा था, क्या उसके लिए सजा मिलेगी या उन्हें माफ करके वो chapter close हो गया?
 
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