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Superb startDosto main reader hu aur aj ek story apke samne prastut ya pesh kar raha hu iska ek look ap padh chuke ho . Bhai galtiyo ke liye maaf kijiyega aur reviews feedback dijiyega taki story mai koyi kami ho toh dur ki ja sake...
Update 1
Mandawa—
Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar
Chcha -shaitan singh
Chachi-indra devi
Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h
Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h
Name----- surendra singh
gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega
Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh
Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.
Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h
Badi beti--
mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai
Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari h inke bich bhai bahan ke pyar se jayda he h ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h
Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3 saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h
Ab Intro ---pariwar ke kaam ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h
Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan
jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h
Dadi ---sumitra devi
Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..
Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko
Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge
Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .
Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate
Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunkegusa ho jati h aur kahne wali he hoti h ki dhekti h. chacha chale gaye toh man mai kahti ana to sham ko ghar pe he h aur kahti h wo kalank ka tikka harmkhore Raj kanha h aya ni abi tak ane do phir batati hu
Raj – chachi main agaya
Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..
Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h
Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h
Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi
Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.
Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......
Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai
Words mistake ho toh maaf kijiyega
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Congrets BhaiDosto main reader hu aur aj ek story apke samne prastut ya pesh kar raha hu iska ek look ap padh chuke ho . Bhai galtiyo ke liye maaf kijiyega aur reviews feedback dijiyega taki story mai koyi kami ho toh dur ki ja sake...
Update 1
Mandawa—
Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar
Chcha -shaitan singh
Chachi-indra devi
Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h
Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h
Name----- surendra singh
gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega
Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh
Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.
Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h
Badi beti--
mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai
Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari h inke bich bhai bahan ke pyar se jayda he h ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h
Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3 saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h
Ab Intro ---pariwar ke kaam ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h
Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan
jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h
Dadi ---sumitra devi
Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..
Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko
Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge
Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .
Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate
Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunke
Raj – chachi main agaya
Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..
Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h
Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h
Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi
Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.
Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......
Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai
Words mistake ho toh maaf kijiyega
Or swagat hai aapka writero ki duniya me...
Raj Jiska bhara pura pariwar hai pr 2-3 bahno ko chhod koi pyar se nhi pesh nhi aata mata pita ki durghatna ke baad dada ji Raj ko haveli le aaye or unke hi der ke karan dadi bhi Thodi Bol leti hai pyar se... Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage... Superb update bhai sandar
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Congratulations Sandeep singh nirwan bhai new story ke liye . Pehla update dekh kar story bhauth exciting lag rahi hai .
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Or swagat hai aapka writero ki duniya me...
Raj Jiska bhara pura pariwar hai pr 2-3 bahno ko chhod koi pyar se nhi pesh nhi aata mata pita ki durghatna ke baad dada ji Raj ko haveli le aaye or unke hi der ke karan dadi bhi Thodi Bol leti hai pyar se... Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage... Superb update bhai sandar
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Update 2
Recap---
pichle update mai apne padha Raj ki family ka intro aur kuch pal Raj ke ki uska pura din kis prakar kat ta h
Ab agai.....
Khane ki table pe
Dada Jagmaal singh-- Nasta karte waqt sabko dhayan se dhekte huve
Note--
Naste ke waqt pariwar ka har shaks mojud hota h jo us waqt haveli mai mojud ho sirf ghar ki bahu he ni baith sakti h
Dada ji---- sumitra sab mojud h mera pota Nirwaana kanha h
Dada ji ke mu se ye sabd sunte he dadi ki halat kharab ho gayi aur wo tirchi nigao se supriya aur indra ko dhekne lagi
Dada ji---maine kuch pucha h
Dadi--- wo yanhi h wo yanhi h bulwati hu mai... Indra jake bulao Raj ko abi ke abi aur apni aankh dikhati h Indra aur supriya ko... Jisai dhek ke dono ki haalat patli ho gayi aur wo foran Raj ko dhundne jati h
Badi c—pata ni kanha mar jata h manhoos aur ye budha aur budiya kha jate h muje aur badbadati huvi chathpar pahuch jati h aur Raj ko kone mai baitha dhekti h toh kahti h dhekho toh maharaj ko sabka jeena haram kar rakha h aur khud yanha baitha aram farma raha h aur cheekte huve kahti chal niche
Raj—muje pata tha ki muje neeche kya kahna h kyoki ye mera roj ka tha agar maine galat kah diya toh muje aur tourture sahna padega isliye main chup chap apna huliya tikh karke dada ji ke pass baith jata hu naste ke liye
Dada ji ------ beta kanha the apko pata h na hum apke sath he nast karte h
Raj—maafi Dada ji main upar chath pe tha aur samay ka pata he ni laga
Ab ye bata du ki Raj intelligent h aur akele sab sahne se aur is mahol mai tourture sahan karke samjdar ho gaya h is umar mai kyoki uski ek galti bahut bhari padti h... Usai khud pe.....
Ab agai
Dadi---beta Raj nasta karo
Raj – ji dadi aur nasta karne lag jata h aur man mai sochta bus pure din ka yahi ek pal shanti se gujrata h ya kavita ke sath khelte huve kyoki Dada ji ghar hote h tabi main kavita ke sath khel pata hu par ye baat choti chachi ko pasand ni h par wo Dada ji ke karan muje kuch kah ni pati h
Dada ji ---- beta Raj aj hum apko aj chetak pe gaanv ki sair kareyenge ap chaloge na hamare sath
Raj---- ji dada ji jarur chalunga apke sath hame bi gaanv dhekna h aur nasta khatm karke main taiyar hone chala jata hu main naha dhoke taiyar hoke main kavita ke pass jata hu .vo abi 4 saal ki h usko khilata hu laad karta aur uske gaal pe kiss karta hu aur wo bi meri dhekha dhek ek kiss gaal pe karti h bahut pyari h aur sweet h usai pyar se main kabuu bulata hu
Ye sab 2 ankhe dhek rahi thi ji ha ye choti chachi he thi jo gusai se dhek rahi thi muje nafrat toh ni thi par mujse pyar bi ni h unhe lagta h meri manusiyat unki beta bitiyo ko bi lag jayegi
Ab kyo unhe aisa lagta h ye toh muje bi ni pata h par agai pata lag jayega par ismai bi badi chachi ka hath h itna muje feel hota tha kyoki choti chachi badi chachi ki bahan jo h
Main neeche ake chale dadaji
Dadaji---- ha nirwana chalo aur hum unki ghodi chetak pe swar ho jate h aur nikal jate h sair par main pahli baar dadaji ke sath ja raha tha unke sir par kesariya rang ki pagdi thi aur pith pe 2nali tangi thi jo unke look ko he alag bana rahi thi...
Aisa ni h ki car ni h 3car aur bike sab h par dada ji toh thahre rajput jinka manna tha ki bhai ye sab bacho ki savari h Rajput ya toh godi pe ya sher pe savari karte h. Sher to muje baithane se raha toh ghodi he tikh h...
Raj- dadaji hum kanha ja rahe h
Dada ji ---beta panchayat h hum vanha ja rahe h. Hum apko isliye sath laye h taki ap bi sikhe ki asli shatriya ka Dharam kya hota h aur wo anyay ke virudh kaise khada hota h.. Raj beta hamesa ek baat dhayan rakhna anyay hote mat dhekna... Bado ko sammaan dena aur nari jati ki sadev raksha karna.... Kabi kisi beksur par julm mat karna.. Aise he kayi bate Raj ko batate h ..
Raj –dadaji anyay kya hota h aur usai kyo krona chahiye. Aur ye shatriya kya hote h...
Dada ji --- beta nirvaana shatriya wo hote h jo kisi ka bura na hone de apni ankho ke samne.. Kisi bhukhe ko bhukha na rahne de hamesa dharam ki raksha kare.. Bure karmo ka naash kare... Apko abi bahut sikhna h ap he toh is vansh ke purkho ki izzat bhadaoge unka maan bhadaoge... Ye kah kar Dada ji soch mai padh jate h
Note Raj hamesa haveli mai jo baithak hoti h wanha mojud rahta h toh usai kuch kuch pata h baithak ke bare mai..
Main – man mai bolta ja raha tha anyay ka virodh karna aur nari ka saman... Dharam ki rakhsa karna ye baate mere dimag mai bhuchal la rahi thi meri chamak rahi thi jaise jaise mai soch raha tha..
Raj par uske Dada ji ki bato ka bahut gahra asar ho raha tha
Aise he dono bate karte karte pahuch gaye vahidpura ki panchayat mai jo unki city se 10 km ki duri par thi ghodi ki awaj ate he sabke sab khade ho gaye sarpanch bi kyo ki sabko pata tha ki koun aya h khoff jo thaThakur jagmaal singh Nirwaan ka
Raj----- Tabi maine dhekha ek aurat bhagti huvi ayi aur Dada ji ke pair mai ghir gayi aur dadaji ne pair piche kiye aur kaha utho....stri jati pairo mai girne ke liye ni hoti h tri jati maa sherawali aur maa bhawani ka roop hoti h ....
Aurat roti huvi bolti h thakur saab meri beti loot gayii ye thakur Durjan singh ke yanha mere bimar hone ki wajah se aam karne gayi thi aur iski izat iske bete Durg singh ne loot li ab main kya karuu..garib ke pass izzat he hoti h wo bi ab na rahi h.
Raj--- maine dhekha dadaji ki ankhe gusai se lal ho rahi thi aur unke hath ki muthiya kas rahi thi tabi dadaji garje durjan singh........unki garjan sher jaisi thi maine dhekha sarpanch aur sab kamnp rahe the unhe pata tha ki Thakur saab nari jati pe anyay bardasht nahi kar sakte h.
Dadaji- durjan singh aur Durg singh tumne ghor paap kiya h tum dono ko dand milega tume is panchayat ke 56 gaanv se bahar nikala jata h aur durg singh tum inki putri se vivah karoge aur agar muje pata laga ki isai kuch bi huva ya dhokha ya dhuk diya toh durjan singh tumhare khandan ka naam mit jayega dharti se ye mera vachan h ma bhawani ki saugandh h muje.... ....
Dada ji ke sabd aur in sabdo ka arth sab jante the kyoki unki kathni aur karni mai koyi fark ni tha unhone pahle maa bhawani ki sougandh khake in 56 gaanv ke dakuo ko gajar muli ki trah kaat diya us samay khun ki nadiya bah gayi thi police
bi unke gaanvo mai darti h kuch galat hone se kyo ki agar wo nikle toh khun ki nadiya bahni h
Main ----Dada ji bahut gusa
ho rahe h .kya aise he dharam ki raksha hotii.. Main man mai yahi sab sochta huva wapas dadaji ke sath haveli nikal gaya tha kyoki aj pahli baar dada ji ko maine aisa dhekha tha samay bit gaya aur hum ghar pahuch gaye . aj ke din ne mere dil mai ek jagah ek laava dafan kar diya tha ab kab bahar niklega pata ni par meri shuruwat vicharo ki ho gayi thi........ Sham ke 5 baj gaye the jab ghar pahuche
Dada ji – sabi ko hall mai bulate aur kahte h jald he Raj ka admission bi Sks school mai kara diya jayega wo bi ab surendra aur babita ke sang jayega school ..pahli class ganv se pass ki ab agai sks mai padhega . ..
Surendra aur Babita ---man mai bus yahi kasar rah gayi thi gaanv mai padh leta harami kabhi ka
Indra aur shaitan singh—bus yahi dhekhna rah gaya tha harmkhor hamare paiso pe phadega dadaji isai anathalya fenk kyo ni dete.... Ya mar kyo ni jata gir ke
Supriya---chalo acha h meri betiyo se dur rahega warna iski manoosiyat na lag jati meri betiyo ko
Dadi –ab tikh h roj ki khich khich kuch toh mitigi dophar tak toh ghar se dur rahega . ..
Raj—muje pata h Dada ji ko chod ke sab khus h ki unse adha din toh dur rahunga main taki unhe sakal na dhikne ko meri... Aur main raat ka khana khake sone chala gaya apne room mai mera room khub bada h dubble bed sari facility moujud h aur main so gaya.. masti mai padhne ka aur likes har update par jarur thokna ka itna toh banta h ....
toh masti mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka
ab dhekhte h agla din kya lata Raj ki jindgi mai......
Recap---
pichle update mai apne padha Raj ki family ka intro aur kuch pal Raj ke ki uska pura din kis prakar kat ta h
Ab agai.....
Khane ki table pe
Dada Jagmaal singh-- Nasta karte waqt sabko dhayan se dhekte huve
Note--
Naste ke waqt pariwar ka har shaks mojud hota h jo us waqt haveli mai mojud ho sirf ghar ki bahu he ni baith sakti h
Dada ji---- sumitra sab mojud h mera pota Nirwaana kanha h
Dada ji ke mu se ye sabd sunte he dadi ki halat kharab ho gayi aur wo tirchi nigao se supriya aur indra ko dhekne lagi
Dada ji---maine kuch pucha h
Dadi--- wo yanhi h wo yanhi h bulwati hu mai... Indra jake bulao Raj ko abi ke abi aur apni aankh dikhati h Indra aur supriya ko... Jisai dhek ke dono ki haalat patli ho gayi aur wo foran Raj ko dhundne jati h
Badi c—pata ni kanha mar jata h manhoos aur ye budha aur budiya kha jate h muje aur badbadati huvi chathpar pahuch jati h aur Raj ko kone mai baitha dhekti h toh kahti h dhekho toh maharaj ko sabka jeena haram kar rakha h aur khud yanha baitha aram farma raha h aur cheekte huve kahti chal niche
Raj—muje pata tha ki muje neeche kya kahna h kyoki ye mera roj ka tha agar maine galat kah diya toh muje aur tourture sahna padega isliye main chup chap apna huliya tikh karke dada ji ke pass baith jata hu naste ke liye
Dada ji ------ beta kanha the apko pata h na hum apke sath he nast karte h
Raj—maafi Dada ji main upar chath pe tha aur samay ka pata he ni laga
Ab ye bata du ki Raj intelligent h aur akele sab sahne se aur is mahol mai tourture sahan karke samjdar ho gaya h is umar mai kyoki uski ek galti bahut bhari padti h... Usai khud pe.....
Ab agai
Dadi---beta Raj nasta karo
Raj – ji dadi aur nasta karne lag jata h aur man mai sochta bus pure din ka yahi ek pal shanti se gujrata h ya kavita ke sath khelte huve kyoki Dada ji ghar hote h tabi main kavita ke sath khel pata hu par ye baat choti chachi ko pasand ni h par wo Dada ji ke karan muje kuch kah ni pati h
Dada ji ---- beta Raj aj hum apko aj chetak pe gaanv ki sair kareyenge ap chaloge na hamare sath
Raj---- ji dada ji jarur chalunga apke sath hame bi gaanv dhekna h aur nasta khatm karke main taiyar hone chala jata hu main naha dhoke taiyar hoke main kavita ke pass jata hu .vo abi 4 saal ki h usko khilata hu laad karta aur uske gaal pe kiss karta hu aur wo bi meri dhekha dhek ek kiss gaal pe karti h bahut pyari h aur sweet h usai pyar se main kabuu bulata hu
Ye sab 2 ankhe dhek rahi thi ji ha ye choti chachi he thi jo gusai se dhek rahi thi muje nafrat toh ni thi par mujse pyar bi ni h unhe lagta h meri manusiyat unki beta bitiyo ko bi lag jayegi
Ab kyo unhe aisa lagta h ye toh muje bi ni pata h par agai pata lag jayega par ismai bi badi chachi ka hath h itna muje feel hota tha kyoki choti chachi badi chachi ki bahan jo h
Main neeche ake chale dadaji
Dadaji---- ha nirwana chalo aur hum unki ghodi chetak pe swar ho jate h aur nikal jate h sair par main pahli baar dadaji ke sath ja raha tha unke sir par kesariya rang ki pagdi thi aur pith pe 2nali tangi thi jo unke look ko he alag bana rahi thi...
Aisa ni h ki car ni h 3car aur bike sab h par dada ji toh thahre rajput jinka manna tha ki bhai ye sab bacho ki savari h Rajput ya toh godi pe ya sher pe savari karte h. Sher to muje baithane se raha toh ghodi he tikh h...
Raj- dadaji hum kanha ja rahe h
Dada ji ---beta panchayat h hum vanha ja rahe h. Hum apko isliye sath laye h taki ap bi sikhe ki asli shatriya ka Dharam kya hota h aur wo anyay ke virudh kaise khada hota h.. Raj beta hamesa ek baat dhayan rakhna anyay hote mat dhekna... Bado ko sammaan dena aur nari jati ki sadev raksha karna.... Kabi kisi beksur par julm mat karna.. Aise he kayi bate Raj ko batate h ..
Raj –dadaji anyay kya hota h aur usai kyo krona chahiye. Aur ye shatriya kya hote h...
Dada ji --- beta nirvaana shatriya wo hote h jo kisi ka bura na hone de apni ankho ke samne.. Kisi bhukhe ko bhukha na rahne de hamesa dharam ki raksha kare.. Bure karmo ka naash kare... Apko abi bahut sikhna h ap he toh is vansh ke purkho ki izzat bhadaoge unka maan bhadaoge... Ye kah kar Dada ji soch mai padh jate h
Note Raj hamesa haveli mai jo baithak hoti h wanha mojud rahta h toh usai kuch kuch pata h baithak ke bare mai..
Main – man mai bolta ja raha tha anyay ka virodh karna aur nari ka saman... Dharam ki rakhsa karna ye baate mere dimag mai bhuchal la rahi thi meri chamak rahi thi jaise jaise mai soch raha tha..
Raj par uske Dada ji ki bato ka bahut gahra asar ho raha tha
Aise he dono bate karte karte pahuch gaye vahidpura ki panchayat mai jo unki city se 10 km ki duri par thi ghodi ki awaj ate he sabke sab khade ho gaye sarpanch bi kyo ki sabko pata tha ki koun aya h khoff jo thaThakur jagmaal singh Nirwaan ka
Raj----- Tabi maine dhekha ek aurat bhagti huvi ayi aur Dada ji ke pair mai ghir gayi aur dadaji ne pair piche kiye aur kaha utho....stri jati pairo mai girne ke liye ni hoti h tri jati maa sherawali aur maa bhawani ka roop hoti h ....
Aurat roti huvi bolti h thakur saab meri beti loot gayii ye thakur Durjan singh ke yanha mere bimar hone ki wajah se aam karne gayi thi aur iski izat iske bete Durg singh ne loot li ab main kya karuu..garib ke pass izzat he hoti h wo bi ab na rahi h.
Raj--- maine dhekha dadaji ki ankhe gusai se lal ho rahi thi aur unke hath ki muthiya kas rahi thi tabi dadaji garje durjan singh........unki garjan sher jaisi thi maine dhekha sarpanch aur sab kamnp rahe the unhe pata tha ki Thakur saab nari jati pe anyay bardasht nahi kar sakte h.
Dadaji- durjan singh aur Durg singh tumne ghor paap kiya h tum dono ko dand milega tume is panchayat ke 56 gaanv se bahar nikala jata h aur durg singh tum inki putri se vivah karoge aur agar muje pata laga ki isai kuch bi huva ya dhokha ya dhuk diya toh durjan singh tumhare khandan ka naam mit jayega dharti se ye mera vachan h ma bhawani ki saugandh h muje.... ....
Dada ji ke sabd aur in sabdo ka arth sab jante the kyoki unki kathni aur karni mai koyi fark ni tha unhone pahle maa bhawani ki sougandh khake in 56 gaanv ke dakuo ko gajar muli ki trah kaat diya us samay khun ki nadiya bah gayi thi police
bi unke gaanvo mai darti h kuch galat hone se kyo ki agar wo nikle toh khun ki nadiya bahni hMain ----Dada ji bahut gusa
ho rahe h .kya aise he dharam ki raksha hotii.. Main man mai yahi sab sochta huva wapas dadaji ke sath haveli nikal gaya tha kyoki aj pahli baar dada ji ko maine aisa dhekha tha samay bit gaya aur hum ghar pahuch gaye . aj ke din ne mere dil mai ek jagah ek laava dafan kar diya tha ab kab bahar niklega pata ni par meri shuruwat vicharo ki ho gayi thi........ Sham ke 5 baj gaye the jab ghar pahuche
Dada ji – sabi ko hall mai bulate aur kahte h jald he Raj ka admission bi Sks school mai kara diya jayega wo bi ab surendra aur babita ke sang jayega school ..pahli class ganv se pass ki ab agai sks mai padhega . ..
Surendra aur Babita ---man mai bus yahi kasar rah gayi thi gaanv mai padh leta harami kabhi ka
Indra aur shaitan singh—bus yahi dhekhna rah gaya tha harmkhor hamare paiso pe phadega dadaji isai anathalya fenk kyo ni dete.... Ya mar kyo ni jata gir ke
Supriya---chalo acha h meri betiyo se dur rahega warna iski manoosiyat na lag jati meri betiyo ko
Dadi –ab tikh h roj ki khich khich kuch toh mitigi dophar tak toh ghar se dur rahega . ..
Raj—muje pata h Dada ji ko chod ke sab khus h ki unse adha din toh dur rahunga main taki unhe sakal na dhikne ko meri... Aur main raat ka khana khake sone chala gaya apne room mai mera room khub bada h dubble bed sari facility moujud h aur main so gaya.. masti mai padhne ka aur likes har update par jarur thokna ka itna toh banta h ....
toh masti mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka
ab dhekhte h agla din kya lata Raj ki jindgi mai......
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