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Feel the pain - part 2

Death Halo vs Nirwana


“ Muje is naam se nafrat h “



Vithal —pairo mai gir kar maafi mangte huve Death halo maafi…..



“ Ye akhiri baar h…”

Aur wo itna kahkar khidki ki taraf gaya….aur sidhe samne ki Taraf dekhne laga janha Nirwana mojud tha aur usi waqt Nirwana ne bhi usai dekha dono ke he chahre par mask tha …. Agle he pal Death halo sidha Dusri manjil se niche kudh kar jameen par land huva aur Nirwana ki taraf dekhne laga….. kuch pal baad Nirwana bhi jump karke tikh Death halo ke samne aakar land huva…Nirwana uske aur karib aakar uski ankho mai dekhne laga ……dono ne he ek dusre se kuch nahi kaha ……kyoki unki ankhe sab bhanya kar rahi thi……aur in ankho mai chipa huva tha na jane kitni he logo ki maut ka dard naak ahsaas jo samne wali ki rooh ko kanpkanpa ne ke liye bahut tha par issai dono ko he koyi fark nahi pada aur dono ek dusre ko dekhte rahe …par is khamoshi ko todte huve dono mai se ek bola ….”uski maut ke bich aj main khada hu …

Nirwana--- uski ankho mai ghoorkar aur teri maut bankar tere agai main khada hu ……..

Nirwana ki baat sunkar uske chahre par muskaan aagyi aur usne ek punch sidha Nirwana ke seene par jad diya….jisai Nirwana piche ki taraf udta huva dur jake gira …..Nirwana ke expression change ho gaye aur wo man mai he sochte huve bola“itna strong ….iski power toh bahut jayda h “ abhi wo itna soch he raha tha ki samne se ek ghutna upar se muu ki aur ata dikhayi diya ..usne bina waqt gawanye turant he ek taraf apne ap ko khisaka liya aur niche ek hath ka sahra lekar hawa mai uchal kar ek kick mari jisai death halo bhi kayi kadam piche hat gaya….Death halo “Not bad …..not bad….. “ bolkar ek right kick Nirwana ke muu par mari jisai Nirwana ne apne elbow se block kari par kick mai pressure itna tha ki wo do kadam side hat gaya…par side hat te huve usne bhi furti se ek kick death halo ke kandhe par jad di ….dono ek dusre ko phir se ghurne lage ….Nirwana ne right punch death halo ko mara ….jo block ho gaya phir left punch mara wo bhi block ho gaya ….phir turant usne ek ghutna jump ke sath chest par Mara jisai Death halo 5 feet dur ja kar piche gira aur turant he wo ek jhatke se jump ke sath khada ho gaya ..aur dubara ek jump leke dubble kick Nirwana ki chest par jad di jisai Nirwana kayi kadam piche fisal gaya Death halo ne hath ke ishare se usai apni taraf fight ke liye ane ka ishara kiya ….Nirwana ne bhi runing dubble kick mari par Dath halo ne easily block karli par uske piche khisakne ka fayda utha kar Nirwana ne ek aur punch furti se uski chest par maar diya…vithal jo upar se sab dekh raha tha usne Death halo ko niche girta dekha toh turant ek ke baad ek 3 granade Nirwana ki taraf fenk diya ….jisai bachne ke liye Nirwana bachta huva piche ki taraf move hokar dur chala gaya…

Dus minut baad …..wanha sab shant ho gaya Nirwana bhag kar dusri manjil par pahucha toh usai wanha koyi nahi mila par dur usai tourch ki light ke sath 5 saye bhagte huve nazar aye ….wo turant unke piche bhagkar kuch minuto msi pahuch gaya …….par usai unmai vithal nahi dikha jisai uska gusa aur bhadak gaya aur isi ke chalte usne 4 ke gale unke sir se alag kar diye aur jab usne sabse agai wale panchve shaks ko dekha toh uske chahre par kroor muskan agayi aur punchve shaks ko bhi pata lag gaya tha ki uska bachna ab mumkin nahi h …..wo ek jagah khada hokar thar thar kanpne laga ….. Nirwana ne karib aakar uske chahre par ek mukka mara jo uske hosh udane ke liye kaafi tha phir chikh kar bola vithal tu janha bhi ho main tuje dhund nikalunga aur teri maut mere hath se hogi ..Unse dur vithal jo Death halo ke sath ja raha tha usne ye awaj suni toh wo bhi rook gaya…..par bola kuch nahi par uske pass chal raha shaks bola” man tuje usi waqt marne ka tha jab tu hum dono ke bich aya par tuje aj bachane ke liye kaha gaya h…. Tu usai dur rahna vithal aur ab jo tuje bolu wo karna h …..” itna bolkar wo vithal ko samjhane aur batane laga aur vithal sirf ha mai gardan hilata raha ….. Death halo “aj se tikh 60 din pbaad ye hoga tab tuje ek mouka milega badla lene ka….”

phir dono wanha se nikal kar ek dusre base par pahuch gaye..



Piche…Nirwana union minister ke baal pakadkar ghasit ta huva lekar araha tha usne ear piece ko start kar ke kuch kaha ….aur uske 15 minut baad he car aakar uske pass ruki …jis sai utare chief …

Chief--- So every one wants Devil and Devil is here…..

Nirwana--- Isai ap unhe de sakte h aur kahna unke sare sawal ke jawab iske pass h ….main chahta tha ki unki maa ke samne sab sachayi pata lage…par ab ye mumkin he nahi h…unki maa ko purani bate yaad nahi h…. Muje jaruri kaam niptane h….

Chief —- Isai main mai tumhare base par pahucha dunga..aur sonali wanhi aakar mil legi….

Nirwana--- Law minister …

Chief —- usai main dekh lunga….



Wo abhi kuch aur kahte Usai pahle he bike start hokar tezi se nikal gayi….

Chief--- ye ladka bhi ajeeb multiple personality h ek h jo sabko respect deta h toh dusra gusail jisai jara bhi parwa nahi h kisi ki bhi ….ye toh tikh h ki iska control h pura….nahi toh ……fuuuuu…..ek gahriii sans chodne ke baad mantri ko diggy mai band karke wo nikal gaye …..



Toh …..60 minut pahle……

Order sunil ko dgp ko marne ka mila tha par sonali ne jogindar singh aur Shiwani ko bhi jid karke bula liya aur ……jo gusa usai raj ke na milne ka tha …..wo besak ab dgp par utarne wala tha kyoki usne he toh raj ko marne ki puri neave rakhi thi…… aur iske liye usne pure police department ko kathputli ki tarah istemaal kiya tha….ye soch kar wo aur aagbabula ho rahi thi……isliye sunil ko bhi dur se dekhne ka kaha aur wo apni bhabhi se aur thapad nahi khana chahta tha isliye dur se he sab dekhta raha …aur jo Dgp Nirwana ke sath karna chahta tha ….usai dubble bura sonali uske sath karne wali thi …..

Sonali —- pure ghar ko mere teen ginne par goliyo se bhun dena … koyi bhi jinda nahi bachna chahiye h

Sonali ka order milte he puri team ghar ko gher kar khadi ho gayi aur …..

1……..2……….3……..


Ke sath sara loha us ghar par baras gaya andar wale admiyo ko samaj he nahi aya …..ki kya ho raha h….teen taraf se ek sath unginant goliya unpar baras padi

Dgp ne goliya khatm hone ke baad upar aakar police ko dekha toh wo khus ho gaya par usai nahi pata tha ki aj uske sath wo hone wala h jiski usne sapno mai bhi umid nahi ki thi… police agai badhti rahi aur sare admi marte gaye Dgp ek koune mai safety ke sath steel table ke piche chipa raha aur police ke andar ane ka wait karta raha …zammer lage hone ka karan wo vithal ko phone tak na kar paye aur jab police last mai Dgp ke pass pahuchi tab….

Dgp — well done Acp sonali well dono tumhe award aur reward jarur milega…….tum wakayi Bahadur ho ……main khud tumhari sifarish……ka…rr…

Satak …….satak….satak…… teen thapad ek ke baad ek uske gaal par pade ……..aur phir ek piche se sir par padi aur uske hosh fakhta ho gaye……..



1 hour baad…..

Dgp nanga latka huva tha ………

Sonali —- pata h tuje tune kise marne ka order diya tha……….mere dil ko ….tera marna usi waqt tay ho gaya tha jab tu law minister ka paltu kutta banke aya tha…..

Dgp — tum janti ho main koun hu …

Sonali —- waste of time….waste of money……..sidhi bhasa mai pura kachara h tu

Dgp —- Tuummm……

Sonali--- Tu duniya ki nazar mai pahle he kidnap ho chuka h teri laash kabhi pata nahi lagegi tu Ghumman he rah jayega….aur tu jinda kyo h abi tak tuje main batati hu.Third degree ke agai ek fourth degree h aj tuje dikhani h………

Phir sonali ne unique chij nikali …. Aur boli isai pata kya kahte h isai lemon juice nichodne ki handmade machine bolte h har ghar mai milti hpar tere liye special mansahari chuha mangwaya h aur ye tera muuu nahi teri goliyo teri nalki ko khayega ye kahkar sonali ne bag ko uski kamar par bandh diya aur Dgp ki nali ko he umai rakha ……phir bhukhe chuhe ne taza Maas ki gandh paate he uski nalki ko kutarna suru kar diya ……Dgp ko har second ek sui si chubti huvi tango ke bich mahsus huvi jaise sui nikali aur phir chub di aur is dard se wo beintiha jor laga kar cheekne laga …..par us kamre mai koyi nahi tha sunne wala kyoki …wo special police ka secret tourture room tha aur ek baat abhi tak sonali ko nahi pata thi ki ….is sare tourture ka live union minister bhi dekh raha tha uske samne tv par ye live chal raha tha ……uska muu khula aur dar se gaand fati huvi thi……par wo bolta kisai kyoki us room mai uske alawa koyi nahi tha…..par har aati cheek usai uska future bata rahi thi…. Usne gardan modkar idhar udhar dekha ki koyi toh dikhe jisai baat ki jaye par usai koyi nahi dikha ….dikha toh sirf Dgp ka tourture…..



Toh dgp ki taraf..

Dgp-- bus karo bus karo …….chod do muje aaahhhh …helppppppp …..chilla raha tha ……aur uske samne baithi sonali coffee pi rahi thi aur uski ankhe gusai se lal ho rakhi thi pichle 7 dino se nind ki tikh se jhapki tak nahi li thi usne tension gusai se wo pichle kitne dino se preshan thi. abhi bhi nind ka ek ansh masters bhi uski ankho mai nahi tha …usne phone nikal kar raj ke number par dial kiya par switch off aya aur is baat se uska dimag aur ghum gaya usai khud nahi pata tha ki i love u miss you ke kitne he message wo bhej chuki thi ….isi frustration mai ….usne apni police ki shirt ko pant se bahar nikal kar tangi huvi chamde ki belt uthayi aur boli….. Feel my pain ……Feel the pain…….aur…frustration puri dgp par utar di ……aur jab wo ruki toh dgp behosh ho chuka tha …..sonali khud pasine mai nahayi huvi thi….wo tourture room se bahar ayi toh jo duety par officer mojud the wo ek ek koune ki taraf khisak liye ….par ek thi jo aram se baithi sab dekh rahi thi …. Usai ye sab hone ki pahle he umid thi ….isliye usne kuch socha aur boli ……” apko pata h apne dusri baar galti kar di h ….

Sonali-- gusai se usai dekhne lagi….

Shiwani —- yahi toh …….bus yahi ……samaj nahi ata h apka …….apki so called hone wali sasu maa Divya ji ne kaha aur apne maan liya

Sonali — dekh Shiwani mera mood kharab h …..faltu baate nahi…

Shiwani— are yahi toh apka samaj nahi ata h muje .apko…dur nahi pass rahna chahiye h uske …….yaad rakhna dur jab wo dur jayega tab apko ye sab mahsus hoga……….pyar bina rishta nahi h …physically bhi hona padta h..kabhi kabhi…….sunil ka phone chinkar call karti usai aur phir jo chahe wo karti ladna ya pitna …jo bhi ..apko tikh lagta par na usai toh free kar diya ….

Sonali ne ek look Shiwani ko dekha jo bolkar wapas ankh band kar sofe par lait gayi thi…aur khudne apni coffe jo bana li thi usai lekar wapas torture room mai sochte huve chali aayi….. sonali ne dgp ko 4 hour tak tourture kiya



Wanhi in 4 hours mai Nirwana ki taraf…

Singhniya building ke niche wale floor par bhi same aisa he mahol tha Nirwana sirf pant mai sofe par baitha tha aur samne bandhe union minister ko dekh raha tha……uske samne alag alag tourture equipments table par pade the……..wo unhe dekhta huva kisi aur soch mai he tha uske dimag mai ek he baat ghoom rahi thi jo fight ke waqt death halo ne boli thi…….”i know who r you..definately i will come for you “ aur yahi baat baat uske dimag mai hathode ki tarah baar baar ghoonj rahi thi usai bakhubhi samaj araha tha ki koyi bhi samajdaar insaan links jaldi he dhund lega aur police ki tight security ke baujud uska ghoomna aur police ka action na lena …ye kafi tha batane ke liye ki police mili huvi h …….usne kafi dair ye socha aur phir dheere se bola…. You don't know me….itna kahkar usne ek hathoda uthaya aur andar jakar khinch kar ek pair ke anghuthe par maar diya aur union minister gaand faad jor jor se chillane laga……

Usko dard se billbillate dekh Nirwana bhi bola …. Feel my pain …….Feel the pain ….Till you alive …… aur jab 30 minut baad uska dard kam huva tab uske anguthe par ek aur hathoda maar diya ……aur phir union minister ki cheek ghunj uthi……..union minister chikte huve bola muje maaf kardo main…..tumhe bahut paisa…….dddungaaaa Ahhhhhhhhhhhh please …muje chod do……..phir ek hour baad Nirwana uske pass akar bola …….ye jhakm bahut purna h … jitni teri rooh tadpegi utna sukun muje milega

Union minister--- please muje chod do ….

Nirwana — vithal kanha h…

Union minister —usne muje akela chod diya tha wo us kale kapde wale ke sath chala gaya tha ……muje bus itna pata h wo koyi killer h jo victor ke sat kaam karta h….aur uska naam death halo h……..

Toh dusri taraf death halo bhi baitha huva yahi soch raha tha “ intresting ….kafi mahino baad koyi mila h jismai dum dikha h …..tere sath khelne mai maza ayega…….wait for my turn …..wait for my turn..


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