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Raj mobile mai song soon raha tha …..show me the meaning of being lonely…. So many words for broken heart……it's hard to see in a crimson love…..so…hard too breathe…..ye song sunte sunte wo kudh ke liye aur Shiwani ke liye khana bana raha tha …… .
Shiwani--- kya baat h aj hero song soon raha h….
Raj---- mere akelepan mai ye bahut relex deta h aur ab aadat ho gayi iski …..bebes dus minut mai daal chawal aur sabji ready ho jayenge ….apki didi kanha h….
Shiwani--- wo kya wo kar rahi hongi kisi ki thukayi….
Raj---- hmmm dhayan he rakhna wo short temper wali h ….mujse bhi pahli baar mai bina wajah jane he bhid gayi thi…….ek number ladaku h
…..kahne ko hosiyar h but gusai mai pagla jati h
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Shiwani--- ha bataya tha unhone par tumse kam ata hsamjhe ….tum bhi toh unhe maarne wale the
…aur ab dekho … dono ek dusre ke liye kitni ahmiyat rakhte ho… are ye gadi ki awaj toh di wali ki h lagta h wo aagyi h …….lo tum bhi dekhlo unke dil mai tumhare liye bahut khass jagah h jo aj jaldi he agayi h ……main jake dekhti hu…..
Par gate kholne se pahle he sonali andar aagayi…
Raj---- muskarakar kya baat h abhi toh raat ke 10 he baje h aj toh jaldi he agayi badimeharbani sarkar ki …..bilkul right time ayi ho chalo sath he khana khate h ………ap fresh hokar ajao main khana lagata hu…..
Sonali Raj ke chare ki muskurahat dekh kar ek pal toh sab bhul gayi par jald he usai sab yaad agaya par usne abhi kuch nahi kaha aur hath muu dhone chali gayii ….
Piche raj aur Shiwani ko laga ki sayad office mai kaam ka pressure hoga …..
Raj aur Shiwani ne table par khana lagaya …Raj ne sonali ko khana apne hatho se parosa aur sonali raj ko ek tak dekhti rahi ….. uska dil uske dimag par hawi hone ki kosis kar raha tha…..isliye uske andar Dil aur dimag mai jung suru ho gayi thi…
Raj---- chalo aj mai apko apne hatho se khilata hu ye kahkar usne sonali ki chair apni taraf kali aur muskarakar usai dekhne laga …ap bahut bahut sikayat karti ho ki muje time nahi dete ho is baar 10 dino se apke pass he hu ….ab ap mujse ladogi nahi karogi samjhi ….. khana apko muje khilana chahiye par seva main apki kar raha hu…batao ye bhi koyi baat huvi
Shiwani--- toh kya huva humara hak h hum tumse senior h main tumhari hot babe hu aur di toh ……
Raj---- ap h na jayda bolne lagi ho …..
Tabhi sonali boli---
Sonali--- ek sawal ka jawab doge Raj
Raj---- sevak apke har sawal ka jawab dega….my queen…
Sonali--- Agar tum tumhare maabaap ki maut ki wajah koyi apna nikle toh tum kya karoge…..
Raj--—ke chahre ki muskaan us gayi phir bhi kadwi muskarahat chare par lakar mere maabaap ki maut ki wajah toh mere apne he h phir bhi apne jo kaha sach h toh wo jinda toh rahega par har saans ke sath tadpega main usai beintiha dard dunga phir tikh karunga phir dard dunga ……
Sonali —- hmm sahi kaha tumne hume nikalna h kuch dair mai tumhari packing main karke leke aati hu ….jab tak tum khana finishs karo….
Raj----itni raat ko par hume jana kanha h…
Sonali--- kya ye janna jaruri h ……
Raj---- Nahi…… tikh jaisa ap chaho …
Sonali — uthkar room mai ayi aur dono ki packing ki aur apni loaded gun bag mai daal kar niche agayi….
Raj samaj gaya tha ki aj mood kharab h kyoki sonali ke har reaction bahut ukhde ukhde the ..isiliye usai andaza ho gaya tha ki jarur koyi badi baat h ….jo ye bol nahi rahi h …….hey bhagwan sab sahi ho…..phir sonali ke sath bina kisi reaction ke chal diya
Dono he car mai chup baithe the ..raj ko pata tha ki sonali khud he bolegi uspar dabav banana galat hoga ….isliye usne kuch nahi bola …aur bich bich mai sonali ko dekhta rahta …….par sonali toh apni udhed bhun mai lagi huvi thi ……uska dimag kuch aur dil kuch kah raha tha isliye wo bilkul silent hokar drive kar rahi thi… Ek bolna chahta tha toh dusri kuch bhi kahna nahi chati thi…dil aur dimag mai chal rahi ladayii sonali ko rok rahi thi baat karne se wo uljhane ke banwar mai buri tarah fans gayi thi ye wahi sonali thi jo raj ke sath apni har sans ji bhar kar jina chahti thi…par aj…. 5 ghante ke safar mai usne kuch bhi nahi kaha tha sivaye coffee waigarh pine ke…….. subhe ke 6 baj chuke the drive karte huve suraj ki kirne bikhar rahi thi sahar se dur pahadiyo se gira huva chota sa gaanv nazar ane laga fortuner ganv ki galiyo se hoti huvi bahar ke ek makan par akar rooki…..sonali niche utri aur ghar ki taraf chal di toh raj bhi niche utar gaya aur sonali ki piche chal diya …….ghar ke angan mai ek aurat ne sonali ko dekha toh wo khus ho gayi aur khushi se boli are sona bitya… kitni badi ho gayi ho…aj pure 5 saal baad aarahi ho kya maa se milne ka dil nahi karta h……
Raj jo piche sab soon raha tha usne maa ka naam soon ghar ko dekha laga aur man mai bola toh ye inka ghar h…..
Sonali--- jiski ankhe nam ho chuki thi usne kaki se kuch kaha nahi aur andar chali gayi…..
Raj bhi piche andar agaya raj ne andar charo taraf dekha toh camere lage huve the jinhe dekh wo samaj gaya ki sonali live he dur se apni maa ko dekhti hogi….wo sonali ke piche piche he chal raha tha sonali ant mai ek room ki taraf ayi janha wheel chair pe ek mahila baithi huvi thi …..uski nighaye bahar annant asman ko dekh rahi thi chahre pe koyi expression nahi tha Uske chahre se he aisa lag raha tha jaise usai jeene ki koyi chaha nahi h …..sonali ne apni maa ke agai aakar gale lagaya .. sonali ki maa ne dhyan se sonali ko dekha par uska reaction aisa tha jaise wo usai pahchaane ki kosis kar rahi ho …..apni maa ka aisa reaction dekha toh uska dil baith gaya dil bhavuk ho gaya …..par apne dil par kabhu aur chahre par jhuti muskaan laakar boli …maa main apki sona…..apki beti sona maa …. …..Raj piche khada ye sab dhayan se dekh raha tha…. Usai bus yahi pata tha ki sonali ki maa akeli rahti h …..aur apni kasam ki wajah se aj tak is gaanv mai rah rahi h ……par usai ye nahi pata tha ki sonali pichle 5 saal se apni maa se nahi mili h …..iska matlb aj tak sonali usai jo baate karti thi maa ke bare mai wo sab jhut he bolti thi….raj ki ankho ne aj sonali ki us side ko mahsus kiya jo duniya se usne chipa kar rakh rakha tha ….. uska dil bhi dard ki tease se tadap utha……..sonali ne apne ansuu ponche aur khadi ho gayi ….par abhi bhi uski ankho mai ansuu the …….tabhi usai awaj sunayi diii sona beti tum agayiiii…..apni ma ki awaj soon sonali apne maa ke gale lag gayi …….aj ek beti apni kasam ko bhulkar saalo baad apni maa se gale lag gayiii ……dono maa beti he bhavuk ho kar rone lagi………..
Raj dono maa beti ko kaafi dair baat karte dekhta raha fir bahar aagaya aur hall se hote huve roof par agaya…aur sonali ke liye sochne laga ….uski nazar samne ke pahado se nikalte suraj ki taraf thi…….wo kab tak khada raha usai kuch pata nahi tha….. par uski soch se bahar nikala ek awaj ne ….
Sonali--- ha jo main maa ke bare mai batati thi sab jhut tha…..
Raj ne piche moodkar dekha toh sonali hath mai gun liye khadi thi…..uski ankho mai bahut sare emotions the gusai ke dhuk ke pyar ke …jisai dekh usai pata lag gaya ki …wo apne ap se he lad rahi h….. Raj ke chahre par muskarahat agayi ……aur wo bola …. Muje nahi pata ki ap kyo jhut bolti thi…. Par itna janta hu ki agar apne mujse bhi jhut bola toh apki apni wajah hogi….par muje itna jarur janna ki aj 5 saal baat Achanak ap aise he toh wapas nahi ayi hongi …..iska matlb saaf h ki apko apke pariwaar ka gunegaar mil gaya h……. Kyo sahi kaha na…..
Sonali---Raj ko ek tak dekhti rahi fir boli sahi kaha tumne ..raj ….isliye he toh tumhe yanha layi hu…..janna nahi chahoge ki kisne ye sab kiya….
Raj---- mujse jayda ….koun janna chahega bus ap naam batao usai main apne hatho se saja dunga …..wo itna tadpega ki sath janmo mai bhi insaan ke roop mai janam nahi lega….
Sonali-- pata h raj ….. jab ye ghatna huvi main choti thi…. maa muje yanha le ayi ek saal tak maa kisi se nahi mili …..phir ek din achanak wo apne room se bahar nikli aur muje lekar ghar se bahar ayi aur meri training suru kar di padhna likhana aur training bus yahi chalta raha muje kabhi khud se dur jane nahi diya …..maine 1 class ke baad sidhe 7 class mai he admission liya …..main strong banti gayi mere dil mai koyi feeling nahi thi …….muje sirf meri maa ek baat he sikhati thi badla apne baap ka muje meri maa ke sath huvi ghatna ka abhi tak pata nahi tha ….phir jab maim 12th mai ayi tab muje pata laga ki meri maa ke sath kya huva tha….main bahut royi thi…..par muje dhuk jayda isliye tha kyoki meri maa ne kabhi chahre se ye dikhne he nahi diya aur wo akeli dard sahti rahi…par jab unhe pata laga ki muje sab pata lag gaya h toh wo foot foot kar royi …… aur …behose ho gayi tab dr ne unhe bataya ki unhe alzamier ho gaya h …..main us raat khud ko he doshi manti rahi thi raj ….ki meri maa ke liye main kuch nahi kar payi ……maine bhi phir sab chod selection ke liye ji jaan laga di aur phir S.I mai selection ho gaya aur maine maa ke samne kasam khayi ki ab apko tab apni sakal dikhaungi jab main papa aur apke gunegharo ke pure khandaan ko maar nahi dungi….. aur dekho kismat se muje wo mil bhi gaye h ….par main chaha kar bhi kuch nahi sakti hu….
Raj — gusai se ubal kar muje batao unke naam duniya ke kisi bhi koune se main unki pidiyo ko bhi patal se khod kar nikal launga …aur unhe tadpaunga….
Sonali —- Tum kuch nahi kar sakte raj jo jimaidaar h wo mar chuke h muje bus unse itna puchna h kyo ….unhone aisa hone diya ….kyo ….kyo….kyo….unhone mere maapapa ko bachaya nahi…..
Raj confusions se sonali ko dekhne laga ki sonali kya kahna chahti h
Sonali--- is sawal ka jawab kaise milega muje raj.muje nahi pata h kyoki meri maa ko kuch yaad nahi h….. wo purani baate sab bhul chuki h…
Raj---- koun h wo bus ap batao muje…….
Sonali----- Mere papa tumhare papa ke sath kaam karte the Raj …….mere papa ne tumhare papa se madad mangi thi ….. par badle mai unhe mila meri maa ka blaatkaar aur kudh ko mili mout
Sonali ki baat soon raj ka toh dil he toot gaya aur wo do kadam piche ladkhada gaya …… sonali agai boli “kya tumhare papa ki jimai dari nahi thi unhe bachane ki union minister aur vithal se bachane ki ….Tum toh kahte the tumhare papa apne sath walo ki apni jaan se badhkar surakhsa karte h toh fir mere mumy papa ke sath aisa kyo huva Raj….kyo tumhare papa ne unhe bachaya nahi……. Ye gun un gunehgaaro ke liye thi par mere pariwaar ke sath huve julmo ke liye toh apne he jimaidaar h ……sonali is samay foot foot kar ro rahi thi……wo raj ke karib he rote huve ghutno par baith kar boli …….main tumhe nahi maar sakti raj……..main tumhe nahi mar sakti hu……becouse ….iii..love…you so much meri saans tumhare bina nahi h…raj.. main tumhare bina nahi jee sakti hu….. ye baat kahte huve sonali raj ke pairo mai sir tika diya tha aur uske hatho mai raj ki shirt thi aur wo foot foot kar roye ja rahi thi ….raj jo ye sab soon kar pathar jaisa ho gaya tha ……..usne apni ankho se ansuu saaf kiye ….. aur sonali ki taraf dekha ….pata nahi kyo par ab uska dil behad sakht ho gaya tha usne sonali ko uthaya aur pass ki chair pe bithaya ……aur khud ek taraf khada ho gaya 30 minut gujar gaye the koyi kuch nahi bola …..Raj ka chahra aur ankhe aur sakht hoti ja rahi thi aur palatkar bola…..
Muje nahi pata apko kaise ye sachayi pata lagi ….kisne ye batayi aur kitni jhut h kitni sach h ….par muje mere papa aur dada para pura viswaas h mere dada ji ke sanskaar itne kamjor nahi honge …….mere papa ne mere dadaji ko apna bhagwan mana h isliye itna yakin h apke pariwar ke sath jo huva usmai mere papa ki galti nahi hongi.mere pita khud mar jate par apke pariwar ke sath aise nahi hone dete ….ab chahe meri maut he kyo na ho jaye ….main sachayi ko paatal se bhi khod ke nikal lunga chahe wo union minister ho chahe vithal ho ab sach ko samne ana hoga …….aur jab sachayi samne ayegi tab he apke samne aunga agar galti mere pita ki h toh is gun ki akhiri goli aur mera bheja hoga ..…ab sachayi ko Raj nahi NIRWANA…. dhundega aur is waqt wahi ho raha tha jo raj ke bachpan mai dr. ne kaha tha emotionaly raj ka anger triger ho raha tha…..raj agai bolta gaya aur uska gusa badhta gaya ant mai ….………Nirwana ka anger raj ke upar puri tarah hawi ho gaya …
“ Sab ko tadpaunga ha ha ha ……tadpane mai he toh Nirwana ko maza ata h….kyoki Nirwana tadpata h …..tadapata h rooh ko”
Raj chalte gaanv se bahar agaya…..aur bahar khadi black suv mai baith gaya …..aur piche jab tak sonali khud ko sambhalkar raj ko dekhne ke liye khadi hvi …toh raj usai nahi dikha ……..
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“ Ha ha ha muje tum sabse kuch nahi chahiye …. Bus itna bata vithal kanha h…..
Mmmmmm muje nahi pata h….
“ Tuje nahi pata h toh tu jinda kyo “ itna kahne ke sath he usne uske hath pair ungliya aur gardan kaat Di …..
“ Tuje mai dhund nikalunga tera pura khandaan marega …..teri maut puri duniya dekhegi ……..bhagwan bhi tuje nahi bacha payega………..ha ha ha “
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