Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update 217

Upcoming update ...218

Dead end ....The end of phase two..... Bloodbath continues...

 

[AVANISH]

One of the best story i ever read on this forum Bro you are a true story teller as you describe the scene and emotions it seems that we are in the place of Raj great writing skills Big fan of you 1 have readed all the 217 updates in just 15 days and engerly waiting for the next one

Kb tk update hga

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Abhi mandawa ka fight scene he process mai h....aur raj aur death halo ki fight likhna baaki h....Thoda mamla tuff h wait ....

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Jabardast update superb

Thank you

Waiting

Fight tuff h ...likhna...

Ok waiting for next update last 1 is not bad as well

Hhhhhh

One of the best story i ever read on this forum Bro you are a true story teller as you describe the scene and emotions it seems that we are in the place of Raj great writing skills Big fan of you 1 have readed all the 217 updates in just 15 days and engerly waiting for the next one

Thank you so much.... But bro ab intezaar karna muskil hoga kyoki ek fallow mai story ka intrest aisa ho jata h ki hum continue he padhe jate h aur ab kya hoga ab kya hoga isi mai rahte h....

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Kb tk update hga

Sunday tak kosis h likh nahi paa raha hu sahi se aj night mai likhunga

 

[Neerav]

Update bhai
Jldi kro yr thoda

 

[AVANISH]

Sunday tak kosis h likh nahi paa raha hu sahi se aj night mai likhunga

Thank you

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update bhai
Jldi kro yr thoda

Neerav bhai kya karu ap sab ne deemand he paneere ki kari aur usmai bhi original kadhayi paneer iskiye chaha kar bhi jaldi nahi kar sakta hu ab jaakar 3.5 k words huve usmai bhi editing etc sab baad mai hogi....wait bro...

 

[Saim1005]

Abhi mandawa ka fight scene he process mai h....aur raj aur death halo ki fight likhna baaki h....Thoda mamla tuff h wait ....

Carry on bhai
Take ur time to complete this mega update
Is Suspense scene ko complete krna bhai

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Carry on bhai
Take ur time to complete this mega update
Is Suspense scene ko complete krna bhai

Update complete he ayega par suspence toh phir bhi rahega.... Iska main chaha kar bhi kuch nahi kar paungaa ab kyo ...ye agai pata lag jayega...

 

[RAAZ]

Update complete he ayega par suspence toh phir bhi rahega.... Iska main chaha kar bhi kuch nahi kar paungaa ab kyo ...ye agai pata lag jayega...

Sahi se pathako ki nabz pakad rakhi hai. Maloom hai kaun si rug kheechoga aur uska kiya asar hoyega.