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Update no :- 23
Karan or jyoti jese hi ghar pahunchte h or thodi der rest kerte h tabhi jyoti bolti h
Jyoti :- bhai dekho mera locket chamak raha h.iska kya matlab
Karan:- kya dikha to
Karan dekhta h ki sachme uska locket chamak raha h. tabhi jyoti ki nazar karan ki shirt p padhti h jiske ander se roshni nikal rahi thi .Or jab jyoti button khol k dekhti h to dekhti h ki uske gale m jo locket h wo bhi chamak raha h.
Jyoti:- bhai dekho aapka bhi locket chamak raha h dono bhai bahan is baat se heran the .
Ye locket kabse unke gale me the ye to dono bhai bahan ko gyat ni the per unhe bas itna yaad tha ki ek baar is bare m unhone apni maa se bhi pucha tha to. Unki maa ne bola tha. Beta ye locket hamesha tum dono bhai bahan ki raksha karega ise kabhi mat utarna. Ise tum apni mummy ka ashirvad hi samjhna . Tabse dono bhai bahan chahe kuch bhi ho jaye in locket ko ni utarte.
Abhi wo dono soch hi rahe the is bare m ki tabhi kahi se ek roshni ki rays aaker undono per padti h or wo abhi hue is incident k bare m bhul jate h . Or apne daily routine m lag jate h.
Vahi kfd apne lok me ye sab dekh ker muskura rahe the .or vaha unke sath narad ji bhi the.or ye roshni kfd ne hi dali thi karan or jyoti per.
Narad ji :- narayan narayan prabhu karan or jyoti k kanth(gale) wo do locket kyu h or unke chamkane ka kya kaaran h or vo bhi aaj itne varsho pashchat achanak ye kyu chamke .
Kfd:- devrishi in do locket ka karan or jyoti k kanth m hone k do mahatvapoorn kaaran h . Pahala ye ki ye mere or swayam mahadev ki shaktiyo se nirmit h to ye unka sabse bada kavach h jiske kaaran abhi tak kalbhanu or vp un koi unhe hani ni pahucha sake , inhike kaaran to karan ya jyoti ka bade se bada ghav ek ya do din m hi bhar jata tha , jabki unki shaktiya abhi jagrit ni h or sabse mahatvapoorn kaarn aapko shighra hi gyaat ho jayega devrishi.
Yuhi do tin din nikal jate h. Fir aaj sunday tha . Aaj karan and party mil ker picnic k liye ek jangal m jate h jo bahut hi sunder tha vaha ek waterfall bhi tha .
Radha :- wow bhaiya kitni beautiful jagah h ye kyu riya di
Riya :- riya ha gudiya tu bilkul sahi bol rahi h .
Rohan (riya se) :- chalo na didu swimming kerte h .
Riya:- per betu hum to apne sath extra kapde laye hi ni fir kese
Karan :- di aapki uski chinta aap mat kijiye mane or jyoti ne sabke liye hi extra kapde le aaye h . Hume pata tha ki yaha aake sabka swimming ka man karega isliye.
Actually picnic location karan or jyoti ne sabke liye hi surprise rakhi isliye koi bhi puri teyari k sath ni aapaya bas karan or jyoti ko chod.
Fir sabhi ja ker sabhi swimming kerte h .
Lekin radha ko thoda dar lag raha tha. Wo bas bahar kadhi sab ko dekh rahi thi tabhi karan jyoti ko jaldi se kuch samjhata h .
Or jyoti radha se bolti h ki
Jyoti:- gudiya aana dekh kitna maja aaraha h kuch ni hoga hum h na .
Radha:- ni di m yahi thik hu aap sab enjoy kero .
Radha jyoti se bato m lag gayi uska dhayan or kisi per ni raha isi moke ka fayda utha ker karan jaldi se pani se bahar nikal uske piche se aaya or jaldi se use god m utha liya or radha isse pahale kuch samjh pati .Karan use goad m liye hue hi pani m kud gaya.
Radha bhi puri bhig gayi. Radha abi bhi dar rahi thi wo abhi bhi karan ki god m hi usse lipti hui thi .
Karan :- are gudiya tu bekar hi dar rahi h kuch ni hoga dekh hum h na yaha sab
Sab ke kahane p radha karan se alag ho ker pani m darti darti utarti h. Or kuch hi der m normal ho ker sabke sath masti kerti rahati h.
Or radha karan per pani fekte hue
Radha:- bhai ye kya baat hui pata h m kitna dar gayi thi esa bhi bhala koi kerta h.
Karan:- are meri barbie doll m esa na kerta to tum yaha enjoy kese ker pati.
Fir ese hi sab masti kerte rahe.or jab thak gaye to bari bari se jaker sabne car m jaker kapde change kiye.
Fir sabko bhuk lagi thi to khana khane beth jate h .Khane k baad radha bolti h
Radha:- chalo na hum sab antakshri khelte h.
Fir shuru ho jati h antakshri.
Sabse pahale radha ka hi no aata h to
Riya bolti h
Riya:-chalo gudiya t se gana gao.
Radha kuch soch ker karan or jyoti ki or dekhke gati h.
मेरा तुझ से है पहले का नाता कोई
यूँ ही नहीं दिल लुभाता कोई
जाने तू या जाने न
माने तू या माने न
देखो अभी खोना नहीं
कभी जुदा होना नहीं
अब खेल में यूँही रहेंगे दोनों
वादा रहा ये इस शाम का
जाने तू या जाने न
माने तू या माने न
Radha ne ye gana pure dil se gayi thi
Radha ka gana sunker sab tali bajate h or karan or jyoti ko radha p bahut pyar aata h to vo uske dono galo ko bari bari se chum use gale laga lete h.
Fir karan ka no aata h
Radha:- bhaiya j se gana gaiye .
Karan kuch second sochta h or fir jyoti ki or dekhte hue gata h .
ओ.. ना वो अखियाँ रूहानी
कहीं ना वो चेहरा नूरानी कहीं
कहीं दिल वाली बातें भी ना
ना वो सजरी जवानी कहीं
जग घूमेया थारे जैसा ना कोई जग घूमेया थारे जैसा ना कोई
ना तो हंसना रूमानी कहीं
ना तो खुशबू सुहानी कहीं
ना वो रंगली अदाएं देखीं
ना वो प्यारी सी नादानी कहीं
जैसी तू है वैसी रहना
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सुबह की अज़ान है
चाहतों की चादरों में मैंने है संभाली तू
कहीं आग जलती है बने बरखा का पानी कहीं
कभी मन जाना चुपके से
यूँ ही अपनी चलानी कहीं
जैसी तू है वैसी रहना
(जग घूमेया थारे जैसा ना कोई जग घूमेया थारे जैसा ना कोई ) x २
Ye pura gana karan ne jyoti ki or dekhte hue gaya or fir uske galo pe ek kiss kerdi.
Jisse jyoti ka chahara ek dum tamatar jesa lal ho gaya sharm k mare .
Karan:- oye hoye kudi sharma gayi
Rohan bhi maje lete hue.
Rohan :- are bhai ladki hasi to fasi.
Ye bat sun sab hasne lagte h or jyoti rohan k piche bhagti h use
Jyoti :- rohan bhai ruko kya bole aap abhi apko batati hu
Rohan :- mujhe kisi pagal kute ne ni kata jo m tere hath aayunga.mane wo fight dekhi thi teri , kya halat ki thi un ladko ki tune, mujhe marne ka koi shok ni h abhi to meri shadi bhi ni hui .
Rohan ki is baat pe sab hasne lagte h.
Fir isi tarah sabhi masti ker rahe the ki vaha pass m hi mojud mandir se ghatiyon ki aawaj aane lagi .
To sab samjh gaye ki mandir m aarti ho rahi h.
To wo sab ja ker us aati m sammilit hote h. Ye bhagwan shiv ka bahut purana mandir tha .
Mandir chota tha to ek baar m bas do hi jane ja sakte the .
Aarti khatam hone k baad pandit ji sab ko prasad dete hue sabko darshan kerne ko bolte h.Sabse pahale rohan or riya jate h , fir radha jati h .
Or fir karan or jyoti mandir m jate h or shivling k samne ankhe band kerke jese hi prathna kerne lagte h tabhi shivling se do prakash punj nikal ker karan or jyoti m sama jate h . Jis pee kisiki nazar ni jati.
Or jab wo dono darshan kerke bahar nikalte h to ,Karan or jyoti apne sharir m ek nayi urza mahasoos kerte h .
Fir wo sab waha se apne ghar ki or nikal jate h .
Or jese hi wo sab waha se dur pahunchte h mandir k pandit ji apni aankhe band kerke apne asli roop m aajate h , or ye or koi ni rishi piplaad the.
Or fir vo aakash ki or dekhte hue hath jod ker bole
Rishiwer :- he kfd aapne jo mujhe karya sompa tha vo mane poorn ker diya h .
Or fir waha se anter dhyan ho ker apne ashram lot jate h.
Karan or jyoti jese hi ghar pahunchte h or thodi der rest kerte h tabhi jyoti bolti h
Jyoti :- bhai dekho mera locket chamak raha h.iska kya matlab
Karan:- kya dikha to
Karan dekhta h ki sachme uska locket chamak raha h. tabhi jyoti ki nazar karan ki shirt p padhti h jiske ander se roshni nikal rahi thi .Or jab jyoti button khol k dekhti h to dekhti h ki uske gale m jo locket h wo bhi chamak raha h.
Jyoti:- bhai dekho aapka bhi locket chamak raha h dono bhai bahan is baat se heran the .
Ye locket kabse unke gale me the ye to dono bhai bahan ko gyat ni the per unhe bas itna yaad tha ki ek baar is bare m unhone apni maa se bhi pucha tha to. Unki maa ne bola tha. Beta ye locket hamesha tum dono bhai bahan ki raksha karega ise kabhi mat utarna. Ise tum apni mummy ka ashirvad hi samjhna . Tabse dono bhai bahan chahe kuch bhi ho jaye in locket ko ni utarte.
Abhi wo dono soch hi rahe the is bare m ki tabhi kahi se ek roshni ki rays aaker undono per padti h or wo abhi hue is incident k bare m bhul jate h . Or apne daily routine m lag jate h.
Vahi kfd apne lok me ye sab dekh ker muskura rahe the .or vaha unke sath narad ji bhi the.or ye roshni kfd ne hi dali thi karan or jyoti per.
Narad ji :- narayan narayan prabhu karan or jyoti k kanth(gale) wo do locket kyu h or unke chamkane ka kya kaaran h or vo bhi aaj itne varsho pashchat achanak ye kyu chamke .
Kfd:- devrishi in do locket ka karan or jyoti k kanth m hone k do mahatvapoorn kaaran h . Pahala ye ki ye mere or swayam mahadev ki shaktiyo se nirmit h to ye unka sabse bada kavach h jiske kaaran abhi tak kalbhanu or vp un koi unhe hani ni pahucha sake , inhike kaaran to karan ya jyoti ka bade se bada ghav ek ya do din m hi bhar jata tha , jabki unki shaktiya abhi jagrit ni h or sabse mahatvapoorn kaarn aapko shighra hi gyaat ho jayega devrishi.
Yuhi do tin din nikal jate h. Fir aaj sunday tha . Aaj karan and party mil ker picnic k liye ek jangal m jate h jo bahut hi sunder tha vaha ek waterfall bhi tha .
Radha :- wow bhaiya kitni beautiful jagah h ye kyu riya di
Riya :- riya ha gudiya tu bilkul sahi bol rahi h .
Rohan (riya se) :- chalo na didu swimming kerte h .
Riya:- per betu hum to apne sath extra kapde laye hi ni fir kese
Karan :- di aapki uski chinta aap mat kijiye mane or jyoti ne sabke liye hi extra kapde le aaye h . Hume pata tha ki yaha aake sabka swimming ka man karega isliye.
Actually picnic location karan or jyoti ne sabke liye hi surprise rakhi isliye koi bhi puri teyari k sath ni aapaya bas karan or jyoti ko chod.
Fir sabhi ja ker sabhi swimming kerte h .
Lekin radha ko thoda dar lag raha tha. Wo bas bahar kadhi sab ko dekh rahi thi tabhi karan jyoti ko jaldi se kuch samjhata h .
Or jyoti radha se bolti h ki
Jyoti:- gudiya aana dekh kitna maja aaraha h kuch ni hoga hum h na .
Radha:- ni di m yahi thik hu aap sab enjoy kero .
Radha jyoti se bato m lag gayi uska dhayan or kisi per ni raha isi moke ka fayda utha ker karan jaldi se pani se bahar nikal uske piche se aaya or jaldi se use god m utha liya or radha isse pahale kuch samjh pati .Karan use goad m liye hue hi pani m kud gaya.
Radha bhi puri bhig gayi. Radha abi bhi dar rahi thi wo abhi bhi karan ki god m hi usse lipti hui thi .
Karan :- are gudiya tu bekar hi dar rahi h kuch ni hoga dekh hum h na yaha sab
Sab ke kahane p radha karan se alag ho ker pani m darti darti utarti h. Or kuch hi der m normal ho ker sabke sath masti kerti rahati h.
Or radha karan per pani fekte hue
Radha:- bhai ye kya baat hui pata h m kitna dar gayi thi esa bhi bhala koi kerta h.
Karan:- are meri barbie doll m esa na kerta to tum yaha enjoy kese ker pati.
Fir ese hi sab masti kerte rahe.or jab thak gaye to bari bari se jaker sabne car m jaker kapde change kiye.
Fir sabko bhuk lagi thi to khana khane beth jate h .Khane k baad radha bolti h
Radha:- chalo na hum sab antakshri khelte h.
Fir shuru ho jati h antakshri.
Sabse pahale radha ka hi no aata h to
Riya bolti h
Riya:-chalo gudiya t se gana gao.
Radha kuch soch ker karan or jyoti ki or dekhke gati h.
मेरा तुझ से है पहले का नाता कोई
यूँ ही नहीं दिल लुभाता कोई
जाने तू या जाने न
माने तू या माने न
देखो अभी खोना नहीं
कभी जुदा होना नहीं
अब खेल में यूँही रहेंगे दोनों
वादा रहा ये इस शाम का
जाने तू या जाने न
माने तू या माने न
Radha ne ye gana pure dil se gayi thi
Radha ka gana sunker sab tali bajate h or karan or jyoti ko radha p bahut pyar aata h to vo uske dono galo ko bari bari se chum use gale laga lete h.
Fir karan ka no aata h
Radha:- bhaiya j se gana gaiye .
Karan kuch second sochta h or fir jyoti ki or dekhte hue gata h .
ओ.. ना वो अखियाँ रूहानी
कहीं ना वो चेहरा नूरानी कहीं
कहीं दिल वाली बातें भी ना
ना वो सजरी जवानी कहीं
जग घूमेया थारे जैसा ना कोई जग घूमेया थारे जैसा ना कोई
ना तो हंसना रूमानी कहीं
ना तो खुशबू सुहानी कहीं
ना वो रंगली अदाएं देखीं
ना वो प्यारी सी नादानी कहीं
जैसी तू है वैसी रहना
(जग घूमेया थारे जैसा ना कोई जग घूमेया थारे जैसा ना कोई ) x २
बारिशों के मौसमों की भीगी हरियाली
तू सर्दियों में गालों पे जो आती है वो लाली
तू रातों का सुकून.. रातों का सुकून भी है
सुबह की अज़ान है
चाहतों की चादरों में मैंने है संभाली तू
कहीं आग जलती है बने बरखा का पानी कहीं
कभी मन जाना चुपके से
यूँ ही अपनी चलानी कहीं
जैसी तू है वैसी रहना
(जग घूमेया थारे जैसा ना कोई जग घूमेया थारे जैसा ना कोई ) x २
Ye pura gana karan ne jyoti ki or dekhte hue gaya or fir uske galo pe ek kiss kerdi.
Jisse jyoti ka chahara ek dum tamatar jesa lal ho gaya sharm k mare .
Karan:- oye hoye kudi sharma gayi
Rohan bhi maje lete hue.
Rohan :- are bhai ladki hasi to fasi.
Ye bat sun sab hasne lagte h or jyoti rohan k piche bhagti h use
Jyoti :- rohan bhai ruko kya bole aap abhi apko batati hu
Rohan :- mujhe kisi pagal kute ne ni kata jo m tere hath aayunga.mane wo fight dekhi thi teri , kya halat ki thi un ladko ki tune, mujhe marne ka koi shok ni h abhi to meri shadi bhi ni hui .
Rohan ki is baat pe sab hasne lagte h.
Fir isi tarah sabhi masti ker rahe the ki vaha pass m hi mojud mandir se ghatiyon ki aawaj aane lagi .
To sab samjh gaye ki mandir m aarti ho rahi h.
To wo sab ja ker us aati m sammilit hote h. Ye bhagwan shiv ka bahut purana mandir tha .
Mandir chota tha to ek baar m bas do hi jane ja sakte the .
Aarti khatam hone k baad pandit ji sab ko prasad dete hue sabko darshan kerne ko bolte h.Sabse pahale rohan or riya jate h , fir radha jati h .
Or fir karan or jyoti mandir m jate h or shivling k samne ankhe band kerke jese hi prathna kerne lagte h tabhi shivling se do prakash punj nikal ker karan or jyoti m sama jate h . Jis pee kisiki nazar ni jati.
Or jab wo dono darshan kerke bahar nikalte h to ,Karan or jyoti apne sharir m ek nayi urza mahasoos kerte h .
Fir wo sab waha se apne ghar ki or nikal jate h .
Or jese hi wo sab waha se dur pahunchte h mandir k pandit ji apni aankhe band kerke apne asli roop m aajate h , or ye or koi ni rishi piplaad the.
Or fir vo aakash ki or dekhte hue hath jod ker bole
Rishiwer :- he kfd aapne jo mujhe karya sompa tha vo mane poorn ker diya h .
Or fir waha se anter dhyan ho ker apne ashram lot jate h.
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Nice story.
Started reading today and think that I'll complete it by tomorrow.
Gone through first 7 updates. And now feeling one thing to say.
Bhai es story ki Sabse khaas baat hai ki yahan writer Ko koi jaldi nahi hai. Aaram se full detail ke saath ek ek seen Ko describe kar Rahe ho. Esliye yahan kahani ka anand alag hoga aur Jo Sabse badi baat hogi wo ye hogi ki es khanai ke character aur story jaldi bhulaye nahi jayenge kyunki kahani me ek thahraav hai aur kahani apni chaap Dil ke andar aur dimag ki gahrayi tak pahunch Rahi hai.
Bhai bahan ka nischal Prem bahut mast lagata hai sach kahoon to real life me bhai bahan ke aise hi nischal Prem ki jaroorat hai but possible nahi hai Lekin story me to bhai mujhe incest hi pasand hai esliye dekhta hoon ki aage kya hota hai. Abhi to bahut update baaki hain padhne Ko baaki ke reviews current update tak padhne ke Baad.
Tab tak aap update dete Raho aur Mai enjoy karta rahoon. Milte hain fir kal Shaam Ko.
Started reading today and think that I'll complete it by tomorrow.
Gone through first 7 updates. And now feeling one thing to say.
Bhai es story ki Sabse khaas baat hai ki yahan writer Ko koi jaldi nahi hai. Aaram se full detail ke saath ek ek seen Ko describe kar Rahe ho. Esliye yahan kahani ka anand alag hoga aur Jo Sabse badi baat hogi wo ye hogi ki es khanai ke character aur story jaldi bhulaye nahi jayenge kyunki kahani me ek thahraav hai aur kahani apni chaap Dil ke andar aur dimag ki gahrayi tak pahunch Rahi hai.
Bhai bahan ka nischal Prem bahut mast lagata hai sach kahoon to real life me bhai bahan ke aise hi nischal Prem ki jaroorat hai but possible nahi hai Lekin story me to bhai mujhe incest hi pasand hai esliye dekhta hoon ki aage kya hota hai. Abhi to bahut update baaki hain padhne Ko baaki ke reviews current update tak padhne ke Baad.
Tab tak aap update dete Raho aur Mai enjoy karta rahoon. Milte hain fir kal Shaam Ko.
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