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Agle din or jyoti uth ker bari bari se nahate h or fir teyar hote h .Tabhi jyoti bolti h.
Jyoti :- bhai aaj rahane dete h college jane ka man ni h
Or fir wo jaker karan ki god m beth jati h or aapni bahe karan k gale me dalkar.
Jyoti:- m aaj aajaka pura din apne pyare bhaiyu k sath spent kerna chahati or masti kerna chahati hu please.
Jyoti ne ye baat itni masumiyat or pyar se boli thi ki karan mana ni ker paya.
Karan:- (uske galo ko apne sahalte hue bolta h) jesi meri gudiya ki mazi .
Or ye bol ker jyoti k galo ko chum liye.
Jyoti:- (bilkul bacho ki tarah khush hote hue) yahooooooooooo! Thank u thank u thank u so much bhai.
Or fir usne karan k chahare per kisses ki jhadi laga di.
Karan:- are bas ker bas ker gudiya.
Jyoti thodi masti kerte hue uske gal per kaat leti h
Karan :- ouch kat liya , gandi bachi.
Or apna gal sahalane lagta h.
Karan ne ye sab itni funny way m bola ki jyoti khil khilakar hasne lagti h.or use dekh karan bhi khush ho jata h.
Fir karan jyoti se bolta h
Karan:- chal choti nashta kerte h .
Jyoti :- ha bhai chalungi na but ese ni.
Karan :- fir kese ?
Jyoti :- jara ghumiye bhai.
Karan jese hi piche ghumta h to jyoti jaldi se bad per chad ker
karan k piche se uske gale m bahe dal ker uski pith p latak jati h or apne per karan k pet per lapet leti h.or bolti h
Jyoti:- ese bhai .
Karan jyoti ki is harkat p muskura uttha h or achanak usko apne bachpan ki yaad aajati h jab unki maa jinda thi to unke papa bhi undono se bahut pyaar kerte the , or jab bhi vo 4ro kahi ghumne jate to unke papa kabhi use ya kabhi jyoti ko ese apni pith per leker ghumte the. Ye sab yaad aate hi wo thoda emotional ho jata h per jaldi khud ko control ker leta h.or jyoti ko leker kitchen m aata h
Fir dono bhai bahan mil ker khana banate h or jyoti aaj. Karan ki god m beth k hi usko khana khilati or karan jyoti ko khilata h or
fir wapas jyoti karan ki pith p sawar ho jati h . Dono k papa or soteli maa to as usual ghar p the ni to wo befikar the.
Karan jyoti ko leker hall m aaker usko sofe per bithaya h or dusre sofe pe let ker
Karan:- (natak kerte hue) haye meri pith , jyoti tu kitni bhari ho gayi h , moti kahi ki meri pith ki band baja di.
Jyoti (banawati gusse me ) kya bole bhai aapne mujhe moti bola ruko.
Or jyoti karan k uper chad k usper pyar se mukko ki barsaat ker di
Fir karan sofe per beth gaya or jyoti ne apna sir uski god m rakh diya or dono bhai bahan tv dekhne lagte h
Tabhi karan bolta h
Karan :- chal choti bahut din ho gaye tere liye shopping ni ki jaldi se ready ho ja fir mall chalte h.
Jyoti itna sun ker bahut khush ho jati h or ho bhi kyu naa aakir ladkiyo ka pasandida kaam jo h shopping.
Fir dono bhai bahan ready ho ker mall pahunchte h or ek esi shop p jaate jaha ladies or gent dono k kapde milte ho , waha jaker har ladki ki tarah puri dukan sir o utha li
Chaliye jab tak inki shopping ker rahe h ek najar narad ji per daal lete h.
Narad ji kfd se mil ker sidha rishi piplaad k aashram me pahunchte h .rishiwer unhe dekh ker bahut khush hote h.
Rishiwer:- pranam devrishi ! Aapka swagat h
Fir rishiwer narad ji ki khub dil se seva kerte h unhe bhojan karwate h.
Fir bolte h
Rishiwer :- kahiye narad ji mere liye kya aagya h
Narad ji :- narayan narayan rishiwer m aapke liye kfd ka ek sandesh le ker aaya hu unhonne aapko ek karya sompa h .
Rishiwer:- ye to mera soubhagya h devrishi ki swayam kfd ne mujhe is layak samjha kahiye kya sandesh h .
Narad ji unhe wo karya bata ker waha se chala jata h.
Wahi dusri taraf shahr k bahar khandar m vo tantrik jisse mla milne aaya tha (uska naam aghora) sadhna m betha hua tha ki tabhi usko ek awaj sunayi deti h ki
"
"Aankhe kholo aghora"
Aghora jese hi ankhe kholta h to dekhta h ki uske samne 'vp' khada thA .
Aghora:- prabhu aap yaha is samay mujhe se koi bhul hui kya.
Vp :- ni aghora balki tumhe to khush hona chahiye ki shetano k shahnshah (Mv) ne tumhe apne ek kaam k layak samjha.
Aghora :- aagya dijiye prabhu
Phir vp usko vo kam bata ker gayab ho jata h or aghora us kam ki teyari m lag jata h.
Chaliye wapas chalte h hero ki taraf
Pure do ghante baad jyoti ki shopping khatam hoti h to karan chen ki saas leta h.
Fir wo ek restaurant m jaker lunch kerte h .Apna hero aaj bahut handsome lag raha tha to waha mojud sabhi ladkiya use hi ghure jaa rahi thi ,karan to dhayan ni deta per jyoti sab notice kerti h or usko pata ni kyu use gussa aaraha tha.
Jyoti man me. :- dekho to in kaminiyo ko kese mere bhaiyu ko ghur rahi h kese kha hi jayenge . Per in bechariyo ki bhi kya galti bhai h hi itne handsome or jane kyu sharmane lagti h man hi man.
Karan :- are jyoti kaha kho gayi dekh khana aagaya h jaldi .
Fir dono ek dusre ko apne hatho se khilate h jise dekh ladkiya unhe couple samjh k jalne lagti h.or ladko ka bhi jyoti ko dekh yahi hal tha . Or jyoti bhi ye sab dekh ker man hi man muskura rahi thi .
Fir dono khana kha ker ghar pahunchte h or dono so jate h.
Sham ko unki nind doorbell ki aawaj se khulti h.
Karan jeSe hi gate kholta h to bahut khush ho jata h kyunki uske ma baap k sath gate k bahar shivani khadi thi
Intro
Shivani :- age 12 saal ranbir or kabya ki beti or karan or jyoti ki soteli bahan h. Ye abhi tak delhi m hostel m rah ker padh rahi thi .
Iske nature k bare m aage pata chalega .
Karan or jyoti shivani ko dekh bahut khush hote h per shivani bhi unhe ignore kerti h or esa behave ker rahi thi jese unhe janti hi na ho . Shivani ese behave ker rahi thi ki unhe janti hi na ho. Uska esa behave dekh dono bhai bahan ko bahut dukh hota h.
Fir karan or jyoti khana banaker apne room m jake khane bethte h to jyoti bolti h .
Jyoti (nam aankho se) :- bhai humari esi kya galti h ki papa or choti maa esa bartaav kerte h hamse or ab shivani bhi .
Bol k rone lagi . Karan bhi kuch ni bola or usko gale laga liye .
Fir dono bhai bahan khana khaker so jate h.
Note :- sorry for late update friends
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Agle din or jyoti uth ker bari bari se nahate h or fir teyar hote h .Tabhi jyoti bolti h.
Jyoti :- bhai aaj rahane dete h college jane ka man ni h
Or fir wo jaker karan ki god m beth jati h or aapni bahe karan k gale me dalkar.
Jyoti:- m aaj aajaka pura din apne pyare bhaiyu k sath spent kerna chahati or masti kerna chahati hu please.
Jyoti ne ye baat itni masumiyat or pyar se boli thi ki karan mana ni ker paya.
Karan:- (uske galo ko apne sahalte hue bolta h) jesi meri gudiya ki mazi .
Or ye bol ker jyoti k galo ko chum liye.
Jyoti:- (bilkul bacho ki tarah khush hote hue) yahooooooooooo! Thank u thank u thank u so much bhai.
Or fir usne karan k chahare per kisses ki jhadi laga di.
Karan:- are bas ker bas ker gudiya.
Jyoti thodi masti kerte hue uske gal per kaat leti h
Karan :- ouch kat liya , gandi bachi.
Or apna gal sahalane lagta h.
Karan ne ye sab itni funny way m bola ki jyoti khil khilakar hasne lagti h.or use dekh karan bhi khush ho jata h.
Fir karan jyoti se bolta h
Karan:- chal choti nashta kerte h .
Jyoti :- ha bhai chalungi na but ese ni.
Karan :- fir kese ?
Jyoti :- jara ghumiye bhai.
Karan jese hi piche ghumta h to jyoti jaldi se bad per chad ker
karan k piche se uske gale m bahe dal ker uski pith p latak jati h or apne per karan k pet per lapet leti h.or bolti h
Jyoti:- ese bhai .
Karan jyoti ki is harkat p muskura uttha h or achanak usko apne bachpan ki yaad aajati h jab unki maa jinda thi to unke papa bhi undono se bahut pyaar kerte the , or jab bhi vo 4ro kahi ghumne jate to unke papa kabhi use ya kabhi jyoti ko ese apni pith per leker ghumte the. Ye sab yaad aate hi wo thoda emotional ho jata h per jaldi khud ko control ker leta h.or jyoti ko leker kitchen m aata h
Fir dono bhai bahan mil ker khana banate h or jyoti aaj. Karan ki god m beth k hi usko khana khilati or karan jyoti ko khilata h or
fir wapas jyoti karan ki pith p sawar ho jati h . Dono k papa or soteli maa to as usual ghar p the ni to wo befikar the.
Karan jyoti ko leker hall m aaker usko sofe per bithaya h or dusre sofe pe let ker
Karan:- (natak kerte hue) haye meri pith , jyoti tu kitni bhari ho gayi h , moti kahi ki meri pith ki band baja di.
Jyoti (banawati gusse me ) kya bole bhai aapne mujhe moti bola ruko.
Or jyoti karan k uper chad k usper pyar se mukko ki barsaat ker di
Fir karan sofe per beth gaya or jyoti ne apna sir uski god m rakh diya or dono bhai bahan tv dekhne lagte h
Tabhi karan bolta h
Karan :- chal choti bahut din ho gaye tere liye shopping ni ki jaldi se ready ho ja fir mall chalte h.
Jyoti itna sun ker bahut khush ho jati h or ho bhi kyu naa aakir ladkiyo ka pasandida kaam jo h shopping.
Fir dono bhai bahan ready ho ker mall pahunchte h or ek esi shop p jaate jaha ladies or gent dono k kapde milte ho , waha jaker har ladki ki tarah puri dukan sir o utha li
Chaliye jab tak inki shopping ker rahe h ek najar narad ji per daal lete h.
Narad ji kfd se mil ker sidha rishi piplaad k aashram me pahunchte h .rishiwer unhe dekh ker bahut khush hote h.
Rishiwer:- pranam devrishi ! Aapka swagat h
Fir rishiwer narad ji ki khub dil se seva kerte h unhe bhojan karwate h.
Fir bolte h
Rishiwer :- kahiye narad ji mere liye kya aagya h
Narad ji :- narayan narayan rishiwer m aapke liye kfd ka ek sandesh le ker aaya hu unhonne aapko ek karya sompa h .
Rishiwer:- ye to mera soubhagya h devrishi ki swayam kfd ne mujhe is layak samjha kahiye kya sandesh h .
Narad ji unhe wo karya bata ker waha se chala jata h.
Wahi dusri taraf shahr k bahar khandar m vo tantrik jisse mla milne aaya tha (uska naam aghora) sadhna m betha hua tha ki tabhi usko ek awaj sunayi deti h ki
"
"Aankhe kholo aghora"
Aghora jese hi ankhe kholta h to dekhta h ki uske samne 'vp' khada thA .
Aghora:- prabhu aap yaha is samay mujhe se koi bhul hui kya.
Vp :- ni aghora balki tumhe to khush hona chahiye ki shetano k shahnshah (Mv) ne tumhe apne ek kaam k layak samjha.
Aghora :- aagya dijiye prabhu
Phir vp usko vo kam bata ker gayab ho jata h or aghora us kam ki teyari m lag jata h.
Chaliye wapas chalte h hero ki taraf
Pure do ghante baad jyoti ki shopping khatam hoti h to karan chen ki saas leta h.
Fir wo ek restaurant m jaker lunch kerte h .Apna hero aaj bahut handsome lag raha tha to waha mojud sabhi ladkiya use hi ghure jaa rahi thi ,karan to dhayan ni deta per jyoti sab notice kerti h or usko pata ni kyu use gussa aaraha tha.
Jyoti man me. :- dekho to in kaminiyo ko kese mere bhaiyu ko ghur rahi h kese kha hi jayenge . Per in bechariyo ki bhi kya galti bhai h hi itne handsome or jane kyu sharmane lagti h man hi man.
Karan :- are jyoti kaha kho gayi dekh khana aagaya h jaldi .
Fir dono ek dusre ko apne hatho se khilate h jise dekh ladkiya unhe couple samjh k jalne lagti h.or ladko ka bhi jyoti ko dekh yahi hal tha . Or jyoti bhi ye sab dekh ker man hi man muskura rahi thi .
Fir dono khana kha ker ghar pahunchte h or dono so jate h.
Sham ko unki nind doorbell ki aawaj se khulti h.
Karan jeSe hi gate kholta h to bahut khush ho jata h kyunki uske ma baap k sath gate k bahar shivani khadi thi
Intro
Shivani :- age 12 saal ranbir or kabya ki beti or karan or jyoti ki soteli bahan h. Ye abhi tak delhi m hostel m rah ker padh rahi thi .
Iske nature k bare m aage pata chalega .
Karan or jyoti shivani ko dekh bahut khush hote h per shivani bhi unhe ignore kerti h or esa behave ker rahi thi jese unhe janti hi na ho . Shivani ese behave ker rahi thi ki unhe janti hi na ho. Uska esa behave dekh dono bhai bahan ko bahut dukh hota h.
Fir karan or jyoti khana banaker apne room m jake khane bethte h to jyoti bolti h .
Jyoti (nam aankho se) :- bhai humari esi kya galti h ki papa or choti maa esa bartaav kerte h hamse or ab shivani bhi .
Bol k rone lagi . Karan bhi kuch ni bola or usko gale laga liye .
Fir dono bhai bahan khana khaker so jate h.
Note :- sorry for late update friends
Stay tuned
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Bahot hi shandar aur lajawab update bhai Aap ki mehnat aur imagination ne is Kahani Mein Char Chand laga diye hai,
Your update was awesome Hats off to you bro keep rocking we love your story and your writing skills,
Keep going
We will wait for next update
lovely update..... ek doubt : - Radha ki maa bhi to shayad kuch lagti hai Karan n Jyoti ki shayad Mousi....
lets see kal kya surprise miltaa hai
review of update 8
jyoti or karan ka ruthna manna, masti majak,phir karan ko apne bimar padne per jyoti ka use care karna yaad ajana hai...bahut pyar bhare lamhe enjoy kar rahe dono
nice update
Sath bane rahane or review k liye shukriya dosto update dediya h
Sorry for late
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