Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

[Abhi]

Bhai mujhe ye story bahut pasand hai.
Apne start karke bahut accha kiya.
Story me thoda bahut change kar dijiye.
Ab jaldi se dusra update kar dijiye.

 

[Harry rocks]

Update no - 2
Karan ki sauteli maa ke janmdin ke party mei karan to aata tha lekin jyoti nahi aati thi..
Ishi chalte uske papa jyoti per or kapha rahte the.
Aaj bhi Janmdin ki party ki taiyari suru ho gayi thi.
Karan ke papa Ranbir sarma ek bahoot nirdayi admi the.
Janmdin ki party bhi khatam ho gayi lekin aaj bhi jyoti party mei nahi aayi. Aaj to uske papa ka krodh
satwe asman per tha. Jab sare mehman chale gaye to karan ke papa room mei aagaye.
Papa- jyoti se kyo re kya samjhati hai apneaap ko aaj teri yeshi dhunayi karunga ki aaj ke baad tu jo mai
kahunga wahi karegi.. karan wahi baithi huya tha itna bolkar uske papa behar nikal gaye karan jyoti ke pass
baith gaya. Jab uske papa dobara ander aaye to unke hantho mei ek landa tha unke saath mei karan ki
sauteli maa bhi thi ander aate hi karan ke papa ne jyoti ke uper wo danda barasan suru kar diye lekin karan ne
jyoti ko apne se bilkul kabhar kar liya isliye jyoti ko to ek bhi danda nahi laga lekin karan ka pura pith ka
chamda ulat gaya lekin karan ne jyoti ko apne niche se nahi nikalane diya kyoki wo apne behan se bahoot
peyar karta tha.. Kisi bhi halat mei wo apne pyari si behan ko pitate nahi dekh sakta tha. ..
karan ke papa karan ko tabtak marte rahe jabtak unka danda tut na gaya..karan to pitate-pitate behos ho gaya
lekin jyoti ko ek bhi danda na padne diya..
Jab danda tut gaya to karan ke papa uske room se behar nikal gaye. Jyoti ke ankho mei ansu ki dhara bahe
jaa rahi thi. Jyoti kisi tarah karan ke niche se bahar nikali apne room ka darwaja band kar di. karan pet ke bal
behos pada huya tha jyoti ki nazar jaise hi karan ke uper padi uska kaleza kaanp gaya aise laga ki kisi ne
uske pet chhura mar diya ho. karan ke pith ki chamdi ulat gayi thi. Jaldi se jyoti ne karan ke short or baniyan jo
ki dande ki pitayi se phat kar khun se ranga huya tha. Kaichi (scissors) se katkar nikal di Unke room mei emergancy
ke liye dawa rakha huya tha. Jyoti ne pure pith ko bahoot hi dhime se saaf ki phir dawa laga di. Ab karan ke
badan per ek pant tha kisi tarah jyoti ne use bhi nikal diya ab kewal karan underwear mei tha. Jyoti bed pe
let gayi or raj ko apne uper kichhkar lita li ab behosi awasta mei karan ka sar jyoti ke chhatiyo pe tha.....
Jyoti apne bhai karan ke sar ke bal sahala rahi thi uske ankho se yamuna-ganga beh rahe thi aaj jo bhi huya
wo sab jyoti ke chalte huya tha aaj jyoti ke chalte uska pran se pyare bhai ka ye hal huya tha...
jyoti ne soch liya ki wo is ghar ko chhodkar dono bhai-behan dusre sahar chale jayenge ab uske papa ke
dil mei thoda sa bhi pyar nahi bacha tha aaj uske papa ekdam nirdayi ban gaye the jab se jyoti or karan ke
nayi maa aayi thi tabse inke papa ka mat kharab ho gaya tha... Tab se thoda bhi pyar nahi karte the lagta
hi nahi tha ki ye dono ranbir ke santan hai..
Jyoti ne karan ke taraf dheyan diya wo kisi masoom bache ki tarah uske naram-naram chhatiyo per sar
rakhkar behosi halat mei so raha raha tha.. Is samay to doctor ko dikhana nammukin tha kyoki to uske
papa aaj bahoot krodhit the gher se behar nahi jane dete.. Aaj jyoti ke ankho se nind koso dur thi anshu
the jo rukne ka nam nahi le rahe the un ansuwo ko pochhane ka koi kosish nahi kar rahi thi. kisi tarah 3
baje jyoti ko thoda sa ankh lag gayi. karan ka koi hosh nahi tha wo to apne behan ko bachane mei behos ho
gaya tha
Thanks for support friends ese hi sath bane rahieyega

 

[Harry rocks]

P

Bhai mujhe ye story bahut pasand hai.
Apne start karke bahut accha kiya.
Story me thoda bahut change kar dijiye.
Ab jaldi se dusra update kar dijiye.

Posted bhai

 

[sonukale]

Lajawab update

 

[Prince the lover]

bhai story bohot achi he lekin iski wording same 2 same he bas raj karan kar diya he iska matlab apke pas iska pdf he agar aisa he to sare update ek saath post kardo kyuki yaha lagbhag 90℅ xp ke readers he aur sabhi ne ye story padhi hogi so agar apko views chahiye to apna alag likhna hoga isiliye update post kardo and apna khudka likhna start karo i m aure readers apne aap badh jayege kyuki mene ye story padhi he wo kafi age nikal chuki thi ab ess speed se tumhe waha pohochne me 2 mahine se jada lag jayenge so jab yum pichle sare update post kar doge to notify kar dena age ka padhne jarur aunga kyuki ye tumhara first time he to tumhari lekhni padhne me maja ayega so keep it up

 

[Harry rocks]

bhai story bohot achi he lekin iski wording same 2 same he bas raj karan kar diya he iska matlab apke pas iska pdf he agar aisa he to sare update ek saath post kardo kyuki yaha lagbhag 90℅ xp ke readers he aur sabhi ne ye story padhi hogi so agar apko views chahiye to apna alag likhna hoga isiliye update post kardo and apna khudka likhna start karo i m aure readers apne aap badh jayege kyuki mene ye story padhi he wo kafi age nikal chuki thi ab ess speed se tumhe waha pohochne me 2 mahine se jada lag jayenge so jab yum pichle sare update post kar doge to notify kar dena age ka padhne jarur aunga kyuki ye tumhara first time he to tumhari lekhni padhne me maja ayega so keep it up

Bhai abhi starting hui h jo same to same h aage abhi changes aayenge jo aapko dhire dhire dikhne shuru honge abhi m kaam ker raha hu changes per shuru k 5 6 updates same h fir changes aayenge or abhi m part 2 k plot p bhi kaam ker raha hu

 

[Harry rocks]

Bhaiyo jinko lag raha h ki story same h or mujhe pdf upload ker dena chahiye please wo thoda sabra rakhe aage kuch updates baad changes aana shuru honge or aapko vo ki vo chahiye to please bata dijiye or ager meri baat maano to aap please thoda wait kijiye story abhi start hi hui h or shuru ki kuch updates is story ki bahut achi h jo m change ni kerna chahata

 

[Raja thakur]

Bhai abhi starting hui h jo same to same h aage abhi changes aayenge jo aapko dhire dhire dikhne shuru honge abhi m kaam ker raha hu changes per shuru k 5 6 updates same h fir changes aayenge or abhi m part 2 k plot p bhi kaam ker raha hu

Ok bro

 

[John Cena]

Superb update bhai

 

[John Cena]

Bhaiyo jinko lag raha h ki story same h or mujhe pdf upload ker dena chahiye please wo thoda sabra rakhe aage kuch updates baad changes aana shuru honge or aapko vo ki vo chahiye to please bata dijiye or ager meri baat maano to aap please thoda wait kijiye story abhi start hi hui h or shuru ki kuch updates is story ki bahut achi h jo m change ni kerna chahata

Bhai mane ya story pehle nhi parhi phir yahi kahonga aise hi likhte raho i am with you