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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


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Harry rocks

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very nice update

☆..Awesome update..☆

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Nice update

Shandar update bro . . .:goteam:

Nice story

Mast update h bhai maza a gya

nice update

Lajawab super mind-blowing update

Mst update bhai

Jabardast Update
Villain nayi nayi yojna m lage huee h
Dekhte h kon kon villain h vp or mv
Or kdf se kyu darte h vo kon h

Dekhte h aage kya hota h

Bhai kdf ni kfd h unka name. Or wo kon j or hero se unka kya relation wo to aage hi pata chalega

Last 2no update hi behtareen the bhai ekk mai karan akele Clg gye isme usko bechaini dikhi jyoti se alag hone ka abb dusre update mai Valentine wala dhamaka hoga Mauj Masti hoga abb dekhna hai ki kya kya hota hai in dono ke sath aur kaise hota hai kistarh yeh dono ekk dusre ka hath pakadke sari muskiloon ko par krte hai

So main villain is still mysterious...

Waiting for next update

Bhai lagta h aapne ek update miss ker diya in dono k bich ka.


kahani me suspens ho achchi baat he lekin tum hi confuse mat ho jao yar kabhi mv ke dialogue vp bol raha he flashback chij ke liye dala ye bhi nahi pata chal raha he mana aap pehli baar likh rahe ho aur kafi had tak apne purani story change kardi he lekin characters add karne ke sath sath character evolution achchese hona chahiye sirf naam rakhne ya chupane se kuch nahi hota bas ek suggestion dena chahunga jab aap koi naya charecter add kar rahe ho to uska pura naksha rehan sahan baat karne ka dhang uska itihas aur uska story me role fix karlo chahe to back up me likh ke rakhlo isase apko story badhane me aur behtarin karne me asani hogi sabse important aaj jesi galtiya nahi hogi

Thanks for suggestions bhai

Ha bhai ek dialogue likhte hue galat name likhne ki galti hui h , mane abhi notice kiya.vp ki jagah mp likh diya. or bhai jaha tak rahi ki villain kaisa h or kya h uski khasiyat kya h m abji reveal ni kerna chahata kyunki isse story ki kayi baate jo aage hone wali h wo spiol ho jayegi. Or flashback to bas ese hi thoda emotional touch k liye diya h fir bhi aapka dil se shukriya aapke suggestions k liye m aage puri koshis karunga aapne jesa suggest kiya h vesa ho or ese hi sath bane rahiye or apne reviews dete rahiyega .

Nice update

Nice update

Nice update

Waiting for next update

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Superb update bhai

Sorry friends mere papa ki tabiyat kharab h to aaj shop p bas m hi hu to aaj update ni de paunga so please bura mat maniyega
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Harry rocks

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Update no :- 16
jyoti aram se so hi rahe the ki tabhi jyoti k chahare k hav bhav badal jate h or achanak bahut jor se chilati hui uth jati h

Jyoti :- bhaiiii.
Or fir karan ko apne side m na paker jor jor se rone lagti or bhai bhai chilane lagti .

Karan jo ki bathroom gaya hua tha jyoti ki chikh sun ker kafi ghabra jata h.or jaldi se bhag ker room m wapas aata h . Or jyoti ko is halat m dekh ker or ghabra jata h or puchta h kya
Karan :- kya hua choti ro kyu rahi h .Koi bura sapna dekha.
Jyoti jese hi karan ko dekhti hi usse lipat k or jor jor se rone lagti or rote rote achanak behosh ho jati h.

Karan ki halat or kharab ho jari wo jaldi se pani lake uske chare per chidakta h or use hosh me lata h.

Jyoti hosh me aate hi fir se karan se chipak ke rone lagti .
Karan :- kya hua gudiya kyu ro rahi h chup ho ja tu to meri brave sister h na.acha bata kya hua koi bura sapna dekha.

Jyoti (siskate hue) :- haa bhai mane dekha aapki kisi se fight ho rahi or fir aap pe samne wale ne janleva hamla kiya or aap.

Itna bol ker fir se rone lagi.
Karan lagatar use chup karane ki koshis m laga hua tha.

Karan:- are bas ker gudiya or kitna royegi , wo bas sapna hi to tha. Dekh mujhe kuch ni hua m tere samne hi to hu bilkul sahi salamat hu .
Per jyoti chup hone ka naam hi ni le rahi thi to karan ko or koi raasta n sujha or usne jyoti k chahre ko apne hatho m leker uske hotho pe. Apne hoth rakh deta h or bade hi pyar se use kiss kerne lagta h, pahale to jyoti but bani rahati h fir wo bhi dhire dhire karan ka sath dene lagti h . Per in dono ki kiss m naam matra bhi havas ni thi , bas rha to sirf unka pavitra v nishchal prem.kabhi karan jyoti k uper k hoth ko chumata to kabhi niche wale ko dono ka hi ye pahala kiss tha life ka.
Or jab dono ki sanse ukhadne lagti h. To dono alag ho jate h or jyoti buri tarah sharma k apne bhai se chipak ke us ke sine m khud ko chipane lagti h.

Or thodi der baad normal ho ke jyoti fir bolti h .

Jyoti :- bhai mujhe bahut dar lag raha h kahi wo sapna sach ho gaya to, kahi aapko kuch ho gaya to m bhi ni ji paungi .

Karan :- choti tu kyu dar rahi h wo bas sapna hi to tha bas, or jyoti ko galo p pyar se kiss kerte hue. Or jab tak meri pyari or bahadur gudiya mere sath h duniya ki koi takat mera kuch ni bigad sakti.kyu sahi kaha na mane

Jyoti:- ha bhai aap pe aane wali har musibat ko aap tak pahuche se pahale mujhse bhidna hoga.

Karan:- wah ab ki na meri bahadur bahan wali baat or pagli ese roya mat ker . Roti tu h taklif mujhe hoti h.

Fir isi tarah dono bhai bahan baate kerte hue fir se ek dusre ki baho m so jate h.

Wahi dusri or narad ji pahunch jate h ek bahut hi sundar van (forest) jaha per ek bahut hi tejashvi purush bhagwan shiv ki aradhna ker rahe the shivling k samne . Unko dekh ker hi pata chal raha tha ki vo bahut shant or somya swabhav k h prantu jab krodh aajaye to bahut bahut hi vinashakari ho jate honge.
Or jese hi unki aradhna purna hui . To Naradaji bole.

Narad ji :- bhagwan shiv k param priya bhakt KFD ko narad ka pranam.

Ji ha dosto ye yuwak or koi ni swayam kfd hi h jo tridevo k baad sabse shaktishali h or mv bhi inse yudh kerne me ghabrata h

KFd:- pranam devrishi , kahiye aaj yaha ka marg kese bhul gaye . Koi shanka h kya.

Narad ji :- ha prabhu vo bhi ek ni do do.

Kfd:- boliye narad hi kya shankaye h aapke hriday(dil) me m aapki shankaye dur karne ka purn prayas karunga.

Narad ji :- meri pahali shanka ye h ki jesa ki sab jante h aap mahadev ko atyant priya h or unhone isi kaaran aapko ek vishal lok or ek mahal bhi pradaan kiya h.taki aap aapna kartavya nirvighn purn kerte rahe , prantu fir bhi un sukh suvidhaye tyag ker yaha is van m hi apna adhiktar samay vyatit kyu kerte ho .

Kfd:- hmm aap to jante hi devrishi mene apna adhiktar balyakaal (bachpan) isi sthan isi van m vyatit kiya h , isiliye mujhe yaha sthan bahut hi priya h. Or m is sansaar ko yah bhi sikh yaha rahakar sikhata hu ki ye bhotik sukh keval mithya h maya h.sacha sukh apna karm kerte hue ishwer ki bhakti m rahana hi h. Or vese derishi jo sukh prakriti maa ki god m h vo mahalo ki char diwari m kaha.

Narad ji :- narayan! narayan ! ati uttam , sahi hi kahate h sabhi aapme or mahadev k swabhav me koi antar ni h , aap dono hi moh maya se virakt ho .
Or mera dusra prashn ...

Kfd:- (bich m hi bol pade) aapka dusra prashn karan or jyoti k baare m hi h na devrishi.

Narad ji :- uchit kaha aapne he shiv priya

Kfd:- m aapke yaha aane prayojan ko jaan chuka hu devrishi aap vyarth hi chintit ho rahe h jo bhi aage karan or jyoti k sath hone wala h vo vidhi ka vidhan h or vese bhi abhi hamara unke jivan m aagman ka samay ni aaya h , or aage jo bhi hone wala h. Vo to undono k prem ki pariksha hogi .ab ye dekhne wali baat hogi ki , kese aane wali pariksha me unka prem unka sahayak hoga.


Naradji :- jesa aapko uchit lage

Kfd:- mera ek karya karenge devrishi ?

Narad ji :- kahiye kfd m aapki kese sahayta ker sakta hu

Fir kfd narad ji ko vo karya batate h jise sun narad ji kfd se agaya le us karya ko kerne ko nikal jate h.

Aiye ek najar commissioner or mla per dal lete h.

Commissioner:- bhai tumhe pakka yakin h na ki humara yah plan successful hoga ager jara si humse chuk hui to tum to jante hi ho ki anajam bahut bura hoga humara.

Mla:- ha mere yaar mujhe pura yakin h ki humara ye plan jarur successful hoga or us home minister ko bhi achha sabak milega.

Or fir dono jor jor se hasne lagte h

Ab dekhte h ki jyoti ne jo sapne m dekha tha vo bas sapna hi tha ya bhavishya m aane wale kisi sankat ki chetavni, or kya karya sopa h kfd ne narad ji ko , or kya plan bana rahe h mla or commissioner janne k liye sath bane rahiye

Stay tuned.

 

Harry rocks

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very nice update

☆..Awesome update..☆

:toohappy::bounce::bsanta::cool1::doodh::jump:
:party::party2:

:yourock:


Nice update

Shandar update bro . . .:goteam:

Nice story

Mast update h bhai maza a gya

nice update

Lajawab super mind-blowing update

Mst update bhai

Jabardast Update
Villain nayi nayi yojna m lage huee h
Dekhte h kon kon villain h vp or mv
Or kdf se kyu darte h vo kon h

Dekhte h aage kya hota h

Bhai kdf ni kfd h unka name. Or wo kon j or hero se unka kya relation wo to aage hi pata chalega

awesome update
ab Kya hua hi
keep posting

Last 2no update hi behtareen the bhai ekk mai karan akele Clg gye isme usko bechaini dikhi jyoti se alag hone ka abb dusre update mai Valentine wala dhamaka hoga Mauj Masti hoga abb dekhna hai ki kya kya hota hai in dono ke sath aur kaise hota hai kistarh yeh dono ekk dusre ka hath pakadke sari muskiloon ko par krte hai

So main villain is still mysterious...

Waiting for next update


kahani me suspens ho achchi baat he lekin tum hi confuse mat ho jao yar kabhi mv ke dialogue vp bol raha he flashback chij ke liye dala ye bhi nahi pata chal raha he mana aap pehli baar likh rahe ho aur kafi had tak apne purani story change kardi he lekin characters add karne ke sath sath character evolution achchese hona chahiye sirf naam rakhne ya chupane se kuch nahi hota bas ek suggestion dena chahunga jab aap koi naya charecter add kar rahe ho to uska pura naksha rehan sahan baat karne ka dhang uska itihas aur uska story me role fix karlo chahe to back up me likh ke rakhlo isase apko story badhane me aur behtarin karne me asani hogi sabse important aaj jesi galtiya nahi hogi

Nice update

Nice update

Nice update

Waiting for next update

Waiting for next

Superb update bhai

Ok koi baat nhi


Family first dear...

Update dediya h friends please pad ker jarur batana kesa laga aap sab ko
 

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