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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


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Harry rocks

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Yaar story ka maza lo jise read karne hai karo writer ko disturb kar ke story ke vat mat lago

Mast update h bhai Maza aa gya

Superb Lajawab update Bhai

Intro of Radha to a new dimension of love and trust was the best part of the update... Waiting for next rocking update...

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Nice update


Very nice update

Nice Update Bhaii

Devil entry ho rhii h
Commissioner or mla milkar setan se apne bete ko Tikk karva rha h usko setan se power bhii mile

Hero ko power kab milegi
Or iss gar se kab nikalna h
In modd ka intjar h jab story ka level up ho jayega

nice update
keep posting

Mst update bhai waiting more

Awesome story bro

Keep going

:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:
Super duper update bhai
Behad hi Shandaar or Lajawab
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Bhai Main Pehle bhi ye story padh chuka hoon Kyun ki mere paas iski complete PDF file hai aur Pehle wali story padhne Ke Baad ab main Yahan Par XForum pe aap ki story read Kar Raha Hoon To Mujhe story mein bahut kuch changes lag raha hai aur aapne story mein Hero ka naam bhi change Kiya Hai,

Bhai story mein changes karke aapne ise pehle se bhi zyada interesting aur majedar bana diya hai padhne mein maza aa raha hai.....☆

Keep going

We will wait for next update.....☆
:yourock:

Waiting for next update

Superb yar

Nice update harry bhai

Keep posting

Nice one . . .:superb:
Next update bas 10 min m aajayega dosto
 

Harry rocks

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Update no :- 15
Ye announcement college k student leader ki taraf se thi jisme likha tha ki valentines day pe college m couples ka dance compitition hoga. jo bhi couple interested ho vo apna name submit kera sakte h.
Jise padh k radha bolti h
Radha:- bhaiya aap bhi participate kero na
Karan (chonkte hue) :- are ni ni choti mujhse na hoga choti na to mere pass koi partner h na hi mujhe dance aata h.

Radha:- usme tension kesi bhai dance m sikha dungi or rahi partner ki baat to di h na.

Jyoti or karan dono is baat se jhep se jaate h.
Jyoti:- gudiya tu kya bol rahi h m bhai k sath kese , ( jyoti bhi radha ki baat sun k ander hi ander na jane kyu khush thi ye baat uske bhi samjh k pare thi),

Radha:- oh come on na di mane jitna aap dono ki bonding dekhi h , use dekh ke m dave se bol sakti hu ki ye compitition aap dono hi jitoge.
Or aap kabse bhai k sath kisi chij m jhijhak ne lagi , wese bhi ek dance hi to h di, itna to aajkal chalta h.or vese bhi college m bahut kam hi log honge jo aapke rishte ko jante ho.(kyunki ye dono bhai bahan hi hamesha sirf apne m mast rahate the to inko kabhi dost banane ki jarurat hi ni padi na hi jyada kisi se baat hoti).

Karan or jyoti baar bar mana ker rahe the but radha ni man rahi thi ki itne m vaha rohan bhi aajata h

Rohan :- hi friends kis baat pe bahas ho rahi h

Radha :- dekho na rohan bhai m kab se inko mana rahi hu but ye man hi ni rahe.
Rohan :- are baAt kya h ye to bata choti.
Radha use puri baat bata deti jise sun ker rohan bhi radha ka support kerne lagta h jis kaaran aakir m karan or jyoti ko unki baat manni padti h.
Radha ek vijayi muskan k sath
Radha :- hooreee yahu

Jise dekh sabhi k chahare p muskan aajati h.

Chaliye ab thodi najar story k main villain p bhi dal li jaye . M abhi yaha kisi ka naam abhi k liye reveal ni karunga, isliye main villain ko mv or uske pita ko . Vp likhunga.

Location :- patal lok.
Patal lok yani vo jagah jaha sirf asur baste h or unka raja h mv . Jo ki ek bahut hi dusht or nirdayi raja h jiska ek hi maksad h vo h devtao ka ant . Or usko k liye usne mahadev ko khush kerke ek ni balki 3 vardaan hasil kiye h , (or vo vardaan kya h vo to aage hi pata chalega). Or usike ant k liye rakshak (karan) ka janm hua h . Lekin usme abhi samay h . Mv apne irado m. shayad safal bhi ho jata ager vo na hote .(unko m abhi kfd likhunga) ke ka samna na to mv na uske pita ker sakte h. vardan pane k bavjood bhi ni k . tridevo k baad kfd hi sabse shaktishali h is samay vo chahe to mv ka ant bhi ker sakte h parantu vo mahadev k vardaan ka apmaan ni kerna chahate . Isi baat se mv bahut gussa rahata h

Abhi mv apni sabha m betha is baare m hi soch tha ki vp pragat hota h vaha jise dekh mv k sath sabhi sabhasad asur khade ho ker uska swagat kerte h.

Mv :- aaiye pitaji aasan grahan kijiye.
Vp:- kya soch rahe ho mere bache .
Mv:- pitaji m us ...... K baare m soch raha hu kitna tej or bal h usme ki mahadev k vardaan k bavjood bhi hum uska kuch ni bigad sakte.
Vp:- sahi kaha tumne mere bache ek vo hi to h jo mere har ek uddeshy k bich yugo se badha raha h . Or jiski vajah se meri ye halat h .

Mv :- or pitaji us rakshak ka kya .

Vp:- uska intezaam bhi shigra ho jayega mere bache . Bas vo dhurt devta koi chal na chale to .

Mv :- haste hue wo kya kuch karenge pitaji wo to khud mere dar se kahi chipe hue h .

Vp : - putra tum in devtao ko abhi ache se ni samjhte, ye bahut hi dhurt h, ye koi na koi chal avashy karenge khas ker ki vo chaliya vishnu or vo kfd .

Mv :- aap nishchit rahiye pitaji . Vijay is baar hamari hi hogi .

Back to the hero.

College m kuch khas ni hota or fir karan or jyoti ghar aajate h or fir bari bari se fresh hote h or karan aaj bhi jyoti k dawa laga deta h or fir dono bhai bahan khana khate h jo ki karan ne pahale hi order ker diya tha kyunki aaj wo bahut thake hue the. Kyunki radha ne college k off hone k baad pure 1.30 ghanta unhe dance practice karwayi thi. Khana khane k baad karan fir jyoti k kapde utaar k uski chot ka muayana kerta h to pata h ki jyoti ki chote ab lagbhag thik ho chuki h to vo usko fir se dawa lagata h .Or fir khud bed pe let ker jyoti ko leta leta h or fir dono bhai bahan aaj jo kuch bhi hua uske baare m discuss ker rahe the. Tabhi karan bolta h

Karan :- wese tu is competition k liye tu ready to h na gudiya I mean tu mere sath dance kerne m uncomfortable feel to ni ker rahi na.

Jyoti :- kesi baat ker rahe ho bhai aap , ek aap hi to ho jinhone bachpan se leker abhi taki har ghadi m sath rahe ho chahe kesi hi mushkil ho aapne use mere tak pahuchne se pahale hi apne uper jhela h . Aap mere liye mere bhai k sath sath mere dost mere sab kuch ho. M aapke sath comfortable ni hongi to or kiske sath houngi.

Karan jyoti k dil m apne liye itni pyaar or ijjat dekh k bahut khush hota h . Or uske dono galo ko pyar se chum ke
Karan :-really you are the world's best sister , I love u my sweet gudiya.
Jyoti:- or aap duniya k sabse best bhai ho . I love u tooooo my sweetest bhaiya .
or wese lete hi jyoti karan se or jyada chipak jati h jese usko hug ker rahi ho. Or fir dono bhai ese hi so jate h .

Sham ko dono uthte h or kuch der bahar hall m beth ke tv dekhte h ki tabhi ghar ki door bell ring hoti h.karan jese hi darwaja kholta h to dekhta h ki uske papa or soteli ma wapas aachuke h . Per unka behavior hamesha wala hi h. Itne dino baad ghar aane k bavjood bhi unke papa usse ek min k rukke itna bhi ni puchta ki koi taklif to ni hui hamre piche se . Or sidha apne kamre m chale jate h .
Apne pita ka esa rude dekh k dono ko bahut dukh hota h , per dono bhai bahan ko insab ki aadat ho chuki thi. Raat ko jyoti khana banati h apne or apne bhai k liye , kyunki unki soteli maa ko to koi matlab ni tha.
Flashback:-
Ye baat tab ki h jab karan or jyoti 6th class m the . Ek din jyoti ko bahut bhuk lagi thi to vo kabya (soteli maa ) k pass jati or bolti h ki
Jyoti :- choti maa bahut bhuk lagi h kuch khane ko do na.

Kabya ka mood pahale hi kisi kaaran se off tha to . Sara gussa jyoti p utaar diya.

Kabya :- to marja na karm jali jab dekho tab bhuk bhuk kerti rahati h dono bhai bahan mare to kam se kam jaan chute .

Jyoti karan k baare m esa sun k thoda gusse m bolti h ,

Jyoti :- choti maa aapko jo bolna h vo mujhe bol lo mere bhai ko kuch mat bolo.

Kabya ye sun or bhadak jati h or guse m jyoti ko thappad mar ke bolti h ki.
Kabya:- kamini mujhse jaban ladati h ja ni milega khana ager bhuk lagi h to khud bana le verna bhuki mar tu or tera bhai.

Bichari jyoti rote hue apne kamre m chali jati h or bed pe pet k bal let sisak sisak ke rone lagti. Itne m karan bhi ghar aajata h jo kuch apne or jyoti ki padhayi ka samaan lene gaya tha. Or jese hi room me pahuch jyoti ko is halat me dekhta h to uska dil tadaf uthta g jese kisi ne uske sine m chaku nar diya ho.
Vo jyoti k pass ja ker bolta h

Karan:- kya hua gudiya tu ro kyu rahi h.

Jyoti karan ko dekhte hi uske gale lag or jor jor se rone lagti h ,or jo bhi hua sab karan ko bata deti h .

Jise sun karan ko bahut gussa aata h per vo bechara bhala kya ker sakta tha tabhi vo kuch sochta h or jyoti bichari bhukhi hi so jati h.

Tabhi karan k dimag m ek idea aata h or vo kitchen m jaker cooking book nikal leta h jo ki uski maa ki thi . Kyunki karan or jyoti ko ki maa ko cooking ka bahut shok tha.or vo new new dishes banati rahati thi .

Or karan usme se padh ker khana banane lagta h or kese n kese bana hi leta h jo thoda sa jal bhi gaya tha per khane layak tha.

Fir vo khana le jaker jyoti ko uthata h or bolta h le choti khana khale .

Jyoti bahut puchti h khana kaha se aaya to karan baad m batane ka bol tal deta h or jyoti ko apne hath se khilane lagta h.

Per jese hi jyoti ki najar karan k hatho p padti h to wo sab samjh jati h or uski ankho m pani aajata h, kyunki karan k hath pe kayi jagah jalne k nishan the jo khana banate time ho gaye the.

Jyoti :- (rote hue)dekho na bhai kitna jal gaya h aapka hath kya jarurat thi aapko esa kerne ki m ek din bhukhi rah leti to kya ho jata .

Karan :- are ese kese mere hote hue meri jaan meri gudiya bhuki rahe ye m kese bardasht ker sakta hu. Chal ab chup chap khana kha. Or fir khana khake jyoti karan k hatho p dawai lagati h.

Or ese hi dono bhai bahan ne book se padh padh ke khana banana sikha.
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Dono bhai khana kha ker sone jate h or jyoti aaj karan k uper to ni but uske sine pe apna sir rakh k so rahi thi ki tabhi achanak.

Achanak esa kya ho gaya dosto , kon h ye mv vp, aakhir kon h kfd jo eklote ese h jinka samna is mv bhi ni ker sakta .
Janne k liye sath bane rahiye friendsan comments kerte rahiye.
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