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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Nice plot... Equally nice build up... Waiting for next rocking update...
 

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Update 10
Mandir se nikal ker karan or jyoti ghar pahuchte h ,or nashta ker college k liye nikal jate h .
Jab tak ye dono college pahunchte h tab tak aayiye dekhte h college m kya ho raha h.
Location :- st xaviors college.

Ek 18 sal ki ladki apni activa k sath sath college m enter kerti h ,or jese hi apni gadi parking m laga ker ground m pahuchti h to dekhti h ki har jagah seniors fresher's ki raging le rahe h . Vo pahale hi din koi jhamela ni chahti thi isliye wo side se nikalne ki koshis kerti h per uski kismat kharab thi ki college k sabse badnam or bigde hue group ki nazar us per pad jati jinme 5 ladke or 1 ladki thi.(m us group wali ladki 1 likhunga)
Ladki 1 :- e ladki bina apne seniors ko introduction diye kidher chali chal jaldi se idher aa.
Ladki unke paas chali jati h
Us group ka leader jiska naam kunal h wo bola.
Kunal:- Chalo apna introduction do
Ladki :- ji mera nam radha h or mane yaha bcom first year m admision liya h.
Ji ha dosto ye ladki or koi ni balki radha hi h jisko apne hero ne us din un gundo se bachaya tha.
Kunal:- ok chalo tumhara task ye h ki tum mere dost ko kiss kero abhi
Radha (gusse se ) ye kya badtamiji h m esa kuch ni kerne wali .
Amit(jisko kiss kerne k liye kunal ne radha ko bola tha) :- itna natak kya ker rahi h sali ,ek kiss k liye hi to bola konsa ek raat hum sab k sath sone ko....
Amit isse pahale apni baat puri kerta usse pahale hi radha ne gusse m apni pancho ungliyan uske galo per chaap di .
Kunal:- sali chinal teri ye himmat ki tune mere dost p hath uthaya aaj pure college k samne teri wo halat karunga ki tu kisi ko muh dikhane k layak ni rahegi.
Or jese hi uske sath jabardasti kerne k liye aage badha itne m ek jordaar mukka uske muh pe padha jisse uska pura jabda hil gaya .
Or radha jese hi us mukke marne wale ladke ko dekhti h to bahut khush ho jati h s, or bhaiya bol ker uske gale lag jati h , kyunki wo ladka or koi or ni apna hero karan hi tha. Ek baar to karan radha ko dekh ker shock ho jata h.
Short flashback.
Hua yu tha ki Karan or jyoti jese hi college pahunchte h to dekhte h ki h ki kunal or uska dost kisi ladki ko pareshan ker rahe h or uske sath jabardasti kerne ki koshis ker rahe h.(karan kunal k baare m ache se janta tha jo ki ek number ka ghatiya ladka or aayash kism ka ladka tha . apne baap k sahar k commissioner hone ka najayaj fayda uthata . Or apne hero se is ka 36 ka aakda tha kyunki apna hero padhayi or ya sports dono m no 1 tha . Jiske kaaran kunal karan se bahut chidta tha).karan ne abhi tak radha ka chahra ni dekha tha kyunki radha ki pith uski taraf thi . Or jese hi kunal ne jese hi radha ki taraf jabardasti k irade se badha karan ne furti se us tarf ja ker kunal k muh per ek jabardast mukka chipka diya .

Present
Karan jese hi dekhta h ki kunal jiske sath jabardasti kerne ki koshis ker raha tha vo or koi ni radha h to uska gussa or bad jaata h . Kyunki wo bhale hi uske liye anjaan ho abhi tak lekin pahali hi mulakat m najane kyu use or jyoti ko vo koi apni lagi, isliye dono bhai bahan ne use dil se apni bahan maan chuke the .
Kunal :- karan tu ! Teri ye mazzal ek anjaan ladki k liye mujh per hath uthaya .
Karan:- swal ye ni h ki ye ladki meri jan pahachan ki h ya ni swal ye uthta h ki , he hak kisne diya ki tu ek ladki ki ijjat k sath khilwad ker sakta h.
Kunal:- band ker apni bakwas ab bahut hua m abhi hi pata is college se saaf ker dunga. aaj tu yaha aya to apne pero p h lekin jayega 4 kndho per.
Kunal ka itna bolna hi tha ki k ek jordar laat uske sine p padhi laat itni jordar thi ki wo apni jagah se 5 ft dur jaker gira . Per is baar ye war apne hero ne ni balki uski jaan yani jyoti ne kiya . Wo bahut gusse m thi or uski ankhe ekdam laal ho chuki thi.
Jyoti:- kute teri himmat kese hui mere bhai meri jan k bare me yu bolne ki , tujhe m dikhati hu aaj ki ek ladki ki ijjat pe haat dalne ka kya hashr hota h. Or jyoti kunal per buri tarah tut padhi or usko utha utha ker marne lagi. Apne jabardast fighting skills k kaaran usne kunal ki halat bahut jald hi kharab kerdi. Tabhi amit hokey stick leke jyoti ko marne k liye uski taraf doda per jyoti uske liye pahale hi teyar tha or or iske pahale ki amit jyoti per hamla ker pata usse pahale hi jyoti ne amit ki tango k bich uske main point pe ek jabardast laat mari.jiske kaaran wo jamin pe let ke lage tadfne laga or uske hath se hokey stick chut gayi jise jyoti ne utha liya or kunal k baki sathi jo jyoti ki or badh rahe the, to usi hokey stick ke sath jyoti baki sab ladko pe tut padhi. Jyoti or un ladko ki itni jabardast ladayi dekh ker college k sabhi students or teachers jo is hungame ko dekhne waha ikatha ho gaye the dekh ker heran ho gaye the(karan ko chod ker) ki kese ek akeli ladki 5 hate kate ladko p bhari pad rahi h .Or ek herani ki baat or thi ki itna sab kuch hone k bavjood bhi karan kuch ni bola na hi jyoti ki madad k liye aage badha. Idher jyoti k ladte hue uske lambe kale baal pure khul ker bikhar gaye the or uski fight dekh ker esa pratit ho raha tha jese mata mahakali asuro ka sanghar ker rahi ho . Or jab karan ko laga ki bas ab bahut hua or uske hastakshep ka time aagaya h to wo pahale to jyoti ko rukne ko bolta h per jyoti rukne ka naam hi ni le rahi thi. Jab karan dekhta h ki jyoti ruk hi ni rahi to , karan bhag ker jata h jyoti k pass or jyoti ko apne sine se laga leta h. Jyoti bhi apne bhai k gale lagte hi dhire dhire shant ho gayi . Or karan fir sabhi college k ladko or male teacher ko bolta h .
Karan:- sharm aani chahiye aap logo ko aap sab k samne ye chand badmash ladke ek ladki ki ijjat lutne wale the or aap sab log tamasha dekh rahe the. Thu h esi napunsakta per .
Or phir sabhi ladkiyo or females ko bolta h
Karan:- or girls and teachers m aap sab ko ek hi baat bolna chahata hu ese ghatiya log isiliye aap ladies ki ijjat se khilwad kerne ki himmat ker pate h kyunki aap sab khud k liye awaz ni uthati or chup chap har zulm sahti ho. Or ese darinde tab tak ni sudher sakte tab tak aap khud apne liye ni ladogi .
Tabhi bhid m se ek ladki bolti h
Ladki:- lekin hum ladkiya bechari zulm sahane k kaaran ker bhi kya sakti h in takatwar darindo k aage.

Karan(thode josh k sath bolta h ki):-
Naari ager shanka tyag de to khud shanker (mahadev) ban jati h, jese bhut kal m maa parvati ne shanka tyag ker mahakali bani or asuro ka vinash kiya jese , aaj jyoti ne akele hi in darindo ko dhul chata di m , m chahata to khud bhi jyoti ki madad k liye insab se bhid sakta tha, but aap sab ko dikhane k liye . Ki nari shakti kya hoti h .
Fir karan jyoti ko apne se alag kerta h jo ab puri tarah shant ho chuki thi.

Karan abhi aage kuch bolta ki tabhi college k gate k samne police ki 5 gadiya aaker rukti h or unme se ek gadi me se commissioner yani kunal ka baap utarta h . Or jab apne bete ki halat dekhta h to guse m pagal ho jata h or jor se chilata h
Commissioner:- kisne ki mere bete ki ye halat
Hua darasal yu tha ki jab jyoti kunal or uske dosto ki dhunayi ker rahi thi to ladki 1(jo kunal k sath uske group m thi ) ne commissioner ko sari baat bata di thi.
Or fir ladki 1 commissioner k paas jaker sari baat details m bata deti h jisko sun vo gusse m aag babula ho ker jese apne sath aye inspector ko bolta h
Commissioner:- arrest ker lo in dono ko or lockup m in dono ki ache se kharidari honi chahiye.
Commissioner ka order man ker jese hi inspector karan or jyoti ki taraf badhte h ki achaanak ek gadiyo ka kafila college k gate per aaker rukta h or jese hi us gadi m se ek shaks utarta h jisko dekh ker commissioner ki bhi hawa tight ho jati h kyunki wo or koi khud home minister tha .
Or vo aaker sidha radha k pass jata h or usse puchta h
Home minister ( H.M) beti tum thik to hona kahi us badmash ne tere sath kuch kiya to ni .
Commissioner ki to buri tarah fat gayi thi or usko apne bete pe bhi gussa aaraha tha ki us sale ne usko kaha fasa diya .
Small flashback.
Jab ladki 1 ne commissioner ko phone kiya tha tab radha ne ladki 1 ko notice ker liya tha or usne bhi jaldi se H.M ko phone ker diya (jo ki uske swargiya (late) pita k bahut hi ache dost the) or unhe sari baat batadi .

Back to the present

Radha:-ha uncle mujh ko kuch ni hua . Or m aapke samne yu salamat ager khadi hu to sirf karan bhaiya or jyoti di ki badolat or ye commissioner unhi ko arrest ker raha , please uncle bhaiya or di ko bachaiye.
H.M :- tum chinta mat kero beti ab aage m sambhal lunga,
or commissioner ko datte hue H.M bolte h

H.M :- e commissioner teri ye himmat ek to tera beta us ladki k sath jabardasti kerne ki koshis kerta h jo mere liye meri khud beti se bhi badhkar h , or phir tu usiko bachane walo ko arrest kerta h .Lagta h tu commissioner banne layak ni raha ab tu .
Commissioner ki to pahale hi fati padi thi wo bolta h
Commissioner :- sorry sir mujhe ye ni pata tha ki ye bachi aapki rishtedar h verna m esi galti kabhi .

H.M :- meri rishtedar se tumhara kya matlab h ager ye meri rishtedar na hoti ya koi or ladki abhi situation m phasi hoti to tu kya apne bete ki is giri harkat ka sath deta , kya shahar k commissioner hone k naate teri koi zimmedari ni banti shahar k ladkiyo ki prati soch ager is bachi ki jagah teri apni beti hoti or koi or powerful aadmi ka beta esi harkat uske sath kerta to tujhe kesa lagta.
Commissioner ko sahi m apni galti ka pachtava hota h or wo apni galti k liye radha, karan or jyoti se or sabhi se mafi mangta h or kunal ko leker nikal jata h .
H.M (karan or jyoti se ) hath jodker :- tumhara bahut bahut shukriya bacho k tumne radha ki madad ki
Karan or jyoti ko ye acha ni lagta ki koi bada uske aage hath jode
Karan:- H.M k hatho ko pakdte hue are are uncle ye aap kya ker rahe h aap kya radha hamari kuch ni lagti , radha ne mujhe bhaiya bola h or ek bhai ka farz hi hota h apni bahan ki hamesha raksha kerna .
Jyoti:- bhai ne bilkul sahi kaha uncle or ye please ap hath mat jodiye kyunke bado k hath hamesha aashirvad dete hue hi ache lagte h . Or dono bhai bari bari se per chu ker aashirwad lete h .
Or H.M bhi unke itne saral nature ko dekh ker bahut impress hota h . Or apna card dete hue bolta h
H.M :- beta ye apne paas rakho or jab bhi jarurat ho bejhijak ek call ker dena bas
Fir radha bolti
Radha:- uncle please aaj jo kuch bhi yaha hua uska pata mumma ko ni chalna chahiye.
Or H.M kuch bolta usse pahale hi radha ne use apni kasam dedi .
Fir kya tha H.M ko uski baat manni hi padhi or fir wo waha se nikal gaya.

Or fir karan or jyoti radha se ache se mile or kal milne ka bolker. Apne ghar ko nikal gaye. Or sath m radha bhi nikal gayi apne ghar ki or. College m itna sab kuch hone k baad principal ne bhi college ka aaj ke liye off ker diya

Note :- Sorry for delay dosto reason to aapko m bata hi chuka hu . To please bura mat maniyega and yuhi sath bane rahiyega
Stay tuned
 
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Well ab lgta hai story mai jld hi magic fantasy enter hone wala hai boht achaa update tha bhai aise hi update post krte jao now waiting for you next dhamakedaar update:yourock::yourock::yourock::yourock:

Sorry for delay friends meri bhai ko aaj ek beti hui h isliye m unke sath hospital m hu jald hi free ho ke aaj ka update deta hu

Boht Boht Mubarak ho bhai

Congratulations Bhai

Thank you so much bhai

Congratulations bro


Nice plot... Equally nice build up... Waiting for next rocking update...

Update dediya h bhai log please padh ker jarur batana ki aap sab ko ye kesa laga kyunki is type ka seen likhna mere liye bahut mushkil tha or esa seen mane first time hi likha h aaj tak
 

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