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Karan or jyoti jese hi shivani k kaksh m pravesh kerte h to dekhte h. H ki shivani ko ek bed p letaya hua h or wo abhi bhi behosh h.
Rishi pippalad ja ker shivani k sir p hath rakh use hosh m late h.
Shivani dhire dhire hosh m aati h or jese hi wo ankh khol ker apne aap ko anjaan logo k bich m pati h to wo bahut dar jati h or rote hue bolti h
Shivani :- aap kon ho or m kaha per hu, mujhe ghar jana h please mujhe chod dijiye.
Shivani ek bahut hi pyari masoom or saf dil ki ladki thi , isliye wo kuch jyada hi ghabra gayi thi, uski najar abhi karan or jyoti pe ni gayi thi.
Rishiwer:- daro mat beti tum ab bilkul surakshit ho tumhe yaha koi hani ni pahuchayega(karan or jyoti ki or ishara kerte hue ) dekho to beti tumhe ghar le jane kon aaya h , unse milogi ni .
Shivani ko ye baat sun thodi rahat pahunchti h or jese hi vo rishi pippalad k ishare ko samajh karan or jyoti ko dekhti h to pahale to wo in dono ko dekh chonk jati h. Per fir use wo sari ghatnaye yaad aajati h , or uski ankho m pani aajata h or wo jaldi se uth ker jati h karan k pass jaker uske pero m gir ke uske per pakad leti h or bolti h.
Shivani :- bhaiya please mujhe maaf ker do , mane aapke sath kitna bura vyavhaar kiya aapko andekha kiya ye jante hue bhi ki aap mujhse kitna pyaar kerte h or aapko meri is harkat se kitna dukh pahunchega phir bhi mane ese kiya, m to maafi k layak bhi ni hu bhaiya , per m kya kerti bhaiya mujhe mummy(kabya) ne saaf saaf bol diya tha ki m aap dono se dur rahu or bilkul bhi na bolu verna vo mujhe vapas aap logo se dur hostel bhej degi , or us raat m hi aapke room m aayi thi bhaiya or aapke per pakad ker mafi mang rahi thi or aapko jaga dekh m waha se bhag gayi per mummy ne mujhe aapke room se nikalte dekh liya or bahut data vo to mujhe wapas hostel bhejne hi wali thi per mane kese n kese unhe ek bar mana liya.m aapse vapas dur ni hona chahti bhaiya isliye mujhe ye drama kerna pada taki bhale hi meri in harkato se aap mujhse nafrat kerne lago lekin kam se kam aap mere ankho k samne to hoge .
Shot flashback
Asha ki mot k kuch din baad hi ranbir ne dusri shadi ker li thi , jo ki sabhi aapas k or jan pahachan k logo k liye herani ki baat thi, kyunki ranbir or asha m bahut pyar tha to logo ko herani to hui k itni jaldi hi ranbir ne dusri shadi bhi ker li .
Kher kabya jab ghar aayi to usne ghar ko achi tarah sambhala jesi vo aaj h vo pahale bilkul ni thi .
Usne hi karan or jyoti ko sadme se bahar nikala.kyunki bhale hi soteli ho per rishte m to unki maa hi thi na.
Ek din wo karan se jaker boli
Karan:- beta kab tak ese hi gumsum rahoge beta ,m janti hu ki tumne kya khoya h , per beta kya tumhari mummy ki aatma tumhe ese is halat me dekh k unpe kya bitegi, kya tum chahate ho ki unko taklif ho or beta apna ni to kam se kam jyoti k baare m to socho usne pahale apni maa ko khoya fir apne bhai ko is halat m dekh uspe kya bit rahi hogi.
Karan ka kabya ki baato se kafi prabhav padta h or vo bolta h .
Karan:- aap thik kaha rahi ho m esa bilkul kuch ni karunga jisse mummy ki aatma ko taklif or jyoti to meri jimedari h uska khayal ab mujhe hi rakhna hoga na , thank u aunty aapne mujhe meri jimedari ka ahasas dilaya.
Kabya:- tumhare akele ki ni beta ab tum dono meri hi jimedari ho , or tum mujhe aunty mat bolo beta , aaj se tum mujhe choti maa bolna .
Karan :- ji choti maa.
Fir ese hi din gujarte gaye ab karan or jyoti bhi normal ho gaye the. Or school jane lage wapas se , kabya ne unka bahut ache se khyal rakha.lekin ranbir ab bilkul badal chuka tha. Use ab karan or jyoti se koi matlab ni raha tha, esa pratit hota ki bas vo apni formalities hi puri ker raha h majburi m.
Fir kuch salo baad shivani ka janm hua ,dono bhai bahan bahut khush the ki unko apni choti bahan k roop m ek pyara sa khilona mil gaya .
Per fir pata ni achanak pata ni inki khushiyon ki kiski najar lag gayi ki dhire dhire kabya ka ravaiya change hone laga or vo bhi dhire dhire karan or jyoti k sath dur vyavahar kerne lagi or shivani ko unke sath khelne tak na deti.
Dono bhai bahan kafi heran or dukhi the ki akhir unki choti maa ko achanak kya hogaya ,
Ek din 3no bhai bahan khel rahe the to khelte khelte shivani gir gayi or rone lagi or usi thodi chot bhi aayi ,
Karan:- ale ale chup hojao princess aap to meri achi bachi ho na , ache bache rote ni h
or use gale laga k chup karane lagta h.
Karan or jyoti shivani ko hamesha princess hi bolte pyare se , or shivani thi bhi bahut sunder bilkul rajkumari jesi.
Lekin tabhi kabya ki najar insab pe padti h or wo karan or jyoti p bahut chilati h or unhe thappad marke bolti h.
Kabya:- tumhari himmat kese hui meri beti k pass ane ki tumhari vajah se usko chot lagi , khabardar jo aage se uske aas paas bhi dikhe to.
Itna bol wo apne sath shivani ko room me lejati h.or unhe us din khana bhi ni deti
Bhichare dono bhai bahan bhuke hi rote rote ek dusre ko gale laga ker so jate h.
Lekin shivani ni maanti thi vo roj karan or jyoti k paas aahi jati khelne jisse kabya ka gusaa din b din badhne laga or usne shivani ko hostel bhejne ka fesla le liya
Jane vale din shivani bahut royi bahut gidgidayi but kabya p koi asar na pada or usne shivani ko hostel bhej diya.
Karan or jyoti ka bhi kuch esa halat tha per wo bichare to kuch kisi ko bol bhi ni sakte the .
Flashback end.
Shivani ki dard bhari daastan or baate sun waha mojud sabhi k ankho m pani aagaye the ki itne time se bechari nanhi si jan bechari kese halato m h , kis tarah na chahate hue bhi apne bhai bahan jinse vo behad pyaar kerti h unse baat tak ni ker pa rahi .
Karan fat se shivani ko uthata h or uske ansuo ko puchte hue sine se laga leta or bolta h.
Karan(rote hue):-gudiya meri bachi tu itna kuch sahati rahi or yu akele hi dukh or Akelapan k andhere m ghutati rahi aakhir kyu choti kyu, kya tune soch bhi kese liya k tere bhaiya or didi tujhse nafrat kerne lagenge, ek baar apne bhaiya or didi ko bol kee to dekhti hum jarur kuch kerte , kya tujhe apne bhaiyu pe itna bharosa bhi ni tha,
Shivani :- please bhaiya esa mat boliye mujhe aap pe khud se bhi jyada bharosa h per m dar gayi thi bhaiyu ,
Or fir chote bacho jesa face bana ker bolti h.
Esa bol karan apni narajgi dikhata h .
Shivani:- kya aap apni princess ko maaf ni karoge bhaiyu.
Karan uske masum chahre ko dekh apni sari narajgi bhul jata h.
Karan:- tumhe ek shart pe hi mafi milegi.
Shivani:- bhaiya mujhe aapki har shart manjur h aap to bas boliye .
Karan :- meri shart ye h ki mujhe apni pyari princess wapas chahiye or usse ek pyari puppi(kiss) bhi.
Or itna bol wo apne gal aage ker deta h . Ye sun shivani khushi se jhum uthati h .Or karan ke pure chahare ko chum chum k gila ker deti h ,
Tabhi jyoti jo itni der se chup chap sab sun rahi thi or uski bhi ankho me bhi aansu the wo bol uthi.
Jyoti:- are ye kya bhaiya ko itni sari kisses or hug or apni didi jo itni der se yaha khadi h use to bhul hi gayi .jao m tumse baat ni kerti ,katti.
Or jhut mut ka gussa dikhati h.
Shivani ko bhi apni galti ka aahasas hota h or wo jyoti k samne jaker apne kaan pakad k bas itna hi bolti h.
Shivani:- sollly didu.
Usne ye itni pyare or massom tarike se bola ki jyoti bhi rah na payi or usko gale se laga ker uske chahre pe kisses ki jhadi laga di.
Or fir karan ne apni dono bahe fela di or jyoti or shivani dono hi dod k karan k ek sath gale lag gayi teeno ki aankho m aaj khushi k aansu the ki aaj wo fir se ek ho gaye.
Kuch der baad jab sab normal hue to rishiwer bole .
Rishiwer:- putra ab ratri bahut ho gayi h filhal tum vishram kero ,kal subah tum apne ghar ki or nikalna .
Karan bhi ye baat man leta h or
Tabhi shivani bolti h
Shivani :- bhaiya ye baba kon h or hum yaha kese pahunche.
Karan ne pahale hi ye sab soch liya tha.
Karan:- chutki us ladayi k baad hum sab behosh ho gaye the to inka aashram us jagah k paas hi tha to inki najar hum per pad gayi or ye hume idher le aaye.
Shivani fir rishiwer ko dhanyawad bolti h.
bhai bahan ek sath hi ek normal kaksh m so jate h.
Stay tuned
Note :- sorry for late update friends m abhi tour p hu 3 dino se or aaj to pure din bahar hi tha bas thodi der pahale ghar aaker ye jaldi jaldi m update diya to koi galti hui ho to please ignore kerna .
Karan or jyoti jese hi shivani k kaksh m pravesh kerte h to dekhte h. H ki shivani ko ek bed p letaya hua h or wo abhi bhi behosh h.
Rishi pippalad ja ker shivani k sir p hath rakh use hosh m late h.
Shivani dhire dhire hosh m aati h or jese hi wo ankh khol ker apne aap ko anjaan logo k bich m pati h to wo bahut dar jati h or rote hue bolti h
Shivani :- aap kon ho or m kaha per hu, mujhe ghar jana h please mujhe chod dijiye.
Shivani ek bahut hi pyari masoom or saf dil ki ladki thi , isliye wo kuch jyada hi ghabra gayi thi, uski najar abhi karan or jyoti pe ni gayi thi.
Rishiwer:- daro mat beti tum ab bilkul surakshit ho tumhe yaha koi hani ni pahuchayega(karan or jyoti ki or ishara kerte hue ) dekho to beti tumhe ghar le jane kon aaya h , unse milogi ni .
Shivani ko ye baat sun thodi rahat pahunchti h or jese hi vo rishi pippalad k ishare ko samajh karan or jyoti ko dekhti h to pahale to wo in dono ko dekh chonk jati h. Per fir use wo sari ghatnaye yaad aajati h , or uski ankho m pani aajata h or wo jaldi se uth ker jati h karan k pass jaker uske pero m gir ke uske per pakad leti h or bolti h.
Shivani :- bhaiya please mujhe maaf ker do , mane aapke sath kitna bura vyavhaar kiya aapko andekha kiya ye jante hue bhi ki aap mujhse kitna pyaar kerte h or aapko meri is harkat se kitna dukh pahunchega phir bhi mane ese kiya, m to maafi k layak bhi ni hu bhaiya , per m kya kerti bhaiya mujhe mummy(kabya) ne saaf saaf bol diya tha ki m aap dono se dur rahu or bilkul bhi na bolu verna vo mujhe vapas aap logo se dur hostel bhej degi , or us raat m hi aapke room m aayi thi bhaiya or aapke per pakad ker mafi mang rahi thi or aapko jaga dekh m waha se bhag gayi per mummy ne mujhe aapke room se nikalte dekh liya or bahut data vo to mujhe wapas hostel bhejne hi wali thi per mane kese n kese unhe ek bar mana liya.m aapse vapas dur ni hona chahti bhaiya isliye mujhe ye drama kerna pada taki bhale hi meri in harkato se aap mujhse nafrat kerne lago lekin kam se kam aap mere ankho k samne to hoge .
Shot flashback
Asha ki mot k kuch din baad hi ranbir ne dusri shadi ker li thi , jo ki sabhi aapas k or jan pahachan k logo k liye herani ki baat thi, kyunki ranbir or asha m bahut pyar tha to logo ko herani to hui k itni jaldi hi ranbir ne dusri shadi bhi ker li .
Kher kabya jab ghar aayi to usne ghar ko achi tarah sambhala jesi vo aaj h vo pahale bilkul ni thi .
Usne hi karan or jyoti ko sadme se bahar nikala.kyunki bhale hi soteli ho per rishte m to unki maa hi thi na.
Ek din wo karan se jaker boli
Karan:- beta kab tak ese hi gumsum rahoge beta ,m janti hu ki tumne kya khoya h , per beta kya tumhari mummy ki aatma tumhe ese is halat me dekh k unpe kya bitegi, kya tum chahate ho ki unko taklif ho or beta apna ni to kam se kam jyoti k baare m to socho usne pahale apni maa ko khoya fir apne bhai ko is halat m dekh uspe kya bit rahi hogi.
Karan ka kabya ki baato se kafi prabhav padta h or vo bolta h .
Karan:- aap thik kaha rahi ho m esa bilkul kuch ni karunga jisse mummy ki aatma ko taklif or jyoti to meri jimedari h uska khayal ab mujhe hi rakhna hoga na , thank u aunty aapne mujhe meri jimedari ka ahasas dilaya.
Kabya:- tumhare akele ki ni beta ab tum dono meri hi jimedari ho , or tum mujhe aunty mat bolo beta , aaj se tum mujhe choti maa bolna .
Karan :- ji choti maa.
Fir ese hi din gujarte gaye ab karan or jyoti bhi normal ho gaye the. Or school jane lage wapas se , kabya ne unka bahut ache se khyal rakha.lekin ranbir ab bilkul badal chuka tha. Use ab karan or jyoti se koi matlab ni raha tha, esa pratit hota ki bas vo apni formalities hi puri ker raha h majburi m.
Fir kuch salo baad shivani ka janm hua ,dono bhai bahan bahut khush the ki unko apni choti bahan k roop m ek pyara sa khilona mil gaya .
Per fir pata ni achanak pata ni inki khushiyon ki kiski najar lag gayi ki dhire dhire kabya ka ravaiya change hone laga or vo bhi dhire dhire karan or jyoti k sath dur vyavahar kerne lagi or shivani ko unke sath khelne tak na deti.
Dono bhai bahan kafi heran or dukhi the ki akhir unki choti maa ko achanak kya hogaya ,
Ek din 3no bhai bahan khel rahe the to khelte khelte shivani gir gayi or rone lagi or usi thodi chot bhi aayi ,
Karan:- ale ale chup hojao princess aap to meri achi bachi ho na , ache bache rote ni h
or use gale laga k chup karane lagta h.
Karan or jyoti shivani ko hamesha princess hi bolte pyare se , or shivani thi bhi bahut sunder bilkul rajkumari jesi.
Lekin tabhi kabya ki najar insab pe padti h or wo karan or jyoti p bahut chilati h or unhe thappad marke bolti h.
Kabya:- tumhari himmat kese hui meri beti k pass ane ki tumhari vajah se usko chot lagi , khabardar jo aage se uske aas paas bhi dikhe to.
Itna bol wo apne sath shivani ko room me lejati h.or unhe us din khana bhi ni deti
Bhichare dono bhai bahan bhuke hi rote rote ek dusre ko gale laga ker so jate h.
Lekin shivani ni maanti thi vo roj karan or jyoti k paas aahi jati khelne jisse kabya ka gusaa din b din badhne laga or usne shivani ko hostel bhejne ka fesla le liya
Jane vale din shivani bahut royi bahut gidgidayi but kabya p koi asar na pada or usne shivani ko hostel bhej diya.
Karan or jyoti ka bhi kuch esa halat tha per wo bichare to kuch kisi ko bol bhi ni sakte the .
Flashback end.
Shivani ki dard bhari daastan or baate sun waha mojud sabhi k ankho m pani aagaye the ki itne time se bechari nanhi si jan bechari kese halato m h , kis tarah na chahate hue bhi apne bhai bahan jinse vo behad pyaar kerti h unse baat tak ni ker pa rahi .
Karan fat se shivani ko uthata h or uske ansuo ko puchte hue sine se laga leta or bolta h.
Karan(rote hue):-gudiya meri bachi tu itna kuch sahati rahi or yu akele hi dukh or Akelapan k andhere m ghutati rahi aakhir kyu choti kyu, kya tune soch bhi kese liya k tere bhaiya or didi tujhse nafrat kerne lagenge, ek baar apne bhaiya or didi ko bol kee to dekhti hum jarur kuch kerte , kya tujhe apne bhaiyu pe itna bharosa bhi ni tha,
Shivani :- please bhaiya esa mat boliye mujhe aap pe khud se bhi jyada bharosa h per m dar gayi thi bhaiyu ,
Or fir chote bacho jesa face bana ker bolti h.
Esa bol karan apni narajgi dikhata h .
Shivani:- kya aap apni princess ko maaf ni karoge bhaiyu.
Karan uske masum chahre ko dekh apni sari narajgi bhul jata h.
Karan:- tumhe ek shart pe hi mafi milegi.
Shivani:- bhaiya mujhe aapki har shart manjur h aap to bas boliye .
Karan :- meri shart ye h ki mujhe apni pyari princess wapas chahiye or usse ek pyari puppi(kiss) bhi.
Or itna bol wo apne gal aage ker deta h . Ye sun shivani khushi se jhum uthati h .Or karan ke pure chahare ko chum chum k gila ker deti h ,
Tabhi jyoti jo itni der se chup chap sab sun rahi thi or uski bhi ankho me bhi aansu the wo bol uthi.
Jyoti:- are ye kya bhaiya ko itni sari kisses or hug or apni didi jo itni der se yaha khadi h use to bhul hi gayi .jao m tumse baat ni kerti ,katti.
Or jhut mut ka gussa dikhati h.
Shivani ko bhi apni galti ka aahasas hota h or wo jyoti k samne jaker apne kaan pakad k bas itna hi bolti h.
Shivani:- sollly didu.
Usne ye itni pyare or massom tarike se bola ki jyoti bhi rah na payi or usko gale se laga ker uske chahre pe kisses ki jhadi laga di.
Or fir karan ne apni dono bahe fela di or jyoti or shivani dono hi dod k karan k ek sath gale lag gayi teeno ki aankho m aaj khushi k aansu the ki aaj wo fir se ek ho gaye.
Kuch der baad jab sab normal hue to rishiwer bole .
Rishiwer:- putra ab ratri bahut ho gayi h filhal tum vishram kero ,kal subah tum apne ghar ki or nikalna .
Karan bhi ye baat man leta h or
Tabhi shivani bolti h
Shivani :- bhaiya ye baba kon h or hum yaha kese pahunche.
Karan ne pahale hi ye sab soch liya tha.
Karan:- chutki us ladayi k baad hum sab behosh ho gaye the to inka aashram us jagah k paas hi tha to inki najar hum per pad gayi or ye hume idher le aaye.
Shivani fir rishiwer ko dhanyawad bolti h.
bhai bahan ek sath hi ek normal kaksh m so jate h.
Stay tuned
Note :- sorry for late update friends m abhi tour p hu 3 dino se or aaj to pure din bahar hi tha bas thodi der pahale ghar aaker ye jaldi jaldi m update diya to koi galti hui ho to please ignore kerna .
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