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STORY TOH BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR HAI AUR BAHUT HI MAST CHAL RAHI HAI KHAIR AAGE DEKHATE HAIN KYA HITA HAI BAHUT HI INTERESTING MOD PER HAI
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Update no:- 7 ( Mega update)
Dono bhai bahan k gussa hone ka kaaran ye tha ki jab vo ghum fir ker lot rahe the to samne dekhte h ki 4 gunde ek 17 18 sal ki ladki ko ched rahe h or usse jabardasti kerne ki koshis .Jise dekh ker karan ko bahut gusa aajata h . Unme se jese hi ek gunda us ladki k chati ko chune ki koshis kerta h ki usko ek jordar laat padti h piche se or wo kuch dur jaa ke girta h jisse bakiyon ka dhyan bhi ladki se hat ker us taraf jata h to dekhte h ki unke sathi ko marne wala koi or ni ek 20 21 sal ka ladka jisse unhe bahut gussa aajata h.
( In gundo ka aage koi or roll ni h isliye inko g1 g2 g3 g4 likhunga) .
G1 ( gusse me):- kon h be sale tu jisne hamare dost ko marne ki himmat ki jaan pyari h to chup chap yaha se nikal le.bacha samjh k ek moka de raha hu.
Karan:- aakhiri moka to m tumko deta hu ladki ko chod k yaha se nikal jao mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.
G2:- bhai logo ye kuch jyada hi uchal raha h sala lagta h isko dikhana hi padega ki humse bhidne ka anzaam kya hota h
G3:- ha bhai or jyoti ki or dekhte hue sale k sath kya mast maal h pahale is sale ki jamkar dhunayi kerte h or fir dono londiyo ko ek saaath......
G3 k apni baat puri kerne se pahale hi vatavaran me ek bhayanak chik gunj uthi jo usiki thi .
Hua yu ki jese hi g3 ne jyoti k baare m ulta sidha bola karan ne apna control kho diya or uki jibh kich ker muh se alag ker di or ek jordar laat uske sine pe de mari jis karan wo kuch dur gir ker dard k maare behosh ho gaya.
Karan:- (gusse k maare uski aankhe ek dam lal ho gayi thi jese sare sharir ka khun vahi aagaya ho or fir vo dahadta hua bol) bahut badi galti ker di tumne meri jaan meri jyoti k baare m bol ker haramzado mane bola tha n ki mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.
Uski ye dahad sun ker ek baar baki bache gundo ki bhi ek baar fat gayi lekin fir g1 or g2 ne himmat ker ke apni jeb se chaku nikal kee karan ki taraf dode lekin isse pahale karan ko vo dono chu bhi paate karan ne hava m uchal k ek jordar flying kick dono k jabdo p maari jise vo dono agle hi second jamin pe dhul chate lage ,flying kick itni jordar thi ki dono k aage ke 4 dant shahid ho gaye . Karan itne me hi ni ruka wo dono ko baari bari se utha utha k dhone laga . Or dono k hath tod diye or jab karan undono ki hadiya todne m laga hua tha to usi time g4 (jise karan ne aate uske pichwade p laat mari thi ) ne moke ka fayda utha ker piche se jaa ker jyoti k sir p gun rakh di.lekin wo bhi bevkoof kaha janta tha ki apne hero ki bahan bhi kisi se kam kaha h. jese hi usne hi jyoti k sir p gun rakh k karan ko dhamkana chaha jyoti ne ek jordar kohni uske pet m maar di jiske kaaran wo dard k maare apne pet p apne dono hath rakh diye bas itna hi moka jyoti k liye kafi tha usne furti se piche ho ek jordar flying kick uske muh p bhi jad di jisse wo bhi dul chatne laga or jyoti ne uski dhunayi bhi shuru ker di .
( Jab tak ye dono bhai bahan gundo ki dhunayi ker rahe hai aayiye in dono k baare thoda or jan lete h ki inhone itni achi fight kerna kese sikhi. Actually baat ye h ki karan or jyoti ne apni pocket money se kuch pese bacha ker judo or karate or martial arts classes join ki thi, jiske baare m undono k alawa kisi ko malum ni tha . Pahale to jyoti ne iske liye mana ker diya or boli bhai m sikh ker kya karungi aap hi bas join ker lo lekin karan ne jor dete hue kaha aajkal self defense ki training har kisi k liye bahut jaruri h chahe wo ladka ho ya ladki. To vo bhi apne bhai ki baat man join ker li. Is tarah dono bhai bahan college k baad training m jaate or sham ko park m jaker practice kerte)
Un gundo ki ache se dhunayi kerne k baad karan or jyoti us ladki k pass pahunche jise vo gunde ched rahe the . Wo ladki bhi kafi himmat wali thi jo itna sab kuch hone k baad jyada dari ni
Karan(uske pass pahunch k ) tum thik to ho na kahi chot to ni lagi .
Ladki :- ji m bilkul thik hu aapka bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne mujhe bachaya verna m kahi ki ni rahati bol bhaiya bol k rone lagi .
Jyoti ne use apne gale laga je sambhala .
Karan:- pagli bhaiya bhi bolti h or shukriya bhi bolti h bhala koi bhai apni bahan ki madad ker ke ahasan kerta h kya.
Ye sun ke vo ladki chup ho gayi
Fir jyoti boli
Jyoti :- are tumne apna naam to bataya hi ni kya naam h tumhara.
Vo ladki boli
Ladki :- mera nam radha h didi
Karan :- bahut hi pyara naam h, acha tumhara ghar kaha pe h aao hum tumhe chod denge
Radha:- are ni ni bhaiya iski jarurat ni h m khud chali jaungi .
Jyoti :- (thode se banawati guse me)are ese kese dil se ager hame apne bhai bahan manti ho to chupchap apni di ki baat mano or apna address batao
Thodi naa nukur k baad radha man jati h or 3no kisi tarah bike p adjust ho k radha k ghar ki taraf nikal jate h thodi dur jaaker radha ek bade se ghar , ni sorry use ghar kahana galat hoga ek bungalow k aage gadi rokne ko kahati h .
Bike se uter k radha bolti h
Radha :- aayiye na bhaiya ander chaliye maa bhi aap dono se mil ke bahut khush hogi.
Per wo dono kese n kese agli baar aane ka wada ker k apne no exchange kerte h or karan or jyoti apne ghar ki or nikal jate h . Unko ghar pahuchne m late ho jata h jis kaaran unki soteli ma unko khub khari khoti sunati h but vo chupchap apne kamre m ja ker apne kapde badal k so jaate h . Or dusri tarf radha bhi aaj jo kuch hua jaker apni maa ko bata deti h jisse sun pahale to uski maa kafi dar jati h but aage ki baat sun relax ho jati h or bolti h ki
Radha ki maa ka naam garima hai
Garima:- tujhe bola tha n ki teri activa kharab h to ek din ruk ja but tu ni mani or bus se hi chali gayi , tujhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota ye baat usne radha ko gale lagate hue boli tu to sab kuch janti h fir bhi esa kerti h.
Radha :- are mummy aap to ese hi pareshan ho rahi ho m bilkul thik hu na or vese bhi aaj college m admission ki last date thi ager aaj na jati to fir mushkil ho jati isi tarah maa beti m baate hoti rahi or vo dono bhi khana khake aram kerne apne apne kamre m chali gayi
Note:- Dosto bhale hi ye is story ka 7 update h but mera likha hua to first update hi h bhai kyunki abhi tak mane pahale likhe hue update m thode bahut changes kiye the . Lekin ye first update h jo pura mane likha h to please batana aap sab ko kesa laga or koi ager galti hui to bhi jarur batana .
Dono bhai bahan k gussa hone ka kaaran ye tha ki jab vo ghum fir ker lot rahe the to samne dekhte h ki 4 gunde ek 17 18 sal ki ladki ko ched rahe h or usse jabardasti kerne ki koshis .Jise dekh ker karan ko bahut gusa aajata h . Unme se jese hi ek gunda us ladki k chati ko chune ki koshis kerta h ki usko ek jordar laat padti h piche se or wo kuch dur jaa ke girta h jisse bakiyon ka dhyan bhi ladki se hat ker us taraf jata h to dekhte h ki unke sathi ko marne wala koi or ni ek 20 21 sal ka ladka jisse unhe bahut gussa aajata h.
( In gundo ka aage koi or roll ni h isliye inko g1 g2 g3 g4 likhunga) .
G1 ( gusse me):- kon h be sale tu jisne hamare dost ko marne ki himmat ki jaan pyari h to chup chap yaha se nikal le.bacha samjh k ek moka de raha hu.
Karan:- aakhiri moka to m tumko deta hu ladki ko chod k yaha se nikal jao mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.
G2:- bhai logo ye kuch jyada hi uchal raha h sala lagta h isko dikhana hi padega ki humse bhidne ka anzaam kya hota h
G3:- ha bhai or jyoti ki or dekhte hue sale k sath kya mast maal h pahale is sale ki jamkar dhunayi kerte h or fir dono londiyo ko ek saaath......
G3 k apni baat puri kerne se pahale hi vatavaran me ek bhayanak chik gunj uthi jo usiki thi .
Hua yu ki jese hi g3 ne jyoti k baare m ulta sidha bola karan ne apna control kho diya or uki jibh kich ker muh se alag ker di or ek jordar laat uske sine pe de mari jis karan wo kuch dur gir ker dard k maare behosh ho gaya.
Karan:- (gusse k maare uski aankhe ek dam lal ho gayi thi jese sare sharir ka khun vahi aagaya ho or fir vo dahadta hua bol) bahut badi galti ker di tumne meri jaan meri jyoti k baare m bol ker haramzado mane bola tha n ki mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.
Uski ye dahad sun ker ek baar baki bache gundo ki bhi ek baar fat gayi lekin fir g1 or g2 ne himmat ker ke apni jeb se chaku nikal kee karan ki taraf dode lekin isse pahale karan ko vo dono chu bhi paate karan ne hava m uchal k ek jordar flying kick dono k jabdo p maari jise vo dono agle hi second jamin pe dhul chate lage ,flying kick itni jordar thi ki dono k aage ke 4 dant shahid ho gaye . Karan itne me hi ni ruka wo dono ko baari bari se utha utha k dhone laga . Or dono k hath tod diye or jab karan undono ki hadiya todne m laga hua tha to usi time g4 (jise karan ne aate uske pichwade p laat mari thi ) ne moke ka fayda utha ker piche se jaa ker jyoti k sir p gun rakh di.lekin wo bhi bevkoof kaha janta tha ki apne hero ki bahan bhi kisi se kam kaha h. jese hi usne hi jyoti k sir p gun rakh k karan ko dhamkana chaha jyoti ne ek jordar kohni uske pet m maar di jiske kaaran wo dard k maare apne pet p apne dono hath rakh diye bas itna hi moka jyoti k liye kafi tha usne furti se piche ho ek jordar flying kick uske muh p bhi jad di jisse wo bhi dul chatne laga or jyoti ne uski dhunayi bhi shuru ker di .
( Jab tak ye dono bhai bahan gundo ki dhunayi ker rahe hai aayiye in dono k baare thoda or jan lete h ki inhone itni achi fight kerna kese sikhi. Actually baat ye h ki karan or jyoti ne apni pocket money se kuch pese bacha ker judo or karate or martial arts classes join ki thi, jiske baare m undono k alawa kisi ko malum ni tha . Pahale to jyoti ne iske liye mana ker diya or boli bhai m sikh ker kya karungi aap hi bas join ker lo lekin karan ne jor dete hue kaha aajkal self defense ki training har kisi k liye bahut jaruri h chahe wo ladka ho ya ladki. To vo bhi apne bhai ki baat man join ker li. Is tarah dono bhai bahan college k baad training m jaate or sham ko park m jaker practice kerte)
Un gundo ki ache se dhunayi kerne k baad karan or jyoti us ladki k pass pahunche jise vo gunde ched rahe the . Wo ladki bhi kafi himmat wali thi jo itna sab kuch hone k baad jyada dari ni
Karan(uske pass pahunch k ) tum thik to ho na kahi chot to ni lagi .
Ladki :- ji m bilkul thik hu aapka bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne mujhe bachaya verna m kahi ki ni rahati bol bhaiya bol k rone lagi .
Jyoti ne use apne gale laga je sambhala .
Karan:- pagli bhaiya bhi bolti h or shukriya bhi bolti h bhala koi bhai apni bahan ki madad ker ke ahasan kerta h kya.
Ye sun ke vo ladki chup ho gayi
Fir jyoti boli
Jyoti :- are tumne apna naam to bataya hi ni kya naam h tumhara.
Vo ladki boli
Ladki :- mera nam radha h didi
Karan :- bahut hi pyara naam h, acha tumhara ghar kaha pe h aao hum tumhe chod denge
Radha:- are ni ni bhaiya iski jarurat ni h m khud chali jaungi .
Jyoti :- (thode se banawati guse me)are ese kese dil se ager hame apne bhai bahan manti ho to chupchap apni di ki baat mano or apna address batao
Thodi naa nukur k baad radha man jati h or 3no kisi tarah bike p adjust ho k radha k ghar ki taraf nikal jate h thodi dur jaaker radha ek bade se ghar , ni sorry use ghar kahana galat hoga ek bungalow k aage gadi rokne ko kahati h .
Bike se uter k radha bolti h
Radha :- aayiye na bhaiya ander chaliye maa bhi aap dono se mil ke bahut khush hogi.
Per wo dono kese n kese agli baar aane ka wada ker k apne no exchange kerte h or karan or jyoti apne ghar ki or nikal jate h . Unko ghar pahuchne m late ho jata h jis kaaran unki soteli ma unko khub khari khoti sunati h but vo chupchap apne kamre m ja ker apne kapde badal k so jaate h . Or dusri tarf radha bhi aaj jo kuch hua jaker apni maa ko bata deti h jisse sun pahale to uski maa kafi dar jati h but aage ki baat sun relax ho jati h or bolti h ki
Radha ki maa ka naam garima hai
Garima:- tujhe bola tha n ki teri activa kharab h to ek din ruk ja but tu ni mani or bus se hi chali gayi , tujhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota ye baat usne radha ko gale lagate hue boli tu to sab kuch janti h fir bhi esa kerti h.
Radha :- are mummy aap to ese hi pareshan ho rahi ho m bilkul thik hu na or vese bhi aaj college m admission ki last date thi ager aaj na jati to fir mushkil ho jati isi tarah maa beti m baate hoti rahi or vo dono bhi khana khake aram kerne apne apne kamre m chali gayi
Note:- Dosto bhale hi ye is story ka 7 update h but mera likha hua to first update hi h bhai kyunki abhi tak mane pahale likhe hue update m thode bahut changes kiye the . Lekin ye first update h jo pura mane likha h to please batana aap sab ko kesa laga or koi ager galti hui to bhi jarur batana .
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