Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

[Harry rocks]

Sorry sorry friends i know ki m aapko baar bar confused ker raha hu , wo kya h na ki m khud thoda confusion m tha ki story ko new thread pe continue karu ya yahi per.
Lekin mane ab confirmly decide ker liya h , m story ko yahi continue karunga.

Isliye friends ab aapko confuse hone ki jarurat ni h , second part ka index bhi thodi der me is thread ki first post pe aajayega or jab second part ka first update aayega to usike sath index bhi update ho jayega
Ng_TheViper Devil Rajthehunterr anandsngh12 Sajid111 Mr. Perfect
kaha Mahakal jai Dark Devil
Faizan_okerlund Raj Asif khan Ameer Khan Khan Mahiirathore Jitu kumar COSMO Vampire FRIDAY Riya20 kavya verma monika somya FRIDAY Naughtyrishabh Nothing. Iron Man aka3829

 

[Dark Devil]

Sorry sorry friends i know ki m aapko baar bar confused ker raha hu , wo kya h na ki m khud thoda confusion m tha ki story ko new thread pe continue karu ya yahi per.
Lekin mane ab confirmly decide ker liya h , m story ko yahi continue karunga.

Isliye friends ab aapko confuse hone ki jarurat ni h , second part ka index bhi thodi der me is thread ki first post pe aajayega or jab second part ka first update aayega to usike sath index bhi update ho jayega
Ng_TheViper Devil Rajthehunterr anandsngh12 Sajid111 Mr. Perfect
kaha Mahakal jai Dark Devil
Faizan_okerlund Raj Asif khan Ameer Khan Khan Mahiirathore Jitu kumar COSMO Vampire FRIDAY Riya20 kavya verma monika somya FRIDAY Naughtyrishabh Nothing. Iron Man aka3829

Thank Bhai waiting for the next update

 

[Akil]

Sorry sorry friends i know ki m aapko baar bar confused ker raha hu , wo kya h na ki m khud thoda confusion m tha ki story ko new thread pe continue karu ya yahi per.
Lekin mane ab confirmly decide ker liya h , m story ko yahi continue karunga.

Isliye friends ab aapko confuse hone ki jarurat ni h , second part ka index bhi thodi der me is thread ki first post pe aajayega or jab second part ka first update aayega to usike sath index bhi update ho jayega
Ng_TheViper Devil Rajthehunterr anandsngh12 Sajid111 Mr. Perfect
kaha Mahakal jai Dark Devil
Faizan_okerlund Raj Asif khan Ameer Khan Khan Mahiirathore Jitu kumar COSMO Vampire FRIDAY Riya20 kavya verma monika somya FRIDAY Naughtyrishabh Nothing. Iron Man aka3829

Ok bro waiting for your next update

 

[Dark Devil]

Waiting for the next update

 

[FRIDAY]

Sorry for late review.
I have mixed feelings about this review.
Yes,it was good & big but didn't that great to end the first part of the story.

Ranvir's secret finally reavelled but it wasn't a big twist.I thought that it would be more better if u reavelled it after some updates.

Jioty's action agaist Bajaj was fantastic.I hope we will see more action in next part from jioty.Drama between Jioty,Radha & Riay was amazing.
I thought that you did good at the end of the story.Tragedy scene was awesome. Even I liked the way how jioty & karan expressed their love to each other.
But it was very common like hindi movie or serial.I was expecting something new.
I think you shouldn't have to show the deadbody of karan & jioty because here it's all messed up.If a Rakshakh/super hero cann't save him,how will he save the world from villan.
It could be a trick of kfd.Let's see what u have thought about it.

It was your first story that's why some things weren't that great.But at the end u have done well.
Keep it up.....

 

[Raj]

BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR FANTASTIC AWESOME MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI.


BHAI UPDATE PADH KE MOOD TIH NAHI THA PAR LIKH RAHA HU.
AAP BAHUT HI KHOOBSOORAT TAREEKE SE SAJAYA HAI LAST UPDATE KO.HAR CHEEJ KA DHYAN RAKHA HAI.HAR KISI KI FILLING KI BAKHOOBI DIKHAYA HAI.



TOH SARE GAME PLANNER EKATTHE HO GAYE AGHORA MLA BAJAJ AUR RANVIR.
AUR IN LOGON NE MOHRA BANAYA MAYA AUR USKE BHAI KO.JO KI ISI TAAK ME THE KI KAB UNKO MOUKA MILE KARAN AUR JYOTI SE BADLA LENE KE LIYE.
AUR WOH LOG BHI KAMYAAB HUYE BAHUT HI GAHRI CHAAL CHALI THI SAB NE MIL KE.JISKA PAHLA SHIKAR RADHA AUR RIYA HUYE.OAR RAHUL AUR SONAM UNKE JHANSE ME NAHI AAYE.
BIRTHDAY PARTY KA PLAN KARKE MAYA NE BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR ACTING KE SATH KARAN KO FASAYA JISME USKE BHAI NE BHARPOOR SATH DIYA.
YAHA RANVIR NE ASHA KI MOUT KA RAJ BHI KHOL DIYAJISE JAAN KAR KARAN SHAKTIHEEN HOTE HUYE BHI BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR TAREEKE SE LADA.OAR BUJDIL LOGON NE PEETH PICHE SE WAAR KAR KARAN KO GHAYAL KAR DIYE.
JYOTI BHI PAHUCH GAYI APNE ANDER MOUJOOD BURI SHAKTI KO HARA KAR AAJ TOH JYOTI BHADRAKALI KA AVTAAR BAN KAR TOOT PADI HAI DUSHMANON PAR AUR ANTATAH AGHORA NE APNI GHATIYA CHAAL CHAL KE JYOTI KO HARA HI DIYA.PAR AGHORA APNI MOUT SE BACH NAHI PAYA.
YAHA RADHA KI MA KO BHI KARAN AUR JYOTI KE BAARE ME JAAN KAR BAHUT DUKH HUA OAR AB KAR BHI KYA SAKTI HAIRADHA BAHUT JYADA DAR GAYI HAI APNI MA KA REACTION DEKH KAR KARAN AUR JYOTI KE BARE ME.
USNE AONI MAA SE BHI JHOOT BOL DIYA .
PAR KYA HOGA JAB SABKO SACH PATA CHALEGA KI RIYA AUR RADHA NE MAYA AUR USKE BHAI KE SATH MIL KAR KARAN AUR JYOTI KA YE KIYA HAI.SONAM AUR RAHUL KA KYA HAAL HOGA.
KHAIR AB TOH AGALA PART SHURU HOGA TABHI KUCH PATA CHALEGA.
RANVIR KE TOH TOTE HI UD GAYE KARAN KE SATH JYOTI KE MRIT SHAREER KO DEKH KAR.

OAR YAHA MAIN APNA EK ANUMAAN YA TUKKA MAAN LO SHARE KAR RAHA HU.
KARAN AUR JYOTI MARE NAHI HAIN JO BODY RANVIR KO MILI HAI WILL H MAHAJ EK BHRAM CHHALAWA YA MAYA JAAL JO BHI KAH LO HAI.
MUJHE LAGTA HAI KHAYI ME GIRNE KE BAAD KARAN AUR JYOTI KO SHANI DEV NE KAHI SURAKSHIT KAR DIYA HOGA.TAKI BURAYI AB KHUL KAR SAMANE AA JAYE KYUN KI ABHI TAK RAKSHAK KE WAJAH SE KOI BHI BURI TAKAT KHUL KAR SAMNE NAHI AAYI THI.
KHAIR JO BHI HO YE MERA EK ANUMAAN MATRA HAI


BHAI BAHUT HI BESABRI SE AGLE PART KA INTEJAAR HAI

 

[sonukale]

Waiting for next update

 

[Devil]

Sorry sorry friends i know ki m aapko baar bar confused ker raha hu , wo kya h na ki m khud thoda confusion m tha ki story ko new thread pe continue karu ya yahi per.
Lekin mane ab confirmly decide ker liya h , m story ko yahi continue karunga.

Isliye friends ab aapko confuse hone ki jarurat ni h , second part ka index bhi thodi der me is thread ki first post pe aajayega or jab second part ka first update aayega to usike sath index bhi update ho jayega
Ng_TheViper Devil Rajthehunterr anandsngh12 Sajid111 Mr. Perfect
kaha Mahakal jai Dark Devil
Faizan_okerlund Raj Asif khan Ameer Khan Khan Mahiirathore Jitu kumar COSMO Vampire FRIDAY Riya20 kavya verma monika somya FRIDAY Naughtyrishabh Nothing. Iron Man aka3829

Second part ka besabri se intjaar
Waiting for next update

 

[Dark Devil]

Waiting for the next update

 

[Hellohoney]

Bhot hi behtarin ant kiya bhai aapne 1st part ka lagbhak jyadatar logoki sachai samne aagayi he ab aap dusre part me kya twest late he ye dekhna he aapse ek riqwest he bhai riya or radha ko jaldi maaf mat karna bhai or koi bhi maf na kare chahe vo rohan or sonam bhi