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Location :- city hospital
Karan ki sabhi bahane , uski choti maa , bhua or rohan samet sabhi bhai bahan waha mojud the or sabki ankho m ansu the orr tension thi
Rohan ko to samjh hi ni aaraha tha ki jyoti ki ye halat kese ho gayi or itne time m bhi uski healing power ne use sahi kyu kiya.
Sab icu k bahar khade the , jaha jyoti ka treatment chal raha tha , uske sir p kafi chote aayi hui thi or hatho m fracture aaya hua or yaha tak ki ladies doctor defibliration treatment de rahe the
Karan pahuncha or rote hue tez aawaz me
Karan kavya se :- choti maa choti maa .. kaha h meri gudiya choti ma kya hua use.
Kavya rote hue karan ko sine laga the k :- jyoti icu m h lalla , sambhaal apne aap ko ager tu ese royega to teri choti maa or teri bhua ko kon sambhalega.
Karan ye sun thoda shant hua or abhi aage kuch abhi puchta tabhi usse pahale hi uski sabhi bahane sine lag ker rone lagi.
Karan abhi apni bahano ko sambhal hi raha tha ki tabhi doctor operation theater se bahar aati h , or. Jese hi wo karan ko dekhti h na jane kyu uske chahre p herani or khusi k mile jule bhav the.
Karan rote hue doctor k pas jake
Doctor karan se :- doctor meri gudiya, meri gudiya thik to h naa, kya hua meri gudiya ko, please doctor kuch to boliye.
Karan ko bhi vo doctor kuch jani pahachani lagi , or wo usse bola.
Karan :- kya m aapko janta hu doctor ?
Doctor :- bhai aap shayad mujhe bhul gaye lekin m aap dono ko ni bhuli.
Ye bol wo karan or rohan k per chune hoti h to rohan bol pada.
Rohan :- are doctor aP ye kya ker rahi ho aap
Doctor :- chu lene dijiye mujhe aP apne per bhai, aap mere liye bhagwan se kam ni, aJ aapke kaaran hi meri maa jivit h
Phir doctor un dono ko usdin ki yaad dilaati h , jab karan or rohan ne us ladki ki madad ki thi , jisko peso ki jarurat thi or rohan ne chor ban uske purse ko chura k usme pese rakh diya The.
Ye doctor wahi ladki thi , karan to vaha se jaldi se nikal gaya tha jaldi se , lekin ladki jab hospital ki taraf ja rahi thi , to usne karan se thank u kerne aage unke pas jane lagi thi , lekin isse pahale wo unke pas pahuchti usse pahale hi usne karan or rohan ki baate sun li jise use pata chala ki wo pese karan ne hi rakhe the or wo chor rohan hi tha jo acting ker raha tha
Doctor :- m aapka ahasan jindgi bhar ni utar paungi bhai , isliye please mujhe apne per chu lene dijiye.
Rohan :- dekhiye doctor humne jo kiya wo humara farz tha.
Or fir rohan jyoti k baare m batata h , jise sun doctor boli.
Doctor :- oh to wo aapki bahan h , dekhiye ab wese to khatra se bahar h , aap tension mat lijiye , per.....
Karan ne jab suna ki uski gudiya khatre se bahar h to uski sans m sans aayi , lekin doctor se per sun wo tention m aagaya.
Karan :- per kya doctor.
Doctor :- dekhiye baat thodi serious h , aapmese jo bhi jyoti k sabse karib h , wo please mere cabin m aake mile.
Ye bol doctor firse ek baar karan or rohan se ahasaan jatate hue or jyoti ko abhi kuch time k liye icu m hi rakhne ka khaker wo waha se chali gayi.
Karan jo itni der se khud ko shant rakhNe ki koshis ker raha tha , ab uska sabar k bandh m darar aane lagi thi ke jyoti ko is halat m dekh use bahut gussa aaraha tha , lekin usne pahale doctor k pas jane k decide kiya
Karan :- rohan bhai , tum sab ko sambhalo , m doctor se milke aata hu.
Garima :- karan beta m bhi sath m aati hu , pata ni kya ho gaya meri bachi ko , meri to chinta se pran hi sukhe ja rahe h
Karan gusse se rude way me :- rahane dijiye bhua , iski koi jarurat ni , ager aapne itni chinta pahale dikhayi hoti to shayad meri gudiya ki ye halat hui na hoti.
Ye bol karan bade gusse m waha se nikal pada , karan ka ye behavior dekh sab heran the , aajse pahale karan ne itne rude way m kisise baat ni ki thi.
Garima k ankho m ansu aagaye , isliye ni kyu ki usko karan ki baato ka bura laga tha , kyu ki wo janti thi , ki ki karan apni judwa se kitna pyaar kerta h , or apni usi bahan ko is halat m dekh ker uska apni bhai se gussa hona swabhavik hi tha , kyunki jyoti usike ghar m ruki thi , is kaaran jyoti ki jimedari usiki thi ,usko lagne laga ki lekwo apni jimedari thik se na nibha payi , or us kaaran se hi uski ye halat hui thi
Wahi dusri or
Karan jab doctor k pas pahunch ander aane ki permission leta h .
Doctor :- aaiye sir aiye , ye hospital aapka h to aapko kabse permission ki jarurat padne lagi.
Karan :- sir ?
Doctor :- ji sir verma ji ne aapke bare m abhi mujhe bataya .
Ye vahi hospital tha , jaha radha admit hui thi
Karan :- dekhiye doctor aap mujhse umer m or pad dono m bade h , ese sir bol mujhe sharminda na kare , or ager aapko mujhe bolna hi h to aap pahale ki tarah aap bhai bol sakti ho.
Doctor karan ki baat sun kafi impress hoti h usse or boli ki :- thik h bhai , aaj se m aapko bhai hi bulaungi, lekin meri bhi ek shart h , jese m aapko bhai bol rahi hu aap bhi mujhe didi bole , (udas hote hue ) mera koi bhai ni h na , ager aap mujhe di bologe to mujhe acha lagega.
Karan :- ji didi , per please ye sab baate hum baad m karenge per please mujhe bataiye esa kya ho gaya meri gudiya ko , jo ap mujhe vaha ni bata sakte the.
Pallavi (doctor) :- bhai darasal jyoti ko mini heart attack aaya tha .
Karan ne jese hi ye suna to mano ek shan swas hi ruk gayi .
Karan :- kyaa, ye kese possible h sister meri bahan ki abhi age hi kya h.
Aditi :- bhai heart attack jaruri ni ki badi age k log ko hi aaye, or khas ker ki jyoti jesi heart patient k liye to esa hona koi badi baat ni
Kyaa jyoti or heart patient ye kese possible tha , jis jyoti ne itni mushkilo m har na mani , apne bhai ka sath kadam kadam per diya tha, or anek asuro or papio ka sanghar kiya tha wo heart patient kese ho sakti thi .
Lekin usse herani ki baat to ye thi ki k aditi k muh se itni badi baat sun ker bhi karan ne kuch khas react ni kiya tha, usne sharmindagi se sir jhuka liya jese vo is baare m pahale se hi malum ho.
Karan :- ji didi
Aditi :- dekho bhai bura mat manna , lekin as a doctor mera ye bolna jaruri h , ki aapko apni bahan ka khas rakhne ki sakht jarurat h , heart patient ko humesha tention free hona chahiye , lekin jyoti ji ki reports or checkup k baad to mujhe iska ulta najar aaya , usko dekh ker hi saf saf samjh aaraha tha ki wo raat ko thik se na to soyi h or na hi khayi h, aap itna care less kese ho sakte ho bhai wo bhi jab , jab unka past m hi.......... Ho rakha h.
Karan ne jese hi ye sun to ander se pura hil gaya , use khud p bahut gussa Araha tha ki usne jyoti ko akela choda hi kyu.
Jis kaaran karan ki ankho se ansu bahane lage, jise dekh
Aditi karan ko rote dekh :- sorry bhai m kuch jyada bol gayi .
Karan :- ni ni di aapko mafi mangne ki jarurat ni aapne to bilkul sahi kaha h , laparwahi to hui h mujhse , per I promise aage se esa bilkul ni hoga di, abse apni gudiya ki sari jimedari m khud sambhalunga.
Aditi :- hmm, that's good bhai , per meri mano to aapko ye kaam apni mom ko hi sompna chahiye .
Karan :- kyu di , m esa maru to usme kya problem h.
Aditi :- mujhe samjh ni aaraha bhai m aapse is bare m kese baat karu .
Karan samjh jata h k koi ladies problem h jyoti se related jise aditi karan ko batane m hichkicha di
Karan fir aditi ko apni bachpan se leke ab tak ki sari baate batake samjhata h ki wo or jyoti kitne close h , or unme aapas m koi hichak ni .
Karan :- isliye di aap jyoti k bare m mujhse kuch bhi batane m bilkul na hichki chaiye.
Aditi :- wah bhai , kitna pyaar h aap dono m , vese ghabraiye mat bhai , koi badi problem ni , bas jyoti k hatho m fracture h na or uper se unke periods bhi chalu h , to aap samjh rahe ho naa bhai.
Karan :- dont worry di , m manage ker lunga.
Aditi :- lekin bhai ek baat abhi bhi mujhe samjh ni aarahi jyoti ko itni chote kese aayi , unki chot dekh ker to esa lag raha h , jese uspe attack hua ho
Karan ye suna to uska gusse se para high ho gaya , lekin usne khud ko aditi k samne control kiya or aditi se kuch or baate kerke waha se nikla or sidha jake pahuncha apni family k sath.
Karan ko dekh pahale to wo khush hue k ab unhe pata chalega ki jyoti sahi to h na , lekin agle hi pal sab dar gaye jiska kaaran tha ki karan bahut jyada gusse m tha , uski ankhe lal ho gayi thi gusse se or uske hath kale padne lage.
Karan garima k pas jake :- kese ? Kese hua ye sab .
Garima sir niche gardan ki hui thi sharmindgi k kaaran.
Karan gusse se chilaya :- mane pucha kese hua ye sab bhuaaaaa........
Karan ki dahad sunte hi sab kamp gaye , tabhi ek nurse aake shor na kerne ko kahati h , jisse karan ko ahasas hua apni galti ka.
Karan fir apna sawal shanti se doharata h , lekin uske gusse se ankhe dhire dhire laal se ek dam kali hone lagi thi , tab sonam ko chinta hone lagi , wo jhat se karan k gale la use shant kerne lagi.
Sonam bhi karan ki shakti thi , jyoti jese karan ki bahan or premika thi , or karan apni bahano m kabhi bhed ni kerta tha , is kaaran sonam ko sine se laga k uska man shant ho gaya.
Sonam :- bhai Ap please aap bhua p gussa mat kero , jo hua usme meri galti thi.
Fir sonam subah jo hua wo batana shuru kerti h.
Flashback
Jyoti uthne k baad jese hi bathroom m jake apni shorts utar jese hi cummod p bethti h to uske pet m achanak se dard uth gaya or wo jese hi sus ker apni chut ko pani se dhoti h to uska pura hath khun se san jata h , jisse jyoti turant samjh jati h ki uske periods shuru ho gaye h , jise uska mood or kharab ho jata h , kyunki ek to kal raat k sapne or sabse main baat apne bhai se hue jhagde se pahale hi dukhi or pareshan thi or uper se ye periods.
Aap soch rahe honge ki periods jesi chij to ladkio k liye normal h , fir jyoti usse itna parshan kyu thi , to baat esi thi ki normal ladkiyo k mukable jyoti ko is time m kuch jyada hi bleeding hoti thi or usko kayi baar to itni kamzori aajati ki usko tez bhukar ho jata , jesa abhi uske sath ho raha tha , uski tabiyat bigadne lagi thi, use apne bhai ki yaad ane lagi thi , use yaad aane laga ki jab use pahali baar periods aaye the wo kese ghabra gayi thi , use bleeding k baare m kuch ni maloom tha tab kese uske bhai ne na keval use is bare m avgat karwaya, balki uske pad ko bhi apne hatho se badla tha , or in dino m to wo jyoti ko kaam kerna to dur bina permission k bed se hilne tak ni deta tha, apne or jyoti k sare kaam khud hi kerta .
Wo sab baate yaad aate hi uski tadaf or bhadne lagi or usko karan se duri or bardasht ni ho rahi thi.
Jyoti nam ankho :- m kitni buri bahan hu mere bhai itna pyaar kerte h mujhse or mane unke sath esa kiya , jis waqt unko meri sabse jyada jarurat thi tab maine unhe akele chod aayi
(Pashchatap k ansu rote hue) ni bas or ni or m apne bhaiya se door ni rah sakti , m aaj hi wapas jaungi or bhaiya ko kese bhi kerke mana lungi.
Kitni bholi thi jyoti bilkul apne bhai ki tarah wo bol rahi thi ki wo apne bhai ko jake mana legi, pagli bhul gayi ki naraj karan ni hua tha, balki wo khud hui thi.
Ye sab decide ker jyoti jaldi se teyar hui , lekin tabhi use dhyan aaya ki uske pas pads to h hi ni.
Jyoti :- ab m kya karu , haa bhua k pas jarur honge.
Ye sochte hue wo kese n kese khud ko adjust ker sidha jati h bhua k pas.
Per waha pahunch k dekhti h ki waha to radha kaya or diya samet sabhi mojud the , jo ek baar k liye wahi ruk gayi thi karan k kahane liye , kyunki raat ko sabka adjustment possible ni tha.
Garima :- are jyoti beta tu aagayi , chal jaldi se beth ja breakfast ready h.
Jyoti :- bhua wo mujhe ..
Garima :- kuch chahiye tha beti ?.
Jyoti sabke samne kahne m sharma rahi thi , isliye usne apni bhua k kaan m bolti h.
Garima haste hue :- are beti to isme itna sharma kyu rahi ho , hum sab ladies hi to h yaha.
Garima radha se jyoti k liye pad lane ko kahati h , to radha apne room m jati h or fir kuch der bad m aake bolti h ki pads khatam ho gaye h
Garima :- are to kya hua, ek kam ker ja abhi bazar se jaker le aa.
Jyoti jise thodi weakness ho rahi thi wo dhime swar m boli :- koi baat ni bhua , m khud le aaungi radha ko kyu pareshan kerti ho.
Radha :- are didi isme pareshani kesi , aap aram kijiye m yu gayi or yu aayi.
Lekin jyoti ne ye bolke mana ker diya ki uska thod ji kharab ho raha h jo ghumne se thoda thik ho jayega.
Or fir garima se permission le jese hi wo ghar se bahar nikli ki tabhi usne dekha ki bahar activa p sonam aarahi h.
Tab sonam ne jyoti se pucha ki wo kaha ja rahi h ki tabhi jyoti ne usko sach bat bata di .
Sonam :- oh to di chaliye m bhi aapke sath chalti hu.
Kuch sochne k baad jyoti maan jati h or wo sonam k piche beth market ki or nikal jati h , sabse pahale wo medical shop se jake pad leti , tabhi waha pas m hi sonam ko kuch saman lena tha to wo ek pas ki shop m chali jati h or jyoti bahar intezaar ker rahi hoti h , ,tabhi jyoti ki najar samne ek dukan p jati h , jaha wo ek sunder si jacket dekhti h to use wo bahut pasand aati h karan k liye , wo turant shop m jati h or
Wo jacket leker shop se bAhar hi nikali hi thi ki tabhi jyoti kuch esa dekhti h ki uski ankho se angare barasne lage.
Usne dekha ki kuch gunde type k log ek ladki ko jabardasti utha k le ke gadi m bithate h or waha se nikal gaye.
Jyoti turant unke piche bhagi , parantu pata ni kese aaj uski supper speed use dhoka de gayi or kuch dur jate hi wo buri tarah hamfte hue ruk gayi.
Tabhi jyoti sonam activa leke waha pahunch gayi usne sab dekh liya tha isliye usne turant jyoti se boli.
Sonam :- di jaldi se beth jaiye activa p.
Jyoti turant activa p beth jati h or code deti h activa ko us gaadi k piche kuch der picha kerne k baad wo gadi shahar k bahar mojud ek khali building ki thi wo gunde jaldi se utha k ander ke gaye.
Jab jyoti ne ye dekha to usne sonam ko bahar hi rahane ka kahke chupke se wo ander ghus gayi or invisible hoker wo us jagah ko observe kerne lagi to usne paya ki wo human trafficking gang thi , or waha or bhi kayi ladkiya thi , jinhe unhonne uthaya tha videsho m bechne k liye .
Abhi jyoti ye sab dekh planning ker hi rahi thi , lekin aj jyoti ki kismat ka kuch or hi or hi plan tha , speed power ki tarah invisibility power ne bhi dhoka de dala ,or wo achanak se sabhi gundo k samne visible ho gayi.
Apne samne jyoti ko achanK se dekh gunde heran ho gaye
Gundo ka leader jiska nam shera tha , wo bola.
Shera :- e ladki kon h tu or ander kese aayi.
Jyoti jo khud bhi heran thi ki esa kese hua lekin usne khud ko sambhal boli :- m kon hu ya kese aayi wo sab chodo , chupchap ladkio ko chod do verna .
Shera :- haha dekha sathiyo , ye ladki mujhko dhamki de rahi h , mujhko shera ko , lagta h isko andaza ni h ki isne yaha aake kitni badi galti ki h isne.
(Shera apne aadmio ko ishara kerta h , jisse sabhi admi gun liye use gher lete h)
Shera :- pakad k band ker do ise bhi baki sabhi ladkiyo k sath , bada hi kadak mal h sali iske to oro se double rs milenge.
Jyoti apni ankh band ker kholti h jisse uski nili ankhe laal ho gayi :- mane tumhe moka diya tha , lekin tum ni mane , kher jesi tumhari marzi .
Ye bol jyoti ne ek jordar laat jamin p de mari jiske sath hi jamin kampne lagi or jyoti ko chod sab ka balance bigad gaya or sab niche pade.
Tabhi jyoti ne pas m padi ek lohe ki rod uthake usne ek gunde k sir p bas normal force se hi mara tha ki uska sir nariyal ki tarah fat gaya.
Jyoti :- ab teyar ho jao apne karmo ka dan pane k liye.
Shera ek baar to jyoti ka ye roop dekh k kamp.gaya lekin kahate h na vinash kale viprit budhi vese hi uske sath hua tha.
Shera :- madarchodo dAr kya rahe ho vo. Bas ek ladki h or hum 50 mard , bata do is randi ko ki mardo se ulajhne ka kya hashr hota h
Jyoti gusse se dahadi :- waha khade khade kuto ki tarah bhokna chodo or yaha aayo haramio m bhi dekhu ki kitne bade mard ho tum
Jyoti ki lalkar sun sare gunde ek sath tut pade jyoti ki or , jese hi gunda jyoti k pas pahuncha to jyoti ne ghuma k rod us admi k dir p de mari or uska wahi ram nam satya h ho gaya.
Or dusre gunde ko usne ek lat jad di , jiske sath hi wo gunda udte hue divar se itni jor se takraya ki uski ridh ki hadi or pasliya tut gayi or wo gir k tadfne laga.
Fir jyoti usi rod ko uchal k yu ghumati k samne se aarahe teen shaks ko ek sath padti h ki unke sir football ki tarah tan se juda hogaye.
Jyoti ki sari pareshani ne uske krodh ka roop le liya tha , jo uske hevaniyat bhare andaaz se saf saf pata chal raha tha , lekin aaj pata ni kya ho gaya tha , jo jyoti akeli asuro ki sena ka ek hi yuddh m sanghar kerne ki shamta rakhti thi wo , wo aaj in mamuli gundo se ladte hue hi thakne lagi thi , lekin wo ruk ni sakti thi , kyunki wo janti thi ki yaha mojud sabhi ladkio ki jindagi uske hatho m hi h.
Wahi dusri or shera ne jab dekha ki uske admi jyoti k hatho kute ki mot mar rahe h to usne ek ghatiya chal chali , wo turant us room m jata h jaha sari ladkiya mojud thi or usne turant ek ladki ko utha jyoti k pas khichte hue leke gaya or chilaya ladki.
Shera jor se :- jaha h vahi ruk ja ladki ni to is ladki ka bheja udaa dunga , m janta hu tu inko hi yaha se chudane aayi h.
Jyoti jese hi shera ko dekhti h to uske hath se rod ki pakad dhili ho jati h , tabhi usi moke ka fayda utha ek gunda uske hath pe ek bade se hammer se kidar war kerta h jisse uski hath ki hadi mano tut si gayi or wo chikhte hue niche beth gayi , lekin jyoti har na mante hue jese hi uthne ki koshis kerti h , tabhi uska dimag sun ho gaya or uske samne fir se ek dhundhla drishya aane laga black & white screen m jise use najar aane laga ki esa hi koi drishya tha wo ek ladke k hath m gun thi jisne use samne khadi ladki p tani hui thi , or agle hi pal usne jese hi goli chalayi to jyoti ki chinkh nikal gayi.
Jyoti :- niiiiiiiii........
Tabhi jyoti k sine m dard uthne laga shayad use heart attack aaya tha jesa ki doctor additi ne bataya tha , jisse wo chillate huee niche gir tadafne lagi.
Tabhi shera bola :- ladki bahut badi galti ker di mere. Admio ko mar k ab tu esi mot maregi ki tere ghar walo ko uski lash bhi ni milegi
(Apne admio se) dekh kya rahe ho haramjado , mar dalo is randi ko tadfa tadfa k .
Ye bol wo side m jake beth gaya , tabhi sare gunde tut pade jyoti p bat , rod , or kayi hathiyaro ko lekker, leki. Jyoti tadafne k kaaran kuch ni ker pa rahi thi.
Wahi dusri taraf
Sonam jo bahar jo itni der baad bhi jyoti k na ane se ghabra gayi , wo turant use building k pas jakr chupke se ander jhankti h or jese hi usne jyoti ki halat dekhi to uski ankho se ansu nikalne lage or use samjh ni aaraha tha ki. Ye kese hua , lekin usne ghabrane k bajaye himat se kam liya.
Sonam :- hey kanha ye kese sambhav h di ko in gundo ne....
Ab m kya karu kahi police k ane se pahale kahi der na ho jaye.
Jyoti k kahane p hi sonam ne police ko waha bulaya tha.
Sonam ko tabhi karan ka dhyan aaya , usne turBt karan ko call kerna chaha lekin phone not reachable aaraha tha or telepathy se bhi wo contact ni ked pa rahi thi.
Sonam:- hey kanha bhai se to contact ho hi ni pa raha ab m kya karu.
Tabhi use kaal yani rohan ka khyaal aata h , ki uske pass bhi powers h , wo turant rohan ko phone kerti h.
Sonam rote hue :- hello rohan bhai , aap please jaldi se yaha aajaye.
Rohan bina sawal kiye turant sonam k pas teleport hota h or sonam jese hi rohan ko dekhte hi uske gale lag rote hue sari baat batati h.
Rohan ne jese hi suna ki jyoti ki jan khatra m h , to turant sonam ko apne se alag ker use sambhalte hue apne kal roop m aata h or jese hi wo ander jane ko hua , tabhi usne suna ki police k siren ki aawaz aarahi thi .
Police ki aawaz sunte hi shera bola.
Shera :- chodo us ladki ko vese bhi itni mar khane k baad uska bachna vese bhi namumkin h or tum log jaldi se baki ladkio ko leke aao , hume yaha se nikalna hoga isse pahale police hume charo or se gher le, usse pahale piche wale gate se nikalna hoga.
Ye bol wo turant ladkio wale room me gaya kuch admio k sath , lekin waha pahunch k uski herani ki sima na rahi , wo turant bahar ki taraf bhagne ki liye bahar aaya to wo pata h jo ladke wo bahar jyoti or us dusri ladki jiske gunpoint p usne jyoti ko roka tha, uske liye bahar chode the , un sab ki lashe buri halat m padi h or wo ladki or jyoti gayab h.
Shera ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki kya hua , lekin usne khud ko sambhal jaldi se piche k gate se bhag gaya
Un ladkio or jyoti ko kaal hi waha se gayab ker bahar hi le aaya tha or un ladki ko police ko sompte hue usne ye bol diya ki wo log police ka siren sunte hi waha se ladkio ko chod bhag gaye or usne sabhi gundo ki lasho ko bhi gayab ker diya tha or jaldi se wo sonam or jyoti ko leker hospital pahuncha or usne jyoti ko jaldi se admit karwaya.
Flashback end.
Sonam ne sari baate rote hue karan ko telepathy k jariye bata di kyunki usne ghar walo ko jyoti k accident hone ka bataya tha
Karan ne jese hi shera ki kartoot ka pata chala , uska dimag gusse se phatne laga.
Man me :- sheraaaaaaaaa, tune jyoti p hath ni uthaya balki apni mot ko pukara .
Ye bol karan abhi bahar ki or ja hi raha tha ki tabhi ek nurce icu se bahar aake sabko ek good news deti h ki jyoti ko hosh aagaya h.
Jese hi karan ne ye suna karan ka sar gussa gayab ho gaya or khushi k mare uske ansu nikalne lage
Karan :- sister m aapke aage hath jodta hu , please mujhe meri gudiya k pas jane dijiye.
Tabhi aditi waha aapahunchi jise dusri dusri nurse ne inform ker diya tha jyoti k bare m.
Aditi :- bhai please aap thoda patience rakhiye , pahale mujhe jyoti ka checkup kerna hoga, abhi aap logo ka unse milna sahi na hoga.
Aditi ki baat sun karan nirash ho gaya , lekin aditi ki baat bilkul sahi thi , isliye hi karan kuch na bola , bas bebasi se uski ankho se ansu bahane lage.
Kavya aage bad k karan k kandhe p hath rakhti h to karan se control ni hota or wo kabya k gale lag rone laga.
Kavya bhi apne lala ka sir sahalate hue use sambhalne lagi , wahi aditi ander jyoti ka checkup kerke use nind ka injection de deti h or bahar aake sabko batati h ki jyoti ab puri tarah se gayab h or use nind ka injection dediya h kal subah tak jyoti ko hosh aajayega
Ye. Sun sab khush ho gaye or bhagwan ka shukriya kerne lage , tabhi karan bola
Karan :- choti maa raat bahut ho gayi h , aap please sabko leke ghar jaiye, gudiya k liye m yahi rukta hu.
Garima :- beta m bhi tumhare sath yahi rukti hu , tum akele kese sab sambhaloge.
Radha :- bhai m bhi.
Karan chid k gusse se :- mane kaha na yaha sirf m rukunga , apni gudiya ko sambhalne k liye mujhe kisi ki jarurat ni .
(Tank kaste hue ) or abhi itni fikar dikhane k bajaye aPne pahale meri gudiya ka khayal rakha hota , uski tabiyat kharab h ye janke bhi use bahar jane ni diya hota to , aaj shayad meri gudiya is halat m hoti hi ni.
Ye bol karan ne rohan ko sabko le jane ka farman suna diya.
Karan k krodh bhare vachan sun sabki ankho m pani aagaye , lekin moke ki najakat ko samjhte hue sab waha se nikal gaye.
Kaya karan k pas :- sakha kamse kam apni sakhi ko to apne pas rukne do.
Karam :- sakhi tumhara jana to sabse jaruri h , kyunki ager tum bhi yahi rahi to rohN akela teen gharo ki raksha kese karega , isliye mere piche se tumhe apne sakha ki jimedari nibhani hogi meri sakhi.
Yu karan kaya ko bhi samjha bujha ka waha se bhej deta h , jate hue kaya piche mudke nam ankho se dekhti h or waha se nikal jati h.
Karan bhi aditi se permission leker jyoti k hi room m ruk jata h or apni gudiya ka hath tham rote hue bola.
Karan :- mujhe maaf kerde meri gudiya , teri is halat k jimedar tera ye bhai h , na hi m tujhe khudse dor jane deta or na hi teri ye halat hoti.
Yu hi kafi der karan jyoti ka hath thame rota rha , lekin karan or jyoti ka anutha prem to dekho behoshi jese nind m bhi jyoti ne apne bhai ki taklif mahasus ker liya, jisse uska dil taraf utha or wo bhai pukarte hue uth bethi.
Jyoti :- bhaiiiii
Karan ne jese hi jyoti ko hosh me aaya dekha to uski khushi ki sima na rahi.
Karan :- gudiya .
Or itna hi vo dono bol pate h or ek dusre k kaske gale lag jate h.
Jyoti :- bhai please apni gudiya ko please maaf ker do , mane aapka bahut dil dukhaya h , chahe to aap mujhe saja dedo , lekin please yu mat roiye naa bhaiya.
Karan rote hue :- tu maafi kyu mang rahi h gudiya , dil to mane dukhaya h tera apni gudiya ka , jiske kaaran aaj teri ye halat hui , please gudiya apne is bhai ko saja de gudiya saja de
Jyoti khud ko sambhalte hue :- bhai please aap shant ho jaiye , na hi aapki gudiya naraj h or na hi meri ye halat aapki vajah se hui h , aapko meri kasam.
Karan :- per gudiya ...
Karan isse aage kuch bol pata usse pahle hi jyoti ne uske hotho p apne hoth rakh diye or use kiss kerne lagi , kyunki wo ni chahti thi ki karan jo pahale hi usko is halat m dekh kafi taklif m h wo yu roker apni taklif or badhaye or in sab bato k liye ye jagah bhi sahi ni thi.
jyoti k pyar bhare kiss se karan shant hone laga or tabhi galti se karan ka hath jyoti k fracture hue hath se lag gaya jisse jyoti ki chikh nikal gayi.
Jisse turant karan ko jyoti ka ahasas hua tab jaldi se usne apni gudiya ko bad pe letaya, or pyaar se uska matha chum liya , tab jyoti ne jid kerke karan ko bhi apne sath leta liya or dono judwa ek dusre k sine lag sare gile shikwe dur Kerne lage, tabhi karan ko apni healing power ka dhyan aaya or turant usne jyoti k sir p hath rakh use use ker jyoti ko thik kerna chaha
Lekin aaj pata ni jyoti ko kya ho gaya tha , karan ki healing power ka bhi jyoti p koi asar na hua , jisse karan or jyada chintit ho gaya , lekin usne jyoti ko ye baat ni batayi kyunki wo use tension ni dena chahta tha
Abhi karan soch hi raha tha ki ye sab kya or kyu ho raha h tabhi achanak....
Aaj k liye bas itna hi.
Stay tuned
Jyoti heart patients hai...
Wahi aaj Jyoti aur karan ki powers kam nhi kr paa rahi h....
Lagta h ye sb rahu aur ketu kr rhe h.....
Anyway waiting for next update.....
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Aj jaldiii se update dena dear brother
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Location :- kabristan
Karan or mahadev jab aapas m baat ker rahe the or karan jab mahadev k samaksh apne sabhi dukho ko vyakt ker raha tha , tab use jara bhi abhas ni tha ki uski sabhi dukh bhari baate or uski pida mahadev k alawa koi or bhi sun raha tha ya yu kaho sun rahi thi.
Or ye baat mahadev bhi bhalibhanti jante the , or esa hona swabhavik tha bhala sansaar ka esa konsa rahasya h , konsi esi baat h jo bhala mahakal se chup sakti thi , or vese bhi samay thamne k bavjood bhi wo shaks normal thi , sab dekh sun pa rahi thi , uska kaaran bhi to mahadev ki hi to icha thi , lekin wo shaqs is baat se shayad anbhigya thi.
Aaiye dekhte h ki wo ladki kon thi , are ye ladki ka koi sharir hi ni tha , uske aar par saaf saf dekha ja sakta tha , yani ki ye to ek aatma thi , jo usi qabar k piche ek ped k piche mojud sab dekh rahi thi or sun rahi thi.
Na jane kyu jese jese karan ka dard or pida bhad rahi thi , vese us ankho se bhi nbahate nir ki gati badhti hi ja rahi thi, jinhe dekh k mano yu pratit ho raha tha ki uske ansu ni bah rahe balki uska dard or taklif uski ankho se bah rahi thi , mano jitna dard uske samne karan vyakt ker raha tha mahadev k.samne utna hi dard m wo thi.
Or jab karan bilakh k mahadev k charno m gir pada Us aatma se ek baar to raha na gaya , to uske kadam apneaap hi badh gaye karan ki or
Lekin agle hi pal use apne kadam rokne pade or uski ankho se vivashta k neer teji se bahane lage or vo jamin p ghutno k bal gir bilakh k rone lagi or kuch der vo yu hi roti rahi , asahay bhav se karan ko dekhte hue, lekin kuch der baad usne paya ki mahadev k sanidhya m karan ka man shant ho gaya h or ab vo apne dard or taklif se ubher ek fiki muskan hi sahi lekin muskura to raha h to , uske bhi ashru ki gati kam ho gayi or karan ki muskaan dekh uske chahre p ek dard bhari muskaan fel gayi.
Or mahadev se vartalap ker or aasma k sath karan ka prem dekh us atma k chahrd p ek dard k sath ek santosh bhAri muskaan thi.
Wo ye sab tabtak niharti rahi thi , tabtak karan or asma kabristan se bahar na chale gaye or fir wo bhi jese hi ji bhar karan or asma ko niharne k.baad jab wo bhi vaha se jane lagi to piche se uske kaano m ek aawaz padi jise sun kaya chonk gayi , or piche mud jinhe dekha to wo ghabra gayi.
Kyunki piche mahadev khade the , jo kafi gambhir (serious) najar aarahe the.
Wahi dusri or.
Karan apni gudiya ko apni baho m liye uske sath hi leta tha or uske gaalo ko prem se sahala raha tha or jyoti bhi itni taklif m bhi jitna ho sake apne bhai se chipak k leti hui thi , usne apne bhai ki ek bah ko apna takiya banaye hue , apne humsafar or apne bhaiya k sir m takiya banaye hue leti apne bhai ko nihar rahe thi or esa hi karan ker raha tha wo ek tak apni gudiya ko nihar rahe the
Tabhi karan ki najar jese hi jyoti k tan p padi to uski chote hath m fracture m or sir p lagi pati dekh karan ka dil pida se bhar utha , or uske ankho se neer bahane lage .
Jise dekh jyoti ghabra gayi.
Jyoti :- bhaiya ap ro kyu rahe ho , aapki gudiya se koi bhul hui kyaa
Karan pyaar se jyoti k gaal se :- bhul tumse ni gudiya tere is bhaiya se hui , meri hi vajah se meri ful si gudiya aaj is haal m h .
Meri hi galti thi jo mane bina tere se bina icha jane ki itna bada fesla liya , jiske kaaran tum maa se dur ho gayi , tu dur hui or usi dukh k kaaran hi tumhari ye haalat hui.
Jyoti :- bhai please aap mat roiye, jo hua usme aapki bilkul galti ni thi , aapne to apne kartavya ko nibhaya , m hi pagal thi jo aap se bevajah hi Ruth gayi , jabki m bhul hi gayi ki jo takleef mujhe maa se dur hone p ho rahi h , vo aapko bhi to ho rahi hogi , aapki sangini hoke bhi m apne ardhangh ka dukh or dard na samjh saki , ni samjh saki ki m to is nirnay k kaaran m hi dard m hu , lekin ye bhul hi gayi ki apne to kitne kathor hriday se kartavya nirvahan hetu ye nirnay liya hoga .
Ye bol jyoti bhi rone lagi , to karan taraf utha or khud k aasu bhul apni gudiya k ansu puch use shant karane laga.
Shant hone k baad jyoti prem se apne bhai ko samjhati h.
Jyoti :- bhai aap please shant ho jaiye , aap ye bhi to sochiye ager ye sab na hua hota to aaj un ladkio k sath na jane kya hota, aaj humari is jara si taklif ne kitni masum ladkiyo ki jindagi barbaad bachayi h.
Karan muskurate hue :- jhali kahi ki abhi khud hi bacho jese ro rayi thi , or ab shant hui to khud tayi ji ban k bade bhai ko sikha rahi h.
Jyoti masti kerte hue :- oh hello bade aap ni , badi m hu , wo bhi pure 5 min badi , samjha bandar.
Karan :- kya boli bandar , m bander to tu bhaisiya wo bhi moti wali.
Jyoti jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- kya bola m bhais , ruk tujhe m batati hu khujli wale bander .
Ye bol wo jese hi uske uper tut padne ko hui , lekin jese hi usne uthna chaha to dard se wo taraf uthi or gir padi .
Jyoti :- aaahhh bhaiiiiii.......
Jyoti ki chikh sun karan ghabra gaya or jyoti ko sambhal ker datte hue bola
Karan :- ek no ki pagal ladki h tu , ab bed se hili na to ek lagaunga.
Ye bol karan ne apna hath thappad jese banaya , gussa dikhate hue.
Jyoti masti se uski nakal kerte hue :- lagaungi ek .
Jyoti ki bachkani harkat se karan ki hasi chut jati h or wo ek chappat lagate hue
Karan uske baal khichte hue :- ek no ki jhali h tu.
Jyoti bhi masti k mood m thi :- ouch gande kahike,
Ye bol usne bhi karan k sir p ek tapli maar deti h.
Karan :- aah , chipkali maar kyu rahi h .
Ye bol usne bhi ek chapat laga di.
Jyoti :- kute shuruat tune ki thi n ki m
Ye bol jyoti ne karan k baal noch liye or karan ne bhi uski choti khichte hue bola
Karan :- or khatam bhi m karunga jungli billi.
Jyoti ye sun chidke :- kya bola jungli billi , ab dekho ye bili kya kerti h.
apne karan k hath m apne nakun ghupa deti h , jisse karan ki aah nikal. Jati h or jyoti hasne lagi .
Jyoti jibh nikal k use chidane lagi .
Fir shuru hui karan or jyoti ki pyaar bhari nok jhok.
Location :- kailash .
Mata parvati apne sthan p bethe bethe un dono bhai bahan ki nokjhok dekh mand mand muskura rahi thi .
Parvati maa :- kitna anokha rishta h in dono ka , kabhi ek dusre k bhai bahan ban ek dusre k prati sneh jatate h , kabhi ek dusre k mat pita swayam hi ban ek dusre ka khyal rakhte h , kabhi ek dusre k premi premika ban ek dusre k jivan prem ras ka sanchar kerte h or ab dekho ek dusree ke mitra ban kese is haalat m bhi titholi or nokjhok kerte hue ek dusre k man ka dukh santap ko mita rahe h.
Tabhi narad ji waha prakat hote h.
Naradaji :- jagat janni ko narad ka pranam , aapne bilkul satya kaha mata , or yahi anokha pan hi to in dono mahan aatmao ki is katha ko bhin banata h.
Parantu ye dekh ker bahut kasth hota h mata , jin bhai bahan ne aajtak kisi ka sapne m bhi ahit kerne ka bhi na socha , sadev satkarm or bhakti marg p adig rahe h , esa kerne k bavjood bhi in dono k jivan m ab tak sirf kasht or pida hi praapt hui h , esa kab tak chalega mata , kya jo bhai bahan sabke dukh mita ker sabke jivan m khushiya bharte h kya kabhi unke jivan m khushiyan ni aayengi mata.
Kya sabke sath nayay kerne wale dandnayak evam dand nayak k sath niyati kabhi nyay karegi .
Parvati mata :- avashya hoga devrishi, karan or jyoti k jivan m shighr hi uchit samay p itni khushiya aayegi ki wo apne pichle sare dukh dard ko swatah hi bhula bethenge or apne parivar k sath ek sukhmay jivan vyatit karenge.
Parantu.
Naradaji :- parantu kyaaa maatee.
Mata :-parantu ye devrishi karan or jyoti k jivan k khushiya avashya aayegi , parantu ye samay h pariksha ka.
Narad ji :- pariksha ? Ye kya kah rahe h mata , abhi putra karan ki abhi ek pariksha to samapt hui ni or dusri pariksha or saj h uske liye.
Parvati :- pariksha to karan k jivan abhin ang h de rishi , parantu ye samay jyoti ki pratiksha ka ni balki samay h uski shakti or ardhangini jyoti,
Ye bol mata sab narad ji ko sab batati h , jise sun narad ji chintit swar m bole.
Naradji :- yadi esa h to hume jyoti ko is tathay se avgat karwana hoga mata , tabhi to jyoti apni is pariksha m safal ho payegi or is sansaar ki raksha bhi tabhi hogi.
Parvati mata :- dhairya rakhiye devrishi, uska bhi bandobast abhi ho jayega.
Abhi mata ne abhi baat puri ki hi thi ki tabhi ek laal roshni wHa chamki or waha prakat hue.
Navraho m se ek h jo , jo manushy k man m garv or krodh ka niyantran kerte h , wo the .
Bhumi putra
Mangal dev.
Mangal dev hath jod :- bhumi putra mangal ka pranam swikaar kare mata.
(Naradjise) pranam devrishi.
Parvati mata ashish dete hue :- aaiye mangal dev aaj kailash ka marg kese bhul gaye.
Mangal :- mata kafi samay se aapke or prabhu mahadev k darshano ki icha man m uth rahi thi , bas isliye mata , aapke darshan to ho gaye , parantu prabhu kahi najar ni aarahe.
Mata parvati :- parantu mahadev to kisi avashyak karya se kahi gaye h mangal dev
Mangal dev udaasi m :- koi baat ni mata m fir kabhi aajaunga.
(Hath jod ) aagya de mata
Ye bol mangal dev waha se anter dhyan hone wale the ki tabhi mata parvati boli.
Mata parvati :- thahriye mangal dev , apne lok prasthan kerne se purb kya aap humara ek karya karenge.
Mangal dev hath jod :- aagya dijiye mata.
Mata parvati fir mangal dev ko apna karya mangal dev ko batati h , jise sun mangal dev saharsh swikar kerte hue, waha se anterdhyan ho gaye
Naradji :- narayan narayan ! Mata aapne bahut uchit kiya mangal dev ko yah karya deker parantu mata is karya k liye mangal dev ko kasht kyu diya ye karya to aap mujhe bhi somp sakte the.
Parvati mata :- aapka kahana bhi uchit h devrishi, parantu satya to ye bhi h na narad ji ki jo prabhav mangal dev ka h wo aap to ni naa.
Ye bol mata muskurane lagi.
Naradji mata ki muskurahat dekh sab samjh gaye or khushi se bole.
Narad ji :- narayan narayan ! Dhanya ho aap or dhanya aapki lila mata .
Ye bol naradji bhi mata se agya le waha se prasthan ker liye.
Wahi dusri or
Wo aatma mahadev ko apne samaksh yu gambhir dekh ghabra gayi .
Mahadev us aatma ko yu ghabraya dekh mand muskurahat k sath shant swar m bole .
Mahadev :- shant ho jao putri , tumhe humse ghabrane ki jarurat ni , tum jesi pavitra or sachi aatma ko kisi se ghabrana ni chahiye putri.
Mahadev k shant swar ko sun ker us aatma ki ghabrahat kam hui.
Aatma :- jesa aap kahe mere malik mere parvartikar
Mahadev :- ye kya putri ye hume tum kis naam se pukar rahi ho , hum to shiv h , tum hume apne khuda apne parbrahmk naamo se kyu sambodhit ker rahi ho.
Mahadev k ye prashna sun wo aatma has padi or to mahadev bole.
Mahadev :- putri humne koi vyag to ni kiya fir tum had kyu rahi ho.
Atma :- gustakhi k liye muhafi chati ho mere malik , par kya karu aapke muh se ese baato ki ummid kabhi na ki thi.
Mere malik ye dharm , jati , ye sab to hum murkh aapke in bando ki ki gayi wo murkhta h , jisne ek khuda ek ishwer ko hi anek naamo anek sampradayon m baat diya h or aaj wo sab bevkoof usi k naam p aapas m lad rahe h .
Khud ko mazhab ka thekedar to wo ghoshit kerte h wo lekin bhul jate h ki majhab chahe koi sa bhi h , wo ek hi sikh deta h ki ishwer ek h or un sab majhabo ka ek hi sandesh ,ek hi paigam h wo h insaniyat , lekin bade hi khed k sath kahana padta h , insaniyat ka wo paigam , jinhe bhagwan Ram , shri Krishn , Goutam budh , saw Paigambar muhammad or Jesus Christ , ओर Nanak dev ji jese kitni hi mahan vibhuti ne samay samay p is duniya ko diya wo aaj bhul gayi h.
Bhul gaye h ki ishwer , parbrahm ye sab to keval naam matra h us shakti k (mahadev ki or hath fela ker ) yani k aap hi mere malik ho jo is sansar k srijan karta, palan or sanghatan h, is sansar topi rangmanch k durdharsh h aap
(Khushi se uski ansu) aap hi wo nirakar ParaBrahman ho jise aapke bande bade hi adab se parbrahm kahkar bulate h or aap hi sakar mahakal h jinhe aapke bhakt prem se mahadev kahkar bulate h
To ese m aapki ye bandi parabrahman kahke aapke aage sajda kare .
(Ye bol wo aatma dharti per beth )
Aatma :-
Ibadat kerti h
Ya fir m aapne mahadev ko apni astha prakat kerne hetu mantrocharan roopi pushp arpit keru
Ye bol us aatma ne apne hath jod mantrocharam kiya.
Mahamrityunjay mantra ka jaap kerti h
Baat to ek hi h na mere prabhu.
Us aatma k andaaz ko dekh mahadev atyant prabhavit hue.
Mahadev khushi se :- satya kaha tumne putri , naam bhale hi bhin ho ishwer ek hi h , m ek hi hu.
M hi sakar roop jab dharan karta hu to shiv kahalata hu .
Or m hi jab nirakar roop leta hu to.
parabhrahm kahalAta hu
Ye bol mahadev ne ankhe band ki or uske sath hi ek tez prakash charo or fel gaya or jAb prakash hatha to atma khushi se niche ghutno k bal beth gayi.
Kyunki samne mahadev nirakar parabrahm swaroop m the , us swaroop m jinhe us aatma ne apni puri jindagi apna aradhy mana tha
Kabristan m jese hi parbrahm prakat hue to kabra m leti sabhi ruhe kabro se nikal parbrahm k samne jhuk gayi.
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Karan or jyoti ki nokjhok jab ruki tabhi aditi bhi vaha checkup k liye.
Aditi :- are wah tumhe hosh aagaya gudiya.
Jyoti karan ki or sawaliya najar se dekhti h jese sab puch rahi ho ki he kon h tab karan sari baat jyoti ko batata h jise sun jyoti ko fir ek bar apne dono bhaiyo p khub naaz hota h
Fir aditi jyoti ka checkup kerte hue boli :- are wah jyoti tum to kafi strong girl ho , badi hi jaldi hi tum recover ker rahi ho , per ye to batao tumhe ye chote kese lagi
Karan baat sambhalte hue :- didi humari gudiya strong hi ni kafi bahadur bhi h ..
Fir karan aditi ko batata h ki usne kese us ladkiyo ko un gundo se bachaya bina shaktiyo ka jikra kiye , or ye bataya ki jyoti ne unhe jabtak waha roke rakha tab tak police waha tak ni pahunchi.
Aditi :- are wah tum to sach me badi brave ho jyoti , lekin tumhe khud ka bhi khyal rakhna chahiye kyunki bahaduri or laparwahi m bahut barik fark hota h.
Aditi ne karan k kahane p jyoti ko heart attack wali problem ni batayi or na hi jyoti ne ispe dhyan n diya , kyunki uske man m to kuch or hi sawal the jo ab wo karan se puchne wali thi.
Aditi k jane k baad jyoti phir karan k sang let gayi or boli.
Jyoti :- bhai ek sawal puchu , jhut to ni bologe.
Karan :- pagli aajtak tere bhai ne tere se kabhi jhut bola h, tu kahe to teri kasam khau
Jyoti :- ni bhaiya aapki gudiya ko ap per pura bharosa h , use kisi praman ki avashyakta ni .
Karan :- to puch na meri gudiya jo chahe wo puch.
Jyoti gambhir ho kuch der shant rahane k baad
:- bhai wo kaha h
Karan :- kon gudiya , haa humari bahane , unhe to mane choti mas or bhua k sath ghar bhej diya meri bahana.
Jyoti :- bhai mane choti maa ya bahano k baare m ni puch rahi hu.
Karan pyaar se uske galo p hatn :- to kiske baare m puch rahi h meri gudiya.
Tab jyoti ne wo naam liya jise karan ne puri tarah ander se hila k rakh diya , use jara bhi ummid ni thi ki jyoti ye naam legi , or usike sath uske man m gir bhay utpan hone laga jo use itne dino se sata raha tha or uski ankho k samne andhera sa chane laga
Jyoti apna sawal doharate hue :- bataiye naa bhai , kaha h.
Zoya
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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Location :- kabristan
Karan or mahadev jab aapas m baat ker rahe the or karan jab mahadev k samaksh apne sabhi dukho ko vyakt ker raha tha , tab use jara bhi abhas ni tha ki uski sabhi dukh bhari baate or uski pida mahadev k alawa koi or bhi sun raha tha ya yu kaho sun rahi thi.
Or ye baat mahadev bhi bhalibhanti jante the , or esa hona swabhavik tha bhala sansaar ka esa konsa rahasya h , konsi esi baat h jo bhala mahakal se chup sakti thi , or vese bhi samay thamne k bavjood bhi wo shaks normal thi , sab dekh sun pa rahi thi , uska kaaran bhi to mahadev ki hi to icha thi , lekin wo shaqs is baat se shayad anbhigya thi.
Aaiye dekhte h ki wo ladki kon thi , are ye ladki ka koi sharir hi ni tha , uske aar par saaf saf dekha ja sakta tha , yani ki ye to ek aatma thi , jo usi qabar k piche ek ped k piche mojud sab dekh rahi thi or sun rahi thi.
Na jane kyu jese jese karan ka dard or pida bhad rahi thi , vese us ankho se bhi nbahate nir ki gati badhti hi ja rahi thi, jinhe dekh k mano yu pratit ho raha tha ki uske ansu ni bah rahe balki uska dard or taklif uski ankho se bah rahi thi , mano jitna dard uske samne karan vyakt ker raha tha mahadev k.samne utna hi dard m wo thi.
Or jab karan bilakh k mahadev k charno m gir pada Us aatma se ek baar to raha na gaya , to uske kadam apneaap hi badh gaye karan ki or
Lekin agle hi pal use apne kadam rokne pade or uski ankho se vivashta k neer teji se bahane lage or vo jamin p ghutno k bal gir bilakh k rone lagi or kuch der vo yu hi roti rahi , asahay bhav se karan ko dekhte hue, lekin kuch der baad usne paya ki mahadev k sanidhya m karan ka man shant ho gaya h or ab vo apne dard or taklif se ubher ek fiki muskan hi sahi lekin muskura to raha h to , uske bhi ashru ki gati kam ho gayi or karan ki muskaan dekh uske chahre p ek dard bhari muskaan fel gayi.
Or mahadev se vartalap ker or aasma k sath karan ka prem dekh us atma k chahrd p ek dard k sath ek santosh bhAri muskaan thi.
Wo ye sab tabtak niharti rahi thi , tabtak karan or asma kabristan se bahar na chale gaye or fir wo bhi jese hi ji bhar karan or asma ko niharne k.baad jab wo bhi vaha se jane lagi to piche se uske kaano m ek aawaz padi jise sun kaya chonk gayi , or piche mud jinhe dekha to wo ghabra gayi.
Kyunki piche mahadev khade the , jo kafi gambhir (serious) najar aarahe the.
Wahi dusri or.
Karan apni gudiya ko apni baho m liye uske sath hi leta tha or uske gaalo ko prem se sahala raha tha or jyoti bhi itni taklif m bhi jitna ho sake apne bhai se chipak k leti hui thi , usne apne bhai ki ek bah ko apna takiya banaye hue , apne humsafar or apne bhaiya k sir m takiya banaye hue leti apne bhai ko nihar rahe thi or esa hi karan ker raha tha wo ek tak apni gudiya ko nihar rahe the
Tabhi karan ki najar jese hi jyoti k tan p padi to uski chote hath m fracture m or sir p lagi pati dekh karan ka dil pida se bhar utha , or uske ankho se neer bahane lage .
Jise dekh jyoti ghabra gayi.
Jyoti :- bhaiya ap ro kyu rahe ho , aapki gudiya se koi bhul hui kyaa
Karan pyaar se jyoti k gaal se :- bhul tumse ni gudiya tere is bhaiya se hui , meri hi vajah se meri ful si gudiya aaj is haal m h .
Meri hi galti thi jo mane bina tere se bina icha jane ki itna bada fesla liya , jiske kaaran tum maa se dur ho gayi , tu dur hui or usi dukh k kaaran hi tumhari ye haalat hui.
Jyoti :- bhai please aap mat roiye, jo hua usme aapki bilkul galti ni thi , aapne to apne kartavya ko nibhaya , m hi pagal thi jo aap se bevajah hi Ruth gayi , jabki m bhul hi gayi ki jo takleef mujhe maa se dur hone p ho rahi h , vo aapko bhi to ho rahi hogi , aapki sangini hoke bhi m apne ardhangh ka dukh or dard na samjh saki , ni samjh saki ki m to is nirnay k kaaran m hi dard m hu , lekin ye bhul hi gayi ki apne to kitne kathor hriday se kartavya nirvahan hetu ye nirnay liya hoga .
Ye bol jyoti bhi rone lagi , to karan taraf utha or khud k aasu bhul apni gudiya k ansu puch use shant karane laga.
Shant hone k baad jyoti prem se apne bhai ko samjhati h.
Jyoti :- bhai aap please shant ho jaiye , aap ye bhi to sochiye ager ye sab na hua hota to aaj un ladkio k sath na jane kya hota, aaj humari is jara si taklif ne kitni masum ladkiyo ki jindagi barbaad bachayi h.
Karan muskurate hue :- jhali kahi ki abhi khud hi bacho jese ro rayi thi , or ab shant hui to khud tayi ji ban k bade bhai ko sikha rahi h.
Jyoti masti kerte hue :- oh hello bade aap ni , badi m hu , wo bhi pure 5 min badi , samjha bandar.
Karan :- kya boli bandar , m bander to tu bhaisiya wo bhi moti wali.
Jyoti jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- kya bola m bhais , ruk tujhe m batati hu khujli wale bander .
Ye bol wo jese hi uske uper tut padne ko hui , lekin jese hi usne uthna chaha to dard se wo taraf uthi or gir padi .
Jyoti :- aaahhh bhaiiiiii.......
Jyoti ki chikh sun karan ghabra gaya or jyoti ko sambhal ker datte hue bola
Karan :- ek no ki pagal ladki h tu , ab bed se hili na to ek lagaunga.
Ye bol karan ne apna hath thappad jese banaya , gussa dikhate hue.
Jyoti masti se uski nakal kerte hue :- lagaungi ek .
Jyoti ki bachkani harkat se karan ki hasi chut jati h or wo ek chappat lagate hue
Karan uske baal khichte hue :- ek no ki jhali h tu.
Jyoti bhi masti k mood m thi :- ouch gande kahike,
Ye bol usne bhi karan k sir p ek tapli maar deti h.
Karan :- aah , chipkali maar kyu rahi h .
Ye bol usne bhi ek chapat laga di.
Jyoti :- kute shuruat tune ki thi n ki m
Ye bol jyoti ne karan k baal noch liye or karan ne bhi uski choti khichte hue bola
Karan :- or khatam bhi m karunga jungli billi.
Jyoti ye sun chidke :- kya bola jungli billi , ab dekho ye bili kya kerti h.
apne karan k hath m apne nakun ghupa deti h , jisse karan ki aah nikal. Jati h or jyoti hasne lagi .
Jyoti jibh nikal k use chidane lagi .
Fir shuru hui karan or jyoti ki pyaar bhari nok jhok.
Location :- kailash .
Mata parvati apne sthan p bethe bethe un dono bhai bahan ki nokjhok dekh mand mand muskura rahi thi .
Parvati maa :- kitna anokha rishta h in dono ka , kabhi ek dusre k bhai bahan ban ek dusre k prati sneh jatate h , kabhi ek dusre k mat pita swayam hi ban ek dusre ka khyal rakhte h , kabhi ek dusre k premi premika ban ek dusre k jivan prem ras ka sanchar kerte h or ab dekho ek dusree ke mitra ban kese is haalat m bhi titholi or nokjhok kerte hue ek dusre k man ka dukh santap ko mita rahe h.
Tabhi narad ji waha prakat hote h.
Naradaji :- jagat janni ko narad ka pranam , aapne bilkul satya kaha mata , or yahi anokha pan hi to in dono mahan aatmao ki is katha ko bhin banata h.
Parantu ye dekh ker bahut kasth hota h mata , jin bhai bahan ne aajtak kisi ka sapne m bhi ahit kerne ka bhi na socha , sadev satkarm or bhakti marg p adig rahe h , esa kerne k bavjood bhi in dono k jivan m ab tak sirf kasht or pida hi praapt hui h , esa kab tak chalega mata , kya jo bhai bahan sabke dukh mita ker sabke jivan m khushiya bharte h kya kabhi unke jivan m khushiyan ni aayengi mata.
Kya sabke sath nayay kerne wale dandnayak evam dand nayak k sath niyati kabhi nyay karegi .
Parvati mata :- avashya hoga devrishi, karan or jyoti k jivan m shighr hi uchit samay p itni khushiya aayegi ki wo apne pichle sare dukh dard ko swatah hi bhula bethenge or apne parivar k sath ek sukhmay jivan vyatit karenge.
Parantu.
Naradaji :- parantu kyaaa maatee.
Mata :-parantu ye devrishi karan or jyoti k jivan k khushiya avashya aayegi , parantu ye samay h pariksha ka.
Narad ji :- pariksha ? Ye kya kah rahe h mata , abhi putra karan ki abhi ek pariksha to samapt hui ni or dusri pariksha or saj h uske liye.
Parvati :- pariksha to karan k jivan abhin ang h de rishi , parantu ye samay jyoti ki pratiksha ka ni balki samay h uski shakti or ardhangini jyoti,
Ye bol mata sab narad ji ko sab batati h , jise sun narad ji chintit swar m bole.
Naradji :- yadi esa h to hume jyoti ko is tathay se avgat karwana hoga mata , tabhi to jyoti apni is pariksha m safal ho payegi or is sansaar ki raksha bhi tabhi hogi.
Parvati mata :- dhairya rakhiye devrishi, uska bhi bandobast abhi ho jayega.
Abhi mata ne abhi baat puri ki hi thi ki tabhi ek laal roshni wHa chamki or waha prakat hue.
Navraho m se ek h jo , jo manushy k man m garv or krodh ka niyantran kerte h , wo the .
Bhumi putra
Mangal dev.
Mangal dev hath jod :- bhumi putra mangal ka pranam swikaar kare mata.
(Naradjise) pranam devrishi.
Parvati mata ashish dete hue :- aaiye mangal dev aaj kailash ka marg kese bhul gaye.
Mangal :- mata kafi samay se aapke or prabhu mahadev k darshano ki icha man m uth rahi thi , bas isliye mata , aapke darshan to ho gaye , parantu prabhu kahi najar ni aarahe.
Mata parvati :- parantu mahadev to kisi avashyak karya se kahi gaye h mangal dev
Mangal dev udaasi m :- koi baat ni mata m fir kabhi aajaunga.
(Hath jod ) aagya de mata
Ye bol mangal dev waha se anter dhyan hone wale the ki tabhi mata parvati boli.
Mata parvati :- thahriye mangal dev , apne lok prasthan kerne se purb kya aap humara ek karya karenge.
Mangal dev hath jod :- aagya dijiye mata.
Mata parvati fir mangal dev ko apna karya mangal dev ko batati h , jise sun mangal dev saharsh swikar kerte hue, waha se anterdhyan ho gaye
Naradji :- narayan narayan ! Mata aapne bahut uchit kiya mangal dev ko yah karya deker parantu mata is karya k liye mangal dev ko kasht kyu diya ye karya to aap mujhe bhi somp sakte the.
Parvati mata :- aapka kahana bhi uchit h devrishi, parantu satya to ye bhi h na narad ji ki jo prabhav mangal dev ka h wo aap to ni naa.
Ye bol mata muskurane lagi.
Naradji mata ki muskurahat dekh sab samjh gaye or khushi se bole.
Narad ji :- narayan narayan ! Dhanya ho aap or dhanya aapki lila mata .
Ye bol naradji bhi mata se agya le waha se prasthan ker liye.
Wahi dusri or
Wo aatma mahadev ko apne samaksh yu gambhir dekh ghabra gayi .
Mahadev us aatma ko yu ghabraya dekh mand muskurahat k sath shant swar m bole .
Mahadev :- shant ho jao putri , tumhe humse ghabrane ki jarurat ni , tum jesi pavitra or sachi aatma ko kisi se ghabrana ni chahiye putri.
Mahadev k shant swar ko sun ker us aatma ki ghabrahat kam hui.
Aatma :- jesa aap kahe mere malik mere parvartikar
Mahadev :- ye kya putri ye hume tum kis naam se pukar rahi ho , hum to shiv h , tum hume apne khuda apne parbrahmk naamo se kyu sambodhit ker rahi ho.
Mahadev k ye prashna sun wo aatma has padi or to mahadev bole.
Mahadev :- putri humne koi vyag to ni kiya fir tum had kyu rahi ho.
Atma :- gustakhi k liye muhafi chati ho mere malik , par kya karu aapke muh se ese baato ki ummid kabhi na ki thi.
Mere malik ye dharm , jati , ye sab to hum murkh aapke in bando ki ki gayi wo murkhta h , jisne ek khuda ek ishwer ko hi anek naamo anek sampradayon m baat diya h or aaj wo sab bevkoof usi k naam p aapas m lad rahe h .
Khud ko mazhab ka thekedar to wo ghoshit kerte h wo lekin bhul jate h ki majhab chahe koi sa bhi h , wo ek hi sikh deta h ki ishwer ek h or un sab majhabo ka ek hi sandesh ,ek hi paigam h wo h insaniyat , lekin bade hi khed k sath kahana padta h , insaniyat ka wo paigam , jinhe bhagwan Ram , shri Krishn , Goutam budh , saw Paigambar muhammad or Jesus Christ , ओर Nanak dev ji jese kitni hi mahan vibhuti ne samay samay p is duniya ko diya wo aaj bhul gayi h.
Bhul gaye h ki ishwer , parbrahm ye sab to keval naam matra h us shakti k (mahadev ki or hath fela ker ) yani k aap hi mere malik ho jo is sansar k srijan karta, palan or sanghatan h, is sansar topi rangmanch k durdharsh h aap
(Khushi se uski ansu) aap hi wo nirakar ParaBrahman ho jise aapke bande bade hi adab se parbrahm kahkar bulate h or aap hi sakar mahakal h jinhe aapke bhakt prem se mahadev kahkar bulate h
To ese m aapki ye bandi parabrahman kahke aapke aage sajda kare .
(Ye bol wo aatma dharti per beth )
Aatma :-
Ibadat kerti h
Ya fir m aapne mahadev ko apni astha prakat kerne hetu mantrocharan roopi pushp arpit keru
Ye bol us aatma ne apne hath jod mantrocharam kiya.
Mahamrityunjay mantra ka jaap kerti h
Baat to ek hi h na mere prabhu.
Us aatma k andaaz ko dekh mahadev atyant prabhavit hue.
Mahadev khushi se :- satya kaha tumne putri , naam bhale hi bhin ho ishwer ek hi h , m ek hi hu.
M hi sakar roop jab dharan karta hu to shiv kahalata hu .
Or m hi jab nirakar roop leta hu to.
parabhrahm kahalAta hu
Ye bol mahadev ne ankhe band ki or uske sath hi ek tez prakash charo or fel gaya or jAb prakash hatha to atma khushi se niche ghutno k bal beth gayi.
Kyunki samne mahadev nirakar parabrahm swaroop m the , us swaroop m jinhe us aatma ne apni puri jindagi apna aradhy mana tha
Kabristan m jese hi parbrahm prakat hue to kabra m leti sabhi ruhe kabro se nikal parbrahm k samne jhuk gayi.
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Karan or jyoti ki nokjhok jab ruki tabhi aditi bhi vaha checkup k liye.
Aditi :- are wah tumhe hosh aagaya gudiya.
Jyoti karan ki or sawaliya najar se dekhti h jese sab puch rahi ho ki he kon h tab karan sari baat jyoti ko batata h jise sun jyoti ko fir ek bar apne dono bhaiyo p khub naaz hota h
Fir aditi jyoti ka checkup kerte hue boli :- are wah jyoti tum to kafi strong girl ho , badi hi jaldi hi tum recover ker rahi ho , per ye to batao tumhe ye chote kese lagi
Karan baat sambhalte hue :- didi humari gudiya strong hi ni kafi bahadur bhi h ..
Fir karan aditi ko batata h ki usne kese us ladkiyo ko un gundo se bachaya bina shaktiyo ka jikra kiye , or ye bataya ki jyoti ne unhe jabtak waha roke rakha tab tak police waha tak ni pahunchi.
Aditi :- are wah tum to sach me badi brave ho jyoti , lekin tumhe khud ka bhi khyal rakhna chahiye kyunki bahaduri or laparwahi m bahut barik fark hota h.
Aditi ne karan k kahane p jyoti ko heart attack wali problem ni batayi or na hi jyoti ne ispe dhyan n diya , kyunki uske man m to kuch or hi sawal the jo ab wo karan se puchne wali thi.
Aditi k jane k baad jyoti phir karan k sang let gayi or boli.
Jyoti :- bhai ek sawal puchu , jhut to ni bologe.
Karan :- pagli aajtak tere bhai ne tere se kabhi jhut bola h, tu kahe to teri kasam khau
Jyoti :- ni bhaiya aapki gudiya ko ap per pura bharosa h , use kisi praman ki avashyakta ni .
Karan :- to puch na meri gudiya jo chahe wo puch.
Jyoti gambhir ho kuch der shant rahane k baad
:- bhai wo kaha h
Karan :- kon gudiya , haa humari bahane , unhe to mane choti mas or bhua k sath ghar bhej diya meri bahana.
Jyoti :- bhai mane choti maa ya bahano k baare m ni puch rahi hu.
Karan pyaar se uske galo p hatn :- to kiske baare m puch rahi h meri gudiya.
Tab jyoti ne wo naam liya jise karan ne puri tarah ander se hila k rakh diya , use jara bhi ummid ni thi ki jyoti ye naam legi , or usike sath uske man m gir bhay utpan hone laga jo use itne dino se sata raha tha or uski ankho k samne andhera sa chane laga
Jyoti apna sawal doharate hue :- bataiye naa bhai , kaha h.
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