Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Friends aap logo ko lag raha hoga ki m humesha jhut bolta hu ot aap logo ki feelings k sath khelta hu per god sake ye sach ni h friends ye baat aap bhi jante ho ki mane apni puri shiddat se samay or 100% diya h story ko is mukam tak pahunchane m, lekin is samay mere halat ese h ki m vada kerke bhi pura na ker pane ko majbur hu, m subah 8 baje ghar se jata hu or raat ko 10 baje ghar aata hu kam we ese m aap bh samjh pa rahe honge ki m kitna majbur hu, so please aap se hath jod k vinti h ki mere sath bane rahe or vese hi support kare jese aj tak kiya, m aapse hath jod ke request kerta hu plz, aap logo se jayda mujhe is story ko pura kerne ki utskukta h kyunki ye bhale hi ek kalpmik ho, lekin ye kahi m kahi mere dardnaak past se judi hui h or bas yu samjh lo ki ek apne ki yaad m likhi gayi h ye katha , jo ab mere sath ni, isliye please ese story ko chod k na jaye ???

Specially ye msg aapke liye h RAAZ or AaRYaN8380 bhai

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Friends aap logo ko lag raha hoga ki m humesha jhut bolta hu ot aap logo ki feelings k sath khelta hu per god sake ye sach ni h friends ye baat aap bhi jante ho ki mane apni puri shiddat se samay or 100% diya h story ko is mukam tak pahunchane m, lekin is samay mere halat ese h ki m vada kerke bhi pura na ker pane ko majbur hu, m subah 8 baje ghar se jata hu or raat ko 10 baje ghar aata hu kam we ese m aap bh samjh pa rahe honge ki m kitna majbur hu, so please aap se hath jod k vinti h ki mere sath bane rahe or vese hi support kare jese aj tak kiya, m aapse hath jod ke request kerta hu plz, aap logo se jayda mujhe is story ko pura kerne ki utskukta h kyunki ye bhale hi ek kalpmik ho, lekin ye kahi m kahi mere dardnaak past se judi hui h or bas yu samjh lo ki ek apne ki yaad m likhi gayi h ye katha , jo ab mere sath ni, isliye please ese story ko chod k na jaye ???

Specially ye msg aapke liye h RAAZ or AaRYaN8380 bhai

Ok bro

 

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Final mega update part 1 kuch hi der m post hone wale h bhai, bacha hua bhag itna bada h ki 2 mega update m hi cover ho payega, isliye first mega update m kuch hi der m post ker raha hu

 

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update no :- 200 part 1 (mega update)
Vp or uska bhai kahi or ni kailash pe achuke the ya yu kaho bandhi banake laye gaye the, or esa kerne wale or koi ni sakshakt devadidev mahadev the

Mahadev rosh or tanz bhare shabdo m unse bole.

Mahadev :- kai varsho pashchaat hi sahi, lekin ek baar fir swaagat h aapka.

Rahu or ketu.

Ji ha dosto vp or uska bhai or koi ni balki rahu or ketu the.

Ji ha dosto, wahi jagat ko pratadit kerne wale singhika putra swarbhanu k do bhag jinhone smudra manthan k samay chal se amrit pan kerne ka prayaas kiya tha bhesh badal ker, lekin isse pahale swarbhanu kamyab ho hota, surya dev or chandra dev ki tikshan drishti us per pad gayi.

Or unhone narayan ko uski sachai bata di jo mohini roop me devo ko amrit pila rahe the.

Narayan ne jese hi swarbhanu p dhyan diya to turant wo apne asli roop m aagaye or apne sudarshan se swarbhanu rahu ka shish dhad se alag ker diya tha.

Lekin tabtak der ho chuki thi, kyunki amrit rahu k gale tak utar chuka tha, jis karan uske do bhag ho chuke the.

Or jab Swaebhanu ko pata chala ki uski ye halat surya or chandra dev k kaaran hui h to uski gusse ki koi sima na rahi or wo surya or chandra ko khane ko bhage tab mahadev ne hi unhe roka or unhe graho ki upadhi deker navgrah me shamil kiya.

Lekin navgraho m se ek hoker bhi kabhi vo devo k sathi na ban sake or unke man m devo k prati grihna hi rahi, wo bhi khaskar narayan or shani se, kyunki indomo k kaaran hi indono ki ye halat hui.

Small introduction

Rahu urf saya :- swarbhanu ka shish ka hissa jo narayan k chakra se alag hua tha wo rahu kahalaya, ye navgraho m se ek chaya grah h, or sath m amrit pan k kaaran amar bhi, iska swabhaav bhi esa hi, ager ye kisi p mehrbaan ho jaye to use raja bana deta h or yadi uske piche hath dhoke pad jaye to use barbadi ki akhri sima tak dhakel deta h, lekin swal ye tha ki rahu jesa shaktishali grah ek saye k roop m kyu the or karan se unki kya dushmani, iski kuch shaktiya to Ap dekh hi chuke h or ek sabse khatarnaak shakti jisse dev tak ni bach sakte wo aage pata chalegi.

Ketu urf vp :- ji ha dosto vp yani ki kaalbhanu ka pita or koi ni ketu hi h, rahu ka wo dusra bhag jo sirf swarbhanu ka dhad h, kahane ko to ye or rahu do alag alag grah h, prantu do ho ker bhi ye ek hi ih is kaaran kaalbhanu in dono ka beta h, shakti m rahu samman, parantu bal se jyada ye apni budhi se kaam leta h or ye kitna shatir h ye to aap padh hi chuke h abhi tak ki kahani m.


Rahu apni Oversmart tune me :- pranam mahadev, itne varsho pashchat aapke darshan ka sobhagya pa hum dono to dhany hue, parantu swagat ye naya tarika aapka hume thoda kum hi ras aaya,

Tabhi shani pragat hue or bole.

Shani :- wo kya h na rahu dev, av guru mahadev ne bhi vyakti k anukool swaagat ka tarika apnana sikh liya h.

Ketu (vp) :- oh to aap bhi yaha h karmfal data, m janta hi tha esa karya keval aap hi ker sakte ho, chal se hume yaha lane k piche kya prayojan h aapka.

Mahadev :- chal kerne ka prayas to tum dono ne kiya h rahu or ketu, karan or samraat k madhya ho rahe yudh m humse praapt divya shakti ka upyog ese grihnit or kayaro wale kaam m kerke.

Humne tumhe pahale bhi chetaya tha ki ye kaliyug h or isme hum devo ka insaano se yudh ya prahar evam apna prabhav dalna varjit h, bhutkaal me tumhare kiye gaye karmo ka dand tum ab tak bhugat bhi rahe ho rahu, dev hote hue bhi is chaya roop m rahaker bhi parantu fir bhi tum na mane.


Ji ha dosto rahu ki ye halat mahadev ne hi ki thi, parantu rahu ne esa kya kiya tha bhutkaal m wo to aage hi pata chala tha.

Rahu :- kesa chal mahadev, humne pahale bhi kaha tha ki humne jo kiya na hi wo chal tha or na hi niyamo k virudh, apitu wo sab humne apne adhikaar shetro m rahate hue kiya, jise aapne niyam virudh karar ker hume esa ker diya or ketu ko patal lok tak simit ker diya, lekin fir bhi hum aapka samman kerte hue mon rahe.

Ketu :- Parantu aapse esi ummid n thi mahadev ki aap bhi vishnu ki bhanti ho jaoge.

Shani :- kahana kya chahte ho ap ketu.

Vp :- vahi shani dev jo aap bhali bhanti samjhte hue anjan ban rahe h, mera sanket us naina ki or h, jiske janm ka rahasya aapne apni maya se humse, yani ki navgraho k abin ang se bhi chupaya.

Ye chal ni to or kya h mahadev , jabki aapne hi hume ye adhikaar diya tha ki is sansaar m hum navgrah dwara hi mritylok k prani k jivan kesa hoga, vo nirdhaarit hoga, lekin aapne bas in devo k hit k kaaran humare adhikaro ka atikraman kiya.

Shani :- mahadev per ilzam lagane se purv itna jan lijiye ketu, mahadev keval sangharkarta ni is sansaar k nirmaata bhi h, isliye is sansaar k pratyek bhag pratyek pad se jude kisi bhi fesle ko leme k liye unhe kisi ki anumati ki avshyakta ni h.

Or aapko itna dukh kyu ho raha h naina k janm ka aapko bodh na hona ka, isliye taki aap phir se wo sab na ker pane k liye, jiske kaaran aapki ye dasha h.

Rahu apne hathiyaar nikal gusse se :- apni sima m raho shani dev.

Shani bhi apne dand ko bulate hue : ye hi baat m tumse kah raha hu, waqt rahate hue apni bhul ka praayshchit ker apni sima m aajao, anyatha.

Kher inhe baate ya yu kaho bato ka dwand kerne dete h or chalte h apne hero ki team ki or.

Location :- ranbhumi

Preety ne jese hi savitri yani k apni maa k pet m talvaar ghopi to vo ek jordaar chikh k sath apne asli roop m aagayi, jo or koi ni kubdi thi, jisne chadm vesh dharan kiya hua tha preety ko chalne k liye samraat k adesh p.

Samraat jo mrityu shaiya p apni ankhri sanse gin raha tha, yamraj utsuk ho kisi bhi shan waha pahuchne wale the usko nark yatra p le jane ko.

Samraat :- asmbhav mere maya pash se tum kese nikli, ek tritiya hoker trittya samraat k jaal vash se bahar kese aayi.

Preety vijay muskan k sath :- bahar to jab aati jab m vash m hoti, mane to bas ek chota sa khel khela aapke sath mere pyare so called pitaji, taki sampoorn tritya banker is trishastra ka sandhan kerme ki shakti arjit ker saku, aapkoo bura to na laga na .

Ji ha dosto preety Kabhi samraat k vash m thi hi ni usne bas sirf natak kiya tha taki wo apni sampoorn shaktiyo ko hasil ker sake jisko pane k baad hi usme trishastra ka wo use ker sake, parantu sawal ye tha ki wo kese samraat k mayapash se bachi kese.

Samraat :- dhoka dhoka kiya h tune mere sath , ek tritya ho ke apne raja k sath gaddaari kerne wali kul drohi, ek beti ho k apne baap ka vadh kerne wali pitra drohi dhikaar h tujhpe.

Preety :- ab mahasus hua na tumhe kesa lagta h jab koi apna dhoka deta h, ab mahasus hua kisi ka vishwas todne ka kesa sila milta h, ye dhoka ni samraat tumhare purane paapo ka karmfal h jo tumne na jane kitne masum logo ki jan leke or kitni ablao ka chal se shil bhang kerke kiya.

Ye us pida or us athah pida ka hi shrap tumhe h jo tumne us maa ko di uske ajanme balak ko marker di.

(Or aage badh ker trishastra ko usko sine or ander m ghopte hue gusse )

Ye dand h us vishwasghat ka kamine jo tune meri maa k sath kiya tha chal se unko nark se bhi battar jindagi m dhakelne k li.

Ye bolte hue preety ki ankho m ansu aa gaye the, kyunki bhale hi aaj uski maa ka doshi unka hatyara bhale hi uske samne apni jan ki bhik mang raha tha, per is sach ko bhi jhutlaya ni ja sakra tha ki wo preety ka pita bhi tha, jis kaaran jitni khushi use samraat ko marne m ho rahi thi, usse jyada dard or dukh ka use ahasas ho raha tha apne pita pe.

Veer apni premika ki vidambna ko bhali bhanti samjh raha tha, isliye wo aage bhad ker preety.

Veer :- preety meri jaan m samjh sakta hu tumhari vidambana ko, chahe kese bhi ho lekin ye tumhare pita h, lekin aaj jo inke sath jo bhi hua h wo inke karmo ka fal h, shri krishna kahate h ki yadi dharm ki raksha k liye hume yadi apno se bhi yudh kerna pade to sankoch ni kerna chahiye, or vese bhi ab tumhare pita apne karmo ka dand pa chuke h, isliye ab mukt kero inhe is paap yoni se, inhe mukti do.


Veer ki baat samjh preety ne us or dekha to paya ki samraat ki ankho m bhi ashru the jo shayad Pashchatap k the, kyunki apne ant samay p hi sahi lekin usko apne paapo ka ahasas ho chuka tha, ahasas ho chuka tha ki jav koi apna hi hume dhoka de to kesa lagta h.

Samraat :- veer sahi kah raha h beti mujh jese papi ko marne m sankoch mat kero beti, mere sath jo ho raha h (khaste hue) wo mere papo ka hi phal h, nast kerdo mujhe or meri shaktiyon ko putri jiske kaaran m apna sab kuch gawa k bhi anjan raha, mujhe mukti dedo putri is papi sharir se jiske dwara m apne hi prem ka gala ghot vishwasghaat ker use marne k liye choda , mukt ker do apne is papi pita ko beta taki wo apni galti ki shama mang se apni dharmpatni us mahan sati , yani tumhari maa se beti , mukt ker do beti m tumhare aage hath...

Ye bol samraat uske aage hath jodne laga, jise dekh preety ka or bhi bura haal ho gaya or use or apne pita ki esi halat n dekhi gayi or usne apne hath p ek cut lagaker khun nikal trishastra p dala or samraat k hriday m ghop diya chikhte hue.

Samraat ek chikh k sath santushti bhari muskaan k sath.

Samraat :- maafi k liye bahut bahut shukriya beti.

Ye bol samraat ne apne netra bhi sadev sadev k liye band ker liye.

Preety rote hue chilayi :- niiiiii.....


Or vo kafi der tak fut fut k rone lagi, naina ne use sambhalne k liye aage bhadi per veer ne use roka or kuch der preety ko rone de uski man ki sari bhadas nikal lene ko kaha, taki uske man ko shanti mil sake.

Kafi der rone dene k baad veer or preety aage bhad k preety ko sambhalne aate h tab preety dono ko ek sath gale laga boli.

Preety ek badi bahan k lahaje m naina se rote hue hi:- dekh choti manw kaha tha na ki m is samraat ko marke bhua ko aajad keraugi, dekh mane vo pura kiya, ab to manti h na apni di ko.

Naina rote hue hi :- ha di aapne apna vada sach m pura kiya, ap sach m duniya ki best di ho, love u so much di.

Ye bol vo or bhi kaske preety k gale lag gayi, or preety.

Preety rote hue

:- love u to mera bacha

Veer :- are sali sahiba aap bhi kya apni di k sath rone beth gayi, ulta to Apko samjhana chahiye ki ye to kushi ka samay h aJ dharm ki adharm p vijay hui h, aunty (preety ki maa) ko nyaay mila h or sabse badi baat aab prerna aunty ka bhi aajad kerwane jana h to kab tak ese rote rahoge.

Karan :- veer sahi kah raha h bhabhi, m aapko samjh sakta hu ki apno ko hi dand dena kitna dukhdayi hota h, samne wale se jyada pida hume hoti h, lekin niyati m jo hota h wo ho ker hi rahata h, or vese bhi ab to apke pita ko ek pap yoni se mukti mili h ese me aapko yu rona shoba ni deta.

Naina jo karan ki baate sun rahi thi usse control ni hota or vo chikhte hue bolo.


Naina :- meri di ko kya kerna chahiye kya ni vo use tumse janne ki jarurat ni h mr karam or vese bhi ek hatyara kya samjhega apne ko khone ka dukh kya hota h.

Naina ki ye baat karan ko chub gayi, kyunki usne to jyoti k baad sabse karibi ko to bachpan m hi kho diya tha, yani ki apni maa ko, or naina ki is baat se vahi dard bhari smritiya uske samne aagayi


Naina wahi n rukte hue :- or hoga bhi kese ek hatyare ko bhala kon pyaar karega, shayad tumhe kabhi kisi ka shaswat prem mila hi ni, isiliye to tum itne krur ho ki mere bhai ko bina apraadh k maar dala kyunki wo ek asur tha.

Are mujhe to lagta h ki ager yadi koi tumhara apna hua bhi hoga to tum khud hi use kha gaye honge hathyare kahike.

Naina k katu shabdo ne karan k hriday ko chali kerke rakh diya tha, jo dard usne aaj tak badi mushkil se apne ander dafmaye the aJ naina k shabdo ne fir se un ghavo ko hara ker diya tha.

Wahi jyoti bhi apne bhai ki pida ko bhali bhanti mahasus ker pa rahi thi, use naina pe itna gussa aaraha tha ki wo uska katl tak ker sakti thi, lekin usne first importance di apne bhai ko sambhalne ki jo wo uske hath ko kaske thamke apni urja se ker rahi thi.


Preety gusse se :- naina ye kya bakwas keri ja rahi ho, tum bilkul ni janti jinse tumne aaj esi badtamiji sw baat ki h unke kaaran hi aaj ...

Naina :- jo bol rahi hu sach hi bol rahi hu di, ye dono bhai bahan humare hiteshi ni shatru h, hatyare h samar bhai k, pata ni kis manhoos ghadi m inse mulakaat hui, are m to kahati hu ki....

Preety guse se chilate hue :- bas ek shabd or ni sunnungi ike khilaaph m, tum janti bhi ho inka kitna bada ahasan h humpe, yu kaho aaj ki vijay ka shrey yadi kisi ko jata h to or kini ko ni balki karan bhai or jyoti di ko hi jata h.

Ye bol preety shuru kerti h apni vo kahani jiski vajah se vo kamyab ho payi apne mission p.

Darasl jis raat kubdi preety se milne aayi thi uske jane k baad jyoti ne preety ko akele m chat p bulaya tha or sath m baba ko bhi jinhone hi preety ko bataya tha ki yadi use samraat ko marna h to pahalr use apni sampoorn shakti arjit kerni hogi, tabhi wo trishastra ko use ker payegi, tab jyoti ne hi ye natak kerne ka plan banaya jiske liye preety man to gayi lekin uske man m ek shanka thi.

Preety :- per di m ye sab kese hoga, i mean samraat k mayajaal se m kese bachungi, kya mujhme wo shakto h

Jyoti :- vo shakti to aapke pass kabse h bhabhi.

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Veer :- konsi shakti preety .

Karan :- wahi shakti veer jo is sansaar ki sabse pavitra shakti h, yani ki prem ki.

Jara dhyan se dekho bhabi ko.

Tab veer ne preety ko dekha to chonk gaya kyumki ab use preety k ander uska roop najar aaraha tha , jo use preety saman hi prem. Ker bethi thi, per galat tarike se use hasil kerne ki chah me use balidaan dena pada, yani ki vrushali ka.

Veer vrushali ko dekh thoda sa emotional ho :- vrushali.

Vrushali :- ha veer ji m, m bhale hi sadev samraat k khilaaf rahi thi, lekin sach to ye tha ki m bhi paap karmo m usse kam na thi, usika mujhe dand bhi. Mila, jiske kaaran m aapko pa ni saki.

Lekin kisi vidvan ne kaha h na veer ji humesha pyaar ka arth pana hi ni hota, vo m bhali bhanti samjh chuki thi, isliye mame deh tyagne se purv mane kasam li thi ki bhale hi m apke pyaar ko na pas saki parantu apni is bahan (preety) k prem p kabhi aanch naa ane dungi, kyunki m. Bhale hi aapke prem k layak na thi, kyunki ye adhikar sirf preety bahan ka tha or is prem ki raksha ki kasam k kaaran hi m aajtak aap sabke sath rahi


Ji ha dosto preety samraat k vash m isliye ni aasaki kyumki uske sath vrushali ka sath bhi tha jo khud samraat se shaktishali rah chuki thi, jo baat veer k batane k kaaran jyoti bhali bhanti janti thi.

Vrushali ka prem dekhker veer ki ankho m bhi ansu asgaye or vo bola.

Veer :- tum sach m dhanya ho vrushali, dhanya h tumhara niswaarth prem, lekin tumhare is prem k badle m tumhare liye kuch na de saka, iske liye m sadev tumhara apradhi hi rahunga vrushali.

Vrushali veer k ansu pochte hue use samjhati h.

Karan aage badh ker :- veer ne bilkul sahi k aP dhanya h vrushali, or dhany h aapka niswaarth prem , jisko darsha aapne prem ki ek anuthi paribhaasha ko janm diya is sansaar ko.

Isliye m karmfal data shami ka ansh karan aapko aapke is mahan karm ka puraskaar dete hue aapki or bhabhi ki aatma ko ek kerta hu jiske kaaran veer k prem ko aap bhi utna pa sakogi jitna preety bhabhi.

(Preety se) aapko isme koi aitraaj to ni bhabhhi.

Preety na m gardan hitate hue khusi khusi permission deti h.

Karan tabhu apne hath aage ker ek roshni dalta h vrushali or preety p jiske sath hi kuch hi shano m vo dono ek ho gayi or samne aaya preety ka ek anokha roop jisme uska chahra to vesa hi tha parantu ab uski ankhe vrushali jesi hari or baal lambe ho chuke the.

Naina ne jab ye kahani suni to vo mon to ho gayi parantu use apne shabdo p koi pavhtava n tha.

Karan :- veer ab samay aagaya h ki hume chal ker naina ki mataji ko ajaad kerwana chahiye, kyunki abhi hume bahut se kaam bhi kerne h jese samrast samet sabka antim sanskaar kerna

Naina :- koi jarurat ni h tumhe aanr ki m apmi. Maa ko khud hi aajad kerwa lungo.

Preety dantte hue halke se :- choti.

Naina muh bana :- ok fine chalo.

Fir naina karan or baki sab chal pade mahal ki or, karan ko trijata ne rasta bata diya tha, jiske anuklol vo mahal ki pashchim. Disha m jaker ek divaar k samne ruk gaya.

Preety :- ye hum. Kaha aagaye karan bhai aage to rasta band h


Karan :- kabhi kabhi vo bho sach ni hota bhabhi jo ankho se dikhayi de


Ye bol karan ne apna hath aage kiya, jiske sath hi uske hatho se ek roshmi nikal divar se takrayi or agle hi. Pal divar gayab ho vaha ek darwaja aagaya

Karan :- lijiye bhabhi mil gaya rasta aaiye chaliye .

Ye bol karan jese hi darwaje ko kholne ko hua uska dil joro se dhadkme laga or esi anubhuti hone lagi, jese ab vo use pame hi wala h jiske liye vo varsho se tadfa h.

Esa hi kuch haal jyoti or naina ka bhi tha, naina to is anubhuti ko samjh pa rahi thi, kyunki usko to malum tha ki ander uski ma h lekin karan or jyoti is baat se abhi tak anjan the, vo abhi tak isi anubhuti ko samjhne k dwand m uljhe hue the , lekin naina se raha na gaya.

Usne jaldi se darwaja khola or ander ki or chilate hue bhagi.

Naina nam ankho se:- maa, maaa kaha ho aap dekho m. Aagayi maa, aapki beti aapko lene aagayi.

Tabhi ek aawaaz uske or baki sabhi k kano m. Padi, jise sun naina k to khusi ki sima na rahi, lekin karan or jyoti k vajud tak ko usne hila ker rakh diya, kyunki ye wo aawax thi, jise wo sapne m bhi pahachan

Aawaz :- m yaha hu meri bachi.

Naina ne khusi se or karan or jyoti herani se us or dekhte h to pate h ki ek orat bagiche m hi mojud shiv mandir m bethi puja ker rahi h or unka chahra unki or h

Naina to khushi se usi or dodi lekin karan Or jyoti to puri tarah se hil chuke the.

Karan man me :- ni ye asambhav h, ye sirf mera baham h.

Jyoti mab me karan se :- ni ye brahm ni h bhaiya, kyunki jo aap mahasus ker rahe ho vo hi m bhi.

Karan :- parantu ye sab kese gudiya, mujhe kuch samjh ni aaraha.

Jyoti :- mujhe bhi bhai.

Wahi naina apni ma ki aawaz ko sun us taraf dodi apni maa k gale lagne ko or jese hi wo najdik pahunchi us orat yani ki naina ki ma prerna urf asha ghumi or jhat se naina ko apne aagosh me leliya.

Jiske kaaran na to naina k aanand ki sima na rahi or naa hi karan or jyoti ki herani ki, jab unhone naina ki maa ko yani ki apni maa ko dekha.

Back to kailash.

Shani or rahu ketu ki bahas ab yudh tak pahunch chuke the.

Rahu :- ketu is shani se bahas kerne ka koi fayda ni, aaj iska kam hum sadev sadev k liye tamam ker hi dete h.

Ye bol wo apne hatyar nikal liye or shani bhi apne dand ka ahvahan kerte gue bole.

Shani :- apni ye icha bhi aaj puri kerne ka prayas ker lo.

Ketu chilate hue :- ni chodunga tujhe shani..
. Ye bolte hue tez garjana k vp ne humla kerne hi wala tha ki tabhi mahadev k krodhbhare swar un sab kamp gayw.

Mahadev :- baasss mon ho jao tum sab.

Mahadev k krodh se bhala kon anbhigyw ni, rahu ketu to agle shan hi unhone apne shastra vapas lota liya or gardan niche ker li.

Mahadev unko datte hue :- itne sammanniya pado p ho ker bhi yu balko ki tarah ladte lajja ni aati aapko.

Rahu :- lajja to apko aani chahiye mahadev, aapne bhi ab vishnu ki bhanti hum asuro k sath chal kerna aarambh ker diya.

Shani :- apni maryada m raho rahu, tum bhul rahe ho ki tum kinke sath abhadtrata kerne ka prayaas ker rahe ho rahu.

Ketu :- bhul to mahadev chuke h us vachan ko jo unhonne humare putra ko diya tha ki wo humare kisi bhi mamle m hastakshep ni karenge, lekin us vachan k ulat unhonne na kevak apna vachann bhang kiya, balki navgrah smiti se naina ka janm chupa ker niyam bhi bhang kiye h.

Isliye ab inka koi adhikaar ni h humko or der tak is dand roopi bandhan m rakhne ka, isliye mahadev mukt kijiye hume mahadev.

Mahadev kuch sovh :- Shayad tum sahi kah rahe ho rahu, chahe kaaran koi bhi ho niyam to bhang hue h, isliye hum apni bhul ko swikaar kerte hue tumhe mukt kerte h is chaya sharir se.

Ye bol mahadec ne apna hath aage kiya , jiske sath hi rahu mukt ho apne asli roop me aagaya.

Rahu hadte hue :- akhir kar , akhir kar m mukt hua , haha shani kesa laga tumhe haar ka swaad, ab dekhna shani m tumhare us ansh ka jivan m esi agni laga dunga ki vo swayam apni mrityu ki bhik mangega.

Ye bol rahu or ketu waha se gayab ho gaye , shani unke jane k baada mahadev se bole

Shani :- ye aapne kya kiya aapne gurudev, rahu ko aajad kerne ka arth h ki.

Mahadev :- ki ab vo har vo karm karega jisse karan per sankat aaye, parantu mujhe vishwas h karan per shani ki vo un khatro se nipat hi lega or wese bhi rahu ko sahi marg per lane ka yahi ek rasta shesh tha, tum samjh rahe ho na putra m kya kahana chahata hu.

Shani shivji ki muskurahat k sath :- ha guru dev bilkul sahi kaha aapne, rahu ye soch ker khush ho raha h ki use dand se mukti mili, parantu satya to ye h ki vastvik dand chakra to ab aarambh hone wala h.


Mahadev :- aane wale samay m bhale hi karn ko kayi parikshao se nipatna pade, lekin ye abhi to karan k jivan m salo purani khoi khushi k lotne ka waqt h.

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Karan or jyoti ko apni ankho p vishwas ni ho raha tha, ki unki maa yani asha jinhe wo aaj tak mrit samjhte aaye the, jis maa k pyaar k liye wo aaj tak taras rahe the wo jivit unke ankho k samne thi.

Wo kafi der to is heran rahe or jab vo puri tarah sure hue ki ye asha hi to unki khushi ki sima na rahi, wo bhi aage bhad k apni maa k gale lag jana chahte the, lekin unke man m mojud sawalo or jhijak k karan wo ruke hue the.


Asha urf prerna gale lagaye hue naina :- meri bachi meri dulari aakhir tu aahi gayi, m janti thi ki tum ek n ek din jarur aaogi.

Naina khushi ki ansu rote hue:- haa m aa gayi maa, ab m apko kahi ni jane dungi, kahi ni.

Naina kafi der apni maa k gale lagi roti rahi khusi k ansu or asha bhi , fir jab asha ne naina ko sambhal apni najre uthayi or jese hi unki najar karan or jyoti p padi wo wahi jam gayi.


Karan or jyoti ne bhi jab apni maa ko apni or dekhta paya or unki najre apni ma se takrayi to wo jam se gaye.

Karan jyoti or asha tino ki ankho k samne wo anmol or mamta bhare pal ankho k samne aane lage, wo asha ka apne ankho ke dularo k sath khelte hue khud bachi ban jana, unke banaye us chote se jungle wale ghar m wo pyaar bhari masti, wo karan ko majak majak m ladki banana, wo pyarii mamta bhari dhun m bansuri baja k unko aanandit kerna or jab wo dono bhai bahan thak jate to us jhule pe pyaar se lori sunate hue sulana.

Jiske kuch pyaarw shabd abhi tak unke kano m gunj rahe the.

(Mata pe apni
Kerna bharosa
Na chodegi teri baiya
Tujhme hi m hu.
Mujhme hi tu .
Sang tere h teri
Maiya.
So ja pyaare raj dulare
Mukhda chume teri maiya)

Tino hi maa bete duniya ko bhul ek dusre ki ankho m jhankte hue aage bhad rahe the ek dusre ki or.

Asha ka hriday to tab harsh se garbit ho gaya ki is situation m bhi dono bhai bahan apne sanskar na bhule, unhone kuch bhi bolne se pahale apni maa k charan sparsh kiye.

Asha itna hote hue rok na payi or siskate hue unko utha bas itna bola.

Asha nam ankho se :- babu, gudiya.

Karan or jyoti khushi k ansu k sath :- maaaa

Or itna bol wo khus ko rok na paye or kaske yu apni maa k lipat gaye jese unhone apni maa ko choda to wo firse unhe chod k chali jayegi.

Asha ne bhi apne jigar k tukdo ko usi bhanti kaske lagaya hua tha , uski kosis yahi thi ki itne salo ki duri se jo wo mamta apne bacho p na luta payi, wo aaj wo isi shan ek sath lota de.

Aaj sirf karan or jyoti k liye ni balki pure sansar k liye khusi ka din tha, tridev jo aaj ek sath mojud the wo bhi karan or jyoti k liye khush the.

Brahama ji :- aakhir kaar karan ko uske satkarmo ka manchaha phal praapt ho hi gaya mahadev.

Narayan :- brahmdev ka kahna uchit h mahadev, isse badkar karan k liye kya puraskaar ho sakta h.

Mahadev :- puraskaar ni narayan ye to fal h karan or jyoti k satkarmo ka jo aaj unhone apni maa ko punah praapt kiya or aage jaker aaj ki ghatna hi karan ko sadev protsahit kerti rahegi or use apne marg se bhatkne se bachayegi.

Shani dev or Mata chaya ki bhi khush the or unki ankhe bhi nam thi.

Chaya :- akhir kar vo shan aahi gaya putra kitna sunder drishy h ye aaj varsho baad do santaane apni bichdi maa se mili h, ese shubh ghatna ko dekhna sobhagya h mata.

Shani :- aapme uchit kaha mata.

Shani karan or jyoti k liye khush the lekin sath me hi wo chintit bhi the aage hone wali ghatnao or naina k reaction ko leker. lekin apni chinta ka jikra unhone apni mata k samne ni kiya, kyumki wo rang m bhang ni dalna chahte the

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Karan or jyoti kafi der apmi maa k yu hi gale lage rahe, salo ki virah ki pida ko jhelne k baad ab vo hamesha yu hi apni maa k anchal m rahama chahte the, parantu esa kaha sambhav tha.

Unko kuch der baad ek aawz ko sun ye aalag hona pada, jo naina ki thi jo herani se ye sab dekh rahi thi.

Naina :- ye sab kya ho raha h, ye kya naatak h tum dono ka or maa ye aap kya ker rahi h, aapki beti to m hu na, fir bhi aap inhe ese kyu gale laga rahi ho jese ki ye aapki ki hi santaan ho.

Asha naina k gal ko sahalate hue :- tumhare sawal me hi tumhara jwab h beti, ab waqt aachuka h tumhe or lala or gudiya ko sachai ka pata chale.

(Naina , karan or jyoti ko ek sath dekhte hue ) ha beti mane inhe ek maa saman kyumki ye dono or koi ni beti balki meri pahali santane yani ki tumhare bade bhai bahan h.

Asha k in shabdo ne waha mojud sabhi per bomb foda, naina karan or jyoti ki to herani ki sima hi na thi, sachai ko jan ke, khasker naina ki to wo halat thi ki kato to khun ni.

Use vishwas na ho raha tha ki jinko unhone na jane kya kya na kaha, unka apman kiya lanchan lagaye or yaha tak janleva humla bhi kiya , vo or koi ni unke sage bade bhai or bahan the

Asha(Karan or jyoti se ) :- ha lala or gudiya, yahi satya h naina or koi ni tumhari choti bahan h.

(Apne tino bacho ko pyar se sahalate hue) m jantti hu mere bacho tumhare liye ye sab p vishwas kerna bahut mushkil ho raha h, parantu yahi satya h mere bacho tum tino sage bhai bahan ho mere pyare jigar k tukde ho tum tino.

Fir asha batana shuru kerti h unko wo sachai jaha se naina k janm ki kahani shuru hui.

Asha batati h ki us accident m jab ranvir car se bahar kuda tha, tab kisi tarah asha bhi bach k bahar aachuki thi, or ter k kinare pahunch

Lekin Asha apne pati ki sachai pata chal jaNe k baad pata chali to use bahut bada dhaka laga or wo khub fut fut ker royi or usne than liya tha ki wo ab apne bacho ko leker kahi dur chali jayegi , lekin niyati ko kuch or hi manjur tha.

Ketu yani vp ko jab is ghatna ka pata chala to usne turant samraat ko asha ki khubsurti ka lalach de use ked karane ka adesh dedala taki apni maa k virah m karan or jyoti bachpan m hi tut jaye or kabhi uske bete k khilaaf na uth sake.

Samraat jese hi ketu k aadesh pe asha k pas pahuncha to wo asha p mar mita or usne asha ko jabardasti le jane ka prayas kiya.

Parantu usse pahale hi shani dev vaha aaphunche or unhone samraat ko chakhma de waha se asha ko bacha k le gaye.

Or unhone asha ko samjhaya ki ab asha ka wapas ghar jana karan or jyoti k prano ko sankat m dalna tha, kyonki brahma k vardaan k kaaran shani jyada time tak use rok bhi ni sakte the.

Isliye use apne bacho se dur jana hi hoga, ye baat asha bhali bhanti samjh chuki thi isliye usne apne dil p pathar rakh jer ye fesla liya tha or usne apni pahachan badali or fir shani dev ne hi uske hath m wo jadui dhaga bandh pandit ji k ghar pahunchaya tha , kyunki wahi ek safe or uchiit jagah thi.

Or fir aaage ap jante hi h aap kya hua.

Asha apni kahani batate hue fut fut k rote hue boli :- mujhe maf ker do mere bacho, m tumhe us samy chod k chali gayi jab tumhe meri sabse jyada jarurat the, kitni buri maa hu na m. tum chaho to mujhe dand delo mere bacho , per mujhhe maaf ker do.

Karan or jyori apni maa ko rota n dekh paye or unko gale laga badi mushkil se ye samjhate h ki wo unse naraj ni h , use shant kerwane lage.

Asha :- sach m m duniya ki sabse khushnaseeb ma hu, jo mujhe itne samjhdar or itna prem kerne wali santan praapt hui

Asha naina se :- naina beti yaha aao kya apne bhai bahan k gale lagogi.

Naina kuch der to khadi rahi lekin fir wo karan or jyoti ki or aage bhadne lagi, karan ne bhi is ummid m bahe felayi ki uski choti bahan aakhir kar sachai janme k baad use gale jarur lagayegi.

Lekin naina ne karan k pas pahunch k vo kiya jiski ummid kisiko na thi.

Usne ek jordaar chanta karan ko rasid diya.

Naina chikhte hue :- kya socha tumne ki khun k rishte m hum ek hi maa ki santaane h to m tumhe maaf ker dungi bloody hathye.

Asha gusse se :- ye kya tamij h apne bade bhai sw baat kerne ki naina.

Naina :- bade bhai se ni ma ek hathyare k sath esa hi vyavahar uchit h, m ise kabhi bhai ni manungi kyunki ye hathiyara h hathyara mere samar bhai ka hathyara.

And u aaj jab ma mili to badi jaldi gale mile maa kerte hue, yadi itna hi pyaar tga ma se to itne salo tumhare ek shan bhi dil m maa ko khojne ki ya unke mrityu k rahasya ka pata lagane ki man me naa aayi, aati bhi kese ek no k dhongi jo thahre, kyunki tumhe maa se matlab to kabhi tha hi ni, or hoga bhi kyu jab tumhare pas wo sab tha jiska tum jese lalchi or matlabi insan ko icha rahati h.

Or ese ghatiya or matlabi rishto ko m kadapi swikaar ni karungi kabhi ni

Or ese hi usne apni badi bahan jyoti ko bhi bahut se katu shabd kah dale jisse un dono ka hriday chali chali ho chuka tba

Jo aajtak k bakiyo k diye ghavo se kayi guna adhik the kyunki ye ghanv unko unki sagi bahan ne hi diye the

Asha gusse se :- nainaaaaa.

Ye bol asha ne naina pe hath uthana chaha lekin karan ne use rok diya or yu ishara kiya jese bol raha ho ki ni maa meri choti ko mat maro.

Lekin iska ulta hi asar naina p ho gaya or wo rote huw hi waha se chali gayi.

Karan :- maa ye aapne kya kiya rula diya choti ko.

Asha :- to kya kerti beta dekha ni kese badtameezi se baat ker rahi thi tumse


Jyoti:- maa vo abhi bachi h or situation hi esi thi ki koi bhi ese react kerta, aapko choti ko datna ni chahiye tha.

Asha thoda mahol halka kerme k liye :, majak m unke kan. Pakdte huw- acha bachu, dono ko choti bahan mili ni ki chale apni maa ko dada dadi banke samjhanw

Karan or jyoti :- ouch mumma chodo dukta h.

Ye bol wo has pade or asha bhi, fir asha ne karan k kahne pe naina ko samjha bhula k layi or fir naina ne bhi ek baar aapas k jhagde ko side m rakh apni ma ki khusi k liye normal behave kiya or apne dosto se milvayi.

Fir jyoti boli

Jyoti :- maa chalo ab waqt aagaya h ki aap hum sab ghar wapas chale , ab humari khushiyo ka lotne ka samay aachuka h.

Asha :- ha meri bachi, per jane se purb m trinata amma se milna chahti hu taki aajtak jo unhome mera khayal rakha uske liye m unhe dhanyavaad ker saku.

Trijata ka naam sumte hi karan ka chahra latak gaya or usne nam ankho se yudh ka sampoorn varnan kiya, jab asha ko pata chala trijata na rahi to uski ankhe bahane lagi, kyunki itne salo m use trijata se lagav ho chuka tha, kahi n kahi trijata m use apni maa ki chavi najar aane lagi thi, lekin honi ko kon tal sakta tha.

Karan. Or uske dosto ne badi mushkil se asha ko shant kerwaya or fir karan ne yudh m mare gaye sabhi yodhao, kubdi, samar, trijata samet samraat ki chita teyar ki,

Braham muharat ki shubh ghadi m Samraat ko agni riti anusar bete ki jagah veer jo uska javai tha usne di preety k sath mil ker.

Karan ne trijata ko agni di or uski divangat aatma ko dhanyavaad kiya, uske sahyog k liye

Vahi samar ko agmi naina ne di, uski ankho m baar bar samar k sath bitaye pyare pal aarahe the, jisme usko ek bhai ka pyaar mila tha.

Naima man me :- bhai apni nainu ko maaf ker dijiyega ki vo aapki ralsha na ker payi, lekin aapki bahan kasam khati h ki wo aapke hathyare ko ni chodegi, chahe wo mera so called bhai hi kyu na ho.

Ye baat usne door khade karan ko ghurte hue kahi thi.

Fir subah hui jiske sath aaya sawan ka antim somwar jiskw sath samraat ki bhasm k sath puja ker asha ne apni pratigya puri ki or fir wo sab chal pade ghar ki or jaha or bhi kayi raaz aaj khulne wale the

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Vp or uska bhai kahi or ni kailash pe achuke the ya yu kaho bandhi banake laye gaye the, or esa kerne wale or koi ni sakshakt devadidev mahadev the

Mahadev rosh or tanz bhare shabdo m unse bole.

Mahadev :- kai varsho pashchaat hi sahi, lekin ek baar fir swaagat h aapka.

Rahu or ketu.

Ji ha dosto vp or uska bhai or koi ni balki rahu or ketu the.

Ji ha dosto, wahi jagat ko pratadit kerne wale singhika putra swarbhanu k do bhag jinhone smudra manthan k samay chal se amrit pan kerne ka prayaas kiya tha bhesh badal ker, lekin isse pahale swarbhanu kamyab ho hota, surya dev or chandra dev ki tikshan drishti us per pad gayi.

Or unhone narayan ko uski sachai bata di jo mohini roop me devo ko amrit pila rahe the.

Narayan ne jese hi swarbhanu p dhyan diya to turant wo apne asli roop m aagaye or apne sudarshan se swarbhanu rahu ka shish dhad se alag ker diya tha.

Lekin tabtak der ho chuki thi, kyunki amrit rahu k gale tak utar chuka tha, jis karan uske do bhag ho chuke the.

Or jab Swaebhanu ko pata chala ki uski ye halat surya or chandra dev k kaaran hui h to uski gusse ki koi sima na rahi or wo surya or chandra ko khane ko bhage tab mahadev ne hi unhe roka or unhe graho ki upadhi deker navgrah me shamil kiya.

Lekin navgraho m se ek hoker bhi kabhi vo devo k sathi na ban sake or unke man m devo k prati grihna hi rahi, wo bhi khaskar narayan or shani se, kyunki indomo k kaaran hi indono ki ye halat hui.

Small introduction

Rahu urf saya :- swarbhanu ka shish ka hissa jo narayan k chakra se alag hua tha wo rahu kahalaya, ye navgraho m se ek chaya grah h, or sath m amrit pan k kaaran amar bhi, iska swabhaav bhi esa hi, ager ye kisi p mehrbaan ho jaye to use raja bana deta h or yadi uske piche hath dhoke pad jaye to use barbadi ki akhri sima tak dhakel deta h, lekin swal ye tha ki rahu jesa shaktishali grah ek saye k roop m kyu the or karan se unki kya dushmani, iski kuch shaktiya to Ap dekh hi chuke h or ek sabse khatarnaak shakti jisse dev tak ni bach sakte wo aage pata chalegi.

Ketu urf vp :- ji ha dosto vp yani ki kaalbhanu ka pita or koi ni ketu hi h, rahu ka wo dusra bhag jo sirf swarbhanu ka dhad h, kahane ko to ye or rahu do alag alag grah h, prantu do ho ker bhi ye ek hi ih is kaaran kaalbhanu in dono ka beta h, shakti m rahu samman, parantu bal se jyada ye apni budhi se kaam leta h or ye kitna shatir h ye to aap padh hi chuke h abhi tak ki kahani m.


Rahu apni Oversmart tune me :- pranam mahadev, itne varsho pashchat aapke darshan ka sobhagya pa hum dono to dhany hue, parantu swagat ye naya tarika aapka hume thoda kum hi ras aaya,

Tabhi shani pragat hue or bole.

Shani :- wo kya h na rahu dev, av guru mahadev ne bhi vyakti k anukool swaagat ka tarika apnana sikh liya h.

Ketu (vp) :- oh to aap bhi yaha h karmfal data, m janta hi tha esa karya keval aap hi ker sakte ho, chal se hume yaha lane k piche kya prayojan h aapka.

Mahadev :- chal kerne ka prayas to tum dono ne kiya h rahu or ketu, karan or samraat k madhya ho rahe yudh m humse praapt divya shakti ka upyog ese grihnit or kayaro wale kaam m kerke.

Humne tumhe pahale bhi chetaya tha ki ye kaliyug h or isme hum devo ka insaano se yudh ya prahar evam apna prabhav dalna varjit h, bhutkaal me tumhare kiye gaye karmo ka dand tum ab tak bhugat bhi rahe ho rahu, dev hote hue bhi is chaya roop m rahaker bhi parantu fir bhi tum na mane.


Ji ha dosto rahu ki ye halat mahadev ne hi ki thi, parantu rahu ne esa kya kiya tha bhutkaal m wo to aage hi pata chala tha.

Rahu :- kesa chal mahadev, humne pahale bhi kaha tha ki humne jo kiya na hi wo chal tha or na hi niyamo k virudh, apitu wo sab humne apne adhikaar shetro m rahate hue kiya, jise aapne niyam virudh karar ker hume esa ker diya or ketu ko patal lok tak simit ker diya, lekin fir bhi hum aapka samman kerte hue mon rahe.

Ketu :- Parantu aapse esi ummid n thi mahadev ki aap bhi vishnu ki bhanti ho jaoge.

Shani :- kahana kya chahte ho ap ketu.

Vp :- vahi shani dev jo aap bhali bhanti samjhte hue anjan ban rahe h, mera sanket us naina ki or h, jiske janm ka rahasya aapne apni maya se humse, yani ki navgraho k abin ang se bhi chupaya.

Ye chal ni to or kya h mahadev , jabki aapne hi hume ye adhikaar diya tha ki is sansaar m hum navgrah dwara hi mritylok k prani k jivan kesa hoga, vo nirdhaarit hoga, lekin aapne bas in devo k hit k kaaran humare adhikaro ka atikraman kiya.

Shani :- mahadev per ilzam lagane se purv itna jan lijiye ketu, mahadev keval sangharkarta ni is sansaar k nirmaata bhi h, isliye is sansaar k pratyek bhag pratyek pad se jude kisi bhi fesle ko leme k liye unhe kisi ki anumati ki avshyakta ni h.

Or aapko itna dukh kyu ho raha h naina k janm ka aapko bodh na hona ka, isliye taki aap phir se wo sab na ker pane k liye, jiske kaaran aapki ye dasha h.

Rahu apne hathiyaar nikal gusse se :- apni sima m raho shani dev.

Shani bhi apne dand ko bulate hue : ye hi baat m tumse kah raha hu, waqt rahate hue apni bhul ka praayshchit ker apni sima m aajao, anyatha.

Kher inhe baate ya yu kaho bato ka dwand kerne dete h or chalte h apne hero ki team ki or.

Location :- ranbhumi

Preety ne jese hi savitri yani k apni maa k pet m talvaar ghopi to vo ek jordaar chikh k sath apne asli roop m aagayi, jo or koi ni kubdi thi, jisne chadm vesh dharan kiya hua tha preety ko chalne k liye samraat k adesh p.

Samraat jo mrityu shaiya p apni ankhri sanse gin raha tha, yamraj utsuk ho kisi bhi shan waha pahuchne wale the usko nark yatra p le jane ko.

Samraat :- asmbhav mere maya pash se tum kese nikli, ek tritiya hoker trittya samraat k jaal vash se bahar kese aayi.

Preety vijay muskan k sath :- bahar to jab aati jab m vash m hoti, mane to bas ek chota sa khel khela aapke sath mere pyare so called pitaji, taki sampoorn tritya banker is trishastra ka sandhan kerme ki shakti arjit ker saku, aapkoo bura to na laga na .

Ji ha dosto preety Kabhi samraat k vash m thi hi ni usne bas sirf natak kiya tha taki wo apni sampoorn shaktiyo ko hasil ker sake jisko pane k baad hi usme trishastra ka wo use ker sake, parantu sawal ye tha ki wo kese samraat k mayapash se bachi kese.

Samraat :- dhoka dhoka kiya h tune mere sath , ek tritya ho ke apne raja k sath gaddaari kerne wali kul drohi, ek beti ho k apne baap ka vadh kerne wali pitra drohi dhikaar h tujhpe.

Preety :- ab mahasus hua na tumhe kesa lagta h jab koi apna dhoka deta h, ab mahasus hua kisi ka vishwas todne ka kesa sila milta h, ye dhoka ni samraat tumhare purane paapo ka karmfal h jo tumne na jane kitne masum logo ki jan leke or kitni ablao ka chal se shil bhang kerke kiya.

Ye us pida or us athah pida ka hi shrap tumhe h jo tumne us maa ko di uske ajanme balak ko marker di.

(Or aage badh ker trishastra ko usko sine or ander m ghopte hue gusse )

Ye dand h us vishwasghat ka kamine jo tune meri maa k sath kiya tha chal se unko nark se bhi battar jindagi m dhakelne k li.

Ye bolte hue preety ki ankho m ansu aa gaye the, kyunki bhale hi aaj uski maa ka doshi unka hatyara bhale hi uske samne apni jan ki bhik mang raha tha, per is sach ko bhi jhutlaya ni ja sakra tha ki wo preety ka pita bhi tha, jis kaaran jitni khushi use samraat ko marne m ho rahi thi, usse jyada dard or dukh ka use ahasas ho raha tha apne pita pe.

Veer apni premika ki vidambna ko bhali bhanti samjh raha tha, isliye wo aage bhad ker preety.

Veer :- preety meri jaan m samjh sakta hu tumhari vidambana ko, chahe kese bhi ho lekin ye tumhare pita h, lekin aaj jo inke sath jo bhi hua h wo inke karmo ka fal h, shri krishna kahate h ki yadi dharm ki raksha k liye hume yadi apno se bhi yudh kerna pade to sankoch ni kerna chahiye, or vese bhi ab tumhare pita apne karmo ka dand pa chuke h, isliye ab mukt kero inhe is paap yoni se, inhe mukti do.


Veer ki baat samjh preety ne us or dekha to paya ki samraat ki ankho m bhi ashru the jo shayad Pashchatap k the, kyunki apne ant samay p hi sahi lekin usko apne paapo ka ahasas ho chuka tha, ahasas ho chuka tha ki jav koi apna hi hume dhoka de to kesa lagta h.

Samraat :- veer sahi kah raha h beti mujh jese papi ko marne m sankoch mat kero beti, mere sath jo ho raha h (khaste hue) wo mere papo ka hi phal h, nast kerdo mujhe or meri shaktiyon ko putri jiske kaaran m apna sab kuch gawa k bhi anjan raha, mujhe mukti dedo putri is papi sharir se jiske dwara m apne hi prem ka gala ghot vishwasghaat ker use marne k liye choda , mukt ker do apne is papi pita ko beta taki wo apni galti ki shama mang se apni dharmpatni us mahan sati , yani tumhari maa se beti , mukt ker do beti m tumhare aage hath...

Ye bol samraat uske aage hath jodne laga, jise dekh preety ka or bhi bura haal ho gaya or use or apne pita ki esi halat n dekhi gayi or usne apne hath p ek cut lagaker khun nikal trishastra p dala or samraat k hriday m ghop diya chikhte hue.

Samraat ek chikh k sath santushti bhari muskaan k sath.

Samraat :- maafi k liye bahut bahut shukriya beti.

Ye bol samraat ne apne netra bhi sadev sadev k liye band ker liye.

Preety rote hue chilayi :- niiiiii.....


Or vo kafi der tak fut fut k rone lagi, naina ne use sambhalne k liye aage bhadi per veer ne use roka or kuch der preety ko rone de uski man ki sari bhadas nikal lene ko kaha, taki uske man ko shanti mil sake.

Kafi der rone dene k baad veer or preety aage bhad k preety ko sambhalne aate h tab preety dono ko ek sath gale laga boli.

Preety ek badi bahan k lahaje m naina se rote hue hi:- dekh choti manw kaha tha na ki m is samraat ko marke bhua ko aajad keraugi, dekh mane vo pura kiya, ab to manti h na apni di ko.

Naina rote hue hi :- ha di aapne apna vada sach m pura kiya, ap sach m duniya ki best di ho, love u so much di.

Ye bol vo or bhi kaske preety k gale lag gayi, or preety.

Preety rote hue

:- love u to mera bacha

Veer :- are sali sahiba aap bhi kya apni di k sath rone beth gayi, ulta to Apko samjhana chahiye ki ye to kushi ka samay h aJ dharm ki adharm p vijay hui h, aunty (preety ki maa) ko nyaay mila h or sabse badi baat aab prerna aunty ka bhi aajad kerwane jana h to kab tak ese rote rahoge.

Karan :- veer sahi kah raha h bhabhi, m aapko samjh sakta hu ki apno ko hi dand dena kitna dukhdayi hota h, samne wale se jyada pida hume hoti h, lekin niyati m jo hota h wo ho ker hi rahata h, or vese bhi ab to apke pita ko ek pap yoni se mukti mili h ese me aapko yu rona shoba ni deta.

Naina jo karan ki baate sun rahi thi usse control ni hota or vo chikhte hue bolo.


Naina :- meri di ko kya kerna chahiye kya ni vo use tumse janne ki jarurat ni h mr karam or vese bhi ek hatyara kya samjhega apne ko khone ka dukh kya hota h.

Naina ki ye baat karan ko chub gayi, kyunki usne to jyoti k baad sabse karibi ko to bachpan m hi kho diya tha, yani ki apni maa ko, or naina ki is baat se vahi dard bhari smritiya uske samne aagayi


Naina wahi n rukte hue :- or hoga bhi kese ek hatyare ko bhala kon pyaar karega, shayad tumhe kabhi kisi ka shaswat prem mila hi ni, isiliye to tum itne krur ho ki mere bhai ko bina apraadh k maar dala kyunki wo ek asur tha.

Are mujhe to lagta h ki ager yadi koi tumhara apna hua bhi hoga to tum khud hi use kha gaye honge hathyare kahike.

Naina k katu shabdo ne karan k hriday ko chali kerke rakh diya tha, jo dard usne aaj tak badi mushkil se apne ander dafmaye the aJ naina k shabdo ne fir se un ghavo ko hara ker diya tha.

Wahi jyoti bhi apne bhai ki pida ko bhali bhanti mahasus ker pa rahi thi, use naina pe itna gussa aaraha tha ki wo uska katl tak ker sakti thi, lekin usne first importance di apne bhai ko sambhalne ki jo wo uske hath ko kaske thamke apni urja se ker rahi thi.


Preety gusse se :- naina ye kya bakwas keri ja rahi ho, tum bilkul ni janti jinse tumne aaj esi badtamiji sw baat ki h unke kaaran hi aaj ...

Naina :- jo bol rahi hu sach hi bol rahi hu di, ye dono bhai bahan humare hiteshi ni shatru h, hatyare h samar bhai k, pata ni kis manhoos ghadi m inse mulakaat hui, are m to kahati hu ki....

Preety guse se chilate hue :- bas ek shabd or ni sunnungi ike khilaaph m, tum janti bhi ho inka kitna bada ahasan h humpe, yu kaho aaj ki vijay ka shrey yadi kisi ko jata h to or kini ko ni balki karan bhai or jyoti di ko hi jata h.

Ye bol preety shuru kerti h apni vo kahani jiski vajah se vo kamyab ho payi apne mission p.

Darasl jis raat kubdi preety se milne aayi thi uske jane k baad jyoti ne preety ko akele m chat p bulaya tha or sath m baba ko bhi jinhone hi preety ko bataya tha ki yadi use samraat ko marna h to pahalr use apni sampoorn shakti arjit kerni hogi, tabhi wo trishastra ko use ker payegi, tab jyoti ne hi ye natak kerne ka plan banaya jiske liye preety man to gayi lekin uske man m ek shanka thi.

Preety :- per di m ye sab kese hoga, i mean samraat k mayajaal se m kese bachungi, kya mujhme wo shakto h

Jyoti :- vo shakti to aapke pass kabse h bhabhi.

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Veer :- konsi shakti preety .

Karan :- wahi shakti veer jo is sansaar ki sabse pavitra shakti h, yani ki prem ki.

Jara dhyan se dekho bhabi ko.

Tab veer ne preety ko dekha to chonk gaya kyumki ab use preety k ander uska roop najar aaraha tha , jo use preety saman hi prem. Ker bethi thi, per galat tarike se use hasil kerne ki chah me use balidaan dena pada, yani ki vrushali ka.

Veer vrushali ko dekh thoda sa emotional ho :- vrushali.

Vrushali :- ha veer ji m, m bhale hi sadev samraat k khilaaf rahi thi, lekin sach to ye tha ki m bhi paap karmo m usse kam na thi, usika mujhe dand bhi. Mila, jiske kaaran m aapko pa ni saki.

Lekin kisi vidvan ne kaha h na veer ji humesha pyaar ka arth pana hi ni hota, vo m bhali bhanti samjh chuki thi, isliye mame deh tyagne se purv mane kasam li thi ki bhale hi m apke pyaar ko na pas saki parantu apni is bahan (preety) k prem p kabhi aanch naa ane dungi, kyunki m. Bhale hi aapke prem k layak na thi, kyunki ye adhikar sirf preety bahan ka tha or is prem ki raksha ki kasam k kaaran hi m aajtak aap sabke sath rahi


Ji ha dosto preety samraat k vash m isliye ni aasaki kyumki uske sath vrushali ka sath bhi tha jo khud samraat se shaktishali rah chuki thi, jo baat veer k batane k kaaran jyoti bhali bhanti janti thi.

Vrushali ka prem dekhker veer ki ankho m bhi ansu asgaye or vo bola.

Veer :- tum sach m dhanya ho vrushali, dhanya h tumhara niswaarth prem, lekin tumhare is prem k badle m tumhare liye kuch na de saka, iske liye m sadev tumhara apradhi hi rahunga vrushali.

Vrushali veer k ansu pochte hue use samjhati h.

Karan aage badh ker :- veer ne bilkul sahi k aP dhanya h vrushali, or dhany h aapka niswaarth prem , jisko darsha aapne prem ki ek anuthi paribhaasha ko janm diya is sansaar ko.

Isliye m karmfal data shami ka ansh karan aapko aapke is mahan karm ka puraskaar dete hue aapki or bhabhi ki aatma ko ek kerta hu jiske kaaran veer k prem ko aap bhi utna pa sakogi jitna preety bhabhi.

(Preety se) aapko isme koi aitraaj to ni bhabhhi.

Preety na m gardan hitate hue khusi khusi permission deti h.

Karan tabhu apne hath aage ker ek roshni dalta h vrushali or preety p jiske sath hi kuch hi shano m vo dono ek ho gayi or samne aaya preety ka ek anokha roop jisme uska chahra to vesa hi tha parantu ab uski ankhe vrushali jesi hari or baal lambe ho chuke the.

Naina ne jab ye kahani suni to vo mon to ho gayi parantu use apne shabdo p koi pavhtava n tha.

Karan :- veer ab samay aagaya h ki hume chal ker naina ki mataji ko ajaad kerwana chahiye, kyunki abhi hume bahut se kaam bhi kerne h jese samrast samet sabka antim sanskaar kerna

Naina :- koi jarurat ni h tumhe aanr ki m apmi. Maa ko khud hi aajad kerwa lungo.

Preety dantte hue halke se :- choti.

Naina muh bana :- ok fine chalo.

Fir naina karan or baki sab chal pade mahal ki or, karan ko trijata ne rasta bata diya tha, jiske anuklol vo mahal ki pashchim. Disha m jaker ek divaar k samne ruk gaya.

Preety :- ye hum. Kaha aagaye karan bhai aage to rasta band h


Karan :- kabhi kabhi vo bho sach ni hota bhabhi jo ankho se dikhayi de


Ye bol karan ne apna hath aage kiya, jiske sath hi uske hatho se ek roshmi nikal divar se takrayi or agle hi. Pal divar gayab ho vaha ek darwaja aagaya

Karan :- lijiye bhabhi mil gaya rasta aaiye chaliye .

Ye bol karan jese hi darwaje ko kholne ko hua uska dil joro se dhadkme laga or esi anubhuti hone lagi, jese ab vo use pame hi wala h jiske liye vo varsho se tadfa h.

Esa hi kuch haal jyoti or naina ka bhi tha, naina to is anubhuti ko samjh pa rahi thi, kyunki usko to malum tha ki ander uski ma h lekin karan or jyoti is baat se abhi tak anjan the, vo abhi tak isi anubhuti ko samjhne k dwand m uljhe hue the , lekin naina se raha na gaya.

Usne jaldi se darwaja khola or ander ki or chilate hue bhagi.

Naina nam ankho se:- maa, maaa kaha ho aap dekho m. Aagayi maa, aapki beti aapko lene aagayi.

Tabhi ek aawaaz uske or baki sabhi k kano m. Padi, jise sun naina k to khusi ki sima na rahi, lekin karan or jyoti k vajud tak ko usne hila ker rakh diya, kyunki ye wo aawax thi, jise wo sapne m bhi pahachan

Aawaz :- m yaha hu meri bachi.

Naina ne khusi se or karan or jyoti herani se us or dekhte h to pate h ki ek orat bagiche m hi mojud shiv mandir m bethi puja ker rahi h or unka chahra unki or h

Naina to khushi se usi or dodi lekin karan Or jyoti to puri tarah se hil chuke the.

Karan man me :- ni ye asambhav h, ye sirf mera baham h.

Jyoti mab me karan se :- ni ye brahm ni h bhaiya, kyunki jo aap mahasus ker rahe ho vo hi m bhi.

Karan :- parantu ye sab kese gudiya, mujhe kuch samjh ni aaraha.

Jyoti :- mujhe bhi bhai.

Wahi naina apni ma ki aawaz ko sun us taraf dodi apni maa k gale lagne ko or jese hi wo najdik pahunchi us orat yani ki naina ki ma prerna urf asha ghumi or jhat se naina ko apne aagosh me leliya.

Jiske kaaran na to naina k aanand ki sima na rahi or naa hi karan or jyoti ki herani ki, jab unhone naina ki maa ko yani ki apni maa ko dekha.

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Shani or rahu ketu ki bahas ab yudh tak pahunch chuke the.

Rahu :- ketu is shani se bahas kerne ka koi fayda ni, aaj iska kam hum sadev sadev k liye tamam ker hi dete h.

Ye bol wo apne hatyar nikal liye or shani bhi apne dand ka ahvahan kerte gue bole.

Shani :- apni ye icha bhi aaj puri kerne ka prayas ker lo.

Ketu chilate hue :- ni chodunga tujhe shani..
. Ye bolte hue tez garjana k vp ne humla kerne hi wala tha ki tabhi mahadev k krodhbhare swar un sab kamp gayw.

Mahadev :- baasss mon ho jao tum sab.

Mahadev k krodh se bhala kon anbhigyw ni, rahu ketu to agle shan hi unhone apne shastra vapas lota liya or gardan niche ker li.

Mahadev unko datte hue :- itne sammanniya pado p ho ker bhi yu balko ki tarah ladte lajja ni aati aapko.

Rahu :- lajja to apko aani chahiye mahadev, aapne bhi ab vishnu ki bhanti hum asuro k sath chal kerna aarambh ker diya.

Shani :- apni maryada m raho rahu, tum bhul rahe ho ki tum kinke sath abhadtrata kerne ka prayaas ker rahe ho rahu.

Ketu :- bhul to mahadev chuke h us vachan ko jo unhonne humare putra ko diya tha ki wo humare kisi bhi mamle m hastakshep ni karenge, lekin us vachan k ulat unhonne na kevak apna vachann bhang kiya, balki navgrah smiti se naina ka janm chupa ker niyam bhi bhang kiye h.

Isliye ab inka koi adhikaar ni h humko or der tak is dand roopi bandhan m rakhne ka, isliye mahadev mukt kijiye hume mahadev.

Mahadev kuch sovh :- Shayad tum sahi kah rahe ho rahu, chahe kaaran koi bhi ho niyam to bhang hue h, isliye hum apni bhul ko swikaar kerte hue tumhe mukt kerte h is chaya sharir se.

Ye bol mahadec ne apna hath aage kiya , jiske sath hi rahu mukt ho apne asli roop me aagaya.

Rahu hadte hue :- akhir kar , akhir kar m mukt hua , haha shani kesa laga tumhe haar ka swaad, ab dekhna shani m tumhare us ansh ka jivan m esi agni laga dunga ki vo swayam apni mrityu ki bhik mangega.

Ye bol rahu or ketu waha se gayab ho gaye , shani unke jane k baada mahadev se bole

Shani :- ye aapne kya kiya aapne gurudev, rahu ko aajad kerne ka arth h ki.

Mahadev :- ki ab vo har vo karm karega jisse karan per sankat aaye, parantu mujhe vishwas h karan per shani ki vo un khatro se nipat hi lega or wese bhi rahu ko sahi marg per lane ka yahi ek rasta shesh tha, tum samjh rahe ho na putra m kya kahana chahata hu.

Shani shivji ki muskurahat k sath :- ha guru dev bilkul sahi kaha aapne, rahu ye soch ker khush ho raha h ki use dand se mukti mili, parantu satya to ye h ki vastvik dand chakra to ab aarambh hone wala h.


Mahadev :- aane wale samay m bhale hi karn ko kayi parikshao se nipatna pade, lekin ye abhi to karan k jivan m salo purani khoi khushi k lotne ka waqt h.

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Karan or jyoti ko apni ankho p vishwas ni ho raha tha, ki unki maa yani asha jinhe wo aaj tak mrit samjhte aaye the, jis maa k pyaar k liye wo aaj tak taras rahe the wo jivit unke ankho k samne thi.

Wo kafi der to is heran rahe or jab vo puri tarah sure hue ki ye asha hi to unki khushi ki sima na rahi, wo bhi aage bhad k apni maa k gale lag jana chahte the, lekin unke man m mojud sawalo or jhijak k karan wo ruke hue the.


Asha urf prerna gale lagaye hue naina :- meri bachi meri dulari aakhir tu aahi gayi, m janti thi ki tum ek n ek din jarur aaogi.

Naina khushi ki ansu rote hue:- haa m aa gayi maa, ab m apko kahi ni jane dungi, kahi ni.

Naina kafi der apni maa k gale lagi roti rahi khusi k ansu or asha bhi , fir jab asha ne naina ko sambhal apni najre uthayi or jese hi unki najar karan or jyoti p padi wo wahi jam gayi.


Karan or jyoti ne bhi jab apni maa ko apni or dekhta paya or unki najre apni ma se takrayi to wo jam se gaye.

Karan jyoti or asha tino ki ankho k samne wo anmol or mamta bhare pal ankho k samne aane lage, wo asha ka apne ankho ke dularo k sath khelte hue khud bachi ban jana, unke banaye us chote se jungle wale ghar m wo pyaar bhari masti, wo karan ko majak majak m ladki banana, wo pyarii mamta bhari dhun m bansuri baja k unko aanandit kerna or jab wo dono bhai bahan thak jate to us jhule pe pyaar se lori sunate hue sulana.

Jiske kuch pyaarw shabd abhi tak unke kano m gunj rahe the.

(Mata pe apni
Kerna bharosa
Na chodegi teri baiya
Tujhme hi m hu.
Mujhme hi tu .
Sang tere h teri
Maiya.
So ja pyaare raj dulare
Mukhda chume teri maiya)

Tino hi maa bete duniya ko bhul ek dusre ki ankho m jhankte hue aage bhad rahe the ek dusre ki or.

Asha ka hriday to tab harsh se garbit ho gaya ki is situation m bhi dono bhai bahan apne sanskar na bhule, unhone kuch bhi bolne se pahale apni maa k charan sparsh kiye.

Asha itna hote hue rok na payi or siskate hue unko utha bas itna bola.

Asha nam ankho se :- babu, gudiya.

Karan or jyoti khushi k ansu k sath :- maaaa

Or itna bol wo khus ko rok na paye or kaske yu apni maa k lipat gaye jese unhone apni maa ko choda to wo firse unhe chod k chali jayegi.

Asha ne bhi apne jigar k tukdo ko usi bhanti kaske lagaya hua tha , uski kosis yahi thi ki itne salo ki duri se jo wo mamta apne bacho p na luta payi, wo aaj wo isi shan ek sath lota de.

Aaj sirf karan or jyoti k liye ni balki pure sansar k liye khusi ka din tha, tridev jo aaj ek sath mojud the wo bhi karan or jyoti k liye khush the.

Brahama ji :- aakhir kaar karan ko uske satkarmo ka manchaha phal praapt ho hi gaya mahadev.

Narayan :- brahmdev ka kahna uchit h mahadev, isse badkar karan k liye kya puraskaar ho sakta h.

Mahadev :- puraskaar ni narayan ye to fal h karan or jyoti k satkarmo ka jo aaj unhone apni maa ko punah praapt kiya or aage jaker aaj ki ghatna hi karan ko sadev protsahit kerti rahegi or use apne marg se bhatkne se bachayegi.

Shani dev or Mata chaya ki bhi khush the or unki ankhe bhi nam thi.

Chaya :- akhir kar vo shan aahi gaya putra kitna sunder drishy h ye aaj varsho baad do santaane apni bichdi maa se mili h, ese shubh ghatna ko dekhna sobhagya h mata.

Shani :- aapme uchit kaha mata.

Shani karan or jyoti k liye khush the lekin sath me hi wo chintit bhi the aage hone wali ghatnao or naina k reaction ko leker. lekin apni chinta ka jikra unhone apni mata k samne ni kiya, kyumki wo rang m bhang ni dalna chahte the

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Karan or jyoti kafi der apmi maa k yu hi gale lage rahe, salo ki virah ki pida ko jhelne k baad ab vo hamesha yu hi apni maa k anchal m rahama chahte the, parantu esa kaha sambhav tha.

Unko kuch der baad ek aawz ko sun ye aalag hona pada, jo naina ki thi jo herani se ye sab dekh rahi thi.

Naina :- ye sab kya ho raha h, ye kya naatak h tum dono ka or maa ye aap kya ker rahi h, aapki beti to m hu na, fir bhi aap inhe ese kyu gale laga rahi ho jese ki ye aapki ki hi santaan ho.

Asha naina k gal ko sahalate hue :- tumhare sawal me hi tumhara jwab h beti, ab waqt aachuka h tumhe or lala or gudiya ko sachai ka pata chale.

(Naina , karan or jyoti ko ek sath dekhte hue ) ha beti mane inhe ek maa saman kyumki ye dono or koi ni beti balki meri pahali santane yani ki tumhare bade bhai bahan h.

Asha k in shabdo ne waha mojud sabhi per bomb foda, naina karan or jyoti ki to herani ki sima hi na thi, sachai ko jan ke, khasker naina ki to wo halat thi ki kato to khun ni.

Use vishwas na ho raha tha ki jinko unhone na jane kya kya na kaha, unka apman kiya lanchan lagaye or yaha tak janleva humla bhi kiya , vo or koi ni unke sage bade bhai or bahan the

Asha(Karan or jyoti se ) :- ha lala or gudiya, yahi satya h naina or koi ni tumhari choti bahan h.

(Apne tino bacho ko pyar se sahalate hue) m jantti hu mere bacho tumhare liye ye sab p vishwas kerna bahut mushkil ho raha h, parantu yahi satya h mere bacho tum tino sage bhai bahan ho mere pyare jigar k tukde ho tum tino.

Fir asha batana shuru kerti h unko wo sachai jaha se naina k janm ki kahani shuru hui.

Asha batati h ki us accident m jab ranvir car se bahar kuda tha, tab kisi tarah asha bhi bach k bahar aachuki thi, or ter k kinare pahunch

Lekin Asha apne pati ki sachai pata chal jaNe k baad pata chali to use bahut bada dhaka laga or wo khub fut fut ker royi or usne than liya tha ki wo ab apne bacho ko leker kahi dur chali jayegi , lekin niyati ko kuch or hi manjur tha.

Ketu yani vp ko jab is ghatna ka pata chala to usne turant samraat ko asha ki khubsurti ka lalach de use ked karane ka adesh dedala taki apni maa k virah m karan or jyoti bachpan m hi tut jaye or kabhi uske bete k khilaaf na uth sake.

Samraat jese hi ketu k aadesh pe asha k pas pahuncha to wo asha p mar mita or usne asha ko jabardasti le jane ka prayas kiya.

Parantu usse pahale hi shani dev vaha aaphunche or unhone samraat ko chakhma de waha se asha ko bacha k le gaye.

Or unhone asha ko samjhaya ki ab asha ka wapas ghar jana karan or jyoti k prano ko sankat m dalna tha, kyonki brahma k vardaan k kaaran shani jyada time tak use rok bhi ni sakte the.

Isliye use apne bacho se dur jana hi hoga, ye baat asha bhali bhanti samjh chuki thi isliye usne apne dil p pathar rakh jer ye fesla liya tha or usne apni pahachan badali or fir shani dev ne hi uske hath m wo jadui dhaga bandh pandit ji k ghar pahunchaya tha , kyunki wahi ek safe or uchiit jagah thi.

Or fir aaage ap jante hi h aap kya hua.

Asha apni kahani batate hue fut fut k rote hue boli :- mujhe maf ker do mere bacho, m tumhe us samy chod k chali gayi jab tumhe meri sabse jyada jarurat the, kitni buri maa hu na m. tum chaho to mujhe dand delo mere bacho , per mujhhe maaf ker do.

Karan or jyori apni maa ko rota n dekh paye or unko gale laga badi mushkil se ye samjhate h ki wo unse naraj ni h , use shant kerwane lage.

Asha :- sach m m duniya ki sabse khushnaseeb ma hu, jo mujhe itne samjhdar or itna prem kerne wali santan praapt hui

Asha naina se :- naina beti yaha aao kya apne bhai bahan k gale lagogi.

Naina kuch der to khadi rahi lekin fir wo karan or jyoti ki or aage bhadne lagi, karan ne bhi is ummid m bahe felayi ki uski choti bahan aakhir kar sachai janme k baad use gale jarur lagayegi.

Lekin naina ne karan k pas pahunch k vo kiya jiski ummid kisiko na thi.

Usne ek jordaar chanta karan ko rasid diya.

Naina chikhte hue :- kya socha tumne ki khun k rishte m hum ek hi maa ki santaane h to m tumhe maaf ker dungi bloody hathye.

Asha gusse se :- ye kya tamij h apne bade bhai sw baat kerne ki naina.

Naina :- bade bhai se ni ma ek hathyare k sath esa hi vyavahar uchit h, m ise kabhi bhai ni manungi kyunki ye hathiyara h hathyara mere samar bhai ka hathyara.

And u aaj jab ma mili to badi jaldi gale mile maa kerte hue, yadi itna hi pyaar tga ma se to itne salo tumhare ek shan bhi dil m maa ko khojne ki ya unke mrityu k rahasya ka pata lagane ki man me naa aayi, aati bhi kese ek no k dhongi jo thahre, kyunki tumhe maa se matlab to kabhi tha hi ni, or hoga bhi kyu jab tumhare pas wo sab tha jiska tum jese lalchi or matlabi insan ko icha rahati h.

Or ese ghatiya or matlabi rishto ko m kadapi swikaar ni karungi kabhi ni

Or ese hi usne apni badi bahan jyoti ko bhi bahut se katu shabd kah dale jisse un dono ka hriday chali chali ho chuka tba

Jo aajtak k bakiyo k diye ghavo se kayi guna adhik the kyunki ye ghanv unko unki sagi bahan ne hi diye the

Asha gusse se :- nainaaaaa.

Ye bol asha ne naina pe hath uthana chaha lekin karan ne use rok diya or yu ishara kiya jese bol raha ho ki ni maa meri choti ko mat maro.

Lekin iska ulta hi asar naina p ho gaya or wo rote huw hi waha se chali gayi.

Karan :- maa ye aapne kya kiya rula diya choti ko.

Asha :- to kya kerti beta dekha ni kese badtameezi se baat ker rahi thi tumse


Jyoti:- maa vo abhi bachi h or situation hi esi thi ki koi bhi ese react kerta, aapko choti ko datna ni chahiye tha.

Asha thoda mahol halka kerme k liye :, majak m unke kan. Pakdte huw- acha bachu, dono ko choti bahan mili ni ki chale apni maa ko dada dadi banke samjhanw

Karan or jyoti :- ouch mumma chodo dukta h.

Ye bol wo has pade or asha bhi, fir asha ne karan k kahne pe naina ko samjha bhula k layi or fir naina ne bhi ek baar aapas k jhagde ko side m rakh apni ma ki khusi k liye normal behave kiya or apne dosto se milvayi.

Fir jyoti boli

Jyoti :- maa chalo ab waqt aagaya h ki aap hum sab ghar wapas chale , ab humari khushiyo ka lotne ka samay aachuka h.

Asha :- ha meri bachi, per jane se purb m trinata amma se milna chahti hu taki aajtak jo unhome mera khayal rakha uske liye m unhe dhanyavaad ker saku.

Trijata ka naam sumte hi karan ka chahra latak gaya or usne nam ankho se yudh ka sampoorn varnan kiya, jab asha ko pata chala trijata na rahi to uski ankhe bahane lagi, kyunki itne salo m use trijata se lagav ho chuka tha, kahi n kahi trijata m use apni maa ki chavi najar aane lagi thi, lekin honi ko kon tal sakta tha.

Karan. Or uske dosto ne badi mushkil se asha ko shant kerwaya or fir karan ne yudh m mare gaye sabhi yodhao, kubdi, samar, trijata samet samraat ki chita teyar ki,

Braham muharat ki shubh ghadi m Samraat ko agni riti anusar bete ki jagah veer jo uska javai tha usne di preety k sath mil ker.

Karan ne trijata ko agni di or uski divangat aatma ko dhanyavaad kiya, uske sahyog k liye

Vahi samar ko agmi naina ne di, uski ankho m baar bar samar k sath bitaye pyare pal aarahe the, jisme usko ek bhai ka pyaar mila tha.

Naima man me :- bhai apni nainu ko maaf ker dijiyega ki vo aapki ralsha na ker payi, lekin aapki bahan kasam khati h ki wo aapke hathyare ko ni chodegi, chahe wo mera so called bhai hi kyu na ho.

Ye baat usne door khade karan ko ghurte hue kahi thi.

Fir subah hui jiske sath aaya sawan ka antim somwar jiskw sath samraat ki bhasm k sath puja ker asha ne apni pratigya puri ki or fir wo sab chal pade ghar ki or jaha or bhi kayi raaz aaj khulne wale the

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Superb update.
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Tho jaisa socha tha vaisa hi hua ye plan karan aur joyti ka hi tha lekin naina ji to ab samar k jaal mai itni jyada fas gye ki unn k liye fir koi karan ka magic hi kaam aa sakta h.
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Rahu ketu wali story to vishnupuran wali dekhi hue h lekin yha jo mahadev se unn ki behes h wo bilkul asuri buddhi wali nikli aur sahni dev ne bhi mahadev ka ishara smjh liya asli dand wala.
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Asha devi ji ko bhi apne teno bacche fir se mil gye aur ab ghar pariwar k raaz khulne wale h.
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Preeti ki acting superb thi aur yha samar aur preeti mai acting compition hona cahiye lekin fir ek participent ko nikl liya narak tour pe.
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Nice and interesting second last update sirji.
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Keep writing.
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Keep posting.
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update no :- 200 part 1 (mega update)
Vp or uska bhai kahi or ni kailash pe achuke the ya yu kaho bandhi banake laye gaye the, or esa kerne wale or koi ni sakshakt devadidev mahadev the

Mahadev rosh or tanz bhare shabdo m unse bole.

Mahadev :- kai varsho pashchaat hi sahi, lekin ek baar fir swaagat h aapka.

Rahu or ketu.

Ji ha dosto vp or uska bhai or koi ni balki rahu or ketu the.

Ji ha dosto, wahi jagat ko pratadit kerne wale singhika putra swarbhanu k do bhag jinhone smudra manthan k samay chal se amrit pan kerne ka prayaas kiya tha bhesh badal ker, lekin isse pahale swarbhanu kamyab ho hota, surya dev or chandra dev ki tikshan drishti us per pad gayi.

Or unhone narayan ko uski sachai bata di jo mohini roop me devo ko amrit pila rahe the.

Narayan ne jese hi swarbhanu p dhyan diya to turant wo apne asli roop m aagaye or apne sudarshan se swarbhanu rahu ka shish dhad se alag ker diya tha.

Lekin tabtak der ho chuki thi, kyunki amrit rahu k gale tak utar chuka tha, jis karan uske do bhag ho chuke the.

Or jab Swaebhanu ko pata chala ki uski ye halat surya or chandra dev k kaaran hui h to uski gusse ki koi sima na rahi or wo surya or chandra ko khane ko bhage tab mahadev ne hi unhe roka or unhe graho ki upadhi deker navgrah me shamil kiya.

Lekin navgraho m se ek hoker bhi kabhi vo devo k sathi na ban sake or unke man m devo k prati grihna hi rahi, wo bhi khaskar narayan or shani se, kyunki indomo k kaaran hi indono ki ye halat hui.

Small introduction

Rahu urf saya :- swarbhanu ka shish ka hissa jo narayan k chakra se alag hua tha wo rahu kahalaya, ye navgraho m se ek chaya grah h, or sath m amrit pan k kaaran amar bhi, iska swabhaav bhi esa hi, ager ye kisi p mehrbaan ho jaye to use raja bana deta h or yadi uske piche hath dhoke pad jaye to use barbadi ki akhri sima tak dhakel deta h, lekin swal ye tha ki rahu jesa shaktishali grah ek saye k roop m kyu the or karan se unki kya dushmani, iski kuch shaktiya to Ap dekh hi chuke h or ek sabse khatarnaak shakti jisse dev tak ni bach sakte wo aage pata chalegi.

Ketu urf vp :- ji ha dosto vp yani ki kaalbhanu ka pita or koi ni ketu hi h, rahu ka wo dusra bhag jo sirf swarbhanu ka dhad h, kahane ko to ye or rahu do alag alag grah h, prantu do ho ker bhi ye ek hi ih is kaaran kaalbhanu in dono ka beta h, shakti m rahu samman, parantu bal se jyada ye apni budhi se kaam leta h or ye kitna shatir h ye to aap padh hi chuke h abhi tak ki kahani m.


Rahu apni Oversmart tune me :- pranam mahadev, itne varsho pashchat aapke darshan ka sobhagya pa hum dono to dhany hue, parantu swagat ye naya tarika aapka hume thoda kum hi ras aaya,

Tabhi shani pragat hue or bole.

Shani :- wo kya h na rahu dev, av guru mahadev ne bhi vyakti k anukool swaagat ka tarika apnana sikh liya h.

Ketu (vp) :- oh to aap bhi yaha h karmfal data, m janta hi tha esa karya keval aap hi ker sakte ho, chal se hume yaha lane k piche kya prayojan h aapka.

Mahadev :- chal kerne ka prayas to tum dono ne kiya h rahu or ketu, karan or samraat k madhya ho rahe yudh m humse praapt divya shakti ka upyog ese grihnit or kayaro wale kaam m kerke.

Humne tumhe pahale bhi chetaya tha ki ye kaliyug h or isme hum devo ka insaano se yudh ya prahar evam apna prabhav dalna varjit h, bhutkaal me tumhare kiye gaye karmo ka dand tum ab tak bhugat bhi rahe ho rahu, dev hote hue bhi is chaya roop m rahaker bhi parantu fir bhi tum na mane.


Ji ha dosto rahu ki ye halat mahadev ne hi ki thi, parantu rahu ne esa kya kiya tha bhutkaal m wo to aage hi pata chala tha.

Rahu :- kesa chal mahadev, humne pahale bhi kaha tha ki humne jo kiya na hi wo chal tha or na hi niyamo k virudh, apitu wo sab humne apne adhikaar shetro m rahate hue kiya, jise aapne niyam virudh karar ker hume esa ker diya or ketu ko patal lok tak simit ker diya, lekin fir bhi hum aapka samman kerte hue mon rahe.

Ketu :- Parantu aapse esi ummid n thi mahadev ki aap bhi vishnu ki bhanti ho jaoge.

Shani :- kahana kya chahte ho ap ketu.

Vp :- vahi shani dev jo aap bhali bhanti samjhte hue anjan ban rahe h, mera sanket us naina ki or h, jiske janm ka rahasya aapne apni maya se humse, yani ki navgraho k abin ang se bhi chupaya.

Ye chal ni to or kya h mahadev , jabki aapne hi hume ye adhikaar diya tha ki is sansaar m hum navgrah dwara hi mritylok k prani k jivan kesa hoga, vo nirdhaarit hoga, lekin aapne bas in devo k hit k kaaran humare adhikaro ka atikraman kiya.

Shani :- mahadev per ilzam lagane se purv itna jan lijiye ketu, mahadev keval sangharkarta ni is sansaar k nirmaata bhi h, isliye is sansaar k pratyek bhag pratyek pad se jude kisi bhi fesle ko leme k liye unhe kisi ki anumati ki avshyakta ni h.

Or aapko itna dukh kyu ho raha h naina k janm ka aapko bodh na hona ka, isliye taki aap phir se wo sab na ker pane k liye, jiske kaaran aapki ye dasha h.

Rahu apne hathiyaar nikal gusse se :- apni sima m raho shani dev.

Shani bhi apne dand ko bulate hue : ye hi baat m tumse kah raha hu, waqt rahate hue apni bhul ka praayshchit ker apni sima m aajao, anyatha.

Kher inhe baate ya yu kaho bato ka dwand kerne dete h or chalte h apne hero ki team ki or.

Location :- ranbhumi

Preety ne jese hi savitri yani k apni maa k pet m talvaar ghopi to vo ek jordaar chikh k sath apne asli roop m aagayi, jo or koi ni kubdi thi, jisne chadm vesh dharan kiya hua tha preety ko chalne k liye samraat k adesh p.

Samraat jo mrityu shaiya p apni ankhri sanse gin raha tha, yamraj utsuk ho kisi bhi shan waha pahuchne wale the usko nark yatra p le jane ko.

Samraat :- asmbhav mere maya pash se tum kese nikli, ek tritiya hoker trittya samraat k jaal vash se bahar kese aayi.

Preety vijay muskan k sath :- bahar to jab aati jab m vash m hoti, mane to bas ek chota sa khel khela aapke sath mere pyare so called pitaji, taki sampoorn tritya banker is trishastra ka sandhan kerme ki shakti arjit ker saku, aapkoo bura to na laga na .

Ji ha dosto preety Kabhi samraat k vash m thi hi ni usne bas sirf natak kiya tha taki wo apni sampoorn shaktiyo ko hasil ker sake jisko pane k baad hi usme trishastra ka wo use ker sake, parantu sawal ye tha ki wo kese samraat k mayapash se bachi kese.

Samraat :- dhoka dhoka kiya h tune mere sath , ek tritya ho ke apne raja k sath gaddaari kerne wali kul drohi, ek beti ho k apne baap ka vadh kerne wali pitra drohi dhikaar h tujhpe.

Preety :- ab mahasus hua na tumhe kesa lagta h jab koi apna dhoka deta h, ab mahasus hua kisi ka vishwas todne ka kesa sila milta h, ye dhoka ni samraat tumhare purane paapo ka karmfal h jo tumne na jane kitne masum logo ki jan leke or kitni ablao ka chal se shil bhang kerke kiya.

Ye us pida or us athah pida ka hi shrap tumhe h jo tumne us maa ko di uske ajanme balak ko marker di.

(Or aage badh ker trishastra ko usko sine or ander m ghopte hue gusse )

Ye dand h us vishwasghat ka kamine jo tune meri maa k sath kiya tha chal se unko nark se bhi battar jindagi m dhakelne k li.

Ye bolte hue preety ki ankho m ansu aa gaye the, kyunki bhale hi aaj uski maa ka doshi unka hatyara bhale hi uske samne apni jan ki bhik mang raha tha, per is sach ko bhi jhutlaya ni ja sakra tha ki wo preety ka pita bhi tha, jis kaaran jitni khushi use samraat ko marne m ho rahi thi, usse jyada dard or dukh ka use ahasas ho raha tha apne pita pe.

Veer apni premika ki vidambna ko bhali bhanti samjh raha tha, isliye wo aage bhad ker preety.

Veer :- preety meri jaan m samjh sakta hu tumhari vidambana ko, chahe kese bhi ho lekin ye tumhare pita h, lekin aaj jo inke sath jo bhi hua h wo inke karmo ka fal h, shri krishna kahate h ki yadi dharm ki raksha k liye hume yadi apno se bhi yudh kerna pade to sankoch ni kerna chahiye, or vese bhi ab tumhare pita apne karmo ka dand pa chuke h, isliye ab mukt kero inhe is paap yoni se, inhe mukti do.


Veer ki baat samjh preety ne us or dekha to paya ki samraat ki ankho m bhi ashru the jo shayad Pashchatap k the, kyunki apne ant samay p hi sahi lekin usko apne paapo ka ahasas ho chuka tha, ahasas ho chuka tha ki jav koi apna hi hume dhoka de to kesa lagta h.

Samraat :- veer sahi kah raha h beti mujh jese papi ko marne m sankoch mat kero beti, mere sath jo ho raha h (khaste hue) wo mere papo ka hi phal h, nast kerdo mujhe or meri shaktiyon ko putri jiske kaaran m apna sab kuch gawa k bhi anjan raha, mujhe mukti dedo putri is papi sharir se jiske dwara m apne hi prem ka gala ghot vishwasghaat ker use marne k liye choda , mukt ker do apne is papi pita ko beta taki wo apni galti ki shama mang se apni dharmpatni us mahan sati , yani tumhari maa se beti , mukt ker do beti m tumhare aage hath...

Ye bol samraat uske aage hath jodne laga, jise dekh preety ka or bhi bura haal ho gaya or use or apne pita ki esi halat n dekhi gayi or usne apne hath p ek cut lagaker khun nikal trishastra p dala or samraat k hriday m ghop diya chikhte hue.

Samraat ek chikh k sath santushti bhari muskaan k sath.

Samraat :- maafi k liye bahut bahut shukriya beti.

Ye bol samraat ne apne netra bhi sadev sadev k liye band ker liye.

Preety rote hue chilayi :- niiiiii.....


Or vo kafi der tak fut fut k rone lagi, naina ne use sambhalne k liye aage bhadi per veer ne use roka or kuch der preety ko rone de uski man ki sari bhadas nikal lene ko kaha, taki uske man ko shanti mil sake.

Kafi der rone dene k baad veer or preety aage bhad k preety ko sambhalne aate h tab preety dono ko ek sath gale laga boli.

Preety ek badi bahan k lahaje m naina se rote hue hi:- dekh choti manw kaha tha na ki m is samraat ko marke bhua ko aajad keraugi, dekh mane vo pura kiya, ab to manti h na apni di ko.

Naina rote hue hi :- ha di aapne apna vada sach m pura kiya, ap sach m duniya ki best di ho, love u so much di.

Ye bol vo or bhi kaske preety k gale lag gayi, or preety.

Preety rote hue

:- love u to mera bacha

Veer :- are sali sahiba aap bhi kya apni di k sath rone beth gayi, ulta to Apko samjhana chahiye ki ye to kushi ka samay h aJ dharm ki adharm p vijay hui h, aunty (preety ki maa) ko nyaay mila h or sabse badi baat aab prerna aunty ka bhi aajad kerwane jana h to kab tak ese rote rahoge.

Karan :- veer sahi kah raha h bhabhi, m aapko samjh sakta hu ki apno ko hi dand dena kitna dukhdayi hota h, samne wale se jyada pida hume hoti h, lekin niyati m jo hota h wo ho ker hi rahata h, or vese bhi ab to apke pita ko ek pap yoni se mukti mili h ese me aapko yu rona shoba ni deta.

Naina jo karan ki baate sun rahi thi usse control ni hota or vo chikhte hue bolo.


Naina :- meri di ko kya kerna chahiye kya ni vo use tumse janne ki jarurat ni h mr karam or vese bhi ek hatyara kya samjhega apne ko khone ka dukh kya hota h.

Naina ki ye baat karan ko chub gayi, kyunki usne to jyoti k baad sabse karibi ko to bachpan m hi kho diya tha, yani ki apni maa ko, or naina ki is baat se vahi dard bhari smritiya uske samne aagayi


Naina wahi n rukte hue :- or hoga bhi kese ek hatyare ko bhala kon pyaar karega, shayad tumhe kabhi kisi ka shaswat prem mila hi ni, isiliye to tum itne krur ho ki mere bhai ko bina apraadh k maar dala kyunki wo ek asur tha.

Are mujhe to lagta h ki ager yadi koi tumhara apna hua bhi hoga to tum khud hi use kha gaye honge hathyare kahike.

Naina k katu shabdo ne karan k hriday ko chali kerke rakh diya tha, jo dard usne aaj tak badi mushkil se apne ander dafmaye the aJ naina k shabdo ne fir se un ghavo ko hara ker diya tha.

Wahi jyoti bhi apne bhai ki pida ko bhali bhanti mahasus ker pa rahi thi, use naina pe itna gussa aaraha tha ki wo uska katl tak ker sakti thi, lekin usne first importance di apne bhai ko sambhalne ki jo wo uske hath ko kaske thamke apni urja se ker rahi thi.


Preety gusse se :- naina ye kya bakwas keri ja rahi ho, tum bilkul ni janti jinse tumne aaj esi badtamiji sw baat ki h unke kaaran hi aaj ...

Naina :- jo bol rahi hu sach hi bol rahi hu di, ye dono bhai bahan humare hiteshi ni shatru h, hatyare h samar bhai k, pata ni kis manhoos ghadi m inse mulakaat hui, are m to kahati hu ki....

Preety guse se chilate hue :- bas ek shabd or ni sunnungi ike khilaaph m, tum janti bhi ho inka kitna bada ahasan h humpe, yu kaho aaj ki vijay ka shrey yadi kisi ko jata h to or kini ko ni balki karan bhai or jyoti di ko hi jata h.

Ye bol preety shuru kerti h apni vo kahani jiski vajah se vo kamyab ho payi apne mission p.

Darasl jis raat kubdi preety se milne aayi thi uske jane k baad jyoti ne preety ko akele m chat p bulaya tha or sath m baba ko bhi jinhone hi preety ko bataya tha ki yadi use samraat ko marna h to pahalr use apni sampoorn shakti arjit kerni hogi, tabhi wo trishastra ko use ker payegi, tab jyoti ne hi ye natak kerne ka plan banaya jiske liye preety man to gayi lekin uske man m ek shanka thi.

Preety :- per di m ye sab kese hoga, i mean samraat k mayajaal se m kese bachungi, kya mujhme wo shakto h

Jyoti :- vo shakti to aapke pass kabse h bhabhi.

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Veer :- konsi shakti preety .

Karan :- wahi shakti veer jo is sansaar ki sabse pavitra shakti h, yani ki prem ki.

Jara dhyan se dekho bhabi ko.

Tab veer ne preety ko dekha to chonk gaya kyumki ab use preety k ander uska roop najar aaraha tha , jo use preety saman hi prem. Ker bethi thi, per galat tarike se use hasil kerne ki chah me use balidaan dena pada, yani ki vrushali ka.

Veer vrushali ko dekh thoda sa emotional ho :- vrushali.

Vrushali :- ha veer ji m, m bhale hi sadev samraat k khilaaf rahi thi, lekin sach to ye tha ki m bhi paap karmo m usse kam na thi, usika mujhe dand bhi. Mila, jiske kaaran m aapko pa ni saki.

Lekin kisi vidvan ne kaha h na veer ji humesha pyaar ka arth pana hi ni hota, vo m bhali bhanti samjh chuki thi, isliye mame deh tyagne se purv mane kasam li thi ki bhale hi m apke pyaar ko na pas saki parantu apni is bahan (preety) k prem p kabhi aanch naa ane dungi, kyunki m. Bhale hi aapke prem k layak na thi, kyunki ye adhikar sirf preety bahan ka tha or is prem ki raksha ki kasam k kaaran hi m aajtak aap sabke sath rahi


Ji ha dosto preety samraat k vash m isliye ni aasaki kyumki uske sath vrushali ka sath bhi tha jo khud samraat se shaktishali rah chuki thi, jo baat veer k batane k kaaran jyoti bhali bhanti janti thi.

Vrushali ka prem dekhker veer ki ankho m bhi ansu asgaye or vo bola.

Veer :- tum sach m dhanya ho vrushali, dhanya h tumhara niswaarth prem, lekin tumhare is prem k badle m tumhare liye kuch na de saka, iske liye m sadev tumhara apradhi hi rahunga vrushali.

Vrushali veer k ansu pochte hue use samjhati h.

Karan aage badh ker :- veer ne bilkul sahi k aP dhanya h vrushali, or dhany h aapka niswaarth prem , jisko darsha aapne prem ki ek anuthi paribhaasha ko janm diya is sansaar ko.

Isliye m karmfal data shami ka ansh karan aapko aapke is mahan karm ka puraskaar dete hue aapki or bhabhi ki aatma ko ek kerta hu jiske kaaran veer k prem ko aap bhi utna pa sakogi jitna preety bhabhi.

(Preety se) aapko isme koi aitraaj to ni bhabhhi.

Preety na m gardan hitate hue khusi khusi permission deti h.

Karan tabhu apne hath aage ker ek roshni dalta h vrushali or preety p jiske sath hi kuch hi shano m vo dono ek ho gayi or samne aaya preety ka ek anokha roop jisme uska chahra to vesa hi tha parantu ab uski ankhe vrushali jesi hari or baal lambe ho chuke the.

Naina ne jab ye kahani suni to vo mon to ho gayi parantu use apne shabdo p koi pavhtava n tha.

Karan :- veer ab samay aagaya h ki hume chal ker naina ki mataji ko ajaad kerwana chahiye, kyunki abhi hume bahut se kaam bhi kerne h jese samrast samet sabka antim sanskaar kerna

Naina :- koi jarurat ni h tumhe aanr ki m apmi. Maa ko khud hi aajad kerwa lungo.

Preety dantte hue halke se :- choti.

Naina muh bana :- ok fine chalo.

Fir naina karan or baki sab chal pade mahal ki or, karan ko trijata ne rasta bata diya tha, jiske anuklol vo mahal ki pashchim. Disha m jaker ek divaar k samne ruk gaya.

Preety :- ye hum. Kaha aagaye karan bhai aage to rasta band h


Karan :- kabhi kabhi vo bho sach ni hota bhabhi jo ankho se dikhayi de


Ye bol karan ne apna hath aage kiya, jiske sath hi uske hatho se ek roshmi nikal divar se takrayi or agle hi. Pal divar gayab ho vaha ek darwaja aagaya

Karan :- lijiye bhabhi mil gaya rasta aaiye chaliye .

Ye bol karan jese hi darwaje ko kholne ko hua uska dil joro se dhadkme laga or esi anubhuti hone lagi, jese ab vo use pame hi wala h jiske liye vo varsho se tadfa h.

Esa hi kuch haal jyoti or naina ka bhi tha, naina to is anubhuti ko samjh pa rahi thi, kyunki usko to malum tha ki ander uski ma h lekin karan or jyoti is baat se abhi tak anjan the, vo abhi tak isi anubhuti ko samjhne k dwand m uljhe hue the , lekin naina se raha na gaya.

Usne jaldi se darwaja khola or ander ki or chilate hue bhagi.

Naina nam ankho se:- maa, maaa kaha ho aap dekho m. Aagayi maa, aapki beti aapko lene aagayi.

Tabhi ek aawaaz uske or baki sabhi k kano m. Padi, jise sun naina k to khusi ki sima na rahi, lekin karan or jyoti k vajud tak ko usne hila ker rakh diya, kyunki ye wo aawax thi, jise wo sapne m bhi pahachan

Aawaz :- m yaha hu meri bachi.

Naina ne khusi se or karan or jyoti herani se us or dekhte h to pate h ki ek orat bagiche m hi mojud shiv mandir m bethi puja ker rahi h or unka chahra unki or h

Naina to khushi se usi or dodi lekin karan Or jyoti to puri tarah se hil chuke the.

Karan man me :- ni ye asambhav h, ye sirf mera baham h.

Jyoti mab me karan se :- ni ye brahm ni h bhaiya, kyunki jo aap mahasus ker rahe ho vo hi m bhi.

Karan :- parantu ye sab kese gudiya, mujhe kuch samjh ni aaraha.

Jyoti :- mujhe bhi bhai.

Wahi naina apni ma ki aawaz ko sun us taraf dodi apni maa k gale lagne ko or jese hi wo najdik pahunchi us orat yani ki naina ki ma prerna urf asha ghumi or jhat se naina ko apne aagosh me leliya.

Jiske kaaran na to naina k aanand ki sima na rahi or naa hi karan or jyoti ki herani ki, jab unhone naina ki maa ko yani ki apni maa ko dekha.

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Shani or rahu ketu ki bahas ab yudh tak pahunch chuke the.

Rahu :- ketu is shani se bahas kerne ka koi fayda ni, aaj iska kam hum sadev sadev k liye tamam ker hi dete h.

Ye bol wo apne hatyar nikal liye or shani bhi apne dand ka ahvahan kerte gue bole.

Shani :- apni ye icha bhi aaj puri kerne ka prayas ker lo.

Ketu chilate hue :- ni chodunga tujhe shani..
. Ye bolte hue tez garjana k vp ne humla kerne hi wala tha ki tabhi mahadev k krodhbhare swar un sab kamp gayw.

Mahadev :- baasss mon ho jao tum sab.

Mahadev k krodh se bhala kon anbhigyw ni, rahu ketu to agle shan hi unhone apne shastra vapas lota liya or gardan niche ker li.

Mahadev unko datte hue :- itne sammanniya pado p ho ker bhi yu balko ki tarah ladte lajja ni aati aapko.

Rahu :- lajja to apko aani chahiye mahadev, aapne bhi ab vishnu ki bhanti hum asuro k sath chal kerna aarambh ker diya.

Shani :- apni maryada m raho rahu, tum bhul rahe ho ki tum kinke sath abhadtrata kerne ka prayaas ker rahe ho rahu.

Ketu :- bhul to mahadev chuke h us vachan ko jo unhonne humare putra ko diya tha ki wo humare kisi bhi mamle m hastakshep ni karenge, lekin us vachan k ulat unhonne na kevak apna vachann bhang kiya, balki navgrah smiti se naina ka janm chupa ker niyam bhi bhang kiye h.

Isliye ab inka koi adhikaar ni h humko or der tak is dand roopi bandhan m rakhne ka, isliye mahadev mukt kijiye hume mahadev.

Mahadev kuch sovh :- Shayad tum sahi kah rahe ho rahu, chahe kaaran koi bhi ho niyam to bhang hue h, isliye hum apni bhul ko swikaar kerte hue tumhe mukt kerte h is chaya sharir se.

Ye bol mahadec ne apna hath aage kiya , jiske sath hi rahu mukt ho apne asli roop me aagaya.

Rahu hadte hue :- akhir kar , akhir kar m mukt hua , haha shani kesa laga tumhe haar ka swaad, ab dekhna shani m tumhare us ansh ka jivan m esi agni laga dunga ki vo swayam apni mrityu ki bhik mangega.

Ye bol rahu or ketu waha se gayab ho gaye , shani unke jane k baada mahadev se bole

Shani :- ye aapne kya kiya aapne gurudev, rahu ko aajad kerne ka arth h ki.

Mahadev :- ki ab vo har vo karm karega jisse karan per sankat aaye, parantu mujhe vishwas h karan per shani ki vo un khatro se nipat hi lega or wese bhi rahu ko sahi marg per lane ka yahi ek rasta shesh tha, tum samjh rahe ho na putra m kya kahana chahata hu.

Shani shivji ki muskurahat k sath :- ha guru dev bilkul sahi kaha aapne, rahu ye soch ker khush ho raha h ki use dand se mukti mili, parantu satya to ye h ki vastvik dand chakra to ab aarambh hone wala h.


Mahadev :- aane wale samay m bhale hi karn ko kayi parikshao se nipatna pade, lekin ye abhi to karan k jivan m salo purani khoi khushi k lotne ka waqt h.

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Karan or jyoti ko apni ankho p vishwas ni ho raha tha, ki unki maa yani asha jinhe wo aaj tak mrit samjhte aaye the, jis maa k pyaar k liye wo aaj tak taras rahe the wo jivit unke ankho k samne thi.

Wo kafi der to is heran rahe or jab vo puri tarah sure hue ki ye asha hi to unki khushi ki sima na rahi, wo bhi aage bhad k apni maa k gale lag jana chahte the, lekin unke man m mojud sawalo or jhijak k karan wo ruke hue the.


Asha urf prerna gale lagaye hue naina :- meri bachi meri dulari aakhir tu aahi gayi, m janti thi ki tum ek n ek din jarur aaogi.

Naina khushi ki ansu rote hue:- haa m aa gayi maa, ab m apko kahi ni jane dungi, kahi ni.

Naina kafi der apni maa k gale lagi roti rahi khusi k ansu or asha bhi , fir jab asha ne naina ko sambhal apni najre uthayi or jese hi unki najar karan or jyoti p padi wo wahi jam gayi.


Karan or jyoti ne bhi jab apni maa ko apni or dekhta paya or unki najre apni ma se takrayi to wo jam se gaye.

Karan jyoti or asha tino ki ankho k samne wo anmol or mamta bhare pal ankho k samne aane lage, wo asha ka apne ankho ke dularo k sath khelte hue khud bachi ban jana, unke banaye us chote se jungle wale ghar m wo pyaar bhari masti, wo karan ko majak majak m ladki banana, wo pyarii mamta bhari dhun m bansuri baja k unko aanandit kerna or jab wo dono bhai bahan thak jate to us jhule pe pyaar se lori sunate hue sulana.

Jiske kuch pyaarw shabd abhi tak unke kano m gunj rahe the.

(Mata pe apni
Kerna bharosa
Na chodegi teri baiya
Tujhme hi m hu.
Mujhme hi tu .
Sang tere h teri
Maiya.
So ja pyaare raj dulare
Mukhda chume teri maiya)

Tino hi maa bete duniya ko bhul ek dusre ki ankho m jhankte hue aage bhad rahe the ek dusre ki or.

Asha ka hriday to tab harsh se garbit ho gaya ki is situation m bhi dono bhai bahan apne sanskar na bhule, unhone kuch bhi bolne se pahale apni maa k charan sparsh kiye.

Asha itna hote hue rok na payi or siskate hue unko utha bas itna bola.

Asha nam ankho se :- babu, gudiya.

Karan or jyoti khushi k ansu k sath :- maaaa

Or itna bol wo khus ko rok na paye or kaske yu apni maa k lipat gaye jese unhone apni maa ko choda to wo firse unhe chod k chali jayegi.

Asha ne bhi apne jigar k tukdo ko usi bhanti kaske lagaya hua tha , uski kosis yahi thi ki itne salo ki duri se jo wo mamta apne bacho p na luta payi, wo aaj wo isi shan ek sath lota de.

Aaj sirf karan or jyoti k liye ni balki pure sansar k liye khusi ka din tha, tridev jo aaj ek sath mojud the wo bhi karan or jyoti k liye khush the.

Brahama ji :- aakhir kaar karan ko uske satkarmo ka manchaha phal praapt ho hi gaya mahadev.

Narayan :- brahmdev ka kahna uchit h mahadev, isse badkar karan k liye kya puraskaar ho sakta h.

Mahadev :- puraskaar ni narayan ye to fal h karan or jyoti k satkarmo ka jo aaj unhone apni maa ko punah praapt kiya or aage jaker aaj ki ghatna hi karan ko sadev protsahit kerti rahegi or use apne marg se bhatkne se bachayegi.

Shani dev or Mata chaya ki bhi khush the or unki ankhe bhi nam thi.

Chaya :- akhir kar vo shan aahi gaya putra kitna sunder drishy h ye aaj varsho baad do santaane apni bichdi maa se mili h, ese shubh ghatna ko dekhna sobhagya h mata.

Shani :- aapme uchit kaha mata.

Shani karan or jyoti k liye khush the lekin sath me hi wo chintit bhi the aage hone wali ghatnao or naina k reaction ko leker. lekin apni chinta ka jikra unhone apni mata k samne ni kiya, kyumki wo rang m bhang ni dalna chahte the

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Karan or jyoti kafi der apmi maa k yu hi gale lage rahe, salo ki virah ki pida ko jhelne k baad ab vo hamesha yu hi apni maa k anchal m rahama chahte the, parantu esa kaha sambhav tha.

Unko kuch der baad ek aawz ko sun ye aalag hona pada, jo naina ki thi jo herani se ye sab dekh rahi thi.

Naina :- ye sab kya ho raha h, ye kya naatak h tum dono ka or maa ye aap kya ker rahi h, aapki beti to m hu na, fir bhi aap inhe ese kyu gale laga rahi ho jese ki ye aapki ki hi santaan ho.

Asha naina k gal ko sahalate hue :- tumhare sawal me hi tumhara jwab h beti, ab waqt aachuka h tumhe or lala or gudiya ko sachai ka pata chale.

(Naina , karan or jyoti ko ek sath dekhte hue ) ha beti mane inhe ek maa saman kyumki ye dono or koi ni beti balki meri pahali santane yani ki tumhare bade bhai bahan h.

Asha k in shabdo ne waha mojud sabhi per bomb foda, naina karan or jyoti ki to herani ki sima hi na thi, sachai ko jan ke, khasker naina ki to wo halat thi ki kato to khun ni.

Use vishwas na ho raha tha ki jinko unhone na jane kya kya na kaha, unka apman kiya lanchan lagaye or yaha tak janleva humla bhi kiya , vo or koi ni unke sage bade bhai or bahan the

Asha(Karan or jyoti se ) :- ha lala or gudiya, yahi satya h naina or koi ni tumhari choti bahan h.

(Apne tino bacho ko pyar se sahalate hue) m jantti hu mere bacho tumhare liye ye sab p vishwas kerna bahut mushkil ho raha h, parantu yahi satya h mere bacho tum tino sage bhai bahan ho mere pyare jigar k tukde ho tum tino.

Fir asha batana shuru kerti h unko wo sachai jaha se naina k janm ki kahani shuru hui.

Asha batati h ki us accident m jab ranvir car se bahar kuda tha, tab kisi tarah asha bhi bach k bahar aachuki thi, or ter k kinare pahunch

Lekin Asha apne pati ki sachai pata chal jaNe k baad pata chali to use bahut bada dhaka laga or wo khub fut fut ker royi or usne than liya tha ki wo ab apne bacho ko leker kahi dur chali jayegi , lekin niyati ko kuch or hi manjur tha.

Ketu yani vp ko jab is ghatna ka pata chala to usne turant samraat ko asha ki khubsurti ka lalach de use ked karane ka adesh dedala taki apni maa k virah m karan or jyoti bachpan m hi tut jaye or kabhi uske bete k khilaaf na uth sake.

Samraat jese hi ketu k aadesh pe asha k pas pahuncha to wo asha p mar mita or usne asha ko jabardasti le jane ka prayas kiya.

Parantu usse pahale hi shani dev vaha aaphunche or unhone samraat ko chakhma de waha se asha ko bacha k le gaye.

Or unhone asha ko samjhaya ki ab asha ka wapas ghar jana karan or jyoti k prano ko sankat m dalna tha, kyonki brahma k vardaan k kaaran shani jyada time tak use rok bhi ni sakte the.

Isliye use apne bacho se dur jana hi hoga, ye baat asha bhali bhanti samjh chuki thi isliye usne apne dil p pathar rakh jer ye fesla liya tha or usne apni pahachan badali or fir shani dev ne hi uske hath m wo jadui dhaga bandh pandit ji k ghar pahunchaya tha , kyunki wahi ek safe or uchiit jagah thi.

Or fir aaage ap jante hi h aap kya hua.

Asha apni kahani batate hue fut fut k rote hue boli :- mujhe maf ker do mere bacho, m tumhe us samy chod k chali gayi jab tumhe meri sabse jyada jarurat the, kitni buri maa hu na m. tum chaho to mujhe dand delo mere bacho , per mujhhe maaf ker do.

Karan or jyori apni maa ko rota n dekh paye or unko gale laga badi mushkil se ye samjhate h ki wo unse naraj ni h , use shant kerwane lage.

Asha :- sach m m duniya ki sabse khushnaseeb ma hu, jo mujhe itne samjhdar or itna prem kerne wali santan praapt hui

Asha naina se :- naina beti yaha aao kya apne bhai bahan k gale lagogi.

Naina kuch der to khadi rahi lekin fir wo karan or jyoti ki or aage bhadne lagi, karan ne bhi is ummid m bahe felayi ki uski choti bahan aakhir kar sachai janme k baad use gale jarur lagayegi.

Lekin naina ne karan k pas pahunch k vo kiya jiski ummid kisiko na thi.

Usne ek jordaar chanta karan ko rasid diya.

Naina chikhte hue :- kya socha tumne ki khun k rishte m hum ek hi maa ki santaane h to m tumhe maaf ker dungi bloody hathye.

Asha gusse se :- ye kya tamij h apne bade bhai sw baat kerne ki naina.

Naina :- bade bhai se ni ma ek hathyare k sath esa hi vyavahar uchit h, m ise kabhi bhai ni manungi kyunki ye hathiyara h hathyara mere samar bhai ka hathyara.

And u aaj jab ma mili to badi jaldi gale mile maa kerte hue, yadi itna hi pyaar tga ma se to itne salo tumhare ek shan bhi dil m maa ko khojne ki ya unke mrityu k rahasya ka pata lagane ki man me naa aayi, aati bhi kese ek no k dhongi jo thahre, kyunki tumhe maa se matlab to kabhi tha hi ni, or hoga bhi kyu jab tumhare pas wo sab tha jiska tum jese lalchi or matlabi insan ko icha rahati h.

Or ese ghatiya or matlabi rishto ko m kadapi swikaar ni karungi kabhi ni

Or ese hi usne apni badi bahan jyoti ko bhi bahut se katu shabd kah dale jisse un dono ka hriday chali chali ho chuka tba

Jo aajtak k bakiyo k diye ghavo se kayi guna adhik the kyunki ye ghanv unko unki sagi bahan ne hi diye the

Asha gusse se :- nainaaaaa.

Ye bol asha ne naina pe hath uthana chaha lekin karan ne use rok diya or yu ishara kiya jese bol raha ho ki ni maa meri choti ko mat maro.

Lekin iska ulta hi asar naina p ho gaya or wo rote huw hi waha se chali gayi.

Karan :- maa ye aapne kya kiya rula diya choti ko.

Asha :- to kya kerti beta dekha ni kese badtameezi se baat ker rahi thi tumse


Jyoti:- maa vo abhi bachi h or situation hi esi thi ki koi bhi ese react kerta, aapko choti ko datna ni chahiye tha.

Asha thoda mahol halka kerme k liye :, majak m unke kan. Pakdte huw- acha bachu, dono ko choti bahan mili ni ki chale apni maa ko dada dadi banke samjhanw

Karan or jyoti :- ouch mumma chodo dukta h.

Ye bol wo has pade or asha bhi, fir asha ne karan k kahne pe naina ko samjha bhula k layi or fir naina ne bhi ek baar aapas k jhagde ko side m rakh apni ma ki khusi k liye normal behave kiya or apne dosto se milvayi.

Fir jyoti boli

Jyoti :- maa chalo ab waqt aagaya h ki aap hum sab ghar wapas chale , ab humari khushiyo ka lotne ka samay aachuka h.

Asha :- ha meri bachi, per jane se purb m trinata amma se milna chahti hu taki aajtak jo unhome mera khayal rakha uske liye m unhe dhanyavaad ker saku.

Trijata ka naam sumte hi karan ka chahra latak gaya or usne nam ankho se yudh ka sampoorn varnan kiya, jab asha ko pata chala trijata na rahi to uski ankhe bahane lagi, kyunki itne salo m use trijata se lagav ho chuka tha, kahi n kahi trijata m use apni maa ki chavi najar aane lagi thi, lekin honi ko kon tal sakta tha.

Karan. Or uske dosto ne badi mushkil se asha ko shant kerwaya or fir karan ne yudh m mare gaye sabhi yodhao, kubdi, samar, trijata samet samraat ki chita teyar ki,

Braham muharat ki shubh ghadi m Samraat ko agni riti anusar bete ki jagah veer jo uska javai tha usne di preety k sath mil ker.

Karan ne trijata ko agni di or uski divangat aatma ko dhanyavaad kiya, uske sahyog k liye

Vahi samar ko agmi naina ne di, uski ankho m baar bar samar k sath bitaye pyare pal aarahe the, jisme usko ek bhai ka pyaar mila tha.

Naima man me :- bhai apni nainu ko maaf ker dijiyega ki vo aapki ralsha na ker payi, lekin aapki bahan kasam khati h ki wo aapke hathyare ko ni chodegi, chahe wo mera so called bhai hi kyu na ho.

Ye baat usne door khade karan ko ghurte hue kahi thi.

Fir subah hui jiske sath aaya sawan ka antim somwar jiskw sath samraat ki bhasm k sath puja ker asha ne apni pratigya puri ki or fir wo sab chal pade ghar ki or jaha or bhi kayi raaz aaj khulne wale the

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