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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


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Iron Man

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M jaipur aachuka hu bhai or next update kal raat ko aayega 100 ℅ or uske baad yadi aap logo ki permission mile to m 3 4 din ka brake lena chahunga taki sab kam nipta ker fresh mind k sath ye chapter 2 pura ker saku
Ok bhai .
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Main bahut kam comm.karta hu kiyoki mujhe silent rehna jayeda pasand hai harry ji aapne sunday ko com.kiya ki kal bapas aaunga parso yani tuesday ko mega update dunga.sahi kahu to aapki story ko bahut pasand karta tha but aapne apni hi story ki baat laga di ager aap time per update de sako to ham aage ise pade .aadmi ke comm.ki koi value hoti hai main aur logo ki tarha aapko sorry nahi kahunga ok.
 

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Location :- shani lok.

Karan k samne khade yodha ko dekh ek to mata chaya bhi chonk gayi or shani se puchti h.

Mata chaya :- ye kya putra ye kese sambhav h, kahi ye koi maya to ni.

Shani :- ni mata ye koi maya ni balki ek esi shetani shakti h jisse chalawe ne kathor tap ker devi nikumbla se prapt ki h.

Chaya :- ye kesi shakti h putra kesa prabhv h is shakti ka.

Shani :- ye vichitr drishy karan k aas pas dikhayi de raha h mata .

Chaya :- ha putra is drishy ko dekh ker to esa pratit ho raha h jese karan kisi anya hi duniya m ho.

Shani :- esa hi samjhiye mata devi se praapt is shakti dwara chalawa ne ek ese ayam (dimension ) ka nirmaan ker diya h, jo vastvik shristi se bilkul ulat h, jesa ki aap dekh hi rahe ho, chalawa dwara nirmit aayam me dharti ka rang nila h or aasman ka mitti jesa bhura, nadi m jal k sthan m agni bah rahi h or ardh ratri ko bhi surya nikla hua h.

Or itna hi ni maa, isme mojud har vyakti har vasti ka apne vastvik swanhav se bilkul ulat h, is shakti ka upayog chalawa ne aaj putra karsn p ker use apni shakti pash m fasa diya h, or is vichitra duniya m se karan ka bahar aana bilkul saral na hoga, kyunki aaj tak ki sabse badi chunoti sabit hone wali h kyunki aaj karan ka samna karan se hi hone wala h.

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Shani dev ka kathan bikul uchit tha, kyunki karan k samaksh chalawa ka bheja hua yodha or koi ni khud Karan hi tha.

Arthaat, karan k samaksh uska hi pratiroop tha, or karan ki herani ki vajah sirf yahi ni thi ki uske samne usika pratiroop tha, herani ka vastvik kaaran ye tha ki karan ye saf saf mahasus ker pa raha tha ki uske samne mojud uska pratiroop koi sadharn clone to bilkul ni h , kyunki ek clone ya maya m urja hona asambhav tha, kyunki karan mahasus ker pa raha tha ki usme mojud shakti urja bahut hi jyada thi, utni hi jitna swayam karan m thi.

Karan man me :- ye kesi maya rachi h is shetan ne, lagta h ye yudh kafi bhishn hone wala h .

Chalawa aasman m prakat ho :- haha, kyu rakshak khud se hi dar gaye, yahi h meri chunoti, mere banaye is aayam se yadi tumhe nikalna h to tumhe aaj swayam k apne is pratiroop se hi ladna hoga , or ek baat jan lo rakshak, mere dwara is duniya ka mera ye yodha sirf roop me hi ni balki, bal budhi or shakti tino m hi tumhare samman h .

Karan abhi kuch bolne ko hi hua tha ko tabhi ek jordaar laat uske sine pe padi jisse wo dur ja ke gira or us laat se karan prabhavit hua kyunki us laat me karan saman hi bal tha, matlab ye laat karan ko uske pratiroop ne hi mari thi.

Karan uthate hue :- wah chalawa wah tumne ise mera roop or bal to dediya, per lagta h ise yudhniti or yudh k niyamo ka gyaan dena bhul gaye, jo itna bhi ni janta ki yudh k ghosh se pahale prahar kerna na keval anuchit h, balki niyamo k virudh bhi h.

Chalawa :- niyam or niti kamzoro k liye hote h rakshak, shaktishali k liye ni,shaktiwan jo kare wahi niyam hota or wahi niyati.

Mere dwara nirmit tumhara ye pratiroop me yahi to khasiyat h ki na to vo in niyamo k chakkero m padta h or na hi tumhare jese baato m samay gawata h.


Ab bato m samay gawana chodo rakshak, kyunki jitna samay tum yaha vyatit keroge utna hi tumhari mrityu kasthdayak hogi.

(M chalawa k banaye pratiroop ko ab k2 likhunga)

Abhi chalawa karan se baat ker hi raha tha ki k2 bina chetawani k ek baar fir karan pe prahar kerna chaha, lekin is baar karan satark tha, usne uska mukka bich m hi rok liya.

Karan k2 ko dekhte hue :- mrityu to hogi chalawa parantu hum me se kiski wo to samay hi batayega.

Ye bolte hue karan ne ek jordaar punch k2 k muh pe de mara, jiske sath hi k2 kafi dur jake gira.

Karan apni shirt ki bahe uper kerte hue. :- m bhi dekh lu aaj kitna dam h aj mere me.

Karan k prahar ko sahate hue k2 utha or hava m badi shi tezi se udta hua aaya Or karan p tut pada or usike sath shuru hua un dono ka mahasangram, jo bahut hi bhayankar or vinashkari hone wala tha.

Wahi dusri or.

Naina veer or samar tino un pero k nishano ka picha kerte hue aage badh hi rahe the, ki unke samne ek or duvidha samne aagayi.

Hua darasal ye tha ki pero k nishano ka picha kerte hue naina or uske sathi jis raste pe badh rahe the wo aage jaker 2 bhago me bat chuka tha.

Or duvidha ye thi ki pero k nishan dono dono rasto pe hi ja rahe the.

Samar :- naina ye kya ab hum kya kare, wo log konse raste pr gaye honge kese Pata lagaye.

Veer :- naina ya ese bhi ho sakta h ki ye nishan unki koi chal ho.

Naina :- chal h ya ni ye to hum ni jante veer, lekin hume preety or piya ko yadi dhundna h to aage to bhadna hi hoga.

Samar :- lekin kese bahan, kis raste se jaye hum.

Veer :- ye pata lagane ka to keval ek hi rasta h naina hume do teams me batna hoga.

Naina :- veer tumhaari baat fo sahi h, lekin esa kerna safe ni, kayi ye un logo ki koi chal hui to



veer :- tumhari baat to sahi h naina, lekin iske alawa humare pas koi rasta bhi ni .

(Veer kisi tarah naina ko mana hi leta h, )


Veer : naina tum esa kero tum or samar dayi or jao or m bayi or jata hu, ager tumhe preety ya un rakshaso ka kuch bhi pata chale to telepathy se msg kerna.

Wahi dusri or

Preety akele hi jungle m bhatakti hui apjlne rodra roop me dahadte hue or aas pas k pedo ko tahas nahas kerte hue shakal or uske admiyo ko dhund rahi thi.

Hua darasal ye tha ki jese hi shakal ne maya se dhua chod jungle k ander ki or bhaga tha, to dhue k kaaran naina veer or samar to use dekh paye, lekin preety ek trittya thi, usper rakshasi maya uski ankho m dhul na jhok na payi , usne jese hi unlogo ko bhagte dekha wo bhi unke piche dodi, is baat se anjan ki ye bhagna unki kayarta ni thi balki unki ek yojna thi.

Preety kafi der se unlogo ko dhund rahi thi, lekin jab unhe wo dikhayi na diye to usne gusse se ek mukka ek sukhe ped pe de mara.

Preety k ek hi prahar m ped jad sahit ukhad k gir gaya, or preety bhi thakan k maare wahi us tane p beth gayi.

Preety gusse :- pata ni ye gandu log kaha chale gaye, salo ko jamin kha gayi ya Aasmaan nigal gaya, ek to pyaas se gala sukh raha h.

Preety tane pe bethi khud se hi baate ker rahi thi ki ussise kuch hi duri pe pedo k piche se 4 ankhe thi jo uspe najar rakhi hui thi.

Un charo ankho m se do ankho ki malkin or koi ni balki kubdi thi.

Kubdi hasti hui :- hihi aakhir kubdi ki chal m tum fas hi gayi na ladki

(Apne side m khadi dusri 2 ankho se)

Lijiye malik mane apna kaam ker diya, is gaddar ko mane iske sathiyo se alag ker hi diya.

Ji ha dosto kubdi k sath khada shaks or koi ni balki khud samraat tha jo na jane kyu itna lalahit tha preety se milne ko.

Samraat :- shabas amma sach m tumhare dimag ka koi jwab ni.

Ye bol samraat preety ki or bhadne laga.

Vahi preety jo gents ki tarah apni jeb me gents wallet hi rakhti thi apne ladko jese ki kaaran wo apna purse nikal ke apni maa ki photo ko nihar rahi thi, kyunki use aaj subah se hi apni maa ki yaad aarahi thi, use esa pratit ho raha tha ki uski maa kuch sanket dena chah rahi ho.

Samraat preety k pas pahuchne se pahale hi ek ganw wale ka roop dharan ker leta h or uske pass jake bola.

Samraat :- ka baat h memsahab itni raat ko is bhayanak jungle m ka ker rahi ho, dar ni lagta aapko.

Jesa ki samar ne kaha tha ki ek tritiya jab dusre tritiya k sampark me aata h to wo ugra or wahashi ho jata h, wesa hi preety k sath ho raha tha, usne purse side m rakhte hue gusse se boli.

Preety :- ha hu, tumhe isse kya.

Samraat gusse ko control kerte hue apni shakti se preety ko shant kerte hue :- ee memsahab jara shanti see baat kero, chilana mujhe bhi aata h.

Preety shant hote hue :- maaf kerna bhai, kafi dee se pyasi hu na isliye...

Samraat apne jhole se ek pani ka bottle dete hue :- to esa bolo na memsahab, lo pani piyo or dimag ko thanda rakho.

Naina samraat se pani leke pine lagi or tabhi samraat ki najar preety k nishan pe padi, jise dekh anjaan bante hue samraat preety se puchta h.

Samraat :- oh to aap ek trittya ho memsahab, jab hi m sochu ki bhai samraat k ilaake m koi itne aaram se koi kese beth sakta h

Samraat ka naam sun preety chonk ker boli.

Preety :- kya aap jante h samraat ko, ager ha to please hume waha le jaiye, humara samraat tak pahuchna bahut jaruri h.

Samraat kuch sochte hue :- ha pahucha denge memsahab wo to humare yaha k jagidaar h, raja maharaja jesi shan h unki ek adh baar gujarte hue dekha h unhhe.

Lekin aapko memsahab unse kya kaam.

Preety :- mujhe or meri bahan ko usse hisab chukta kerna ek purana.

Samraat :- kesa hisab

Wahi dusri or

Karan or k2 ki jang bahut hi bhayank roop le chuki thi, wo dono hatho se hathiyaaron se or na jane hi kitne bhayank ashtro se yudh ker rahe the.

Jiske kaaran us aayam ki har jagah buri tarah tahas nahas ho chuki thi, or sath me karan or k2 bhi buri tarah ghayal ho chuke the.

Karan or k2 dono hi abhi dwand yudh m lin the, kabhi karan k2 ko utha ker dur fekta h or kabhi k2 karan ki gardan se utha k uspe mukko ki barsat ker raha tha.

Lekin is bhayank yudh k kaaran dono hi ab buri tarah thak chuke the, to karan bola.

Karan :- dekho itna to hum dono ache se hi jante h ki hum dono m se haar to koi ni manne wala or is yudh ka bhi koi nirnay abhi tak ni ho saka h, or hum dono hi buri tarah thak chuke h.

To mera ye prastav h ki hume kuch der k liye Vishram ker lena chahiye taki hum apne ghavo ko thik kee or apmi shakti ko bator fir se dwand ker sake.

Kya tumhe swikar h

K2 kuch der sochta h or apni gardan ha m hila deta h, kyumki k2 bol ni sakta tha.

Karan muskurate hue :- ye hui na baat chalo .

Ye bolte hue karan or k2 ek sath piche ki or ghume or jese hi karan kuch aage bhada tab hi use apni pith per ek asahniya pida ka ahasas hua.

Jo k2 k chal dwara kiye gaye pith piche war se ki gayi hui thi, karan dard k maare niche gir gaya or tadafne laga.

Chalawa aasman se :- haha kitne murkh ho tum rakshak, mane tumse pahale hi kaha tha ki mera ye yodha bhale hi tumhara hi roop ho, lekin isme tumhare kamzor insani gun ni, lekin tum na mane ab bhugto or ho jao marne k liye teyar.


Chalawa k ye bolne k sath hi k2 apne pero se karan ki pith me dhase khanjar ko dabate hue uske pero sharir m ghusane laga.

Wahi dusri Or

Naina or samar jo aage badte hue shakal ko dhund rahe the unke hath abhi tak kuch na laga tha.

Naina chintit swar me :- pata ni preety kaha hogi, ek to wo wese hi apne hosh m ni h uper se ye sab, wo thik to hogi na bhaiiii...

Samar :- ha sister tum Chinta mat kero, ishwer hamare sath h, preety ji bilkul sahi salamat hi hogi

Naina :- bhagwan kere aap jesa bol rahe ho vess hi ho bhai.

Samar udas hote hue :- ye sab meri hi galti hi h bahan, aaj mere kaaran tumhe kya kya ni Sahna pad raha.

Naina :- ni bhai m aapse kitni baar kahu ki jo hua usme koi galti ni h, ye to meri hi niyati h, jiske kaaran ye sab ho raha h.

Abhi naina or samar baat kerte hue Aage bhad hi rahe the ki achanak se samar ne ek tir naina ki or aate hue dekha.


Samar naina ko apni or khechte hue :- naina bahan bacho.

En waqt pe samar k khichne naina baar bar bachti h, tabhi shakal ka wo sipahi haste hue jhadiyo se bahar nikalte hue.

Sipahi :- wah ladki kya baat h kuch to h tere me jo tune danv kul k ek ni balki 2 2 gadaro ko apni or ker liya h

Lekin koi baat ni aaj tere sath danav jati k har ek gaddar ka nash hoga.

Naina :- baate chodo dusht, ager veer ho to shastra uthao or yudh kero.

Sipahi :- teri ye akhri icha bhi aaj puri ker deta hu m.

Ye bol sipahi ne bhi astra nikal liye or ho gaya yudh ko sajj.

Or usike sath ek baar fir shuru ho gaya naina or un rakshaso ka mahayuddh, jisme is baar naina apni puri shakti k sath yudh ker rahi thi, ek hath se to wo apna trishul se un asuro ko bijli k jhatko se yamlok pahucha rahi thi wahi dusri or dusre hath se wo apni fire power ka use kerte hue rakshaso ko bhasm ker rahi thi.

Samar bhi himmat juta un seniko m se ek ki talvaar utha ker un rakshaso se bhid gaya or veerta se un asuro ko katne laga, shayad yahi thi achai ki shakti, jo. Kamzor samar ko shaktishali bana chuki thi.

Sipahi ne jese hi dekha ki uski sena dhire dhire nasht ho rahi h to wo ek or bhagne laga or uske piche piche naina bhi bhagi lekin sipahi jyada dur tak n bhag paya kyunki aage khai thi or wo dono.uske kinare pe the , sipnaina k aage raham ki bhik mangne laga ki use wo chod de badle m wo use shakal tak leke jayega, shetan ki kasam.

Shetan ki kasam sun naina ne jese hi kuch bolna chaha ki tabhi achanak se ek jordar shakti prahar uspe or sipahi p hua jiske veg k kaaran vo dono us gahari khai me gir pade .

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