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Wahi dusri or

Raat k waqt karan or uski party sab k sone k baad chat per wapas milti h or apna plan ki shuruaat kerne ko tatpar ho.

Karan :- friends samay aagaya h us ghadi ka, us mahasangram k aarambh ka, us dharm yudh ka , jiske sath ant hoga adharm ka, paap ka or un masumo k katilo ka, jinke khun se un dushto k hath sane hue h.

Or humara ye sobhagya h ki ishwer ne is mahan jankalyaan or dharm yudh k m dharm ka paksh rakhne ka.

Kya aap sab sajj h us mahasangram k liye, is dharm yudh k liye.



Sab ek sath josh me :- hum sajj h bhai.

Karan :- bahut ache, mujhe aap sab se yahi aasha h, yahi josh or utsah k sath hume apna apna karya kerna.

Ye bol karan jyoti ko ishara kerta h, aage bolne k liye.

Jyoti :- bhai ne bilkul sahi kaha dharm yudh m vijay k liye esa hi utsah ho dridh nishchay ki avashyakta hoti h parantu..

Shweta bich me :- parantu kya di.

Jyoti :- parantu ye jhumki ki yudh me keval josh evam bal se hi vijay prapt ni hoti, josh k sath hosh or budhimata bhi avashyak h

khaasker ki tab, jab hume gyaat h ki shatu bal ka ni chal ka maharathi h, isliye hume bal ka ni budhi ka prayog kerna hoga.

Aman :- to ab hume kya kerna hoga.

Karan :- jo kerna h wo m karumga dost, kyunki ye meri pariksha h, jisse paar kerke hi meri bahan ko navjivan mil payega, aap sabko bas vesa hi kerna h jesa hum sabne subah decide kiya tha.

Aman or diya tum dono chat se ghar k charo or najar rakhte rakhwali karoge, or ha wo samne wale ped k aage jo bhi bhade use halke m bilkul mat lena kyunki itni raat ko kooi bhi sadharan insaan to bilkul ni aayega.

Aman :- tum yaha ki bilkul chinta mat kerna dost, jab tak tumhara ye bhai h, tab tak humare is parivaar per ankh bhi ni utha payega.

Diya :- ha bhaiya aap nishchint ho ker jaiye, aapki ye bahan apni ankhri sans tak apne parivaar ki raksha karegi.


(Shweta or sonam se)

Shweta or sonam meri pyari bahano aap sabko ye dhyan rakhna h ki koi bhi ghar ka rat ko jag na jaye, or yadi koi jage bhi to unhe is baare m bilkul shak na ho .

Sonam :- ji bhai esa hi hoga or ha or sath hi m apne prabhu dwara praapt vardaan se ghar or aapke charo or ek suraksha kavach bana dungi, jis kaaran bina humari marji k is ghar k aas pas kisine aane ka bhi prayaas kiya to wo bhasm ho jayega.

Karan :- shabash meri pyaari gudiya, m dhanya hua jo tumhare jesi param bhakt swaroopa pat......(galti ka ahasas kerte hue ki as pas sab h) bahan mili.

Fir kuch bate discuss kerne k baad karan bola.

Karan :- friends ab samay aagaya h humari yatra k aarambh ka, to bhagwan vighneshwar ka naam leker aarambh kerte h is yatra ka.

Karan apne sabhi sathiyo k sath hath jod shri ganesh ka dhyan kerte h.

fir karan rohan ko ishara kerta h, jiske sath hi wo apne asli roop me vishal kauve k roop m aagaya , jis per karan jyoti or kaya swar ho nikal pade us jungle ki or wahi aman or uski team bhi lag gaye apne karya m.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uske sathi bhi apni teyari lagbhag khatam ker chuke the, naina dhyan m bethi khud ki shaktiyo ko enhance kerne m lagi hui thi, wahi preety to alag hi mood m thi, jubse usne jungle m jane wali baat ka suna tha tabse wo ugra ho gayi thi or apni talvaar k sath hi practice m lagi hui thi.

Wahi samar to buri tarah dara hua tha kyunki sabse jyada khatra uski jaan ko hi tha, wo aaj apne us dhushman k pas jane wala tha jiske baare m to use ye tak yaad na tha ki usse aakhir dushmani kya thi samar ki.

Vahi veer piya ki family ko samjhane m lagi hui thi, hemant ne ghar m hi nurse or baki sab arrangement kerwa diya tha or ab wo ghar m hi thi, lekin hemant ne doctor se kahlwake use nind ka injection dilwa diya tha, jis kaaran wo subah se pahale uthne wali na thi.

Hemant rote hue :- veer beta, m aap sabke aage hath jodta please kese bhi kerke meri bachi ko bacha lo, ni to m or meri bivi ji ni payenge.

Shruti chahe jesi bhi thi, lekin is sach ko jhutlaya ni ja sakta tha ki wo apne parivar se bahut pyar kerti thi, khaskar ki apni choti bahan se .

Shruti apne papa ko sambhalte hue :- ha veer ji please meri bahan ko bacha lijiye manti hu mane aap sab se bahut badtameezi ki h, or aap Chahe mujhe uske liye koi bhi saja dede, lekin please meri bahan ko bacha lijiye, mere karmo ki saja meri bahan ko na de, m aapke per padti hu.

Veer shruti ko rokte hue :- are are esa kerke mujhe sharminda na kare piya humari bhi kuch lagti h or satya to yahi h ki humare kaaran hi aunty ki ye haalat hui or piya ko wo dusht utha k le gaye.

Lekin hum apni galti sudharenge, aap log chinta mat kijiye , aunty k hosh m aane se pahale hi hum humari piya ko wapas le aayenge.

Piche se apne dhyan se bahar aate hue n hue.

Naina :- or ye humara vada h uncle, kal aunty k hosh m aane se pahale hi humari piyu yaha hogi.

(Apne sathiyo se) friends chalo ready ho jao, time ho gaya h dharm yudh ka.

Preety :- bas sister kasam se tumhare muh se yahi shabd sunne ko hi teyar ka hi intezaar tha mujhe , meri talvaar bade dino se pyasi h un chachundro k khun ki, aaj iski pyaas ache se bhujegi.

Naina :- preety please tum thoda apna krodh pe niyantran rakhna Kyunki humara ek galat kadam piya ki jaan ko khatre m dal sakta h.

Naina ne preety se ye baat telepathy se kahi thi, taki piya ka parivaar dare ni.

Preety :- ok sister apun full try karegi.

Fir naina or uske sathi bhi ek baar bhagwan k darshan or prathna ker sab apni jeep m beth nikal pade van ki or.

Wahi dusri or

Karan jyoti or kaya kaal pe sawar pahunch jese hi van k pass pahunche to karan ne kaal ko rokte hue kaha.

Karan :- bas rohan tum hume yahi utaar do or tum uper se hi adrishy roop m humare sath raho.

Rohan vesa hi kerta h or sabko niche utar khud bhi ek baar k liye apne insani
Kaya :- per sakha esa kerne ki kya jarurt h, jab hum udker hi apni manjil tak pahuch sakte h to chal ker kyu samay nasht kare.

Karan :- sakhi humari ye pariksha utni saral bhi ni jitna tum soch rahi ho , ye dekho.

Ye bol karan ne ek hath Aage kiya jiske sath hi ek Agni roop shakti poonj uske hath m aaya.

Or karan ne wo shaktipunj agle hi shan wan ki or feka, wo agni punj jese hi us van m gira to waha aag lag gayi.

Karan ki ye harkat dekh isse pahale koi kuch bole usse pahale hi waha kuch esa hua jise dekh karan k alawa sab chonk gaye.

Hua darasal yu tha ki wo agmi jo karan ne abhi van m lagayi thi, wo agle hi shan apne aap swatah hi shant ho gayi, or jale hue ped bhi wapas ese normal ho gaye jese waha kuch hua hi na hua ho.

Karan :- ye dekho sakhi chalawa ka koi particular area ni h, balki ye pura jungle hi uska ilaka h jisme kayi mayawi jaal uske dwara rachit h, or ya yu kaho jalo ka ek sudhrid vyuh h jise tode hum us tak ni pahunch sakte, na hi dharti marg se or na hi aakash marg se, isliye hume chal ker hi us tak pahuchna hoga uske dwara rachit har mayawi vyuh ko

Jyoti :- to fir yaha khade hum apna samay kyu nasht ker rahe h bhai, chaliye or khatma ker dete h in haramio ka.

Rohan majakiya age of ultron style m :- control darling gali ni.

Jyoti :- o saste captain America , malum h chalo apni bahan ko mat sikhao.

Ye bol has padi or fir rohan wapas apne asli roop m adrishy hoker havai marg se karan jyoti or kaya k sath sath chalne laga.

Abhi karan jyoti or kaya kuch aage hi chale honge ki unki pahali chunoti unke samne aagayi.

Achanak se aas pas ki jhadiyo se pero ki aawaze aane lagi or bina hava k pate bhi hilne lage.

Jinhe sunte hi karan or sathi savdhan ho gaye.

Karan man me :- rohan.

Rohan :- bhai aap log jara savdhan ho jaiye, mujhe kuch saaf to najar ni aaraha, lekim aas pas ki jhadiyo m koi to chupa h wo bhi ek se kayi jyada.

Karan :- ko h waha jo yu choro ki tarah humara picha ker raha h, himmat h to samne aao.

Karan ka itna hi bolna tha ki tabhi jhadiyo se ek sath kayi parchai achanak se kud unhe 4 ro taraf se gher liya.

Are ye kya ye parchaiuya to aadamkhor bhediyo k ek jhund ki thi, lekin herani ki baat ye thi ki is area m bhediye ni paye jate the or vo bhediye bhi sadharan bhediye k size se dugne bade the.
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Jiska ek hi arth tha.

Karan :- gudiya, sakhi savdhan ye aam bhediye ni h, shetani bhediye h, isliye inpe raham bilkul mat kerna or jitna jaldi ho sake hume inka khatma kerna hoga, taki ye apne or sathiyo ko bula na paye, samjhi na tum dono.

Jyoti apna hath uper kerti h jiske sath hi uske hath me uska dhanush aajata h.

Jyoti :- ji bhai

Kaya ne bhi apni talvar nikal li or karan bhi dandnayak k roop me aagaya or apne trishul ka avahan ker liya.

Or karan ka ishara kerte hi kaya or jyoti karan k sath tut padi un bhediyo k jhund p.

Karan ne rohan ko kuch bhi kerne ko mana kiya tha, kyunki wo backup tha unka.

Karan ka ishara pate hi kaya bhag ker jati h or ek bhediye k muh pe apna ghutna mar use gira deti h or bina waqt gawaye apni talvaar uske sine m ghomp deti h.

Wahi jyoti bhi bhagker uchal ker hava me hi apni pratyancha khichti h, jiske sath hi uske dhanush pe ek teer aajata h or wo teer wo jhat se un bhediyo pe chod deti h, jiske sath hi wo teer ek teer se 3 teero m badal un bhediyo ko ja laga or wo 3no wahi dher ho gaye.

Wahi karan ne pahala avsar bhediyo ko diya unhe aakraman k liye chidane ka ishara kerte hue, karan ka ishare se bhediye bhadak uthe, or do bhediye uski or bhage .

Unme se ek ek bhediye ne jese hi karan pe chalang lagayi to karan ne tezi se hi apna trishul aage ker hava me hi uske sharir m apna trishul ghomp diya.

Jiske agle hi pal wo bhediya dard se chikte hue bhasm ho gaya, or duse bhediye ko karan ne ek jordar ghusa de mara jisse wo dur ja gira or uska jabda tak tut gaya.

Karan kaya or jyoti ne kuch hi shano m sare jhund ka safaya ker diya.

Jyoti khush hote hue :- ye chunoti to badi hi aasan thi bhai, kya itna hi dam h us chalawe m.

Shayad jyoti ne ye baat kuch jaldi hi bol di thi, kyumki achamk wo hua jisko dekh sab chonk uthe.

Karan or uske sathiyo dwara mare gaye sare bhediye wapas jivit ho khade hone lage, yaha tak ki karan ne jisko bhasm ker diya tha wo bhi wapas jinda ho gaya.

Karan jyoti or kaya ne fir ek baar un sabka ant kiya, lekin wo firse jivit ho uthe, esa unhone 3 4 bar kiya,lekin wo sab wapas jinda ho jate.

Kaya :- sakha ye to merne ka naam hi ni le rahe, esa chalta raha to hum to kabhi us dusht tak ni pahunch payenge.

Jyoti :- ha bhai kuch kijiye, is maya ka koi to tod hoga.

Karan kuch der sochta h, jabtak kaya or jyoti un bhediyo ko sambhal rahi hoti h, tabhi karan ek baat notice kerta h ki wo sab bhediye andhere m hi yudh ker rahe h, koi bhi waha kuch area m jaha chand ki roshni fel rahi h waha aane ka bilkul prayas ni ker rahe tab use kuch kuch baat samjh aajati h.

Karan apna hath aage kerta h jiske sath hi uske hath me ek safed urja punj aajata h or use hava m uchalte hue wo jyoti ko us punj p teer chalane ko kahata h.

Jyoti jese hi us punj pe ter chalati h to wo teer se wo punj tut pada or usse prakash nikal charo or fel gaya

Jiske sath hi karan ne dekha ki sabhi bhediye to bilkul pahale jese the, unme se ek bhediya jo unka leader tha achanak se uske matheper ek laal mani jesa kuch aagaya or wo chamkne laga.
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karan samjh gaya wahi h us maya ks tod.

Karan jyoti se :- gudiya us bhediye k mathe per baan chalao, isse pahale roshni hate

Jyoti pratyancha khichte hue :- ji bhai.

Or itna bolne k sath hi jyoti ne baan chod diya or wo baan sidha ja bhediye k mathe m laga or teer lagte hi wo bhediya jalne laga or uske sath hi uske sathi bhediye bhi apne aap jalne lage or kuch hi palo m sab jal ker rakh ho gaye or uske sath hi chalawe k vyuh ki pahali divar dah gayi.

Kaya :- hash bala tali.

Karan :- bala tali ni sakhi balki bala ka to ab aarambh ho chuka h, pahale vyuh k tutne se baki vyuh ki shaktiya or bhi sachet ho jayegi, aage ka safar or bhi kathin hone wala h.

Jyoti :- safar chahe kitna bhi kathin kyu na ho bhai hum mil ker use pura ker hi lenge.

Karan :- ha wo to h gudiya , itni sunder Partner jo h mere sath safar to mast gujrega hi na.

Rohan uper se :- or m bhi.

Karan majak me :- sala kavab me hadi.

Iske sath hi sab has pade or age badh chale.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uske sathi bhi jungle k bahar pahunch chuke the or gadi wahi rok wo niche utre kyunki unhe bhi aage ka safar pedal hi kerna tha.

Naina :- friends yaha se dushman ki sima start hoti h, isliye bilkul sachet rahana kyunki khatra yaha kadam kadam pe ho sakta h, hume apna ek ek kadam soch samjh k rakhna hoga, ni to hum mushlil me pad sakte h.

Preety ugra swar me :- aane wale muskilo ki chinta kerna darpok logo ka kaam h sister veero ka ni, or dharm k marg pe chalne walo k liye to bhay ka koi sthan hi ni hota.

Ye bol preety aage Age chalne lagi or piche uske sathi, aane wale khatro se bilkul anbhigya ho

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Wahi dusri or

Raat k waqt karan or uski party sab k sone k baad chat per wapas milti h or apna plan ki shuruaat kerne ko tatpar ho.

Karan :- friends samay aagaya h us ghadi ka, us mahasangram k aarambh ka, us dharm yudh ka , jiske sath ant hoga adharm ka, paap ka or un masumo k katilo ka, jinke khun se un dushto k hath sane hue h.

Or humara ye sobhagya h ki ishwer ne is mahan jankalyaan or dharm yudh k m dharm ka paksh rakhne ka.

Kya aap sab sajj h us mahasangram k liye, is dharm yudh k liye.



Sab ek sath josh me :- hum sajj h bhai.

Karan :- bahut ache, mujhe aap sab se yahi aasha h, yahi josh or utsah k sath hume apna apna karya kerna.

Ye bol karan jyoti ko ishara kerta h, aage bolne k liye.

Jyoti :- bhai ne bilkul sahi kaha dharm yudh m vijay k liye esa hi utsah ho dridh nishchay ki avashyakta hoti h parantu..

Shweta bich me :- parantu kya di.

Jyoti :- parantu ye jhumki ki yudh me keval josh evam bal se hi vijay prapt ni hoti, josh k sath hosh or budhimata bhi avashyak h

khaasker ki tab, jab hume gyaat h ki shatu bal ka ni chal ka maharathi h, isliye hume bal ka ni budhi ka prayog kerna hoga.

Aman :- to ab hume kya kerna hoga.

Karan :- jo kerna h wo m karumga dost, kyunki ye meri pariksha h, jisse paar kerke hi meri bahan ko navjivan mil payega, aap sabko bas vesa hi kerna h jesa hum sabne subah decide kiya tha.

Aman or diya tum dono chat se ghar k charo or najar rakhte rakhwali karoge, or ha wo samne wale ped k aage jo bhi bhade use halke m bilkul mat lena kyunki itni raat ko kooi bhi sadharan insaan to bilkul ni aayega.

Aman :- tum yaha ki bilkul chinta mat kerna dost, jab tak tumhara ye bhai h, tab tak humare is parivaar per ankh bhi ni utha payega.

Diya :- ha bhaiya aap nishchint ho ker jaiye, aapki ye bahan apni ankhri sans tak apne parivaar ki raksha karegi.


(Shweta or sonam se)

Shweta or sonam meri pyari bahano aap sabko ye dhyan rakhna h ki koi bhi ghar ka rat ko jag na jaye, or yadi koi jage bhi to unhe is baare m bilkul shak na ho .

Sonam :- ji bhai esa hi hoga or ha or sath hi m apne prabhu dwara praapt vardaan se ghar or aapke charo or ek suraksha kavach bana dungi, jis kaaran bina humari marji k is ghar k aas pas kisine aane ka bhi prayaas kiya to wo bhasm ho jayega.

Karan :- shabash meri pyaari gudiya, m dhanya hua jo tumhare jesi param bhakt swaroopa pat......(galti ka ahasas kerte hue ki as pas sab h) bahan mili.

Fir kuch bate discuss kerne k baad karan bola.

Karan :- friends ab samay aagaya h humari yatra k aarambh ka, to bhagwan vighneshwar ka naam leker aarambh kerte h is yatra ka.

Karan apne sabhi sathiyo k sath hath jod shri ganesh ka dhyan kerte h.

fir karan rohan ko ishara kerta h, jiske sath hi wo apne asli roop me vishal kauve k roop m aagaya , jis per karan jyoti or kaya swar ho nikal pade us jungle ki or wahi aman or uski team bhi lag gaye apne karya m.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uske sathi bhi apni teyari lagbhag khatam ker chuke the, naina dhyan m bethi khud ki shaktiyo ko enhance kerne m lagi hui thi, wahi preety to alag hi mood m thi, jubse usne jungle m jane wali baat ka suna tha tabse wo ugra ho gayi thi or apni talvaar k sath hi practice m lagi hui thi.

Wahi samar to buri tarah dara hua tha kyunki sabse jyada khatra uski jaan ko hi tha, wo aaj apne us dhushman k pas jane wala tha jiske baare m to use ye tak yaad na tha ki usse aakhir dushmani kya thi samar ki.

Vahi veer piya ki family ko samjhane m lagi hui thi, hemant ne ghar m hi nurse or baki sab arrangement kerwa diya tha or ab wo ghar m hi thi, lekin hemant ne doctor se kahlwake use nind ka injection dilwa diya tha, jis kaaran wo subah se pahale uthne wali na thi.

Hemant rote hue :- veer beta, m aap sabke aage hath jodta please kese bhi kerke meri bachi ko bacha lo, ni to m or meri bivi ji ni payenge.

Shruti chahe jesi bhi thi, lekin is sach ko jhutlaya ni ja sakta tha ki wo apne parivar se bahut pyar kerti thi, khaskar ki apni choti bahan se .

Shruti apne papa ko sambhalte hue :- ha veer ji please meri bahan ko bacha lijiye manti hu mane aap sab se bahut badtameezi ki h, or aap Chahe mujhe uske liye koi bhi saja dede, lekin please meri bahan ko bacha lijiye, mere karmo ki saja meri bahan ko na de, m aapke per padti hu.

Veer shruti ko rokte hue :- are are esa kerke mujhe sharminda na kare piya humari bhi kuch lagti h or satya to yahi h ki humare kaaran hi aunty ki ye haalat hui or piya ko wo dusht utha k le gaye.

Lekin hum apni galti sudharenge, aap log chinta mat kijiye , aunty k hosh m aane se pahale hi hum humari piya ko wapas le aayenge.

Piche se apne dhyan se bahar aate hue n hue.

Naina :- or ye humara vada h uncle, kal aunty k hosh m aane se pahale hi humari piyu yaha hogi.

(Apne sathiyo se) friends chalo ready ho jao, time ho gaya h dharm yudh ka.

Preety :- bas sister kasam se tumhare muh se yahi shabd sunne ko hi teyar ka hi intezaar tha mujhe , meri talvaar bade dino se pyasi h un chachundro k khun ki, aaj iski pyaas ache se bhujegi.

Naina :- preety please tum thoda apna krodh pe niyantran rakhna Kyunki humara ek galat kadam piya ki jaan ko khatre m dal sakta h.

Naina ne preety se ye baat telepathy se kahi thi, taki piya ka parivaar dare ni.

Preety :- ok sister apun full try karegi.

Fir naina or uske sathi bhi ek baar bhagwan k darshan or prathna ker sab apni jeep m beth nikal pade van ki or.

Wahi dusri or

Karan jyoti or kaya kaal pe sawar pahunch jese hi van k pass pahunche to karan ne kaal ko rokte hue kaha.

Karan :- bas rohan tum hume yahi utaar do or tum uper se hi adrishy roop m humare sath raho.

Rohan vesa hi kerta h or sabko niche utar khud bhi ek baar k liye apne insani
Kaya :- per sakha esa kerne ki kya jarurt h, jab hum udker hi apni manjil tak pahuch sakte h to chal ker kyu samay nasht kare.

Karan :- sakhi humari ye pariksha utni saral bhi ni jitna tum soch rahi ho , ye dekho.

Ye bol karan ne ek hath Aage kiya jiske sath hi ek Agni roop shakti poonj uske hath m aaya.

Or karan ne wo shaktipunj agle hi shan wan ki or feka, wo agni punj jese hi us van m gira to waha aag lag gayi.

Karan ki ye harkat dekh isse pahale koi kuch bole usse pahale hi waha kuch esa hua jise dekh karan k alawa sab chonk gaye.

Hua darasal yu tha ki wo agmi jo karan ne abhi van m lagayi thi, wo agle hi shan apne aap swatah hi shant ho gayi, or jale hue ped bhi wapas ese normal ho gaye jese waha kuch hua hi na hua ho.

Karan :- ye dekho sakhi chalawa ka koi particular area ni h, balki ye pura jungle hi uska ilaka h jisme kayi mayawi jaal uske dwara rachit h, or ya yu kaho jalo ka ek sudhrid vyuh h jise tode hum us tak ni pahunch sakte, na hi dharti marg se or na hi aakash marg se, isliye hume chal ker hi us tak pahuchna hoga uske dwara rachit har mayawi vyuh ko

Jyoti :- to fir yaha khade hum apna samay kyu nasht ker rahe h bhai, chaliye or khatma ker dete h in haramio ka.

Rohan majakiya age of ultron style m :- control darling gali ni.

Jyoti :- o saste captain America , malum h chalo apni bahan ko mat sikhao.

Ye bol has padi or fir rohan wapas apne asli roop m adrishy hoker havai marg se karan jyoti or kaya k sath sath chalne laga.

Abhi karan jyoti or kaya kuch aage hi chale honge ki unki pahali chunoti unke samne aagayi.

Achanak se aas pas ki jhadiyo se pero ki aawaze aane lagi or bina hava k pate bhi hilne lage.

Jinhe sunte hi karan or sathi savdhan ho gaye.

Karan man me :- rohan.

Rohan :- bhai aap log jara savdhan ho jaiye, mujhe kuch saaf to najar ni aaraha, lekim aas pas ki jhadiyo m koi to chupa h wo bhi ek se kayi jyada.

Karan :- ko h waha jo yu choro ki tarah humara picha ker raha h, himmat h to samne aao.

Karan ka itna hi bolna tha ki tabhi jhadiyo se ek sath kayi parchai achanak se kud unhe 4 ro taraf se gher liya.

Are ye kya ye parchaiuya to aadamkhor bhediyo k ek jhund ki thi, lekin herani ki baat ye thi ki is area m bhediye ni paye jate the or vo bhediye bhi sadharan bhediye k size se dugne bade the.
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Jiska ek hi arth tha.

Karan :- gudiya, sakhi savdhan ye aam bhediye ni h, shetani bhediye h, isliye inpe raham bilkul mat kerna or jitna jaldi ho sake hume inka khatma kerna hoga, taki ye apne or sathiyo ko bula na paye, samjhi na tum dono.

Jyoti apna hath uper kerti h jiske sath hi uske hath me uska dhanush aajata h.

Jyoti :- ji bhai

Kaya ne bhi apni talvar nikal li or karan bhi dandnayak k roop me aagaya or apne trishul ka avahan ker liya.

Or karan ka ishara kerte hi kaya or jyoti karan k sath tut padi un bhediyo k jhund p.

Karan ne rohan ko kuch bhi kerne ko mana kiya tha, kyunki wo backup tha unka.

Karan ka ishara pate hi kaya bhag ker jati h or ek bhediye k muh pe apna ghutna mar use gira deti h or bina waqt gawaye apni talvaar uske sine m ghomp deti h.

Wahi jyoti bhi bhagker uchal ker hava me hi apni pratyancha khichti h, jiske sath hi uske dhanush pe ek teer aajata h or wo teer wo jhat se un bhediyo pe chod deti h, jiske sath hi wo teer ek teer se 3 teero m badal un bhediyo ko ja laga or wo 3no wahi dher ho gaye.

Wahi karan ne pahala avsar bhediyo ko diya unhe aakraman k liye chidane ka ishara kerte hue, karan ka ishare se bhediye bhadak uthe, or do bhediye uski or bhage .

Unme se ek ek bhediye ne jese hi karan pe chalang lagayi to karan ne tezi se hi apna trishul aage ker hava me hi uske sharir m apna trishul ghomp diya.

Jiske agle hi pal wo bhediya dard se chikte hue bhasm ho gaya, or duse bhediye ko karan ne ek jordar ghusa de mara jisse wo dur ja gira or uska jabda tak tut gaya.

Karan kaya or jyoti ne kuch hi shano m sare jhund ka safaya ker diya.

Jyoti khush hote hue :- ye chunoti to badi hi aasan thi bhai, kya itna hi dam h us chalawe m.

Shayad jyoti ne ye baat kuch jaldi hi bol di thi, kyumki achamk wo hua jisko dekh sab chonk uthe.

Karan or uske sathiyo dwara mare gaye sare bhediye wapas jivit ho khade hone lage, yaha tak ki karan ne jisko bhasm ker diya tha wo bhi wapas jinda ho gaya.

Karan jyoti or kaya ne fir ek baar un sabka ant kiya, lekin wo firse jivit ho uthe, esa unhone 3 4 bar kiya,lekin wo sab wapas jinda ho jate.

Kaya :- sakha ye to merne ka naam hi ni le rahe, esa chalta raha to hum to kabhi us dusht tak ni pahunch payenge.

Jyoti :- ha bhai kuch kijiye, is maya ka koi to tod hoga.

Karan kuch der sochta h, jabtak kaya or jyoti un bhediyo ko sambhal rahi hoti h, tabhi karan ek baat notice kerta h ki wo sab bhediye andhere m hi yudh ker rahe h, koi bhi waha kuch area m jaha chand ki roshni fel rahi h waha aane ka bilkul prayas ni ker rahe tab use kuch kuch baat samjh aajati h.

Karan apna hath aage kerta h jiske sath hi uske hath me ek safed urja punj aajata h or use hava m uchalte hue wo jyoti ko us punj p teer chalane ko kahata h.

Jyoti jese hi us punj pe ter chalati h to wo teer se wo punj tut pada or usse prakash nikal charo or fel gaya

Jiske sath hi karan ne dekha ki sabhi bhediye to bilkul pahale jese the, unme se ek bhediya jo unka leader tha achanak se uske matheper ek laal mani jesa kuch aagaya or wo chamkne laga.
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karan samjh gaya wahi h us maya ks tod.

Karan jyoti se :- gudiya us bhediye k mathe per baan chalao, isse pahale roshni hate

Jyoti pratyancha khichte hue :- ji bhai.

Or itna bolne k sath hi jyoti ne baan chod diya or wo baan sidha ja bhediye k mathe m laga or teer lagte hi wo bhediya jalne laga or uske sath hi uske sathi bhediye bhi apne aap jalne lage or kuch hi palo m sab jal ker rakh ho gaye or uske sath hi chalawe k vyuh ki pahali divar dah gayi.

Kaya :- hash bala tali.

Karan :- bala tali ni sakhi balki bala ka to ab aarambh ho chuka h, pahale vyuh k tutne se baki vyuh ki shaktiya or bhi sachet ho jayegi, aage ka safar or bhi kathin hone wala h.

Jyoti :- safar chahe kitna bhi kathin kyu na ho bhai hum mil ker use pura ker hi lenge.

Karan :- ha wo to h gudiya , itni sunder Partner jo h mere sath safar to mast gujrega hi na.

Rohan uper se :- or m bhi.

Karan majak me :- sala kavab me hadi.

Iske sath hi sab has pade or age badh chale.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uske sathi bhi jungle k bahar pahunch chuke the or gadi wahi rok wo niche utre kyunki unhe bhi aage ka safar pedal hi kerna tha.

Naina :- friends yaha se dushman ki sima start hoti h, isliye bilkul sachet rahana kyunki khatra yaha kadam kadam pe ho sakta h, hume apna ek ek kadam soch samjh k rakhna hoga, ni to hum mushlil me pad sakte h.

Preety ugra swar me :- aane wale muskilo ki chinta kerna darpok logo ka kaam h sister veero ka ni, or dharm k marg pe chalne walo k liye to bhay ka koi sthan hi ni hota.

Ye bol preety aage Age chalne lagi or piche uske sathi, aane wale khatro se bilkul anbhigya ho

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Wahi dusri or

Raat k waqt karan or uski party sab k sone k baad chat per wapas milti h or apna plan ki shuruaat kerne ko tatpar ho.

Karan :- friends samay aagaya h us ghadi ka, us mahasangram k aarambh ka, us dharm yudh ka , jiske sath ant hoga adharm ka, paap ka or un masumo k katilo ka, jinke khun se un dushto k hath sane hue h.

Or humara ye sobhagya h ki ishwer ne is mahan jankalyaan or dharm yudh k m dharm ka paksh rakhne ka.

Kya aap sab sajj h us mahasangram k liye, is dharm yudh k liye.



Sab ek sath josh me :- hum sajj h bhai.

Karan :- bahut ache, mujhe aap sab se yahi aasha h, yahi josh or utsah k sath hume apna apna karya kerna.

Ye bol karan jyoti ko ishara kerta h, aage bolne k liye.

Jyoti :- bhai ne bilkul sahi kaha dharm yudh m vijay k liye esa hi utsah ho dridh nishchay ki avashyakta hoti h parantu..

Shweta bich me :- parantu kya di.

Jyoti :- parantu ye jhumki ki yudh me keval josh evam bal se hi vijay prapt ni hoti, josh k sath hosh or budhimata bhi avashyak h

khaasker ki tab, jab hume gyaat h ki shatu bal ka ni chal ka maharathi h, isliye hume bal ka ni budhi ka prayog kerna hoga.

Aman :- to ab hume kya kerna hoga.

Karan :- jo kerna h wo m karumga dost, kyunki ye meri pariksha h, jisse paar kerke hi meri bahan ko navjivan mil payega, aap sabko bas vesa hi kerna h jesa hum sabne subah decide kiya tha.

Aman or diya tum dono chat se ghar k charo or najar rakhte rakhwali karoge, or ha wo samne wale ped k aage jo bhi bhade use halke m bilkul mat lena kyunki itni raat ko kooi bhi sadharan insaan to bilkul ni aayega.

Aman :- tum yaha ki bilkul chinta mat kerna dost, jab tak tumhara ye bhai h, tab tak humare is parivaar per ankh bhi ni utha payega.

Diya :- ha bhaiya aap nishchint ho ker jaiye, aapki ye bahan apni ankhri sans tak apne parivaar ki raksha karegi.


(Shweta or sonam se)

Shweta or sonam meri pyari bahano aap sabko ye dhyan rakhna h ki koi bhi ghar ka rat ko jag na jaye, or yadi koi jage bhi to unhe is baare m bilkul shak na ho .

Sonam :- ji bhai esa hi hoga or ha or sath hi m apne prabhu dwara praapt vardaan se ghar or aapke charo or ek suraksha kavach bana dungi, jis kaaran bina humari marji k is ghar k aas pas kisine aane ka bhi prayaas kiya to wo bhasm ho jayega.

Karan :- shabash meri pyaari gudiya, m dhanya hua jo tumhare jesi param bhakt swaroopa pat......(galti ka ahasas kerte hue ki as pas sab h) bahan mili.

Fir kuch bate discuss kerne k baad karan bola.

Karan :- friends ab samay aagaya h humari yatra k aarambh ka, to bhagwan vighneshwar ka naam leker aarambh kerte h is yatra ka.

Karan apne sabhi sathiyo k sath hath jod shri ganesh ka dhyan kerte h.

fir karan rohan ko ishara kerta h, jiske sath hi wo apne asli roop me vishal kauve k roop m aagaya , jis per karan jyoti or kaya swar ho nikal pade us jungle ki or wahi aman or uski team bhi lag gaye apne karya m.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uske sathi bhi apni teyari lagbhag khatam ker chuke the, naina dhyan m bethi khud ki shaktiyo ko enhance kerne m lagi hui thi, wahi preety to alag hi mood m thi, jubse usne jungle m jane wali baat ka suna tha tabse wo ugra ho gayi thi or apni talvaar k sath hi practice m lagi hui thi.

Wahi samar to buri tarah dara hua tha kyunki sabse jyada khatra uski jaan ko hi tha, wo aaj apne us dhushman k pas jane wala tha jiske baare m to use ye tak yaad na tha ki usse aakhir dushmani kya thi samar ki.

Vahi veer piya ki family ko samjhane m lagi hui thi, hemant ne ghar m hi nurse or baki sab arrangement kerwa diya tha or ab wo ghar m hi thi, lekin hemant ne doctor se kahlwake use nind ka injection dilwa diya tha, jis kaaran wo subah se pahale uthne wali na thi.

Hemant rote hue :- veer beta, m aap sabke aage hath jodta please kese bhi kerke meri bachi ko bacha lo, ni to m or meri bivi ji ni payenge.

Shruti chahe jesi bhi thi, lekin is sach ko jhutlaya ni ja sakta tha ki wo apne parivar se bahut pyar kerti thi, khaskar ki apni choti bahan se .

Shruti apne papa ko sambhalte hue :- ha veer ji please meri bahan ko bacha lijiye manti hu mane aap sab se bahut badtameezi ki h, or aap Chahe mujhe uske liye koi bhi saja dede, lekin please meri bahan ko bacha lijiye, mere karmo ki saja meri bahan ko na de, m aapke per padti hu.

Veer shruti ko rokte hue :- are are esa kerke mujhe sharminda na kare piya humari bhi kuch lagti h or satya to yahi h ki humare kaaran hi aunty ki ye haalat hui or piya ko wo dusht utha k le gaye.

Lekin hum apni galti sudharenge, aap log chinta mat kijiye , aunty k hosh m aane se pahale hi hum humari piya ko wapas le aayenge.

Piche se apne dhyan se bahar aate hue n hue.

Naina :- or ye humara vada h uncle, kal aunty k hosh m aane se pahale hi humari piyu yaha hogi.

(Apne sathiyo se) friends chalo ready ho jao, time ho gaya h dharm yudh ka.

Preety :- bas sister kasam se tumhare muh se yahi shabd sunne ko hi teyar ka hi intezaar tha mujhe , meri talvaar bade dino se pyasi h un chachundro k khun ki, aaj iski pyaas ache se bhujegi.

Naina :- preety please tum thoda apna krodh pe niyantran rakhna Kyunki humara ek galat kadam piya ki jaan ko khatre m dal sakta h.

Naina ne preety se ye baat telepathy se kahi thi, taki piya ka parivaar dare ni.

Preety :- ok sister apun full try karegi.

Fir naina or uske sathi bhi ek baar bhagwan k darshan or prathna ker sab apni jeep m beth nikal pade van ki or.

Wahi dusri or

Karan jyoti or kaya kaal pe sawar pahunch jese hi van k pass pahunche to karan ne kaal ko rokte hue kaha.

Karan :- bas rohan tum hume yahi utaar do or tum uper se hi adrishy roop m humare sath raho.

Rohan vesa hi kerta h or sabko niche utar khud bhi ek baar k liye apne insani
Kaya :- per sakha esa kerne ki kya jarurt h, jab hum udker hi apni manjil tak pahuch sakte h to chal ker kyu samay nasht kare.

Karan :- sakhi humari ye pariksha utni saral bhi ni jitna tum soch rahi ho , ye dekho.

Ye bol karan ne ek hath Aage kiya jiske sath hi ek Agni roop shakti poonj uske hath m aaya.

Or karan ne wo shaktipunj agle hi shan wan ki or feka, wo agni punj jese hi us van m gira to waha aag lag gayi.

Karan ki ye harkat dekh isse pahale koi kuch bole usse pahale hi waha kuch esa hua jise dekh karan k alawa sab chonk gaye.

Hua darasal yu tha ki wo agmi jo karan ne abhi van m lagayi thi, wo agle hi shan apne aap swatah hi shant ho gayi, or jale hue ped bhi wapas ese normal ho gaye jese waha kuch hua hi na hua ho.

Karan :- ye dekho sakhi chalawa ka koi particular area ni h, balki ye pura jungle hi uska ilaka h jisme kayi mayawi jaal uske dwara rachit h, or ya yu kaho jalo ka ek sudhrid vyuh h jise tode hum us tak ni pahunch sakte, na hi dharti marg se or na hi aakash marg se, isliye hume chal ker hi us tak pahuchna hoga uske dwara rachit har mayawi vyuh ko

Jyoti :- to fir yaha khade hum apna samay kyu nasht ker rahe h bhai, chaliye or khatma ker dete h in haramio ka.

Rohan majakiya age of ultron style m :- control darling gali ni.

Jyoti :- o saste captain America , malum h chalo apni bahan ko mat sikhao.

Ye bol has padi or fir rohan wapas apne asli roop m adrishy hoker havai marg se karan jyoti or kaya k sath sath chalne laga.

Abhi karan jyoti or kaya kuch aage hi chale honge ki unki pahali chunoti unke samne aagayi.

Achanak se aas pas ki jhadiyo se pero ki aawaze aane lagi or bina hava k pate bhi hilne lage.

Jinhe sunte hi karan or sathi savdhan ho gaye.

Karan man me :- rohan.

Rohan :- bhai aap log jara savdhan ho jaiye, mujhe kuch saaf to najar ni aaraha, lekim aas pas ki jhadiyo m koi to chupa h wo bhi ek se kayi jyada.

Karan :- ko h waha jo yu choro ki tarah humara picha ker raha h, himmat h to samne aao.

Karan ka itna hi bolna tha ki tabhi jhadiyo se ek sath kayi parchai achanak se kud unhe 4 ro taraf se gher liya.

Are ye kya ye parchaiuya to aadamkhor bhediyo k ek jhund ki thi, lekin herani ki baat ye thi ki is area m bhediye ni paye jate the or vo bhediye bhi sadharan bhediye k size se dugne bade the.
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Jiska ek hi arth tha.

Karan :- gudiya, sakhi savdhan ye aam bhediye ni h, shetani bhediye h, isliye inpe raham bilkul mat kerna or jitna jaldi ho sake hume inka khatma kerna hoga, taki ye apne or sathiyo ko bula na paye, samjhi na tum dono.

Jyoti apna hath uper kerti h jiske sath hi uske hath me uska dhanush aajata h.

Jyoti :- ji bhai

Kaya ne bhi apni talvar nikal li or karan bhi dandnayak k roop me aagaya or apne trishul ka avahan ker liya.

Or karan ka ishara kerte hi kaya or jyoti karan k sath tut padi un bhediyo k jhund p.

Karan ne rohan ko kuch bhi kerne ko mana kiya tha, kyunki wo backup tha unka.

Karan ka ishara pate hi kaya bhag ker jati h or ek bhediye k muh pe apna ghutna mar use gira deti h or bina waqt gawaye apni talvaar uske sine m ghomp deti h.

Wahi jyoti bhi bhagker uchal ker hava me hi apni pratyancha khichti h, jiske sath hi uske dhanush pe ek teer aajata h or wo teer wo jhat se un bhediyo pe chod deti h, jiske sath hi wo teer ek teer se 3 teero m badal un bhediyo ko ja laga or wo 3no wahi dher ho gaye.

Wahi karan ne pahala avsar bhediyo ko diya unhe aakraman k liye chidane ka ishara kerte hue, karan ka ishare se bhediye bhadak uthe, or do bhediye uski or bhage .

Unme se ek ek bhediye ne jese hi karan pe chalang lagayi to karan ne tezi se hi apna trishul aage ker hava me hi uske sharir m apna trishul ghomp diya.

Jiske agle hi pal wo bhediya dard se chikte hue bhasm ho gaya, or duse bhediye ko karan ne ek jordar ghusa de mara jisse wo dur ja gira or uska jabda tak tut gaya.

Karan kaya or jyoti ne kuch hi shano m sare jhund ka safaya ker diya.

Jyoti khush hote hue :- ye chunoti to badi hi aasan thi bhai, kya itna hi dam h us chalawe m.

Shayad jyoti ne ye baat kuch jaldi hi bol di thi, kyumki achamk wo hua jisko dekh sab chonk uthe.

Karan or uske sathiyo dwara mare gaye sare bhediye wapas jivit ho khade hone lage, yaha tak ki karan ne jisko bhasm ker diya tha wo bhi wapas jinda ho gaya.

Karan jyoti or kaya ne fir ek baar un sabka ant kiya, lekin wo firse jivit ho uthe, esa unhone 3 4 bar kiya,lekin wo sab wapas jinda ho jate.

Kaya :- sakha ye to merne ka naam hi ni le rahe, esa chalta raha to hum to kabhi us dusht tak ni pahunch payenge.

Jyoti :- ha bhai kuch kijiye, is maya ka koi to tod hoga.

Karan kuch der sochta h, jabtak kaya or jyoti un bhediyo ko sambhal rahi hoti h, tabhi karan ek baat notice kerta h ki wo sab bhediye andhere m hi yudh ker rahe h, koi bhi waha kuch area m jaha chand ki roshni fel rahi h waha aane ka bilkul prayas ni ker rahe tab use kuch kuch baat samjh aajati h.

Karan apna hath aage kerta h jiske sath hi uske hath me ek safed urja punj aajata h or use hava m uchalte hue wo jyoti ko us punj p teer chalane ko kahata h.

Jyoti jese hi us punj pe ter chalati h to wo teer se wo punj tut pada or usse prakash nikal charo or fel gaya

Jiske sath hi karan ne dekha ki sabhi bhediye to bilkul pahale jese the, unme se ek bhediya jo unka leader tha achanak se uske matheper ek laal mani jesa kuch aagaya or wo chamkne laga.
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karan samjh gaya wahi h us maya ks tod.

Karan jyoti se :- gudiya us bhediye k mathe per baan chalao, isse pahale roshni hate

Jyoti pratyancha khichte hue :- ji bhai.

Or itna bolne k sath hi jyoti ne baan chod diya or wo baan sidha ja bhediye k mathe m laga or teer lagte hi wo bhediya jalne laga or uske sath hi uske sathi bhediye bhi apne aap jalne lage or kuch hi palo m sab jal ker rakh ho gaye or uske sath hi chalawe k vyuh ki pahali divar dah gayi.

Kaya :- hash bala tali.

Karan :- bala tali ni sakhi balki bala ka to ab aarambh ho chuka h, pahale vyuh k tutne se baki vyuh ki shaktiya or bhi sachet ho jayegi, aage ka safar or bhi kathin hone wala h.

Jyoti :- safar chahe kitna bhi kathin kyu na ho bhai hum mil ker use pura ker hi lenge.

Karan :- ha wo to h gudiya , itni sunder Partner jo h mere sath safar to mast gujrega hi na.

Rohan uper se :- or m bhi.

Karan majak me :- sala kavab me hadi.

Iske sath hi sab has pade or age badh chale.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uske sathi bhi jungle k bahar pahunch chuke the or gadi wahi rok wo niche utre kyunki unhe bhi aage ka safar pedal hi kerna tha.

Naina :- friends yaha se dushman ki sima start hoti h, isliye bilkul sachet rahana kyunki khatra yaha kadam kadam pe ho sakta h, hume apna ek ek kadam soch samjh k rakhna hoga, ni to hum mushlil me pad sakte h.

Preety ugra swar me :- aane wale muskilo ki chinta kerna darpok logo ka kaam h sister veero ka ni, or dharm k marg pe chalne walo k liye to bhay ka koi sthan hi ni hota.

Ye bol preety aage Age chalne lagi or piche uske sathi, aane wale khatro se bilkul anbhigya ho

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Karan aur jyoti ne pahli badha par kar li hai
Udhar Naina team bhi nikal gayi dekhte hai kon sa khatra intzar kar raha hai? Preety ki ugrta aatmghati sidhdh hogi .
 
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