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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


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Yash420

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Bhai superb update hai mager chota update hai
 
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Aakash.

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Preety and Shruti are both drunk but Naina manages everything. Sonam is very sweet but now she has to support Karan and also face all the problems. I can understand Jyoti's pain, but she should get used to this. Siya's talk shows that she is a good woman. The little boy died, I am very sad, whoever did this should be punished.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Iron Man

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Friends update chota ni balki adhura h post hua, raat ko mane thodi jaldbazi k chakkar m post kiya tha, usme lagta h technical problm k chakkar m aada hi notepad se copy hua, verna apne notice kiya hi hoga ki m update pura kerne k baad jarur likhta hu aaj k liye bas itna hi, jo isme ni tha, ab sala double chot ese ho gayi ki mane update ko save bhi ni kiyaa tha, is chakkar m baki ka adha phir se likhna padega, to aaj raat baki ka bhi post ho jayega
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Harry rocks

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update no :- 189
Karan bahut hi gusse m tha, ye gussa un shetano k liye tha jinhone na jane kitne masum ko ka khun bahaya, kitne maao ku god suni ki thi, kitbe bacho ko anath kiya tha or kitne hi bacho ko unhone anath ker diya tha, un darindo k prati ab uska gussa futne ko tha.

Karan full speed se gadi lejaker gadi rokta h or apna ek duplicate bana k teleport ho sidha pahunch gaya haveli ki chat pe jaha per jyoti, aman, kaya , diya , jhumki or sonan pahale se mojud the.

Hua darasal yu tha ki karan ne raste m hi rohan se telepathy k dwara contact ker liya tha or sabko yaha milne k liye bula liya tha.

Aman aage badh :- ha bolo karan bhai hume yaha achank ese kyu bulaya itni jaldi m, koi tension wali to baat ni.

Karan :- tension wali baat to h dost per humare liye ni balki ab un sabhi adharmiyon ka jinka paap ka ghada bhar chuka h or ant nikat h.

Diya :- aap kinki baat ker rahe ho bhai.

Karan fir unhe chalawe se lekr samraat k bare m sab kuch bata deta h, jise sun vaha mojud sabki ankho m un dushto k prati krodh or grihna k bhav saf saf najar aarahe the.

Aman :- ese dushto ko to ek pal jine ka adhikaar ni mitra, batao kab nikalna h hume us abhiyan k liye.

Karan :- ni dost, jungle m keval m or rohan hi jayenge.

Jyoti :- ji ni esa bilkul ni hone wala bhai m aapko or rohan bhai ko akele ni jane dungi, m bhi ap dono k sath chalungi.

Sab ek sath :- hum bhi.

Karan unko samjhate hue :- are aap sab meri baat ko samjhne ki kosis kijiye, hum sabka jana bilkul sahi ni hoga.

Sonam :- esa kyu bhaiii....

Karan :- iska 2 kaaran h sonu.

1. Shatru mayavi or chal m nipun h, yadi hum sab ko ek sath usne dekh liya to wo satark ho jayega isliye hum gupt tarike se chupker jayenge or ese m jitne kam log ho utna acha.

2 or sabse important kaaran, yadi hum sab ek sath is yudh k liye chale jayenge to humare parivar ki safety ka kya, yadi dushman ne piche se chal ka sahara lete hue yaha humla kiya to bahut bada anarth ho jayega.

Ese m yahi sahi hoga ki hume 2 teams bana k kaam kerna hoga, ek team jungle jayegi or dusri yaha ghar ki raksha kerni hogi.

Karan ka is tark se sab sahamat the, lekin jyoti or baki ladkiyon ne to jid pakad li thi , khasker jyoti to bilkul teyar na thi, ki wo karan ko uske bina kahi ni jane degi, sonam ne bhi yahi jid ki to karan ne use samjhaya.

Karan :- sona meri gudiya, yadi Tu bhi mere sath jayegi to mera sabse important kaam kon karega.

Sonam :- konsa kaam bhaiya.

Karan :- wahi jo tum hi ker sakti ho gudiya, humare parivar ki raksha apne bhakti roopi kavach se, tumhe hi mere piche se apne bhaiya ka ye kaam kerna hoga, karogi na gudiya.

Karan yu hi pyar se bahala kee usko samjata h to wo man jati h.

Karan kaya se kuch kahane ko hota h ki usse pahle hi kaya bol padi .

Kaya :- sakha isse pahale aap mujhe apni chikni chupdi baato se bahalaye, usse pahale m hi bol deti hu ki m aapke sath jaungi, aapne mandir m mujhse vachan diya tha ki is yudh m aap mujhe har kadam p apne saath rakhoge.

Karan har mante hue :- jesi aapki icha hone wali bibi sahiba.

Fir karan ne diya or jhumki ko bhi mana liya or fir karan ki sena do bhago m bat chuki thi.

Team 1 :- karan, jyoti, rohan or kaya ki thi jo jungle m jane wali thi, chalawe ka nash kerne.

Team 2 :- aman, jhumki, sonam Or diya ki thi, jo yahi ruk ker ghar ki suraksha kerne wali thi.

Jyoti :- bhai humne teams to bana li, lekin hum itne bade van m use mayavi ko dhundenge kaha.

Karan :- uska upaay bhi mane soch liya h gudiya, ab wo dusht chahe is brahamand k kisi kone m chup jaye, lekin apne karmo k dand se ni bach payenge wo,or ni bach payenge apne kaal se.

Aman :- esa hi hoga dost , tumhara ye dost apni ankhri sans tak tumhara sath dega dost.

Sabhi :- hum sab bhi aapke sath h bhaiiiiii.



Wahi dusri or

Karan ki dadi jo irsha k mare khud hi nidhi ki madad lene k bajaye khud hi apni jali hui jagah pe cream laga rahi thi or sath m jhalate hue khud se hi boli ja rahi thi.

Dadi :- is bar to bach gayi karmjali us kamini ki us olaad k kaaran, lekin usko sabak to jarur sikhaungi m, samjhti kya h apne aap ko mujhe mana karegi uski ye majal.

Side m bethe hue dada bole.

Dada :- dekho bhagwan manta tumhare sath bahut bura hua, lekin galti tumhari bhi h, kya jarurat thi tumhe choti bahu k sath esa kerne ki kosis kerne ki vo bechari bacho ko khana hi to khila rahi thi.

Dadi jhalate hue :- kya kaha aapne, meri galti wo karmjali jiski juban kal tak humare samne khulti tak ni thi aJ wo hume jwab de rahi h or aap fir bhi meri galti kah rahe ho aap.

Ye sabka kaaran us kamini dayan asha hi h, pahle to mujhse mere bete ko china or ab marne k baad bhi apne gande khun, yani un dono karan or jyoti k roop m mera jina haram ker chuki h, yaha tak ki kere bache ko bhi jail m pahuncha diya, ho na ho un badtamijo ne usne hi bahu ko bhadkaya hoga.


Dadi ki apne hi pote potiyo k prati esi soch sun dadaji ki sahanshakti dhir dhire khatam hoti ja rahi thi, use apni patni ki itni giri hui soch p gussa aaraha tha.

Dada :- bas ab chup ho jao, ab bahut ho chuka, kyu us bichari ko kos rahi ho jo ab is duniya m bhi ni........


Dadaji iske aage kuch bol pate unko jor jorse khasi aane lagi, lekin dadi apni nafrat m itni andhi ho chuki thi ki usko apne pati ki is halat ka bhi dhyan na raha or bolti gayi.

Dadi :- ek yahi to khabar h jise sun dil ko tasali hoti h, mar gayi wo kamini, jisne mere parivar ko toda, mere bete ko mujhse alag kiya, sad rahi hogi kahi narak ki aag me wo kultaa.

Bas ab uske un dono bij jo usike raste p chal rahe h unhe bhi nipta du fir mera betaa......

Abhi isse aage wo kuch bolti usse pahale hi ek jordar thappad unko pada, jo dada ji ne hi mara tha.

Dada gusse se :- chup, ek dam chup, ek shabd ni sunuga tere muh se m, jhuti nafrat or moh me kitna gir chuki ho tum sarita aaj mujhe pata chala.

Dadi bich me :- per....

Dadaji ek or thappad marte hue :- bola na chup raho

Tum apni us bahu ko esi galiya de rahi ho jis bechari ne sari jindagi tumhara har julm sah ker bhi tumhari ese seva ki jitni sagi olaad bhi aaj k time p bhi na kare , tum us mahan aatma pe itne gathiya aarop laga rahi ho.

Dadi to apne pati k gusse or prasaad roopi mile 2 thappad k kaaran sun ho gayi thi or ankhe fade apne pati ko dekh rahi thi, use yakin na ho raha tha ki jis pati ne aaj tak usse unchi aawaz me baat tak naa ki thi, wo aaj na keval usper chila raha tha, balki usper hath bhi uthaya tha.

Hua darasal ye tha ki pichle kuch dino m ghati ghatnaon k kaaran dada k man m aatmglami ka janm ho chuka tha, uske man m kahi na kahi apni galti ka ahasas hone laga tha .

Or jab aaj usne garima ki baate suni to ye aatmgalami ki agni uske man me dahak chuki, uski ankho k samne asha ki wo yaade samne aane lagi jisme asha ne unke har atyachaar sahate hue bhi ek beti ki tarah unki seva ki, wo roj apne sasur k panv dabati, unhe roj samay p dawa deti, or jitna ho sakta tha utna apne sasur ka sara kaam vahi krti.

Or us agni m ghi ka kaam us harkat ka kaam dadi k us vyavhaar kiya , jab wo khas rahe the, tab bhi unki patni ko sirf apni nafrat ka dhyan tha apne pati ki sehat ka ni, usne unse pani tak ni diya tha, jis kaaran ab dadaji purn roop se badal chuke the.

Dadaji :- are sharm aati h mujhe tumhe apni patni kahate hue bhi, kesi orat ho tum tum khud bhi ek ghar ki beti thi, is ghar ki bahu thi, kya kabhi socha tha tumne ki esa vyabahaar yadi tumhare sath meri maa ne kiya hota to kesa lagta tumhe, kabhi is bare m vichar kiya.

Are tum to apni is nafrat ki aag m itni andhi ho chuki ho ki ab to tum apne hi khun apne hi pote poti ka bura kerne ki sochne lagi, dhikar h tum. Per dhikar pe.

Or tumse jyada dhikkaar h mujh per jo. Mane tum jesi orat ka sath dete hue apni devi jesi or beti samman bahu p atyaachaar kiye, apni jis bahu ko mujhe ghar ki lakshmi banana tha, use panvo ki juti samjha Or tumhara sath deker mahapap kiya.

Per ab or ni m apni galti sudharunga jo paap mane bhutkal me kiye, unke liye apne bacho k pero m mafi mangunga, fir iske badle mujhe mere bache , mujhe maafi de ya dand, m hasi khusi use swikaar karunga.

Ye bol dadaji bahar jane lage, tabhi dadi boli.

Dadi :- are rukiye suniye to....

Dadaji :- khabaradaar, khabardaar jo aaj k baad mujhe pukarne ki ya mujhse baat kerne ki bhi kosis ki to.

Are papini, kulnashini, Tu ek orat ni dayan h dayan jo mere pure parivaar ko kha jana chahti h.

Dadi rote hue :- ni esa mat boliye jay.

Dada :- scha humesha kadva hota h sarita or satya yahi h ki Tu is sansar k kisi rishte k layak ni.

Isliye m apne purwaj or apni swargwasi bahu ko sakshi man k aaj tera humesha humesha k liye parityaag kerta hu.

Dadi rote hue :- ni esa mat boliye, bhagwan k liye esa mat boliye.

Dada :- tum jesi orat ki yahi saja h, aaj k baad tere is kamre m m na hi per rakhunga or na hi teri shakal dekhunga

Ye bol dada ji kamre se chale gaye dadi ko rota chod

wahi dusri or

naina or uske sathi apni jeep m badi speed se ja rahe the or kuch der baad unki gadi ek hospital k aage ruki.

jeep se uter ker sabhi hospital m jate h or reception p jaker naina boli.

naina :- ji abhi abhi meri aunty receptior unki... Sal ki beti ko admit kiya gaya h, it's accident case.

receptionist :- patient name ?

veer :- mrs rekha saraswat and piya sarswat.

receptionist check kerke :- ji yes rekha saraswati naam se ek patient layi to gayi h, per wo to akeli hi thi , unke sath koi bachi ni thi.

naina Shock ho :- what, are u sure, please ek baar recheck kijiye.

lekin receptionist k dobaara chek kerne k baad bhi koi fayda na hua jise sun naina tension m aagayi.

aaj k liye bas itna hi

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