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Agli subah karan or jyoti naha dhokar nikal pade apne purane ghar ki or jaha per unka sara parivar intezaar ker raha tha.

Ghar pahunch karan ne jese hi doorbell bajayi , uske agle ek min me kavya ne jhat se darwaja khol karan or jyoti ko apne sine se laga liya , bina dekhe hi.

Kavya :- aagaye mere bache , kaha the beta tum raat bhar

Karan herani.se:-. Choti maa aapko kese pata chala ki bell humne hi bajayi hogi.

Kavya kuch ni boli or muskurate hue karan or jyoti ko ander leker aayi , jaha uski sari bahane bhi uska intezaar ker rahi thi.

Karan or jyoti ko dekh ker to sabhi unpe hi tut padi , pahale to kafi der gale mil roti rahi or shikayat kerti rahi ki karan or jyoti ek baar fir unhe chod ker, jisme riya or radha bhi shamil thi .

Wo janti thi kaho ya ummid ki unka bhai unse nafrat ni ker sakta , vo bas abhi unse naraj h, or isliye unhonne than liya tha ki vo apne bhai ki narajgi dur ker , firse uske dil me apne liye prem jaga ker rahegi.

Karan ne apni bahano (radha or riya ko ignore kerte hue) ko bade hi pyar se samjhaya or unse vada kiya ki ab vo unhe chod ker kahi ni jayega .

Shivani sisakte hue:- pakka na bhaiyu , ab aap hume chod k kabhi ni jaoge na.

Karan shivani k galo ko chumte hue :- ha meri princess ab to yu rona band ker apne bhaiyu ko maaf ker do

Priya nakhre dikhate hue :- bhaiya aspdo , lu hi mafi mahi milegi

Jyoti priya ki naak halke se khichte hue :- ale bap le itu si naak or uspe itna gussa , acha fil aap hi batao , kya chaiye hamale bache ko

Sonam :- bhaiya aapko jab hi maafi milegi , jab aap hum sabko ghumane leker jaoge or dher sari shopping bhi karani hogi , kyu h na bahano.

Sari bahane sonam ki ha me ha milati h ,

Karan majak me :- dekh rahi h jyoti , sari mandli ne pahale hi planning ker k rakhi h , apni jeb ki waat lagane ki

Shivani :- aapko jo samjhna h samjhiye , but aapko ye baat manni hogi bhai, ni to hum sab aapse kati ker lenge.

Karan :- are ni ni iski jarurat ni h , meri pyari bahane kuch bole or m na manu esa kabhi hua h , acha batao kaha chalna h

Sonam :- wo to humne decide kiya hi ni .

Karan :- chalo koi ni tum sab milke decide ker lo ,hum next week hi jayenge ghumne.

Karan ki ha sun sabhi bahane jhum uthi khushi se, radha or riya bhi kyunki unko ye moka lag raha tha , wapas karan k karib aane ka.

(Ab aap soch rahe honge ki kal itne bade hungame k baad bhi yaha sab itna normal kese , to m aap sab ko bata du.

Jab sabne karan ki wo halat dekhi thi , tab karan ki sab bahane , kavya geeta or garima ne mil ker decide kiya ki , ab vo kuch esa ni karegi , jisse karan ko dukh pahunche ya tension ho or isliye sabne decide ker liya tha ki wo karan or jyoti k samne bilkul normal hi rahenge.)

Tabhi kavya ki aawaj aayi.

Kavya :- breakfast ready h bacho sab aake khana kha lo pahale.

Kavya ki aawaj sun sabhi bache waha pahunch gaye or table pe beth gaye.

Tabhi kavya garima or geeta khana banaker lati h , tab karan bola.

Karan :- bhua , mosi , choti maa aap bhi aaiye na sath me khana khate h.

Kavya :- beta pahale aap bache log kha lo fir hum kha lenge baad me .

Lekin karan or uski bahane na mani or un 3no ko bhi apne sath bitha liya ,or sab khana khane lage , karan or jyoti to humesha ki tarah ek dusre k hatho se kha rahe the , karan ne jese hi pahala nivala khaya , to uski ankho me pani aagaya.

Kyunki karan ne jo sabji khayi thi vo garima ne hi banayi thi jise khate hi use firse ek baar apni maa ki yaad aagayi , kyunki garima k hatho ka bana khane ka taste kafi had tak asha jesa tha.

Garima karan ki ankh me pani dekh chintit ho boli :- kya hua beta , tumhari ankho me pani kese , khana pasand ni aaya kya.

Karan :- ni ni bhua esi koi baat ni h ,ye aansu to bas isliye Kyunki aapke hatho ka bana khane ka swad bilkul mummy jesa h , jise khate hi mummy ki yaad aagayi mujhe.

Asha ka nam sun to garima bhi emotional ho gayi , per usne khud ko karan k liye sambhalte hue bola.

Garima :-. Oh to ye baat h , esa to hoga hi na beta , tumhe pata h tumhari is bhua ko khana banana tumhari mummy yani meri bhabhi ne hi to sikhaya tha.

Geeta :- or beta tum yu roya mat kera kero, kyunki tumhare pas to abhi bhi ek ni 3 3 maa to h na.

Tabhi ek aawaz sabke kaano me padi .

3 ni char

Sab ne main gate ki or dekha to anita khadi thi , jiski ankho me khushi k ansu the karan or jyoti ko sahi salamat dekh .

Anita itna hi bolte hi karan or jyoti k pass dod ke aayi or unhe sine se laga liya.

Anita rote hue:- kaha chale gaye the mere bacho tum , jante ho yaha hum sab ki kya halat ho gayi thi.

Anita ko kal sham ko hi riya ne phone kerke karan or jyoti k bare me bata diya tha, jise sun anita ka khushi ka thikana na raha , wo to kal hi aajana chati thi , lekin wo dusre state gayi hui thi , or us city me airport ni tha , isliye use majburan train se aaana pada, or wo station se sidha ghar ki yahi aayi thi.

Karan emotional hote hue :- geeta masi aapne sahi hi bola , m bevkoof befaltu hi ro raha tha , jabki mahadev ne to mujhe ek ni balki char char maye jesa amulya ashirvad k roop me di h , jo mujhse kitna pyaar kerti h.

Ye bol wo bari bari se sabhi k gale lagta h.

Abhi karan ke anita ko shant kerwaye hue ek ghante hi hue the ki tabhi waha rohan or uske papa bhi aapahunche.

Riya ne rohan ko bhi kafi baar phone kiya tha ye khushkhabri dene k liye, per shayad riya or uske bich matbhed k chalte usne uski ek call bhi receive na ki.

Tab riya ko apne papa ka khayal aaya , kyunki rohan unhike sath hi to tha kam k silsile me

Riya k papa ne jese hi ye khabar suni wo bhi bahut kush hue or rohan ki to ye khushkhabri sun khushi ka thikana na raha.

Unhone bhi apna sara kaam nipta aaj subah ki hi flight se hi sidha ghar aaphunche the.

Karan ko dekh ker rohan uski or doda , karan ne socha tha ki wo uske gale lagega , per yaha to ulta rohan aate hi pahale karan ko hi dhone laga.

Seriously ni bas ese hi dosto ki hasi majak wali fighting hi , or karan bhi rohan ki feeling samjh chup chap rohan ki pyar bhari mar khata raha.

Karan majak me chilate hue :- are bhai koi to bachao is jalim se.

Sonam :- ji ni aaj aPko koi ni bachayega , rohan bhai or pitayi kero inki , taki aage se ye hume chod k jane ka soche bhi ni

Sonam ki baat sun sab bahane hasne lagi , jab rohan thak gaya , to wo rote hue karan k gale lag gaya or bola.

Rohan :- kaha chala gaya tha bhai tu hume chod ke , janta h kya halat ho gayi thi hum sabki.

Are hum sabki chod ,(sonam ki taraf ishara kerte hue) is pagli ne to tere jane k baad jine ki aas hi chod di thi , na dhang se khati piti na apna khayal rakhti , sara din bas ladoo gopal k aage beth tere liye roti rahati , hum sab to ye man chuke the ki humne tujhe or jyoti ko kho diya , per is pagli ne apna ladoo gopal pe se vishwas na khoya , ise pura yakin tha ki tu aayega or iski bhakti or vishwas pe mujhe vishwas tha , dekh sonu tera vishwas jit gaya meri bahan tera vishwas jit gaya

Rohan yu hi sonam ki pyar se shikayat kerte hue karan se kafi der gale lag rota raha , sonam or rohan ka prem dekh karan or jyoti bhi bhavuk ho gaye

Khasker ki sonam ka pyaar dekh , unhe khud pe hi gussa aane laga ki unhone wapas lotne me itni der ki hi kyu , jis kaaran unki bahan or bhai jese dost ne kya kya na saha.

Karan rohan se :- are ab bas bhi ker mere yaar meri jan or kitna royega , m wapas aato gaya na , ab sab kuch sahi ho jayega.

(Majak kerte hue ) or sale tujhe kitni baar bola h ki yu mujhse mat chipka ker , m tere jesa ni hu.

Ye bol karan muh bigadte hue rohan ko halke se dhaka deta h , jise sun sabhi hasne lage.

Rohan :- kamine tu ni sudhrega.

Jyoti :- ye kya rohan bhai , apne dost se mil liye to bahan ko bhul gaye.

Rohan :-. Are tujhe kese bhul sakta hu meri moti.

Jyoti ankhe dikhate hue :- kya bole bhi , m moti.

Rohan darne ka natak ker jyoti ko gale lagate hue :- are ni ni , tu to meri darling bahana h , tujhe moti bolne wala to koi pagal hi hoga.

Priya masumiyat se :- matlab kya aap pagal ho kya rohan bhai.

Priya ki bholi baat sun sabhi has pade or fir sab milker breakfast kerte h , sab karan or jyoti ko apne hatho se khilate h.

Radha or riya bhi ye moka ni chodti , karan or jyoti bhi bina kuch bole chupchap unke hatho se kha lete h , kyunki vo is khushi k moke pe koi hungama ni chahte the

Karan k liye aaj ka din kisi tyohar se kam na tha , kyunki kitne salo baad uska pura parivar khushi se ek sath beth ker khana kha raha tha

Fir yu hi din bit gaya , ek raat ko dinner k baad karan rohan k sath sari bahane chat pe bethe thi gaddo per , kyunki aaj bhi vo sab chat pe hi sone wale the ki sara kaam nipta ker uper aagayi , baki ladies k sath.

Tabhi jyoti boli.

Jyoti :- bhua

Garima :- ha mera bacha

Jyoti :- bhua hume aapse kuch janna h.

Garima :- ha bolo na beta kya puchna h.

Karan :- bhua hume aapse humare dada dadi k baare me puchna h ,

Garima karan k muh se apne maa baap yani k karan or jyoti k dada dadi k baare me sun parshan ho gayi , use ye ummid ni thi ki uske bathije bhatiji itni jaldi hi is baare m puch lenge.

Jyoti :- ha bhua bataiye na , hume humare dada dadi k bare me , kaha h vo or itne salo se humse milne kyu ni aaye vo or na hi mummy ne hume aap sabke bare me bataya or na hi kabhi (gusse se) papa ne

Karan :- bataiye na bhua, esa kya hua tha , mummy se to hume itna hi pata chala tha ki unhone bhag ker shadi ki thi , per ager unhone bhag k shadi ki thi to aap mummy ko itni achi tarah kese janti ho .

Karan or jyoti k lagatar prashnok kaaran garima ko jhukna pada or vo batane lagi.

Short flashback.(garima ki jubani )

Garima karan ko apne parivar k baare me batate hue boli

Beta ye aaj se 30 sal purani baat h , jab m 12 or tumhare papa or tumhare chachu , jo mere judwa bhai h , 3no ek hi school me padte the.

Tab bhaiya ki dil kafi achi friend thi jo unki classmate ko thi , jo or koi ni tumhari mummy yani asha bhabhi thi, bhai or bhabhi dono hi apne class k topper the or ache dost bhi,dono hi ek dusre ko chahte the the ,per unko is baat ka ahasas ni tha

Tumhari mummy meri senior hone k sath sath meri kafi achi dost bhi thi , jo mujhse ek badi bahan jese hi pyaar kerti , ya yu kaho kayi baar to bhai ka pyaar bhi unke pyaar ke aage mujhe kam lagta.

Bhai or bhabhi 5th class se classmate the , lekin dono ko apne pyar ka ahasas tab hua jab dono ki 12th class pass ker li ,or ab unke bichadne ka time aagaya , kyunki ganv me koi college ni tha .

Tab bhai ne turant hi ek din asha bhabhi ko purpose ker diya or bhabhi to khud bhaiya ko pyaar kerti thi , unhone turant ha ker.di.

Jab ye khushkhabri mujhe bhai ne batayi to mere or tumhare chachu bhi bahut khush hue , kyunki hume bhi bhabhi bahut pasan thi shuru se hi.

Bhabhi pados k ganv ki hi rahane wali thi , jo humare kasbe ke school me padhne aati thi , kyunki humare as pas k sabhi ganvon m vo hi sabse acha school tha keval.

Tumhare nanaji or dadaji bhi kafi ache dost the us time , jisse hume is baat ki koi chinta na thi ki aage hum bado ko manayenge kese

Bhaiya or bhabhi ek hi shahr gaye college ki padhai kerne , lekin unhone shadi hone tak ye baat chupa ker rakhne ka hi decide kiya tha ki vo couple h , isliye dono ne alag alag college me admission liye, lekin wo aksar milte rahate the .

Shayad isliye hi Anita didi ko bhai k bare me malum ni h , or jab wo dono ki padhai puri ker wapas lote , na jane kiski najar undono k pyaar ko lag gayi.

Tumhare dada ji or nana ji jo kabhi bahut ache dost the , kisi matter k chalte dono me jhagda ho gaya.

Jhagda itna bad gaya ki dono ne ek dusre se sare rishte naate tod liye , jiske kaaran bhai or mera bhabhi se milna bahut mushkil ho gaya

Or ek din rote hue bhabhi bhai se mili or batane lagi ki unke papa ne unki shadi kisi se tay ker di h , lekin vo bhai k alawa kisi k se shadi ni karegi .

Bhai bhi bahut chahte the bhabhi ko isliye unhone usi din mummy papa se baat ki , lekin papa ne dushmani or nafrat ki aag me apne bete ki khushi ko najarandaj ker diya or saf saf mana ker diya.

Esa hi kuch tumhare nanaji ne kiya bhabhi k sath , tab mane , tumhare chachu , bhaiya or bhabhi ne bhag ker shadi kerne ka plan kiya.

Or plan k mutabik hi humari ek common friend jiski madad se hum milte , koi bahana ker bhabhi ko ghar se bahar le aayi.

Jaha se hum sab shahar gaye or gir bhaiya or bhabhi ne court marriage ker , mandir me shadi ker li.

Jab bhabhi k ghar valo ko ye khabar mili to unhone to bhabhi se sare rishte nate hi tod liye , jiske kaaran bhabhi khub royi , khub bhik mangi apne mummy papa se ki vo esa na kare , per wo na mane , tumhare mama jo humari hi hum umer the , wo apni didi ko ese rote ni dekh sakte the , unhonne bhi bahut koshis ki lekin ant me vo bhi apne mummy papa k aage majbur ho gaye .

Last me bhabhi rote hue apne ghar se hamare ghar pahunchi , jaha tumhare dada dadi bhi bahut gussa hue , unhonne bhaiya ko khub pita bhi ,lekin bhaiya apni jid pe ade rahe, jiske kaaran mummy papa ne bhabhi ko jhute man se apna liya.

Tumhare dada dadi ne bhabhi ko ghar me rakh to liya , lekin unke sath esa behave kerte jese vo unki bahu ni lekin unki nokrani ho ,vo didin raat unhe khari khoti sunate.

Lekin bhabhi ne itna sab sahate hue bhi apne saas sasur ki khub seva kerti , unhe apne mata pita jitna hi aadar deti

Mujhse or rajiv bhai se to vo nanad or devar ni balki apne bhai bahan hi manti thi , or bhabhi maa samman hoti h is baat ko sarthak unhonne hi kiya , hum dono se unhone ek maa ki tarah sneh diya , mujhe khana banana bhi unhone hi sikhaya

Unka itna kuch kerne k baad bhi mummy papa ki nafrat kuch kam hone to lagi , per kismat ko ye bhi kaha manjur tha , jo usne apna ek or kahar dhaya bhabhi pe

Bhaiya or bhabhi ki shadi ko 5 saal hone k bavjood bhi koi santan ni hui unke , jiske chalte maa ko. Ek or moka mil gaya unhe sunane ka.

Mummy din raat bhabhi ko banjh banjh ker mentally tourcher kerti rahati , jiske chale bhabhi depression me rahane lagi.

M or rajiv bhai to apni studies k liye shahar gaye hue the , hume aane k baad is sab k baare me pata chala.

Leki. Had to tab ho gayi jab maa ne bhai ki dusri shadi kerne ka decision ker liya , jise sun bhabhi tut gayi or rone lagi.

Bhai jab ghar aaye to bhabhi ne unhe rote rote sari bat batayi to bhaiya bhi pahale chintit hue , fir unhone mummy se jaker saf saf bol diya.

Ranvir :- ma m ye kya sun raha hu , asha k hote hue bhi aap meri dusri shadi karwane ki soch rahe ho.

Rama :- ha sahi suna h tune ,is karmjali banjh k bharose rahe to bina pote ka muh dekhe hi bhagwan ko pyare ho jayenge.

Is baat ko leker bhai or mummy papa me kafi jhagda hua or tab gusse me aaker papa ne bhai se ye bol dala ki ager tum isko chod dusri shadi ni karoge to chale jao mere ghar se leker is mahoos ko.

Bhai bhabhi se itna pyaar kerte the ki agle din hi unhone bhabhi k sath ghar chod diya , lekin usse pahale unhone ek chithi hume bheji jisme ye sari baate likhi hui thi or sath me bhai ne ye bhi bola tha ki vo humse milne aaya karenge.

Hume jese hi ye letter mila hum rote hue ghar pahunche ye soch k bhai abhi vahi honge or wo abhi gaye na honge , lekin hum bahut laye ho chuke the

Flashback end

Garima rote hue :- or us din k baad na hume bhai milne aaye na bhabhi

Or itne salo baad hum mile bhi to dekho kya sunne mila ,humari ma , humari bhabhi ab na rahi or unka hatyara bhi or koi ni mere hi vo bhaiya nikle , jo kabhi sabse jyada pyaar kerte the unse , isliye hi to m yakin ni ker pa rahi abhi tak ki bhai hi bhabhi k hatyare h

Ye bol garima rone lagi jise sab mil ker shant karwaya , karan or jyoti ki to ankhe nam or bohe tan gayi thi , jab unhe pata chala ki unki ma k sath unke hi family walo ne kitne atyachar kiye.

Garima khud ko sambhalte hue :- beta m janti hu ki tumhe hum sab per bahut gussa aaraha hoga , specially mummy papa per.

Manti hu beta mummy papa ne bahut badi galti ki h , lekin wo aaj bhi us galti ki saja bhugat rahe h beta , or vahi ni unke sath sath tumhare chachu or m bhi.

M itni kam umer me vidhva ho gayi or tumhare chachu ko bhi mushkil se ek ladki hui , jo viklang h , ye shayad humare unhi galti ki saja h , jo humne past me ki bhabhi k liye aawaz na tha ker.

Mummy papa ki tabiyat bhi ab sahi ni rahati or esa ni h vo apni dusri poti or apni dohiti(radha ) se pyar ni kerte , per wo aaj bhi ek pote k liye tadaf rahe h

Beta m tumhare aage hath jod ke apne parivar k liye mafi mangti hu , please hume maaf ker do or ek baar ganv chal lo , taki sare bigde rishte thik ho sake

Karan radha ki or dekhte hue :- bhua rishte banana or nibhana koi khel ni , jinko jab chahe bigad do or jab chahe sudhar lo

Har ek ache or majbut rishte ki niv hoti h prem . Or prem wo dhaga hota h jo tutne k baad jud ni sakta or ager jud bhi jaye to usme ghanth pad jati h

Lekin aap please ese hath mat jodiye , jesa aapne kaha h ki vo apni galti ki saja bhugat rahe h , to m unhe ek moka dene ki soch sakta hu .

Lekin uske liye mujhe or jyoti ko kuch time chahiye sochne ka.

Garima :- beta tumhe jitna time chaiye lelo .

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned .

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Wahi dusri or

Location :- kulbhata

Naina or uske dost aaj subah hi rajsthan pahunch gaye, jaha unhone kuch der ek hotel me rest ker nikal pade apne aage ki safar ki or yani ki kulbhata ki or.

Gadi veer chala raha tha or preety uske sath aage bethi thi , or naina humesha ki tarah piche bethi usi kitab me dubi hui thi.

Veer preety k sath gadi chalate hue thodi romantic baate ker raha tha.

Veer naina se ;- yaar naina ab or kitna time lagega humare maksad pura hone ko .

Naina bhi masti me uska sath dete hue :- wo m bhala keSe batau , vese mere hone wale jiju ,kya m puch sakti hu , aapko itni jaldi kyu h bhala.

Veer :- wo kya h na sali sahiba , aapki friend , yani meri soni gf ne kal hi mujse shikayat ki ki hume relation me aaye itne din ho gaye , per m use ek Romantic date pe bhi na le gaye.

Naina preety ko chedte hue :- oh oh matlab humari preetu ko romantic date p jana h jiju k sath or wo bhi romantic.

Preety sharmate hue ek mukka veer ko marte hue :- jhute mane kab bola ese.

Veer :- are kal hi to tum bol rahi thi ki tum ki m tumhe time hi ni deta , jab hum hotel me ruke or naina kuch der k liye bahar gayi thi.

Preety :- jhute kahike mane esa kuch ni bola , kal to vese bhi us time humne kissing hi to ki thi.

Preety josh josh me bol to gayi per jab use ahasas hua apni galti ka to vo sharam k mare lal ho gayi.

Naina sitti marte hue :- oh ho to isliye mujhe kal akele jane ko insist kiya ja raha tha.

Preety or veer to sharm k mare laal ho gaye , jinhe dekh naina haste hue boli.

Naina :- are yaar tum dono sharma kyu rahe ho , aajkal ye sab to normal h couples me or mujhse kya sharmana , friends m ye sab baate hona common hoti h.

Yu hi naina or uske dost masti kerte hue aage bad rahe the ki tabhi 2 ganv vale unhe lift k liye hath dikhate hue dikhe .

Naina ne veer ko jeep rokne ko kaha ,

Veer :- kya hua kaka kidher jana h aap logo ko.

Aadmi :- bhaya hume to is manhoos jagah se kayi bhi dur jana h bas , vese tum log kidher ja rahe ho , yaha k to ni lag rahe .

Veer :- ha kaka hum pardesi h , or abhi kulbhata ganv ja rahe h.

Kulbhata ka naam sun un dono k r
Chahre k hav bhav hi badal gaye ,jinhe dekh naina bol padi.

Naina :- kya hua kaka , aapke chahre ka rang kyu ud gaya yu achank.

Dusra admi :- bacho kyu apni mot ko nyota de rahe ho , us manhoos ganv me jaker.

Preety :- kyu esa kya h bhala vaha jo aap log us ganv ko manhoos bol rahe ho.

Aadmi 2 :- tum pardesi ho isliye ni jante , are waha bharamrakshaso ka dera h , jinhone waha aatank machaya hua h , unhone shrap k kaaran log pyaas se mar rahe h.

Preety swaliya najar se naina ko dekhte hue :-. Braham rakshas .

Naina :- hmm , braham rakshas , inki kahaniya to bahut suni thi , lagta h jald hi mulakat bhi hone wali h.

Veer :- suna to mane bhi h inke bare me naina , per ye hote kya h.

Naina :- ye danvo ki sabse khatarnak prajati h veer , jinhe islam me jinh bhi kaha jata h , agar ye kisi ko dost bana le to usko raja bana dete h or ager dushman bana le to usko barbad hone se koi ni bacha sakta.




Or inme braham rakshasi to sabse jyada khatarnak hoti h , kyunki kaha jata h , jab 100 dayan marti h , jab ek braham rakshasi peda hoti h.




Aadmi :- wo jo bhi ho , hum yo yahi salah denge ki aap log kulbhata jane ka apna khyal chod do.

Naina :- jana to hume hoga hi kaka.

Tabhi us aadmi ki najar naina ki water bottle pe padi , jo uske bag k side m lagi thi.

Admi :- beti thoda pani milega, humne 2 din se pani ki ek ghut tak ni pi h.

Naina :- ha kyu ni kaka

Naina ne jese hi bottle unhe di to dono bacho ki tarah pahale pani pine ko tarasne lage .

Naina :- are aaram se , ek ek kerke piyo .

Dono ne adha adha ker puri bottle khali ker di , lekin unko tripti mil gayi.

Naina :-. Preety esa kero tum dono kaka ko aage shahar chod ker aajao ,itna m or veer ganv me jaker chanbin kerte h thodi , vese bhi ganv pas me hi h yaha se

Or ha (apne bag se ek or bottle nikalte hue) lo ise apne sath rakh lo ,pyaas lage to isi se pani pina ,kyunki mujhe shak h brahamrakshaso ka sirf is ganv tak hi shrap simit ni h, isliye shahar pahuchne tak kahi mat rukna or ho sake to sham hone se pahale pahale wapas lot aana.

Preety :- ok sister ,(un dono se ) chaliye kaka log aapko shahar tak chod dete h.

Fir preety nikal padi unlogo ko shahar chodne or veer or naina nikal pade kulbhata ki or.

Naina or veer jaise hi ganv me enter kerte h to pate h ki pura ganv hi viran hua pada h , ab to bache kuche log bhi shayad waha se bhag chuke the.

Veer :-. Ye kya naina ye ganv to pura viran ho gaya h.

Naina :- brahamrakshaso ka log h esa veer.

Kuch der wo yu hi ganv ghumte rahe , per unhe waha koi na mila, aabhi vo ye soch ker ki ab ganv me koi ni h vo lotne k liye mude hi the ki , ek jhopadi numa ghar se unhe kuch aawaj aayi.

Jo kisi bujurg lady ki pyas se tadapte hue pani mangne ki thi

Veer or naina turant us or ghar me gaye to paya ki ek bujurg orat jo dekne se hi pata chal raha tha ki vo bahut bimar h , wo pani k liye tadaf rahi thi or wahi pass me ek admi or ek orat jo us orat k beta or bahu lag rahe the , wo apne sir pe hath rakh ro rahe the.

Veer :- kya hua , aap sab ro kyu rahe ho or ye dadi kabse pani mang rahi h , aap inhe pani kyu ni de rahe.

Veer or naina ko jese hi wo aadmi or orat dekhte h to chonk jate h or unse puchte h ki vo kon h.

Tab naina apna or veer ka intro unhe deti h,

Admi apni majburi pe rrota hua :- kaha se lau m beti pani , kitna abhaga or nikama beta hu m , yaha meri maa pyas se tadaf rahi h or m unhe pani tak ni pila la raha.

Kyu , kyunki un dushto ne esa shrapit ker diya h hamare ek lote kue ko , ki jo uska pani pita h , wo aatmhatya ker leta h.

Naina :- per ye braham rakshas aap logo k piche kyu pade h , kuch to kaaran hoga na iske piche .

Orat :- kaaran h beti , kuch saal pahale ki baat h , ganv k kuch log raat ko khana khane k baad ser k liye nikale the , tabhi ganv k bahar unhe 2 ghade mile ek jagah , jinka muh lal kapde se bandha hua tha

Unlogo ne jab us kapde ko hatha ker ghadhe me dekha to paya ki wo ghade khun se labalab bhare hue the

Unlogo ne bina kuch soche samjhe un ghado ko tod dala , kala jadu samjh .

Tabse is ganv me ye sab chalu hua, aaye din log bimari se marne lage , tab humare bujurgo ne bataya ki wo ghade brahamrakshaso ki amant thi or humne unhe tod ker bahut badi galti ki h , isse pahale kuch or bura ho , hume ek mahapuja karwani hogi

Lekin logo ne kisi ki na suni or fir dhire dhire ye halat ho gaye h ganv k ,un brabamrakshaso ne kue ko shrapit ker diya h,

Jiske chalte ek ek ker sab yaha se chale gaye , per meri sasu ma bimar h , unse ab chala tak ni jata , isliye hum yaha se ni ja sake or sasu ma ko chod k jane ka sawal hi paida ni hota.

Naina :- aap sab chinta mat kijiye ,ab maa kali ki kripa se sab thik ho jayega , m is samsya ka koi samadhan jarur karungi

Naina ne ashvasan to dediya ,lekin unse dadi ki ye halat dekhi ni ja rahi thi , per wo abhi kuch ker ni sakti thi , kyunki uski dono bottle ab uske pas ni thi.

Veer ko tabhi ek idea aaya , usne apni powers ka use kerte hue turant 3 4 pani ki bottle apne bag me mangwa li.

Veer Apne bag se bottle nikal us orat ki bahu ko dete hue :- ye lilijiye mere pas pani h ,aap jaldi se dadi ko pila dijiye or aap log bhi pi lijiye.

(Naina se) hume rajsthan ki bhari garmi me safar kerna tha na , isliye mane pahale hi kuch bottle kharid li thi , taki kaam aajaye or dekho aagayi na kam.

Naina kuch ni bolti or muskura deti h , veer ki bottle 2.5 ltr ki thi , jisse us parivar ne ji bhar k pani piya , jinse unhe tripti mili , jiske liye unhone bahut bahut dhanyawad kiya naina ka.

Ab naina or veer vahi ruk gaye or preety k lotne ka wait kerne lage.

Wahi dusri or

Naina se vida le un donon ko chodne preety nikal padi ,Preety gadi drive ker rahi thi or wo dono aadmi piche bethe the , tabhi ek kahi se 2 kide udte hue aaye or unke dono ke khule muh me jaldi se ghus gaye.

Ye koi sadharan kide ni the , ye braham rakshaso k bheje hue shetan the , jo kisi k bhi sharir m ghus ker uski pyas ko bhada dete the.

Ek kide ne preety k pass aane ki koshis bhi ki , lekin tabhi uske nishan se ek adrishy roshni nikal usse rakrayi or vo jal gaya.

Un kido k jate hi un dono ki pyas badh gayi or wo preety se pani mangne lage.

Preety ne unhe pani ki bottle dedi ,jisse pani piker un logo ki pyas to shant ho gayi , per kuch der baad vo vapas pani pani kerne lage.

Preety ko ab samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kya kare , usne un logo ko samjhaya ki shahr aane tak ka wait kare or gadi tez chalane lagi.

Lekin tabhi achanak se gadi bhi kharab ho gayi , preety gadi check kerne niche utari to unme se ek aadmi ki najar sadak k ek or bane kue pe gayi

Jise dekhte hi wo aadmi kushi se dusre se bola.

Admi :-. Dekh bhai waha ek kua h , chal chalker pani pite h.

Dusre ne bhi uske ha me ha milayi or wo kue ki or nikal pade .

Jeep ka bonut khula hone ki vajah se preety unko jate hue ni dekh payi, or isi bich wo kue k pas pahunch gaye or pani nikalne lage.

Ya preety ne bonut jese hi niche kiya or unlogo ko na paya to idher udher dekhne lagi , tab uski najar us or padi, jaha wo dono kue se pani nikal rahe the.

Preety chilayi :- wo pani mat pina , yaha pani pina sahi ni h.

Admi :- beti ab hum us manhoos ganv se dur aachuke h , ab chinta mat kero or tum bhi aaker pani pilo.

Preety ko na jane kyu ye sab sahi ni lag raha tha , isliye wo unki or dodi

Lekin tab tak wo dono pani pi chuke the or pani pite hi wo dono sammohit ho gaye or wo usi kue me kud gaye

Preety ne apni shaktiyo se unhe khichne ki koshis ki , lekin use esa mahasus hua ki ander se ek bahut hi takatwar shakti unhe khich rahi h .

Jiske aage preety kamjor pad gayi or wo log kue me ja gire.

Preety glani mahasoos kerti hui kafi der waha roti rahi , use lag raha tha ki aaj uski laparwahi se 2 jane gayi.

Lekin kuch der m usne khud ko sambhala or apni gadi k sath teleport ho gayi.

Uske waha se jate hi wo kua bhi gayab ho gaya , kulbhata ka rihayshi area bhale hi kam ho , per uska sunsan area bahut bada tha , jiske chalte abhi preety ne kulbhata ki sima par na ki thi.

Or isliye brahamrakshaso k jaal m fas gayi , kyunki wo kua bas un rakshaso ki maya thi , un dono ko fasane k liye.

Preety turant teleport ho ganv pahunch gayi naina k pas or sharminda hote hue sari ghatna batayi .

Naina ne bhi use samjhaya ki jo hua usme uski koi galti ni thi , fir naina boli

Naina :- kaka aap logo ne us ghade ko fod k bahut badi galti ki thi , kyunki wo khun k ghade un logo ka bhojan or shetan ko chadaya jane wala bhog tha

Ab usi ki bharpayi k liye wo rakshas aap sab ke khun k pyase ho chuke h , hume kal subah hi kuch kerna hoga.

Kyunki ab raat ho chuki h or is time kuch kerna mot ko davat dena h.

Naina ki baat se sab sahamat ho gaye or sab sone chale gaye

Sone se pahale naina ne ghar k charo or ek suraksha kakavach bana diya tha , taki koi problem na ho.

Wahi dusri or.

Markesh to gusse se lagal hue ja raha tha , kyunki abhi abhi kubdi ne use khabar di thi ki komolika ko bhi kisi ne maar diya h.

Markesh :-. Ahhhhh, aakhir kon h wo kamina jisne hum rakshaso ki nak me dam ker rakha h .

Usne sirf komolika ko hi ni mara kubdi, usne aaj hum trittyao ki ijat ko kuchal dala h.

Kya sochegi danav jati ki unka raja samrat or na hi uska bhai markesh , ek danavdasi ko na bacha paya.

Wo bhi us danavdasi ko jiske bhagwan or koi ni bhaiya samraat the.

Kubdi :-. Malik m us hatyare k baare m kuch batana chahti hu.

Markesh kubdi ka gala gala pakad :- tu to kuch bol hi mat bhudiya, tere chakkar me humari jo bejiti hui h use hum bhule ni h .

Us do kodi ki brahamrakshasi ne mujhe yani ki trittyao k yuvraj ko na keval haraya , balki mujhe jinda chod mera ghor apman bhi kiya h.

(Akhir kya hua tha markesh k sath , wo aage ki update m pata chalega.)

Kubdi gidgidate hue :- malik mafi , mafi , ek aakhiri moka dedo , is baar jo mujhe baat pata chali h , wo 100% sach h or humare liye ek achi khabar bhi.

Markesh ne usko chodte hue kaha :- bata .

Kubdi :- malik mujhe pata chal gaya h ki kisne mara h komolika ko or mujhe yahi lag raha h ki , hamare us tritiya senik ko bhi usne hi mara hoga.

Markesh gusse se :-. Saf saf bol kubdi kon h vo , koi dev h , yaksh h ya koi wohi dagabaj brahm rakshas


Kubdi :- koi dev ya asur ni malik , keval 3 insano ne mara h komolika ko.

Markesh gusse se :- kya bakwas ker rahi h tu bhudiya , sathiya to ni gayi h na tu .

Kubdi :- malik me jo bhi kah rahi hu sach hi kah rahi hu ,mene apni ek sevika ko bheja tha komolika k pas kisi kam se.

Usne waha jaker apni aankho se dekha 3 insano ne komolika or uske bete ko marte hue.

Unme se ek ladki k pas ek divya yantra tha malik.

Markesh :- ager esa h to is vakt kaha h vo log kubdi bata mujhe , m uska abhi ant karunga.

Kubdi :-uski jarurat ni h malik , wo log khud hi mot k muh me ja rahe h


Markesh :- kahana kya chahti h tu kkubdi.

Kubdi :- yahi ki malik , na jane kyu wo log aaap ko dhund rahe h or aapko dhundte dhundte ab vo log aapke diye komolika k locket ki madad se kulbhata pahunch gaye h.

Markesh :- kya kul bhata

Haha ab aayega maja jab mere 2 dushmano ki aaps me bhidant hogi , or is ladayi me koi bhi jite kubdi fayda to humara hi hoga .

(Note :- kubdi ki sevika ko ye pata ni chala tha ki preeti ek tritya h or na hi veer ki shakti k bare me use kuch khas pata chala)

Ye bol markesh hasne laga or kubdi bhi .

Aaj k liye bas itna hi.

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Behtareen update bhai
Mazza hi aagya
Superb one
Ye jin jin ki stories to maine bhi suni h apne dosto se
Pta nhi khin sach mein na hote ho
Lekin mast effect aaya is baat se
Preety ka saamne log maare gye
Veer ki shaktiyo ka andaza shayad naina ko hogya ho
Qki naina bht samajhdaar h
Us aaqt us om waale pathar ka komolika par girna
Aaj bottle wala scene
Ye jin wala scene dekhne mein mazza aayega

Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai :)
 

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Wahi dusri or

Location :- kulbhata

Naina or uske dost aaj subah hi rajsthan pahunch gaye, jaha unhone kuch der ek hotel me rest ker nikal pade apne aage ki safar ki or yani ki kulbhata ki or.

Gadi veer chala raha tha or preety uske sath aage bethi thi , or naina humesha ki tarah piche bethi usi kitab me dubi hui thi.

Veer preety k sath gadi chalate hue thodi romantic baate ker raha tha.

Veer naina se ;- yaar naina ab or kitna time lagega humare maksad pura hone ko .

Naina bhi masti me uska sath dete hue :- wo m bhala keSe batau , vese mere hone wale jiju ,kya m puch sakti hu , aapko itni jaldi kyu h bhala.

Veer :- wo kya h na sali sahiba , aapki friend , yani meri soni gf ne kal hi mujse shikayat ki ki hume relation me aaye itne din ho gaye , per m use ek Romantic date pe bhi na le gaye.

Naina preety ko chedte hue :- oh oh matlab humari preetu ko romantic date p jana h jiju k sath or wo bhi romantic.

Preety sharmate hue ek mukka veer ko marte hue :- jhute mane kab bola ese.

Veer :- are kal hi to tum bol rahi thi ki tum ki m tumhe time hi ni deta , jab hum hotel me ruke or naina kuch der k liye bahar gayi thi.

Preety :- jhute kahike mane esa kuch ni bola , kal to vese bhi us time humne kissing hi to ki thi.

Preety josh josh me bol to gayi per jab use ahasas hua apni galti ka to vo sharam k mare lal ho gayi.

Naina sitti marte hue :- oh ho to isliye mujhe kal akele jane ko insist kiya ja raha tha.

Preety or veer to sharm k mare laal ho gaye , jinhe dekh naina haste hue boli.

Naina :- are yaar tum dono sharma kyu rahe ho , aajkal ye sab to normal h couples me or mujhse kya sharmana , friends m ye sab baate hona common hoti h.

Yu hi naina or uske dost masti kerte hue aage bad rahe the ki tabhi 2 ganv vale unhe lift k liye hath dikhate hue dikhe .

Naina ne veer ko jeep rokne ko kaha ,

Veer :- kya hua kaka kidher jana h aap logo ko.

Aadmi :- bhaya hume to is manhoos jagah se kayi bhi dur jana h bas , vese tum log kidher ja rahe ho , yaha k to ni lag rahe .

Veer :- ha kaka hum pardesi h , or abhi kulbhata ganv ja rahe h.

Kulbhata ka naam sun un dono k r
Chahre k hav bhav hi badal gaye ,jinhe dekh naina bol padi.

Naina :- kya hua kaka , aapke chahre ka rang kyu ud gaya yu achank.

Dusra admi :- bacho kyu apni mot ko nyota de rahe ho , us manhoos ganv me jaker.

Preety :- kyu esa kya h bhala vaha jo aap log us ganv ko manhoos bol rahe ho.

Aadmi 2 :- tum pardesi ho isliye ni jante , are waha bharamrakshaso ka dera h , jinhone waha aatank machaya hua h , unhone shrap k kaaran log pyaas se mar rahe h.

Preety swaliya najar se naina ko dekhte hue :-. Braham rakshas .

Naina :- hmm , braham rakshas , inki kahaniya to bahut suni thi , lagta h jald hi mulakat bhi hone wali h.

Veer :- suna to mane bhi h inke bare me naina , per ye hote kya h.

Naina :- ye danvo ki sabse khatarnak prajati h veer , jinhe islam me jinh bhi kaha jata h , agar ye kisi ko dost bana le to usko raja bana dete h or ager dushman bana le to usko barbad hone se koi ni bacha sakta.




Or inme braham rakshasi to sabse jyada khatarnak hoti h , kyunki kaha jata h , jab 100 dayan marti h , jab ek braham rakshasi peda hoti h.




Aadmi :- wo jo bhi ho , hum yo yahi salah denge ki aap log kulbhata jane ka apna khyal chod do.

Naina :- jana to hume hoga hi kaka.

Tabhi us aadmi ki najar naina ki water bottle pe padi , jo uske bag k side m lagi thi.

Admi :- beti thoda pani milega, humne 2 din se pani ki ek ghut tak ni pi h.

Naina :- ha kyu ni kaka

Naina ne jese hi bottle unhe di to dono bacho ki tarah pahale pani pine ko tarasne lage .

Naina :- are aaram se , ek ek kerke piyo .

Dono ne adha adha ker puri bottle khali ker di , lekin unko tripti mil gayi.

Naina :-. Preety esa kero tum dono kaka ko aage shahar chod ker aajao ,itna m or veer ganv me jaker chanbin kerte h thodi , vese bhi ganv pas me hi h yaha se

Or ha (apne bag se ek or bottle nikalte hue) lo ise apne sath rakh lo ,pyaas lage to isi se pani pina ,kyunki mujhe shak h brahamrakshaso ka sirf is ganv tak hi shrap simit ni h, isliye shahar pahuchne tak kahi mat rukna or ho sake to sham hone se pahale pahale wapas lot aana.

Preety :- ok sister ,(un dono se ) chaliye kaka log aapko shahar tak chod dete h.

Fir preety nikal padi unlogo ko shahar chodne or veer or naina nikal pade kulbhata ki or.

Naina or veer jaise hi ganv me enter kerte h to pate h ki pura ganv hi viran hua pada h , ab to bache kuche log bhi shayad waha se bhag chuke the.

Veer :-. Ye kya naina ye ganv to pura viran ho gaya h.

Naina :- brahamrakshaso ka log h esa veer.

Kuch der wo yu hi ganv ghumte rahe , per unhe waha koi na mila, aabhi vo ye soch ker ki ab ganv me koi ni h vo lotne k liye mude hi the ki , ek jhopadi numa ghar se unhe kuch aawaj aayi.

Jo kisi bujurg lady ki pyas se tadapte hue pani mangne ki thi

Veer or naina turant us or ghar me gaye to paya ki ek bujurg orat jo dekne se hi pata chal raha tha ki vo bahut bimar h , wo pani k liye tadaf rahi thi or wahi pass me ek admi or ek orat jo us orat k beta or bahu lag rahe the , wo apne sir pe hath rakh ro rahe the.

Veer :- kya hua , aap sab ro kyu rahe ho or ye dadi kabse pani mang rahi h , aap inhe pani kyu ni de rahe.

Veer or naina ko jese hi wo aadmi or orat dekhte h to chonk jate h or unse puchte h ki vo kon h.

Tab naina apna or veer ka intro unhe deti h,

Admi apni majburi pe rrota hua :- kaha se lau m beti pani , kitna abhaga or nikama beta hu m , yaha meri maa pyas se tadaf rahi h or m unhe pani tak ni pila la raha.

Kyu , kyunki un dushto ne esa shrapit ker diya h hamare ek lote kue ko , ki jo uska pani pita h , wo aatmhatya ker leta h.

Naina :- per ye braham rakshas aap logo k piche kyu pade h , kuch to kaaran hoga na iske piche .

Orat :- kaaran h beti , kuch saal pahale ki baat h , ganv k kuch log raat ko khana khane k baad ser k liye nikale the , tabhi ganv k bahar unhe 2 ghade mile ek jagah , jinka muh lal kapde se bandha hua tha

Unlogo ne jab us kapde ko hatha ker ghadhe me dekha to paya ki wo ghade khun se labalab bhare hue the

Unlogo ne bina kuch soche samjhe un ghado ko tod dala , kala jadu samjh .

Tabse is ganv me ye sab chalu hua, aaye din log bimari se marne lage , tab humare bujurgo ne bataya ki wo ghade brahamrakshaso ki amant thi or humne unhe tod ker bahut badi galti ki h , isse pahale kuch or bura ho , hume ek mahapuja karwani hogi

Lekin logo ne kisi ki na suni or fir dhire dhire ye halat ho gaye h ganv k ,un brabamrakshaso ne kue ko shrapit ker diya h,

Jiske chalte ek ek ker sab yaha se chale gaye , per meri sasu ma bimar h , unse ab chala tak ni jata , isliye hum yaha se ni ja sake or sasu ma ko chod k jane ka sawal hi paida ni hota.

Naina :- aap sab chinta mat kijiye ,ab maa kali ki kripa se sab thik ho jayega , m is samsya ka koi samadhan jarur karungi

Naina ne ashvasan to dediya ,lekin unse dadi ki ye halat dekhi ni ja rahi thi , per wo abhi kuch ker ni sakti thi , kyunki uski dono bottle ab uske pas ni thi.

Veer ko tabhi ek idea aaya , usne apni powers ka use kerte hue turant 3 4 pani ki bottle apne bag me mangwa li.

Veer Apne bag se bottle nikal us orat ki bahu ko dete hue :- ye lilijiye mere pas pani h ,aap jaldi se dadi ko pila dijiye or aap log bhi pi lijiye.

(Naina se) hume rajsthan ki bhari garmi me safar kerna tha na , isliye mane pahale hi kuch bottle kharid li thi , taki kaam aajaye or dekho aagayi na kam.

Naina kuch ni bolti or muskura deti h , veer ki bottle 2.5 ltr ki thi , jisse us parivar ne ji bhar k pani piya , jinse unhe tripti mili , jiske liye unhone bahut bahut dhanyawad kiya naina ka.

Ab naina or veer vahi ruk gaye or preety k lotne ka wait kerne lage.

Wahi dusri or

Naina se vida le un donon ko chodne preety nikal padi ,Preety gadi drive ker rahi thi or wo dono aadmi piche bethe the , tabhi ek kahi se 2 kide udte hue aaye or unke dono ke khule muh me jaldi se ghus gaye.

Ye koi sadharan kide ni the , ye braham rakshaso k bheje hue shetan the , jo kisi k bhi sharir m ghus ker uski pyas ko bhada dete the.

Ek kide ne preety k pass aane ki koshis bhi ki , lekin tabhi uske nishan se ek adrishy roshni nikal usse rakrayi or vo jal gaya.

Un kido k jate hi un dono ki pyas badh gayi or wo preety se pani mangne lage.

Preety ne unhe pani ki bottle dedi ,jisse pani piker un logo ki pyas to shant ho gayi , per kuch der baad vo vapas pani pani kerne lage.

Preety ko ab samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kya kare , usne un logo ko samjhaya ki shahr aane tak ka wait kare or gadi tez chalane lagi.

Lekin tabhi achanak se gadi bhi kharab ho gayi , preety gadi check kerne niche utari to unme se ek aadmi ki najar sadak k ek or bane kue pe gayi

Jise dekhte hi wo aadmi kushi se dusre se bola.

Admi :-. Dekh bhai waha ek kua h , chal chalker pani pite h.

Dusre ne bhi uske ha me ha milayi or wo kue ki or nikal pade .

Jeep ka bonut khula hone ki vajah se preety unko jate hue ni dekh payi, or isi bich wo kue k pas pahunch gaye or pani nikalne lage.

Ya preety ne bonut jese hi niche kiya or unlogo ko na paya to idher udher dekhne lagi , tab uski najar us or padi, jaha wo dono kue se pani nikal rahe the.

Preety chilayi :- wo pani mat pina , yaha pani pina sahi ni h.

Admi :- beti ab hum us manhoos ganv se dur aachuke h , ab chinta mat kero or tum bhi aaker pani pilo.

Preety ko na jane kyu ye sab sahi ni lag raha tha , isliye wo unki or dodi

Lekin tab tak wo dono pani pi chuke the or pani pite hi wo dono sammohit ho gaye or wo usi kue me kud gaye

Preety ne apni shaktiyo se unhe khichne ki koshis ki , lekin use esa mahasus hua ki ander se ek bahut hi takatwar shakti unhe khich rahi h .

Jiske aage preety kamjor pad gayi or wo log kue me ja gire.

Preety glani mahasoos kerti hui kafi der waha roti rahi , use lag raha tha ki aaj uski laparwahi se 2 jane gayi.

Lekin kuch der m usne khud ko sambhala or apni gadi k sath teleport ho gayi.

Uske waha se jate hi wo kua bhi gayab ho gaya , kulbhata ka rihayshi area bhale hi kam ho , per uska sunsan area bahut bada tha , jiske chalte abhi preety ne kulbhata ki sima par na ki thi.

Or isliye brahamrakshaso k jaal m fas gayi , kyunki wo kua bas un rakshaso ki maya thi , un dono ko fasane k liye.

Preety turant teleport ho ganv pahunch gayi naina k pas or sharminda hote hue sari ghatna batayi .

Naina ne bhi use samjhaya ki jo hua usme uski koi galti ni thi , fir naina boli

Naina :- kaka aap logo ne us ghade ko fod k bahut badi galti ki thi , kyunki wo khun k ghade un logo ka bhojan or shetan ko chadaya jane wala bhog tha

Ab usi ki bharpayi k liye wo rakshas aap sab ke khun k pyase ho chuke h , hume kal subah hi kuch kerna hoga.

Kyunki ab raat ho chuki h or is time kuch kerna mot ko davat dena h.

Naina ki baat se sab sahamat ho gaye or sab sone chale gaye

Sone se pahale naina ne ghar k charo or ek suraksha kakavach bana diya tha , taki koi problem na ho.

Wahi dusri or.

Markesh to gusse se lagal hue ja raha tha , kyunki abhi abhi kubdi ne use khabar di thi ki komolika ko bhi kisi ne maar diya h.

Markesh :-. Ahhhhh, aakhir kon h wo kamina jisne hum rakshaso ki nak me dam ker rakha h .

Usne sirf komolika ko hi ni mara kubdi, usne aaj hum trittyao ki ijat ko kuchal dala h.

Kya sochegi danav jati ki unka raja samrat or na hi uska bhai markesh , ek danavdasi ko na bacha paya.

Wo bhi us danavdasi ko jiske bhagwan or koi ni bhaiya samraat the.

Kubdi :-. Malik m us hatyare k baare m kuch batana chahti hu.

Markesh kubdi ka gala gala pakad :- tu to kuch bol hi mat bhudiya, tere chakkar me humari jo bejiti hui h use hum bhule ni h .

Us do kodi ki brahamrakshasi ne mujhe yani ki trittyao k yuvraj ko na keval haraya , balki mujhe jinda chod mera ghor apman bhi kiya h.

(Akhir kya hua tha markesh k sath , wo aage ki update m pata chalega.)

Kubdi gidgidate hue :- malik mafi , mafi , ek aakhiri moka dedo , is baar jo mujhe baat pata chali h , wo 100% sach h or humare liye ek achi khabar bhi.

Markesh ne usko chodte hue kaha :- bata .

Kubdi :- malik mujhe pata chal gaya h ki kisne mara h komolika ko or mujhe yahi lag raha h ki , hamare us tritiya senik ko bhi usne hi mara hoga.

Markesh gusse se :-. Saf saf bol kubdi kon h vo , koi dev h , yaksh h ya koi wohi dagabaj brahm rakshas


Kubdi :- koi dev ya asur ni malik , keval 3 insano ne mara h komolika ko.

Markesh gusse se :- kya bakwas ker rahi h tu bhudiya , sathiya to ni gayi h na tu .

Kubdi :- malik me jo bhi kah rahi hu sach hi kah rahi hu ,mene apni ek sevika ko bheja tha komolika k pas kisi kam se.

Usne waha jaker apni aankho se dekha 3 insano ne komolika or uske bete ko marte hue.

Unme se ek ladki k pas ek divya yantra tha malik.

Markesh :- ager esa h to is vakt kaha h vo log kubdi bata mujhe , m uska abhi ant karunga.

Kubdi :-uski jarurat ni h malik , wo log khud hi mot k muh me ja rahe h


Markesh :- kahana kya chahti h tu kkubdi.

Kubdi :- yahi ki malik , na jane kyu wo log aaap ko dhund rahe h or aapko dhundte dhundte ab vo log aapke diye komolika k locket ki madad se kulbhata pahunch gaye h.

Markesh :- kya kul bhata

Haha ab aayega maja jab mere 2 dushmano ki aaps me bhidant hogi , or is ladayi me koi bhi jite kubdi fayda to humara hi hoga .

(Note :- kubdi ki sevika ko ye pata ni chala tha ki preeti ek tritya h or na hi veer ki shakti k bare me use kuch khas pata chala)

Ye bol markesh hasne laga or kubdi bhi .

Aaj k liye bas itna hi.

Stay tuned

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ek or kamal ka update aapke dwara.
Naina veer or preety.
Tino ki jodi kya dhamal macha payegi ye dekhne wali baat hogi .
Markesh or kubdi ki baatcheet badi hi dilchasp rahi.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah .

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar


Update no :- 122
Wahi dusri or

Location :- kulbhata

Naina or uske dost aaj subah hi rajsthan pahunch gaye, jaha unhone kuch der ek hotel me rest ker nikal pade apne aage ki safar ki or yani ki kulbhata ki or.

Gadi veer chala raha tha or preety uske sath aage bethi thi , or naina humesha ki tarah piche bethi usi kitab me dubi hui thi.

Veer preety k sath gadi chalate hue thodi romantic baate ker raha tha.

Veer naina se ;- yaar naina ab or kitna time lagega humare maksad pura hone ko .

Naina bhi masti me uska sath dete hue :- wo m bhala keSe batau , vese mere hone wale jiju ,kya m puch sakti hu , aapko itni jaldi kyu h bhala.

Veer :- wo kya h na sali sahiba , aapki friend , yani meri soni gf ne kal hi mujse shikayat ki ki hume relation me aaye itne din ho gaye , per m use ek Romantic date pe bhi na le gaye.

Naina preety ko chedte hue :- oh oh matlab humari preetu ko romantic date p jana h jiju k sath or wo bhi romantic.

Preety sharmate hue ek mukka veer ko marte hue :- jhute mane kab bola ese.

Veer :- are kal hi to tum bol rahi thi ki tum ki m tumhe time hi ni deta , jab hum hotel me ruke or naina kuch der k liye bahar gayi thi.

Preety :- jhute kahike mane esa kuch ni bola , kal to vese bhi us time humne kissing hi to ki thi.

Preety josh josh me bol to gayi per jab use ahasas hua apni galti ka to vo sharam k mare lal ho gayi.

Naina sitti marte hue :- oh ho to isliye mujhe kal akele jane ko insist kiya ja raha tha.

Preety or veer to sharm k mare laal ho gaye , jinhe dekh naina haste hue boli.

Naina :- are yaar tum dono sharma kyu rahe ho , aajkal ye sab to normal h couples me or mujhse kya sharmana , friends m ye sab baate hona common hoti h.

Yu hi naina or uske dost masti kerte hue aage bad rahe the ki tabhi 2 ganv vale unhe lift k liye hath dikhate hue dikhe .

Naina ne veer ko jeep rokne ko kaha ,

Veer :- kya hua kaka kidher jana h aap logo ko.

Aadmi :- bhaya hume to is manhoos jagah se kayi bhi dur jana h bas , vese tum log kidher ja rahe ho , yaha k to ni lag rahe .

Veer :- ha kaka hum pardesi h , or abhi kulbhata ganv ja rahe h.

Kulbhata ka naam sun un dono k r
Chahre k hav bhav hi badal gaye ,jinhe dekh naina bol padi.

Naina :- kya hua kaka , aapke chahre ka rang kyu ud gaya yu achank.

Dusra admi :- bacho kyu apni mot ko nyota de rahe ho , us manhoos ganv me jaker.

Preety :- kyu esa kya h bhala vaha jo aap log us ganv ko manhoos bol rahe ho.

Aadmi 2 :- tum pardesi ho isliye ni jante , are waha bharamrakshaso ka dera h , jinhone waha aatank machaya hua h , unhone shrap k kaaran log pyaas se mar rahe h.

Preety swaliya najar se naina ko dekhte hue :-. Braham rakshas .

Naina :- hmm , braham rakshas , inki kahaniya to bahut suni thi , lagta h jald hi mulakat bhi hone wali h.

Veer :- suna to mane bhi h inke bare me naina , per ye hote kya h.

Naina :- ye danvo ki sabse khatarnak prajati h veer , jinhe islam me jinh bhi kaha jata h , agar ye kisi ko dost bana le to usko raja bana dete h or ager dushman bana le to usko barbad hone se koi ni bacha sakta.




Or inme braham rakshasi to sabse jyada khatarnak hoti h , kyunki kaha jata h , jab 100 dayan marti h , jab ek braham rakshasi peda hoti h.




Aadmi :- wo jo bhi ho , hum yo yahi salah denge ki aap log kulbhata jane ka apna khyal chod do.

Naina :- jana to hume hoga hi kaka.

Tabhi us aadmi ki najar naina ki water bottle pe padi , jo uske bag k side m lagi thi.

Admi :- beti thoda pani milega, humne 2 din se pani ki ek ghut tak ni pi h.

Naina :- ha kyu ni kaka

Naina ne jese hi bottle unhe di to dono bacho ki tarah pahale pani pine ko tarasne lage .

Naina :- are aaram se , ek ek kerke piyo .

Dono ne adha adha ker puri bottle khali ker di , lekin unko tripti mil gayi.

Naina :-. Preety esa kero tum dono kaka ko aage shahar chod ker aajao ,itna m or veer ganv me jaker chanbin kerte h thodi , vese bhi ganv pas me hi h yaha se

Or ha (apne bag se ek or bottle nikalte hue) lo ise apne sath rakh lo ,pyaas lage to isi se pani pina ,kyunki mujhe shak h brahamrakshaso ka sirf is ganv tak hi shrap simit ni h, isliye shahar pahuchne tak kahi mat rukna or ho sake to sham hone se pahale pahale wapas lot aana.

Preety :- ok sister ,(un dono se ) chaliye kaka log aapko shahar tak chod dete h.

Fir preety nikal padi unlogo ko shahar chodne or veer or naina nikal pade kulbhata ki or.

Naina or veer jaise hi ganv me enter kerte h to pate h ki pura ganv hi viran hua pada h , ab to bache kuche log bhi shayad waha se bhag chuke the.

Veer :-. Ye kya naina ye ganv to pura viran ho gaya h.

Naina :- brahamrakshaso ka log h esa veer.

Kuch der wo yu hi ganv ghumte rahe , per unhe waha koi na mila, aabhi vo ye soch ker ki ab ganv me koi ni h vo lotne k liye mude hi the ki , ek jhopadi numa ghar se unhe kuch aawaj aayi.

Jo kisi bujurg lady ki pyas se tadapte hue pani mangne ki thi

Veer or naina turant us or ghar me gaye to paya ki ek bujurg orat jo dekne se hi pata chal raha tha ki vo bahut bimar h , wo pani k liye tadaf rahi thi or wahi pass me ek admi or ek orat jo us orat k beta or bahu lag rahe the , wo apne sir pe hath rakh ro rahe the.

Veer :- kya hua , aap sab ro kyu rahe ho or ye dadi kabse pani mang rahi h , aap inhe pani kyu ni de rahe.

Veer or naina ko jese hi wo aadmi or orat dekhte h to chonk jate h or unse puchte h ki vo kon h.

Tab naina apna or veer ka intro unhe deti h,

Admi apni majburi pe rrota hua :- kaha se lau m beti pani , kitna abhaga or nikama beta hu m , yaha meri maa pyas se tadaf rahi h or m unhe pani tak ni pila la raha.

Kyu , kyunki un dushto ne esa shrapit ker diya h hamare ek lote kue ko , ki jo uska pani pita h , wo aatmhatya ker leta h.

Naina :- per ye braham rakshas aap logo k piche kyu pade h , kuch to kaaran hoga na iske piche .

Orat :- kaaran h beti , kuch saal pahale ki baat h , ganv k kuch log raat ko khana khane k baad ser k liye nikale the , tabhi ganv k bahar unhe 2 ghade mile ek jagah , jinka muh lal kapde se bandha hua tha

Unlogo ne jab us kapde ko hatha ker ghadhe me dekha to paya ki wo ghade khun se labalab bhare hue the

Unlogo ne bina kuch soche samjhe un ghado ko tod dala , kala jadu samjh .

Tabse is ganv me ye sab chalu hua, aaye din log bimari se marne lage , tab humare bujurgo ne bataya ki wo ghade brahamrakshaso ki amant thi or humne unhe tod ker bahut badi galti ki h , isse pahale kuch or bura ho , hume ek mahapuja karwani hogi

Lekin logo ne kisi ki na suni or fir dhire dhire ye halat ho gaye h ganv k ,un brabamrakshaso ne kue ko shrapit ker diya h,

Jiske chalte ek ek ker sab yaha se chale gaye , per meri sasu ma bimar h , unse ab chala tak ni jata , isliye hum yaha se ni ja sake or sasu ma ko chod k jane ka sawal hi paida ni hota.

Naina :- aap sab chinta mat kijiye ,ab maa kali ki kripa se sab thik ho jayega , m is samsya ka koi samadhan jarur karungi

Naina ne ashvasan to dediya ,lekin unse dadi ki ye halat dekhi ni ja rahi thi , per wo abhi kuch ker ni sakti thi , kyunki uski dono bottle ab uske pas ni thi.

Veer ko tabhi ek idea aaya , usne apni powers ka use kerte hue turant 3 4 pani ki bottle apne bag me mangwa li.

Veer Apne bag se bottle nikal us orat ki bahu ko dete hue :- ye lilijiye mere pas pani h ,aap jaldi se dadi ko pila dijiye or aap log bhi pi lijiye.

(Naina se) hume rajsthan ki bhari garmi me safar kerna tha na , isliye mane pahale hi kuch bottle kharid li thi , taki kaam aajaye or dekho aagayi na kam.

Naina kuch ni bolti or muskura deti h , veer ki bottle 2.5 ltr ki thi , jisse us parivar ne ji bhar k pani piya , jinse unhe tripti mili , jiske liye unhone bahut bahut dhanyawad kiya naina ka.

Ab naina or veer vahi ruk gaye or preety k lotne ka wait kerne lage.

Wahi dusri or

Naina se vida le un donon ko chodne preety nikal padi ,Preety gadi drive ker rahi thi or wo dono aadmi piche bethe the , tabhi ek kahi se 2 kide udte hue aaye or unke dono ke khule muh me jaldi se ghus gaye.

Ye koi sadharan kide ni the , ye braham rakshaso k bheje hue shetan the , jo kisi k bhi sharir m ghus ker uski pyas ko bhada dete the.

Ek kide ne preety k pass aane ki koshis bhi ki , lekin tabhi uske nishan se ek adrishy roshni nikal usse rakrayi or vo jal gaya.

Un kido k jate hi un dono ki pyas badh gayi or wo preety se pani mangne lage.

Preety ne unhe pani ki bottle dedi ,jisse pani piker un logo ki pyas to shant ho gayi , per kuch der baad vo vapas pani pani kerne lage.

Preety ko ab samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kya kare , usne un logo ko samjhaya ki shahr aane tak ka wait kare or gadi tez chalane lagi.

Lekin tabhi achanak se gadi bhi kharab ho gayi , preety gadi check kerne niche utari to unme se ek aadmi ki najar sadak k ek or bane kue pe gayi

Jise dekhte hi wo aadmi kushi se dusre se bola.

Admi :-. Dekh bhai waha ek kua h , chal chalker pani pite h.

Dusre ne bhi uske ha me ha milayi or wo kue ki or nikal pade .

Jeep ka bonut khula hone ki vajah se preety unko jate hue ni dekh payi, or isi bich wo kue k pas pahunch gaye or pani nikalne lage.

Ya preety ne bonut jese hi niche kiya or unlogo ko na paya to idher udher dekhne lagi , tab uski najar us or padi, jaha wo dono kue se pani nikal rahe the.

Preety chilayi :- wo pani mat pina , yaha pani pina sahi ni h.

Admi :- beti ab hum us manhoos ganv se dur aachuke h , ab chinta mat kero or tum bhi aaker pani pilo.

Preety ko na jane kyu ye sab sahi ni lag raha tha , isliye wo unki or dodi

Lekin tab tak wo dono pani pi chuke the or pani pite hi wo dono sammohit ho gaye or wo usi kue me kud gaye

Preety ne apni shaktiyo se unhe khichne ki koshis ki , lekin use esa mahasus hua ki ander se ek bahut hi takatwar shakti unhe khich rahi h .

Jiske aage preety kamjor pad gayi or wo log kue me ja gire.

Preety glani mahasoos kerti hui kafi der waha roti rahi , use lag raha tha ki aaj uski laparwahi se 2 jane gayi.

Lekin kuch der m usne khud ko sambhala or apni gadi k sath teleport ho gayi.

Uske waha se jate hi wo kua bhi gayab ho gaya , kulbhata ka rihayshi area bhale hi kam ho , per uska sunsan area bahut bada tha , jiske chalte abhi preety ne kulbhata ki sima par na ki thi.

Or isliye brahamrakshaso k jaal m fas gayi , kyunki wo kua bas un rakshaso ki maya thi , un dono ko fasane k liye.

Preety turant teleport ho ganv pahunch gayi naina k pas or sharminda hote hue sari ghatna batayi .

Naina ne bhi use samjhaya ki jo hua usme uski koi galti ni thi , fir naina boli

Naina :- kaka aap logo ne us ghade ko fod k bahut badi galti ki thi , kyunki wo khun k ghade un logo ka bhojan or shetan ko chadaya jane wala bhog tha

Ab usi ki bharpayi k liye wo rakshas aap sab ke khun k pyase ho chuke h , hume kal subah hi kuch kerna hoga.

Kyunki ab raat ho chuki h or is time kuch kerna mot ko davat dena h.

Naina ki baat se sab sahamat ho gaye or sab sone chale gaye

Sone se pahale naina ne ghar k charo or ek suraksha kakavach bana diya tha , taki koi problem na ho.

Wahi dusri or.

Markesh to gusse se lagal hue ja raha tha , kyunki abhi abhi kubdi ne use khabar di thi ki komolika ko bhi kisi ne maar diya h.

Markesh :-. Ahhhhh, aakhir kon h wo kamina jisne hum rakshaso ki nak me dam ker rakha h .

Usne sirf komolika ko hi ni mara kubdi, usne aaj hum trittyao ki ijat ko kuchal dala h.

Kya sochegi danav jati ki unka raja samrat or na hi uska bhai markesh , ek danavdasi ko na bacha paya.

Wo bhi us danavdasi ko jiske bhagwan or koi ni bhaiya samraat the.

Kubdi :-. Malik m us hatyare k baare m kuch batana chahti hu.

Markesh kubdi ka gala gala pakad :- tu to kuch bol hi mat bhudiya, tere chakkar me humari jo bejiti hui h use hum bhule ni h .

Us do kodi ki brahamrakshasi ne mujhe yani ki trittyao k yuvraj ko na keval haraya , balki mujhe jinda chod mera ghor apman bhi kiya h.

(Akhir kya hua tha markesh k sath , wo aage ki update m pata chalega.)

Kubdi gidgidate hue :- malik mafi , mafi , ek aakhiri moka dedo , is baar jo mujhe baat pata chali h , wo 100% sach h or humare liye ek achi khabar bhi.

Markesh ne usko chodte hue kaha :- bata .

Kubdi :- malik mujhe pata chal gaya h ki kisne mara h komolika ko or mujhe yahi lag raha h ki , hamare us tritiya senik ko bhi usne hi mara hoga.

Markesh gusse se :-. Saf saf bol kubdi kon h vo , koi dev h , yaksh h ya koi wohi dagabaj brahm rakshas


Kubdi :- koi dev ya asur ni malik , keval 3 insano ne mara h komolika ko.

Markesh gusse se :- kya bakwas ker rahi h tu bhudiya , sathiya to ni gayi h na tu .

Kubdi :- malik me jo bhi kah rahi hu sach hi kah rahi hu ,mene apni ek sevika ko bheja tha komolika k pas kisi kam se.

Usne waha jaker apni aankho se dekha 3 insano ne komolika or uske bete ko marte hue.

Unme se ek ladki k pas ek divya yantra tha malik.

Markesh :- ager esa h to is vakt kaha h vo log kubdi bata mujhe , m uska abhi ant karunga.

Kubdi :-uski jarurat ni h malik , wo log khud hi mot k muh me ja rahe h


Markesh :- kahana kya chahti h tu kkubdi.

Kubdi :- yahi ki malik , na jane kyu wo log aaap ko dhund rahe h or aapko dhundte dhundte ab vo log aapke diye komolika k locket ki madad se kulbhata pahunch gaye h.

Markesh :- kya kul bhata

Haha ab aayega maja jab mere 2 dushmano ki aaps me bhidant hogi , or is ladayi me koi bhi jite kubdi fayda to humara hi hoga .

(Note :- kubdi ki sevika ko ye pata ni chala tha ki preeti ek tritya h or na hi veer ki shakti k bare me use kuch khas pata chala)

Ye bol markesh hasne laga or kubdi bhi .

Aaj k liye bas itna hi.

Stay tuned

 
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