Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

[Ashwathama]

jaisay pichle 2 saal se jaldi aa rahey hain. Mai hamesha Har writer ko support karta hoon magar Harry bhai aapki 2022 me 4 updates 16 Jan 25 jan 15 Feb and 6 Mar ko aayi hain. same condition 2021 me aur 2022 me rahi Hai mushkil se dono saal ke Mila kar 25-30 update se zada nahi aayi hogi. jis wajah se story ka Sara maza kirkara हो Gaya. aur hum log ek bohat acchi story miss kar Gaye. I jabki 2019 tak story bohat zabardast flow me chal rahi thee aur bohat maza bhi aata thaa coz jaldi jaldi update and ek interataction between writer n reader rehta thaa magar July 2019 ke baad se to story ek dum dull and boring हो gayi coz itne late update ki maza hi khatam हो Gaya.
Harry rocks Bhai aapka purana dost hoon aur shuru se story me sath hoo. is liye dostana request kar raha hoon ki apno story ka pace badaye taki phir se wohi Bahar aa Jaye aapki story per coz accha nahi lag raha ki aapne jo itni mehnat ke sath ki tree lagaya hain woh apne peak per aan ker aisay barbaad हो Jaye.

Agree raaj bhii.... Late update ke kaaran story ka lineup bhi kharab ho jata hai... Aur interest bhi kam ho jata hai readres ki.
Mai yahan agar khud ki baat karu to mai bhi haary bhai ki iss story ko suru se hi padh rha hun, pahle wala acnt ban ho gya mera phir naya acnt banaya. Par jaisa interest pahle tha iss story ke prati din prati din wo kamta chala gya. Ab to update bhi aate hai to usko padhne me pahle wala junun nhi rahta hai. Kaaran wahi... Late update....
Harry rocks bhai se yhi kahunga ki itne achhe story ka ending dehtareen tarah se de. Ye story ek legend ending deserve karti hai... Uske liye bhale hi hafte me hi ek update de par de.....
Dhanyawaad

 

[Harry rocks]

Bhai, aaj ravivar hai...
Hamsabko intezaar hai...
Agla update dedoge to
Sabka beda paar haii...
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Update raat ko AYEGA BHAI

 

[Manojsharma]

Waiting for next update bro

 

[Harry rocks]

Update no :- 240
Dopahar ka samay tha , karan office kisi kam se gaya hua tha , kyunki aaj workload kuch jyada tha or ridhima se use handle kerna mushkil ho raha tha.

Or yaha Ghar m sab apne apne room m the or jyoti bhi kavya k sath uske room m mojud thi.

Tabhi koi dhire dhire chupke chupke karan or jyoti k kamre ki or badh raha tha , aaiye dekhte h wo kon tha.

Are ye to naina thi , jiske iraade kuch sahi ni lag rahe the.

Naina dhire se unke kamre m enter hoti h , apni jhuti nafrat k kaaran aaj wo pahali baar unke kamre m aayi thi wo bhi choro ki tarah .

Naina kamre ko dekhte hue :- oh to ye h un dono kamine ka room , dikhne m to thik thak hi h .

Fir kuch der room ko ache se dekhne k baad , uske dimag m ek baat aayi.

Naina :- na jane kyu mujhe kuch to gadbad lagti h in dono bhai bahan k bich, meri 6th sense baar baar mujhse kahati h ki ho n ho kuch to h jo in dono ne sabse chupaya hua h , kyunki ye dono itne bade ho jane k bavjood bhi aajtak ek hi room share kerte h , ho na ho kuch to raaz h or ager ye raaz mujhe pata chal jaye to ho sakta h mere badle lene ka kaam asaan ho jaye.

Ye sochte hue naina ek baar bahar ki or dekh kamre ki talashi lene lagti h , per wo kaha janti thi ki dandnayak ka bhed pana itna aassan ni h.

Wo kabhi karan ki book shelves ko check keri to kabhi uski almira ko per uske hath kuch ni lagta.

Naina chidte hue :- aahhhh , yaha to kuch hath abhi tak kuch ni laga, lekin yaha jayada der rukna bhi sahi ni h , kyunki kabhi bhi koi bhi yaha aasakta h.

Ye soch wo waha se nikalne ko hoti tabhi uski najar karan or jyoti ki ek pyari si tasveer per padti h , jisme karan niche betha tha or piche se jyoti karan k gale m bahe dale hue thi.

Jise dekh naina ki ankhe gusse se laal hone lagi , specially jyoti ko dekh ker to uski ankhe bhayank laal ho chuki thi.

Naina :- kamini jyoti bas kuch samay or tera to m wo haal karungi ki jiski tu kalpana tak na ker sakti.

Ye kya samar ki hatya to karan ne ki thi , to jyoti se itni bhayanak nafrat naina k dil m kyuu thi , kya Jyoti ka karan ka paksh lene k kaaran hi ya koi or rahasya tha .

Or karan ki tasveer ko bhi lanat ki drishti se dekhte hue use kuch is tarah dhakel deti h halke se jese karan ko thappad mara ho , jise wo thodi tedi ho jati h.

Lekin tabhi karan k kamre m kuch esa hua jispe naina ki najar ni gayi , naina k thik piche wali diwar tasveer k hilne k sath hi thodi si sarak gayi or ek rasta najar aane laha, jese waha koi door ho .

Jiske uper abhi tak naina ki najar ni padhi thi , lekin wo bas us taraf ghumne hi wali thi ki tabhi sonam ki aawaz use room k bahar se aati h , jisse naina chowk jati h or us tasveer ko thik ker deti h to wo door bhi band ho jata h or wo jaldi se room ki halat pahale jese ker deti h.

Tabhi Sonam bhi waha aapahunchi or Naina se boli.

Sonam :- are naina tum yaha kya ker rahi ho.

Naina :- kuch ni sona di , m to aapko hi dhund rahi thi , wo admision form k liye chalna tha naa.

Sonam :- are m to apne room m hi thi , chal koi naa abhi form next week se niklenge to tab apn admis k liye chalenge.

Fir naina sonam ko baato m laga uske sath hi waha se nikal leti h .

Naina man me :- hashhh , bach gayi , koi baat ni naina raz ka to m pata laga k hi rahungi.

Wahi dusri or.

Location :- karan office

Karan or ridhima ne sara kam finish ker liya tha , or ab wo lage hue the , asha k office ko sajane m kyunki kal itne saalo baad asha office m aane wali thi.

karan koi bhi kami ni chahta tha , isliye wo khud Ridhima k sath mil ker sare bandobast m laga hua tha, or jab kaam finish hua tab wo dono bethe hi the ki tab ridhima boli.

Ridhima :- bhai tum bhua ko kab ghar p leke aarahe ho ,papa ki bahut icha ho rahi h bhua se milne ki itne salo baad jabse unhe pata chala bhua k jivit hone ka to wo khushi se fule ni sama rahe roj yaha aane ki jid kerte h milne ki, tum hi batao esi tabiyat k sath m unhe kese aane du yaha.

Karan :- apka bhai apna vada bhula ni h di , promise k hisab se kal na keval mummy m or Jyoti na keval office m aayenge , balki raat ka dinner hum mamaji k sath hi karenge.

Ridhima :- sachi ,

Karan :- muchi didu.

Tabhi karan ko kuch ahasaas hota h jisse wo kuch pareshan ho jata h , per wo apne chahre p pareshani aane ni deta ridhima k samne .

Karan :- acha di ab m chalta hu , mujhe kuch jaruri kaam yaad aagaya or fir ab shivani ko school se lene bhi to jana h.

Ye bol karan waha se nikal k shivani ko school se pick kerte hue wo ghar pahuncha.

Or turant jaker apne room ko ache se check kerta h or kuch der baad jab use tasali hui to wo chen ki saaas lete hue bed p beth jata h.

Tabhi jyoti bhi room m enter hoti h or apne hatho m liye hue glass ko karan ko deti h .

Pani pine k baad karan jyoti k god m sir rakh ker let jata h or jyoti uska sir dabane lagti h.

Karan :- gudiya mane jo mahasus kiya wo tumne bhi kiya .

Jyoti :- ha bhai mane bhi wahi mahasus kiya or m turant ahasas hote hi room m aayi bhi per mujhe to sab normal hi mila yaha.

Karan :- per wo ahsaas ko hum apna waham bhi to ni man sakte na gudiya , kyunki ye baat tum bhi janti ho na ki kya ho sakta h is ahasas m chupi chetawani ka anzaam , koi n koi jarur humare room m aaya tha or yaha chedkhani ki

Jyoti pyaar se :- shant ho jaiye bhai , ese bhi to ho sakta h ki choti maa ya mummy aayi or safayi kerte unhone kuch saman idher udher ker diya ho , wo bas usika ahasas ho.

Karan ko jyoti ki baat sahi lagti h, or thake hone ki vajah se wo us baat p jyada dhyan ni deta or so jata h.

Time raat - 11.30

Location :- karan k shahar ki ek sunsan road

Raat ka samay tha or ek aadmi jo thota nashe m tha us road se ja raha tha , tabhi road k kinare ek ladki use hath dikha ker rukne ka ishara kerti h.

Jise se dekh uske ander ki tharak jag jati h or wo turant gadi rokta h or gadi m use bitha leta h.

Gadi m bethne k baad ladki sirf itna hi bolti h ki usko uske ghar chod de wo , wo bhi jitna jaldi ho sake

Ladka sochta h ki ladki shayad sharma rahi h , or wo chal pada ladki k bataye hue raste p chal pada or ladki k bataye hue raste p .


Or bich bich m wo admi ladki ko touch kerne ki koshis kerta h , lekin ladki baar bar use khud ko chume ss rok rahi thi.

Or kuch der m hi wo us ladki k bataye pate p pahunch jate h per wo ghar to ek dam andhere se ghup tha .

Admi tharakipan dikhate :- ye tumhara ghar h , yaha to light hi ni h , vese chaho to janeman mere ghar aasakti ho .

Ladki :- ni shukriya .

Ye bol wo jane lagi , lekin tavhi us admi ka hath pakad pakad liya or bola.

Admi :- are janeman , itni bhi jaldi kya h .

Or ye harkat uske jindgi ki akhri galti sabit hui , kyunki jese hi usne ladki ka hath pakda to ek bhayanak dahad use bahar se sunayi di or jise sun wo dar k baahar dekhta h to kuch ni dikhayi deta or jese hi wo wapas ghuma to ladki to gayab thi lekin usne jese hi rear view camera m dekha to uski fat k hath m agayi kyunki waha shetan betha tha, piche wali seat pe

Shetan :- teri ye majal tune use chua , tune use ni apni mot ko chua h .

Ye bolne k sath hi us shetan ne us admi k uper tut pada.

Or agle din police ko use us jagah per hi us admi ki lash car m mili jaha se usne ladki ko recieve kiya tha.

Back to the karan house

Us aadmi ki news akhbaar m chapi thi , jise naina pad rahi thi or ye koi pahali vardaat ni thi , jab us area m lash mili ho , is kaaran shahar m khof fel gaya tha.

Naina ne jab aaj fir ye news padhi to usne is rahasya k pata lagane ka man hi man sankalp liya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned

 

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[Harry rocks]

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Update no :- 240
Dopahar ka samay tha , karan office kisi kam se gaya hua tha , kyunki aaj workload kuch jyada tha or ridhima se use handle kerna mushkil ho raha tha.

Or yaha Ghar m sab apne apne room m the or jyoti bhi kavya k sath uske room m mojud thi.

Tabhi koi dhire dhire chupke chupke karan or jyoti k kamre ki or badh raha tha , aaiye dekhte h wo kon tha.

Are ye to naina thi , jiske iraade kuch sahi ni lag rahe the.

Naina dhire se unke kamre m enter hoti h , apni jhuti nafrat k kaaran aaj wo pahali baar unke kamre m aayi thi wo bhi choro ki tarah .

Naina kamre ko dekhte hue :- oh to ye h un dono kamine ka room , dikhne m to thik thak hi h .

Fir kuch der room ko ache se dekhne k baad , uske dimag m ek baat aayi.

Naina :- na jane kyu mujhe kuch to gadbad lagti h in dono bhai bahan k bich, meri 6th sense baar baar mujhse kahati h ki ho n ho kuch to h jo in dono ne sabse chupaya hua h , kyunki ye dono itne bade ho jane k bavjood bhi aajtak ek hi room share kerte h , ho na ho kuch to raaz h or ager ye raaz mujhe pata chal jaye to ho sakta h mere badle lene ka kaam asaan ho jaye.

Ye sochte hue naina ek baar bahar ki or dekh kamre ki talashi lene lagti h , per wo kaha janti thi ki dandnayak ka bhed pana itna aassan ni h.

Wo kabhi karan ki book shelves ko check keri to kabhi uski almira ko per uske hath kuch ni lagta.

Naina chidte hue :- aahhhh , yaha to kuch hath abhi tak kuch ni laga, lekin yaha jayada der rukna bhi sahi ni h , kyunki kabhi bhi koi bhi yaha aasakta h.

Ye soch wo waha se nikalne ko hoti tabhi uski najar karan or jyoti ki ek pyari si tasveer per padti h , jisme karan niche betha tha or piche se jyoti karan k gale m bahe dale hue thi.

Jise dekh naina ki ankhe gusse se laal hone lagi , specially jyoti ko dekh ker to uski ankhe bhayank laal ho chuki thi.

Naina :- kamini jyoti bas kuch samay or tera to m wo haal karungi ki jiski tu kalpana tak na ker sakti.

Ye kya samar ki hatya to karan ne ki thi , to jyoti se itni bhayanak nafrat naina k dil m kyuu thi , kya Jyoti ka karan ka paksh lene k kaaran hi ya koi or rahasya tha .

Or karan ki tasveer ko bhi lanat ki drishti se dekhte hue use kuch is tarah dhakel deti h halke se jese karan ko thappad mara ho , jise wo thodi tedi ho jati h.

Lekin tabhi karan k kamre m kuch esa hua jispe naina ki najar ni gayi , naina k thik piche wali diwar tasveer k hilne k sath hi thodi si sarak gayi or ek rasta najar aane laha, jese waha koi door ho .

Jiske uper abhi tak naina ki najar ni padhi thi , lekin wo bas us taraf ghumne hi wali thi ki tabhi sonam ki aawaz use room k bahar se aati h , jisse naina chowk jati h or us tasveer ko thik ker deti h to wo door bhi band ho jata h or wo jaldi se room ki halat pahale jese ker deti h.

Tabhi Sonam bhi waha aapahunchi or Naina se boli.

Sonam :- are naina tum yaha kya ker rahi ho.

Naina :- kuch ni sona di , m to aapko hi dhund rahi thi , wo admision form k liye chalna tha naa.

Sonam :- are m to apne room m hi thi , chal koi naa abhi form next week se niklenge to tab apn admis k liye chalenge.

Fir naina sonam ko baato m laga uske sath hi waha se nikal leti h .

Naina man me :- hashhh , bach gayi , koi baat ni naina raz ka to m pata laga k hi rahungi.

Wahi dusri or.

Location :- karan office

Karan or ridhima ne sara kam finish ker liya tha , or ab wo lage hue the , asha k office ko sajane m kyunki kal itne saalo baad asha office m aane wali thi.

karan koi bhi kami ni chahta tha , isliye wo khud Ridhima k sath mil ker sare bandobast m laga hua tha, or jab kaam finish hua tab wo dono bethe hi the ki tab ridhima boli.

Ridhima :- bhai tum bhua ko kab ghar p leke aarahe ho ,papa ki bahut icha ho rahi h bhua se milne ki itne salo baad jabse unhe pata chala bhua k jivit hone ka to wo khushi se fule ni sama rahe roj yaha aane ki jid kerte h milne ki, tum hi batao esi tabiyat k sath m unhe kese aane du yaha.

Karan :- apka bhai apna vada bhula ni h di , promise k hisab se kal na keval mummy m or Jyoti na keval office m aayenge , balki raat ka dinner hum mamaji k sath hi karenge.

Ridhima :- sachi ,

Karan :- muchi didu.

Tabhi karan ko kuch ahasaas hota h jisse wo kuch pareshan ho jata h , per wo apne chahre p pareshani aane ni deta ridhima k samne .

Karan :- acha di ab m chalta hu , mujhe kuch jaruri kaam yaad aagaya or fir ab shivani ko school se lene bhi to jana h.

Ye bol karan waha se nikal k shivani ko school se pick kerte hue wo ghar pahuncha.

Or turant jaker apne room ko ache se check kerta h or kuch der baad jab use tasali hui to wo chen ki saaas lete hue bed p beth jata h.

Tabhi jyoti bhi room m enter hoti h or apne hatho m liye hue glass ko karan ko deti h .

Pani pine k baad karan jyoti k god m sir rakh ker let jata h or jyoti uska sir dabane lagti h.

Karan :- gudiya mane jo mahasus kiya wo tumne bhi kiya .

Jyoti :- ha bhai mane bhi wahi mahasus kiya or m turant ahasas hote hi room m aayi bhi per mujhe to sab normal hi mila yaha.

Karan :- per wo ahsaas ko hum apna waham bhi to ni man sakte na gudiya , kyunki ye baat tum bhi janti ho na ki kya ho sakta h is ahasas m chupi chetawani ka anzaam , koi n koi jarur humare room m aaya tha or yaha chedkhani ki

Jyoti pyaar se :- shant ho jaiye bhai , ese bhi to ho sakta h ki choti maa ya mummy aayi or safayi kerte unhone kuch saman idher udher ker diya ho , wo bas usika ahasas ho.

Karan ko jyoti ki baat sahi lagti h, or thake hone ki vajah se wo us baat p jyada dhyan ni deta or so jata h.

Time raat - 11.30

Location :- karan k shahar ki ek sunsan road

Raat ka samay tha or ek aadmi jo thota nashe m tha us road se ja raha tha , tabhi road k kinare ek ladki use hath dikha ker rukne ka ishara kerti h.

Jise se dekh uske ander ki tharak jag jati h or wo turant gadi rokta h or gadi m use bitha leta h.

Gadi m bethne k baad ladki sirf itna hi bolti h ki usko uske ghar chod de wo , wo bhi jitna jaldi ho sake

Ladka sochta h ki ladki shayad sharma rahi h , or wo chal pada ladki k bataye hue raste p chal pada or ladki k bataye hue raste p .


Or bich bich m wo admi ladki ko touch kerne ki koshis kerta h , lekin ladki baar bar use khud ko chume ss rok rahi thi.

Or kuch der m hi wo us ladki k bataye pate p pahunch jate h per wo ghar to ek dam andhere se ghup tha .

Admi tharakipan dikhate :- ye tumhara ghar h , yaha to light hi ni h , vese chaho to janeman mere ghar aasakti ho .

Ladki :- ni shukriya .

Ye bol wo jane lagi , lekin tavhi us admi ka hath pakad pakad liya or bola.

Admi :- are janeman , itni bhi jaldi kya h .

Or ye harkat uske jindgi ki akhri galti sabit hui , kyunki jese hi usne ladki ka hath pakda to ek bhayanak dahad use bahar se sunayi di or jise sun wo dar k baahar dekhta h to kuch ni dikhayi deta or jese hi wo wapas ghuma to ladki to gayab thi lekin usne jese hi rear view camera m dekha to uski fat k hath m agayi kyunki waha shetan betha tha, piche wali seat pe

Shetan :- teri ye majal tune use chua , tune use ni apni mot ko chua h .

Ye bolne k sath hi us shetan ne us admi k uper tut pada.

Or agle din police ko use us jagah per hi us admi ki lash car m mili jaha se usne ladki ko recieve kiya tha.

Back to the karan house

Us aadmi ki news akhbaar m chapi thi , jise naina pad rahi thi or ye koi pahali vardaat ni thi , jab us area m lash mili ho , is kaaran shahar m khof fel gaya tha.

Naina ne jab aaj fir ye news padhi to usne is rahasya k pata lagane ka man hi man sankalp liya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned

Lajabab update bhai... Shayad kahani ek nayi suriluaat kar rhi hai... Jo ki behad umda hai. Naina ke dil me karan aur jyoti ke prati nafrat usse jaruur kuchh galat kaam karvayegi bhabhishya me. ..
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Ab aasha ke wapas aa jane ke kaaran karan aur jyoti ki zindagi me kuchh khushhaali aayi bhi to sathh me ek chhoti bahan bhi jo usn dono se beinteha nafrat karti hai...
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Kahani ka lay banaye rakhyiga dost,

 

[Ashwathama]

Update no :- 240
Dopahar ka samay tha , karan office kisi kam se gaya hua tha , kyunki aaj workload kuch jyada tha or ridhima se use handle kerna mushkil ho raha tha.

Or yaha Ghar m sab apne apne room m the or jyoti bhi kavya k sath uske room m mojud thi.

Tabhi koi dhire dhire chupke chupke karan or jyoti k kamre ki or badh raha tha , aaiye dekhte h wo kon tha.

Are ye to naina thi , jiske iraade kuch sahi ni lag rahe the.

Naina dhire se unke kamre m enter hoti h , apni jhuti nafrat k kaaran aaj wo pahali baar unke kamre m aayi thi wo bhi choro ki tarah .

Naina kamre ko dekhte hue :- oh to ye h un dono kamine ka room , dikhne m to thik thak hi h .

Fir kuch der room ko ache se dekhne k baad , uske dimag m ek baat aayi.

Naina :- na jane kyu mujhe kuch to gadbad lagti h in dono bhai bahan k bich, meri 6th sense baar baar mujhse kahati h ki ho n ho kuch to h jo in dono ne sabse chupaya hua h , kyunki ye dono itne bade ho jane k bavjood bhi aajtak ek hi room share kerte h , ho na ho kuch to raaz h or ager ye raaz mujhe pata chal jaye to ho sakta h mere badle lene ka kaam asaan ho jaye.

Ye sochte hue naina ek baar bahar ki or dekh kamre ki talashi lene lagti h , per wo kaha janti thi ki dandnayak ka bhed pana itna aassan ni h.

Wo kabhi karan ki book shelves ko check keri to kabhi uski almira ko per uske hath kuch ni lagta.

Naina chidte hue :- aahhhh , yaha to kuch hath abhi tak kuch ni laga, lekin yaha jayada der rukna bhi sahi ni h , kyunki kabhi bhi koi bhi yaha aasakta h.

Ye soch wo waha se nikalne ko hoti tabhi uski najar karan or jyoti ki ek pyari si tasveer per padti h , jisme karan niche betha tha or piche se jyoti karan k gale m bahe dale hue thi.

Jise dekh naina ki ankhe gusse se laal hone lagi , specially jyoti ko dekh ker to uski ankhe bhayank laal ho chuki thi.

Naina :- kamini jyoti bas kuch samay or tera to m wo haal karungi ki jiski tu kalpana tak na ker sakti.

Ye kya samar ki hatya to karan ne ki thi , to jyoti se itni bhayanak nafrat naina k dil m kyuu thi , kya Jyoti ka karan ka paksh lene k kaaran hi ya koi or rahasya tha .

Or karan ki tasveer ko bhi lanat ki drishti se dekhte hue use kuch is tarah dhakel deti h halke se jese karan ko thappad mara ho , jise wo thodi tedi ho jati h.

Lekin tabhi karan k kamre m kuch esa hua jispe naina ki najar ni gayi , naina k thik piche wali diwar tasveer k hilne k sath hi thodi si sarak gayi or ek rasta najar aane laha, jese waha koi door ho .

Jiske uper abhi tak naina ki najar ni padhi thi , lekin wo bas us taraf ghumne hi wali thi ki tabhi sonam ki aawaz use room k bahar se aati h , jisse naina chowk jati h or us tasveer ko thik ker deti h to wo door bhi band ho jata h or wo jaldi se room ki halat pahale jese ker deti h.

Tabhi Sonam bhi waha aapahunchi or Naina se boli.

Sonam :- are naina tum yaha kya ker rahi ho.

Naina :- kuch ni sona di , m to aapko hi dhund rahi thi , wo admision form k liye chalna tha naa.

Sonam :- are m to apne room m hi thi , chal koi naa abhi form next week se niklenge to tab apn admis k liye chalenge.

Fir naina sonam ko baato m laga uske sath hi waha se nikal leti h .

Naina man me :- hashhh , bach gayi , koi baat ni naina raz ka to m pata laga k hi rahungi.

Wahi dusri or.

Location :- karan office

Karan or ridhima ne sara kam finish ker liya tha , or ab wo lage hue the , asha k office ko sajane m kyunki kal itne saalo baad asha office m aane wali thi.

karan koi bhi kami ni chahta tha , isliye wo khud Ridhima k sath mil ker sare bandobast m laga hua tha, or jab kaam finish hua tab wo dono bethe hi the ki tab ridhima boli.

Ridhima :- bhai tum bhua ko kab ghar p leke aarahe ho ,papa ki bahut icha ho rahi h bhua se milne ki itne salo baad jabse unhe pata chala bhua k jivit hone ka to wo khushi se fule ni sama rahe roj yaha aane ki jid kerte h milne ki, tum hi batao esi tabiyat k sath m unhe kese aane du yaha.

Karan :- apka bhai apna vada bhula ni h di , promise k hisab se kal na keval mummy m or Jyoti na keval office m aayenge , balki raat ka dinner hum mamaji k sath hi karenge.

Ridhima :- sachi ,

Karan :- muchi didu.

Tabhi karan ko kuch ahasaas hota h jisse wo kuch pareshan ho jata h , per wo apne chahre p pareshani aane ni deta ridhima k samne .

Karan :- acha di ab m chalta hu , mujhe kuch jaruri kaam yaad aagaya or fir ab shivani ko school se lene bhi to jana h.

Ye bol karan waha se nikal k shivani ko school se pick kerte hue wo ghar pahuncha.

Or turant jaker apne room ko ache se check kerta h or kuch der baad jab use tasali hui to wo chen ki saaas lete hue bed p beth jata h.

Tabhi jyoti bhi room m enter hoti h or apne hatho m liye hue glass ko karan ko deti h .

Pani pine k baad karan jyoti k god m sir rakh ker let jata h or jyoti uska sir dabane lagti h.

Karan :- gudiya mane jo mahasus kiya wo tumne bhi kiya .

Jyoti :- ha bhai mane bhi wahi mahasus kiya or m turant ahasas hote hi room m aayi bhi per mujhe to sab normal hi mila yaha.

Karan :- per wo ahsaas ko hum apna waham bhi to ni man sakte na gudiya , kyunki ye baat tum bhi janti ho na ki kya ho sakta h is ahasas m chupi chetawani ka anzaam , koi n koi jarur humare room m aaya tha or yaha chedkhani ki

Jyoti pyaar se :- shant ho jaiye bhai , ese bhi to ho sakta h ki choti maa ya mummy aayi or safayi kerte unhone kuch saman idher udher ker diya ho , wo bas usika ahasas ho.

Karan ko jyoti ki baat sahi lagti h, or thake hone ki vajah se wo us baat p jyada dhyan ni deta or so jata h.

Time raat - 11.30

Location :- karan k shahar ki ek sunsan road

Raat ka samay tha or ek aadmi jo thota nashe m tha us road se ja raha tha , tabhi road k kinare ek ladki use hath dikha ker rukne ka ishara kerti h.

Jise se dekh uske ander ki tharak jag jati h or wo turant gadi rokta h or gadi m use bitha leta h.

Gadi m bethne k baad ladki sirf itna hi bolti h ki usko uske ghar chod de wo , wo bhi jitna jaldi ho sake

Ladka sochta h ki ladki shayad sharma rahi h , or wo chal pada ladki k bataye hue raste p chal pada or ladki k bataye hue raste p .


Or bich bich m wo admi ladki ko touch kerne ki koshis kerta h , lekin ladki baar bar use khud ko chume ss rok rahi thi.

Or kuch der m hi wo us ladki k bataye pate p pahunch jate h per wo ghar to ek dam andhere se ghup tha .

Admi tharakipan dikhate :- ye tumhara ghar h , yaha to light hi ni h , vese chaho to janeman mere ghar aasakti ho .

Ladki :- ni shukriya .

Ye bol wo jane lagi , lekin tavhi us admi ka hath pakad pakad liya or bola.

Admi :- are janeman , itni bhi jaldi kya h .

Or ye harkat uske jindgi ki akhri galti sabit hui , kyunki jese hi usne ladki ka hath pakda to ek bhayanak dahad use bahar se sunayi di or jise sun wo dar k baahar dekhta h to kuch ni dikhayi deta or jese hi wo wapas ghuma to ladki to gayab thi lekin usne jese hi rear view camera m dekha to uski fat k hath m agayi kyunki waha shetan betha tha, piche wali seat pe

Shetan :- teri ye majal tune use chua , tune use ni apni mot ko chua h .

Ye bolne k sath hi us shetan ne us admi k uper tut pada.

Or agle din police ko use us jagah per hi us admi ki lash car m mili jaha se usne ladki ko recieve kiya tha.

Back to the karan house

Us aadmi ki news akhbaar m chapi thi , jise naina pad rahi thi or ye koi pahali vardaat ni thi , jab us area m lash mili ho , is kaaran shahar m khof fel gaya tha.

Naina ne jab aaj fir ye news padhi to usne is rahasya k pata lagane ka man hi man sankalp liya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned

Acchi suruat thi haary bhai, Bas nivedan hai ki update dene ki gati badhaye....
Dhanyabaad

 

[Ashwathama]

Friends multiverse wala angel pura hata chuka hu to usse jude sabhi characters or stories bhi ab khatam ho chuki h , bas aap ek suggestion dijiye Zoya wala story arc rakhu ya wo bhi hata du , kyunki wo ek dark part hoga karan ki life ka ab tak sabse jyada

Zoya bala story aarc se hame shayad karan aur jyoti ke past ke baare me pata chalega, uske college laife ke baare me pata chalega jo ki aur bhi jyada interesting rahega bhai... Baaki aap khud ek daksh lekhak hai jo ki itni sundar rachna hamlogo ke saamne prastut kiye,
Par ek readers ke taur par mai zoya arc ko padhne ki chah rakhunga.
धन्यवाद

 

[The king]

Update no :- 240
Dopahar ka samay tha , karan office kisi kam se gaya hua tha , kyunki aaj workload kuch jyada tha or ridhima se use handle kerna mushkil ho raha tha.

Or yaha Ghar m sab apne apne room m the or jyoti bhi kavya k sath uske room m mojud thi.

Tabhi koi dhire dhire chupke chupke karan or jyoti k kamre ki or badh raha tha , aaiye dekhte h wo kon tha.

Are ye to naina thi , jiske iraade kuch sahi ni lag rahe the.

Naina dhire se unke kamre m enter hoti h , apni jhuti nafrat k kaaran aaj wo pahali baar unke kamre m aayi thi wo bhi choro ki tarah .

Naina kamre ko dekhte hue :- oh to ye h un dono kamine ka room , dikhne m to thik thak hi h .

Fir kuch der room ko ache se dekhne k baad , uske dimag m ek baat aayi.

Naina :- na jane kyu mujhe kuch to gadbad lagti h in dono bhai bahan k bich, meri 6th sense baar baar mujhse kahati h ki ho n ho kuch to h jo in dono ne sabse chupaya hua h , kyunki ye dono itne bade ho jane k bavjood bhi aajtak ek hi room share kerte h , ho na ho kuch to raaz h or ager ye raaz mujhe pata chal jaye to ho sakta h mere badle lene ka kaam asaan ho jaye.

Ye sochte hue naina ek baar bahar ki or dekh kamre ki talashi lene lagti h , per wo kaha janti thi ki dandnayak ka bhed pana itna aassan ni h.

Wo kabhi karan ki book shelves ko check keri to kabhi uski almira ko per uske hath kuch ni lagta.

Naina chidte hue :- aahhhh , yaha to kuch hath abhi tak kuch ni laga, lekin yaha jayada der rukna bhi sahi ni h , kyunki kabhi bhi koi bhi yaha aasakta h.

Ye soch wo waha se nikalne ko hoti tabhi uski najar karan or jyoti ki ek pyari si tasveer per padti h , jisme karan niche betha tha or piche se jyoti karan k gale m bahe dale hue thi.

Jise dekh naina ki ankhe gusse se laal hone lagi , specially jyoti ko dekh ker to uski ankhe bhayank laal ho chuki thi.

Naina :- kamini jyoti bas kuch samay or tera to m wo haal karungi ki jiski tu kalpana tak na ker sakti.

Ye kya samar ki hatya to karan ne ki thi , to jyoti se itni bhayanak nafrat naina k dil m kyuu thi , kya Jyoti ka karan ka paksh lene k kaaran hi ya koi or rahasya tha .

Or karan ki tasveer ko bhi lanat ki drishti se dekhte hue use kuch is tarah dhakel deti h halke se jese karan ko thappad mara ho , jise wo thodi tedi ho jati h.

Lekin tabhi karan k kamre m kuch esa hua jispe naina ki najar ni gayi , naina k thik piche wali diwar tasveer k hilne k sath hi thodi si sarak gayi or ek rasta najar aane laha, jese waha koi door ho .

Jiske uper abhi tak naina ki najar ni padhi thi , lekin wo bas us taraf ghumne hi wali thi ki tabhi sonam ki aawaz use room k bahar se aati h , jisse naina chowk jati h or us tasveer ko thik ker deti h to wo door bhi band ho jata h or wo jaldi se room ki halat pahale jese ker deti h.

Tabhi Sonam bhi waha aapahunchi or Naina se boli.

Sonam :- are naina tum yaha kya ker rahi ho.

Naina :- kuch ni sona di , m to aapko hi dhund rahi thi , wo admision form k liye chalna tha naa.

Sonam :- are m to apne room m hi thi , chal koi naa abhi form next week se niklenge to tab apn admis k liye chalenge.

Fir naina sonam ko baato m laga uske sath hi waha se nikal leti h .

Naina man me :- hashhh , bach gayi , koi baat ni naina raz ka to m pata laga k hi rahungi.

Wahi dusri or.

Location :- karan office

Karan or ridhima ne sara kam finish ker liya tha , or ab wo lage hue the , asha k office ko sajane m kyunki kal itne saalo baad asha office m aane wali thi.

karan koi bhi kami ni chahta tha , isliye wo khud Ridhima k sath mil ker sare bandobast m laga hua tha, or jab kaam finish hua tab wo dono bethe hi the ki tab ridhima boli.

Ridhima :- bhai tum bhua ko kab ghar p leke aarahe ho ,papa ki bahut icha ho rahi h bhua se milne ki itne salo baad jabse unhe pata chala bhua k jivit hone ka to wo khushi se fule ni sama rahe roj yaha aane ki jid kerte h milne ki, tum hi batao esi tabiyat k sath m unhe kese aane du yaha.

Karan :- apka bhai apna vada bhula ni h di , promise k hisab se kal na keval mummy m or Jyoti na keval office m aayenge , balki raat ka dinner hum mamaji k sath hi karenge.

Ridhima :- sachi ,

Karan :- muchi didu.

Tabhi karan ko kuch ahasaas hota h jisse wo kuch pareshan ho jata h , per wo apne chahre p pareshani aane ni deta ridhima k samne .

Karan :- acha di ab m chalta hu , mujhe kuch jaruri kaam yaad aagaya or fir ab shivani ko school se lene bhi to jana h.

Ye bol karan waha se nikal k shivani ko school se pick kerte hue wo ghar pahuncha.

Or turant jaker apne room ko ache se check kerta h or kuch der baad jab use tasali hui to wo chen ki saaas lete hue bed p beth jata h.

Tabhi jyoti bhi room m enter hoti h or apne hatho m liye hue glass ko karan ko deti h .

Pani pine k baad karan jyoti k god m sir rakh ker let jata h or jyoti uska sir dabane lagti h.

Karan :- gudiya mane jo mahasus kiya wo tumne bhi kiya .

Jyoti :- ha bhai mane bhi wahi mahasus kiya or m turant ahasas hote hi room m aayi bhi per mujhe to sab normal hi mila yaha.

Karan :- per wo ahsaas ko hum apna waham bhi to ni man sakte na gudiya , kyunki ye baat tum bhi janti ho na ki kya ho sakta h is ahasas m chupi chetawani ka anzaam , koi n koi jarur humare room m aaya tha or yaha chedkhani ki

Jyoti pyaar se :- shant ho jaiye bhai , ese bhi to ho sakta h ki choti maa ya mummy aayi or safayi kerte unhone kuch saman idher udher ker diya ho , wo bas usika ahasas ho.

Karan ko jyoti ki baat sahi lagti h, or thake hone ki vajah se wo us baat p jyada dhyan ni deta or so jata h.

Time raat - 11.30

Location :- karan k shahar ki ek sunsan road

Raat ka samay tha or ek aadmi jo thota nashe m tha us road se ja raha tha , tabhi road k kinare ek ladki use hath dikha ker rukne ka ishara kerti h.

Jise se dekh uske ander ki tharak jag jati h or wo turant gadi rokta h or gadi m use bitha leta h.

Gadi m bethne k baad ladki sirf itna hi bolti h ki usko uske ghar chod de wo , wo bhi jitna jaldi ho sake

Ladka sochta h ki ladki shayad sharma rahi h , or wo chal pada ladki k bataye hue raste p chal pada or ladki k bataye hue raste p .


Or bich bich m wo admi ladki ko touch kerne ki koshis kerta h , lekin ladki baar bar use khud ko chume ss rok rahi thi.

Or kuch der m hi wo us ladki k bataye pate p pahunch jate h per wo ghar to ek dam andhere se ghup tha .

Admi tharakipan dikhate :- ye tumhara ghar h , yaha to light hi ni h , vese chaho to janeman mere ghar aasakti ho .

Ladki :- ni shukriya .

Ye bol wo jane lagi , lekin tavhi us admi ka hath pakad pakad liya or bola.

Admi :- are janeman , itni bhi jaldi kya h .

Or ye harkat uske jindgi ki akhri galti sabit hui , kyunki jese hi usne ladki ka hath pakda to ek bhayanak dahad use bahar se sunayi di or jise sun wo dar k baahar dekhta h to kuch ni dikhayi deta or jese hi wo wapas ghuma to ladki to gayab thi lekin usne jese hi rear view camera m dekha to uski fat k hath m agayi kyunki waha shetan betha tha, piche wali seat pe

Shetan :- teri ye majal tune use chua , tune use ni apni mot ko chua h .

Ye bolne k sath hi us shetan ne us admi k uper tut pada.

Or agle din police ko use us jagah per hi us admi ki lash car m mili jaha se usne ladki ko recieve kiya tha.

Back to the karan house

Us aadmi ki news akhbaar m chapi thi , jise naina pad rahi thi or ye koi pahali vardaat ni thi , jab us area m lash mili ho , is kaaran shahar m khof fel gaya tha.

Naina ne jab aaj fir ye news padhi to usne is rahasya k pata lagane ka man hi man sankalp liya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned

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