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indra ko lagbhag harane hetu apna ek shaktishali ashtra nikalte hue .


Lobhasur :- bas bahut ho gaya , ab waqt aagaya h khel ko khatam kerne ka.


Abhi ye bol lobhasur ne apna ashtra chala deta h or ashtra bas Devraj se takrane hi wala tha ki usse pahale ashtra or Devraj k bich ek jordar hua jiske sath udi dhul ne charo or ek baar andhkar sa ker dala , jiske kaaran kisi ko kuch ni dikhayi de raha tha .


Or jab wo dhua hata to samne ka najar dekh lobhasur heran ho gaya kyu ki uska shaktishali ashtra ko samne mojud ladki ne raste m hi rok apne hatho m ese pakad liya jese koi bacha koi ball catch kerta h.


Ladki us ashtra ko todte hue :- khel to abhi shuru hua h Munna.


Lobhasur :- e dusahasi teri ye majal ki tune mera ashtra toda , esa ker tune apni mrityu ko lalkara h.


Parantu isse pahale ki m tera ant keru , usse purv m janana chahunga ki kon ho tum or kis kul se h tu , kon h tera pita , dikhne or baat k andaaz se to kisi raj kul se kisi bade yodha ki beti najar aati ho,


Ladki haste hue :- tu ek tuch rakshas mera vadh karega , mere kul or pita ka naam sunega to yahi dhoti gili ker bethega.


Janna chahta h to sun , m hu tritya or brahamrakdhaso ki rani preety , or m usi mahan samraat ki putri hu , jiske aage tum jese asur sir jhukaye khade rahte the.


Preety ka parichay pa ker ek baar to lobhasur ek baar to ghabra gaya , kyunki samraat or Vrushali dono hi mahashakti the or preety ne un dono ko Haraker unki shakti hasil ki thi.


Wahi dusri or


Shitasur ne jese hi agni Dev per prahar kerne ki koshis ki thi usi samay ek tir uper aasaman ki or se aaker dhamake k sath uske hatho se takrata h or uski gada dur jaker girti h.


Or ye prahar kisi or ne ni kaya ne kiya tha, jo pas k ek ped p khadhi thi , or wo turant ped se kud agni Dev or shitasur k bich m aagayi.


Shitasur :- e ladki kon h tu, or tera itna dusahahas ki tune mujhpe shitasur p vaar kiya, kher chodo ladki ho isliye bhul samjh ker ek avsar de raha hu , bhag jao yaha se.


Kaya :- avsar to m tumhe deti hu murkh asur ager prano ki raksha chahte ho to abhi apne bhaiyo or sena ko leker nikal jao , kahi esa na ho ki tumhare bade bhai vritrasur ko ek sath apne 3 no bhaiyo ko kandha dena pade.


Shitasur kaya k swar sun k gusse se tar batar ho gaya or chilaya or apne hathiyar le saj ho gaya kaya se yudh kerne .


Shitasur dhanush leker :- murkh ladki mane to avsar diya tha tujhe apne prano ki raksha ka lekin tu ni mani , ab mrityu k liye saj hoja.


Kaya :- kon kiski mrityu banega wo to samay hi batayega shitasur,tum apne muh ki jagah apne shastra chalao , kyu ki ye yidhbhumi hai yaha bate muh se ni shastro se ki jati h.


Ye bol kaya ne shitasur per ek or tir choda , lekin shitasur bhi teyar tha usne bhi apne dhanush se ban chala kaya k tir ko roka or start hua mahasangram.


Wahi dusri or


Preety or lobashur k bich bhi talvar yudh start ho gaya tha , lobhasur bhi ek Kushal talvar baaz tha.


Dono ki talvare aapas m takra rahi to mano utpan hui dhavani bijli si garjana so pratit hoti.


Lobhasur preety k pero per vaar kerta h lekin preety uchal ker use Dodge kerte hue boli.


Preety :- chal achi thi , per afsos ager mujhe harana h to kuch naya kerna hoga.


Lobhasur preety ki talvar p jor dete hue :- Gaddar ladki kesi asur h tu , ek asur ho ker asur ho ker asuro k khilaf lad rahi h wo bhi in devo ki raksha k liya , kesi tritiya h tu..


Preety lobhasur k pet m kohni mar use piche dhakel :- ha m asur ni hu , ni hu tum jesi asur jo shakti k ahankaar m nirbalo ko satate h or adharm felate h.


Are m to wo asur hu , jinke aadarsh bhakt Prahalad or raja bali jese mahan aatmaye h jinhone dharm ka sath deker asuro ka nam roshan kiya tum jese ni jinhone asuro ka naam ek baar fir kalankit ker dala or iski saja tumhe ye tritiya ki rani avashya degi.


Ye bol badi tezi k sath preety ne lobhasur per vaar kerna shuru ker diya , preety ki brahamrakshas or trityao ki mix shakti k aage lobhasur tik ni pa raha tha.


Tab usne jab ye paya ki bal se uska kam ni banne wala to usne chal ka sahara shuru kiya .


Lobhasur :- preety ye insano k sath deker tumhe bhala kya milega, hum asuro ka sath do , bhaiya vritrasur tumhe is sansaar ki sabse dhanvan ladki bana denge iske badle me, pure sansaar m tumse ameer koi na hoga.


Lobhasur jese jese ye bol raha tha , uske sath sath hi uska maya ka prabhav bhi preety p padne laga.


Lobhasur :- socho preety. Tumhare pass sone chandi hire jwaharat sab honge, jo chahogi wo milega tumhe.


Lobhasur ki maya ka asar dhire dhire dhire Preety p ho raha tha , uski ankho k samne ek esa bharamjal (illustion) prakat hua mano uske aas pas apaar dhan dolat jama h , jise dekh uski khushi thikana na raha, wo un gahano ko utha utha k pahane lagi or sath m unko niharne lagi


Lekin us illusion se hat ker sach to ye tha ki jese jese un gahano k moh m wo pad un sone ko chu rahi thi , ya unhe pahan rahi thi , wese wese asal m wo lobhasur k mayavi pash m bandh rahu thi.


Jesa ki abhi tak k safar m AAPNE preety ko jana hoga uss hisab se aapko bhi herani ho rahi hogi ki preety kab se itni lalchi ho gayi .


Per ye preety ka lalach ni balki lobhasur ki maya thi , jo apne naam k anukul kisi k ander bhi maya ka sanchar ker use bharast ker deti thi.


Wahi dusri or


Shitasur or kaya ka bhi yudh bhi kafi bhishn chal raha tha dono k kaman se nikle bhishn ashtro ki takrahat se asman se aag baras rahi thi.


Shitasur ne jab dekha ki kaya use barabar takar de rahi h to uske man m vichar aaya..


Shitasur :- kuch to kerna hi padega mujhe , ni to esa hi chalta raha to ye ladki jald hi mujhper bhari padne lagegi.


Tabhi kuch sochker uske chahare pe ek kutil muskaan aagayi tabhi usne apne Dhanush ko uper ki or apni pratyancha khichi , or kuch mantra budbudaya , jiske sath hi ek safed baan pratyancha per pragat hui.


Shitasur teer kaya ki or chodte hue :- ladki ab mere is prahar se bach ker dikha.


Ye bol usne badi hi tezi se wo teer kaya ki or chod diya , us teer ki gati itni tivr thi ki kaya ko koi moka hi ni mila.


Us ek tir ne kayi tiro ka roop le liya or hawa me kaya uper charo or ghumne lage , jiske sath hi un tiro se baraf ki havaye nikalne lagi or un hawao ne bawander ka roop le liya, jisse kaya us bawandar se charo or ghir gayi or kuch hi palo m wo baraf m jam gayi.


Shitasur :- haha dekh liya ladki shitasur se bhidne ka anzaam , ab meri Shital maya tumhe shigra hi samaapt ker degi.


Ye bol wo zor zor se hasne laga.


Wahi dusri or


Kaya or preety ka halat dekh Sonam chintit ho uthi or boli.


Sonam :- ye kya di , preety bhabbhi or kaya didi ko to in dushto ne apni maya me faas liya h , ab hum kya karenge .


Jyoti aaj pahali baar khud ko itna asahay feel ker rahi thi.


Jyoti hath jod prathna kerte hue :- hey bhole nath, hey durga , ab aap hi humari raksha ker sakti ho ma , apni beti ki raksha kero maa , raksha kero.


Jyoti jese hi prathna kerti h to uske sharir chamakne laga or usse do shaktipunj nikal ker ranbhumi ki or jane lage.


Ek shaktipunj jaker preety me sama gaya or lobhfas me fasi preety ko ek aawaz sunayi dene lagi.


Awaz :- bhabhi .


Preety :- jyoti di...


Ji ha ye aawaz jyoti ki hi thi, jo uske anterman se nikli thi .


Jyoti :- bhabhi ye aP kya ker rahi h , is dusht asur ki chal m kese fas sakte h aP , is lobhasur ne aapper apni maya ka upyog kiya h , aap ko shighr hi is maya ko todna hoga, bhabhi dikhana hoga is asur ko ki meri bhabhi kya chij h.


Jyoti ki aawaz se preety ko hosh aajata h or use abhas ho jata h ki use shighr hi is maya ko todna hoga.


Tabhi usne ankh band ki or apne tez ko bahar nikalna aarambh ker diya or preety k tez k asar k sath hi lobhasur ka mayavi pash ek vishfot k sath nasht hoga


Lobhasur heran hoker :- ni ye ni ho sakta , meri maya ko todna asambhav h...


Preety :- beta kya kya sambhav h abhi tak tumne dekha hi kaha h.


Ye bol preety ek baar firse lobhasur k uper ranchandi ban tut padi.


Wahi dusri or


Wo dusra shaktipunj us baraf k pahad m enter ker kaya k tan pe sama gaya.


Or uske sath hi ek vishfot us baraf k pahad m hua or kaya aajad ho gayi .


Or ab wo apne asli roop yani vampire roop m thi , lekin us shaktipunj ne kaya ko or bhi jyada shaktishali bana dala tha or uske vastra bhi ab purn roop se badal chuke the jiska praman tha uski pith per lage naye pankh jo bahut Vishal the , jo praman the ki ab kaya vampires ki sabse highest rank p pahunch chuke the jo thi vampire angel , jo sabhi vampire ki queen hoti h.

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Shitasur :- asambhav itni prachand shitalata se bachna to asambhav tha .


Kaya :- murkh asur tum bhul gaye , vampire to khud thande ilako k nivasi hote h , sardi unka kuch ni bigad sakti .


Or jinke sath maa Durga ka ashirwad ho unka to sansar ki koi shakti kuch ni bigad sakte .


(Kaya ne esa isliye kaha tha kyunki wo jab barf me kaid thi , tab thand to uska kuch ni bigad pa rahi thi , lekin shitasur ki maya ko wo tod hi ni pa rahi thi.


Tabhi waha ek prakashpunj aapahunch or usne ma bhawani ka roop dharan ker liya.


Kaya us Akriti ko dekh khush or heran ho bol uthi :- maaa ! Pranam maa.


Maa :- putri kaya hum tumhari veerta or dharm ki prati nishta se ati prasan h putri , isliye hum swayam tumhe wo shakti pradan kerne aayi h , jiski tum na keval adhikarini ho apitu is mahayudh m dharm ki vijay k liye tumhe inki avshayakta bhi h..


Ye bol ma ne apna ek hath varmudra me lati or jiske sath hi unke hath se ek roshni nikal kaya m sama jati h or uske sath hi kaya m shakti ka sanchar hone laga.


Or aage jo hua wo aapke samne h .)


Kaya itna bol apne pankho ko fela ek hi bar me tez jhatke k sath aasman m pahunch gayi or uske sath hi usne apna hath uper kiya jiske sath hi ek Dhanush uske hath me aGaya or us Dhanush se jo usne choda wo ek sath hi hazaro m tabdil ho danav sena pe agni varsha kerne lagi.


Dhire dhire kaya or preety ne adhi se jyada asur sena ka sanghar ker dala or uske sath hi ab lobhasur or shitasur bhi ab thK chuke the, wo buri tarah ghayal bhi ho gaye the or unkr sabhi shastra or astra bhi kat chuke the.


Ye sab dekh jyoti or sonam khush bhi hui or heran bhi


Wahi dusri or


Rohan ye sab seen dekh ker heran tha


Rohan :- bhai ye sab kesi maya h , abhi tak jo bazi harti hui hume nazar aarahi thi , wo achanak palat kese gayi or ye kaya k roop ye sab kese


Karan :- tumhare is sawal ka bhi wahi jwab h mere dost jo m ab tak kah raha hu jyoti.


Rohan :- jyoti ?


Karan :- ha jyoti , vritrasur or uske bhaiyo ne nari shakti ko kamzor samjh apne mange gaye vardan m yahi manga tha n k koi purush na kar sake .


To aaj nari shakti ki mahima jyoti ne anjane m hi sahi lekin sansaar ko dikha diya h , ki nari yadi karuna or mamta ki murat h to shakti swarupa bhi h.


Jese Jab preety bhabhi lobhasur ki maya m fasi tab jyoti ne hi unki shakti ban unhe us maya se bahar nikala.


Jese sakhi kaya ko apni bhakti ki shakti se usko uske sampoorn shakti pradan kerwayi .


Aur ab intezar h to us samay ka jab jyoti ko apni vastvik shkto ka aabhas hoga or ant hoga vritrasur ka.


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kisi bhi samay kaya or preety un dono ka ant kerne hi wali thi.


Apne bhaiyo ki halat dekh 3sra bhai yani ki bhandasur jo itni der se yudh dekh raha tha ab unhe chinta satane lagi.


Bhandasur :- ager esa hi chalta raha ho to ye dusht ladkiya mere bhaiyo ko mar dalegi , lagta h ab mera ranbhumi m jane ka samay aagaya h.


Ye bol usne apna Dhanush uthaya or ek shakti baan jiska prahar devo k liye bhi Ghatak sidh ho sakta tha , wo kaman per sandhan ker nishana ker preety ki or chod dala .


Per isse pahale ki wo baan preety tak pahunch pata usse pahale hi kisi ne wo baan kisi ne bich me rok liya or apni muthi m bhich tinke ki bhanti tod dala


Bhandasur ne jab us vyakti ko dekha to uski herani ki sima na rahi , kyunki wo shaks koi sadharan manushya ya dev ni tha , uska roop vikral tha or usne bhaghmber pahana hua tha , or uski height 10 foot se bhi jyada hogi.


Bhandasur :- mere baan ko rokne wale dusht kon ho tum .


Vyakti :- tum jese dushto ka ant kerne k liye , bhagwan rudra k param bhakt dandnyak ki rachna hu m , veer rudra hu m..


Ye bol ek bhayank singh garjna ki us vyakti ne.


Ji ha dosto ye wahi veer rudra tha , jise karn ne samadhi jane se purb niyukt kiya tha , samay aane per jyoti or sab devo ki sahayta k liye.


Bhandasur :- tu chahe koi bhi ho , lekin tu ab mere hatho ni bachega.


Ye bol wo apne rath se uter ke aagaya or bina kisi hathiyar k hi rudrveer se malyudh kerne bhid gaya.


Wo malyudh kafi bhishn hone laga bada shighr hi kyunki bhandasur bhi kam shaktishali na tha usme 100 hathiyo thi janm se hi.


Dono hi ek dusre per mukke or late barsa rahe the , kabhi veer rudra bhandasur pe mukke barsata to kabhi bhandasur veer rudra per.


Yudh kerte hue bhandasur ka dhayan vese bhi khud yudh se jyada apne bhaio k pas pahuchne per tha .


Kyumki jaha ek taraf preety se apni talvar katwa lobhasur preety se buri tarah pit raha tha, muke or ghuso se.


Wahi dusri or kaya ne bhi shitasur ka dhanush kat diya tha or sath hi uske sarthi samet uska rath bhi nasht ho chuka tha


Shitasur ko ab apna kaal najjar araha tha , jo ghamandi shitasur or uske bhai nari ko aaj tak apne pao ki juti samjhte aaye the , aaj unhi nari k samne apne prano ki bhik mangne ki nobat aan padi thi usper.


Or usne esa hi kiya.


Shitasur kaya se :- devi , mujhe shama ker do devi , m vada kerta hu ki m yaha se sab chod patal lot jaunga or kabhi wapas apni shakal ni dikhaunga.


Kaya :- shama or tujh jese hevan ko jinhone humesha nari ko apne pao ki juti samjha , jisne na jane kitni abla asur ho ya insani nari ho , unki ijat luti , kadapi ni shitasur , is sansaar m har apradh ki shama mil sakti h , lekin nari ki ijjat p hath dalne wale ko to bhagwan bhi shama ni kerta , m to fir bhi ek vampire hu.


Ye bol kaya ne aasman se ek tir choda shitasur per jisse uska ek hath kat ker gir gaya.


Jis kaaran uska dard se bura haal ho gaya or apne bhai ka ye haal dekh bhandasur chila utha.


Bhandasur :- bhaiiii shit niiiii....


Ye bol wo apne bhai k pas jane ki koshish kerta h lekin usse pahale hi veer rudra use piche se pith se pakad ker use utha k dur fek dala .


Veer rudra :- apne bhai ki chinta chod murkh , pahale khud ki to raksha ker le


Bhandasur :- kaminr aaj tum sab me se kisi ko jivit ni chodunga m.


Ye bol bhanda sur fir se bhid gaya veer rudra se.


Wahi dusri or preety ne bhi ab khel samapt kerne ka nirnay leliya.


Preety :- bas ,ab bahut hua khel apne ant ko sajj ho ja dusht.


Ye bol preety 4 kadam piche leti h or fir bhag k ek uchi chalang k sath lobhasur ka sir dhad se alag ker deti h.


Or sath m usi samay kaya bhi apne ban se shitasur k dono hath katne k baad usko yamlok ki yatra p pahuncha deti h.


Apne dono bhaiyo ki mrityu dekh bhandasur buri tarah bhokla gaya tha.


Bhandasur :- niiiiii.......


Pahale to wo kafi der rota raha lekin baad m gusse se aag babula ho chilaya.


Bhandasur :- bas bahut hua tum sab dusht sab jis kaaran se hum se yudh ker rahe ho , or jis kaaran aj mere bhaiyo ka vadh tum ne kiya h naa , pratishodh swarup m us kaaran , is kutil ladki ka hi ant ker dunga.


Ye bat bhandasur ne jyoti ki or ishara kerte hue kahi.


Ye bol usne apne Dhanush ko jaldi se jaker rath se uthaya or us ashtra ka avahan kiya jiska naam sun sab dar gaye or chintit ho uthe.


Bhandasur :- bahut guman h na tumhe apni shaktio ka dushto ab dekhta hu kese raksha kerte ho tum is ladki mere is brahmastra se.


Ji ha Dosto bhandasur ne atyant vinashkari brahamaStra ka avahan kiya tha jo usne kathor tap se Praapt kiya tha


Usne wo turant jyoti ki or chod diya , jiske kaaran sab bhaybhit ho uthe ki ab kya hoga.


Lekin brahamastra jyoti k jese hi karib pahuncha to samne ka najara dekh sabki ankhe chodi hi gayi , brahamastra jyoti k samksh aa apne aap hi ruk gaya.


Jisse jyoti bhi ek baar chonk gayi , lekin agle hi pal unhe wo pranam kerti h or sath m brahhmdev ki stuti bhi kerti h .


Lekin sabse herani ki baat to tab hui jab brahamastra ne bhi jyoti k ander se nikle us samay nikal mahatez ko pranam ker swatah hi gayab ho gaya.


Bhandasur :- asambhav ye ni ho sakta koi bhi mahan brahamastra nishfal ni ho sKta.


Veer rudra :- murkh asur jaha bhakti or prem ki shakti or dharm paksh m ho to deviy shakti bhi unka hi sath deti h .


Ab samay aagaya h tujhe bhi tere bhaiyo k pas pahuchane ka.


Ye bolte hue veer rudra buri tarah bhandasur p tut pada or use mar mar k adhmara ker dala.


Ab veer rudra ne jese hi apne antim prahar k liye apni talvar uthayi , tabhi ek jordar prahar aaker use laga or wo bahut dur ja gira or uske sath hi aasman se ek vishfot k sath kuch ranbhumi m enter hua or jab dhua hata to sabhi devo ka bhay se bura haal ho gaya or asuro m khushi ki lahar uth gayi.


Bhandasur bhi khushi se :- bhaiyaa aap aagaye.


Ha dosto apne bhaiyo ki mrityu ka jab vritrasur ko gyaat hua to uski krodh ki sima na rahi or wo usi shan yudh ko saj ho ranbhumi me saj ho aagaya.


Vritrasur bhandassur ko uthate hue :- tum thik to ho na anuj.


Bhandasur rote hue :- bhaiya m to thik hu , per humare bhaiii (siskte hue ) bhaiya kisi ko jinda mat chodna bhaiya kisi ko kat chodna.


Vritrasur nam gusse se bhari ankho se :- esa hi hoga chote.


(Jyoti ki or dekhte hue ) dushta , inke dam per hi tu itni uchal rahi h n kamini , aaj inka ant ker tujhe balo se ghasit ker m apne mahal leker jaunga or apni rakhail banaunga , tab hi kere bhaiyo ki shanti milegi.


Veer rudra gusse se :- vritrasur tera itna dusahas ki tumne inke bare m ese apshabd kahe ab tu jivit ni bachega.


Ye kahate hue veer rudra vritrasur se bhid gaya , lekin adisshakti k vardan ki shakti ka kavach bahut jyada shaktishali tha vritrasur ne badi asani se veer rudra ko ghayal ker prajit ker dala.


Or jyoti ki or bhadne laga tabhi veer rudra ko harta dekh preeety or kaya bhi uske samaksh aapahunchi.


Unhe dekh bhandasur bola :- bhaiya yahi h wo dono kaminiya jinhone humare bhaiyo ka vadh kiya h , inhe chodiyega ni.


Preety :- Kon kise chodega kise ni wo to abhi pata chal jayega dusht.


Ye bol preety or kaya bhi apne ashtra shastro ne se vritrasur per prahar kerne lagi , lekin ye kya unka har ek prahar vritrasur k kawach se takra ess gir rahe the jese mano koi rubber ki ball ho.


Tabhi vritrasur ne apne bade se vajra ko ghuma k preety or kaya p ek jabardast vaar kiya jo itna bhishn tha ki us prahar se dono hi ardh murcha m pahunch gayi.


Vritrasur :- chote in dono ne hi humare bhaiyo ka ant ker hume kalankit kiya h na ab badle ks samay h , ab hum yaha ranbhumi m hi indono ki ijjat lut inhe esa kalankit karenge ki ye khud mrityu ki bhik mangengi


Bhandasur shetani hasi k sath :- hahaha to shubh kam m deri kesi bhaiyaaa.


Ye bol wo dono bhai jese hi hawas bhari najaro k sath un dono k pas pahunche tabhi ek bhayank singh garjana sunayi di or agle hi pal ek jordar shakti prahar undono ko utha k dur fek deta h


Or is humle kerne wale ko jab sab dekhte h to sab chonk jate h kyunki ye prahar kisi or ne ni khud dandnayika jyoti ne kiya tha.


Jyoti jiske kesh hawa me ud rahe the or ankhe khun jesi laal ho gayi thi , wo sher ki tarah dahadti hui ranbhumi me pravesh kerti hui boli.


Jyoti :- bas vritrasur is kukritya k bare m soch ker hi tune paap ka ghada bhar liya h dusht , ab tera ant or koi ni swayam m ho karungi.


Hua darasl ye tha ki apne bhai k ansh per prahar hota dekh jyoti ka krodh jagrit hone laga or jab usne dekha ki vritrasur kya giri hui harkat kerne ja raha h to uske gusse ka jwala mukhi fat gaya or wo yydh bhumi m kid padi.


Vritrasur '- din m khwab dekhna acha ni h ladki , jaha mujhe teri ye gadaar asur sahayika ni kuch bigad saki to tu kis khet ki muli h , tu ni janti to jan le mujhe adishakti ka vardan h mujhe unke alaw or koi ni mar sakta.


Jyoti :- tujhe adishakti ma ka vardan h na dush to le ab tera ant k liye m unka hi avahan kerungi.


Ye bol jyoti ne apni ankhe band ker dali or usike sath hi jyoti k sharir se ek divya prakash nikal charo or felne laga , usko dekh esa pratit ho raha tha ki mano dharti per surya uter aaya ho.


Or dhore dhire ker sabhi devo k ander se ek tez punj nikal us prakash me samamane laga or karan k sharir se bhi esa hi ek punj nikal unme


Us prakash ko dekh karan k chahre pe bhi muskan aGayi or wo apni seat se uth gaya


Or jab wo prakash hata to jyoti ka ek naya roop is sansaar k samaksh aaya jise dekh jaha vritrasur chokne k sath bhaybhit ho utha wahi sabhi devo samet karan bhi unhe hath jod sharadha se pranam kerta h


Kyunki jyoti ka wo roop koi or ni balki sakshat maa adishakti ki prativimb tha , jiske 10 hath the jinme nana prakar k ashtra shastra shushobhit the.


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Jyoti ma adishakti ki aawaz :- nari ko kamzor samjh tune mujhse ye var manga tha na murkh ki tera vadh usi nari k hatho ho jisme meri samast shaktiya ho ke to le mene teri ye icha bhi puri ker daali.


Vritrasur :- ni ye sambhav ni h , ye chal h tera kulta , mujhe bhaybhit kerne ka chal , lekin tu ye sab khel dikha vritrasur ko ni dara sakti , ab dekh vritrasur ki shakti .


Ye bol vritrasur ne jyoti per ek jordar prahar kiya apni gada ko fek lekin jyoti ne bhi apne ek hath m sushobhit gada ko feka jisne ek second m vritrasur ki gada ko tod dala .


Jise dekh vritrasur bhokla gaya or wo apni talvaar leker jyoti ki ir doda , tab jyoti ne bhi apne 2 hath ko chod baki hatho ko gayab ker talvar le dod padi vritrasur se bhidne .


Or shuru hua ek bhayank yudh jisme un dono ki takrane se esi dhawani utpan ho rahi thi jese bijli kadak rahi ho.


Sab devo ki ab jyoti or vritrasur pe hi najar thi or wahi dusri or sonam kaya or preety ka upchar ker rahi thi.


Vahi ye sab najara dekh bhandasur waha se bhagne ko hua lekin veer Rudra ne use rok liya or haste hue bola.


Veer rudra :- are are yuvraj aap kaha chal diye abhi humara yudh shesh h , akhir aapko bhi to apkr bhaio k pas pahuchana h , taki 3no bhsi milker nark m apne bade bhai sahab k agman ki teyari ker sako.


Bhandasur bhokla ker :- chodunga ni tujhe kamine.


Ye bol wo fir se veet rudra se bhid gaya .


Wahi dusri or


Shera ki lagayi hui canon me shitasur or lobhasur k vadh k sath prakat huo energy bhi aaker samahit ho gayi thi or wo 60% charge ho chuki thi.


Shera haste hie :- bas ek vadh or , or fir humne koi ni rok payega.


Wahi ranbhumi m vritrasur ki talvar ko ek jordar prahar k sath kat usne ek jordar laat vritrasur k sine pe mari jisse wo dur ja gira .


Lekin shigr hi wo uth khada hua or tarah tarah k ashtra shastra jyoti per fekne laga.


Lekin jyoti Shighr Hi ne apne Dhanush ka avahan kerti h ek chalang laga ek pratyancha khichti h jisse Dhanush pe ek Divya baan aagaya or use jyoti
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Vahi bhandasur ka bhi ant najdik aagaya tha or veer rudra ne jese hi uska ant kerme apna ghatak prahar kerna chaha to uske man me karn ki aawaz sunayi di.


Karan :- ruk jao veer rudra. , Abhi iska vadh ja samay ni aaya h , esa brahama ji ne mujhe sanesh bheja , ese m tumhe ise pran dan dena hoga.


Veer rudra :- per swami ager mane abhi iska vadh ni kiya to.


Karan '- m janta hu ki tum apmi jagah sahi ho veer rudra , per hum brahmdev ki agya ko tal shrushti k niyam ni tod sakte , lekin ye yudh m dakhal na de iske liye tum ise utha ker antrik si gaharaiyo m fek di , jisse ye marg se bhi hat jaye or iska vadh bhi na ho


Veer rudra :- jo aagya swami , ye bol veer rudra ne bhandasur ne bhandasur ko pero se pakad itni jor se utha ke ghuma ker feka ki wo asman m ja gayab ho gaya.


Wahi dusri or vritrasur ne jab apne sare ashtra shastra vifal hote dekhe to usne apna asli roop yani ek vishal 100 ft uche bhese ka roop dharan ker apne singho ko jyoty ki or ker jordar takkar marne k liye doda


Or jese hi ye drishya kfd ne dekha to unhone sabhi graho ko ishara ker diya or shuru hua vritrasur ka mrityu yog .


Vritrasur ko apni or aata dekh jyoti bhi vishal rup dharan ker uski or dodi or jese hi vritrasur jyoti ki or pahunch usper prahar kerne hus jyoti uchal ker apne per se uske sir ko kuchal dharti per patak deti h or ek jordar garjana k sath apne dado hatho ko prakat kerte hue ek jordar chikh k sath apne hath me mojud trishul ko vritrasur k sine m ghop diya jo is waqt adha bhesa or adha asur rup m mojud tha .


Or jese hi vo trishul uske sine m ghusa to uske muh se bas itna hi nikla.


Vritrasur :- shama kerdena mujhe devi.


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Or ye bol uske oran pakheru ho uthe or jese hi ye hua to devo m khushi ki lahar uth gayi or wo jor shor se jai mata ki or har har mahadev k nare lagane lage.


Lekin jaha sab khush the waha karan ab serious ho gaya tha.


Rohan :- bhai ab tu itna pareshan kyu h, humari gudiya ne akhir wo ker hi dikhaya jiska hume kabse intezaar tha , to ab ye pareshani kesi.


Karan :- ye pareshani aane wali us bhishn samasya ka h bhai , jisko ager mand na roka to sansar m pralay tay h ye bol kuch baat samjhate hue karan ne sirf itna bola.


Karan :- yad rakhna dost jaha sansar ki sari shakti vifal ho jati h waha ek hi shakti kam aati h bhakti ki shakti.


Ye bol karan waha se gayab ho gaya.


Wahi dusri or


Ranbhumi me


Karan ki chinta ka kaaran ab samjh asne laga tha. ,kyumki jyoti ka krodh vritrasur k ant k baad bhi shant na hua tha , jis kaaran wo out of control ho gayi or charo or apne ashtra shastra se tabahi machane lagi.


Devraj use rokne ki koshis kerte hue :- putri jyoti shant ho jao , us dusht ka ant tum ker chuki ho ab apne vastvik swarup m lot aso beti , lot aao.


Sab dev ese hi jyoti ko shant kerne ki koshis kerne m lage hue the or sonam bhi.


Tabhi vaha karan prakat hua , jise dekh sonam bhag k uske pas gayi or boli.


Sonam ghabra gayi :- dekhiye na bhai di ko kya ho gaya h ab aap hi unhe shant ker sakte ho bhai , please kuch kijiye.


Devraj '- ha putra karn putri sonam uchit kah rahi h , is sansar m jyoti ko ager koi shabt ker sakta h to wo keval tum ho putra.


Karn kuch ni bolta or ha m gardan hila jyoti ki or bhada or bola.


Karan :- jyoti meri guduya mujhe garv h tumper , tumne aaj sidh ker diya ki nari shakti ager chahe to kuch asambhav ni , ab apna krodh tyago meri gudiya or aao apne bhaiya k gale ni lagogi.


Lekin ye kya karan ko dekh jyoti shant hone k bajjay or gussa ho gayi or chilayi.


Jyoti :- ni karn aaj m shant ni hone wLi , khasker ki jab tak , jab tak m tumhe dandit na ker du.


Sonam herani se :- di ye aap kya bol rahi ho dand or bhai ko , aakhir kyu unki bhala kya galti h , ya unhone galat kiya.


Jyoti :- inka sabse bada apradh kuch na kerna hi to h Sonam ye chahte to is mahasanghar ko rok sakte the , mujhe jagrit ker per ni inhone vinash ka marg chuna jinke na jane kitne senik aakaran marw , isliye yadi ager is mahavinash ka jimedar vritrasur tha to ye bhi h.


Karan :- ager aapki najar m m vhi apradhi hu devi to mujhe aapka har diya hua dand swikar h .


Ye bol karan jhuk ker hath jod ket beth .


Jyoti '- tumhe bhi vahi dand milega dandnyak jo vritrasur ko mila mrityu dand.


Ye bol vishal jyoti rupi shakti ne karan ko apni muthi m bich uthaya or apna mukh khol liya.


Sonam rote hue :- ni di ruk jaoye aP esa ni ker sakti .


Sab dev bhi jyoti ko rukne ki vinti kerne lage per jyoti ne kisi k ek na suni or agle hi pal karan ko muh me rakh nigal liya.


Sonam :- niiiiiii.....


Chilate hue behosh ho gayi , jise eekh kaya or preety usko sambhalne dodi or wo dono bhi buri tarah ro rahi thi karn ka ye hashr dekh.


Wahi karan ko nigalne k baad jyoti pahale khub hasi.


Jyoti '- ab hua asli nyaay , sab apradhio ko dand mil hi gaya hahaha.


Lekin achanak jab jyoti ka gussa shant hua or uska khud per niyantran aaya to usko ahasas hote hi ki abhi usne abhi kya kiya uski jordar chikh nikal uthi .


Jyoti dard bhari chikh k sath :- niiiiiiiiiiii, ye mene kya ker dalaa.


Isi chikh k sath jyoti ka gor varn dhuye jesa kal padme laga , uske laal sunder suhag k vastra safed rang m tabdil ho gaye or uska sara shringar or gahane gayab ho gaye or wo ek 60 sal ki bhudi orat jesi dikhne lagi.


Or samsaar k samne aayi


Vidhwa ruupp jyoti


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indra ko lagbhag harane hetu apna ek shaktishali ashtra nikalte hue .


Lobhasur :- bas bahut ho gaya , ab waqt aagaya h khel ko khatam kerne ka.


Abhi ye bol lobhasur ne apna ashtra chala deta h or ashtra bas Devraj se takrane hi wala tha ki usse pahale ashtra or Devraj k bich ek jordar hua jiske sath udi dhul ne charo or ek baar andhkar sa ker dala , jiske kaaran kisi ko kuch ni dikhayi de raha tha .


Or jab wo dhua hata to samne ka najar dekh lobhasur heran ho gaya kyu ki uska shaktishali ashtra ko samne mojud ladki ne raste m hi rok apne hatho m ese pakad liya jese koi bacha koi ball catch kerta h.


Ladki us ashtra ko todte hue :- khel to abhi shuru hua h Munna.


Lobhasur :- e dusahasi teri ye majal ki tune mera ashtra toda , esa ker tune apni mrityu ko lalkara h.


Parantu isse pahale ki m tera ant keru , usse purv m janana chahunga ki kon ho tum or kis kul se h tu , kon h tera pita , dikhne or baat k andaaz se to kisi raj kul se kisi bade yodha ki beti najar aati ho,


Ladki haste hue :- tu ek tuch rakshas mera vadh karega , mere kul or pita ka naam sunega to yahi dhoti gili ker bethega.


Janna chahta h to sun , m hu tritya or brahamrakdhaso ki rani preety , or m usi mahan samraat ki putri hu , jiske aage tum jese asur sir jhukaye khade rahte the.


Preety ka parichay pa ker ek baar to lobhasur ek baar to ghabra gaya , kyunki samraat or Vrushali dono hi mahashakti the or preety ne un dono ko Haraker unki shakti hasil ki thi.


Wahi dusri or


Shitasur ne jese hi agni Dev per prahar kerne ki koshis ki thi usi samay ek tir uper aasaman ki or se aaker dhamake k sath uske hatho se takrata h or uski gada dur jaker girti h.


Or ye prahar kisi or ne ni kaya ne kiya tha, jo pas k ek ped p khadhi thi , or wo turant ped se kud agni Dev or shitasur k bich m aagayi.


Shitasur :- e ladki kon h tu, or tera itna dusahahas ki tune mujhpe shitasur p vaar kiya, kher chodo ladki ho isliye bhul samjh ker ek avsar de raha hu , bhag jao yaha se.


Kaya :- avsar to m tumhe deti hu murkh asur ager prano ki raksha chahte ho to abhi apne bhaiyo or sena ko leker nikal jao , kahi esa na ho ki tumhare bade bhai vritrasur ko ek sath apne 3 no bhaiyo ko kandha dena pade.


Shitasur kaya k swar sun k gusse se tar batar ho gaya or chilaya or apne hathiyar le saj ho gaya kaya se yudh kerne .


Shitasur dhanush leker :- murkh ladki mane to avsar diya tha tujhe apne prano ki raksha ka lekin tu ni mani , ab mrityu k liye saj hoja.


Kaya :- kon kiski mrityu banega wo to samay hi batayega shitasur,tum apne muh ki jagah apne shastra chalao , kyu ki ye yidhbhumi hai yaha bate muh se ni shastro se ki jati h.


Ye bol kaya ne shitasur per ek or tir choda , lekin shitasur bhi teyar tha usne bhi apne dhanush se ban chala kaya k tir ko roka or start hua mahasangram.


Wahi dusri or


Preety or lobashur k bich bhi talvar yudh start ho gaya tha , lobhasur bhi ek Kushal talvar baaz tha.


Dono ki talvare aapas m takra rahi to mano utpan hui dhavani bijli si garjana so pratit hoti.


Lobhasur preety k pero per vaar kerta h lekin preety uchal ker use Dodge kerte hue boli.


Preety :- chal achi thi , per afsos ager mujhe harana h to kuch naya kerna hoga.


Lobhasur preety ki talvar p jor dete hue :- Gaddar ladki kesi asur h tu , ek asur ho ker asur ho ker asuro k khilaf lad rahi h wo bhi in devo ki raksha k liya , kesi tritiya h tu..


Preety lobhasur k pet m kohni mar use piche dhakel :- ha m asur ni hu , ni hu tum jesi asur jo shakti k ahankaar m nirbalo ko satate h or adharm felate h.


Are m to wo asur hu , jinke aadarsh bhakt Prahalad or raja bali jese mahan aatmaye h jinhone dharm ka sath deker asuro ka nam roshan kiya tum jese ni jinhone asuro ka naam ek baar fir kalankit ker dala or iski saja tumhe ye tritiya ki rani avashya degi.


Ye bol badi tezi k sath preety ne lobhasur per vaar kerna shuru ker diya , preety ki brahamrakshas or trityao ki mix shakti k aage lobhasur tik ni pa raha tha.


Tab usne jab ye paya ki bal se uska kam ni banne wala to usne chal ka sahara shuru kiya .


Lobhasur :- preety ye insano k sath deker tumhe bhala kya milega, hum asuro ka sath do , bhaiya vritrasur tumhe is sansaar ki sabse dhanvan ladki bana denge iske badle me, pure sansaar m tumse ameer koi na hoga.


Lobhasur jese jese ye bol raha tha , uske sath sath hi uska maya ka prabhav bhi preety p padne laga.


Lobhasur :- socho preety. Tumhare pass sone chandi hire jwaharat sab honge, jo chahogi wo milega tumhe.


Lobhasur ki maya ka asar dhire dhire dhire Preety p ho raha tha , uski ankho k samne ek esa bharamjal (illustion) prakat hua mano uske aas pas apaar dhan dolat jama h , jise dekh uski khushi thikana na raha, wo un gahano ko utha utha k pahane lagi or sath m unko niharne lagi


Lekin us illusion se hat ker sach to ye tha ki jese jese un gahano k moh m wo pad un sone ko chu rahi thi , ya unhe pahan rahi thi , wese wese asal m wo lobhasur k mayavi pash m bandh rahu thi.


Jesa ki abhi tak k safar m AAPNE preety ko jana hoga uss hisab se aapko bhi herani ho rahi hogi ki preety kab se itni lalchi ho gayi .


Per ye preety ka lalach ni balki lobhasur ki maya thi , jo apne naam k anukul kisi k ander bhi maya ka sanchar ker use bharast ker deti thi.


Wahi dusri or


Shitasur or kaya ka bhi yudh bhi kafi bhishn chal raha tha dono k kaman se nikle bhishn ashtro ki takrahat se asman se aag baras rahi thi.


Shitasur ne jab dekha ki kaya use barabar takar de rahi h to uske man m vichar aaya..


Shitasur :- kuch to kerna hi padega mujhe , ni to esa hi chalta raha to ye ladki jald hi mujhper bhari padne lagegi.


Tabhi kuch sochker uske chahare pe ek kutil muskaan aagayi tabhi usne apne Dhanush ko uper ki or apni pratyancha khichi , or kuch mantra budbudaya , jiske sath hi ek safed baan pratyancha per pragat hui.


Shitasur teer kaya ki or chodte hue :- ladki ab mere is prahar se bach ker dikha.


Ye bol usne badi hi tezi se wo teer kaya ki or chod diya , us teer ki gati itni tivr thi ki kaya ko koi moka hi ni mila.


Us ek tir ne kayi tiro ka roop le liya or hawa me kaya uper charo or ghumne lage , jiske sath hi un tiro se baraf ki havaye nikalne lagi or un hawao ne bawander ka roop le liya, jisse kaya us bawandar se charo or ghir gayi or kuch hi palo m wo baraf m jam gayi.


Shitasur :- haha dekh liya ladki shitasur se bhidne ka anzaam , ab meri Shital maya tumhe shigra hi samaapt ker degi.


Ye bol wo zor zor se hasne laga.


Wahi dusri or


Kaya or preety ka halat dekh Sonam chintit ho uthi or boli.


Sonam :- ye kya di , preety bhabbhi or kaya didi ko to in dushto ne apni maya me faas liya h , ab hum kya karenge .


Jyoti aaj pahali baar khud ko itna asahay feel ker rahi thi.


Jyoti hath jod prathna kerte hue :- hey bhole nath, hey durga , ab aap hi humari raksha ker sakti ho ma , apni beti ki raksha kero maa , raksha kero.


Jyoti jese hi prathna kerti h to uske sharir chamakne laga or usse do shaktipunj nikal ker ranbhumi ki or jane lage.


Ek shaktipunj jaker preety me sama gaya or lobhfas me fasi preety ko ek aawaz sunayi dene lagi.


Awaz :- bhabhi .


Preety :- jyoti di...


Ji ha ye aawaz jyoti ki hi thi, jo uske anterman se nikli thi .


Jyoti :- bhabhi ye aP kya ker rahi h , is dusht asur ki chal m kese fas sakte h aP , is lobhasur ne aapper apni maya ka upyog kiya h , aap ko shighr hi is maya ko todna hoga, bhabhi dikhana hoga is asur ko ki meri bhabhi kya chij h.


Jyoti ki aawaz se preety ko hosh aajata h or use abhas ho jata h ki use shighr hi is maya ko todna hoga.


Tabhi usne ankh band ki or apne tez ko bahar nikalna aarambh ker diya or preety k tez k asar k sath hi lobhasur ka mayavi pash ek vishfot k sath nasht hoga


Lobhasur heran hoker :- ni ye ni ho sakta , meri maya ko todna asambhav h...


Preety :- beta kya kya sambhav h abhi tak tumne dekha hi kaha h.


Ye bol preety ek baar firse lobhasur k uper ranchandi ban tut padi.


Wahi dusri or


Wo dusra shaktipunj us baraf k pahad m enter ker kaya k tan pe sama gaya.


Or uske sath hi ek vishfot us baraf k pahad m hua or kaya aajad ho gayi .


Or ab wo apne asli roop yani vampire roop m thi , lekin us shaktipunj ne kaya ko or bhi jyada shaktishali bana dala tha or uske vastra bhi ab purn roop se badal chuke the jiska praman tha uski pith per lage naye pankh jo bahut Vishal the , jo praman the ki ab kaya vampires ki sabse highest rank p pahunch chuke the jo thi vampire angel , jo sabhi vampire ki queen hoti h.



Shitasur :- asambhav itni prachand shitalata se bachna to asambhav tha .


Kaya :- murkh asur tum bhul gaye , vampire to khud thande ilako k nivasi hote h , sardi unka kuch ni bigad sakti .


Or jinke sath maa Durga ka ashirwad ho unka to sansar ki koi shakti kuch ni bigad sakte .


(Kaya ne esa isliye kaha tha kyunki wo jab barf me kaid thi , tab thand to uska kuch ni bigad pa rahi thi , lekin shitasur ki maya ko wo tod hi ni pa rahi thi.


Tabhi waha ek prakashpunj aapahunch or usne ma bhawani ka roop dharan ker liya.


Kaya us Akriti ko dekh khush or heran ho bol uthi :- maaa ! Pranam maa.


Maa :- putri kaya hum tumhari veerta or dharm ki prati nishta se ati prasan h putri , isliye hum swayam tumhe wo shakti pradan kerne aayi h , jiski tum na keval adhikarini ho apitu is mahayudh m dharm ki vijay k liye tumhe inki avshayakta bhi h..


Ye bol ma ne apna ek hath varmudra me lati or jiske sath hi unke hath se ek roshni nikal kaya m sama jati h or uske sath hi kaya m shakti ka sanchar hone laga.


Or aage jo hua wo aapke samne h .)


Kaya itna bol apne pankho ko fela ek hi bar me tez jhatke k sath aasman m pahunch gayi or uske sath hi usne apna hath uper kiya jiske sath hi ek Dhanush uske hath me aGaya or us Dhanush se jo usne choda wo ek sath hi hazaro m tabdil ho danav sena pe agni varsha kerne lagi.


Dhire dhire kaya or preety ne adhi se jyada asur sena ka sanghar ker dala or uske sath hi ab lobhasur or shitasur bhi ab thK chuke the, wo buri tarah ghayal bhi ho gaye the or unkr sabhi shastra or astra bhi kat chuke the.


Ye sab dekh jyoti or sonam khush bhi hui or heran bhi


Wahi dusri or


Rohan ye sab seen dekh ker heran tha


Rohan :- bhai ye sab kesi maya h , abhi tak jo bazi harti hui hume nazar aarahi thi , wo achanak palat kese gayi or ye kaya k roop ye sab kese


Karan :- tumhare is sawal ka bhi wahi jwab h mere dost jo m ab tak kah raha hu jyoti.


Rohan :- jyoti ?


Karan :- ha jyoti , vritrasur or uske bhaiyo ne nari shakti ko kamzor samjh apne mange gaye vardan m yahi manga tha n k koi purush na kar sake .


To aaj nari shakti ki mahima jyoti ne anjane m hi sahi lekin sansaar ko dikha diya h , ki nari yadi karuna or mamta ki murat h to shakti swarupa bhi h.


Jese Jab preety bhabhi lobhasur ki maya m fasi tab jyoti ne hi unki shakti ban unhe us maya se bahar nikala.


Jese sakhi kaya ko apni bhakti ki shakti se usko uske sampoorn shakti pradan kerwayi .


Aur ab intezar h to us samay ka jab jyoti ko apni vastvik shkto ka aabhas hoga or ant hoga vritrasur ka.


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kisi bhi samay kaya or preety un dono ka ant kerne hi wali thi.


Apne bhaiyo ki halat dekh 3sra bhai yani ki bhandasur jo itni der se yudh dekh raha tha ab unhe chinta satane lagi.


Bhandasur :- ager esa hi chalta raha ho to ye dusht ladkiya mere bhaiyo ko mar dalegi , lagta h ab mera ranbhumi m jane ka samay aagaya h.


Ye bol usne apna Dhanush uthaya or ek shakti baan jiska prahar devo k liye bhi Ghatak sidh ho sakta tha , wo kaman per sandhan ker nishana ker preety ki or chod dala .


Per isse pahale ki wo baan preety tak pahunch pata usse pahale hi kisi ne wo baan kisi ne bich me rok liya or apni muthi m bhich tinke ki bhanti tod dala


Bhandasur ne jab us vyakti ko dekha to uski herani ki sima na rahi , kyunki wo shaks koi sadharan manushya ya dev ni tha , uska roop vikral tha or usne bhaghmber pahana hua tha , or uski height 10 foot se bhi jyada hogi.


Bhandasur :- mere baan ko rokne wale dusht kon ho tum .


Vyakti :- tum jese dushto ka ant kerne k liye , bhagwan rudra k param bhakt dandnyak ki rachna hu m , veer rudra hu m..


Ye bol ek bhayank singh garjna ki us vyakti ne.


Ji ha dosto ye wahi veer rudra tha , jise karn ne samadhi jane se purb niyukt kiya tha , samay aane per jyoti or sab devo ki sahayta k liye.


Bhandasur :- tu chahe koi bhi ho , lekin tu ab mere hatho ni bachega.


Ye bol wo apne rath se uter ke aagaya or bina kisi hathiyar k hi rudrveer se malyudh kerne bhid gaya.


Wo malyudh kafi bhishn hone laga bada shighr hi kyunki bhandasur bhi kam shaktishali na tha usme 100 hathiyo thi janm se hi.


Dono hi ek dusre per mukke or late barsa rahe the , kabhi veer rudra bhandasur pe mukke barsata to kabhi bhandasur veer rudra per.


Yudh kerte hue bhandasur ka dhayan vese bhi khud yudh se jyada apne bhaio k pas pahuchne per tha .


Kyumki jaha ek taraf preety se apni talvar katwa lobhasur preety se buri tarah pit raha tha, muke or ghuso se.


Wahi dusri or kaya ne bhi shitasur ka dhanush kat diya tha or sath hi uske sarthi samet uska rath bhi nasht ho chuka tha


Shitasur ko ab apna kaal najjar araha tha , jo ghamandi shitasur or uske bhai nari ko aaj tak apne pao ki juti samjhte aaye the , aaj unhi nari k samne apne prano ki bhik mangne ki nobat aan padi thi usper.


Or usne esa hi kiya.


Shitasur kaya se :- devi , mujhe shama ker do devi , m vada kerta hu ki m yaha se sab chod patal lot jaunga or kabhi wapas apni shakal ni dikhaunga.


Kaya :- shama or tujh jese hevan ko jinhone humesha nari ko apne pao ki juti samjha , jisne na jane kitni abla asur ho ya insani nari ho , unki ijat luti , kadapi ni shitasur , is sansaar m har apradh ki shama mil sakti h , lekin nari ki ijjat p hath dalne wale ko to bhagwan bhi shama ni kerta , m to fir bhi ek vampire hu.


Ye bol kaya ne aasman se ek tir choda shitasur per jisse uska ek hath kat ker gir gaya.


Jis kaaran uska dard se bura haal ho gaya or apne bhai ka ye haal dekh bhandasur chila utha.


Bhandasur :- bhaiiii shit niiiii....


Ye bol wo apne bhai k pas jane ki koshish kerta h lekin usse pahale hi veer rudra use piche se pith se pakad ker use utha k dur fek dala .


Veer rudra :- apne bhai ki chinta chod murkh , pahale khud ki to raksha ker le


Bhandasur :- kaminr aaj tum sab me se kisi ko jivit ni chodunga m.


Ye bol bhanda sur fir se bhid gaya veer rudra se.


Wahi dusri or preety ne bhi ab khel samapt kerne ka nirnay leliya.


Preety :- bas ,ab bahut hua khel apne ant ko sajj ho ja dusht.


Ye bol preety 4 kadam piche leti h or fir bhag k ek uchi chalang k sath lobhasur ka sir dhad se alag ker deti h.


Or sath m usi samay kaya bhi apne ban se shitasur k dono hath katne k baad usko yamlok ki yatra p pahuncha deti h.


Apne dono bhaiyo ki mrityu dekh bhandasur buri tarah bhokla gaya tha.


Bhandasur :- niiiiii.......


Pahale to wo kafi der rota raha lekin baad m gusse se aag babula ho chilaya.


Bhandasur :- bas bahut hua tum sab dusht sab jis kaaran se hum se yudh ker rahe ho , or jis kaaran aj mere bhaiyo ka vadh tum ne kiya h naa , pratishodh swarup m us kaaran , is kutil ladki ka hi ant ker dunga.


Ye bat bhandasur ne jyoti ki or ishara kerte hue kahi.


Ye bol usne apne Dhanush ko jaldi se jaker rath se uthaya or us ashtra ka avahan kiya jiska naam sun sab dar gaye or chintit ho uthe.


Bhandasur :- bahut guman h na tumhe apni shaktio ka dushto ab dekhta hu kese raksha kerte ho tum is ladki mere is brahmastra se.


Ji ha Dosto bhandasur ne atyant vinashkari brahamatra ka avahan kiya tha jo usne kathor tap se Praapt kiya tha


Usne wo turant jyoti ki or chod diya , jiske kaaran sab bhaybhit ho uthe ki ab kya hoga.


Lekin brahamastra jyoti k jese hi karib pahuncha to samne ka najara dekh sabki ankhe chodi hi gayi , brahamastra jyoti k samksh aa apne aap hi ruk gaya.


Jisse jyoti bhi ek baar chonk gayi , lekin agle hi pal unhe wo pranam kerti h or sath m brahhmdev ki stuti bhi kerti h .


Lekin sabse herani ki baat to tab hui jab brahamastra ne bhi jyoti k ander se nikle us samay nikal mahatez ko pranam ker swatah hi gayab ho gaya.


Bhandasur :- asambhav ye ni ho sakta koi bhi mahan brahamastra nishfal ni ho sKta.


Veer rudra :- murkh asur jaha bhakti or prem ki shakti or dharm paksh m ho to deviy shakti bhi unka hi sath deti h .


Ab samay aagaya h tujhe bhi tere bhaiyo k pas pahuchane ka.


Ye bolte hue veer rudra buri tarah bhandasur p tut pada or use mar mar k adhmara ker dala.


Ab veer rudra ne jese hi apne antim prahar k liye apni talvar uthayi , tabhi ek jordar prahar aaker use laga or wo bahut dur ja gira or uske sath hi aasman se ek vishfot k sath kuch ranbhumi m enter hua or jab dhua hata to sabhi devo ka bhay se bura haal ho gaya or asuro m khushi ki lahar uth gayi.


Bhandasur bhi khushi se :- bhaiyaa aap aagaye.


Ha dosto apne bhaiyo ki mrityu ka jab vritrasur ko gyaat hua to uski krodh ki sima na rahi or wo usi shan yudh ko saj ho ranbhumi me saj ho aagaya.


Vritrasur bhandassur ko uthate hue :- tum thik to ho na anuj.


Bhandasur rote hue :- bhaiya m to thik hu , per humare bhaiii (siskte hue ) bhaiya kisi ko jinda mat chodna bhaiya kisi ko kat chodna.


Vritrasur nam gusse se bhari ankho se :- esa hi hoga chote.


(Jyoti ki or dekhte hue ) dushta , inke dam per hi tu itni uchal rahi h n kamini , aaj inka ant ker tujhe balo se ghasit ker m apne mahal leker jaunga or apni rakhail banaunga , tab hi kere bhaiyo ki shanti milegi.


Veer rudra gusse se :- vritrasur tera itna dusahas ki tumne inke bare m ese apshabd kahe ab tu jivit ni bachega.


Ye kahate hue veer rudra vritrasur se bhid gaya , lekin adisshakti k vardan ki shakti ka kavach bahut jyada shaktishali tha vritrasur ne badi asani se veer rudra ko ghayal ker prajit ker dala.


Or jyoti ki or bhadne laga tabhi veer rudra ko harta dekh preeety or kaya bhi uske samaksh aapahunchi.


Unhe dekh bhandasur bola :- bhaiya yahi h wo dono kaminiya jinhone humare bhaiyo ka vadh kiya h , inhe chodiyega ni.


Preety :- Kon kise chodega kise ni wo to abhi pata chal jayega dusht.


Ye bol preety or kaya bhi apne ashtra shastro ne se vritrasur per prahar kerne lagi , lekin ye kya unka har ek prahar vritrasur k kawach se takra ess gir rahe the jese mano koi rubber ki ball ho.


Tabhi vritrasur ne apne bade se vajra ko ghuma k preety or kaya p ek jabardast vaar kiya jo itna bhishn tha ki us prahar se dono hi ardh murcha m pahunch gayi.


Vritrasur :- chote in dono ne hi humare bhaiyo ka ant ker hume kalankit kiya h na ab badle ks samay h , ab hum yaha ranbhumi m hi indono ki ijjat lut inhe esa kalankit karenge ki ye khud mrityu ki bhik mangengi


Bhandasur shetani hasi k sath :- hahaha to shubh kam m deri kesi bhaiyaaa.


Ye bol wo dono bhai jese hi hawas bhari najaro k sath un dono k pas pahunche tabhi ek bhayank singh garjana sunayi di or agle hi pal ek jordar shakti prahar undono ko utha k dur fek deta h


Or is humle kerne wale ko jab sab dekhte h to sab chonk jate h kyunki ye prahar kisi or ne ni khud dandnayika jyoti ne kiya tha.


Jyoti jiske kesh hawa me ud rahe the or ankhe khun jesi laal ho gayi thi , wo sher ki tarah dahadti hui ranbhumi me pravesh kerti hui boli.


Jyoti :- bas vritrasur is kukritya k bare m soch ker hi tune paap ka ghada bhar liya h dusht , ab tera ant or koi ni swayam m ho karungi.


Hua darasl ye tha ki apne bhai k ansh per prahar hota dekh jyoti ka krodh jagrit hone laga or jab usne dekha ki vritrasur kya giri hui harkat kerne ja raha h to uske gusse ka jwala mukhi fat gaya or wo yydh bhumi m kid padi.


Vritrasur '- din m khwab dekhna acha ni h ladki , jaha mujhe teri ye gadaar asur sahayika ni kuch bigad saki to tu kis khet ki muli h , tu ni janti to jan le mujhe adishakti ka vardan h mujhe unke alaw or koi ni mar sakta.


Jyoti :- tujhe adishakti ma ka vardan h na dush to le ab tera ant k liye m unka hi avahan kerungi.


Ye bol jyoti ne apni ankhe band ker dali or usike sath hi jyoti k sharir se ek divya prakash nikal charo or felne laga , usko dekh esa pratit ho raha tha ki mano dharti per surya uter aaya ho.


Or dhore dhire ker sabhi devo k ander se ek tez punj nikal us prakash me samamane laga or karan k sharir se bhi esa hi ek punj nikal unme


Us prakash ko dekh karan k chahre pe bhi muskan aGayi or wo apni seat se uth gaya


Or jab wo prakash hata to jyoti ka ek naya roop is sansaar k samaksh aaya jise dekh jaha vritrasur chokne k sath bhaybhit ho utha wahi sabhi devo samet karan bhi unhe hath jod sharadha se pranam kerta h


Kyunki jyoti ka wo roop koi or ni balki sakshat maa adishakti ki prativimb tha , jiske 10 hath the jinme nana prakar k ashtra shastra shushobhit the.


Jyoti ma adishakti ki aawaz :- nari ko kamzor samjh tune mujhse ye var manga tha na murkh ki tera vadh usi nari k hatho ho jisme meri samast shaktiya ho ke to le mene teri ye icha bhi puri ker daali.


Vritrasur :- ni ye sambhav ni h , ye chal h tera kulta , mujhe bhaybhit kerne ka chal , lekin tu ye sab khel dikha vritrasur ko ni dara sakti , ab dekh vritrasur ki shakti .


Ye bol vritrasur ne jyoti per ek jordar prahar kiya apni gada ko fek lekin jyoti ne bhi apne ek hath m sushobhit gada ko feka jisne ek second m vritrasur ki gada ko tod dala .


Jise dekh vritrasur bhokla gaya or wo apni talvaar leker jyoti ki ir doda , tab jyoti ne bhi apne 2 hath ko chod baki hatho ko gayab ker talvar le dod padi vritrasur se bhidne .


Or shuru hua ek bhayank yudh jisme un dono ki takrane se esi dhawani utpan ho rahi thi jese bijli kadak rahi ho.


Sab devo ki ab jyoti or vritrasur pe hi najar thi or wahi dusri or sonam kaya or preety ka upchar ker rahi thi.


Vahi ye sab najara dekh bhandasur waha se bhagne ko hua lekin veer Rudra ne use rok liya or haste hue bola.


Veer rudra :- are are yuvraj aap kaha chal diye abhi humara yudh shesh h , akhir aapko bhi to apkr bhaio k pas pahuchana h , taki 3no bhsi milker nark m apne bade bhai sahab k agman ki teyari ker sako.


Bhandasur bhokla ker :- chodunga ni tujhe kamine.


Ye bol wo fir se veet rudra se bhid gaya .


Wahi dusri or


Shera ki lagayi hui canon me shitasur or lobhasur k vadh k sath prakat huo energy bhi aaker samahit ho gayi thi or wo 60% charge ho chuki thi.


Shera haste hie :- bas ek vadh or , or fir humne koi ni rok payega.


Wahi ranbhumi m vritrasur ki talvar ko ek jordar prahar k sath kat usne ek jordar laat vritrasur k sine pe mari jisse wo dur ja gira .


Lekin shigr hi wo uth khada hua or tarah tarah k ashtra shastra jyoti per fekne laga.


Lekin jyoti ne apne teero se sabko katne lagi.


Vahi bhandasur ka bhi ant najdik aagaya tha or veer rudra ne jese hi uska ant kerme apna ghatak prahar kerna chaha to uske man me karn ki aawaz sunayi di.


Karan :- ruk jao veer rudra. , Abhi iska vadh ja samay ni aaya h , esa brahama ji ne mujhe sanesh bheja , ese m tumhe ise pran dan dena hoga.


Veer rudra :- per swami ager mane abhi iska vadh ni kiya to.


Karan '- m janta hu ki tum apmi jagah sahi ho veer rudra , per hum brahmdev ki agya ko tal shrushti k niyam ni tod sakte , lekin ye yudh m dakhal na de iske liye tum ise utha ker antrik si gaharaiyo m fek di , jisse ye marg se bhi hat jaye or iska vadh bhi na ho


Veer rudra :- jo aagya swami , ye bol veer rudra ne bhandasur ne bhandasur ko pero se pakad itni jor se utha ke ghuma ker feka ki wo asman m ja gayab ho gaya.


Wahi dusri or vritrasur ne jab apne sare ashtra shastra vifal hote dekhe to usne apna asli roop yani ek vishal 100 ft uche bhese ka roop dharan ker apne singho ko jyoty ki or ker jordar takkar marne k liye doda


Or jese hi ye drishya kfd ne dekha to unhone sabhi graho ko ishara ker diya or shuru hua vritrasur ka mrityu yog .


Vritrasur ko apni or aata dekh jyoti bhi vishal rup dharan ker uski or dodi or jese hi vritrasur jyoti ki or pahunch usper prahar kerne hus jyoti uchal ker apne per se uske sir ko kuchal dharti per patak deti h or ek jordar garjana k sath apne dado hatho ko prakat kerte hue ek jordar chikh k sath apne hath me mojud trishul ko vritrasur k sine m ghop diya jo is waqt adha bhesa or adha asur rup m mojud tha .


Or jese hi vo trishul uske sine m ghusa to uske muh se bas itna hi nikla.


Vritrasur :- shama kerdena mujhe devi.


Or ye bol uske oran pakheru ho uthe or jese hi ye hua to devo m khushi ki lahar uth gayi or wo jor shor se jai mata ki or har har mahadev k nare lagane lage.


Lekin jaha sab khush the waha karan ab serious ho gaya tha.


Rohan :- bhai ab tu itna pareshan kyu h, humari gudiya ne akhir wo ker hi dikhaya jiska hume kabse intezaar tha , to ab ye pareshani kesi.


Karan :- ye pareshani aane wali us bhishn samasya ka h bhai , jisko ager mand na roka to sansar m pralay tay h ye bol kuch baat samjhate hue karan ne sirf itna bola.


Karan :- yad rakhna dost jaha sansar ki sari shakti vifal ho jati h waha ek hi shakti kam aati h bhakti ki shakti.


Ye bol karan waha se gayab ho gaya.


Wahi dusri or


Ranbhumi me


Karan ki chinta ka kaaran ab samjh asne laga tha. ,kyumki jyoti ka krodh vritrasur k ant k baad bhi shant na hua tha , jis kaaran wo out of control ho gayi or charo or apne ashtra shastra se tabahi machane lagi.


Devraj use rokne ki koshis kerte hue :- putri jyoti shant ho jao , us dusht ka ant tum ker chuki ho ab apne vastvik swarup m lot aso beti , lot aao.


Sab dev ese hi jyoti ko shant kerne ki koshis kerne m lage hue the or sonam bhi.


Tabhi vaha karan prakat hua , jise dekh sonam bhag k uske pas gayi or boli.


Sonam ghabra gayi :- dekhiye na bhai di ko kya ho gaya h ab aap hi unhe shant ker sakte ho bhai , please kuch kijiye.


Devraj '- ha putra karn putri sonam uchit kah rahi h , is sansar m jyoti ko ager koi shabt ker sakta h to wo keval tum ho putra.


Karn kuch ni bolta or ha m gardan hila jyoti ki or bhada or bola.


Karan :- jyoti meri guduya mujhe garv h tumper , tumne aaj sidh ker diya ki nari shakti ager chahe to kuch asambhav ni , ab apna krodh tyago meri gudiya or aao apne bhaiya k gale ni lagogi.


Lekin ye kya karan ko dekh jyoti shant hone k bajjay or gussa ho gayi or chilayi.


Jyoti :- ni karn aaj m shant ni hone wLi , khasker ki jab tak , jab tak m tumhe dandit na ker du.


Sonam herani se :- di ye aap kya bol rahi ho dand or bhai ko , aakhir kyu unki bhala kya galti h , ya unhone galat kiya.


Jyoti :- inka sabse bada apradh kuch na kerna hi to h Sonam ye chahte to is mahasanghar ko rok sakte the , mujhe jagrit ker per ni inhone vinash ka marg chuna jinke na jane kitne senik aakaran marw , isliye yadi ager is mahavinash ka jimedar vritrasur tha to ye bhi h.


Karan :- ager aapki najar m m vhi apradhi hu devi to mujhe aapka har diya hua dand swikar h .


Ye bol karan jhuk ker hath jod ket beth .


Jyoti '- tumhe bhi vahi dand milega dandnyak jo vritrasur ko mila mrityu dand.


Ye bol vishal jyoti rupi shakti ne karan ko apni muthi m bich uthaya or apna mukh khol liya.


Sonam rote hue :- ni di ruk jaoye aP esa ni ker sakti .


Sab dev bhi jyoti ko rukne ki vinti kerne lage per jyoti ne kisi k ek na suni or agle hi pal karan ko muh me rakh nigal liya.


Sonam :- niiiiiii.....


Chilate hue behosh ho gayi , jise eekh kaya or preety usko sambhalne dodi or wo dono bhi buri tarah ro rahi thi karn ka ye hashr dekh.


Wahi karan ko nigalne k baad jyoti pahale khub hasi.


Jyoti '- ab hua asli nyaay , sab apradhio ko dand mil hi gaya hahaha.


Lekin achanak jab jyoti ka gussa shant hua or uska khud per niyantran aaya to usko ahasas hote hi ki abhi usne abhi kya kiya uski jordar chikh nikal uthi .


Jyoti dard bhari chikh k sath :- niiiiiiiiiiii, ye mene kya ker dalaa.


Isi chikh k sath jyoti ka gor varn dhuye jesa kal padme laga , uske laal sunder suhag k vastra safed rang m tabdil ho gaye or uska sara shringar or gahane gayab ho gaye or wo ek 60 sal ki bhudi orat jesi dikhne lagi.


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indra ko lagbhag harane hetu apna ek shaktishali ashtra nikalte hue .


Lobhasur :- bas bahut ho gaya , ab waqt aagaya h khel ko khatam kerne ka.


Abhi ye bol lobhasur ne apna ashtra chala deta h or ashtra bas Devraj se takrane hi wala tha ki usse pahale ashtra or Devraj k bich ek jordar hua jiske sath udi dhul ne charo or ek baar andhkar sa ker dala , jiske kaaran kisi ko kuch ni dikhayi de raha tha .


Or jab wo dhua hata to samne ka najar dekh lobhasur heran ho gaya kyu ki uska shaktishali ashtra ko samne mojud ladki ne raste m hi rok apne hatho m ese pakad liya jese koi bacha koi ball catch kerta h.


Ladki us ashtra ko todte hue :- khel to abhi shuru hua h Munna.


Lobhasur :- e dusahasi teri ye majal ki tune mera ashtra toda , esa ker tune apni mrityu ko lalkara h.


Parantu isse pahale ki m tera ant keru , usse purv m janana chahunga ki kon ho tum or kis kul se h tu , kon h tera pita , dikhne or baat k andaaz se to kisi raj kul se kisi bade yodha ki beti najar aati ho,


Ladki haste hue :- tu ek tuch rakshas mera vadh karega , mere kul or pita ka naam sunega to yahi dhoti gili ker bethega.


Janna chahta h to sun , m hu tritya or brahamrakdhaso ki rani preety , or m usi mahan samraat ki putri hu , jiske aage tum jese asur sir jhukaye khade rahte the.


Preety ka parichay pa ker ek baar to lobhasur ek baar to ghabra gaya , kyunki samraat or Vrushali dono hi mahashakti the or preety ne un dono ko Haraker unki shakti hasil ki thi.


Wahi dusri or


Shitasur ne jese hi agni Dev per prahar kerne ki koshis ki thi usi samay ek tir uper aasaman ki or se aaker dhamake k sath uske hatho se takrata h or uski gada dur jaker girti h.


Or ye prahar kisi or ne ni kaya ne kiya tha, jo pas k ek ped p khadhi thi , or wo turant ped se kud agni Dev or shitasur k bich m aagayi.


Shitasur :- e ladki kon h tu, or tera itna dusahahas ki tune mujhpe shitasur p vaar kiya, kher chodo ladki ho isliye bhul samjh ker ek avsar de raha hu , bhag jao yaha se.


Kaya :- avsar to m tumhe deti hu murkh asur ager prano ki raksha chahte ho to abhi apne bhaiyo or sena ko leker nikal jao , kahi esa na ho ki tumhare bade bhai vritrasur ko ek sath apne 3 no bhaiyo ko kandha dena pade.


Shitasur kaya k swar sun k gusse se tar batar ho gaya or chilaya or apne hathiyar le saj ho gaya kaya se yudh kerne .


Shitasur dhanush leker :- murkh ladki mane to avsar diya tha tujhe apne prano ki raksha ka lekin tu ni mani , ab mrityu k liye saj hoja.


Kaya :- kon kiski mrityu banega wo to samay hi batayega shitasur,tum apne muh ki jagah apne shastra chalao , kyu ki ye yidhbhumi hai yaha bate muh se ni shastro se ki jati h.


Ye bol kaya ne shitasur per ek or tir choda , lekin shitasur bhi teyar tha usne bhi apne dhanush se ban chala kaya k tir ko roka or start hua mahasangram.


Wahi dusri or


Preety or lobashur k bich bhi talvar yudh start ho gaya tha , lobhasur bhi ek Kushal talvar baaz tha.


Dono ki talvare aapas m takra rahi to mano utpan hui dhavani bijli si garjana so pratit hoti.


Lobhasur preety k pero per vaar kerta h lekin preety uchal ker use Dodge kerte hue boli.


Preety :- chal achi thi , per afsos ager mujhe harana h to kuch naya kerna hoga.


Lobhasur preety ki talvar p jor dete hue :- Gaddar ladki kesi asur h tu , ek asur ho ker asur ho ker asuro k khilaf lad rahi h wo bhi in devo ki raksha k liya , kesi tritiya h tu..


Preety lobhasur k pet m kohni mar use piche dhakel :- ha m asur ni hu , ni hu tum jesi asur jo shakti k ahankaar m nirbalo ko satate h or adharm felate h.


Are m to wo asur hu , jinke aadarsh bhakt Prahalad or raja bali jese mahan aatmaye h jinhone dharm ka sath deker asuro ka nam roshan kiya tum jese ni jinhone asuro ka naam ek baar fir kalankit ker dala or iski saja tumhe ye tritiya ki rani avashya degi.


Ye bol badi tezi k sath preety ne lobhasur per vaar kerna shuru ker diya , preety ki brahamrakshas or trityao ki mix shakti k aage lobhasur tik ni pa raha tha.


Tab usne jab ye paya ki bal se uska kam ni banne wala to usne chal ka sahara shuru kiya .


Lobhasur :- preety ye insano k sath deker tumhe bhala kya milega, hum asuro ka sath do , bhaiya vritrasur tumhe is sansaar ki sabse dhanvan ladki bana denge iske badle me, pure sansaar m tumse ameer koi na hoga.


Lobhasur jese jese ye bol raha tha , uske sath sath hi uska maya ka prabhav bhi preety p padne laga.


Lobhasur :- socho preety. Tumhare pass sone chandi hire jwaharat sab honge, jo chahogi wo milega tumhe.


Lobhasur ki maya ka asar dhire dhire dhire Preety p ho raha tha , uski ankho k samne ek esa bharamjal (illustion) prakat hua mano uske aas pas apaar dhan dolat jama h , jise dekh uski khushi thikana na raha, wo un gahano ko utha utha k pahane lagi or sath m unko niharne lagi


Lekin us illusion se hat ker sach to ye tha ki jese jese un gahano k moh m wo pad un sone ko chu rahi thi , ya unhe pahan rahi thi , wese wese asal m wo lobhasur k mayavi pash m bandh rahu thi.


Jesa ki abhi tak k safar m AAPNE preety ko jana hoga uss hisab se aapko bhi herani ho rahi hogi ki preety kab se itni lalchi ho gayi .


Per ye preety ka lalach ni balki lobhasur ki maya thi , jo apne naam k anukul kisi k ander bhi maya ka sanchar ker use bharast ker deti thi.


Wahi dusri or


Shitasur or kaya ka bhi yudh bhi kafi bhishn chal raha tha dono k kaman se nikle bhishn ashtro ki takrahat se asman se aag baras rahi thi.


Shitasur ne jab dekha ki kaya use barabar takar de rahi h to uske man m vichar aaya..


Shitasur :- kuch to kerna hi padega mujhe , ni to esa hi chalta raha to ye ladki jald hi mujhper bhari padne lagegi.


Tabhi kuch sochker uske chahare pe ek kutil muskaan aagayi tabhi usne apne Dhanush ko uper ki or apni pratyancha khichi , or kuch mantra budbudaya , jiske sath hi ek safed baan pratyancha per pragat hui.


Shitasur teer kaya ki or chodte hue :- ladki ab mere is prahar se bach ker dikha.


Ye bol usne badi hi tezi se wo teer kaya ki or chod diya , us teer ki gati itni tivr thi ki kaya ko koi moka hi ni mila.


Us ek tir ne kayi tiro ka roop le liya or hawa me kaya uper charo or ghumne lage , jiske sath hi un tiro se baraf ki havaye nikalne lagi or un hawao ne bawander ka roop le liya, jisse kaya us bawandar se charo or ghir gayi or kuch hi palo m wo baraf m jam gayi.


Shitasur :- haha dekh liya ladki shitasur se bhidne ka anzaam , ab meri Shital maya tumhe shigra hi samaapt ker degi.


Ye bol wo zor zor se hasne laga.


Wahi dusri or


Kaya or preety ka halat dekh Sonam chintit ho uthi or boli.


Sonam :- ye kya di , preety bhabbhi or kaya didi ko to in dushto ne apni maya me faas liya h , ab hum kya karenge .


Jyoti aaj pahali baar khud ko itna asahay feel ker rahi thi.


Jyoti hath jod prathna kerte hue :- hey bhole nath, hey durga , ab aap hi humari raksha ker sakti ho ma , apni beti ki raksha kero maa , raksha kero.


Jyoti jese hi prathna kerti h to uske sharir chamakne laga or usse do shaktipunj nikal ker ranbhumi ki or jane lage.


Ek shaktipunj jaker preety me sama gaya or lobhfas me fasi preety ko ek aawaz sunayi dene lagi.


Awaz :- bhabhi .


Preety :- jyoti di...


Ji ha ye aawaz jyoti ki hi thi, jo uske anterman se nikli thi .


Jyoti :- bhabhi ye aP kya ker rahi h , is dusht asur ki chal m kese fas sakte h aP , is lobhasur ne aapper apni maya ka upyog kiya h , aap ko shighr hi is maya ko todna hoga, bhabhi dikhana hoga is asur ko ki meri bhabhi kya chij h.


Jyoti ki aawaz se preety ko hosh aajata h or use abhas ho jata h ki use shighr hi is maya ko todna hoga.


Tabhi usne ankh band ki or apne tez ko bahar nikalna aarambh ker diya or preety k tez k asar k sath hi lobhasur ka mayavi pash ek vishfot k sath nasht hoga


Lobhasur heran hoker :- ni ye ni ho sakta , meri maya ko todna asambhav h...


Preety :- beta kya kya sambhav h abhi tak tumne dekha hi kaha h.


Ye bol preety ek baar firse lobhasur k uper ranchandi ban tut padi.


Wahi dusri or


Wo dusra shaktipunj us baraf k pahad m enter ker kaya k tan pe sama gaya.


Or uske sath hi ek vishfot us baraf k pahad m hua or kaya aajad ho gayi .


Or ab wo apne asli roop yani vampire roop m thi , lekin us shaktipunj ne kaya ko or bhi jyada shaktishali bana dala tha or uske vastra bhi ab purn roop se badal chuke the jiska praman tha uski pith per lage naye pankh jo bahut Vishal the , jo praman the ki ab kaya vampires ki sabse highest rank p pahunch chuke the jo thi vampire angel , jo sabhi vampire ki queen hoti h.



Shitasur :- asambhav itni prachand shitalata se bachna to asambhav tha .


Kaya :- murkh asur tum bhul gaye , vampire to khud thande ilako k nivasi hote h , sardi unka kuch ni bigad sakti .


Or jinke sath maa Durga ka ashirwad ho unka to sansar ki koi shakti kuch ni bigad sakte .


(Kaya ne esa isliye kaha tha kyunki wo jab barf me kaid thi , tab thand to uska kuch ni bigad pa rahi thi , lekin shitasur ki maya ko wo tod hi ni pa rahi thi.


Tabhi waha ek prakashpunj aapahunch or usne ma bhawani ka roop dharan ker liya.


Kaya us Akriti ko dekh khush or heran ho bol uthi :- maaa ! Pranam maa.


Maa :- putri kaya hum tumhari veerta or dharm ki prati nishta se ati prasan h putri , isliye hum swayam tumhe wo shakti pradan kerne aayi h , jiski tum na keval adhikarini ho apitu is mahayudh m dharm ki vijay k liye tumhe inki avshayakta bhi h..


Ye bol ma ne apna ek hath varmudra me lati or jiske sath hi unke hath se ek roshni nikal kaya m sama jati h or uske sath hi kaya m shakti ka sanchar hone laga.


Or aage jo hua wo aapke samne h .)


Kaya itna bol apne pankho ko fela ek hi bar me tez jhatke k sath aasman m pahunch gayi or uske sath hi usne apna hath uper kiya jiske sath hi ek Dhanush uske hath me aGaya or us Dhanush se jo usne choda wo ek sath hi hazaro m tabdil ho danav sena pe agni varsha kerne lagi.


Dhire dhire kaya or preety ne adhi se jyada asur sena ka sanghar ker dala or uske sath hi ab lobhasur or shitasur bhi ab thK chuke the, wo buri tarah ghayal bhi ho gaye the or unkr sabhi shastra or astra bhi kat chuke the.


Ye sab dekh jyoti or sonam khush bhi hui or heran bhi


Wahi dusri or


Rohan ye sab seen dekh ker heran tha


Rohan :- bhai ye sab kesi maya h , abhi tak jo bazi harti hui hume nazar aarahi thi , wo achanak palat kese gayi or ye kaya k roop ye sab kese


Karan :- tumhare is sawal ka bhi wahi jwab h mere dost jo m ab tak kah raha hu jyoti.


Rohan :- jyoti ?


Karan :- ha jyoti , vritrasur or uske bhaiyo ne nari shakti ko kamzor samjh apne mange gaye vardan m yahi manga tha n k koi purush na kar sake .


To aaj nari shakti ki mahima jyoti ne anjane m hi sahi lekin sansaar ko dikha diya h , ki nari yadi karuna or mamta ki murat h to shakti swarupa bhi h.


Jese Jab preety bhabhi lobhasur ki maya m fasi tab jyoti ne hi unki shakti ban unhe us maya se bahar nikala.


Jese sakhi kaya ko apni bhakti ki shakti se usko uske sampoorn shakti pradan kerwayi .


Aur ab intezar h to us samay ka jab jyoti ko apni vastvik shkto ka aabhas hoga or ant hoga vritrasur ka.


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kisi bhi samay kaya or preety un dono ka ant kerne hi wali thi.


Apne bhaiyo ki halat dekh 3sra bhai yani ki bhandasur jo itni der se yudh dekh raha tha ab unhe chinta satane lagi.


Bhandasur :- ager esa hi chalta raha ho to ye dusht ladkiya mere bhaiyo ko mar dalegi , lagta h ab mera ranbhumi m jane ka samay aagaya h.


Ye bol usne apna Dhanush uthaya or ek shakti baan jiska prahar devo k liye bhi Ghatak sidh ho sakta tha , wo kaman per sandhan ker nishana ker preety ki or chod dala .


Per isse pahale ki wo baan preety tak pahunch pata usse pahale hi kisi ne wo baan kisi ne bich me rok liya or apni muthi m bhich tinke ki bhanti tod dala


Bhandasur ne jab us vyakti ko dekha to uski herani ki sima na rahi , kyunki wo shaks koi sadharan manushya ya dev ni tha , uska roop vikral tha or usne bhaghmber pahana hua tha , or uski height 10 foot se bhi jyada hogi.


Bhandasur :- mere baan ko rokne wale dusht kon ho tum .


Vyakti :- tum jese dushto ka ant kerne k liye , bhagwan rudra k param bhakt dandnyak ki rachna hu m , veer rudra hu m..


Ye bol ek bhayank singh garjna ki us vyakti ne.


Ji ha dosto ye wahi veer rudra tha , jise karn ne samadhi jane se purb niyukt kiya tha , samay aane per jyoti or sab devo ki sahayta k liye.


Bhandasur :- tu chahe koi bhi ho , lekin tu ab mere hatho ni bachega.


Ye bol wo apne rath se uter ke aagaya or bina kisi hathiyar k hi rudrveer se malyudh kerne bhid gaya.


Wo malyudh kafi bhishn hone laga bada shighr hi kyunki bhandasur bhi kam shaktishali na tha usme 100 hathiyo thi janm se hi.


Dono hi ek dusre per mukke or late barsa rahe the , kabhi veer rudra bhandasur pe mukke barsata to kabhi bhandasur veer rudra per.


Yudh kerte hue bhandasur ka dhayan vese bhi khud yudh se jyada apne bhaio k pas pahuchne per tha .


Kyumki jaha ek taraf preety se apni talvar katwa lobhasur preety se buri tarah pit raha tha, muke or ghuso se.


Wahi dusri or kaya ne bhi shitasur ka dhanush kat diya tha or sath hi uske sarthi samet uska rath bhi nasht ho chuka tha


Shitasur ko ab apna kaal najjar araha tha , jo ghamandi shitasur or uske bhai nari ko aaj tak apne pao ki juti samjhte aaye the , aaj unhi nari k samne apne prano ki bhik mangne ki nobat aan padi thi usper.


Or usne esa hi kiya.


Shitasur kaya se :- devi , mujhe shama ker do devi , m vada kerta hu ki m yaha se sab chod patal lot jaunga or kabhi wapas apni shakal ni dikhaunga.


Kaya :- shama or tujh jese hevan ko jinhone humesha nari ko apne pao ki juti samjha , jisne na jane kitni abla asur ho ya insani nari ho , unki ijat luti , kadapi ni shitasur , is sansaar m har apradh ki shama mil sakti h , lekin nari ki ijjat p hath dalne wale ko to bhagwan bhi shama ni kerta , m to fir bhi ek vampire hu.


Ye bol kaya ne aasman se ek tir choda shitasur per jisse uska ek hath kat ker gir gaya.


Jis kaaran uska dard se bura haal ho gaya or apne bhai ka ye haal dekh bhandasur chila utha.


Bhandasur :- bhaiiii shit niiiii....


Ye bol wo apne bhai k pas jane ki koshish kerta h lekin usse pahale hi veer rudra use piche se pith se pakad ker use utha k dur fek dala .


Veer rudra :- apne bhai ki chinta chod murkh , pahale khud ki to raksha ker le


Bhandasur :- kaminr aaj tum sab me se kisi ko jivit ni chodunga m.


Ye bol bhanda sur fir se bhid gaya veer rudra se.


Wahi dusri or preety ne bhi ab khel samapt kerne ka nirnay leliya.


Preety :- bas ,ab bahut hua khel apne ant ko sajj ho ja dusht.


Ye bol preety 4 kadam piche leti h or fir bhag k ek uchi chalang k sath lobhasur ka sir dhad se alag ker deti h.


Or sath m usi samay kaya bhi apne ban se shitasur k dono hath katne k baad usko yamlok ki yatra p pahuncha deti h.


Apne dono bhaiyo ki mrityu dekh bhandasur buri tarah bhokla gaya tha.


Bhandasur :- niiiiii.......


Pahale to wo kafi der rota raha lekin baad m gusse se aag babula ho chilaya.


Bhandasur :- bas bahut hua tum sab dusht sab jis kaaran se hum se yudh ker rahe ho , or jis kaaran aj mere bhaiyo ka vadh tum ne kiya h naa , pratishodh swarup m us kaaran , is kutil ladki ka hi ant ker dunga.


Ye bat bhandasur ne jyoti ki or ishara kerte hue kahi.


Ye bol usne apne Dhanush ko jaldi se jaker rath se uthaya or us ashtra ka avahan kiya jiska naam sun sab dar gaye or chintit ho uthe.


Bhandasur :- bahut guman h na tumhe apni shaktio ka dushto ab dekhta hu kese raksha kerte ho tum is ladki mere is brahmastra se.


Ji ha Dosto bhandasur ne atyant vinashkari brahamatra ka avahan kiya tha jo usne kathor tap se Praapt kiya tha


Usne wo turant jyoti ki or chod diya , jiske kaaran sab bhaybhit ho uthe ki ab kya hoga.


Lekin brahamastra jyoti k jese hi karib pahuncha to samne ka najara dekh sabki ankhe chodi hi gayi , brahamastra jyoti k samksh aa apne aap hi ruk gaya.


Jisse jyoti bhi ek baar chonk gayi , lekin agle hi pal unhe wo pranam kerti h or sath m brahhmdev ki stuti bhi kerti h .


Lekin sabse herani ki baat to tab hui jab brahamastra ne bhi jyoti k ander se nikle us samay nikal mahatez ko pranam ker swatah hi gayab ho gaya.


Bhandasur :- asambhav ye ni ho sakta koi bhi mahan brahamastra nishfal ni ho sKta.


Veer rudra :- murkh asur jaha bhakti or prem ki shakti or dharm paksh m ho to deviy shakti bhi unka hi sath deti h .


Ab samay aagaya h tujhe bhi tere bhaiyo k pas pahuchane ka.


Ye bolte hue veer rudra buri tarah bhandasur p tut pada or use mar mar k adhmara ker dala.


Ab veer rudra ne jese hi apne antim prahar k liye apni talvar uthayi , tabhi ek jordar prahar aaker use laga or wo bahut dur ja gira or uske sath hi aasman se ek vishfot k sath kuch ranbhumi m enter hua or jab dhua hata to sabhi devo ka bhay se bura haal ho gaya or asuro m khushi ki lahar uth gayi.


Bhandasur bhi khushi se :- bhaiyaa aap aagaye.


Ha dosto apne bhaiyo ki mrityu ka jab vritrasur ko gyaat hua to uski krodh ki sima na rahi or wo usi shan yudh ko saj ho ranbhumi me saj ho aagaya.


Vritrasur bhandassur ko uthate hue :- tum thik to ho na anuj.


Bhandasur rote hue :- bhaiya m to thik hu , per humare bhaiii (siskte hue ) bhaiya kisi ko jinda mat chodna bhaiya kisi ko kat chodna.


Vritrasur nam gusse se bhari ankho se :- esa hi hoga chote.


(Jyoti ki or dekhte hue ) dushta , inke dam per hi tu itni uchal rahi h n kamini , aaj inka ant ker tujhe balo se ghasit ker m apne mahal leker jaunga or apni rakhail banaunga , tab hi kere bhaiyo ki shanti milegi.


Veer rudra gusse se :- vritrasur tera itna dusahas ki tumne inke bare m ese apshabd kahe ab tu jivit ni bachega.


Ye kahate hue veer rudra vritrasur se bhid gaya , lekin adisshakti k vardan ki shakti ka kavach bahut jyada shaktishali tha vritrasur ne badi asani se veer rudra ko ghayal ker prajit ker dala.


Or jyoti ki or bhadne laga tabhi veer rudra ko harta dekh preeety or kaya bhi uske samaksh aapahunchi.


Unhe dekh bhandasur bola :- bhaiya yahi h wo dono kaminiya jinhone humare bhaiyo ka vadh kiya h , inhe chodiyega ni.


Preety :- Kon kise chodega kise ni wo to abhi pata chal jayega dusht.


Ye bol preety or kaya bhi apne ashtra shastro ne se vritrasur per prahar kerne lagi , lekin ye kya unka har ek prahar vritrasur k kawach se takra ess gir rahe the jese mano koi rubber ki ball ho.


Tabhi vritrasur ne apne bade se vajra ko ghuma k preety or kaya p ek jabardast vaar kiya jo itna bhishn tha ki us prahar se dono hi ardh murcha m pahunch gayi.


Vritrasur :- chote in dono ne hi humare bhaiyo ka ant ker hume kalankit kiya h na ab badle ks samay h , ab hum yaha ranbhumi m hi indono ki ijjat lut inhe esa kalankit karenge ki ye khud mrityu ki bhik mangengi


Bhandasur shetani hasi k sath :- hahaha to shubh kam m deri kesi bhaiyaaa.


Ye bol wo dono bhai jese hi hawas bhari najaro k sath un dono k pas pahunche tabhi ek bhayank singh garjana sunayi di or agle hi pal ek jordar shakti prahar undono ko utha k dur fek deta h


Or is humle kerne wale ko jab sab dekhte h to sab chonk jate h kyunki ye prahar kisi or ne ni khud dandnayika jyoti ne kiya tha.


Jyoti jiske kesh hawa me ud rahe the or ankhe khun jesi laal ho gayi thi , wo sher ki tarah dahadti hui ranbhumi me pravesh kerti hui boli.


Jyoti :- bas vritrasur is kukritya k bare m soch ker hi tune paap ka ghada bhar liya h dusht , ab tera ant or koi ni swayam m ho karungi.


Hua darasl ye tha ki apne bhai k ansh per prahar hota dekh jyoti ka krodh jagrit hone laga or jab usne dekha ki vritrasur kya giri hui harkat kerne ja raha h to uske gusse ka jwala mukhi fat gaya or wo yydh bhumi m kid padi.


Vritrasur '- din m khwab dekhna acha ni h ladki , jaha mujhe teri ye gadaar asur sahayika ni kuch bigad saki to tu kis khet ki muli h , tu ni janti to jan le mujhe adishakti ka vardan h mujhe unke alaw or koi ni mar sakta.


Jyoti :- tujhe adishakti ma ka vardan h na dush to le ab tera ant k liye m unka hi avahan kerungi.


Ye bol jyoti ne apni ankhe band ker dali or usike sath hi jyoti k sharir se ek divya prakash nikal charo or felne laga , usko dekh esa pratit ho raha tha ki mano dharti per surya uter aaya ho.


Or dhore dhire ker sabhi devo k ander se ek tez punj nikal us prakash me samamane laga or karan k sharir se bhi esa hi ek punj nikal unme


Us prakash ko dekh karan k chahre pe bhi muskan aGayi or wo apni seat se uth gaya


Or jab wo prakash hata to jyoti ka ek naya roop is sansaar k samaksh aaya jise dekh jaha vritrasur chokne k sath bhaybhit ho utha wahi sabhi devo samet karan bhi unhe hath jod sharadha se pranam kerta h


Kyunki jyoti ka wo roop koi or ni balki sakshat maa adishakti ki prativimb tha , jiske 10 hath the jinme nana prakar k ashtra shastra shushobhit the.


Jyoti ma adishakti ki aawaz :- nari ko kamzor samjh tune mujhse ye var manga tha na murkh ki tera vadh usi nari k hatho ho jisme meri samast shaktiya ho ke to le mene teri ye icha bhi puri ker daali.


Vritrasur :- ni ye sambhav ni h , ye chal h tera kulta , mujhe bhaybhit kerne ka chal , lekin tu ye sab khel dikha vritrasur ko ni dara sakti , ab dekh vritrasur ki shakti .


Ye bol vritrasur ne jyoti per ek jordar prahar kiya apni gada ko fek lekin jyoti ne bhi apne ek hath m sushobhit gada ko feka jisne ek second m vritrasur ki gada ko tod dala .


Jise dekh vritrasur bhokla gaya or wo apni talvaar leker jyoti ki ir doda , tab jyoti ne bhi apne 2 hath ko chod baki hatho ko gayab ker talvar le dod padi vritrasur se bhidne .


Or shuru hua ek bhayank yudh jisme un dono ki takrane se esi dhawani utpan ho rahi thi jese bijli kadak rahi ho.


Sab devo ki ab jyoti or vritrasur pe hi najar thi or wahi dusri or sonam kaya or preety ka upchar ker rahi thi.


Vahi ye sab najara dekh bhandasur waha se bhagne ko hua lekin veer Rudra ne use rok liya or haste hue bola.


Veer rudra :- are are yuvraj aap kaha chal diye abhi humara yudh shesh h , akhir aapko bhi to apkr bhaio k pas pahuchana h , taki 3no bhsi milker nark m apne bade bhai sahab k agman ki teyari ker sako.


Bhandasur bhokla ker :- chodunga ni tujhe kamine.


Ye bol wo fir se veet rudra se bhid gaya .


Wahi dusri or


Shera ki lagayi hui canon me shitasur or lobhasur k vadh k sath prakat huo energy bhi aaker samahit ho gayi thi or wo 60% charge ho chuki thi.


Shera haste hie :- bas ek vadh or , or fir humne koi ni rok payega.


Wahi ranbhumi m vritrasur ki talvar ko ek jordar prahar k sath kat usne ek jordar laat vritrasur k sine pe mari jisse wo dur ja gira .


Lekin shigr hi wo uth khada hua or tarah tarah k ashtra shastra jyoti per fekne laga.


Lekin jyoti ne apne teero se sabko katne lagi.


Vahi bhandasur ka bhi ant najdik aagaya tha or veer rudra ne jese hi uska ant kerme apna ghatak prahar kerna chaha to uske man me karn ki aawaz sunayi di.


Karan :- ruk jao veer rudra. , Abhi iska vadh ja samay ni aaya h , esa brahama ji ne mujhe sanesh bheja , ese m tumhe ise pran dan dena hoga.


Veer rudra :- per swami ager mane abhi iska vadh ni kiya to.


Karan '- m janta hu ki tum apmi jagah sahi ho veer rudra , per hum brahmdev ki agya ko tal shrushti k niyam ni tod sakte , lekin ye yudh m dakhal na de iske liye tum ise utha ker antrik si gaharaiyo m fek di , jisse ye marg se bhi hat jaye or iska vadh bhi na ho


Veer rudra :- jo aagya swami , ye bol veer rudra ne bhandasur ne bhandasur ko pero se pakad itni jor se utha ke ghuma ker feka ki wo asman m ja gayab ho gaya.


Wahi dusri or vritrasur ne jab apne sare ashtra shastra vifal hote dekhe to usne apna asli roop yani ek vishal 100 ft uche bhese ka roop dharan ker apne singho ko jyoty ki or ker jordar takkar marne k liye doda


Or jese hi ye drishya kfd ne dekha to unhone sabhi graho ko ishara ker diya or shuru hua vritrasur ka mrityu yog .


Vritrasur ko apni or aata dekh jyoti bhi vishal rup dharan ker uski or dodi or jese hi vritrasur jyoti ki or pahunch usper prahar kerne hus jyoti uchal ker apne per se uske sir ko kuchal dharti per patak deti h or ek jordar garjana k sath apne dado hatho ko prakat kerte hue ek jordar chikh k sath apne hath me mojud trishul ko vritrasur k sine m ghop diya jo is waqt adha bhesa or adha asur rup m mojud tha .


Or jese hi vo trishul uske sine m ghusa to uske muh se bas itna hi nikla.


Vritrasur :- shama kerdena mujhe devi.


Or ye bol uske oran pakheru ho uthe or jese hi ye hua to devo m khushi ki lahar uth gayi or wo jor shor se jai mata ki or har har mahadev k nare lagane lage.


Lekin jaha sab khush the waha karan ab serious ho gaya tha.


Rohan :- bhai ab tu itna pareshan kyu h, humari gudiya ne akhir wo ker hi dikhaya jiska hume kabse intezaar tha , to ab ye pareshani kesi.


Karan :- ye pareshani aane wali us bhishn samasya ka h bhai , jisko ager mand na roka to sansar m pralay tay h ye bol kuch baat samjhate hue karan ne sirf itna bola.


Karan :- yad rakhna dost jaha sansar ki sari shakti vifal ho jati h waha ek hi shakti kam aati h bhakti ki shakti.


Ye bol karan waha se gayab ho gaya.


Wahi dusri or


Ranbhumi me


Karan ki chinta ka kaaran ab samjh asne laga tha. ,kyumki jyoti ka krodh vritrasur k ant k baad bhi shant na hua tha , jis kaaran wo out of control ho gayi or charo or apne ashtra shastra se tabahi machane lagi.


Devraj use rokne ki koshis kerte hue :- putri jyoti shant ho jao , us dusht ka ant tum ker chuki ho ab apne vastvik swarup m lot aso beti , lot aao.


Sab dev ese hi jyoti ko shant kerne ki koshis kerne m lage hue the or sonam bhi.


Tabhi vaha karan prakat hua , jise dekh sonam bhag k uske pas gayi or boli.


Sonam ghabra gayi :- dekhiye na bhai di ko kya ho gaya h ab aap hi unhe shant ker sakte ho bhai , please kuch kijiye.


Devraj '- ha putra karn putri sonam uchit kah rahi h , is sansar m jyoti ko ager koi shabt ker sakta h to wo keval tum ho putra.


Karn kuch ni bolta or ha m gardan hila jyoti ki or bhada or bola.


Karan :- jyoti meri guduya mujhe garv h tumper , tumne aaj sidh ker diya ki nari shakti ager chahe to kuch asambhav ni , ab apna krodh tyago meri gudiya or aao apne bhaiya k gale ni lagogi.


Lekin ye kya karan ko dekh jyoti shant hone k bajjay or gussa ho gayi or chilayi.


Jyoti :- ni karn aaj m shant ni hone wLi , khasker ki jab tak , jab tak m tumhe dandit na ker du.


Sonam herani se :- di ye aap kya bol rahi ho dand or bhai ko , aakhir kyu unki bhala kya galti h , ya unhone galat kiya.


Jyoti :- inka sabse bada apradh kuch na kerna hi to h Sonam ye chahte to is mahasanghar ko rok sakte the , mujhe jagrit ker per ni inhone vinash ka marg chuna jinke na jane kitne senik aakaran marw , isliye yadi ager is mahavinash ka jimedar vritrasur tha to ye bhi h.


Karan :- ager aapki najar m m vhi apradhi hu devi to mujhe aapka har diya hua dand swikar h .


Ye bol karan jhuk ker hath jod ket beth .


Jyoti '- tumhe bhi vahi dand milega dandnyak jo vritrasur ko mila mrityu dand.


Ye bol vishal jyoti rupi shakti ne karan ko apni muthi m bich uthaya or apna mukh khol liya.


Sonam rote hue :- ni di ruk jaoye aP esa ni ker sakti .


Sab dev bhi jyoti ko rukne ki vinti kerne lage per jyoti ne kisi k ek na suni or agle hi pal karan ko muh me rakh nigal liya.


Sonam :- niiiiiii.....


Chilate hue behosh ho gayi , jise eekh kaya or preety usko sambhalne dodi or wo dono bhi buri tarah ro rahi thi karn ka ye hashr dekh.


Wahi karan ko nigalne k baad jyoti pahale khub hasi.


Jyoti '- ab hua asli nyaay , sab apradhio ko dand mil hi gaya hahaha.


Lekin achanak jab jyoti ka gussa shant hua or uska khud per niyantran aaya to usko ahasas hote hi ki abhi usne abhi kya kiya uski jordar chikh nikal uthi .


Jyoti dard bhari chikh k sath :- niiiiiiiiiiii, ye mene kya ker dalaa.


Isi chikh k sath jyoti ka gor varn dhuye jesa kal padme laga , uske laal sunder suhag k vastra safed rang m tabdil ho gaye or uska sara shringar or gahane gayab ho gaye or wo ek 60 sal ki bhudi orat jesi dikhne lagi.


Or samsaar k samne aayi


Vidhwa ruupp jyoti


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indra ko lagbhag harane hetu apna ek shaktishali ashtra nikalte hue .


Lobhasur :- bas bahut ho gaya , ab waqt aagaya h khel ko khatam kerne ka.


Abhi ye bol lobhasur ne apna ashtra chala deta h or ashtra bas Devraj se takrane hi wala tha ki usse pahale ashtra or Devraj k bich ek jordar hua jiske sath udi dhul ne charo or ek baar andhkar sa ker dala , jiske kaaran kisi ko kuch ni dikhayi de raha tha .


Or jab wo dhua hata to samne ka najar dekh lobhasur heran ho gaya kyu ki uska shaktishali ashtra ko samne mojud ladki ne raste m hi rok apne hatho m ese pakad liya jese koi bacha koi ball catch kerta h.


Ladki us ashtra ko todte hue :- khel to abhi shuru hua h Munna.


Lobhasur :- e dusahasi teri ye majal ki tune mera ashtra toda , esa ker tune apni mrityu ko lalkara h.


Parantu isse pahale ki m tera ant keru , usse purv m janana chahunga ki kon ho tum or kis kul se h tu , kon h tera pita , dikhne or baat k andaaz se to kisi raj kul se kisi bade yodha ki beti najar aati ho,


Ladki haste hue :- tu ek tuch rakshas mera vadh karega , mere kul or pita ka naam sunega to yahi dhoti gili ker bethega.


Janna chahta h to sun , m hu tritya or brahamrakdhaso ki rani preety , or m usi mahan samraat ki putri hu , jiske aage tum jese asur sir jhukaye khade rahte the.


Preety ka parichay pa ker ek baar to lobhasur ek baar to ghabra gaya , kyunki samraat or Vrushali dono hi mahashakti the or preety ne un dono ko Haraker unki shakti hasil ki thi.


Wahi dusri or


Shitasur ne jese hi agni Dev per prahar kerne ki koshis ki thi usi samay ek tir uper aasaman ki or se aaker dhamake k sath uske hatho se takrata h or uski gada dur jaker girti h.


Or ye prahar kisi or ne ni kaya ne kiya tha, jo pas k ek ped p khadhi thi , or wo turant ped se kud agni Dev or shitasur k bich m aagayi.


Shitasur :- e ladki kon h tu, or tera itna dusahahas ki tune mujhpe shitasur p vaar kiya, kher chodo ladki ho isliye bhul samjh ker ek avsar de raha hu , bhag jao yaha se.


Kaya :- avsar to m tumhe deti hu murkh asur ager prano ki raksha chahte ho to abhi apne bhaiyo or sena ko leker nikal jao , kahi esa na ho ki tumhare bade bhai vritrasur ko ek sath apne 3 no bhaiyo ko kandha dena pade.


Shitasur kaya k swar sun k gusse se tar batar ho gaya or chilaya or apne hathiyar le saj ho gaya kaya se yudh kerne .


Shitasur dhanush leker :- murkh ladki mane to avsar diya tha tujhe apne prano ki raksha ka lekin tu ni mani , ab mrityu k liye saj hoja.


Kaya :- kon kiski mrityu banega wo to samay hi batayega shitasur,tum apne muh ki jagah apne shastra chalao , kyu ki ye yidhbhumi hai yaha bate muh se ni shastro se ki jati h.


Ye bol kaya ne shitasur per ek or tir choda , lekin shitasur bhi teyar tha usne bhi apne dhanush se ban chala kaya k tir ko roka or start hua mahasangram.


Wahi dusri or


Preety or lobashur k bich bhi talvar yudh start ho gaya tha , lobhasur bhi ek Kushal talvar baaz tha.


Dono ki talvare aapas m takra rahi to mano utpan hui dhavani bijli si garjana so pratit hoti.


Lobhasur preety k pero per vaar kerta h lekin preety uchal ker use Dodge kerte hue boli.


Preety :- chal achi thi , per afsos ager mujhe harana h to kuch naya kerna hoga.


Lobhasur preety ki talvar p jor dete hue :- Gaddar ladki kesi asur h tu , ek asur ho ker asur ho ker asuro k khilaf lad rahi h wo bhi in devo ki raksha k liya , kesi tritiya h tu..


Preety lobhasur k pet m kohni mar use piche dhakel :- ha m asur ni hu , ni hu tum jesi asur jo shakti k ahankaar m nirbalo ko satate h or adharm felate h.


Are m to wo asur hu , jinke aadarsh bhakt Prahalad or raja bali jese mahan aatmaye h jinhone dharm ka sath deker asuro ka nam roshan kiya tum jese ni jinhone asuro ka naam ek baar fir kalankit ker dala or iski saja tumhe ye tritiya ki rani avashya degi.


Ye bol badi tezi k sath preety ne lobhasur per vaar kerna shuru ker diya , preety ki brahamrakshas or trityao ki mix shakti k aage lobhasur tik ni pa raha tha.


Tab usne jab ye paya ki bal se uska kam ni banne wala to usne chal ka sahara shuru kiya .


Lobhasur :- preety ye insano k sath deker tumhe bhala kya milega, hum asuro ka sath do , bhaiya vritrasur tumhe is sansaar ki sabse dhanvan ladki bana denge iske badle me, pure sansaar m tumse ameer koi na hoga.


Lobhasur jese jese ye bol raha tha , uske sath sath hi uska maya ka prabhav bhi preety p padne laga.


Lobhasur :- socho preety. Tumhare pass sone chandi hire jwaharat sab honge, jo chahogi wo milega tumhe.


Lobhasur ki maya ka asar dhire dhire dhire Preety p ho raha tha , uski ankho k samne ek esa bharamjal (illustion) prakat hua mano uske aas pas apaar dhan dolat jama h , jise dekh uski khushi thikana na raha, wo un gahano ko utha utha k pahane lagi or sath m unko niharne lagi


Lekin us illusion se hat ker sach to ye tha ki jese jese un gahano k moh m wo pad un sone ko chu rahi thi , ya unhe pahan rahi thi , wese wese asal m wo lobhasur k mayavi pash m bandh rahu thi.


Jesa ki abhi tak k safar m AAPNE preety ko jana hoga uss hisab se aapko bhi herani ho rahi hogi ki preety kab se itni lalchi ho gayi .


Per ye preety ka lalach ni balki lobhasur ki maya thi , jo apne naam k anukul kisi k ander bhi maya ka sanchar ker use bharast ker deti thi.


Wahi dusri or


Shitasur or kaya ka bhi yudh bhi kafi bhishn chal raha tha dono k kaman se nikle bhishn ashtro ki takrahat se asman se aag baras rahi thi.


Shitasur ne jab dekha ki kaya use barabar takar de rahi h to uske man m vichar aaya..


Shitasur :- kuch to kerna hi padega mujhe , ni to esa hi chalta raha to ye ladki jald hi mujhper bhari padne lagegi.


Tabhi kuch sochker uske chahare pe ek kutil muskaan aagayi tabhi usne apne Dhanush ko uper ki or apni pratyancha khichi , or kuch mantra budbudaya , jiske sath hi ek safed baan pratyancha per pragat hui.


Shitasur teer kaya ki or chodte hue :- ladki ab mere is prahar se bach ker dikha.


Ye bol usne badi hi tezi se wo teer kaya ki or chod diya , us teer ki gati itni tivr thi ki kaya ko koi moka hi ni mila.


Us ek tir ne kayi tiro ka roop le liya or hawa me kaya uper charo or ghumne lage , jiske sath hi un tiro se baraf ki havaye nikalne lagi or un hawao ne bawander ka roop le liya, jisse kaya us bawandar se charo or ghir gayi or kuch hi palo m wo baraf m jam gayi.


Shitasur :- haha dekh liya ladki shitasur se bhidne ka anzaam , ab meri Shital maya tumhe shigra hi samaapt ker degi.


Ye bol wo zor zor se hasne laga.


Wahi dusri or


Kaya or preety ka halat dekh Sonam chintit ho uthi or boli.


Sonam :- ye kya di , preety bhabbhi or kaya didi ko to in dushto ne apni maya me faas liya h , ab hum kya karenge .


Jyoti aaj pahali baar khud ko itna asahay feel ker rahi thi.


Jyoti hath jod prathna kerte hue :- hey bhole nath, hey durga , ab aap hi humari raksha ker sakti ho ma , apni beti ki raksha kero maa , raksha kero.


Jyoti jese hi prathna kerti h to uske sharir chamakne laga or usse do shaktipunj nikal ker ranbhumi ki or jane lage.


Ek shaktipunj jaker preety me sama gaya or lobhfas me fasi preety ko ek aawaz sunayi dene lagi.


Awaz :- bhabhi .


Preety :- jyoti di...


Ji ha ye aawaz jyoti ki hi thi, jo uske anterman se nikli thi .


Jyoti :- bhabhi ye aP kya ker rahi h , is dusht asur ki chal m kese fas sakte h aP , is lobhasur ne aapper apni maya ka upyog kiya h , aap ko shighr hi is maya ko todna hoga, bhabhi dikhana hoga is asur ko ki meri bhabhi kya chij h.


Jyoti ki aawaz se preety ko hosh aajata h or use abhas ho jata h ki use shighr hi is maya ko todna hoga.


Tabhi usne ankh band ki or apne tez ko bahar nikalna aarambh ker diya or preety k tez k asar k sath hi lobhasur ka mayavi pash ek vishfot k sath nasht hoga


Lobhasur heran hoker :- ni ye ni ho sakta , meri maya ko todna asambhav h...


Preety :- beta kya kya sambhav h abhi tak tumne dekha hi kaha h.


Ye bol preety ek baar firse lobhasur k uper ranchandi ban tut padi.


Wahi dusri or


Wo dusra shaktipunj us baraf k pahad m enter ker kaya k tan pe sama gaya.


Or uske sath hi ek vishfot us baraf k pahad m hua or kaya aajad ho gayi .


Or ab wo apne asli roop yani vampire roop m thi , lekin us shaktipunj ne kaya ko or bhi jyada shaktishali bana dala tha or uske vastra bhi ab purn roop se badal chuke the jiska praman tha uski pith per lage naye pankh jo bahut Vishal the , jo praman the ki ab kaya vampires ki sabse highest rank p pahunch chuke the jo thi vampire angel , jo sabhi vampire ki queen hoti h.



Shitasur :- asambhav itni prachand shitalata se bachna to asambhav tha .


Kaya :- murkh asur tum bhul gaye , vampire to khud thande ilako k nivasi hote h , sardi unka kuch ni bigad sakti .


Or jinke sath maa Durga ka ashirwad ho unka to sansar ki koi shakti kuch ni bigad sakte .


(Kaya ne esa isliye kaha tha kyunki wo jab barf me kaid thi , tab thand to uska kuch ni bigad pa rahi thi , lekin shitasur ki maya ko wo tod hi ni pa rahi thi.


Tabhi waha ek prakashpunj aapahunch or usne ma bhawani ka roop dharan ker liya.


Kaya us Akriti ko dekh khush or heran ho bol uthi :- maaa ! Pranam maa.


Maa :- putri kaya hum tumhari veerta or dharm ki prati nishta se ati prasan h putri , isliye hum swayam tumhe wo shakti pradan kerne aayi h , jiski tum na keval adhikarini ho apitu is mahayudh m dharm ki vijay k liye tumhe inki avshayakta bhi h..


Ye bol ma ne apna ek hath varmudra me lati or jiske sath hi unke hath se ek roshni nikal kaya m sama jati h or uske sath hi kaya m shakti ka sanchar hone laga.


Or aage jo hua wo aapke samne h .)


Kaya itna bol apne pankho ko fela ek hi bar me tez jhatke k sath aasman m pahunch gayi or uske sath hi usne apna hath uper kiya jiske sath hi ek Dhanush uske hath me aGaya or us Dhanush se jo usne choda wo ek sath hi hazaro m tabdil ho danav sena pe agni varsha kerne lagi.


Dhire dhire kaya or preety ne adhi se jyada asur sena ka sanghar ker dala or uske sath hi ab lobhasur or shitasur bhi ab thK chuke the, wo buri tarah ghayal bhi ho gaye the or unkr sabhi shastra or astra bhi kat chuke the.


Ye sab dekh jyoti or sonam khush bhi hui or heran bhi


Wahi dusri or


Rohan ye sab seen dekh ker heran tha


Rohan :- bhai ye sab kesi maya h , abhi tak jo bazi harti hui hume nazar aarahi thi , wo achanak palat kese gayi or ye kaya k roop ye sab kese


Karan :- tumhare is sawal ka bhi wahi jwab h mere dost jo m ab tak kah raha hu jyoti.


Rohan :- jyoti ?


Karan :- ha jyoti , vritrasur or uske bhaiyo ne nari shakti ko kamzor samjh apne mange gaye vardan m yahi manga tha n k koi purush na kar sake .


To aaj nari shakti ki mahima jyoti ne anjane m hi sahi lekin sansaar ko dikha diya h , ki nari yadi karuna or mamta ki murat h to shakti swarupa bhi h.


Jese Jab preety bhabhi lobhasur ki maya m fasi tab jyoti ne hi unki shakti ban unhe us maya se bahar nikala.


Jese sakhi kaya ko apni bhakti ki shakti se usko uske sampoorn shakti pradan kerwayi .


Aur ab intezar h to us samay ka jab jyoti ko apni vastvik shkto ka aabhas hoga or ant hoga vritrasur ka.


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kisi bhi samay kaya or preety un dono ka ant kerne hi wali thi.


Apne bhaiyo ki halat dekh 3sra bhai yani ki bhandasur jo itni der se yudh dekh raha tha ab unhe chinta satane lagi.


Bhandasur :- ager esa hi chalta raha ho to ye dusht ladkiya mere bhaiyo ko mar dalegi , lagta h ab mera ranbhumi m jane ka samay aagaya h.


Ye bol usne apna Dhanush uthaya or ek shakti baan jiska prahar devo k liye bhi Ghatak sidh ho sakta tha , wo kaman per sandhan ker nishana ker preety ki or chod dala .


Per isse pahale ki wo baan preety tak pahunch pata usse pahale hi kisi ne wo baan kisi ne bich me rok liya or apni muthi m bhich tinke ki bhanti tod dala


Bhandasur ne jab us vyakti ko dekha to uski herani ki sima na rahi , kyunki wo shaks koi sadharan manushya ya dev ni tha , uska roop vikral tha or usne bhaghmber pahana hua tha , or uski height 10 foot se bhi jyada hogi.


Bhandasur :- mere baan ko rokne wale dusht kon ho tum .


Vyakti :- tum jese dushto ka ant kerne k liye , bhagwan rudra k param bhakt dandnyak ki rachna hu m , veer rudra hu m..


Ye bol ek bhayank singh garjna ki us vyakti ne.


Ji ha dosto ye wahi veer rudra tha , jise karn ne samadhi jane se purb niyukt kiya tha , samay aane per jyoti or sab devo ki sahayta k liye.


Bhandasur :- tu chahe koi bhi ho , lekin tu ab mere hatho ni bachega.


Ye bol wo apne rath se uter ke aagaya or bina kisi hathiyar k hi rudrveer se malyudh kerne bhid gaya.


Wo malyudh kafi bhishn hone laga bada shighr hi kyunki bhandasur bhi kam shaktishali na tha usme 100 hathiyo thi janm se hi.


Dono hi ek dusre per mukke or late barsa rahe the , kabhi veer rudra bhandasur pe mukke barsata to kabhi bhandasur veer rudra per.


Yudh kerte hue bhandasur ka dhayan vese bhi khud yudh se jyada apne bhaio k pas pahuchne per tha .


Kyumki jaha ek taraf preety se apni talvar katwa lobhasur preety se buri tarah pit raha tha, muke or ghuso se.


Wahi dusri or kaya ne bhi shitasur ka dhanush kat diya tha or sath hi uske sarthi samet uska rath bhi nasht ho chuka tha


Shitasur ko ab apna kaal najjar araha tha , jo ghamandi shitasur or uske bhai nari ko aaj tak apne pao ki juti samjhte aaye the , aaj unhi nari k samne apne prano ki bhik mangne ki nobat aan padi thi usper.


Or usne esa hi kiya.


Shitasur kaya se :- devi , mujhe shama ker do devi , m vada kerta hu ki m yaha se sab chod patal lot jaunga or kabhi wapas apni shakal ni dikhaunga.


Kaya :- shama or tujh jese hevan ko jinhone humesha nari ko apne pao ki juti samjha , jisne na jane kitni abla asur ho ya insani nari ho , unki ijat luti , kadapi ni shitasur , is sansaar m har apradh ki shama mil sakti h , lekin nari ki ijjat p hath dalne wale ko to bhagwan bhi shama ni kerta , m to fir bhi ek vampire hu.


Ye bol kaya ne aasman se ek tir choda shitasur per jisse uska ek hath kat ker gir gaya.


Jis kaaran uska dard se bura haal ho gaya or apne bhai ka ye haal dekh bhandasur chila utha.


Bhandasur :- bhaiiii shit niiiii....


Ye bol wo apne bhai k pas jane ki koshish kerta h lekin usse pahale hi veer rudra use piche se pith se pakad ker use utha k dur fek dala .


Veer rudra :- apne bhai ki chinta chod murkh , pahale khud ki to raksha ker le


Bhandasur :- kaminr aaj tum sab me se kisi ko jivit ni chodunga m.


Ye bol bhanda sur fir se bhid gaya veer rudra se.


Wahi dusri or preety ne bhi ab khel samapt kerne ka nirnay leliya.


Preety :- bas ,ab bahut hua khel apne ant ko sajj ho ja dusht.


Ye bol preety 4 kadam piche leti h or fir bhag k ek uchi chalang k sath lobhasur ka sir dhad se alag ker deti h.


Or sath m usi samay kaya bhi apne ban se shitasur k dono hath katne k baad usko yamlok ki yatra p pahuncha deti h.


Apne dono bhaiyo ki mrityu dekh bhandasur buri tarah bhokla gaya tha.


Bhandasur :- niiiiii.......


Pahale to wo kafi der rota raha lekin baad m gusse se aag babula ho chilaya.


Bhandasur :- bas bahut hua tum sab dusht sab jis kaaran se hum se yudh ker rahe ho , or jis kaaran aj mere bhaiyo ka vadh tum ne kiya h naa , pratishodh swarup m us kaaran , is kutil ladki ka hi ant ker dunga.


Ye bat bhandasur ne jyoti ki or ishara kerte hue kahi.


Ye bol usne apne Dhanush ko jaldi se jaker rath se uthaya or us ashtra ka avahan kiya jiska naam sun sab dar gaye or chintit ho uthe.


Bhandasur :- bahut guman h na tumhe apni shaktio ka dushto ab dekhta hu kese raksha kerte ho tum is ladki mere is brahmastra se.


Ji ha Dosto bhandasur ne atyant vinashkari brahamatra ka avahan kiya tha jo usne kathor tap se Praapt kiya tha


Usne wo turant jyoti ki or chod diya , jiske kaaran sab bhaybhit ho uthe ki ab kya hoga.


Lekin brahamastra jyoti k jese hi karib pahuncha to samne ka najara dekh sabki ankhe chodi hi gayi , brahamastra jyoti k samksh aa apne aap hi ruk gaya.


Jisse jyoti bhi ek baar chonk gayi , lekin agle hi pal unhe wo pranam kerti h or sath m brahhmdev ki stuti bhi kerti h .


Lekin sabse herani ki baat to tab hui jab brahamastra ne bhi jyoti k ander se nikle us samay nikal mahatez ko pranam ker swatah hi gayab ho gaya.


Bhandasur :- asambhav ye ni ho sakta koi bhi mahan brahamastra nishfal ni ho sKta.


Veer rudra :- murkh asur jaha bhakti or prem ki shakti or dharm paksh m ho to deviy shakti bhi unka hi sath deti h .


Ab samay aagaya h tujhe bhi tere bhaiyo k pas pahuchane ka.


Ye bolte hue veer rudra buri tarah bhandasur p tut pada or use mar mar k adhmara ker dala.


Ab veer rudra ne jese hi apne antim prahar k liye apni talvar uthayi , tabhi ek jordar prahar aaker use laga or wo bahut dur ja gira or uske sath hi aasman se ek vishfot k sath kuch ranbhumi m enter hua or jab dhua hata to sabhi devo ka bhay se bura haal ho gaya or asuro m khushi ki lahar uth gayi.


Bhandasur bhi khushi se :- bhaiyaa aap aagaye.


Ha dosto apne bhaiyo ki mrityu ka jab vritrasur ko gyaat hua to uski krodh ki sima na rahi or wo usi shan yudh ko saj ho ranbhumi me saj ho aagaya.


Vritrasur bhandassur ko uthate hue :- tum thik to ho na anuj.


Bhandasur rote hue :- bhaiya m to thik hu , per humare bhaiii (siskte hue ) bhaiya kisi ko jinda mat chodna bhaiya kisi ko kat chodna.


Vritrasur nam gusse se bhari ankho se :- esa hi hoga chote.


(Jyoti ki or dekhte hue ) dushta , inke dam per hi tu itni uchal rahi h n kamini , aaj inka ant ker tujhe balo se ghasit ker m apne mahal leker jaunga or apni rakhail banaunga , tab hi kere bhaiyo ki shanti milegi.


Veer rudra gusse se :- vritrasur tera itna dusahas ki tumne inke bare m ese apshabd kahe ab tu jivit ni bachega.


Ye kahate hue veer rudra vritrasur se bhid gaya , lekin adisshakti k vardan ki shakti ka kavach bahut jyada shaktishali tha vritrasur ne badi asani se veer rudra ko ghayal ker prajit ker dala.


Or jyoti ki or bhadne laga tabhi veer rudra ko harta dekh preeety or kaya bhi uske samaksh aapahunchi.


Unhe dekh bhandasur bola :- bhaiya yahi h wo dono kaminiya jinhone humare bhaiyo ka vadh kiya h , inhe chodiyega ni.


Preety :- Kon kise chodega kise ni wo to abhi pata chal jayega dusht.


Ye bol preety or kaya bhi apne ashtra shastro ne se vritrasur per prahar kerne lagi , lekin ye kya unka har ek prahar vritrasur k kawach se takra ess gir rahe the jese mano koi rubber ki ball ho.


Tabhi vritrasur ne apne bade se vajra ko ghuma k preety or kaya p ek jabardast vaar kiya jo itna bhishn tha ki us prahar se dono hi ardh murcha m pahunch gayi.


Vritrasur :- chote in dono ne hi humare bhaiyo ka ant ker hume kalankit kiya h na ab badle ks samay h , ab hum yaha ranbhumi m hi indono ki ijjat lut inhe esa kalankit karenge ki ye khud mrityu ki bhik mangengi


Bhandasur shetani hasi k sath :- hahaha to shubh kam m deri kesi bhaiyaaa.


Ye bol wo dono bhai jese hi hawas bhari najaro k sath un dono k pas pahunche tabhi ek bhayank singh garjana sunayi di or agle hi pal ek jordar shakti prahar undono ko utha k dur fek deta h


Or is humle kerne wale ko jab sab dekhte h to sab chonk jate h kyunki ye prahar kisi or ne ni khud dandnayika jyoti ne kiya tha.


Jyoti jiske kesh hawa me ud rahe the or ankhe khun jesi laal ho gayi thi , wo sher ki tarah dahadti hui ranbhumi me pravesh kerti hui boli.


Jyoti :- bas vritrasur is kukritya k bare m soch ker hi tune paap ka ghada bhar liya h dusht , ab tera ant or koi ni swayam m ho karungi.


Hua darasl ye tha ki apne bhai k ansh per prahar hota dekh jyoti ka krodh jagrit hone laga or jab usne dekha ki vritrasur kya giri hui harkat kerne ja raha h to uske gusse ka jwala mukhi fat gaya or wo yydh bhumi m kid padi.


Vritrasur '- din m khwab dekhna acha ni h ladki , jaha mujhe teri ye gadaar asur sahayika ni kuch bigad saki to tu kis khet ki muli h , tu ni janti to jan le mujhe adishakti ka vardan h mujhe unke alaw or koi ni mar sakta.


Jyoti :- tujhe adishakti ma ka vardan h na dush to le ab tera ant k liye m unka hi avahan kerungi.


Ye bol jyoti ne apni ankhe band ker dali or usike sath hi jyoti k sharir se ek divya prakash nikal charo or felne laga , usko dekh esa pratit ho raha tha ki mano dharti per surya uter aaya ho.


Or dhore dhire ker sabhi devo k ander se ek tez punj nikal us prakash me samamane laga or karan k sharir se bhi esa hi ek punj nikal unme


Us prakash ko dekh karan k chahre pe bhi muskan aGayi or wo apni seat se uth gaya


Or jab wo prakash hata to jyoti ka ek naya roop is sansaar k samaksh aaya jise dekh jaha vritrasur chokne k sath bhaybhit ho utha wahi sabhi devo samet karan bhi unhe hath jod sharadha se pranam kerta h


Kyunki jyoti ka wo roop koi or ni balki sakshat maa adishakti ki prativimb tha , jiske 10 hath the jinme nana prakar k ashtra shastra shushobhit the.


Jyoti ma adishakti ki aawaz :- nari ko kamzor samjh tune mujhse ye var manga tha na murkh ki tera vadh usi nari k hatho ho jisme meri samast shaktiya ho ke to le mene teri ye icha bhi puri ker daali.


Vritrasur :- ni ye sambhav ni h , ye chal h tera kulta , mujhe bhaybhit kerne ka chal , lekin tu ye sab khel dikha vritrasur ko ni dara sakti , ab dekh vritrasur ki shakti .


Ye bol vritrasur ne jyoti per ek jordar prahar kiya apni gada ko fek lekin jyoti ne bhi apne ek hath m sushobhit gada ko feka jisne ek second m vritrasur ki gada ko tod dala .


Jise dekh vritrasur bhokla gaya or wo apni talvaar leker jyoti ki ir doda , tab jyoti ne bhi apne 2 hath ko chod baki hatho ko gayab ker talvar le dod padi vritrasur se bhidne .


Or shuru hua ek bhayank yudh jisme un dono ki takrane se esi dhawani utpan ho rahi thi jese bijli kadak rahi ho.


Sab devo ki ab jyoti or vritrasur pe hi najar thi or wahi dusri or sonam kaya or preety ka upchar ker rahi thi.


Vahi ye sab najara dekh bhandasur waha se bhagne ko hua lekin veer Rudra ne use rok liya or haste hue bola.


Veer rudra :- are are yuvraj aap kaha chal diye abhi humara yudh shesh h , akhir aapko bhi to apkr bhaio k pas pahuchana h , taki 3no bhsi milker nark m apne bade bhai sahab k agman ki teyari ker sako.


Bhandasur bhokla ker :- chodunga ni tujhe kamine.


Ye bol wo fir se veet rudra se bhid gaya .


Wahi dusri or


Shera ki lagayi hui canon me shitasur or lobhasur k vadh k sath prakat huo energy bhi aaker samahit ho gayi thi or wo 60% charge ho chuki thi.


Shera haste hie :- bas ek vadh or , or fir humne koi ni rok payega.


Wahi ranbhumi m vritrasur ki talvar ko ek jordar prahar k sath kat usne ek jordar laat vritrasur k sine pe mari jisse wo dur ja gira .


Lekin shigr hi wo uth khada hua or tarah tarah k ashtra shastra jyoti per fekne laga.


Lekin jyoti ne apne teero se sabko katne lagi.


Vahi bhandasur ka bhi ant najdik aagaya tha or veer rudra ne jese hi uska ant kerme apna ghatak prahar kerna chaha to uske man me karn ki aawaz sunayi di.


Karan :- ruk jao veer rudra. , Abhi iska vadh ja samay ni aaya h , esa brahama ji ne mujhe sanesh bheja , ese m tumhe ise pran dan dena hoga.


Veer rudra :- per swami ager mane abhi iska vadh ni kiya to.


Karan '- m janta hu ki tum apmi jagah sahi ho veer rudra , per hum brahmdev ki agya ko tal shrushti k niyam ni tod sakte , lekin ye yudh m dakhal na de iske liye tum ise utha ker antrik si gaharaiyo m fek di , jisse ye marg se bhi hat jaye or iska vadh bhi na ho


Veer rudra :- jo aagya swami , ye bol veer rudra ne bhandasur ne bhandasur ko pero se pakad itni jor se utha ke ghuma ker feka ki wo asman m ja gayab ho gaya.


Wahi dusri or vritrasur ne jab apne sare ashtra shastra vifal hote dekhe to usne apna asli roop yani ek vishal 100 ft uche bhese ka roop dharan ker apne singho ko jyoty ki or ker jordar takkar marne k liye doda


Or jese hi ye drishya kfd ne dekha to unhone sabhi graho ko ishara ker diya or shuru hua vritrasur ka mrityu yog .


Vritrasur ko apni or aata dekh jyoti bhi vishal rup dharan ker uski or dodi or jese hi vritrasur jyoti ki or pahunch usper prahar kerne hus jyoti uchal ker apne per se uske sir ko kuchal dharti per patak deti h or ek jordar garjana k sath apne dado hatho ko prakat kerte hue ek jordar chikh k sath apne hath me mojud trishul ko vritrasur k sine m ghop diya jo is waqt adha bhesa or adha asur rup m mojud tha .


Or jese hi vo trishul uske sine m ghusa to uske muh se bas itna hi nikla.


Vritrasur :- shama kerdena mujhe devi.


Or ye bol uske oran pakheru ho uthe or jese hi ye hua to devo m khushi ki lahar uth gayi or wo jor shor se jai mata ki or har har mahadev k nare lagane lage.


Lekin jaha sab khush the waha karan ab serious ho gaya tha.


Rohan :- bhai ab tu itna pareshan kyu h, humari gudiya ne akhir wo ker hi dikhaya jiska hume kabse intezaar tha , to ab ye pareshani kesi.


Karan :- ye pareshani aane wali us bhishn samasya ka h bhai , jisko ager mand na roka to sansar m pralay tay h ye bol kuch baat samjhate hue karan ne sirf itna bola.


Karan :- yad rakhna dost jaha sansar ki sari shakti vifal ho jati h waha ek hi shakti kam aati h bhakti ki shakti.


Ye bol karan waha se gayab ho gaya.


Wahi dusri or


Ranbhumi me


Karan ki chinta ka kaaran ab samjh asne laga tha. ,kyumki jyoti ka krodh vritrasur k ant k baad bhi shant na hua tha , jis kaaran wo out of control ho gayi or charo or apne ashtra shastra se tabahi machane lagi.


Devraj use rokne ki koshis kerte hue :- putri jyoti shant ho jao , us dusht ka ant tum ker chuki ho ab apne vastvik swarup m lot aso beti , lot aao.


Sab dev ese hi jyoti ko shant kerne ki koshis kerne m lage hue the or sonam bhi.


Tabhi vaha karan prakat hua , jise dekh sonam bhag k uske pas gayi or boli.


Sonam ghabra gayi :- dekhiye na bhai di ko kya ho gaya h ab aap hi unhe shant ker sakte ho bhai , please kuch kijiye.


Devraj '- ha putra karn putri sonam uchit kah rahi h , is sansar m jyoti ko ager koi shabt ker sakta h to wo keval tum ho putra.


Karn kuch ni bolta or ha m gardan hila jyoti ki or bhada or bola.


Karan :- jyoti meri guduya mujhe garv h tumper , tumne aaj sidh ker diya ki nari shakti ager chahe to kuch asambhav ni , ab apna krodh tyago meri gudiya or aao apne bhaiya k gale ni lagogi.


Lekin ye kya karan ko dekh jyoti shant hone k bajjay or gussa ho gayi or chilayi.


Jyoti :- ni karn aaj m shant ni hone wLi , khasker ki jab tak , jab tak m tumhe dandit na ker du.


Sonam herani se :- di ye aap kya bol rahi ho dand or bhai ko , aakhir kyu unki bhala kya galti h , ya unhone galat kiya.


Jyoti :- inka sabse bada apradh kuch na kerna hi to h Sonam ye chahte to is mahasanghar ko rok sakte the , mujhe jagrit ker per ni inhone vinash ka marg chuna jinke na jane kitne senik aakaran marw , isliye yadi ager is mahavinash ka jimedar vritrasur tha to ye bhi h.


Karan :- ager aapki najar m m vhi apradhi hu devi to mujhe aapka har diya hua dand swikar h .


Ye bol karan jhuk ker hath jod ket beth .


Jyoti '- tumhe bhi vahi dand milega dandnyak jo vritrasur ko mila mrityu dand.


Ye bol vishal jyoti rupi shakti ne karan ko apni muthi m bich uthaya or apna mukh khol liya.


Sonam rote hue :- ni di ruk jaoye aP esa ni ker sakti .


Sab dev bhi jyoti ko rukne ki vinti kerne lage per jyoti ne kisi k ek na suni or agle hi pal karan ko muh me rakh nigal liya.


Sonam :- niiiiiii.....


Chilate hue behosh ho gayi , jise eekh kaya or preety usko sambhalne dodi or wo dono bhi buri tarah ro rahi thi karn ka ye hashr dekh.


Wahi karan ko nigalne k baad jyoti pahale khub hasi.


Jyoti '- ab hua asli nyaay , sab apradhio ko dand mil hi gaya hahaha.


Lekin achanak jab jyoti ka gussa shant hua or uska khud per niyantran aaya to usko ahasas hote hi ki abhi usne abhi kya kiya uski jordar chikh nikal uthi .


Jyoti dard bhari chikh k sath :- niiiiiiiiiiii, ye mene kya ker dalaa.


Isi chikh k sath jyoti ka gor varn dhuye jesa kal padme laga , uske laal sunder suhag k vastra safed rang m tabdil ho gaye or uska sara shringar or gahane gayab ho gaye or wo ek 60 sal ki bhudi orat jesi dikhne lagi.


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indra ko lagbhag harane hetu apna ek shaktishali ashtra nikalte hue .


Lobhasur :- bas bahut ho gaya , ab waqt aagaya h khel ko khatam kerne ka.


Abhi ye bol lobhasur ne apna ashtra chala deta h or ashtra bas Devraj se takrane hi wala tha ki usse pahale ashtra or Devraj k bich ek jordar hua jiske sath udi dhul ne charo or ek baar andhkar sa ker dala , jiske kaaran kisi ko kuch ni dikhayi de raha tha .


Or jab wo dhua hata to samne ka najar dekh lobhasur heran ho gaya kyu ki uska shaktishali ashtra ko samne mojud ladki ne raste m hi rok apne hatho m ese pakad liya jese koi bacha koi ball catch kerta h.


Ladki us ashtra ko todte hue :- khel to abhi shuru hua h Munna.


Lobhasur :- e dusahasi teri ye majal ki tune mera ashtra toda , esa ker tune apni mrityu ko lalkara h.


Parantu isse pahale ki m tera ant keru , usse purv m janana chahunga ki kon ho tum or kis kul se h tu , kon h tera pita , dikhne or baat k andaaz se to kisi raj kul se kisi bade yodha ki beti najar aati ho,


Ladki haste hue :- tu ek tuch rakshas mera vadh karega , mere kul or pita ka naam sunega to yahi dhoti gili ker bethega.


Janna chahta h to sun , m hu tritya or brahamrakdhaso ki rani preety , or m usi mahan samraat ki putri hu , jiske aage tum jese asur sir jhukaye khade rahte the.


Preety ka parichay pa ker ek baar to lobhasur ek baar to ghabra gaya , kyunki samraat or Vrushali dono hi mahashakti the or preety ne un dono ko Haraker unki shakti hasil ki thi.


Wahi dusri or


Shitasur ne jese hi agni Dev per prahar kerne ki koshis ki thi usi samay ek tir uper aasaman ki or se aaker dhamake k sath uske hatho se takrata h or uski gada dur jaker girti h.


Or ye prahar kisi or ne ni kaya ne kiya tha, jo pas k ek ped p khadhi thi , or wo turant ped se kud agni Dev or shitasur k bich m aagayi.


Shitasur :- e ladki kon h tu, or tera itna dusahahas ki tune mujhpe shitasur p vaar kiya, kher chodo ladki ho isliye bhul samjh ker ek avsar de raha hu , bhag jao yaha se.


Kaya :- avsar to m tumhe deti hu murkh asur ager prano ki raksha chahte ho to abhi apne bhaiyo or sena ko leker nikal jao , kahi esa na ho ki tumhare bade bhai vritrasur ko ek sath apne 3 no bhaiyo ko kandha dena pade.


Shitasur kaya k swar sun k gusse se tar batar ho gaya or chilaya or apne hathiyar le saj ho gaya kaya se yudh kerne .


Shitasur dhanush leker :- murkh ladki mane to avsar diya tha tujhe apne prano ki raksha ka lekin tu ni mani , ab mrityu k liye saj hoja.


Kaya :- kon kiski mrityu banega wo to samay hi batayega shitasur,tum apne muh ki jagah apne shastra chalao , kyu ki ye yidhbhumi hai yaha bate muh se ni shastro se ki jati h.


Ye bol kaya ne shitasur per ek or tir choda , lekin shitasur bhi teyar tha usne bhi apne dhanush se ban chala kaya k tir ko roka or start hua mahasangram.


Wahi dusri or


Preety or lobashur k bich bhi talvar yudh start ho gaya tha , lobhasur bhi ek Kushal talvar baaz tha.


Dono ki talvare aapas m takra rahi to mano utpan hui dhavani bijli si garjana so pratit hoti.


Lobhasur preety k pero per vaar kerta h lekin preety uchal ker use Dodge kerte hue boli.


Preety :- chal achi thi , per afsos ager mujhe harana h to kuch naya kerna hoga.


Lobhasur preety ki talvar p jor dete hue :- Gaddar ladki kesi asur h tu , ek asur ho ker asur ho ker asuro k khilaf lad rahi h wo bhi in devo ki raksha k liya , kesi tritiya h tu..


Preety lobhasur k pet m kohni mar use piche dhakel :- ha m asur ni hu , ni hu tum jesi asur jo shakti k ahankaar m nirbalo ko satate h or adharm felate h.


Are m to wo asur hu , jinke aadarsh bhakt Prahalad or raja bali jese mahan aatmaye h jinhone dharm ka sath deker asuro ka nam roshan kiya tum jese ni jinhone asuro ka naam ek baar fir kalankit ker dala or iski saja tumhe ye tritiya ki rani avashya degi.


Ye bol badi tezi k sath preety ne lobhasur per vaar kerna shuru ker diya , preety ki brahamrakshas or trityao ki mix shakti k aage lobhasur tik ni pa raha tha.


Tab usne jab ye paya ki bal se uska kam ni banne wala to usne chal ka sahara shuru kiya .


Lobhasur :- preety ye insano k sath deker tumhe bhala kya milega, hum asuro ka sath do , bhaiya vritrasur tumhe is sansaar ki sabse dhanvan ladki bana denge iske badle me, pure sansaar m tumse ameer koi na hoga.


Lobhasur jese jese ye bol raha tha , uske sath sath hi uska maya ka prabhav bhi preety p padne laga.


Lobhasur :- socho preety. Tumhare pass sone chandi hire jwaharat sab honge, jo chahogi wo milega tumhe.


Lobhasur ki maya ka asar dhire dhire dhire Preety p ho raha tha , uski ankho k samne ek esa bharamjal (illustion) prakat hua mano uske aas pas apaar dhan dolat jama h , jise dekh uski khushi thikana na raha, wo un gahano ko utha utha k pahane lagi or sath m unko niharne lagi


Lekin us illusion se hat ker sach to ye tha ki jese jese un gahano k moh m wo pad un sone ko chu rahi thi , ya unhe pahan rahi thi , wese wese asal m wo lobhasur k mayavi pash m bandh rahu thi.


Jesa ki abhi tak k safar m AAPNE preety ko jana hoga uss hisab se aapko bhi herani ho rahi hogi ki preety kab se itni lalchi ho gayi .


Per ye preety ka lalach ni balki lobhasur ki maya thi , jo apne naam k anukul kisi k ander bhi maya ka sanchar ker use bharast ker deti thi.


Wahi dusri or


Shitasur or kaya ka bhi yudh bhi kafi bhishn chal raha tha dono k kaman se nikle bhishn ashtro ki takrahat se asman se aag baras rahi thi.


Shitasur ne jab dekha ki kaya use barabar takar de rahi h to uske man m vichar aaya..


Shitasur :- kuch to kerna hi padega mujhe , ni to esa hi chalta raha to ye ladki jald hi mujhper bhari padne lagegi.


Tabhi kuch sochker uske chahare pe ek kutil muskaan aagayi tabhi usne apne Dhanush ko uper ki or apni pratyancha khichi , or kuch mantra budbudaya , jiske sath hi ek safed baan pratyancha per pragat hui.


Shitasur teer kaya ki or chodte hue :- ladki ab mere is prahar se bach ker dikha.


Ye bol usne badi hi tezi se wo teer kaya ki or chod diya , us teer ki gati itni tivr thi ki kaya ko koi moka hi ni mila.


Us ek tir ne kayi tiro ka roop le liya or hawa me kaya uper charo or ghumne lage , jiske sath hi un tiro se baraf ki havaye nikalne lagi or un hawao ne bawander ka roop le liya, jisse kaya us bawandar se charo or ghir gayi or kuch hi palo m wo baraf m jam gayi.


Shitasur :- haha dekh liya ladki shitasur se bhidne ka anzaam , ab meri Shital maya tumhe shigra hi samaapt ker degi.


Ye bol wo zor zor se hasne laga.


Wahi dusri or


Kaya or preety ka halat dekh Sonam chintit ho uthi or boli.


Sonam :- ye kya di , preety bhabbhi or kaya didi ko to in dushto ne apni maya me faas liya h , ab hum kya karenge .


Jyoti aaj pahali baar khud ko itna asahay feel ker rahi thi.


Jyoti hath jod prathna kerte hue :- hey bhole nath, hey durga , ab aap hi humari raksha ker sakti ho ma , apni beti ki raksha kero maa , raksha kero.


Jyoti jese hi prathna kerti h to uske sharir chamakne laga or usse do shaktipunj nikal ker ranbhumi ki or jane lage.


Ek shaktipunj jaker preety me sama gaya or lobhfas me fasi preety ko ek aawaz sunayi dene lagi.


Awaz :- bhabhi .


Preety :- jyoti di...


Ji ha ye aawaz jyoti ki hi thi, jo uske anterman se nikli thi .


Jyoti :- bhabhi ye aP kya ker rahi h , is dusht asur ki chal m kese fas sakte h aP , is lobhasur ne aapper apni maya ka upyog kiya h , aap ko shighr hi is maya ko todna hoga, bhabhi dikhana hoga is asur ko ki meri bhabhi kya chij h.


Jyoti ki aawaz se preety ko hosh aajata h or use abhas ho jata h ki use shighr hi is maya ko todna hoga.


Tabhi usne ankh band ki or apne tez ko bahar nikalna aarambh ker diya or preety k tez k asar k sath hi lobhasur ka mayavi pash ek vishfot k sath nasht hoga


Lobhasur heran hoker :- ni ye ni ho sakta , meri maya ko todna asambhav h...


Preety :- beta kya kya sambhav h abhi tak tumne dekha hi kaha h.


Ye bol preety ek baar firse lobhasur k uper ranchandi ban tut padi.


Wahi dusri or


Wo dusra shaktipunj us baraf k pahad m enter ker kaya k tan pe sama gaya.


Or uske sath hi ek vishfot us baraf k pahad m hua or kaya aajad ho gayi .


Or ab wo apne asli roop yani vampire roop m thi , lekin us shaktipunj ne kaya ko or bhi jyada shaktishali bana dala tha or uske vastra bhi ab purn roop se badal chuke the jiska praman tha uski pith per lage naye pankh jo bahut Vishal the , jo praman the ki ab kaya vampires ki sabse highest rank p pahunch chuke the jo thi vampire angel , jo sabhi vampire ki queen hoti h.



Shitasur :- asambhav itni prachand shitalata se bachna to asambhav tha .


Kaya :- murkh asur tum bhul gaye , vampire to khud thande ilako k nivasi hote h , sardi unka kuch ni bigad sakti .


Or jinke sath maa Durga ka ashirwad ho unka to sansar ki koi shakti kuch ni bigad sakte .


(Kaya ne esa isliye kaha tha kyunki wo jab barf me kaid thi , tab thand to uska kuch ni bigad pa rahi thi , lekin shitasur ki maya ko wo tod hi ni pa rahi thi.


Tabhi waha ek prakashpunj aapahunch or usne ma bhawani ka roop dharan ker liya.


Kaya us Akriti ko dekh khush or heran ho bol uthi :- maaa ! Pranam maa.


Maa :- putri kaya hum tumhari veerta or dharm ki prati nishta se ati prasan h putri , isliye hum swayam tumhe wo shakti pradan kerne aayi h , jiski tum na keval adhikarini ho apitu is mahayudh m dharm ki vijay k liye tumhe inki avshayakta bhi h..


Ye bol ma ne apna ek hath varmudra me lati or jiske sath hi unke hath se ek roshni nikal kaya m sama jati h or uske sath hi kaya m shakti ka sanchar hone laga.


Or aage jo hua wo aapke samne h .)


Kaya itna bol apne pankho ko fela ek hi bar me tez jhatke k sath aasman m pahunch gayi or uske sath hi usne apna hath uper kiya jiske sath hi ek Dhanush uske hath me aGaya or us Dhanush se jo usne choda wo ek sath hi hazaro m tabdil ho danav sena pe agni varsha kerne lagi.


Dhire dhire kaya or preety ne adhi se jyada asur sena ka sanghar ker dala or uske sath hi ab lobhasur or shitasur bhi ab thK chuke the, wo buri tarah ghayal bhi ho gaye the or unkr sabhi shastra or astra bhi kat chuke the.


Ye sab dekh jyoti or sonam khush bhi hui or heran bhi


Wahi dusri or


Rohan ye sab seen dekh ker heran tha


Rohan :- bhai ye sab kesi maya h , abhi tak jo bazi harti hui hume nazar aarahi thi , wo achanak palat kese gayi or ye kaya k roop ye sab kese


Karan :- tumhare is sawal ka bhi wahi jwab h mere dost jo m ab tak kah raha hu jyoti.


Rohan :- jyoti ?


Karan :- ha jyoti , vritrasur or uske bhaiyo ne nari shakti ko kamzor samjh apne mange gaye vardan m yahi manga tha n k koi purush na kar sake .


To aaj nari shakti ki mahima jyoti ne anjane m hi sahi lekin sansaar ko dikha diya h , ki nari yadi karuna or mamta ki murat h to shakti swarupa bhi h.


Jese Jab preety bhabhi lobhasur ki maya m fasi tab jyoti ne hi unki shakti ban unhe us maya se bahar nikala.


Jese sakhi kaya ko apni bhakti ki shakti se usko uske sampoorn shakti pradan kerwayi .


Aur ab intezar h to us samay ka jab jyoti ko apni vastvik shkto ka aabhas hoga or ant hoga vritrasur ka.


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kisi bhi samay kaya or preety un dono ka ant kerne hi wali thi.


Apne bhaiyo ki halat dekh 3sra bhai yani ki bhandasur jo itni der se yudh dekh raha tha ab unhe chinta satane lagi.


Bhandasur :- ager esa hi chalta raha ho to ye dusht ladkiya mere bhaiyo ko mar dalegi , lagta h ab mera ranbhumi m jane ka samay aagaya h.


Ye bol usne apna Dhanush uthaya or ek shakti baan jiska prahar devo k liye bhi Ghatak sidh ho sakta tha , wo kaman per sandhan ker nishana ker preety ki or chod dala .


Per isse pahale ki wo baan preety tak pahunch pata usse pahale hi kisi ne wo baan kisi ne bich me rok liya or apni muthi m bhich tinke ki bhanti tod dala


Bhandasur ne jab us vyakti ko dekha to uski herani ki sima na rahi , kyunki wo shaks koi sadharan manushya ya dev ni tha , uska roop vikral tha or usne bhaghmber pahana hua tha , or uski height 10 foot se bhi jyada hogi.


Bhandasur :- mere baan ko rokne wale dusht kon ho tum .


Vyakti :- tum jese dushto ka ant kerne k liye , bhagwan rudra k param bhakt dandnyak ki rachna hu m , veer rudra hu m..


Ye bol ek bhayank singh garjna ki us vyakti ne.


Ji ha dosto ye wahi veer rudra tha , jise karn ne samadhi jane se purb niyukt kiya tha , samay aane per jyoti or sab devo ki sahayta k liye.


Bhandasur :- tu chahe koi bhi ho , lekin tu ab mere hatho ni bachega.


Ye bol wo apne rath se uter ke aagaya or bina kisi hathiyar k hi rudrveer se malyudh kerne bhid gaya.


Wo malyudh kafi bhishn hone laga bada shighr hi kyunki bhandasur bhi kam shaktishali na tha usme 100 hathiyo thi janm se hi.


Dono hi ek dusre per mukke or late barsa rahe the , kabhi veer rudra bhandasur pe mukke barsata to kabhi bhandasur veer rudra per.


Yudh kerte hue bhandasur ka dhayan vese bhi khud yudh se jyada apne bhaio k pas pahuchne per tha .


Kyumki jaha ek taraf preety se apni talvar katwa lobhasur preety se buri tarah pit raha tha, muke or ghuso se.


Wahi dusri or kaya ne bhi shitasur ka dhanush kat diya tha or sath hi uske sarthi samet uska rath bhi nasht ho chuka tha


Shitasur ko ab apna kaal najjar araha tha , jo ghamandi shitasur or uske bhai nari ko aaj tak apne pao ki juti samjhte aaye the , aaj unhi nari k samne apne prano ki bhik mangne ki nobat aan padi thi usper.


Or usne esa hi kiya.


Shitasur kaya se :- devi , mujhe shama ker do devi , m vada kerta hu ki m yaha se sab chod patal lot jaunga or kabhi wapas apni shakal ni dikhaunga.


Kaya :- shama or tujh jese hevan ko jinhone humesha nari ko apne pao ki juti samjha , jisne na jane kitni abla asur ho ya insani nari ho , unki ijat luti , kadapi ni shitasur , is sansaar m har apradh ki shama mil sakti h , lekin nari ki ijjat p hath dalne wale ko to bhagwan bhi shama ni kerta , m to fir bhi ek vampire hu.


Ye bol kaya ne aasman se ek tir choda shitasur per jisse uska ek hath kat ker gir gaya.


Jis kaaran uska dard se bura haal ho gaya or apne bhai ka ye haal dekh bhandasur chila utha.


Bhandasur :- bhaiiii shit niiiii....


Ye bol wo apne bhai k pas jane ki koshish kerta h lekin usse pahale hi veer rudra use piche se pith se pakad ker use utha k dur fek dala .


Veer rudra :- apne bhai ki chinta chod murkh , pahale khud ki to raksha ker le


Bhandasur :- kaminr aaj tum sab me se kisi ko jivit ni chodunga m.


Ye bol bhanda sur fir se bhid gaya veer rudra se.


Wahi dusri or preety ne bhi ab khel samapt kerne ka nirnay leliya.


Preety :- bas ,ab bahut hua khel apne ant ko sajj ho ja dusht.


Ye bol preety 4 kadam piche leti h or fir bhag k ek uchi chalang k sath lobhasur ka sir dhad se alag ker deti h.


Or sath m usi samay kaya bhi apne ban se shitasur k dono hath katne k baad usko yamlok ki yatra p pahuncha deti h.


Apne dono bhaiyo ki mrityu dekh bhandasur buri tarah bhokla gaya tha.


Bhandasur :- niiiiii.......


Pahale to wo kafi der rota raha lekin baad m gusse se aag babula ho chilaya.


Bhandasur :- bas bahut hua tum sab dusht sab jis kaaran se hum se yudh ker rahe ho , or jis kaaran aj mere bhaiyo ka vadh tum ne kiya h naa , pratishodh swarup m us kaaran , is kutil ladki ka hi ant ker dunga.


Ye bat bhandasur ne jyoti ki or ishara kerte hue kahi.


Ye bol usne apne Dhanush ko jaldi se jaker rath se uthaya or us ashtra ka avahan kiya jiska naam sun sab dar gaye or chintit ho uthe.


Bhandasur :- bahut guman h na tumhe apni shaktio ka dushto ab dekhta hu kese raksha kerte ho tum is ladki mere is brahmastra se.


Ji ha Dosto bhandasur ne atyant vinashkari brahamatra ka avahan kiya tha jo usne kathor tap se Praapt kiya tha


Usne wo turant jyoti ki or chod diya , jiske kaaran sab bhaybhit ho uthe ki ab kya hoga.


Lekin brahamastra jyoti k jese hi karib pahuncha to samne ka najara dekh sabki ankhe chodi hi gayi , brahamastra jyoti k samksh aa apne aap hi ruk gaya.


Jisse jyoti bhi ek baar chonk gayi , lekin agle hi pal unhe wo pranam kerti h or sath m brahhmdev ki stuti bhi kerti h .


Lekin sabse herani ki baat to tab hui jab brahamastra ne bhi jyoti k ander se nikle us samay nikal mahatez ko pranam ker swatah hi gayab ho gaya.


Bhandasur :- asambhav ye ni ho sakta koi bhi mahan brahamastra nishfal ni ho sKta.


Veer rudra :- murkh asur jaha bhakti or prem ki shakti or dharm paksh m ho to deviy shakti bhi unka hi sath deti h .


Ab samay aagaya h tujhe bhi tere bhaiyo k pas pahuchane ka.


Ye bolte hue veer rudra buri tarah bhandasur p tut pada or use mar mar k adhmara ker dala.


Ab veer rudra ne jese hi apne antim prahar k liye apni talvar uthayi , tabhi ek jordar prahar aaker use laga or wo bahut dur ja gira or uske sath hi aasman se ek vishfot k sath kuch ranbhumi m enter hua or jab dhua hata to sabhi devo ka bhay se bura haal ho gaya or asuro m khushi ki lahar uth gayi.


Bhandasur bhi khushi se :- bhaiyaa aap aagaye.


Ha dosto apne bhaiyo ki mrityu ka jab vritrasur ko gyaat hua to uski krodh ki sima na rahi or wo usi shan yudh ko saj ho ranbhumi me saj ho aagaya.


Vritrasur bhandassur ko uthate hue :- tum thik to ho na anuj.


Bhandasur rote hue :- bhaiya m to thik hu , per humare bhaiii (siskte hue ) bhaiya kisi ko jinda mat chodna bhaiya kisi ko kat chodna.


Vritrasur nam gusse se bhari ankho se :- esa hi hoga chote.


(Jyoti ki or dekhte hue ) dushta , inke dam per hi tu itni uchal rahi h n kamini , aaj inka ant ker tujhe balo se ghasit ker m apne mahal leker jaunga or apni rakhail banaunga , tab hi kere bhaiyo ki shanti milegi.


Veer rudra gusse se :- vritrasur tera itna dusahas ki tumne inke bare m ese apshabd kahe ab tu jivit ni bachega.


Ye kahate hue veer rudra vritrasur se bhid gaya , lekin adisshakti k vardan ki shakti ka kavach bahut jyada shaktishali tha vritrasur ne badi asani se veer rudra ko ghayal ker prajit ker dala.


Or jyoti ki or bhadne laga tabhi veer rudra ko harta dekh preeety or kaya bhi uske samaksh aapahunchi.


Unhe dekh bhandasur bola :- bhaiya yahi h wo dono kaminiya jinhone humare bhaiyo ka vadh kiya h , inhe chodiyega ni.


Preety :- Kon kise chodega kise ni wo to abhi pata chal jayega dusht.


Ye bol preety or kaya bhi apne ashtra shastro ne se vritrasur per prahar kerne lagi , lekin ye kya unka har ek prahar vritrasur k kawach se takra ess gir rahe the jese mano koi rubber ki ball ho.


Tabhi vritrasur ne apne bade se vajra ko ghuma k preety or kaya p ek jabardast vaar kiya jo itna bhishn tha ki us prahar se dono hi ardh murcha m pahunch gayi.


Vritrasur :- chote in dono ne hi humare bhaiyo ka ant ker hume kalankit kiya h na ab badle ks samay h , ab hum yaha ranbhumi m hi indono ki ijjat lut inhe esa kalankit karenge ki ye khud mrityu ki bhik mangengi


Bhandasur shetani hasi k sath :- hahaha to shubh kam m deri kesi bhaiyaaa.


Ye bol wo dono bhai jese hi hawas bhari najaro k sath un dono k pas pahunche tabhi ek bhayank singh garjana sunayi di or agle hi pal ek jordar shakti prahar undono ko utha k dur fek deta h


Or is humle kerne wale ko jab sab dekhte h to sab chonk jate h kyunki ye prahar kisi or ne ni khud dandnayika jyoti ne kiya tha.


Jyoti jiske kesh hawa me ud rahe the or ankhe khun jesi laal ho gayi thi , wo sher ki tarah dahadti hui ranbhumi me pravesh kerti hui boli.


Jyoti :- bas vritrasur is kukritya k bare m soch ker hi tune paap ka ghada bhar liya h dusht , ab tera ant or koi ni swayam m ho karungi.


Hua darasl ye tha ki apne bhai k ansh per prahar hota dekh jyoti ka krodh jagrit hone laga or jab usne dekha ki vritrasur kya giri hui harkat kerne ja raha h to uske gusse ka jwala mukhi fat gaya or wo yydh bhumi m kid padi.


Vritrasur '- din m khwab dekhna acha ni h ladki , jaha mujhe teri ye gadaar asur sahayika ni kuch bigad saki to tu kis khet ki muli h , tu ni janti to jan le mujhe adishakti ka vardan h mujhe unke alaw or koi ni mar sakta.


Jyoti :- tujhe adishakti ma ka vardan h na dush to le ab tera ant k liye m unka hi avahan kerungi.


Ye bol jyoti ne apni ankhe band ker dali or usike sath hi jyoti k sharir se ek divya prakash nikal charo or felne laga , usko dekh esa pratit ho raha tha ki mano dharti per surya uter aaya ho.


Or dhore dhire ker sabhi devo k ander se ek tez punj nikal us prakash me samamane laga or karan k sharir se bhi esa hi ek punj nikal unme


Us prakash ko dekh karan k chahre pe bhi muskan aGayi or wo apni seat se uth gaya


Or jab wo prakash hata to jyoti ka ek naya roop is sansaar k samaksh aaya jise dekh jaha vritrasur chokne k sath bhaybhit ho utha wahi sabhi devo samet karan bhi unhe hath jod sharadha se pranam kerta h


Kyunki jyoti ka wo roop koi or ni balki sakshat maa adishakti ki prativimb tha , jiske 10 hath the jinme nana prakar k ashtra shastra shushobhit the.


Jyoti ma adishakti ki aawaz :- nari ko kamzor samjh tune mujhse ye var manga tha na murkh ki tera vadh usi nari k hatho ho jisme meri samast shaktiya ho ke to le mene teri ye icha bhi puri ker daali.


Vritrasur :- ni ye sambhav ni h , ye chal h tera kulta , mujhe bhaybhit kerne ka chal , lekin tu ye sab khel dikha vritrasur ko ni dara sakti , ab dekh vritrasur ki shakti .


Ye bol vritrasur ne jyoti per ek jordar prahar kiya apni gada ko fek lekin jyoti ne bhi apne ek hath m sushobhit gada ko feka jisne ek second m vritrasur ki gada ko tod dala .


Jise dekh vritrasur bhokla gaya or wo apni talvaar leker jyoti ki ir doda , tab jyoti ne bhi apne 2 hath ko chod baki hatho ko gayab ker talvar le dod padi vritrasur se bhidne .


Or shuru hua ek bhayank yudh jisme un dono ki takrane se esi dhawani utpan ho rahi thi jese bijli kadak rahi ho.


Sab devo ki ab jyoti or vritrasur pe hi najar thi or wahi dusri or sonam kaya or preety ka upchar ker rahi thi.


Vahi ye sab najara dekh bhandasur waha se bhagne ko hua lekin veer Rudra ne use rok liya or haste hue bola.


Veer rudra :- are are yuvraj aap kaha chal diye abhi humara yudh shesh h , akhir aapko bhi to apkr bhaio k pas pahuchana h , taki 3no bhsi milker nark m apne bade bhai sahab k agman ki teyari ker sako.


Bhandasur bhokla ker :- chodunga ni tujhe kamine.


Ye bol wo fir se veet rudra se bhid gaya .


Wahi dusri or


Shera ki lagayi hui canon me shitasur or lobhasur k vadh k sath prakat huo energy bhi aaker samahit ho gayi thi or wo 60% charge ho chuki thi.


Shera haste hie :- bas ek vadh or , or fir humne koi ni rok payega.


Wahi ranbhumi m vritrasur ki talvar ko ek jordar prahar k sath kat usne ek jordar laat vritrasur k sine pe mari jisse wo dur ja gira .


Lekin shigr hi wo uth khada hua or tarah tarah k ashtra shastra jyoti per fekne laga.


Lekin jyoti ne apne teero se sabko katne lagi.


Vahi bhandasur ka bhi ant najdik aagaya tha or veer rudra ne jese hi uska ant kerme apna ghatak prahar kerna chaha to uske man me karn ki aawaz sunayi di.


Karan :- ruk jao veer rudra. , Abhi iska vadh ja samay ni aaya h , esa brahama ji ne mujhe sanesh bheja , ese m tumhe ise pran dan dena hoga.


Veer rudra :- per swami ager mane abhi iska vadh ni kiya to.


Karan '- m janta hu ki tum apmi jagah sahi ho veer rudra , per hum brahmdev ki agya ko tal shrushti k niyam ni tod sakte , lekin ye yudh m dakhal na de iske liye tum ise utha ker antrik si gaharaiyo m fek di , jisse ye marg se bhi hat jaye or iska vadh bhi na ho


Veer rudra :- jo aagya swami , ye bol veer rudra ne bhandasur ne bhandasur ko pero se pakad itni jor se utha ke ghuma ker feka ki wo asman m ja gayab ho gaya.


Wahi dusri or vritrasur ne jab apne sare ashtra shastra vifal hote dekhe to usne apna asli roop yani ek vishal 100 ft uche bhese ka roop dharan ker apne singho ko jyoty ki or ker jordar takkar marne k liye doda


Or jese hi ye drishya kfd ne dekha to unhone sabhi graho ko ishara ker diya or shuru hua vritrasur ka mrityu yog .


Vritrasur ko apni or aata dekh jyoti bhi vishal rup dharan ker uski or dodi or jese hi vritrasur jyoti ki or pahunch usper prahar kerne hus jyoti uchal ker apne per se uske sir ko kuchal dharti per patak deti h or ek jordar garjana k sath apne dado hatho ko prakat kerte hue ek jordar chikh k sath apne hath me mojud trishul ko vritrasur k sine m ghop diya jo is waqt adha bhesa or adha asur rup m mojud tha .


Or jese hi vo trishul uske sine m ghusa to uske muh se bas itna hi nikla.


Vritrasur :- shama kerdena mujhe devi.


Or ye bol uske oran pakheru ho uthe or jese hi ye hua to devo m khushi ki lahar uth gayi or wo jor shor se jai mata ki or har har mahadev k nare lagane lage.


Lekin jaha sab khush the waha karan ab serious ho gaya tha.


Rohan :- bhai ab tu itna pareshan kyu h, humari gudiya ne akhir wo ker hi dikhaya jiska hume kabse intezaar tha , to ab ye pareshani kesi.


Karan :- ye pareshani aane wali us bhishn samasya ka h bhai , jisko ager mand na roka to sansar m pralay tay h ye bol kuch baat samjhate hue karan ne sirf itna bola.


Karan :- yad rakhna dost jaha sansar ki sari shakti vifal ho jati h waha ek hi shakti kam aati h bhakti ki shakti.


Ye bol karan waha se gayab ho gaya.


Wahi dusri or


Ranbhumi me


Karan ki chinta ka kaaran ab samjh asne laga tha. ,kyumki jyoti ka krodh vritrasur k ant k baad bhi shant na hua tha , jis kaaran wo out of control ho gayi or charo or apne ashtra shastra se tabahi machane lagi.


Devraj use rokne ki koshis kerte hue :- putri jyoti shant ho jao , us dusht ka ant tum ker chuki ho ab apne vastvik swarup m lot aso beti , lot aao.


Sab dev ese hi jyoti ko shant kerne ki koshis kerne m lage hue the or sonam bhi.


Tabhi vaha karan prakat hua , jise dekh sonam bhag k uske pas gayi or boli.


Sonam ghabra gayi :- dekhiye na bhai di ko kya ho gaya h ab aap hi unhe shant ker sakte ho bhai , please kuch kijiye.


Devraj '- ha putra karn putri sonam uchit kah rahi h , is sansar m jyoti ko ager koi shabt ker sakta h to wo keval tum ho putra.


Karn kuch ni bolta or ha m gardan hila jyoti ki or bhada or bola.


Karan :- jyoti meri guduya mujhe garv h tumper , tumne aaj sidh ker diya ki nari shakti ager chahe to kuch asambhav ni , ab apna krodh tyago meri gudiya or aao apne bhaiya k gale ni lagogi.


Lekin ye kya karan ko dekh jyoti shant hone k bajjay or gussa ho gayi or chilayi.


Jyoti :- ni karn aaj m shant ni hone wLi , khasker ki jab tak , jab tak m tumhe dandit na ker du.


Sonam herani se :- di ye aap kya bol rahi ho dand or bhai ko , aakhir kyu unki bhala kya galti h , ya unhone galat kiya.


Jyoti :- inka sabse bada apradh kuch na kerna hi to h Sonam ye chahte to is mahasanghar ko rok sakte the , mujhe jagrit ker per ni inhone vinash ka marg chuna jinke na jane kitne senik aakaran marw , isliye yadi ager is mahavinash ka jimedar vritrasur tha to ye bhi h.


Karan :- ager aapki najar m m vhi apradhi hu devi to mujhe aapka har diya hua dand swikar h .


Ye bol karan jhuk ker hath jod ket beth .


Jyoti '- tumhe bhi vahi dand milega dandnyak jo vritrasur ko mila mrityu dand.


Ye bol vishal jyoti rupi shakti ne karan ko apni muthi m bich uthaya or apna mukh khol liya.


Sonam rote hue :- ni di ruk jaoye aP esa ni ker sakti .


Sab dev bhi jyoti ko rukne ki vinti kerne lage per jyoti ne kisi k ek na suni or agle hi pal karan ko muh me rakh nigal liya.


Sonam :- niiiiiii.....


Chilate hue behosh ho gayi , jise eekh kaya or preety usko sambhalne dodi or wo dono bhi buri tarah ro rahi thi karn ka ye hashr dekh.


Wahi karan ko nigalne k baad jyoti pahale khub hasi.


Jyoti '- ab hua asli nyaay , sab apradhio ko dand mil hi gaya hahaha.


Lekin achanak jab jyoti ka gussa shant hua or uska khud per niyantran aaya to usko ahasas hote hi ki abhi usne abhi kya kiya uski jordar chikh nikal uthi .


Jyoti dard bhari chikh k sath :- niiiiiiiiiiii, ye mene kya ker dalaa.


Isi chikh k sath jyoti ka gor varn dhuye jesa kal padme laga , uske laal sunder suhag k vastra safed rang m tabdil ho gaye or uska sara shringar or gahane gayab ho gaye or wo ek 60 sal ki bhudi orat jesi dikhne lagi.


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