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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Darukasur ka ant k baad asuro m hahankar mach gayi or apne senapati ki mot de unke hosle past ho gaye , jinka moka utha devo ne pure jor shor se unpe humla bol dala , jis kaaran unhe sambhalne ka moka na mila or asuro ki sankhya kam hone lagi or devo joro shoro se unka vadh kerne lage.


Jis kaaran asuro k pas bachne ka bas ek hi rasta dikha , wo tha waha se bhagne ka , or unhone wesa hi kiya badi hi mushkil se unhone jaan bacha ker vaha se bhagne m kamyab hue.


Danvo ko yu ran chod k bhagte dekh devo me harsholas ki lahar cha gayi .


Devraj :- hum vijayi hue.


Har har mahadev


Devraj k sath baki sab bhi har har mahadev k nare lagate h , wahi dusri or Sonam bhi khush or heran thi , ki achanak se ye kya hua.


Sonam :- di ye achanak se kya hua , us balshali daitya ka ek shan m ant , kya ye aapne kiya.


Jyoti :- ni sona mujhme itna samarthya kaha , ye mahan karya to unhone hi kiya jin k liye unka janm hua h , or jinko hum dono ne hi sab kuch mana h .


Sonam :- apka matlab ye bhaiya ne kiya per ye kese sambhav h di , wo to dhyan samadhi m Lin h.


Jyoti :- sona humare bhai swayam kfd k ansh h unke liye kuch bhi asambhav ni.


Sonam uperi tor p to Jyoti se agree ker leti h , per uske man me shanka to abhi bhi thi.


Wahi dusri or


Chaliye jab karan ka jikar Aya hi hua h tha to aaiye dekh lete h ki wo kya ker raha h.


Karan jis sthan pe dhyan samadhi m Lin tha us sthan p achanak ek roshni chamakti h or Rohan prakat hota b apne kaal roop me.


Rohan karan ki banayi divar k pas aaker :- kamine ye sab natak kerke bhahano ko bevkuf bana sakta h per apne bhai ko ni , chup chap mujhe ander aane de....


Tabhi ander se aawaz aayi


Karan :- sab janta h to baap se permission kya mang raha h sale Aja.


Karan ki aawaz sun ker Rohan diwar ko paar kerte hue ander ki or aata h to pata h ki karan apne dhanush per pratyancha chada raha tha.


Karan :- aao dost mujhe tumhara hi intezaar tha, mujhe tumse baat kerni thi.


Rohan :- baat to mujhe tumse kerni h bhai , ye sab kyaa h , humari bahano samet sare sansaar pe vritrasur namak mahasankat chaya hua or tum yaha ye kyaa luka chupi ka khel khel rahe ho.


Karan :- khel to m khel raha hu dost , per luka chupi ka khel ni balki dusht vritrasur ka mrityu ka khel or jo us khel ki main khiladi h wo mahashakti jiske hatho aaj dusht vritrasur ka nirdharit tha.


Kaal :- or aap jara batane ki kripa karenge dandnayak ji wo khiladi ya yu kaho vo mahashakti kon h.


Karan :- vahi jo keval is yudh ki nayika banne balki is dandnayak ki bhi shakti h.


Rohan :- Jyoti ? Per kese bhai , vo to bhi nirbal h or yadi ager uske hatho hi vritrasur ka ant nishchit h to tum uski sahayata kyu ni kerte is yudh m.


Karan apne dhanush ki prtyancha khichta jiske sath uske dhanush p ek tir aajata h .


Karan :- tir ko yadi lakshay tak pahuchana ho to , pratyancha ko piche khichna hi padta h , ese hi Jyoti ka aatmvishvas lotane or is sansaar ko nari shakti ki mahima dikhane k liye mera yudh se piche hatna jaruri h Rohan , isliye mane khud ko yudh se vilag ho ker bhi apne kartvya ka nirvahan ker rahha hu .


Mane na keval doot banker yudh k niyamo ka palan kerte hue is vritrasur ko antim chetawani di , balki sath hi sath pita kfd ki yojna ka pahala padav bhi purn kiya.


Rohan :- m sandeh ni ker raha Jyoti per kya humari gudiya is haal m yudh ker payegi , jab wo sabse kamjor halat m h.


Karan :- meri gudiya shakshat shaktiswaroopni h mere dost or shakti kabhi kamzor ni hoti.


Is baat ka praman tumhare samne hi abhi ghatit hua h mere dost , jis darukasur ko devta tak prajit n ker pa rahe the use Jyoti ne apni ek hunkar matra se yamlok pahuncha dala.


Ji ha dosto darukasur ka ant kisi or ne ni balki Jyoti ne hi ker dala tha anjaane m , uski ek hunkar bhari garjana tak ko na sah paya darukasur.


Wahi dusri or


Jese hi ye khabar vritrasur ko mili ki uska senapati mara ja chuka h or uski sena dum duba k bhag k aagayi to wo gusse se aagbabula ho utha


Vritrasur :- lajja ni aayi namardo yudh bhumi se yu pith dikha ker or lanat h us vritrasur per ek hare hue devraj ki sena ko bhi prajit na ker paya.


Lagta h ab ye karya mujhe swayam hi kerna hoga , humara Rath sujj hi kiya jaye..


Ye bol vritrasur yudh m jane ko saj hi ho raha tha ki tabhi ek aawaz uske kaano m padi.


Aager humare hote hue aapko ek mamuli ladki k liye yudh m jana pade to dhikkar hum chote bhaiyo p bhaiya.


Ye aawaz vritrasur k bhaiyo ki thi , jinke naam the , lobhasur , bhandasur or shitasur.


Or ye baat lobhasur ne ki thi


Shitasur :- ha bhaiya lobhasur bhai sahi kah rahe h , humare hote hue aapko jane ki koi avashyakta ni , un devo ko hum chote bhai dekh lenge or us ghmandi ladki ko balo se ghasitte hue aapke charno m patkenge.


Aap to bas hume aagya dijiye bhaiya.


Vritrasur kuch sochte hue :- thik h jao mere sher bhaio or dikha do un devo ko do asuro ki shakti or sath m humari puri sena bhi ke jana.


Jo aagya bhaiya.


Ye bol 3no bhai nikal pade yudh bhumi ki or ya yu kaho apne ant ki or.


Vritrasur ne apne bhaio ko yudh m bhej to diya tha lekin vritrasur ki mot ki khabar sunne k baad usse bhi ab thodi chinta hone lagi.


Vritrasur :- kahi us dandnayak ki baat sach to ni hone , kahi mera ant...


(Agle hi pal khayal jhadakte hue) ni esa hona sambhav ni trilok vijeta vritrasur ko koi ni mar sakta , mujhe koi ni maar sakta , mata adishkti ka vardan jo h mere sath.


Ye bolte hue vritrasur waha se gayab ho sidha pahunch gaya usi karagrah me jaha usne navgraho ko rakha tha.


Kfd :- aao vritrasur aao putri Jyoti jis swarg ki swamini h , us lok k is chote se bhag m swagat h tumhara, lagta h apni bhul swikar ker prayaschit kerne aaye ho


Vritrasur gusse se :- band ker apni bakwas kfd , mere gulamo ko chal se marwa ker tera wo putra kya sochta h ki wo mujhe swargadhipati vritrasur ko prast ker dega .


Haaaatt, use to m esi mot dunga ki mot bhi aagosh m lene se ghabrayegi use.


Devguru. :- swargadhipati ! Iska matlab tumne ye maan hi liya h ki swarg p tumhara Adhikar h .


Vritrasur :- isme manna kya devguru , purn roop se ye swarglok per adhikar h mera.


Swarbhanu :- iska matlab to ye bhi hua ki ye swarglok or iska har ek kona ye bandigrah bhi tumhara ghar hua.


Vritrasur chilate hue :- ha haa , ye pura swarglok or iska har ek kona chahe udhyan ho ya ye bandigrah sab mera h or tum sab mere bandhi .


(Chutki )Or tum kfd apne putra k mrityu ka shok abhi se manane lag jao , kyuki shighra hi mere bhrata uska ant ker dene wale h.


Ye bolte hue vritrasur waha se chala gaya.


Kfd :- mrityu to avashya hogi vritrasur , parantu shok ni utsav hoga , kyuki vo mrityu mere putra ki ni balki apitu tumhari hogi.


(Sabhi graho se ) hey adarniya graho k adhipati , vritrasur ne apni murkhta se humari yojna ko swayam swikriti dedi .


Ab samay aagaya h humari yojna ka aarambh kerne ka , samay aagaya h paap k ant ka yog banane ka.


Samay aagaya h papi vritrasur k mrityu yog banane ka


Kfd k itna kahane k sath hi bandi grah p ek kundli ka nirman ho gaya or shani dev k ishare p sabhi grah apne apne sthan p jaker khade ho gaye or is tarah arambh ho gaya vritrasur k ant ka .


Aaj k liye bas itna hi


Stay tuned.
 

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Very nice update bro.

Toh Karna ne ek tarah se Vrittirasura ko uqasa kar uske anjaam tak pahunchane ka apne kaary kar diya hai😁
Vaise black shadow council ke chief ko lagta hai ki usne jo bhi kiya hai woh Dandanaayak ki nazaron mein nahin aaya hoga par kya vaastav mein aisa hai ki nahin? Aur agar hai toh ab aage hoga kya? Aur agar nahin toh isse Karna nibtega kaise?
Naina apne ek bhai ke khilaaf karne wali hai dusre bhai ko par kya woh aisa kar paayegi?
Jyoti ka aatmavishvas kab aur kaise lautega?

Bahot behtareen zaberdast
Shaandaar update bhai
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Bht hi mst update hai harry bhai 🙂🙂toh hmare hero ne apni or se uss vitrasur ko chetavani de hi di......
Or yeh nayi wall konsi aayi yrr yeh konsi team h karan kii.
Jyoti ne toh ekk hi baar m uss darkasur ko khtm kar diya i think yeh help karan ne nhi jyoti k ander jo chupi hui mahashakti h jiske baare m usee bhi nhi pta usne help kii h .....
Let's see aage kya hota h naye update ka basabri se intzaar h

Awesome Update

Nice Update Bro

chaahe Koi bhi ho,chahe kitna bhi shaktishali ho,, par agar is shakti ke chalte ahankaar cha jaaye dil o dimag par to uska vinaash uska yahi ahankaar hi karta hai...
Ek taraf jaha vritrasur apne ahankaar aur ghamand mein is kadar andha ho gaya hai ki ushe khabar nahi wo kisse bhidne ki baat kar raha hai ya bhidne jaa raha hain, aagah karne baad bhi nahin suna usne.... shayad vritrasur ka ant jald hi hone wala hain...

dusri taraf shera ne chaal chal diya hai aur is baat ki ilm kisko bhi nahi ki usne Kya kiya waha pe... yahan tak ki karan ko bhi pata na chala....

udhar naina.... wo toh bas by hook or by crook apne bhai Karan ko saza dene ki firak mein hai,, iske liye chaahe ushe rohan ko hi Kyun na ek hathiyaar ke roop mein istemaal karna pade... bas karan ki maut chahiye ushe...
I think yahan lagta hai baat Kuch aur hi hai.... kahi aisa toh nahi ,naina jaan gayi ho ki karan Aur jyoti bhai bahan hone ke bawajud bhi un donoke bich jishmani rishta hai ek premi premika ki tarah.... :D waise ye baat agar asha ko pata chali ki uske dono santan kya gul khila rahe hai to shayad asha to bawli hi ho jaye... sar ke baal bhi noch daale :lollypop:
ab ek to muh bole bhai ki maut aur shayad ye karan jyoti ke physical intimacy ke bare mein jaanke naina pratishodh lene ke liye jyada hi atur ho gayi hai...

Khair.... Kaafi gatividhiyon se bharpur update tha .....
Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan aur saath hi dilchasp kirdaaron ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:

romanchak update ..naina rohan ko mohra banana chahti hai karan ke khilaaf .
shera bhi apni chaal me kamiyab ho gaya hai .

Agle update ka intizar h Harry bhai

Waitting For Next Update Baro

Update please Harry bhai
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romanchak update ..karan ne kuch nahi kiya tha ,jyoty ne hi apni hunkar se maar diya darukasur ko .
par usko lagta hai ye karan ne kiya .
sonam bhi thodi confuse lagi is maamle me ki wo sab karan ne kiya ..

ab vritrasur ke bhai yudh karne ki taiyari kar rahe hai aur shayad unka bhi ant jyoty ke haatho hi ho ..

par ye swarbhanu ne aisa kyu kaha ki pura devlok vritrasur ka hai 🤔🤔🤔.. wo sab puchhne ki kya mansha thi sab graho ki samajh nahi aaya ..
aur ab ye kaunsa yog taiyar kar rahe hai sab grah jisse vritrasur ka ant hoga ..
 
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