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Jese hi wo roshni hati to samne khade shaks ko dekh sab chok gaye or hathyar nikal ker savdhan ho gaye.kyunki samne khada shaks dekhne m hi koi mahavir najar aaraha tha , jisne kale or nile rang ka kavach or mask pahana tha.


Or hath me prachand bijli se laharata hua trishul uske hath m shobha pa raha tha , ankhe uski nili thi.


Vritrasur gusse se :- tum , kon ho tum or is prakaar humare lok me.


Samne khada wo shaks bolaa :- sansaar m jab jab kaal or karm ka santulan bigdega or dushto k atyachar bhadenge, tab tab karmo ka hisab kerne dand nayak ko to aana hi hoga


Ji ha dosto samne khada shaks or koi ni dand nayak hi tha


Dandnayak ka naam sun ek baar to vritrasur chonka , lekin agle hi pal ek kamini hasi k sath


Vritrasur haste hue Tanz bhare swar me:- ohh dandnayak , aho bhagya humare jo humare swarg lok m pratham baar apka aagman hua dandnayak , (are seniko se ) are khade mera muh kya dekh rahe ho inka adar satkar ka prabhandh kero.


Dandnayak :- ye sab swang chodo vritrasur or apni bhalayi chahte ho to kAan khol k meri chetavni suno.


Vritrasur natak kerte hue apne senik se :- kya ! Kya kha abhi isme.


Senik :- maharaj ye aapko chetavni dene aaya h.


Vritrasur :- lagta h mere kaan kharab ho gaye h shayad jab hi mujhe vinti shabd ki jagah chetavni sunayi de raha h.


(Fir apni bhohe tante hue ) murkh dandnayak mane to socha tha ki tum me apne pita kfd saman kuch to akkal hogi , jis kAran tum apne pita ki rihai or devo k shamadan ki vinti kerne aate hoge, per shahhh , tum to kitne bade murkh nikle , ye jante hue ki mere vardan ka kavach tumhara to kya swayam tridevo k vash ki bhi baat ni , or phir bhi yudh kerne aagaye.


Dandnayak :- tumhare kaan shayad sachmuch kharab hi ho gaye h vritrasur, jab hi tumne mere kahe shabd thik se naa sune .


M yaha tumse yudh kerne kisi yodha k roop me ni (apna trishul gayab kerte hue ) balki ek doot banke aaya hu .


Or is galatfehmi m mat rahana vritrasur ki is swarg p tumhara adhikar h , kyunki Adhikar jab tak hi sthapit kiya jab hi kiya ja sakta jab uska purana adhikhari ya to swaecha se somp de ya use yudh m prajit ker uspe adhipatya sthapit kare.


Vritrasur :- doot ? Kesa doot or kesa sandesh laye or mat bhulo dandnayak mane swarg k raja devraj ko prajit puri imandari or apne bal p hasil kiya h ,. To is per mera dharmpurvak adhikar h.


Dandnayak :- tumhare mukh se dharm ki baate achi ni lagti vritrasur or tumse kisne kah diya ki swarg pe adhikar devtao ka tha.


Is swarg p adhikar to devo ne kab ka un shakti ko somp diya tha , jiske ek ishare ek icha p is dandnayak ne dusht asuro se is swarg ko bhutkAl m mukt kerwa diya tha, us samay devo ne hi swayam swarg ka d
Adhikhari niyukt kiya , jis kaaran mrityulok ki nivasini hote hue bhi , unhe deh smet swarg m aane ka adhikar h.


Murkh vritrasur or tum usi mahashakti se yudh kerne ki soch rahe ho , abhi bhi vaqt h


Marg p aajao , anyatha mera dandchakra tumhe mrityu k Marg p pahuncha dega.


Vritrasur gusse se bhanate hue :- bas bahut sun li tumhari bakwas, mujhe mrityu ki dhamki dene wale marega to ab to tu.


(Apne seniko se ) mera muh kya dekh rahe ho , pakad ker khatam ker do is haramjadee ko.


Vritrasur ka adesh pate hi sabhi senik or senapati apne hathiyar leker uski dandnayak ki or dode.


Per isse pahale wo untak pahunchte usse pahale hi dandnayak ne bas ek chutki bajayi or sabke sab jaha the jese the aage tham gaye.


Dandnayak :- murkh vritrasur tumne apna antim avsar bhi kho diya h , ab sajj ho jao apne ant ko us mahashakti k hatho, jisse tum kamzor samjhne ki bhul ker rahe ho.


Ye bol karan apne hath jhadak diye dono , jiske sath hi Jame hue sare senik udte hue jake swarg se bahar antriksh ki gahariyo m sama gaye.


Dandnayak :- murkh vritrasur m chahu to abhi isi Shan tera yahi ant ker dalu , per yaha sawal maa k vardaN k sath nari jati k samman ka bhi h or doot hone k naate m apni maryada bhang ker apni swamini k man ko shati ni pahuncha sakta.


Vritrasur :- haha galat fahmi m mat raho dandnyak , vritrasur ka ant kerne ka samarthya devo tak me ni to teri swamini kis khet ki muli h.


Dandnyak :- murkh vritrasur unka samarthya ka andaza isi baat se laga le , tere hazaro seniko ko ek hi Shan m mrityu k ghat utar dene wala ye dandnyak bhi us mahashakti ka keval doot hesiyat se yaha aaya h , us dandnayika k samarthya k baare m to tum swayam vichar ker lo .


Vritrasur dandnyak ki baat ko ansuni kerte hue :- chaal hat..


Dandnyak :- vinash kaale viprit budhi.


Ye bol dandnyak waha se gayab ho gaya


Wahi dusri or


Location :- gate of realms


Gate of realms ye wo darwaza tha jo ek special jagah p tha , jo na prathvi p tha na hi space m , ye ek alag hi dimension m mojud tha , jo kuch sal pahale karan or uski team ne seal kiya tha , ek bahut bade khatre se sirf ek duniya ni balki anant brahamando ki sharakhlao ko , sidhe shabdo m kahe to pure multiverse ko.


Lekin wo khatra kya tha or karan ki konsi team ne kese use roka ye to aage hi pata chalega, lekin is waqt karan k order k anusaar wo abhi is portal k charo or ek solid force feild teyar kerne wali thi.


Asma ne apni utility belt se ek gol sa device nikala or uspe ek button laga tha or use daba ker jamin per rakh diya .


Jiske sath hi gate ke charo or ek force feild teyar ho gayi .


Asma '- chalo ye kaam to ho gaya, Bhaijan ko msg ker deti hu.


Or msg kerte hue wo usi teleportal se waha se chali gayi apne ghar ki or is baat se anjaan ki wo waha akeli ni thi .


shera jisne invisible Cape pahan ker jo Asma ko chakma deker uske jane ka hi intezar ker raha tha apni assistant k sath.


Shera Asma k jane k baad Cape hata ker haste hue :- bahut hoshiyar samjhta h naa ye guardian, lekin ye ni jante ki is baar inka samna shadow council k chief Shera se hua h , or Shera kis khet ki muli h , ye av tak inhone jana ni .


(Apni secretary se ) jasmine humari dimensional canon ready h .


Jasmine :- yes sir.


Ye bol ker wo apni watch ka ek button dabati h , jiske sath hi samne ek portal khulta h or Usme se ek cannon jesi machine apne aap Chalke untak aati h.



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Jasmine :- lijiye sir aapke order k according cannon to ready h but hum isko use kese karenge , huntress ki force field ko todna koi asan kaam ni.


Shera haste hue :- asan ,ye to meri chutkiyo ka khel h , just wait and watch.


Ye bol Shera apni watch ka ek button dabata h jisse watch se ek projector screen nikalti h , jispe Shera kuch type kerta h.


Or agle hi pal ye kya Asma ne force field lagaya tha wo apne aap hat gayi.


Jasmine herani se :- sir ye apne kese kiya.


Shera haste hue :- bahut asan tha Jasmin ye huntress jitna chalak or intelligent khud ko samjhti h utni h ni.


Jis din m projector teleportation se unse mulakat kerne gaya tha, tabhi mane unke program m ek chota sa hacker virus dal diya , jiski unko bhanak tak ni thi , jiske kaaran ye sab hua h.


Jasmine :- you are so smart sir , but problem sirf portel ki hi ni h sir , is cannon ka ager hume use kerke seal ko destroy kerna h to hume bahut hi high level cosmic energy ki need hogi .


Shera :- uska bhi intezaam bahut hi jald ho jayega.


Jasmine :- but how sir.


Shera :- wahi se jis shakti ne is seal ko is gate p lagaya.


Just wait and watch.


Fir jasmine canon ko set kerti h or uspe lage ek button ko press kerti h jiske sath vo invisible ho jati h or fir Shera wapas force field ko activate ker waha se nikal jate h.


Wahi dusri or


Naina bhi apni puja k jariye Rohan k sath ye pata lagane m lagi hoti h ki kisne Riya p marak sidhi ka prayog kiya tha.


Naina kafi der se jamin p charo or ek yantra bana or uske bich me apna trishul set ker kuch vidhi k baad dhyan avastha m Bethi hui thi or Rohan bhi apni energy se Naina ki teleportation power ki sima ka vistar ker raha tha.


Lekin kafi der k nirantar prayas k baad bhi unhe safalta prayas na hui or energy k jyada istemal k kaaran dono hi kafi thak chuke the.


Rohan hafte hue :- kuch pata chala Naina, ki kisne di per kala jadu kiya.


Naina :- na m sir hilati h.


Rohan :- per esa kese possible h Naina , itni energy use kerne k baad bhi hume kuch pata naa chala ,khasker tum to is kaM m mahir ho fir bhi esa hona kuch samjh ni araha.


Naina :- Naina yahi to mujhe samjh ni aaraha bhai ki esa kese ho sakta h , itna to yakin ho gaya h mujhe ye sab dekh k ki ye kam koi insan ka to bilkul ni , or na hi ye kisi bhut pishach jesi koi shetani shakti bhi ni h ,ye to kuch alag hi h.


Lekin aap chinta mat kijiye bhai m iska pata laga k hi rahungi.


Abhi naina aage kuch bolti usse pahale hi asha ki aawaaz aati h jo use pukar rahi thi , kyunki ghar jane ka time ho gaya tha.


Naina Rohan k kandhe p hath rakh :- mujhe jana hoga bhai per aap chinta mat kero.


Naina man me :- kerna hi padega na Rohan bhai , aap hi to banoge us karan k khilaf mera brahmastra.


Ye sochte hue Naina asha k sath apne ghar k liye nikal gayi.


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Jyoti ki sharan m aaye devo ne bhi apni kamar kas li thi , Jyoti ki raksha hetu.


Devraj :- m or aap sab ye baat to jante h ki hum un asuro ka samna ni ker sakti per fir bhi hum yudh kerenge putri Jyoti ki raksha hetu


Kyu ki jab hum dev lok se nishkashit ho dar dar bhatak rahe the , tab putri Jyoti ne hi hume ashray diya or ab samay aagaya h us upkaar ka rin utar sake.


Kya aap sab dev sajj h.


Sabhi dev ha m ha milate h devraj ki.


Tabhi waha asur bhi Aphunche apne senapati darukasur k sath.


Darukasur devo ko dekh :- haha dekho to mere veer asur seniko , us ladki ne humare khilaf hare hue devo ki fauz ikatha ki h .


(Devraj se) devraj lagta h pichli baar ki haar ka badla tum bhul gaye kya.


Devraj :- darukasur tum yaha aatogaye lekin yaha se jivit ni jane wale , is baar tum adharmio ka ant avashya hoga.


Darukasur :- rasi jal gayi per bal ni gaya, h dam tumme devraj to aajao medan m .


Akkkaraman .......


Ye bol asuro ne yudh ched diya or dev bhi unse bhid gaye.


Or fir shuru hua devasur sangram jisme dono or se bhayanak ashtra or shastro ki barish ho rahi thi.


Lekin Kuch samay baad asur devo per bhari padne lage , jis kaaran Jyoti Jo uchai se yudh dekh rahi thi use tension hone lagi.


Jyoti '- sona hume kuch kerna hoga , ager esa hi chalta raha to asuro ki vijay nishchit h or ager esa hua to bahut bada anarth ho jayega.


Sonam muskurate hue :- aap tension mat lijiye di, adharm chahe kitna bhi Prabal ho jaye , lekin dharm se kabhi ni jit sakta , khel to abhi shuru hua h.


Abhi yudh asuro k haq m aane ko hi tha ki achanak asuro p charo or se humla hone laga tiro se.


Jisse asuro m afra tafri mach gayi .


Ek senik senapati se :- ye sab kya ho raha h senapati ji dev to humare samne h to hum per humla kon ker raha h, ye kesi maya h.


Darukasur :- ye maya ni in dusht devo ka vyuh rachna h , jisme hume fasya gaya h .


Jyoti Jo khud ye dekh ker heran thi use dekh
Sonam boli :- dekha di mane kaha n khel to abhi chalu hua h fas gaye naa mere trishul vyuh me


Ji ha dosto ye sab kuch ni Sonam ki gayi trishul vyuh rachna thi , jisme usne invisible devo ki sahayata se trishul vyuh bana asuro ko charo or se gher liya tha.


Ab aap soch rahe honge ki Sonam ko yudh kala k baare m itni knowledge kese to uska jwab ye tha ki jab Sonam apne pichle janam me sandhya k roop usne har tarah ki vidhya or gyan Arjit kiya tha or bhagwan ki kripa se jabse use apne pichle janm ki yaad aayi to usko apna gyaan bhi punah yad aagayi.


Devo k trishul vyuh k kaaran asuro m hadkamp mach gaya or apni sena ko yu bhayvit hota dekh.


Darukasur :- ruk jao sabke sab , kisi ko bhagne ki koi avashykta ni , bhagenge to ye sab dev apni jaan bacha ker .


Ab dekho apne senapati ka kamaal.


Ye bol darukasur apne rath ss niche uterta h or achanak apna rup badal ye tufan ka bavandar rupi daitya ka rup leliya


Or us bavandar ne apna Rukh devo ki or ker liya jis kaaran dev senik Usme samane lage or nast hone lage or bavandar ki charo or se hava ki shakti k kaaran trishul vyuh bhi nasht hone laga


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Darukasur haha :- bhago devo bhago , apni mrityu se lekin bach ni paoge aaj.


Hava me tabayi machate hue darukasur ki najar Jyoti p pad gayi.


Darukasur :- oh to tum mujhe mil hi gayi sundari , ab tumhe mujhe apne maharaj k pas lejane se koi ni rok sakta .


Ye bol vo Jyoti ki or bhadne laga.


Lekin tabhi devraj waha aagaye


Or bole .


Debraj :- ruk jao darukasur m tumhein Jyoti ko le jane ni dunga.


Darukasur haste hue :- acha to prayaas ker lo devraj.


Devraaj ne apne vajra se puri shakti se bijli prahar kiya , lekin darukasur k uska koi asar hi ni pad raha tha.


Darukasur ne ek jordar prahar kiya jisse devraj bhi chotil ho gaye the.


Jyoti Jo ye sab dekh pareshan ho gayi thi or sath me uske gussa bhi badhne laga or uske hath ki muthiya bich gayi or uske hath kale padne lage.


Vo bhayanak garjana k sath chilayi.


Jyoti :- basss darukasur.......


Jyoti ki is bhayanak garjana k sath hi us pure area m bhayanak vibration utppan hui or wo vibration jese hi darukasur se takrayi to agle hi Shan ek bhayanak chikh k sath hi darukasur nasht ho gaya.


Jise dekh sabhi devo m khushi ki lahar cha gayi or sab ishwer k jaykar lagane lage.


Lekin Jyoti heran thi ki ye sab hua kese ..


Jyoti '- Ye sab kya tha kese hua , kya ye mane .....


Ni ni m to ek shakrihin abla hu m kese ker sakti hu esa .


Tabhi Jyoti ki najar us or padi jaha karan samadhi m Lin tha , lekin waha se ek tezmayi shakti prakash fela hua tham


Jise dekh Jyoti k chahre p muskan aagayi or wo samjh gayi ye sab kese hua


Jyoti :- yaha ni h fir bhi apni gudiya ki raksha hetu sadev tatpar h mere bhaiya .


Ye sochte hue vo khush hoti h ki uske bhai ne aaj uske sath samast devo ki raksha ki.


Per kya sach m karan ne hi ye kiya tha.


Kya lagta h aapko.


Janne k liye bas itna hi


Aaj k liye bas itna hi.


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Jese hi wo roshni hati to samne khade shaks ko dekh sab chok gaye or hathyar nikal ker savdhan ho gaye.kyunki samne khada shaks dekhne m hi koi mahavir najar aaraha tha , jisne kale or nile rang ka kavach or mask pahana tha.


Or hath me prachand bijli se laharata hua trishul uske hath m shobha pa raha tha , ankhe uski nili thi.


Vritrasur gusse se :- tum , kon ho tum or is prakaar humare lok me.


Samne khada wo shaks bolaa :- sansaar m jab jab kaal or karm ka santulan bigdega or dushto k atyachar bhadenge, tab tab karmo ka hisab kerne dand nayak ko to aana hi hoga


Ji ha dosto samne khada shaks or koi ni dand nayak hi tha


Dandnayak ka naam sun ek baar to vritrasur chonka , lekin agle hi pal ek kamini hasi k sath


Vritrasur haste hue Tanz bhare swar me:- ohh dandnayak , aho bhagya humare jo humare swarg lok m pratham baar apka aagman hua dandnayak , (are seniko se ) are khade mera muh kya dekh rahe ho inka adar satkar ka prabhandh kero.


Dandnayak :- ye sab swang chodo vritrasur or apni bhalayi chahte ho to kAan khol k meri chetavni suno.


Vritrasur natak kerte hue apne senik se :- kya ! Kya kha abhi isme.


Senik :- maharaj ye aapko chetavni dene aaya h.


Vritrasur :- lagta h mere kaan kharab ho gaye h shayad jab hi mujhe vinti shabd ki jagah chetavni sunayi de raha h.


(Fir apni bhohe tante hue ) murkh dandnayak mane to socha tha ki tum me apne pita kfd saman kuch to akkal hogi , jis kAran tum apne pita ki rihai or devo k shamadan ki vinti kerne aate hoge, per shahhh , tum to kitne bade murkh nikle , ye jante hue ki mere vardan ka kavach tumhara to kya swayam tridevo k vash ki bhi baat ni , or phir bhi yudh kerne aagaye.


Dandnayak :- tumhare kaan shayad sachmuch kharab hi ho gaye h vritrasur, jab hi tumne mere kahe shabd thik se naa sune .


M yaha tumse yudh kerne kisi yodha k roop me ni (apna trishul gayab kerte hue ) balki ek doot banke aaya hu .


Or is galatfehmi m mat rahana vritrasur ki is swarg p tumhara adhikar h , kyunki Adhikar jab tak hi sthapit kiya jab hi kiya ja sakta jab uska purana adhikhari ya to swaecha se somp de ya use yudh m prajit ker uspe adhipatya sthapit kare.


Vritrasur :- doot ? Kesa doot or kesa sandesh laye or mat bhulo dandnayak mane swarg k raja devraj ko prajit puri imandari or apne bal p hasil kiya h ,. To is per mera dharmpurvak adhikar h.


Dandnayak :- tumhare mukh se dharm ki baate achi ni lagti vritrasur or tumse kisne kah diya ki swarg pe adhikar devtao ka tha.


Is swarg p adhikar to devo ne kab ka un shakti ko somp diya tha , jiske ek ishare ek icha p is dandnayak ne dusht asuro se is swarg ko bhutkAl m mukt kerwa diya tha, us samay devo ne hi swayam swarg ka d
Adhikhari niyukt kiya , jis kaaran mrityulok ki nivasini hote hue bhi , unhe deh smet swarg m aane ka adhikar h.


Murkh vritrasur or tum usi mahashakti se yudh kerne ki soch rahe ho , abhi bhi vaqt h


Marg p aajao , anyatha mera dandchakra tumhe mrityu k Marg p pahuncha dega.


Vritrasur gusse se bhanate hue :- bas bahut sun li tumhari bakwas, mujhe mrityu ki dhamki dene wale marega to ab to tu.


(Apne seniko se ) mera muh kya dekh rahe ho , pakad ker khatam ker do is haramjadee ko.


Vritrasur ka adesh pate hi sabhi senik or senapati apne hathiyar leker uski dandnayak ki or dode.


Per isse pahale wo untak pahunchte usse pahale hi dandnayak ne bas ek chutki bajayi or sabke sab jaha the jese the aage tham gaye.


Dandnayak :- murkh vritrasur tumne apna antim avsar bhi kho diya h , ab sajj ho jao apne ant ko us mahashakti k hatho, jisse tum kamzor samjhne ki bhul ker rahe ho.


Ye bol karan apne hath jhadak diye dono , jiske sath hi Jame hue sare senik udte hue jake swarg se bahar antriksh ki gahariyo m sama gaye.


Dandnayak :- murkh vritrasur m chahu to abhi isi Shan tera yahi ant ker dalu , per yaha sawal maa k vardaN k sath nari jati k samman ka bhi h or doot hone k naate m apni maryada bhang ker apni swamini k man ko shati ni pahuncha sakta.


Vritrasur :- haha galat fahmi m mat raho dandnyak , vritrasur ka ant kerne ka samarthya devo tak me ni to teri swamini kis khet ki muli h.


Dandnyak :- murkh vritrasur unka samarthya ka andaza isi baat se laga le , tere hazaro seniko ko ek hi Shan m mrityu k ghat utar dene wala ye dandnyak bhi us mahashakti ka keval doot hesiyat se yaha aaya h , us dandnayika k samarthya k baare m to tum swayam vichar ker lo .


Vritrasur dandnyak ki baat ko ansuni kerte hue :- chaal hat..


Dandnyak :- vinash kaale viprit budhi.


Ye bol dandnyak waha se gayab ho gaya


Wahi dusri or


Location :- gate of realms


Gate of realms ye wo darwaza tha jo ek special jagah p tha , jo na prathvi p tha na hi space m , ye ek alag hi dimension m mojud tha , jo kuch sal pahale karan or uski team ne seal kiya tha , ek bahut bade khatre se sirf ek duniya ni balki anant brahamando ki sharakhlao ko , sidhe shabdo m kahe to pure multiverse ko.


Lekin wo khatra kya tha or karan ki konsi team ne kese use roka ye to aage hi pata chalega, lekin is waqt karan k order k anusaar wo abhi is portal k charo or ek solid force feild teyar kerne wali thi.


Asma ne apni utility belt se ek gol sa device nikala or uspe ek button laga tha or use daba ker jamin per rakh diya .


Jiske sath hi gate ke charo or ek force feild teyar ho gayi .


Asma '- chalo ye kaam to ho gaya, Bhaijan ko msg ker deti hu.


Or msg kerte hue wo usi teleportal se waha se chali gayi apne ghar ki or is baat se anjaan ki wo waha akeli ni thi .



shera jisne invisible Cape pahan ker jo Asma ko chakma deker uske jane ka hi intezar ker raha tha apni assistant k sath.


Shera Asma k jane k baad Cape hata ker haste hue :- bahut hoshiyar samjhta h naa ye guardian, lekin ye ni jante ki is baar inka samna shadow council k chief Shera se hua h , or Shera kis khet ki muli h , ye av tak inhone jana ni .


(Apni secretary se ) jasmine humari dimensional canon ready h .


Jasmine :- yes sir.


Ye bol ker wo apni watch ka ek button dabati h , jiske sath hi samne ek portal khulta h or Usme se ek cannon jesi machine apne aap Chalke untak aati h.



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Jasmine :- lijiye sir aapke order k according cannon to ready h but hum isko use kese karenge , huntress ki force field ko todna koi asan kaam ni.


Shera haste hue :- asan ,ye to meri chutkiyo ka khel h , just wait and watch.


Ye bol Shera apni watch ka ek button dabata h jisse watch se ek projector screen nikalti h , jispe Shera kuch type kerta h.


Or agle hi pal ye kya Asma ne force field lagaya tha wo apne aap hat gayi.


Jasmine herani se :- sir ye apne kese kiya.


Shera haste hue :- bahut asan tha Jasmin ye huntress jitna chalak or intelligent khud ko samjhti h utni h ni.


Jis din m projector teleportation se unse mulakat kerne gaya tha, tabhi mane unke program m ek chota sa hacker virus dal diya , jiski unko bhanak tak ni thi , jiske kaaran ye sab hua h.


Jasmine :- you are so smart sir , but problem sirf portel ki hi ni h sir , is cannon ka ager hume use kerke seal ko destroy kerna h to hume bahut hi high level cosmic energy ki need hogi .


Shera :- uska bhi intezaam bahut hi jald ho jayega.


Jasmine :- but how sir.


Shera :- wahi se jis shakti ne is seal ko is gate p lagaya.


Just wait and watch.


Fir jasmine canon ko set kerti h or uspe lage ek button ko press kerti h jiske sath vo invisible ho jati h or fir Shera wapas force field ko activate ker waha se nikal jate h.


Wahi dusri or


Naina bhi apni puja k jariye Rohan k sath ye pata lagane m lagi hoti h ki kisne Riya p marak sidhi ka prayog kiya tha.


Naina kafi der se jamin p charo or ek yantra bana or uske bich me apna trishul set ker kuch vidhi k baad dhyan avastha m Bethi hui thi or Rohan bhi apni energy se Naina ki teleportation power ki sima ka vistar ker raha tha.


Lekin kafi der k nirantar prayas k baad bhi unhe safalta prayas na hui or energy k jyada istemal k kaaran dono hi kafi thak chuke the.


Rohan hafte hue :- kuch pata chala Naina, ki kisne di per kala jadu kiya.


Naina :- na m sir hilati h.


Rohan :- per esa kese possible h Naina , itni energy use kerne k baad bhi hume kuch pata naa chala ,khasker tum to is kaM m mahir ho fir bhi esa hona kuch samjh ni araha.


Naina :- Naina yahi to mujhe samjh ni aaraha bhai ki esa kese ho sakta h , itna to yakin ho gaya h mujhe ye sab dekh k ki ye kam koi insan ka to bilkul ni , or na hi ye kisi bhut pishach jesi koi shetani shakti bhi ni h ,ye to kuch alag hi h.


Lekin aap chinta mat kijiye bhai m iska pata laga k hi rahungi.


Abhi naina aage kuch bolti usse pahale hi asha ki aawaaz aati h jo use pukar rahi thi , kyunki ghar jane ka time ho gaya tha.


Naina Rohan k kandhe p hath rakh :- mujhe jana hoga bhai per aap chinta mat kero.


Naina man me :- kerna hi padega na Rohan bhai , aap hi to banoge us karan k khilaf mera brahmastra.


Ye sochte hue Naina asha k sath apne ghar k liye nikal gayi.


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Jyoti ki sharan m aaye devo ne bhi apni kamar kas li thi , Jyoti ki raksha hetu.


Devraj :- m or aap sab ye baat to jante h ki hum un asuro ka samna ni ker sakti per fir bhi hum yudh kerenge putri Jyoti ki raksha hetu


Kyu ki jab hum dev lok se nishkashit ho dar dar bhatak rahe the , tab putri Jyoti ne hi hume ashray diya or ab samay aagaya h us upkaar ka rin utar sake.


Kya aap sab dev sajj h.


Sabhi dev ha m ha milate h devraj ki.


Tabhi waha asur bhi Aphunche apne senapati darukasur k sath.


Darukasur devo ko dekh :- haha dekho to mere veer asur seniko , us ladki ne humare khilaf hare hue devo ki fauz ikatha ki h .


(Devraj se) devraj lagta h pichli baar ki haar ka badla tum bhul gaye kya.


Devraj :- darukasur tum yaha aatogaye lekin yaha se jivit ni jane wale , is baar tum adharmio ka ant avashya hoga.


Darukasur :- rasi jal gayi per bal ni gaya, h dam tumme devraj to aajao medan m .


Akkkaraman .......


Ye bol asuro ne yudh ched diya or dev bhi unse bhid gaye.


Or fir shuru hua devasur sangram jisme dono or se bhayanak ashtra or shastro ki barish ho rahi thi.


Lekin Kuch samay baad asur devo per bhari padne lage , jis kaaran Jyoti Jo uchai se yudh dekh rahi thi use tension hone lagi.


Jyoti '- sona hume kuch kerna hoga , ager esa hi chalta raha to asuro ki vijay nishchit h or ager esa hua to bahut bada anarth ho jayega.


Sonam muskurate hue :- aap tension mat lijiye di, adharm chahe kitna bhi Prabal ho jaye , lekin dharm se kabhi ni jit sakta , khel to abhi shuru hua h.


Abhi yudh asuro k haq m aane ko hi tha ki achanak asuro p charo or se humla hone laga tiro se.


Jisse asuro m afra tafri mach gayi .


Ek senik senapati se :- ye sab kya ho raha h senapati ji dev to humare samne h to hum per humla kon ker raha h, ye kesi maya h.


Darukasur :- ye maya ni in dusht devo ka vyuh rachna h , jisme hume fasya gaya h .


Jyoti Jo khud ye dekh ker heran thi use dekh
Sonam boli :- dekha di mane kaha n khel to abhi chalu hua h fas gaye naa mere trishul vyuh me


Ji ha dosto ye sab kuch ni Sonam ki gayi trishul vyuh rachna thi , jisme usne invisible devo ki sahayata se trishul vyuh bana asuro ko charo or se gher liya tha.


Ab aap soch rahe honge ki Sonam ko yudh kala k baare m itni knowledge kese to uska jwab ye tha ki jab Sonam apne pichle janam me sandhya k roop usne har tarah ki vidhya or gyan Arjit kiya tha or bhagwan ki kripa se jabse use apne pichle janm ki yaad aayi to usko apna gyaan bhi punah yad aagayi.


Devo k trishul vyuh k kaaran asuro m hadkamp mach gaya or apni sena ko yu bhayvit hota dekh.


Darukasur :- ruk jao sabke sab , kisi ko bhagne ki koi avashykta ni , bhagenge to ye sab dev apni jaan bacha ker .


Ab dekho apne senapati ka kamaal.


Ye bol darukasur apne rath ss niche uterta h or achanak apna rup badal ye tufan ka bavandar rupi daitya ka rup leliya


Or us bavandar ne apna Rukh devo ki or ker liya jis kaaran dev senik Usme samane lage or nast hone lage or bavandar ki charo or se hava ki shakti k kaaran trishul vyuh bhi nasht hone laga


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Darukasur haha :- bhago devo bhago , apni mrityu se lekin bach ni paoge aaj.


Hava me tabayi machate hue darukasur ki najar Jyoti p pad gayi.


Darukasur :- oh to tum mujhe mil hi gayi sundari , ab tumhe mujhe apne maharaj k pas lejane se koi ni rok sakta .


Ye bol vo Jyoti ki or bhadne laga.


Lekin tabhi devraj waha aagaye


Or bole .


Debraj :- ruk jao darukasur m tumhein Jyoti ko le jane ni dunga.


Darukasur haste hue :- acha to prayaas ker lo devraj.


Devraaj ne apne vajra se puri shakti se bijli prahar kiya , lekin darukasur k uska koi asar hi ni pad raha tha.


Darukasur ne ek jordar prahar kiya jisse devraj bhi chotil ho gaye the.


Jyoti Jo ye sab dekh pareshan ho gayi thi or sath me uske gussa bhi badhne laga or uske hath ki muthiya bich gayi or uske hath kale padne lage.


Vo bhayanak garjana k sath chilayi.


Jyoti :- basss darukasur.......


Jyoti ki is bhayanak garjana k sath hi us pure area m bhayanak vibration utppan hui or wo vibration jese hi darukasur se takrayi to agle hi Shan ek bhayanak chikh k sath hi darukasur nasht ho gaya.


Jise dekh sabhi devo m khushi ki lahar cha gayi or sab ishwer k jaykar lagane lage.


Lekin Jyoti heran thi ki ye sab hua kese ..


Jyoti '- Ye sab kya tha kese hua , kya ye mane .....


Ni ni m to ek shakrihin abla hu m kese ker sakti hu esa .


Tabhi Jyoti ki najar us or padi jaha karan samadhi m Lin tha , lekin waha se ek tezmayi shakti prakash fela hua tham


Jise dekh Jyoti k chahre p muskan aagayi or wo samjh gayi ye sab kese hua


Jyoti :- yaha ni h fir bhi apni gudiya ki raksha hetu sadev tatpar h mere bhaiya .


Ye sochte hue vo khush hoti h ki uske bhai ne aaj uske sath samast devo ki raksha ki.


Per kya sach m karan ne hi ye kiya tha.


Kya lagta h aapko.


Janne k liye bas itna hi


Aaj k liye bas itna hi.


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Jese hi wo roshni hati to samne khade shaks ko dekh sab chok gaye or hathyar nikal ker savdhan ho gaye.kyunki samne khada shaks dekhne m hi koi mahavir najar aaraha tha , jisne kale or nile rang ka kavach or mask pahana tha.


Or hath me prachand bijli se laharata hua trishul uske hath m shobha pa raha tha , ankhe uski nili thi.


Vritrasur gusse se :- tum , kon ho tum or is prakaar humare lok me.


Samne khada wo shaks bolaa :- sansaar m jab jab kaal or karm ka santulan bigdega or dushto k atyachar bhadenge, tab tab karmo ka hisab kerne dand nayak ko to aana hi hoga


Ji ha dosto samne khada shaks or koi ni dand nayak hi tha


Dandnayak ka naam sun ek baar to vritrasur chonka , lekin agle hi pal ek kamini hasi k sath


Vritrasur haste hue Tanz bhare swar me:- ohh dandnayak , aho bhagya humare jo humare swarg lok m pratham baar apka aagman hua dandnayak , (are seniko se ) are khade mera muh kya dekh rahe ho inka adar satkar ka prabhandh kero.


Dandnayak :- ye sab swang chodo vritrasur or apni bhalayi chahte ho to kAan khol k meri chetavni suno.


Vritrasur natak kerte hue apne senik se :- kya ! Kya kha abhi isme.


Senik :- maharaj ye aapko chetavni dene aaya h.


Vritrasur :- lagta h mere kaan kharab ho gaye h shayad jab hi mujhe vinti shabd ki jagah chetavni sunayi de raha h.


(Fir apni bhohe tante hue ) murkh dandnayak mane to socha tha ki tum me apne pita kfd saman kuch to akkal hogi , jis kAran tum apne pita ki rihai or devo k shamadan ki vinti kerne aate hoge, per shahhh , tum to kitne bade murkh nikle , ye jante hue ki mere vardan ka kavach tumhara to kya swayam tridevo k vash ki bhi baat ni , or phir bhi yudh kerne aagaye.


Dandnayak :- tumhare kaan shayad sachmuch kharab hi ho gaye h vritrasur, jab hi tumne mere kahe shabd thik se naa sune .


M yaha tumse yudh kerne kisi yodha k roop me ni (apna trishul gayab kerte hue ) balki ek doot banke aaya hu .


Or is galatfehmi m mat rahana vritrasur ki is swarg p tumhara adhikar h , kyunki Adhikar jab tak hi sthapit kiya jab hi kiya ja sakta jab uska purana adhikhari ya to swaecha se somp de ya use yudh m prajit ker uspe adhipatya sthapit kare.


Vritrasur :- doot ? Kesa doot or kesa sandesh laye or mat bhulo dandnayak mane swarg k raja devraj ko prajit puri imandari or apne bal p hasil kiya h ,. To is per mera dharmpurvak adhikar h.


Dandnayak :- tumhare mukh se dharm ki baate achi ni lagti vritrasur or tumse kisne kah diya ki swarg pe adhikar devtao ka tha.


Is swarg p adhikar to devo ne kab ka un shakti ko somp diya tha , jiske ek ishare ek icha p is dandnayak ne dusht asuro se is swarg ko bhutkAl m mukt kerwa diya tha, us samay devo ne hi swayam swarg ka d
Adhikhari niyukt kiya , jis kaaran mrityulok ki nivasini hote hue bhi , unhe deh smet swarg m aane ka adhikar h.


Murkh vritrasur or tum usi mahashakti se yudh kerne ki soch rahe ho , abhi bhi vaqt h


Marg p aajao , anyatha mera dandchakra tumhe mrityu k Marg p pahuncha dega.


Vritrasur gusse se bhanate hue :- bas bahut sun li tumhari bakwas, mujhe mrityu ki dhamki dene wale marega to ab to tu.


(Apne seniko se ) mera muh kya dekh rahe ho , pakad ker khatam ker do is haramjadee ko.


Vritrasur ka adesh pate hi sabhi senik or senapati apne hathiyar leker uski dandnayak ki or dode.


Per isse pahale wo untak pahunchte usse pahale hi dandnayak ne bas ek chutki bajayi or sabke sab jaha the jese the aage tham gaye.


Dandnayak :- murkh vritrasur tumne apna antim avsar bhi kho diya h , ab sajj ho jao apne ant ko us mahashakti k hatho, jisse tum kamzor samjhne ki bhul ker rahe ho.


Ye bol karan apne hath jhadak diye dono , jiske sath hi Jame hue sare senik udte hue jake swarg se bahar antriksh ki gahariyo m sama gaye.


Dandnayak :- murkh vritrasur m chahu to abhi isi Shan tera yahi ant ker dalu , per yaha sawal maa k vardaN k sath nari jati k samman ka bhi h or doot hone k naate m apni maryada bhang ker apni swamini k man ko shati ni pahuncha sakta.


Vritrasur :- haha galat fahmi m mat raho dandnyak , vritrasur ka ant kerne ka samarthya devo tak me ni to teri swamini kis khet ki muli h.


Dandnyak :- murkh vritrasur unka samarthya ka andaza isi baat se laga le , tere hazaro seniko ko ek hi Shan m mrityu k ghat utar dene wala ye dandnyak bhi us mahashakti ka keval doot hesiyat se yaha aaya h , us dandnayika k samarthya k baare m to tum swayam vichar ker lo .


Vritrasur dandnyak ki baat ko ansuni kerte hue :- chaal hat..


Dandnyak :- vinash kaale viprit budhi.


Ye bol dandnyak waha se gayab ho gaya


Wahi dusri or


Location :- gate of realms


Gate of realms ye wo darwaza tha jo ek special jagah p tha , jo na prathvi p tha na hi space m , ye ek alag hi dimension m mojud tha , jo kuch sal pahale karan or uski team ne seal kiya tha , ek bahut bade khatre se sirf ek duniya ni balki anant brahamando ki sharakhlao ko , sidhe shabdo m kahe to pure multiverse ko.


Lekin wo khatra kya tha or karan ki konsi team ne kese use roka ye to aage hi pata chalega, lekin is waqt karan k order k anusaar wo abhi is portal k charo or ek solid force feild teyar kerne wali thi.


Asma ne apni utility belt se ek gol sa device nikala or uspe ek button laga tha or use daba ker jamin per rakh diya .


Jiske sath hi gate ke charo or ek force feild teyar ho gayi .


Asma '- chalo ye kaam to ho gaya, Bhaijan ko msg ker deti hu.


Or msg kerte hue wo usi teleportal se waha se chali gayi apne ghar ki or is baat se anjaan ki wo waha akeli ni thi .



shera jisne invisible Cape pahan ker jo Asma ko chakma deker uske jane ka hi intezar ker raha tha apni assistant k sath.


Shera Asma k jane k baad Cape hata ker haste hue :- bahut hoshiyar samjhta h naa ye guardian, lekin ye ni jante ki is baar inka samna shadow council k chief Shera se hua h , or Shera kis khet ki muli h , ye av tak inhone jana ni .


(Apni secretary se ) jasmine humari dimensional canon ready h .


Jasmine :- yes sir.


Ye bol ker wo apni watch ka ek button dabati h , jiske sath hi samne ek portal khulta h or Usme se ek cannon jesi machine apne aap Chalke untak aati h.



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Jasmine :- lijiye sir aapke order k according cannon to ready h but hum isko use kese karenge , huntress ki force field ko todna koi asan kaam ni.


Shera haste hue :- asan ,ye to meri chutkiyo ka khel h , just wait and watch.


Ye bol Shera apni watch ka ek button dabata h jisse watch se ek projector screen nikalti h , jispe Shera kuch type kerta h.


Or agle hi pal ye kya Asma ne force field lagaya tha wo apne aap hat gayi.


Jasmine herani se :- sir ye apne kese kiya.


Shera haste hue :- bahut asan tha Jasmin ye huntress jitna chalak or intelligent khud ko samjhti h utni h ni.


Jis din m projector teleportation se unse mulakat kerne gaya tha, tabhi mane unke program m ek chota sa hacker virus dal diya , jiski unko bhanak tak ni thi , jiske kaaran ye sab hua h.


Jasmine :- you are so smart sir , but problem sirf portel ki hi ni h sir , is cannon ka ager hume use kerke seal ko destroy kerna h to hume bahut hi high level cosmic energy ki need hogi .


Shera :- uska bhi intezaam bahut hi jald ho jayega.


Jasmine :- but how sir.


Shera :- wahi se jis shakti ne is seal ko is gate p lagaya.


Just wait and watch.


Fir jasmine canon ko set kerti h or uspe lage ek button ko press kerti h jiske sath vo invisible ho jati h or fir Shera wapas force field ko activate ker waha se nikal jate h.


Wahi dusri or


Naina bhi apni puja k jariye Rohan k sath ye pata lagane m lagi hoti h ki kisne Riya p marak sidhi ka prayog kiya tha.


Naina kafi der se jamin p charo or ek yantra bana or uske bich me apna trishul set ker kuch vidhi k baad dhyan avastha m Bethi hui thi or Rohan bhi apni energy se Naina ki teleportation power ki sima ka vistar ker raha tha.


Lekin kafi der k nirantar prayas k baad bhi unhe safalta prayas na hui or energy k jyada istemal k kaaran dono hi kafi thak chuke the.


Rohan hafte hue :- kuch pata chala Naina, ki kisne di per kala jadu kiya.


Naina :- na m sir hilati h.


Rohan :- per esa kese possible h Naina , itni energy use kerne k baad bhi hume kuch pata naa chala ,khasker tum to is kaM m mahir ho fir bhi esa hona kuch samjh ni araha.


Naina :- Naina yahi to mujhe samjh ni aaraha bhai ki esa kese ho sakta h , itna to yakin ho gaya h mujhe ye sab dekh k ki ye kam koi insan ka to bilkul ni , or na hi ye kisi bhut pishach jesi koi shetani shakti bhi ni h ,ye to kuch alag hi h.


Lekin aap chinta mat kijiye bhai m iska pata laga k hi rahungi.


Abhi naina aage kuch bolti usse pahale hi asha ki aawaaz aati h jo use pukar rahi thi , kyunki ghar jane ka time ho gaya tha.


Naina Rohan k kandhe p hath rakh :- mujhe jana hoga bhai per aap chinta mat kero.


Naina man me :- kerna hi padega na Rohan bhai , aap hi to banoge us karan k khilaf mera brahmastra.


Ye sochte hue Naina asha k sath apne ghar k liye nikal gayi.


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Jyoti ki sharan m aaye devo ne bhi apni kamar kas li thi , Jyoti ki raksha hetu.


Devraj :- m or aap sab ye baat to jante h ki hum un asuro ka samna ni ker sakti per fir bhi hum yudh kerenge putri Jyoti ki raksha hetu


Kyu ki jab hum dev lok se nishkashit ho dar dar bhatak rahe the , tab putri Jyoti ne hi hume ashray diya or ab samay aagaya h us upkaar ka rin utar sake.


Kya aap sab dev sajj h.


Sabhi dev ha m ha milate h devraj ki.


Tabhi waha asur bhi Aphunche apne senapati darukasur k sath.


Darukasur devo ko dekh :- haha dekho to mere veer asur seniko , us ladki ne humare khilaf hare hue devo ki fauz ikatha ki h .


(Devraj se) devraj lagta h pichli baar ki haar ka badla tum bhul gaye kya.


Devraj :- darukasur tum yaha aatogaye lekin yaha se jivit ni jane wale , is baar tum adharmio ka ant avashya hoga.


Darukasur :- rasi jal gayi per bal ni gaya, h dam tumme devraj to aajao medan m .


Akkkaraman .......


Ye bol asuro ne yudh ched diya or dev bhi unse bhid gaye.


Or fir shuru hua devasur sangram jisme dono or se bhayanak ashtra or shastro ki barish ho rahi thi.


Lekin Kuch samay baad asur devo per bhari padne lage , jis kaaran Jyoti Jo uchai se yudh dekh rahi thi use tension hone lagi.


Jyoti '- sona hume kuch kerna hoga , ager esa hi chalta raha to asuro ki vijay nishchit h or ager esa hua to bahut bada anarth ho jayega.


Sonam muskurate hue :- aap tension mat lijiye di, adharm chahe kitna bhi Prabal ho jaye , lekin dharm se kabhi ni jit sakta , khel to abhi shuru hua h.


Abhi yudh asuro k haq m aane ko hi tha ki achanak asuro p charo or se humla hone laga tiro se.


Jisse asuro m afra tafri mach gayi .


Ek senik senapati se :- ye sab kya ho raha h senapati ji dev to humare samne h to hum per humla kon ker raha h, ye kesi maya h.


Darukasur :- ye maya ni in dusht devo ka vyuh rachna h , jisme hume fasya gaya h .


Jyoti Jo khud ye dekh ker heran thi use dekh
Sonam boli :- dekha di mane kaha n khel to abhi chalu hua h fas gaye naa mere trishul vyuh me


Ji ha dosto ye sab kuch ni Sonam ki gayi trishul vyuh rachna thi , jisme usne invisible devo ki sahayata se trishul vyuh bana asuro ko charo or se gher liya tha.


Ab aap soch rahe honge ki Sonam ko yudh kala k baare m itni knowledge kese to uska jwab ye tha ki jab Sonam apne pichle janam me sandhya k roop usne har tarah ki vidhya or gyan Arjit kiya tha or bhagwan ki kripa se jabse use apne pichle janm ki yaad aayi to usko apna gyaan bhi punah yad aagayi.


Devo k trishul vyuh k kaaran asuro m hadkamp mach gaya or apni sena ko yu bhayvit hota dekh.


Darukasur :- ruk jao sabke sab , kisi ko bhagne ki koi avashykta ni , bhagenge to ye sab dev apni jaan bacha ker .


Ab dekho apne senapati ka kamaal.


Ye bol darukasur apne rath ss niche uterta h or achanak apna rup badal ye tufan ka bavandar rupi daitya ka rup leliya


Or us bavandar ne apna Rukh devo ki or ker liya jis kaaran dev senik Usme samane lage or nast hone lage or bavandar ki charo or se hava ki shakti k kaaran trishul vyuh bhi nasht hone laga


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Darukasur haha :- bhago devo bhago , apni mrityu se lekin bach ni paoge aaj.


Hava me tabayi machate hue darukasur ki najar Jyoti p pad gayi.


Darukasur :- oh to tum mujhe mil hi gayi sundari , ab tumhe mujhe apne maharaj k pas lejane se koi ni rok sakta .


Ye bol vo Jyoti ki or bhadne laga.


Lekin tabhi devraj waha aagaye


Or bole .


Debraj :- ruk jao darukasur m tumhein Jyoti ko le jane ni dunga.


Darukasur haste hue :- acha to prayaas ker lo devraj.


Devraaj ne apne vajra se puri shakti se bijli prahar kiya , lekin darukasur k uska koi asar hi ni pad raha tha.


Darukasur ne ek jordar prahar kiya jisse devraj bhi chotil ho gaye the.


Jyoti Jo ye sab dekh pareshan ho gayi thi or sath me uske gussa bhi badhne laga or uske hath ki muthiya bich gayi or uske hath kale padne lage.


Vo bhayanak garjana k sath chilayi.


Jyoti :- basss darukasur.......


Jyoti ki is bhayanak garjana k sath hi us pure area m bhayanak vibration utppan hui or wo vibration jese hi darukasur se takrayi to agle hi Shan ek bhayanak chikh k sath hi darukasur nasht ho gaya.


Jise dekh sabhi devo m khushi ki lahar cha gayi or sab ishwer k jaykar lagane lage.


Lekin Jyoti heran thi ki ye sab hua kese ..


Jyoti '- Ye sab kya tha kese hua , kya ye mane .....


Ni ni m to ek shakrihin abla hu m kese ker sakti hu esa .


Tabhi Jyoti ki najar us or padi jaha karan samadhi m Lin tha , lekin waha se ek tezmayi shakti prakash fela hua tham


Jise dekh Jyoti k chahre p muskan aagayi or wo samjh gayi ye sab kese hua


Jyoti :- yaha ni h fir bhi apni gudiya ki raksha hetu sadev tatpar h mere bhaiya .


Ye sochte hue vo khush hoti h ki uske bhai ne aaj uske sath samast devo ki raksha ki.


Per kya sach m karan ne hi ye kiya tha.


Kya lagta h aapko.


Janne k liye bas itna hi


Aaj k liye bas itna hi.


Stay tuned











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Wonderful update bhai

Story me itne n mod aur character aaya hai ki writter sahab thoda confuse hai

Kyuki aage ka sochne aur likhne me bhut samay lag rha hai.

Gjb update bhai 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

Ye yaksh raani ka bachground dekhna padega ki kyon ye apne hero ke parivaar ke peeche padi hai. Jyoti aur Vritrasur ka yudh dekhne laayak hoga jo ki Mangal dev ke ahankaar ka ant karega magar Mangal dev ke dwara kiye gaye yug ka parinaam bhi dekha padega. Naina ko jaldi se sachchai se avgat karana padega taaki wo bhi apne hero ki sakti ban sake. Superb update.

Bohat hi behtreen update. Matlab jhinga dikha Pura ravat pakadne ka irada hain. Ab yah Rani kise bulaney lagi kahi usne Naina se to dosti nahi kar li aur usko bula rahi हो madad ke liye. Ab dekhna Hai ki yah Kaun aaya Hai sward me Kia kfd hain ya DN khud aa Gaya hain.

Very nice update bro.

majedar update ..jyoty ne yudh ka prastav rakh diya usse shadi karne ke liye vritrasur ke saamne .
vritrasur waise hai bada dimaag wala jo apne sena ko bhej raha hai yudh karne jyoty se .
ab devraj bhi pareshan ho gaye jyoty ki halat ke baare me jaankar ..

aur ye rani ka maarak shakti ke tootne se pareshan hona sahi hi hai par abhi usko pata nahi ki wo sab kaise hua ..
aur ab rani ne kisko bulaya hai apne kaam ko anjaam dene ke liye ..

Nice going bro
But ab Jyoti ki sahaayata kaun karega is yuddh mein aur woh sahaayata pratyaksh roop se hogi athwa apratyaksh roop se?
Shera ne jo dhamki di hai ab uska kya hoga?
Hunter team ke sadasy kaun kaun hain?
Yaksh raani ne Riya ko apna mohra banaya apne yagya ke liye parantu isse uska prayojan kya tha? Kyun kiya usne aisa?
Aur Karna ko jo Jyoti se dur hona hoga kahin uska kaaran yeh Yaksh Raani toh nahin banegi na....
Aur Naina Karan ke saathiyon ki madad yun hi toh kar nahin rahi hogi iske peeche uska kya swarth hai.....
Kya Kaal aur Naina Riya ko bacha paayenge.....

Bahot behtareen zaberdast
Shaandaar update bhai
Lajawab

Waiting For Next Update Bro

Nice update

Update ka intizar h Harry bhai

We Are Watting For Next Update Bri
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