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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Harry rocks

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update no :- 225
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Location :- shani lok.
Shani dev ne ek sabha bulayi thi ,jisme sabhi grah upasthit the , sivaay rahu ketu or mangal ko chod.
Bhudh :- kahiye shani dev apne yu achanak ye aapatkalin sabha kyu bulayi .
Chandra dev :- bhudh uchit kah rahe h shani dev , esi kya samasya aan padi jo aapne hum sab ko shighrata se bulaya.
Shani dev dev guru brihaspati ki or dekhte h, jese unhe apna mantavya batane ki vinti ker rahe ho.
Brihaspati:- shani dev ne ye sabha isliye bulayi h budh dev , kyunki vritrasur ka tap purn ho chuka h or ab uske mantavya k marg ka pahala kadam humper humla hi hoga.
Shukrachary :- to ese m hume kya karna chahiye shani dev
Surya dev ugr swar m apne ashtra ko nikalte hue.
:- kerna kya h daitya guru , isme shani se kya puchna , wo yaha aayega to sahi per jivit wapas ni lotega.
Shukrachary :- esa sambhab ni h surya dev , kya aapme ya humme se kisi m itna samarthy h ki hum maa adishakti k vardaan ko taal sake, ese m hum kya ker sakte h shani dev
Shani dev ek saans m jo bolte h use sun surya dev bhadak uthe
Surya dev tez awaaz me :- asambhav , m surya dev jagat ko is jagat ko roshni sampan kerte h wo esa kadapi ni ker sakta.

Chandra :- dev guru uchit kah rahe h surya dev , ek shan sun to lijiye.
Sabhi graho k kahane per surya dev shant ho jate h , or shani dev ki baat sun wo saj ho gaye , fir sabhi ko shani dev ne apni yojna sunayi , jise sun surya dev bole.
Surya ;- kya tumhe sampoorn roop se apni yojna p vishwas h ki wo safal hogi.
Shani :- avashy safal hogi surydev kyunki burai chahe kitni shaktishali ho jaye , parantu vijay dharm ki hi hoti aayi h or aage bhi esa hi hoga.
Shani dev ka upaay sun sab kuch der soch vichar ker man lete h.
Budh :- parantu hume ye samjh ni aaraha itni mahatvapoorn sabha bulati gayi , parantu fir bhi mangal dev yaha mojud kyu ni h
Shani :- aap sab yojna ki teyari kijiye , mangal dev ko sandesh swatah hi pahunch jayega.
Ye sab apne apne lok lot jate h.

Flashback continue

Wahi dusri or
Wo gunde jinhone asma ko uthaya tha wo use leker apne adde p aate h or aasma jisko unhone behosh ker diya tha , use lejaker ek kamre m leta dete h jaha or bhi kayi ladkiya kaid thi.
Sajid :- rafiq jaldi se boss ko phone laga , unhe khushkhabri to di jaye ki unhone jo 25 ladkiyo ko lane ka kam hume sompa tha wo pura hua.
Rafiq ha me gardan hilate hue phone lagata h apne boss ko khabar deta h , to samne se boss ka jwab aata h ki wo pas m hi h or wo jald hi wha pahunch rahe h.

Kuch der baad unke adde k bahar 10 se 15 gadiya rukti h usse utarta h jana pahachana chahara jo kon tha wo aage pata chalega.

Rafiq :- aaiye boss aiye swagat h aapka


Boss :- ye faltu ki bate chodo , or ye batao kam hua ya ni.

Sajid :- ji boss kam ho gaya , ladkiya ready h , per boss ek baat samjh ni aayi ki aap itne sare admi kyu leke aaye yaha .

Boss k sath ek admi bola :- ye admi isliye kyunki pichli baar jo humare sath hua wesa dobara na ho isliye, pichli baar us kamini ladki ki vajah s ena keval wo ladkiya hath se nikli balki humne kitne aadmi bhi kho diye apne.




Jis kaaran boss ka order saf h ki ab har ek kadam hum fuk fuk k rakhe.

Sajid :- lekin in sab ki kya jarurat h fir bhi humare shera boss ne to usi time apne shatir dimag ki badolat us ladki ki wo halat ker di thi ki ager wo jinda bhi hui to apahij ho gayi hogi.



Ji ha dosto ye boss or koi ni shera hi tha , jisne jyoti ki wo halat ki thi , or ye us waqt usi hadse ki baate ker rahe the.

Shera :- bas bahut hui baate , chalo ab thoda kam ker liya jaye , ladkiya kaha h ?.

Rafiq :- ji boss aaiye.


Rafiq shera ko leke usi room ki or leke jata h , or apne aadmi ko gate kholne ko kholta h.

Ek admi jese hi gate kholne ko hota h ki ek jordaar aawaz k sath wo aadmi usi darwaje k sath chipke hue udta hua itni zor se takrata h ki uske sir ka kachumar nikal jata h.

Ye dekh shera sahit sabhi heran rah jate h or tabhi uSi room se ek laal dhua sa nikal charo or felne lagta h .

Or usi k sath hi fizao m chikhe gunjne lagi or jab wo dhua hata to samne ka nazara dekh shera ki ankhe ki fati ki fati rah gayi , kyunki samne ka nazara ki kuch esa tha.

Shera k sath aaye hue aadmi jo ginti m 60 70 k karib the , un sabki lashe jamin p anginat tukdo m padi thi , jinhe dekh shera rafiq , sajid samet 2 hi gunde bache the unhe ultiya hone lagi.

Or herani ki sima to tab unki na rahi jab unhone paya ki ye sab kisne kiya h wo dekh.

Unhone paya ki unhi lasho k pas ek shaks jo uper se leker niche tak lal or kale mix colour rang k kisi costume type dress m khada h , usne chahre p bhi ek mask pahana tha.


Wo kuch kuch marvel k daredevil jesa najar aaraha tha , uske dono hatho m khun se sane do sticks the, or wo jese hi ghum ker shera or uske sathiyo ki or dekhta h to unki fat k hath m aajati h , kyu ki wo pate h ki us shaks ki ankhe to thi hi ni , bas unki jagah bas 2 laal rang ki roshniya chamak rahi thi
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Shera thodi himmat kerke :- kon h tu or teri himmat kese hui yaha ane ki .

Wo shaqs apni bhari aawaz me

Shaqs :- shikari hu m , hunter hu

(Badi hi tezi se shera k bagal m aa uske ek admi ki thudi p itni jor se stick marta h ki uski khopdi hi uske sir k mas chite hue hava m ud gayi or niche rah gaya bina khopdi k latkte hue mas k sath us admi ka dhad)

Tum jese papio ki aatmao ka hunter

(Fir dusri stick ko magic se ek khanjar m badal ek dusre admi ki or ese feka ki wo khanjar uske mathe ko chirte hue uske dimag ko apne m fasa dusri or se aarpar ho wo diwar m dhas gaya , or baad m wo chaku us ker wapas us shaqs k hath m aagaya or wapas stick m badal gaya).

Shaqs :- or naam h mera soul huntress.

Shera pahale to kaamp utha lekin fir usne himmat ker bola :- tu jo bhi h lekin aaj tu yaha se jinda bach k ni jane wala

(Apne sathio se) dekh kya rahe ho bhun dalo sale ko

Shera ka order sunte hi sab soul huntress ki taraf banduk than lete h or jese hi wo fire kerne lage ki badi tezi se bhag bhag k goliyo ko dodge kerne laga , lekin usko dekh ker ye lag raha tha ki wo goliyo se unko dekh ker ni balki unki aawazo ko sun ke bach raha tha.

Kyunki wo apna chahra niche ker apne kaam ko hi aage kerke idher udher ho raha tha


Pahale to usne kafi der tak un sab ko dodge kerta raha , jab tak ki unki goliya khatam na ho gayi or fir jab sabki goliya khatm ho gayi to sabki jaan halak m aagayi , kyunki soul huntress to abhi bhi sahi salamat khada tha.

Soul huntress :- now my turn

Ye bol wo tezi se pahale sajid k pas gaya or usne furti se apni ek stick ko sajid ki ankh m ghused diya , jise or jese hi sajid dard k mare chilane ko hua huntress ne apni dusri stick uske muh m gused k apNi stick ko uski chhodayi itni jyada badha di ki sajid k muh ki sima par ho gayi or wo fat k uska jabda piche ki or latak gaya.

Apne sathi ki itni bhayanak mot dekh rafiq ki pent gili ho gayi or wo moka dekh bhagne ki koshis ki lekin isse pahale wo darwaje tak pahunchta usse pahale hi huntress ne bina dekhe apni stick itni jor se uski or feki ki wo stick uske sir ko chirte hue aarpar ho gayi or wese hi udte hue wapas uske hath me aajati h.

Soul huntress apni stick se shera ki or kerte hue :- ab tumhari baari.

Ye bol wo shera ki or bhad hi raha tha ki tabhi ek aawaz shera or soul huntress k kano m padti h

"Ruk jao huntress, ye tumhara ni dand nayak ka shikar hai "


Huntress piche hatte hue :- kyu ni shok se apna karm kijiye dand nayak.

Ji ha dosto samne karan tha apne dand nayak roop me jiska khun hi khol gaya tha shera ko dekh krr , uski ankho k samne jyoti ki vo halat aarahi thi , jo uske krodh ki agni m ghi ka kaam ker rahi thi

Or uske sath hi agle pal karan tezi se shera ki or doda or agle hi pal apni talvar ko tezi se 3 4 bar ghumaya or agle hi pal shera k hath per kat k gir chuke the.

Shera dard se chilate hue mot raham ki bhik mang raha tha per dandnayak kaha rukne wala tha usne hath per katne k baad shera k pure sharir p cut lagaye hajaro ki sankhya m or usme bhayanak tezab daal diya.

Dand nayak :- chila kamine chila jitna tu chilayega utna mere dil ko sukun milega us taklif se jo taklif mujhe meri gudiya ki us halat ko dekh hui h jiski vajah tu tha tu.

Shera ab mot ki bhik mangne laga , lekin karan ne use mot dene se bhi mana ker diya or bhad gaya soul huntress ki or.

Dand nayak :- kafi time baad tumhe is roop m mil k acha laga ,ye kab banaya tumne, bahut shandar h ye to aasu.

Huntress apna mask ko hatate hue (ya yu kaho wo mask or uski sticks chote chote particles m bat ker usi suit m sama gaya or) :- h naa , ye suiy mane khud ne design kiya h bhai jaan, naino particles ki madad se , jach raha h na mujh pe.

Ji haa friends wo soul huntress koi or ni apni new character asu hi thi , jiske pas super solider strength or special ear eyesight jiski madad se wo apne kano ki madad se naa keval dhimi Se dhimi awaz sun sakti thi , balki wo is sansar k har jiv ki aatma ko dekh or mahasus bhi ker sakti thi , jis kaaran usko apni ankho ki yudh k medan m bilkul jarurat ni thi, or bhi kuch shaktiya h jo aage pata chalegi


Karan asma ko gale lagate hue :- meri intelligent asu kuch banaye or wo bekar ho esa kabhi ho sakta h.

Vese itne time baad is roop ko lene ki koi khas vajah

Asma :- jyoti di k sath jo hua wo jese hi mujhe pata chala to m khud ko rok n saki bhai or turant is kamine ko dhundne m lag gayi bhai or jese hi mujhe in logo k pata chala to aagayi apne naye suit ka trial lene.

Karan :- per asu ager tumne inhe dhund hi liya tha to mujhe inform kerna chahiye tha na , tumhe yaad h na last time pe zoya ne mujhse kya vada liya tha tumhare liye agr ese m tumhe kuch ho jata to

Asma :- ye aap kah rahe h dand nayak ,aphine to sikhaya tha ki galat kerne se jyada hota h galat hote dekhna , to aap hi bataiye bhai ese m min gundo ko in masum ladkiyo ki zindGi kese kharab kerne deti.

Karan asma ki is baat se nirutr ho jata h , fir asma ne aage baat kerna start ki.

Asma :- vese bhi bhai mujhe aapse ek baat or kerni thi , jo us din na ho payi.

Karam :- kesi bat asma.

Asma :- bhai salo pahale jo seal humne portal of realms p lagayi thi , ab usme darare ane lagi h or mujhe firse unhi sabhi khatro ka abhas ho raha h , jinka samna humne bhutkal m kiya tha.

Karan :- shant asu , esa kuch ni h tumhe shayad koi brham hua hoga , wo sab to bhut kaal ki ghatnaye thi , jo bit chuki h , ab esa kuch ni hone wala.

Huntress :- ek hi bhram ek sath ek se jyada logo ko to ni ho sakta na bhaijan , esa sirf mera hi baki sabhi team members ko bhi hua h .

Abhi karan kuch bolta isse pahale hi ek hasi ki aawaz un dono k kaamo m padi .

Jab undono ne us aawaZ ki taraf dekha to paya ye to shera tha.

Shera dard me bhi haste hue :- huntress ka abhas jhuta ni h dn , bhut kaal m tumne sirf apni mot ko tala tha use kaid kiya tha khatam ni


Karan :- rasi jal gayi per bal ni , ye kya bahki nahi baat ker raha h tu , lagta h mot samne dekh pagla gaya h tu

Karan heran tha ki shera kese use janta h or kese uske past ki baat ker raha itne confidence se

Shera :- pagla m ni pagla to tu gaya h jo tune soch liya tha ki tune mahan sanghtan ko mita diya, jo is duniya ko badal k rakh sakti thi , haha are tu to wo bevkuf h jisne ye soch liya ki mujhe mar k ye soch raha h ki tune mujhe is halat m pahuncha k apni bahan kA badla leliya jabki sach to ye h ki jisne wo sab kiya .

Karan ye sab sun chakra gaya tha usne gale pakad us shera ko uthaya or gusse se dahadte hue pucha :- kon h tu bata , or kese janta h it a sab kuch tu mere bare m.

Shera :- m usi mahan sanghtan ka ek sadasya hu dn jise tum sab shadow council k naam se jante ho.

Karan or asma ek sath herani se :- shadow council .

Shera :- ha ha sahi suna tune shadow council , wo koi machar ni jo ek baar masla or khatam , shadow council wo h jo ek sir katoge to 2 or sir jagah lelenge.

(Khaste hue ) jald hi wo seal nasht hogi or phir pure milti verse pe raaz hoga shadow council ka , humare boss.....

Abhi wo aage kuch bol pata usse pahale hi karan ne uska sir dhad se alag ker diya of use nark yatra pe bhejne ki teyari ker di.

Huntress :- ye apne kya kiya dn , isko kyu mar dala ager isk kahana sach h or shadow council fir se unhe aayi h to ye humare kaam aasakta tha un tak pahuchne k liye.

Karan hafte hue khud ko shant kerte hue :- ni huntress esa kuch ni hone wala tha , ye sirf pyada tha , jyoti ka gunehgar yani asli shera to yaha mojud hi ni , ye to ek uski sasti copy tha.

Huntress :- yani ki variant , per us seal k hote ye kese sambhav h dn , mujhe lagta h ab hume team ko wapas bula lena chahiye

Karan :- ni asu uski abhi koi jarurat ni h , meri nayi shaktiya kafi h shadow council ka nash kerne k liye , vese bhi badi mushkilo k baad un sab ne apni normal life start ki h m ni chahta ki wo fir se spoil ho , hum khud hi is samsya ka jald hi samdhan karenge, lekin usse purv vritrasur namak samasya ka ant hume kerna hoga.

Fir karan asma se kuch jaruri baat ker un ladkio kii yadasht mita unhe unke ghar pahunchata h tab tak soul huntress apne naam k anusar un sabki soul ka shikar kerti h , wo apna muh kholti h , jiske sath hi waha sabhi lasho se unki atmaye nikal huntress k muh m chali jati h

Or fir karan asma ko uske ghar chod wapas ghar lot aata h naina k


Jaha jake wo pata h ki asha ne firse naina pe hath saf kerne shuru ker diye , jab karan use jake shant karwata h.

Or fir naina se sari baat puchta h to naina batati h


Ki pichli raat jab naina maa ki shayan arti ker jab mandir k kapAt bhada rahi thi tabhi ganv k ek aadmi bhag kee uske pas aata h or bola.

Admi:- naina beti acha hua tum yahi mil gayi, please meri madad kero.

Naina :- kya hua kaka aap itne dare hue kyu najar aarahe ho.


Tab wo kaka batate h ki unke kheto se rat ko kisi ki rone ki aawaz ati h or jab waha jate h to koi najar ni aata , isliye unhe shaq tha ki ye jarur kisi bhut pret ka hi kaam h

Naina wese to normal life jina chahti thi kuch samay k liye, lekin wo kisi ki vinti ko thukra bhi ji sakti thi , khaskar tab jab samne wale kaka unke baba k kafi ache dost the.

Naina turant ghar jake apna bag leke aati h or chal padi un kaka k sath unke kheto ki or.

Khet k bahar pahunch us admi se naina boli.

Naina :- kaka aap yahi rukiye aage khatra ho sakta h , aage m khud sambhal lungi.

Admi :- apna khayal rakhna beti.

Naina apne trishul ko hath m liye aage bharne lagi , lekin jese hi wo ander jati h , use apne baba ki yaad aane lagi thi , kyuki uske baba inhi kheto m unhe ghumane laya kerte the jab wo hostel se ghar aati thi , or uske sath yaha khelna , fal khana or talab kinare khub masti kerte, jis kaaran uski ankho se ansu bahane lage , lekin usne jald hi apne emotion p control kiya or aage bhadne lagi.

Tabhi use rone ki aawaz sunayi dene lagi , jise sun uska hriday kamp utha kyunki ye aawaz wo sapne m bhi pahachan sakti thi.

Wo turant us aawaz ki disha m dodi or waha pahunch jo usne paya use wo khud ko or na sambhal n payi.

Naina rote hue samne khade shaks k sine se ja lagi or rote hue boli :- baabaa.

.Ji ha dosto samne naina k baba khade the yani ki pandit ji ki aatma.

Pandit ji bhi kafi der tak naina ko apne sine se lagaye rakhe phir kuch soch use apne se yu alag kiya jese wo ye dikha rahe ho , ki wo usse naraj h.

Naina herani se :- baba mujhse kya kuch galti hui , or aap yaha ro kyu rahe the .

Baba :- royu ni to or kya kru m beti , jiski ek loti beti jise mane sadev dharm or satya k marg p chalna sikhaya , wo path bhrast ho galat marg p chal padi ho , us pita ki aatma ko kese shanti mil sakti h.

Naina baba ka ishara samjh gayi or gardan jhuka k boli :- m aapka ishara samjh gayi baba , per aap hi bataiye m bhala galat kese hui , aakhir m kese us ladke ko apna bhai swikar ker lu , jisme mere bhai ka katl kiya , kese apni maa ko us hatyare se bat lu.

Baba :- bhul gayi bChi mane kya sikhaya tha ki.humesha ankho dekh sach ho esa jaruri ni or chalo man liya ki karan hathyara h jisko dukh pahuchane k liye ye sab tumne kiya , lekin tumne ek baar bhi meri bahan k baare m yani apni maa k bare m naa socha , jo itne salo se apni santano se dur rahi or ab na chahte hue bhi ek jhut k kaaran apar kasht sah rahi h


Khud hi socho naina beti tum esa kerke saza keval apne bhai ko ni balki apne pure parivar apni maa ko de rahi ho , kya esa kerna uchit h, ager ha to tumhare is apradh ka fal roop m mujhe yu bhatakna bhi swikar h , kyu ki ye tumhara baba sab kuch sah saktta h per apni beti ko kasht sahate ni , chahe uske liye mujhe apni beti ki galti ki saza khud hi kyu ni leni pade, kyu ki santan k satkarmo se yadi mat pita ko sukh bhog milta h parlok m to utna hi dukh bhi bhogne ka adhikar h


Apne baba k samjhane se or apne baba ki ye halat dekh naina ko apni galti ka ahasas hota h or wo apne baba se boli.

Naina rote hue :- ni baba m aapko bilkul kasht ni sahne dungi , m apni bhul sudharungi baba , apni is nadan beti ko maaf ker do baba.

Baba pyaar se uske sir p hath ferte h or gayab ho jate h , tabhi naina baba chillate hue apne bed se uth jati h , bhale hi yr sapna tha lekin naina ko apni galti ka ahasas ho gaya tha .

Isliiye usne turabt uthi or himmat ker sari sachai apni maa ko bata di , jiske aage kya hua aap dekh hi rahe h.

Jise sun karan ko khushi hoti h ki naina ko apni galti ka ahasas to hua , wo apni maa ko bhi yahi samjhata h ki naina ko uski galti ka ahasas h or kese n kese unhe bhi mana leta h

Fir apna ek clone ghar p bhej wo aaj rat wahi rukta h or sab packing karwata h apni ma or naina ki or sath m karan naina ko ek new power bhi deta h jo thi teleportation ki jiski madad se wo yaha subah sham pahuch ma k mandir ki dekh rekh or aati ker sakti thi

Agli subah

Kafi emotional moment tha naina k liye , kyu ki wo us sthan ko chod k ja rahi thi , jo uski janmbhumi thi , jis kaaran uski ankho m ansu the.

Veer or preety ki ankho m bhi naina k jane k kaaran ansu to the hi kyunki unki dost jo jarahi thi , lekin naina k apne ghar lotne ki khushi bhi thi.

Naina kafi der preety or veer k gale lag roti rahi, or veer or preeti use samjhate h ki vo jab bhi unhe yaad karegi wo waha pahunch jayege or kuch der yu hi sab chalne k baad jane ka samay aata h or naina apne baba ki tasvir liye akhri bar ghar apne ghar ki or dekhti h or phir karan or apni maa ka hath tham wo teleport ho pahunch gayi kolkata , jaha se uske jivan k ek naye adhyay ka Aarambh hona tha.

Flashback end.

Karan ye puri kahani jyoti ko man me batata h or ek alag kahani baki sab ko

Jyoti ko bhi naina ki us harkat se dukh to bahut pahuncha lekin wo khush thi ki uski maa or choti bahan ab uske pas mojud h or ab unka parivar sampoorn hua

Time jump :- after 2 days

(Bich k 2 din m kya hua wo next update m.pata chalega)

Jyoti apne ghar k garden m mojud mandir m puja ker abhi bahar nikli hi thi ki tabhi time ruk gaya, indra dev samet or sabhi dev vaha pragat ho gaye.

Indra dev :- trahi mam jyoti beti trahi mam , raksha kero humari hey devi raksha kero.

Jyoti herani se unhe pranam ker :- devraj aap sab yaha is haalat m , ye sab kese hua or kisne kiya

Devraj :- beti ye sab vritrasur ne kiya h , usne adishakti se vardan praapt navgrah samet sabhi devo ko prast ker sampoorn devlok jit liye h or ab vo humare prano k piche pada hua h .

Ese samay pe ab keval aap or dand nayak hi humari raksha ker sakte ho devi .

Sabhi dev ek sath :- hey jyoti raksha kero humari devi , raksha kero.

Jyoti ye sun gambhir swar :- asp sab chinta mat kijiye m abhi bhai ko bulati hu , wo aapki sahayta
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Abhi jyoti ne puri ni ki thi ki.tabhi ek aawaz uski baat ko kaate hue waha gunzi.

Bilkul nii karenge.

Ye aawaz karan ki thi , jo dand nayak roop me tha .

Jyoti :- ye aap kya kah rahe ho bhai , kya mane jo suna wo sahi h.

Karan :- tumme bilkul sach suna gudiya , na to m vritrasur se yudh karunga or na hi m inki koi sahayta karunga.

Karan ka ye jwab sun devo samet jyoti bhi haki baki rah gayi thi , waha mojud kisi ne bhi karan se ese jwab ki ummid na ki thi.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi


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