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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


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Naina

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Pyar koi market ki sabji thodi hain madam jo chuni ja sake pao kilo ya dhaye kilo ke hisab se woh to ho hi jata hain kisi na kisi tarike se.. ???
Think about it , love has but sorrows, In love every effort is never enough.. In love one has to bow one's head... In pain you have to smile... Why do they mix this poison in their lives ?...:p:
 

Akil

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friends M janta hu update na aane se aapko bahut bura lagta h pr esa ho bhi bar bar raha h, or isme galti bhi meri hi h, but is time problm ye ho rahi h mere sath ki story abhi jis mod par h waha mujhe samjh ni aaraha aage m kya karu kya likhu mind M bahut confusion chal rahi h uper se mane jo story ka abtak level mantain kiya h uske chalte aap sab ki expectations bhi bahut bada chuki h jiske chalte M formality M update likh ker bhi aapki expactation ni tod sakta, is kaaran ye sab ho rha h kyunki is confusion k kaaran hi mujhe pahale se almost double time lagta h update likhne m, ab aap log hi mujhe koi suggestion de ki M kya karu
कुछ वक़्त के लिए ख़ुद को आराम दें आप
 

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Sonam ko dekh karan ki khushi ka thikana ni tha, wo dod ker sonam k paas gaya or khushi se bas uske muh se itna hi nikla.

Karan :- sonaa..

Sonam ka bhi kuch esa hi hal tha , wo bhi bahut tadfi thi karan ki ek jhalak ko, or sath hi uske man m pachtava bhi tha karan k sath kiye gaye rude behavior k kaaran, uske muh se bhi karan ko dekh itnaa hi niklaa .

Sonam :- bhaiyaaaa...

Karan ne bas itna sute ki sonam ko khich ker apne sine se laga liya kaske or sonam ne bhi karan ko apni baho m kas liya.

Dono bhai bahan kafi time ek dusre se yu hi gale lage rahe jese mano kitne salo baad mile ho, yahi to karan k saaf hriday ki pahachan thi ki wo apni sabhi bahano ko ek saman pyaar kerta tha, sagi ya muhboli wali soch to uske sapne m kabhi aayi na thi, kafi der yu hi gale lagane k baad karan bola.

Karan nam ankho se :- sonu, meri pyari bahan m bata ni sakta tujhe yaha dekh kitna khush hu m, yakin na ho to jyoti se puch lo, esa ek din na gaya hoga tumhe miss na kiya ho mane.

Sonam nam ankho se :- esa hi haal aapki sonu h bhai, aapki bahut yaad ati thi, lekin....

Isse aage sonam apni galti ka confess ker pati isse pahale hi usme dekha jyoti samet sab waha aapahunche isliye wo ruk gayi.

Jyoti khushi se :- are bhaiya ab hume bhi to milne do apni sonaa se.

Ye bol wo aage badhi or apni bahe fela k boli :- sonaa

Sonam bhi di kahate hue jyoti k mili fir wo radha k pas jati h, to radha majak m boli.

Radha :- to moti ko yaad aahi gayi ghar ki.

Sonam haste hue :- ha yaar bade dino se bandriya ni dekhi thi to aagayi tujhse milne

Radha muka mar usse milti h, tabhi piche se ek aawaz or aayi jise sun sab chok gaye or khush ho bethe.

Are bhai humse bhi to koii mil lo....

Sabne us or dekha to paya samne ridhima or swati bhi gadi se uterte h. , jinhe dekh sab khush hue or karan or jyoti samet sab mile.

Jyoti :- di sona, aap sabko yaha dekh bata ni sakte hum kitne khush h, lekin ye sab achanak kese or aap aane wale ho ye aapne bataya kyu ni.

Swati :- wo kya h na jyotu jabse aap sab yaha aaye the ghar m humara man hi ni lag raha tha or to or sonu bhi shimla ja chuki thi.

Ridhima :- ha bhai,To hum bhi yaha aane ka 2 din pahale decide kee hi rahe the ki tabhi hume sonam ka phone aaya ki wo bhi ab yaha aana chahti h to humne sab milke plan kiya tum logo ko surprise dene ka.

Or hum jaipur airport pe mile or yaha aaphunche.

Kesa laga humara surprise mera bacha
(Swati karan ko babu, ya bacha hi karke bulati thi, apna laad dikhne ko)

Karan ridhima :- it's amazing di.

(Swati se) per di aapne taklif kyu ki esi halat m bhi.

Swati :- off oo bhai tum kyu tension le raho faltu, itni bhi koi problem ni hui or fir ridhima ne mera bahut khayal rakha.

Ridhima :- babu ab hume yu hi bahar khada rakhoge kya.

Karan :- oh ha sorry di khushi m ye to dhyan hi na raha, laiye aap apna saman mujhe dedijiye.

Fir karan or rohan milker unka saman leker haveli m leker aata h or karan kavya or baki sabko pukarte hue.

Karan :- choti maa, bhua ,chachi ,chachu , dekho to kon aayaaa h.

Karan ki aawaz sun kavya or garima sabse pahale aayi or sonam samet sabko dekh wo bhi chonk gayi or khush bhi hui.

Sonam :- maaa

Kahate hue kavya k gale mili, sonam ne kavya ko apni ma hi man liya tha, isliye wo use maa hi kahake bulati.

Kavya sonam k sir sahalate hue :- are meri pyaari bachi bhi aagayi , beta bahut acha kiya tu yaha aagayi, tere bina to man hi ni lag raha tha humara to.

Fir kavya or garima sonam ridhima or swati se mile, tabhi nidhi bhi waha aaphunchi, karan bhi swati or ridhima se pahale apni chachi ko milata h.

lekin sonam abhi garima se gale mili hui thi isliye use abhi tak uska chahra ni dikha tha.

Karan sonam k paas aaker.

Karan :- or chachi ye meri sabse pyari or dulari bahan meri sonaaaa..

Sonam ne karan ki aawaz sun jese hi garima se alag ho palti or jese hi nidhi or sonam ki najar ek dusre se mili to dono mano tham si gayi, or dono k hriday m ek bahut hi majboot or apnatv bhari anubhuti hui, dono ki najre ek dusre se hat hi ni rahi thi.

Nidhi ki to ankho m jese apne aap hi ansu bahane lage or na jane kyu use apna wahi dukh bhara aatit uski ankho k samne aane laga, jise na hi wo kisiko batati or na hi khud bhul pati.

Nidhi mam me :- hey bhagwan ye kya ho raha h mujhe kyu is pyaari si bachi ko dekh mujhe lag raha h ki ye koi anjaan ni meri apni h , ya yu kaho mera hi ek bhag h.

(Purani yado ka dard mahasus kerte hue ) kahi esa to ni ye bachi....

Nii ye ni ho sakta humari galti ka yahi dand h ki hum is tarah jindagi bhar tadfe.

Wahi sonam k man me bhi kuch ese hi vichar aarahe the.

Sonam man. Me :- ye mujhe kya ho raha h bhaiya ki chachi ko dekh mujhe ye kesi anubhuti ho rahi h, ye to kuch kuch vesi hi h jesi tab hui thi jab m bhaiya se pahali baar mili thi .

Hey bhagwan ye sab akhir ho kya raha h mere sath, pahale wo sab sapne fir mera apne satya se parichay or ab ye anubhuti, kahi esa to ni ki mere kanha koi sandesh dena chah rahe h mujhe

Hey kanha apni is bhaktan ki sahayata kero.

Dono hi or se koi bhi reaction dekh karan ko herani hui or usne un dono ki tandra todte hue kaha.

Karan :- chachi, sona kaha kho gaye aap dono.

Karan ki aawaz sun dono hosh m aaye or fir dono ache se mile.

Karan ek taraf to bahut khush tha ki aaj uska sara pariwar yaha mojud h, wahi dusri or tension m bhi aa gaya tha, kyunki ab aane wale yudh m khatra bhi bad gaya tha uske parivar p.

Wahi duri oor

Location :- baikunth lok

Lakshmi maa abhi sheshshaiya pe bethi hi thi ki tabhi bhagwan narayan bhi apne vastvik swaroop m aagaye prathvi lok se lot.

Lakshmi ji :- aagaye swami apni bhaktn ko darshan de use aanand vibhor ker.

Narayan :- anand vibhor to hum hue h devi , jiske 2 mukhya kaaran h.

Lakshmi :- or wo kya h swami?



Narayan :- priye, pahala kaaran ye h ki jitni prasanta bhakt ko apne aradhya k darshan se praapt hoti h, usse kayi adhik parmanad bhakt k aradhya ko bhi praapt hota h, apne bhakt k prem or bhakti ki pavitra anubhuti se, bhakti keval bhakt ki hi shakti ni hoti priye, apitu bhakti to ishwer ki bhi shakti h, jis kaaran ishwer ka astitv is sansaar m h.

Or yaha to baat hi humari us bhaktn ki thi jisne keval is janm m hi ni, apitu apne purv janm se hi humari nishkaam bhakti ki, ese m hum apni us bhaktn ko kese darshan na dete.

Balki hum to kahate h sonam se jyada labh is lilla ka to hume hi praapt hua.

Lakshmi ji :- aapko ! Wo kese swami.

Narayan :- devi mat bhuliye sonam k kaaran hi humara apne vrindavan m punah aagman hua.

Dwapar m jab humne us pavitra bhumi ko chod mathura ki or prasthan kiye the, jabse humare man m ek hi icha rahati ki hum apni us bhumi pe ek baar fir jaa sake, jaha humne apne us janm ka sabse madhur samay vyatit kiya, parantu apne kartavyo k chalte ye kabhi sambhav na ho paya, ese m hum sonam ka aabhar kese na vyakt kare devi.

Lakshmi :- aap dhany h prabhu, ap swayam ishwer hote hue bhi khud se jyada mahatvta aap apne bhakt ko dete ho, aap dhanya ho dev.

(Kuch der ruk)Or dusra kaaran kya tha swami .

"Iska uttar m apko deta hu mata "

Is aawaz k sath waha shani dev prakat hue.

Shani :- pranam maaa, pranam bhagwaan

Lakshmi ji :- kalyan bhavah putra, kaho putra.

Shani :- mata prabhu ka sonam ko darshan dene ka ek kaaran or jo ye tha ki ab samay aachuka h ki sonam ko apne pichle janm k satya k sath sath apne is jivan se bhi jude rahasya ka bhi gyaat ho.

Lakshmi ji :- arthat samay wo samay achuka h putra?.

Shani :- ha mata samay aachuka h jab karan or jyoti ko apne jivan se jude sabse bade rahasya k gyaat hone ka, samay aachuka h tin mahashaktiyon k milan ka or samay aachuka h samraat k ant ka jiske baad megha ki mukti k sath hi wo rahasya khulega or karan or jyoti ka parivaar bhi tab purn hoga.

Shani jab ye baat bol. Rahe the tab unke chahre p khushi k sath pareeshani k bhav bhi shamil the.

Jinhe dekh mata boli.

Lakshmi ji :- putra ye to shubh samachar h, ki ek adharmi ka shighra hi ant hone wala h, or putra karn k jivan m bhi khushhali aane wali h ,

Lekin fir bhi tumhare mukh p ye nirarthak chinta ki rekhaye kyu putra.

Narayan :- karmfal data ki chinta nirarthak ni h devi

ha ye satya h ki ye sab shubh ghatnayo k ghatit hone ka samay aachuka h, parantu aapne sikke k dusre pahalu ko to andekha hi ker diya devi.

Bhul gayi devi aap bhutkaal m mahadev or humne jab usko.... Dandit kiya tha tab mahadev ne kya kaha tha.

Lakshmi ji Narayan ka ishara samjh gayi , or chintit swar m.

Lakshmi ji :- hey mahadev! Iska arth ye k swami!

Shani :- ha mata jese jese karan k jivan Sare rahasya khulne ka samay nikat aata jayega, guru mahadev or Narayan dwara arab use diye gaye dand k bandhan se uska dhire dhire swatantrata hona aarambh ho jayega.

Narayan :- ho jayega ni putra, aarambh ho chuka h, or is baar usko niyantran kerna humare liye bhi saral na hoga, kyunki hum tridev bhi niyati k lekh m hastakshep ni ker sakte.

Lakshmi ji :- ye to satya m hi bahut badi samasya h bhagwan, dand bandhan m hone k babjood bhi usne pahale bhi kayi baar karan or jyoti k jivan m hastakshep ker unke prano ko sankat m dal diya tha.

Shani :- satya kaha mata aapne, or aane wale dharmyudh m wo wapas se apni dhurt chaal avashya chalega, ese me putra karan or jyoti ki raksha hetu hi avashyak tha ki use sonam dwara vardan roopi kavach mile, isliye hi prabhu ne sonam ka margdarshan ker use putra karan k pasand bheja.

Lakshmi ji :- parantu putra samasya abhi bhi purntah hal ni hui h.

Shani :- janta hu mata or is samsya ka hal to swayam putra karan ko hi khojna hoga wo bhi atisheeghra.

Kyunki dekhiye mata un dushto ne shadyantr rachna aarambh ker diya h

Back to prathvi lok

Jis tantrik ka ant naina ne apne shudi yagya or ma ki shakti dwara kiya tha, us dusht ka sharir ki bhasam abhi bhi wahi padi thi.

Tabhi waha do asur prakat hote h.

Asur 1 :- are bhai tumhe gyaat bhi h ki us budiya kubdi ne hume yaha kyu bheja h.

Asur 2 :- abe kitna bhulakkad H re Tu, bhul gaya us sanki bhudiya ne hume subah hi adesh diya tha ki hume is sthan per kuch manav avshesh milenge bas use hi uthake lana h.

Asur 1 :- ha per bhai mujhe samjh ni aata ki ye bhudiya is rakh ka karegi kya.

Asur 2 :- kya pata yaar lagta h bhudape m bhudiya sathiya gayi h, jab hi kuch bhi kerne ko bolti h.

Asur 1 :- ha per ek baat bata bhai sab bol rahe h ki yuvraj k ansh k sath hi trityao ka ant nishchit ho chuka h, tumhe kya lagta h kya sach m esa kuch h.

Asur 2 :- kya pata yaar, sala humari or se to dono or hi aafat h, ek or yudh m moti or dusri or is sanki raja k moti se badtr hatyachar, acha bhala salo chain se ji rahe the, jabse ye aaya firse devo se humari dushmani kera betha.

Asur 1:- ha yar mera bas chale to m to abhi us divya shakti ki sharan m chala jau.

Asur 2 :- jo ho ni sakta use chod or jaldi se apna kaam ker yaha se nikalte h verna wo sanki bhudiya humara jina haram ker degi.

Ye bol asur 2 us rakh ko uthane hi laga tha ki tabhi us rakh ko chute hi uska hath jalne laga, jisse wo chikhne laga

Asur 1 :- ye sanki bhudiya hume marwa k hi manegi.

Asur 2 apne hath ko bacha ker kese n kese maya ka use ker us rakh ko uthata h or ek ghade m bhar k asur 1 k sath waha se gayab ho jata h.

Or wo dono pahunch jate h kubdi k pas

Asur 1 :- lijiye malkin aapne jesa kaha tha m wo avshesh le aaya hu.

Kubdi shetani hasi k sath :- le aaye ise shabash ise yaha rakh do .

Asur 2:- malikin per kya m jan sakta hu aapne ye rakh kyu mangai h.

Kubdi gusse se :- ye jaanana tumhare liye jaruri ni h murkho

(Apne side se ek peso ki potli fekte hue) ye lo tumhare kam ki kimat or ab dafa ho yaha se.

Kubdi ki dant sun bichare wo dono potli utha chupchaap waha se chalte bane.



Unke jane k baad kubdi us ghade ko apne hath me lete hue boli.

Kubdi haste hue :- haha ab dekhti hu m tantrika kubdi ki is chaal se tu kese bachti h, ab m esa kuch karungi jiske baad tu marte samay apni akhiri sanse lete hue pachtayegi ki kyu samraat se tune dushmani mon li.

Ye bol kubdi apni kaale jadu ki kriyaa aarambh ker deti h.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Think about it , love has but sorrows, In love every effort is never enough.. In love one has to bow one's head... In pain you have to smile... Why do they mix this poison in their lives ?...:p:
Jaha dard na ho woh pyar kaisa aur hamesha dusaro ke liye haste rehana chahiye agar apane hua to khush hoge aur dushman hoge to aise hi jal kar marange.
Your smile best weapon to revenge and your enemy
 

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Aaiye ek najar rasatal lok me bhi daal. Lete h, coincidence se yaha bhi is waqt raat ka hi waqt tha or shonitapur rajya k sabhi vasi chain ki nind so rahe the .

Charo or shanti or sukun chaya hua tha, aaiye ek najar apne hero ki ekloti saheli yani kaya pe bhi daal lete h.

Kaya or diya dono khana khane k baad sone ki teyari ker rahi thi , lekin diya kdi dino se ek jid pe adi hui thi ki usko apne bhai yani ki karan se milna h.

Kaya :- diyu Tu samjhti kyu ni ki sakha ka bar bar yaha ana sambhav ni, kyunki isse samay ki dhara (timeline) per bahut asr hota h, kyunki bhale hi yaha se unhe gaye mahine ho gaye ho lekin waha unke liye jyada waqt ni gujra hoga.

Isliye baat ko samjh diya humare kahane per sakha mana to ni karenge, per ese m na keval samay dhara balki unke vyaktigat jivan pe bhi prabhaav padega na,.

Diya :- per mujhe to unse mile itne mahine ho gaya na meri bahan please Tu kuch ker na mujhe bhai se milna h, mujhe bahut yaad aati h unki.

Ye bolte bolte wo rone lagi, jise dekh kaya jhat se boli.

Kaya :- are pagal tu ro kyu rahi h, yaad aarahi h to bAt kerle na sakha se.

Diya :- ni mujhe bhai se milna h milna h milna h bas.

Kaya pareshaan ho gayi ki wo kya kare, tabhi uske dimag me ek vichar aaya

Kaya :- acha thik h m teri baat manne ko ready hu per pahale Tu ye rona band ker.

Diya ye sunte hi jaldi se apne aasu pochte hue boli.

Diya khusi se :- kya sachi, fir der kis baat ki kaya m abhi bhai ko bulati hu


Kaya :- are pagal abhi yahi ni wahi per bhi raat ho rahi hogi, tumhare bhai abhi so rahe honge naa.

Or baat to wahi pe aaker ruk gayi na samay dhara p aser.

Diya ye sun phir se udaas ho boli :- iska matlab m bhai se ni mil paungi.

Kaya :- are pagli Tu fir se rone lagi, are pagli sakha yaha ni aaskte to kya hua hum to waha ja hi sakte h na unse milne.

Kyunki hum dono hi dharti lok se hi h to samay dhara pe or niyamo p koi khas prabhaav bhi na padega.

Diya khusi se :- ha ye mane to socha hi niii....


Kaya diya ko chedte hue :- sochne k liye dimag bhi to hona chahiye Naa


Diya :- haa.... , ek min ek min kya boli tu, ruk tuje m batati hu kamini.

Ye bol diya kaya k uper jhapat padi.



Or kuch der masti majak k baad , kal subah aman se is bare m baat kerne ka decide ker dono sone chali jati h apne apne room me.

Kaya to khud hi man hi man bahut khush thi, ki wo jald hi apne sakha se milne jane wali thi , uske man me rah rah k karan k sath bitaye wo pal aarahe the, jo usne karan k sath bitaye the, pishach lok jate waqt jungle k bich.


Karan K sath us raat camp me wo hasi majak, wo pyar se ek dusre ko khilana Or apas me apne sukh dukh batna, wo karan k sath uski first kiss jo kaya ne karan ko majak majak m kiya, uska wo sparsh aaj bhi mahasus kerte hue Kaya ankh band ker ek alag hi duniya m khone lagi.

Dhire dhire wo Sare romantic pal yaad ane lage jo talab me usne karan k sath vyatit kiye, fir wo karan ka uspe krodh ko yaad ker uski ankho m ek shan ansu bhi aaye, parantu use wo suraksha ki anubhuti hui jo use tab hui thi, jab karan ne jalasur ka nash ker uski raksha ki or apni baho m bhar use thik kiya, wo bhi jab jab vo khud kMzor pad raha tha, or use sabse jyada jarurt thi apni urja ki , wo karan k baho ka sukun aaj bhi kaya mahasus mano yu ker rahi thi, jese wo abhi karan ki baho m ho.

Fir uske chahre pe aayi wo ek pyari Or sharmahat ki wo lalima bhari muskan jo us wo pal yaad ane se aayi jab karan ne apni icha se aage bad ker use chuma use baho m bhar use prem kiya bhale hi wo prem premi ka na ho dil se per kaya k liye wo usse kam bhi na tha, kaya ne karan ko hi man hi man apna sab kuch man liya tha, lekin use abhi tak apne prem ka abhas na hua tha.

Un palo ko yaad ker kaya ko karan k sparsh ki anubhuti hone lagi jis kaaran use wesa hi mahasus hone laga jesa us samay hua jiske asar se uski yoni bhigne lagi.

Jiska ahasas hote hi kaya ko hosh aaya or wo achanak se khud se bolne lagi..

Kaya :- ye ker rahi h Tu kaya, apne sakha k bare m tere ese vichaar kese aasakte h ye jante hue bhi ki tumhara unse koi mel ni, wo to unki mahanta h ki unhonne tujhe apni saheli apni sakhi hone ka gorav pradaan kiya h Or to or jyoti Ji, unki bahan, yani unki bhavi patni tak ne tumhe apni sakhi kaha, or esa tumhara sochna hi unse vishwasghaat hoga kaya.

Esi sab baate aate hi kaya ki muskan gayab ho gayi or nam ankho k sath wo so gayi lekin shayad kaya k nasib me shayad chain ki nind bhi na thi.

Hua yu ki kaya k sone k kuch der baad hi ek vichitra sa sapna najar aane laga, jisme use najar aane laga ki ek aadmi jungle m bhag raha tha or uske hatho me ek navjat bacha ya bachi thi, wo kafi der tak jungle m chalte rahane k baad ek nadi k kinare aaya or usne us bachi k najuk tan p badi hi berahami se ek bada injection ghop diya, jise wo bachi jor jor se rone lagi uth ker jo ab tak soyi hui thi.

Usko dekh ker hi pata chal raha tha ki wo hal hi m peda hui h , bichari k sath niyati ne kesa anyay kiya tha jis bachi ko is waqt apni ma ki god m hona tha, wo is bhayvah jungle k bichobich ek dusht k hatho m thi.


Dhire dhire us bachi ka rona apne aap kam hone laga or uski ankhe band ho gayi, us admi ne us bachi ko mara samjh usi nadi m dal diya, per us ladki ki kismat me shayad kuch or hi tha, wo ladki dubne k bajay nadi ki ek jhadi m fas gayi.

Tabhi waha se ek admi or orat jo dikhne m bhayvay the wo waha se gujar rahe the tabhi unki najar us bachi p padi or unhone use nadi se nikala, sapne m kaya jese hi un admi or orat ka chahra dekhti h to herami or khusi bhare ansuo k sath maa baba pukarti hui uth gayi.

Ji ha dosto kaya ne abhi jo sapne m dekha wo uska wahi atit tha, jaha se usko ek pishach roop m naya jivan mila tha or wo dampati kaya k palan har mata pita hi the.

Kaya kuch der to khub royi kyunki uski ankho k samne uska dard bhara atit jo samne aagaya tha, or sath na jane kyu use karan ki kami kuch jyada hi majasus hone lagi or khalne lagi apne sakha ki kami uska man bahut hi vichlit hone laga.

Kaya :- ye achanak se mere sath kya ho raha aaj se pahale to esa kabhi na hua, yu pahle mera atit mere ankjo k samne aana or fir ab ye sakha ki kami mahasus hona or esa mahasus ho raha h ki ager ek pal bhi unse door rahi to kahi pran hi na nikal jaye.

(Ashanka k sath) kayi ye kisi anhoni ka andesha to ni.

Ni ni, esa kuch ni hoga, m bekar m hi itna soch rahi hu, per bhudhimata kahati h ki ese sanketo ko yu halke m bhi ni lena chahiye, m kal hi aman ji se is vishay m vichar vimarsh karungi.

Ye soch kaya fir se sone ki koshish kerti h or badi mushkil se hi sahi ler usko nind aahi jati h.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- vrindavan

Are ye kya thik to aaj apni sonam bhi najar ni aarahi thi, wo thodi Ghabrayi hui thi oor rima use sambhal rahi thi, aakhir esa hua kya uske sath aaiye jante h.

Hua kuch yu ki sonam k sath bhi kaya k jesi hi ghatna ghati, wo jab so rahi thi to use bhi apna atit apna past dikha.

Hua yu ki jab radha so rahi thi tab sapne m dekha ki ek sunsaan sadak per ek gadi aaker rukti h Or usme se ek admi nikalta h jiska chehra use saaf najar ni aata or dusri side se ek lady uterti h jiske hatho m ek bachi thi.

Dono k chare to najar ni aarahe the, lekin dekhne se hi pata chal raha tha ki dono husband wife h or unme koi baat ko leker bahas ho rahi h, jise sonam sun ni pati or fir wo dono miya bivi jaldi se us bachi ko jo unke hath me thi usko un jhadiyo m kuch is tarah rakh ki kisi ki nJr uspe na pade, use us sunsaan or berfili jagah chod waha se jaldi se car m beth nikal gaye.

Kuch der to wo bachi soyi rahi lekin ek navjat bachi bichari kab tak rah pati, vo kuch hi der m bhuk se uth ker rone lagi, uske sharir per garm kapde or ek chota kambal to tha, lekin shimla jesi jagah pe sham k samay ek bachi k liye kafi kaha tha.

Thand or bhuk se tadafti us bachi ki pukar shayad us bhagwaan ne sun li or tabhi ek aadmi waha bike se gujar raha tha, tabhi usko rone ki aawaz sunayi di, usne gadi rok us disha m jaker dekha to us bachi ko dekh wo pahale to sochne laga ki ye bacho yaha is sunsan area m kese aayi.

Lekin ek vichar uske man me or aaya, darasl us samay ladki hone per uski hatya ker dena ya use chod dena kafi prachalit tha, esa hi us admi ne socha ki us ladki ko uthaya, or us ladki ko uthate hue jese hi us admi k chahra sonam ko najar aaya to paya to ye to uske chacha h jinhone use pala, matlab wo bachi koi or ni sonu hi thi or jo hi ye baat ka ahasas sonam ko hua to wo chikte hue uth gayi.

Sonam ki chikh sun rima bhi uth gayi jo uske bagal m hi soyi thi or wo jhat se sonam ko sambhalne lagi.

Rima :- kya hua sonu tum chilayi kyu.

Sonu hamphte or rote hue rima k gale lag gayi or uska bhi haal kuch kaya jesa tha, uska bhi vo atit uski ankho k samne Achuka tha, jise wo bhula dena chahti thi or esa hona swabhavik tha chahe koi bhi ho wo apne ese bhutkaal Or use mile dard ko bhulna hi chahega.

Per aaj to kaya Or sonam jinki janmkatha m kafi samantaye thi, dono k samne hi ek ho raat me niyati ne unka atit fir ek baar unke samne lake rakh diya tha

Bas fark itna tha ki kaya ek yodha thi uska hriday kafi majboot tha jis kaAran usne khud ko sambhal liya tha, per esa masun sonam ni ker pa rahi thi.

Wo bahut hi ghabra bhi gayi thi or uske hriday ki pida phir se jagrit ho gayi thi, jo karan se Milan k baad wo bhul hi gayi thi.

Kaya k bhanti use bhi apne bhai yani ki karan ki kami mahasus ho rahi thi , uska man ker raha tha ki wo abhi bhag ker karan k gale lag jaye.

Rima thoda shant kerwate hue use pani pila ker fir apna sawal dohharaya to sonam ne use hamfte hue sari bat batati h Or fir rone lagi.

Rima sonam ko samjhane ki bahut kosis kerti h per wo shant hone ka naam hi ni le rahi thi ki tabhi kuch esa hua jisse na keval sonam shant hui balki esa anubhav kerne lagi jesa usne permanand ko prapt ker liya ho

Hua yu ki jab Rima k samjhane per bhi sonam p koi asar ni pada Or wo roye ja rahi thi tabhi achanak se ek bahut hi madhur Or mantramugdh kerne wali ek mithi si bansuri ki dhun dono saheliyon ne suni Or jese hi wo dhun sonam k kaano m padi tab apne aap uska rona achank se band ho gaya Or wo us dhun k madhur swar m khone si lagi.

Or sath me hi Rima bhi, wo dhun to thi hi itni madhur ki mano sansar ki sari mitgas usi dhun m sama gayi ho, esi dhun jise sun manushy to kya aapas k pashu bhi mantra mughd ho chuke the , aaspaas m mojud sabhi jiv jantu pashu pakshi jaha the wahi ruk gaye jese ki wo bhi us manohari dhun ka aanand le rahe ho.

Tabhi Rima ne sonam se kaha,

Rima :- kitni madhur dhun h na ye sonu, esa pratit ho raha h ki kaano m misri ki mithas ghol di ho.

. Sonam ankhe band ker muskan k sath bas itna hi boli:- hmm

Kyunki wo bas us dhun me hi khoyi hui thi.

Rima :- per ye murli ki awaaz aa kaha se rahi h, kon h wo jinke madhur dhun ne hume mantra mughd kiya.

Esa sab bolte hue Rima us aawaz ki disha m badi, tabhi usne apne room ki khidki k bahar dekha to paya ki ye madhur dhvani to dharmshala k piche mojud goshala se aarahi h, jaha ek shak sabhi ghayo k bich betha purn talinta se banshi baja raha tha.

Rima ne turant us shaks ko pahachan liya, ye wahi the jinhone raat ko un gundo se use Or sonam ko bachaya tha.


Rima turant ye baat sonam ko batati h jise sun sonam chonk k boli.

Sonam :- kya sachi, kahi tu majak to ni ker rahi na.

Rima :- are meri dadi m sach bol rahi hu, chahe khud chal k dekh le..

Ye bol Rima sonam ko khidki per le jaker dikhati h, Or jese sonam ki najar us gawale pe padi to ek baar fir uska raat jesa haal ho gaya, wo fir se usme khone lagi or fir use wahi aprichit ho ker bhi jani pahachsni aandmayi anubhuti hone lagi, jisme us gawale ki banshi 4 chand laga rahi thi.


Rima :- sonam kaha kho gayi firse tuuuu...

Sonam :- hhhaaa, kya hua.

Rima :- yahi to m tumse puch rahi Hun sonu ho kya gaya h tumhe kaha ko jati ho baar bar tum.

M kah rahi hu ki chalo hum jaldi se teyar ho ke chalo unse mil ker unka shukriya kerte h.

Sonam Rima ki baat man leti h Or dono saheli jaldi se teyar ho nikal padi us ghoshala ki Or.

Dono jab goshala m enter kerti h to pati h wo gawala abhi bhi apni hi masti m gum apni banshi bajaye ja raha tha or to or waha ghoshala m mojud sabhi gaye bhi use yu gher ker khadi h jese wo bhi bas us dhun ka anand le rahi ho.

Sonam or Rima chah ker bhi kuch ni boli, kyunki wo khud us dhun ka anand le rahi thi wo to chahti thi .

Kuch der baad us gawale ne apni banshi ko vishram dete hue apni ankhe kholi to uski najar sabse pahale sonam Or Rima p padi, jiske sath hi unke chahre pe ek bahut hi sunder muskaan aagayi, jo kisi ka man moh le.

Gwala :- are deviyo aagaye ap, suswahatam aaiye padhariye.

(Apni gayo ko pyar se) lakshi, sughandha,tulsi, ab yadi tumhara man bhar gaya ho to jao kuch bhojan ker lo , tumhara khana tumhare sthan p pahunch chuka h.

Sonam Or Rima ko ye dekh k herani hui ki wo gaay apna sir uper niche kerte hue apne aap bhi ek line m apne apne bade m jane lagi, jesa gawale ne kaha tha, mano ki unhe uski boli samjh aarahi ho.

Gawala :- aare aap abhi tak wahi h, sharmaiye mat aaiye.

Sonam or Rima waha pahunchti h to pas m padi hi charpai p unko wo gawala bithate h or fir unhe jalpaan kerwata h tabhi Rima boli.

Rima :- ek min apne esa kyu kaha ki aagaye aap jese ki aapko pata ho ki hum aane wale h.

Gawala sonam ki or dekhte hue :- apki saheli Rima ji kafi prashn kerti h sonam ji.

Sonam herani se :- aapko mera naam kese pata.

Gawala :- aapke bare me to mujhe apse bhi jyada gyan h sonam ji.

Rima or sonam chonk ker :- kyaaa.

Rima shak se dekhte hue :- ye kya bol rahe h aap sach sach bataiye kon h aap or humare naam kese jante ho, kahi esa to ni..


Gawala haste hue :- are shant devi shant hum to bus parihas ker rahe the or rahi aapke naam janne ki to kal raat ko jab aap dono lotte samay apas m baat ker rahi thi tabhi. Mujhe gyaat hua.

Rima :- oh esa h.

Gawala :- ha or ni to kya, m to ek sadharan gwala hu jo apni gayo ka palan ker apna jivan yapan kerta hu, koi jadugar thodi hu jo mujhe swatah hi ye sab gyaat ho jayega.

Sonam :- ji

Gawala :- ji ab kahiye kese aagman hua aapka is gawale ki is kutiya m aapka.


Sonam :- ji m or meri saheli aapko dhanyavaad kerne aayi thi.

Gawala :- dhanyavaad parantu kisliye.

Rima :- aapne jo raat ko hum dono ko un gundo se bachaya tha n uske liye , hum. To ye soch rahe the ki kese aapko dhundenge parantu aapki madhur banshi ne to humara kaam hi aasan ker diya.


Gawala :- usme dhanyavaad kesa devi ye to mera kartavya tha ki apne atithi vrindavan k atithiyon ki madad kerna or rahi meri banshi ki baat, isne to na jane kitno ko rah h apni dhun se.

Rima sonam k kaan m :- ye banda kabhi sidhe tarike se baat kyu ni kerta.

Gawala muskurate hue :- ab ap ho hi ek tedi tang wale ki nagri m devi to is sab ki aadat daal hi lo.

Rima ye sun sakpaka gayi ki us gawale ne sab sun liya, sonam baat badalte hue boli.

Sonam :- wese aap bahut hi madhur banshi bajate h, sun ker esa pratit hota h ki jese kisi ne kano m shahad ki mithas hi ghol di ho, esa ahasas hota h mano ki jese hum kisi or hi lok m pahunch gaye ho.

Gawala :- prashansa k liye dhanyavaad devi, ye to humari lakshmi h na, wo roj jid kerti h ki banshi sunao ni to bhojan ni karegi, bas apni priy lakshmi k liye hi hum pratah hi teyar ho jate h.

Rima :- lakshmi kon.

Gawala :- ek gawale k liye or kon uski sabse priy hogi Rima ji, hum apni gaiyaa apni lakshmi ki hi baat ker rahe h.

(Gayo ki or dekhte hue) sahi kahe na humri lakshmi.

Gaay bhi rambha deti h, jese ha bol rahi ho.

Sonam. :- ek sawal puchu, aap apni lakshmi yani apni gaiya se kese baat kerte ho, matlab ki kese, humne jeasa abhi dekha ki aap to unse ese baate kerte h jese unki bhasha aapko samjh aati ho or Esa bhi unke sath hota h, ye kese sambhav h.

Gawala :- kyu sambhav ni h devi, ek esi bhasha bhi h devi jo is sansar ki sabse mahan or pavitra bhasha h, jiski koi simma h na koi pabhandi, or ager sache hriday k sath hum uska prayog kare to is sansar ka pratyek jiv aapki baat ko na keval samjhta h balki aapke sath sadev sadev k liye jud bhi jata h.


Rima :- esi konsi bhasha h.

Gawala :- wo bhasha h prem kiii...

Sonam :- prem.

Gawala :- ha devi prem hi to wo mahan evam pavitra bhav h jiski bhasha ko kisi shabdo ki aawashkta ni, prem hi to h wo mahan bhasha jo kisi bhi jiv ko dusre jiv se jod deta h, (naina ki ankho me jhandee hue)wo bhakti bhi to prem ka hi to rrop h devi jiske kaaran ek bhakt apne aaradhya se jud pata h,

Or jis banshi ki madhrta ka abhi aap dono gungan ker rahi thi aap dono us banshi m bhi to mera apni is kala evam apni gaiya k liye prem hi to nihit h devi jo is sadharan banshi ko bhi itni sunder dhun ka janm dene ki shamta rakhti h.

Satya to yahi h devi ki is sharisti ka adhar hi prem h, jiske hriday m prem ni wo mrit saman hi h, prem hi is sansar ka sabse pavitra or mahantam bhav h devi, jis kaaran is sansar ka aasitv h kyunki prem k vashibhoot ho ishwer ne is sansar ki rachna kerte h, or usi prem k liye hi is sansaar ka palan kerte h or samay aane per bhakton k prati prem k kaaran hi to is sansar ki raksha hetu dushto ka sanghar kerte h.

Satya to yahi h devi ki prem hi parbrahm h, jiske kaaran prem se is sansar ka har asambhav karya bhi sambhav ho jata h, jesa ki aapke samne hua.

Gawale k mukh se itni sunder prem ki mahima sun dono k hriday ki pratyek shanka dur ho gayi.

Tab gawala bole.

Gawala :- m abhi nagar ki or hi ja raha hu devi, aap chahe to mere sath chal sakti h

Sonam :- are ni ni aap kyu taklif kerte h..

Gawala :- isme taklif kesi devi, humne to pahale hi kaha h aap humare mahman ho , to hume mahamanwazi ka moka to dijiye Or wese bhi mujhse acha wo kya bolte h apke yaha haa guide apko khoze se bhi na milega.

Rima :- per hum jayenge kese.

Tabhi gawale ne ek naam pukara.

Gwala :- ashwin, ajeet

Tabhi goshala k piche se .2 bahut hi sunder ghode dode aaye jinke piche ek tanga bhanda tha, jo itna sunder tha mano kisi rath se kam na tha.

Gawala :- lijiye aagayi aapki swati devi, virajiye.

Sonam :- aapko tanga chalana bhi aata h.

Gawala :- ji, or to or aap ek bar virajiye to sahi devi aapko swatah hi gyaat ho jayega ki mujhsa sarthi kahi ni milega is sansaar m aapko.

Rima :- ye ghode bhi aPki baat mante h. Kese.

Gawala :- utter vahi h Rima ji, prem.

Ab koi or prashn man me h to wo bhi puch lijiye.

Sonam unki ankjo m :- aPme bato hi bato m sare charachar ka gyan diya parantu apna parichay ni, kripya apna naam to bataiye mitra..

Gwala :- yu to kayo nam h mere mata alag nam se pukarti h to mitra alag nam se koi, parantu aapne jab mujhe mitra ki upadhi dehidi h to aap apne is mitra ko govind kah ker pukar sakti ho.

Sonam nam sun fir us anubhuti m khote hue :- govind...

Gawala :- ji ab aapki aagya ho to chale.


Rima :- ji Chalo.

Fir Rima or sonam gobind k sath chal diye banke bihari ki nagri ki or

Wahi dusri or

Rekha or uska parivaar subah jaldi uth teyar hote h kyunki pooja ki teyari jo kerni thi, wo jese hi kamre se bahar hall m pahunchte h to pate h ki ye kya naina or preety ne to sari teyari puri ker bhi li.

Rekha :- are ye kya beta tumne ye sab akele hi ker liya, hume to jaga deti hum bhi tumhara hath bata dete.

Naina :- ji aunty jyada kam tha ni isliye humne socha kyu aapko itni subha distrub kerna.

Naina ne janbujhkar raat wali baat chupa lo thi taki rekha ka parivaar dar naa jaye.

Fir naina hemant se boli.

Naina Hemant ko :- uncle aapke ghar k jitne bhi kamre h unper ye raksha sutra bandh dijiye.

Hemant :- isse kya hoga beti.

Naina :- iska mahtv apko yagya sampan hone per swayam pata chal jayega.

Or preety tum (ek ghada dete hue ) jao isme kue se jal bhar k le aao.

Rekha :- preety beta tum ruko m leke aati hu.

Naina :- ni aunty ye kam ap ni ker sakti, kyunki jo puja m kerne ja rahi uske sampan hone se pahale is ghar ka koi sadasy bahar ni jana chahiye.

Naina ne esa janbujhkar bola tha taki wo lakshmN rekha ki sima m surakshit rahe.

Thodi dee m hemant naina ka kam pura ker aata h, tab naina boli.

Naina :- uncle aunty aap apne baki family ko bhi bula lijiye kyunki is havan m parivaar ka pratyek sadasy ka bethna anivaary h.

Rekha :- m abhi lati hu beta.

Fir rekha apne sasur ko bol, pihu ko teyar kerke le aati h, wo shruti k kamre ki or bhi bhadi, use umid to ni thi ki shruti manegi, per uska ana bhi anivaary tha kyunki wo bhi parivaar ki ek sadasy thi.

Rekha ne abhi shruti ka gate knock kerme k liye hath badhaya hi tha ki shruti ne achank se gate yu khola ki rekha ek bar to ghabra gayi.

Rekha pyaar se :- are wah aaj to meri pyari beti jaldi uth bhi gayi or teyar bhi ho gayi.

Shruti ek rahasmyi muskan k sath ek ghari or darawni aawaz me boli :- uthna to tha hi naa aaj pooja jo h, ab chale .

Ye bol shruti khud hi chal padi, rekha ko aaj shruti ka vyavhaar bahut hi azib lag raha tha or sath m n jane kyu use shruti se dar bhi lag raha tha, kyunki aaj uska vartab bahut hi ajib tha.



Lekin fir usne ye soch jer vat ko aayi gayi ker diya ki lagta h kal ki daat ka asar h.

Shruti ko waha pahuncha dekh sabko herani hui, lekin naina k chahre p muskan bhi thi.

Naina ek thali aage pakdate hue :- lo shruti ise lo , kyunki tum is ghar ki badi beti ho is ghar ki lakshmi ho to apne parivaar m sabke tilak lagao, kyuki tilk vishnu ji ka pratik hota h Or beti ghar ki lakshmi to uske hatho kiya ye tilak is sudhi yagya k liye subh hoga.

Shruti aage bhadi or jese hi naina ne thali uske aage ki to shruti ne bahut hi jor se thali ko uchal ker fek diya.

Hemant :- shruti ye kya badtmiji h.

Shruti bhayank aawaz me :- chup bhude, ager jinda rahana chahta h to chupchaap khada rah

Or ye bolte hue uski ankhe puri kali ho gayi or wo hava m ek foot uper udne lagi, jiska arth tha ki usme kisi bhyanak pret aatma ne vas ker chuki h.
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Shruti :- tantrika Tu is ghar ki sudhi k liye yaha ni apni mot ko gale lagane aayi h Or tujhe wo mot m dungi.

Ye bol wo aaspas padi sari havan samgri ko tahas nahas kerne lagi or usne naina pe bhi humla kiya.

Lekin isse pahale naina tak wo pahuchti usse pahale hi ek jordaar muka uske pada jisse wo dur ja giri jo preety ne mara tha.

Preety :- m 2 min bahar kya chali gayi ki tum chiti ki ye majal ki meri bahan pe humla ker diya.

Naina :- preety m havan bedi p beth chuki hu isliye m ab yagya k sampan hone se pahale yaha se ni uth sakti ise tumhe hi sambhalna hoga

Preety:- tension not sister ise to 2 min m thik kerti hu.

Ye bol preety us shruti se bhid gayi or obiesly jit preety ki hi hui kyunki wo ek tritya thi.

Usne ek pash m shruti ko bandh diya.

Preety :- ab iska kya kiya jaye sister.

Naina :- preety jese jese samay bit raha h khatra bhi bad raha h, mujhe to ye samjh ni aaraha ki is aatma ne meri rekha ko par ker shruti m pravesh kese kiya, ye hum baad m hi pata lagayenge.

Fir naina jaldi se Sare parivar ko yagya m bethne ko bolti h or chetwani deti h chahe kuch bhi ho jaye yagya kund se na utheuthe anyatha anarth ho jayega.

Or isike sath shuru ho gaya naina ka anushthan

Wahi apne sthan pe betha tantrik haste hue bola

Tantrik :- abhi jo hua wo to meri shakti ka ek chota sa namuna tha naina, ab dekh meri ye mahashakti, bach sakti h to bach isse ye bol usne ek mantra bol havan m aahuti di.

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Karan or jyoti subah jaldi uth humesha ki tarah dhyan lagate h to coincidence to dekho aaj karan ko bhi apne past ki ghatnaye fir najar aayi or to or sath hi sonam or kaya k past ki bhi jhalak najar aayi jisne ek baar karan ko vichlit kiya per fir usne kuch esi baat bhi notice ki jo sonam or kaya se use pata na chali thi.

Or sath hi sath uske man me bhi ab kaya or sonam se milne ki tivra icha hone lagi


Fir karan or jyoti uth ker apne nityakarmo se nivrat ho apne dosto k pas Jake nashta ker hi rahe hote h ki tabhi ek ladki jo siya ki dost thi, wo aati h Or jo sunati h use sun karan ko chod sabke chahro p muskan aagayi.


Siya ki us dost ne khabar di thi ki siya k sasur ko bhayankar kushth rog ho chuka h jiska koi ilaaz ni.

Ye sun siya ghabra gayi, wo ek bhartiya nari thi, isliye wo turant apne ghar lotna chahti thi lekin karan ne use kese na kese rok diya.

Baad m kamre m jaker jyoti ko karan ne bataya ki jab siya ko leker wo waha se nikle the tab usi waqt karan ne apni vakra drishti uske sasur per dal di thi, jis kaaran ab uska sasur bhi ab karan k dand chakra m bandh chuka tha.

Thodi der baad karan nidhi k pas gaya or usne komal ko apne sath kahi le jane ki permission mangi.

Nidhi :- beta isme puchne ki kya jarurat h, tum iske bade bhai ho tumhara hak banta h isper pura, jaha marzi chahe leker jao apni gudiya ko per apna or apni bahan ka dhyan rakhna or ha waqt se lot aana.

Karan :- ji chachi.

Phir karan sirf komal ko apne sath leker jeep me nikal pada ek or.

Komal :- bhaiya hum kaha ja rahe h.

Karan :- meri pyari doll meri gudiya, m tumhe apne kisi khas se milwana chahta hu , jo tumhe ek bahut hi bade wala surprise denge.

Komal :- kya sachi , kesa surprise bhaiya batao naa.

Karan :- are bata diya to surprise kesa, thoda wait kero jald hi pata chal jayega.

Ye bol karan ne jeep ki speed badha di.

Komal badi utsukta k sath manjil par pahuchne ka wait kerne lagi.

Is baat se anjan ki uske sath aakhir kya ghatit hone wala h

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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