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Location :- usi jungle ka ek kona jaha naina ko sama mila tha, waha per kuch tents lage hue the, jese ki koi sena ki tukdi waha ruki ho.

Wo shetan jo naina k hatho bach ker bhag gaya tha, wo waha bhaga bhaga pahuncha or chillane laga.

Malik Malik.. . .

Tabhi ek tent me se ek 7 feet ka rakshas jesa admi bahar aata h or bolta.A



Admi :- kya hua bhosdike ese kyu chilla raha h jese kisi ne teri gand mar li ho or tujhe to mane us ladke ko dhndne bheja tha n, to yaha kyu maa chuda raha h.

Darinde :- malik ek gadbad ho gyi h,, wo ladka humare hath se nikal gaya or humne apne kayi sathi bhi kho diye.

Admi gusse se:- kya bakwas ker raha h Tu sale bhang kha k aayaa h
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Darinda :- ni malik m bilkul sach bol raha hu

Ye bol darinde ne sari baat shuru se ant tak apme malik ko bata di

Admi gusse se :- us ladki ki ye mazal k usne shakal k admiyo ko mara

(Ji ha dosto ye wahi shakaal tha jise kubdi ne bheja tha)

Shakaal dahadte hue apne sabhi seniko ko bola :- chapa chan maro is jungle or shahhr ka, mujhe wo ladki chahiye wo bhi jinda.

Sali ne mere admiyo ko mara h n usne, ab use apni rakhail n banaya to mera nam shakal ni.

Ye bol wo gusse se gurate hue chal deta h apne tent ki or.

Wahi dusri Or

Aaiye chalte h shivgarh or dekhte h ki naina se mulakaat k baad piya or rekha ka kya hua.

Jesa ki naina ne rekha ko bataya tha, vese hi rekha ne kiya, unke ghar M pichle 7 dino se akhand saptshati path chal rahe the, jiska prabhaav bhi dhire dhire naja ane laga tha, Ghar M dikhne wale saye ab gayab ho chuke the or gharwalo ki sehat M bhi sudhar ane laga tha.

Abhi rat ka samay tha or sone ka samay ho raha tha.

Rekha jo piya ko god M liye khel rahi thi wo shayad kisi k ane ka intezar ker rahi thi.

Rekha :- chalo bacha sone ka time ho gaya.

Piya apni kamar P dono hath rakhte hue :- pal mumma didi to abhi tak ni aayi, or aap mujhe hi humesha jaldi sone ko kyu bolti ho, ye to galat baat h.

Rekha pyar se uska gal chumte hue :- wo isliye kyunki ap mumma ki achi bachi ho na or ache bache humesha jaldi sote h.

Rekha piya ko god me leker khadi hote hue boli .

Rekha :- chalo bacha , ab nini ka waqt ho gaya h , subah jaldi bhi uthna h na school k liye.

Piya :- ,ni mujhe school ni jana, mujhe naina didi se milna h .

Rekha :- beta aap bhul gaye apki naina didi ne kya kaha tha ki vo pooja k last din yani ki parso aayegi na , isliye no chuti.

Per ha aapko jab m school se lene aayungi phir apn dono shopping per jayenge.

Piya khush hote hue :- sachi , fir to m naina didi k liye khub sari chocolate laungi .

Rekha :- ha ha lelena pahale sone to chalo.

Phir Rekha piya ko leker jati h or use sulaker hall m aajati h or sofe p Beth ker kisi ka intezar kerne lag, raat ki 12 Baj gayi thi , lekin Rekha wahi intezar kerti rahi.

Tabhi doorbell ring hui, Rekha ne jaker darwaja khola to samne ek ladki ko paya jo shayad m nashe m thi or uske kapde bhi ast vyast ho rakhe the .

Rekha chintit swar me or thode :- ye koi aane ka waqt h Shruti or ye kya halat bana k rakhi h tune apni.

Ye ladki Shruti thi , Rekha ki badi beti or Pihu ki badi bahan , iske bare m aage pata chalega.

Shruti ladkhadati hui chal or awaz k sath :- of o mom ! Ab ap fir se shuru
Ho jana , mane kaha to tha m late ho jaungi, lekin ap humesha mera dimag khati rahati ho

Rekha gusse se :- ye kya tamiz h Shruti apni ma se baat kerne ki.

(Shruti k muh se aati badbu ko sungh ) or ye kya tune aaj fir se sharab pi h , mane tumhe mana kiya tha na.

Per tum ho ki meri sunti hi ni.

Shruti :- kya mom thodi si hi to drink ki h aap to ese react ker rahi ho jese m bf k sath soke aayi hu...

Rekha gusse se apna hath uthate hue :- shrutiiiiiiiiiii


Lekin Rekha ne khud ko bich m hi rok liya , lekin Shruti ki badtameezi khatam na hui

Shruti :- chilla kyu rahi ho aap , sahi to kahaa mane , kya galat bola.

Ab m badi ho chuki hu , mujhe meri life kese jini h uska mujhe kisi ko batane ki jarurat ni h mom or ager itni hi problem h na mujhse to kah do m kal hi ghar chod dungi.

Ye bol Shruti ladkhadati hui kese n kese apne room m pahunch gayi or bed p gir gayi or nashe ki vajah se girte hi wo so gayi.

Lekin piche chod gayi roti hui Rekha ko jo ro rahi thi apni kismat pe apni beti k rawaiye se , Rekha ka dhairya ab dhire dhire jwab dene laga tha, lekin wo ker kuch ni pa rahi thi.

Ab to usko bas ek hi ummid hi najar aarahi thi , wo thi naina.

Ab use bas intezar tha naina k aane ka.

Chaliye jab naina ka jikra hua hi h to ek najar naina pe bhi dal li jaye.

Location :- naina hotel

Alag Subah ho chuki thi or samar bhi jag chuka tha , yu to uske sabhi ghav preety ki meharbani se bhar chuke the , bas thodi kamzori thi.

Naina ne Veer ki madad se samar ko fresh kerwaya or fir niche se khud khana leker aati h.

Naina :- lijiye bhai , khana kha lijiye.

Samar jese hi plate lene apne aage kerta h , to naina apne hath piche ker leti h.

Samar naina ko sawaliya najar se dekhta h.

Naina :- ese ni , m apne bhaiya ko apne hatho se khana khilaungi.

Ye bol naina samar k bagal m padi ek chair p bethti h or use khana ek niwala tod samar ki or badhaya.

Samar :- are bahan tum kyu taklif kerti ho , m apne aap kha lunga na.

Naina :- are ye kya baat hui bhai , bhala bhai ka khayal rakhna bahan ki taklif hoti h kya or aap to mere pyare bhai ho , m apka khayal ni rakhungi to kon rakhega , chaliye ab chupchap khana khaiye.

Ye bol naina samar ko khana khilane lagi , naina wese to kafi strong minded girl thi , lekin jabse samar ne naina ko bahan bola tha , jabse naina kafi emotional ho gayi thi , naina bachpan se akeli hi rahi thi , school time m bhi uska sirf kahane k hi dost the.

Jis kaaran wo humesha akeli pad jati, wo maa kali se humesha ye dua kerti ki kash uska bhi koi bhai hota jiske sath wo khub khelti or uska bhai usko bahut pyar kerta or wo bhi apne bhai se.

Or samar k roop m use apne Bachpan ki wahi icha puri najar hote ane lagi thi , jis kaaran uska samar se pal pal lagaw badta hi ja raha tha.

Abhi naina samar ko khana khila hi rahi thi ki naina ne dekha ki samar ro raha h.

Naina ghabra k :- bhai aap ro kyu rahe ho , kya mane kuch galat kah diya.

Samar :- ni ni bahan ro to m raha hu apni kismat p ki mujhe tum jesi pyaar kerne wali bahan mili h or m tumhe chahker bhi ni pahachan pa raha , kese abhaga bhai hu m , jo apni hi bahan p bojh ban chuka hu.

Ye bol samar apne dimag pe fir se jor deta h jiske kaaran uske sir m fir se dird uthane laga or wo tadafne laga.

Naina turant samar ko apne sine se laga rote hue '- bhai ap please mat roye , jo hua Usme aapki galti ni , dhire dhire sab sahi ho jayega , or bhala koi bhai apne bahan pe bojh ho sakta h kya .

Kya sirf bhai hi bahan ka khayaal rakh sakte h , kya bahan ka koi farz ni banta , ni na , fir aapne esa kyu kaha.

(Sisakte hue) ager apne dobara esi baat kahi na bhai , to m aapki pitayi laga dungi.

Samar naina k ansu pochte hue:- acha ni karunga baba , ab apne bhaiya ko maaf bhi ker do meri pyari nainu.

Naina samar k muh se apna itna pyara Nick name sun khush hoti h or vo boli.

Naina :- ok mere pyare bhaiyu.

Abhi ye bhai bahan bato me lage hue the ki Veer room m aaya or bola.

Veer :- naina jaldi kero hume puja k liye late ho raha h.

Samar :- pooja ?

Naina :- ha bhaiya pooja, aap bhi humare sath chaliye m raste m apko sab kuch bata dungi.

Fir naina samar or apne dosto k sath mandir k bahar pahunch jati h or raste m unhone samar ko sab kuch bata diya .

Samar :- yadi esa h bahan to m bhi tum logo k sath rahunga aaj se is safar pe.

Naina chintit hote hue :- per bhai is sab me khatra ho sakta h or fir aapke piche to wo darinde pahale hi padhe hue h.

Samar naina ka hath thamte hue :- wo bhai hi kesa jo apni bahan ko musibat m chod de ,tumhara ye bhai marte dam tak apni nainu ka sath dega bahan.

Naina samar k chati p pyaar se marte hue :- ager dobara marne ki bat ki na bhai to m aapse kabhi baat ni karungi.

Yu hi bato k sath sabhi mandir ki sidiya chadte hue mandir m jate h per ye kya , samar jese hi mandir ki dahlij per kadm rakhta h to usko jordar jhatka lagta h or wo piche ki or jake girta h.

Naina samar ki ye halat dekh chilayi :- bhai..

Or fir turant bhagke samar k pas jati h or use uthati h .

Naina samar ko sambhalte hue :- bhai aap thik to ho na , ye sab kya hua.

Samar :- ha nainu m thik hu.

(Nam ankho se ) shayad asur yoni ka hone k kaaran mera ana maa ko swikar ni.

Naina :- ni bhaiya esa ni bolte , asur ho ya dev sab maa ki hi santan h or ek maa apni santan m kabhi bhedbhav ni kerti .

(samar ka hath thamte hue ) aaiye Abhi dikhati hu aapko.

Fir naina samar ka hath thame mandir m prabesh kerti h or is baar samar ko koi pareshani ni hoti.

Jisse naina or samar dono k hi chahre p muskan aajati h .

Naina baba k pas pahunch wo jadi butiya dete hue boli :- lijiye baba jo apne kaha tha wo sab saman m le aayi.

Ghora baba jo abhi dhyan me the wo ankh kholte h , or naina ko dekhte hue muskurate h.

Per jese hi unki najar samar pe padti h unke chahre k hav bhav badal jate h or unke mastak per pareshani ki rekhaye saf saf najar aane lagti h.

Baba kuch bolne ko hote h per bolte bolte ruk jate h.

Veer :- kya hua baba koi pareshani h.

Ghora :- ni esa kuch bhi ni h , ab jaldi se pooja m betho muharat nikla ka raha h.

Baba ki baat sun sab pooja m Beth jate h or fir ashtami ki pooja start ho jati h.

Back to the hero .

Karan or uski family bahut khush thi aaj , sabse jyada to garima thi kyunki Karan or jyoti uski baat ko man gaye the.

Karan jyoti apne room me enter kerte h to Karan bola.

Karan :- aj party m kitna maja aaya na gudiya kitni dimo baad hum sab ne yu puri family k sath enjoy kiya na.

Jyoti apni narajgi dikhate hue :- hmmm,

Or itna bol wo bathroom m chali jati h or fresh hoker apne raat k kapde pahan k aati h or mirror k samne Beth apne bal sawarne lagi.

Karan jyoti ki is ada pe muskurate hue uske piche jaker use piche se hug ker leta h or gungunane laga.

Karan :- koi hasina jab Ruth jati h to ,
Or bhi hasin ho jati h.

Gate hue Karan jyoti k galo ko pyar se chum leta h , jisse jyoti k chahre p ek pyari si muskan aajati h.

Karan :- meri gudiya mujhse guchaa h.

Jyoti bilkul bacho jese bahe felate hue :- ha or wo bhi itta sara..

Karan :- are baap le , itta sala , meri gudiya apne bhiya se ita gussa kyu h bhala.

Jyoti Karan ki or mud Karan k sine se lag nam ankhe se boli.

Jyoti :- gussa kyu na hou bhai , aap esa kese ker sakte ho, jin logo ne humari maa ko itna mentaly tourcher kiya unhe itni yatnaye di , aap wo sab kese bhul gaye bhaiya, humari maa k apradhiyo ko kese maaf ker sakte ho aap bhala.

Karan jyoti k sir p hath ferte hue :- kisne kaha gudiya ki mane unhe maaf ker diya h gudiya, maa ko jo waha yatnaye mili unka wo sumker hi mera hriday kamp jata h , man to kerta h jala ker rakh ker dalu sab kuch.

Jyoti :- phir ap waha jane ko kyu teyar hue bhai.

Karan :- gudiya hum waha jayenge to jarur isliye ni kyunki humne unhe maaf kiya , balki isliye kyunki ab samay aagaya h jab un logo ko apne karmo ka fal prapt hoga..

(Karan ki ankhe lal rang me chamakne lagi) dandnayak ka dand praapt hoga , apna ho ya paraya , koi bhi karmfal se ni bach sakta.

Or ye to fir bhi wo h jinhone humari ma ko asahniya pida or kasht diye , unhe m kese chod sakta hu.

Ab wo waqt achuka h , jab unlogo ko varsho purv kiye gaye karmo ka fal praapt hoga, isliye mane ab waha jane ka fesla liya gudiya.

Abhi Karan age kuch bol pata isse pahale hi ki tabhi unke kano m ek aawaz.

Karan ne jo nirnay liya h wo shat pratishat uchit h putri.

Ye aawaz kisi or ki ni balki Rishi pipplad ki thi , jo ek tez roshmi k sath waha prakat hue

Karan or jyoti hath jod ek sath :- pranam baba.

Baba :- kalayanam astu bacho.

Jyoti :- baba ye aap kya kah rahe h , mere anusar to unke liye sabse bada dand sirf yahi ho sakta h ki jin pote poti ki chah me unhone humari maa ko pratadit kiya h , ab vo uni pote poti ki nafrat or unse duri ko sadev sadev k liye sahe.

Baba pyar se jyoti k sir ko sahalate hue bole :- putri dand ka arth keval doshi ko pratadit kerna ya use kasht dena hi ni hota , dand sahi maine m dand tabhi kahalata h jisse prabhavit ho doshi k man pe pashchatap ki bhavna jagrit ho jaye or doshi ko ahasas ho ki usne kitna bada apradh so kiya tha.

Esa hi kuch tumhare parivaar walo k sath bhi hona chahiye putri , kyunki itna sab kuch hone k bavjood bhi aaj bhi tumhare dada dadi k man m koi bhi pachtava ni h putri apitu vo aaj bhi vo apni rudiwadi soch or apni jhuti shan ko kayam rakhne k liye vese hi babe hue h.

Burayi ka ant bure vyakti k ant se balki bure vyakti ki burayi wali soch k ant k sath hi hota h putri or tumhe or tumhare bhai ko tumhe usi soch ka ant kerna hoga , jiske liye tumhe waha jana hi hoga.

Jyoti baba ki kahi har baat ko bhalibhanti samjh jati h or unhe dhanyawad kerte hue boli.

Jyoti :- dhanyawad baba jo aapne mera margdarshan kiya.

(Karan ki or ghumte hue kaan pakadte hue boli ) or sorry bhaiya mane aapke fesle per shak kiya or uspe sawal uthaye.

Karan kuch ni bolta bas muskurate hue jyoti k hatho ko uske kano se hataker jyoti ko apne sine se laga leta h.

Jyoti bhi Karan k kaske gale lag jati h or fir Karan bola.

Karan :- baba jaha tak m aapko samjhta hu apka yaha aane ka uddeshya keval sirf jyoti ko samjhana to ni ho sakta.

Avashya hi aap kisi or karya hetu hi aap yaha upasthit hue honge , aadesh kijiye.

Baba serious hote hue :- tumne bilkul uchit kaha putra , m yaha keval tum dono k margdarshan k liye hi ni apitu tumhe savdhan kerne aaya hu.

Jyoti chonk ker chintit swar me :- savdhan ? Parantu kisliye baba , kahi mere bhaiya pe koi khatra to ni aane wala na baba.

Ye bol jyoti Karan k hath ko kaske pakad leti h , apne bhai k prati apni chinta vyakt kerte hue.

LiBaba :- esa hi samjh lo putri , ye yatra na keval tumhare parivaar ko unke karm fal ko pradan karegi , apitu tum dono k jivan ki ek or badi pariksha sabit hogi .
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Nikat bhavishya me dharm or adhrm k bich ek mahasangram hoga jisme tumhe dharm ka netritv kerna hoga, jisme Karan ko......

Baba kahate kahate bich me hi ruk gaye , lekin jyoti bich m hi bol padi.

Jyoti :- khatra chahe kitna bhi bada or shaktishali ho baba , use mere bhai tak pahuchne k liye pahale mujhse samna kerna hoga.

(Jyoti apna hath uper kerti h jisse uske hath m uska divyastra sajata h or uski ankhe nili roshni se chamakne lagi) or jab tak jyoti k Tan m pran h , tab tak swayam yamraj bhi mere bhai ko chu bhi ni sakte baba.

Baba :- shant putri shant , m janta hu tumhara prem hi Karan ki sabse badi shakti or kavach h , lekin tum dono ki shaktiya tumhare 21 sal k hone tak purn roop se jagrit ni h , jis kaaran tum dono ki shsktio ki bhi kuch simaye h.

Or ane wala khatra us seema se kayi aage h .

Jyoti ye sun chintit ho gayi or baba se iska upay puchne lagi.

Baba :- is Sankat se bachne ka ab ek hi upaay h putra Karan tumhe apni us shakti ko prapt kerna hoga jo tumhare is sansaar ka sabse abhedya kavach sabit hogi.

Jyoti :- shakti ? Kesi shakti baba or wo hume kese prapt hogi.

Baba muskurate hue :- putri manjil humesha marg pe chal ker hi prapt ki ja sakti h , marg puch puch ker ni.

(Karan ki or dekhte hue ) Or vese bhi tumhare is prashn ka uter dene ki mujhe kya avashyakta h , jabki uter to tumhare samip hi h.

Jyoti :- m kuch samjhi ni baba.

Baba :- shighra hi samjh jaogi putri ,ab tum dono filhal vishram kero kyunki tumhe kal apni yatra ki teyariya bhi kerni h.

Ye bol baba jyoti or Karan ko ashirdwad deker anterdhyan ho gaye .

Or piche chod gaye sawalo se ghiri jyoti ko , lekin Karan k man m to kuch or hi chal raha tha , jaha jyoti baba k sawalo se uljhan m najar aarahi thi , wahi Karan k chahre per asamanya roop se shanti or gahari soch k bhav najar aarahe the.

Bahut der tak sochne per bhi jab jyoti k samjh m kuch na aaya to usne sab kuch bhavishya pe tal ker khud ko Normal kiya, kyunki ab to use aadat ho chuki thi , kyunki uske liye to uska or uske bhai ka pura jivan hi ek rahasya tha.

Jyoti ne khud ko Normal ker Karan ki or dekha or usne apne bhai ko kisi gahari soch m paya to usne Karan ko pukara.

Jyoti :- bhai..

Per Karan apni soch me itna mashgool tha ki use jyoti ki awaz sunayi hi na di

Jab jyoti ne use 3 4 bar pukara tab jaker Karan ko hosh aaya or wo bola.

Karan :- ha gudiya kya hua.

Jyoti :- bhai m aapko kabse bula rahi hu , kaha dhyan h aapka.

Karan hadbadate hue :- kahi bhi to ni.

Jyoti Karan k gal ko sahalate hue :- m samjhti hu bhai aap baba ki bato se pareshan ho , lekin aap chinta mat kijiye bhai , jab tak hum dono ek dusre k sath h na , is sansaar ki koi bhi shakti humara kabhi ahit ni ker sakti.

(Majakiya tune me ) or just relax bhai , baba ki to aadat hi h apan ka bheja fry kerna , mere ko to na ab is sabki aadat si pad gayi h

Isliye aap baki bate chodo or ye socho ki mere ko kal shopping p kaha leke jane wale ho.

Karan :- abe chipkali tum ladkiyo ko shopping k alawa kuch sujhta ni kya , abhi pichle hafte hi to leker gaya tha tumhe.

Jyoti apni kamar p hath rakhte hue boli :- my dear golu bhaiya shayad aap bhul rahe ho ki humare waha ane ka intezar humari ek or pyari si doll bhi ker rahi h or ye shopping uske liye hi kerni h.

Karan dhire se :- doll ka to sirf bahana h , moti ko to khud k liye shopping p jana h.

Jyoti jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- kya bole bhai moti , rukiye m abhi batati hu apko.

Ye bol jyoti Karan k uper tut padi or fir dono bhai bahan yuhi masti majak kerte hue kab nind ki hasin wadiyo m chale gaye unhe khud bhi na pata chala

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Aaiye jante h ki kese nidhi yani karan ki chachi ka hriday privartan hua.

Hua yu tha ki nidhi k pitaji ki tabiyat ab sahi thi, isliye ab wo apne ghar lotne ki teyari ker rahi thi.

Tabhi rajiv ka phone aata h.

Nidhi :- hello.

Rajiv :- hello darling kaha tak pahunchi.

Nidhi :- kya aap bhi, abhi kuch hi der m niklungi.

Rajiv :- kya abhi tak ni nikli, are jaan thodi jaldi dikhao ab Or judai bardaasht ni hoti.

Nidhi :- acha ji itna pyar aa raha h aaj bivi per apni.

Rajiv :- pyar to humesha hi tum per aata h janeman per ab to humare bache bhi tumhe bahut yaad ker rahe h.

Nidhi :- bache?

Rajiv :- ha, kabse puch rahe h ki chachi kab ayegi chachi kab aayegi.

Chachi shabd sun ker nidhi samjh gayi ki jisse uska mood kharab ho gaya Or wo rukhe swar m boli.

Nidhi :- acha ab phone rakhoge tab hi to m teyar hougi na aane ko.

Ye bol nidhi ne phone kaat diya Or khud hi badbadate hue packing kerne lagi.

Nidhi nakal kerte hue :- chachi kab aayegi, huhhhh, sab natak h itne saal yaad ni aayi chachi chacha ki or ab bade hote hi aGaye meri beti ka hak chinne, per m esa hone ni dungi.

Meri beti ka hak kisi ko ni lene dungi, ghar jate hi esa kuch karungi ki khud hi bhi jayenge ye sab sochte hue nidhi packing kerne lagi.

Wahi dusri or

Jab karan or jyoti subah hue kand k kaaran dukhi the or ro rahe the band kamre m to koi thi jinki najar un dono bhai bahan per thi or unki ye halat dekh unka hriday trahi trahi ker raha tha, unse apne bacho ki ye halat dekhi ni ja rahi thi.

Wo or koi ni shani mata devi chaya thi jo shani lok me bethi sab dekh rahi thi, karan or jyoti ki ye halat unse or na dekhi gayi or wo turant apne aasan se uth ker jane lagi karan k paas.

Tabhi shani unhe rokte hue bole.

Shani :- ruk jaiye mata, aapka is waqt karan or jyoti k pas jana uchit ni hoga.

Mata :- prantu kyu putra, mujhe mat roko, mere bacho ki avasyakata h ni to wo tut jayenge.

Shani :- wahi to m kahana chaahata hu mata, kabtak aap unko yu sahara de unhe kamzor banate rahogi mata, yadi unhe majboot or saksham banna h to unhe swayam ko sambhalna aana chahiye.

Mata :- putra ye baat tum kese kah sakte ho maa ka prem apne bacho ki kamzori ni balki unki shakti hoti h putra.

Shani :- aapka kahana sarvada uchit h maa, parantu mata ka ek kartvya ye bhi h ki samay aane per kuch kathor bhi bane taki santaan sankat kaal m kamzor na pade.

Kya aap chahti ho mata ki aapke bache kamzor pade.


Shani ki baat sun mata boli.

Mata chaya apne ansu pochte hue :- tumhara kahana uchit h putra, thik h m ni jati, taki karan or jyoti kamzor na pade

(Kuch der ruk jab tak karan or jyoti bhi shant ho chuke the) putra meri ek baat manoge.

Shani hath jod :- aagya kijiye mata.

Mata :- putra mane tumhara kathan mana or waha ni gayi, ab tumhe meri aagya manni hogi.

M chahti hu ki ab karan or jyoti ko koi bhi esa aghat na pahunchaye , m ni chahti ki meri santaano ko ab or koi bhi yu na rulaye balki unke chahro p wo muskan wapas lot aye, jo is ghatnakarm k baad kho chuki h .


Or ye daitv m tumhe deti hu putra, (shani k gaal ko sahalate hue) mere kahane ka tatparya samjh gaye na putra.

Shani :- ji mata, aap nishchit rahiye, ab aapka putra bina kisi vilamb k aapki aagya purn karega.

Aagya dijiye mata



Ye bol shani waha se gayab ho gaye.

Or turant adrishy roop me prakat hue nidhi k kaksh m, jaha wo gusse m badbadate hue apni samman packing krr rahi thi.

Shani man hi man :- putri nidhi hum jante h tum esi bilkul ni ho jesa swabhaav tumhara is samay ho chuka h, ye to bhutkal m biti ghatna ka prabhav h putri jisse pahunche mansik aghat ne tumhari prakritik swabhaav ko badal diya.

Parantu ese samay m bhi tumne koi adhrm ni kiya, isliye hi tum kisi bhi prakar se karan k dand chakra ki adhikari ni or na hi hum hone denge.

Ye bol shani ne apna ek hath aage kiya jisme se ek nili roshni nikal samne nidhi k saman p padi .

Nidhi ne apna wo hi saman uthaya to usme se achanak se ek photo niklke niche giri

Nidhi :- are ye photo kiski h or Yaha kese aayi.

Nidhi ne wo photo utha k dekhi to chonk gayi.

Nidhi :- are ye to asha bhabhi ki photo h , ye yaha kese aayi.

Tabhi shani ne apni ankhe band ker kholi jisme se ek roshni nikal nidhi m sama gayi.

Or achanak se asha ki photo ko dekhte hue uski ankho m ansu bahane lage, or use past m ghati ghatnaye yaad aane lagi.

Hua yu tha ki ek samay aaya tha ki jab nidhi k mayke or sasuraal dono jagah bahut tangi chal rahi thi or nidhi k pitaji ki tabiyat usi samay bahut bigad gayi thi, unhe turant jaipur k bade hospital m leke jaya gaya, jaha unhe pata chala ki unka operation kerna hoga or kharcha 10 lakh ka hoga.

Jise sunte hi nidhi buri tarah rone lagi, Rajiv ki bhi us samay halat kharab thi or wo apne mata pita ki ekloti olaad thi, isliye use samjh ni aa raha tha ki kese vo itne peso ka intezaam kere or apne pita ka ilaaj karwaye.

Tabhi nidhi per najar asha ki padi, jo udher aayi hui thi, kyunki ye usika hospital tha, wo kisi official kam se yaha aaayi hui thi.

(Yaha m bata du ki asha ye ni janti thi ki wo uski devrani h or na hi us waqt karan or jyoti ka janm hua tha)

Asha to wese hi bahut hi komal swabhav ki thi, usse nidhi kk yu rona acha n laga, usne turant waha mojud doctor se uske baare m pucha to doctor ne sari baat batayi , jise sun komal hriday asha ka hriday pasij gaya.

Asha :- doctor aap esa kijiye inke pita ka operation turant start kijiye or jo bhi kharcha ho mere account m likh diniyega.

Doctor :- ok mam

Fir asha waha se apne office m chali gayi, kyunki use show off ka shok ni tha or yahi to. Ek dani or udar swabhaav k vyakti ki nishani ese hoti, wo koi bhi acha kam kare kabhi uske badle fal ya badayi ki apeksha ni kerta, karta ho ker bhi wo khud ko karta ni manta, ise hi to shri krishna ne geeta m nishkam bhakti kaha h.

Asha ka order milte hi doctor nidhi k pita ko opd m le jane lage, jise dekh ek baar to nidhi dar gayi, ki kahi pese n milne k kaaran kahi wo uske pita ko icu se nikal to ni rahe.

Nidhi rote hue :- doctor sahab m aapke aage hath jodti hu kripya mere pita ko bahar mat nikaliye m jald hi peso ki vyavastha ker lungi.

Doctor :- mam aap tension mat lijiye, hum aapke pita ko opd leker ja rahe unke operation kerne.

Nidhi herani se :- kya per pese.

Doctor :- aap peso ki tension mat kijiye mam humari madam yani is hospital ki owner ne sab payments ker di h.


Ye sun nidhi ko bahut herani hui,phir 2 ghante nidhi k pita ka operation chala, jo successful raha, jab ye khabar khushi ka thikana raha.

Nidhi :- aapka bahut Bahut shukriya doctor, aap ni jante aapne kitna bada ahasan kiya h aapne mujh per.

Doctor :- it's ok, ye to humari duty h mrs sharma or aapko thanku kahana hi h to aap humari mam ko kijiye .

Nidhi :- ji jarur, aap plz mujhe bataiye wo mujhe kaha milegi.

Tab doctor unhe asha k office jis floor p h wo batata h nidhi turant waha jati h or gate knock kerti h.

Asha :- come in

Nidhi jese hi ander enter kerti h to asha ko dekh chonk jati h or uske muh se bas itna nikla.

Nidhi :- bhabhi aap.

Nidhi kabhi asha se mili na thi, lekin usne Rajiv se bahut suna tha asha k bare m or pic bhi dekhi thi asha ki.

Asha nidhi ko dekh :- are aap aaiye bethiye kesa raha aapke pitaji ka operation or aap mujhe bhabhi kyu bol rahe ho.

Nidhi :- wo bilkul thik h bhabhi , or ye aapki wajah se hi sambhav hua bhabhi Rajiv ne jesa aapke bare m bataya tha aap bilkul wese hi ho.

Nidhi k muh se Rajiv ka naam sun asha bhi chonk k uchal padi or puchne lagi.

Asha :- kya Rajiv, yani mere raju nee, tum use kese janti ho.

Nidhi khusi k ansu rote hue :- ha bhabhi m Rajiv yani aapke raju ki hi baat ker rahi hu, jo aaj bhi aapke lotne k intezaar m h.

Or m aapke raju ki hi patni yani aapki devrani hu bhabhi.

Asha ye sun khushi k ansu rote hue :- kya mere raju ki patni , meri devrani.

Asha se khushi k mare kuch bola bhi ni ja raha tha, wo turant bhag k nidhi ko apne gale laga leti h.

Dono kafi der ek dusre k gale lag rote rahe or fir asha use apne sath bithate hue boli.

Asha :- yakin ni hota mera raju itna bada ho gaya , uski shadi bhi ho gayi, kitni durbhagi hu m jo apne rahi ki shadi m aabhi na saki

(Nidhi k gaal sahalate hue) choti mujhe bata kesa h mera raju, meri guddu kesi h kya vo mujhe yaad kerte h

Nidhi :- aap ye pucho bhabhi ki wo aapko kab yaad ni kerte, jabse aap gaye wo hasna hi bhul gaye, humesha aapko yaad kerte hi unka din jata h, esa koi pal ni hoga jab unhone aapko yaad na kiya ho, esa hi kuch haal garima didi ka h.

Fir nidhi ghar k Sare hal batati h or sath m Rajiv ki business m peso ki problem bhi batati h, jise sun asha ka hriday kano utha.


Asha jese hi ye sunti h to turant phone kerke ek vakil ko bulati h kuch papers leke aane ko or thodi der m vakil aajata h.

Tab asha vakil k diye hue papers p sign kerti h or nidhi se bhi ketwati h or fir vakil waha se chala jata h.

Asha :- le choti ye papers Tu raju ko dedena.

Nidhi :- ye kya h bhabhi.

Asha :- ye ramgarh m mojud meri ek plot k papers h jo mane abhi tumhare or raju k naam ker diye h, taki raju us land per apna naya business start ker sake.

Nidhi :- ni bhabhi m ye ni le sakti, ye aapki h, Rajiv bhi kabhi ise ni lenge.

Asha :- janti hu mera raju swabhimani h, isliye hi to mane ye jamin tumhare naam ki or tum use yahi bataogi ki ye jamin tumhari h.

Nidhi bahut mana kerti h parantu asha use kese n kese mana hi leti h or ye kasam bhi deti h wo is bare m kabhi jikra uske sasuraal m na kare.

Tabhi ek nurse aaker batati h ki nidhi k pita ko hosh aagaya h, nidhi fir apne pita k pas chali gayi, isi bich asha bhi apna sara karya nipta k waha se wapas apne ghr ya kolkata k liye nikal gayi kyunki wo jamti thi ki uske sasuraal wale bhi yaha jarur aayenge or wo is samay wo unka samna ni kerna chahti thi, bina ranvir ki icha k or satj sath apne staff ko bhi mana kiya ki kisi bhi halat m wo uske bare m ya uska adress kisi ko na bataye.

Or asha ka andaza bhi sahi tha kuch der baad Rajiv or garima bhi waha aapahunche, pahale to usne apne sasur ka halchal liya.

Fir nidhi boli.

Nidhi :- Rajiv m aapko kisi se milwana chahti hu.

Ye bol wo dono ko asha k office leke jati h per wo to yaha se ja chuki thi, jab ye baat Rajiv ko pata chali to wo bahut roya use bahut pachtawa ho raha tha ki wo kuch der pahale yaha kyu na aaya or yahi hal garima ka bhi tha, unhone hospital m bahut puchne ki kosis ki lekin kisi ne is bare m unhe kuch n bataya.

Fleshback end.

Jese hi ye sab ghatna nidhi ko yaad aati h to uske man me pashchaataap ki agmi jal uthi.

Nidhi :- hey bhgwan kitni giri hui hu m, jin bhabhi k kaaran mere pita jivit h mere suhag aaj kamyab h, aaj unki hi santano pe mane itna ghinona iljam lagaya or wo bhi unper jinse mera rishta maa bete jese h.

Ni m esi bhul kadapi ni karungi m khushi khushi apne bacho ko apnaungi or unhe mamta dungi.

Shani side m khade muskurate hue :- tumse hume yahi asha thi putri, jo karuna or prem us ghatna k kaaran tumhare hriday m dab gaya tha, wo. Aaj fir jagrit ho gaya, isse sidh hota h ki tum niraparaadh ho, isliye hum tumhe ashirwaad dete h tumhara sabse bada kasht tumhara dukh shighr hi nasht hoga, jiska madhyam swayam putra karne hi hoga.

Or is tarah shani dev k margdarshan se nidhi ka hriday parivartan hua.

Back to hero.

Khana khane or masti k baad sab apne room m jane lage karan or jyoti bhi, tabhi nidhi bol padi.

Nidhi :- are bacho tum. Kaha chal diye.

Karan :- sone chachi.

Nidhi :- apni chachi ki ek baat manoge, aaj tum dono ko m apne sath sulana chahti hu

Karan ka ye sunte hi mood off ho gaya kyunki uska romance ka mood chopt ho gaya tha , lekin kya kare bichara chachi ko mana bhi ni ker sakta tha.

Wahi jyoti hasne lagi.

Karan man hi man :- tujhe badi hasi aarahi h chipkali.

Jyoti :- hihi aapka muh dekh k control na hua.

Karan :- has le chipakali has le, apna bhi time aayega.

Jyoti :- hihi jab aayega tab dekh lenge.

Fir karan Or jyoti aaj raat apni chachi k sath hi sote h Or apna program raat ka decide ker.

Wahi dusri Or

Wo saya udta hua naina k kamre m aaphucha.

Saya :- oh to ye h wo naina, badi hi hasin h dikhne m, per afsos aaj mere hatho merne wali h.

Ye bol saya naina ki or bhadne laga, naina nishchit so rahi thi, apni or bhadte khatre se anjan

Saye ne jese hi naina ko chua to naina k gale m mojud locket ne use ek jhatke k sath dur feka or uske sath hi pade naina k evp meter se tez aawaaz aane lagi, jise sun naina uth gayi.

Naina ne jese hi us saye ko dekha to turant savdhan ho boli :- kon ho tum or yaha kyu aaye ho.

Saya :- teri mot.

Ye bol wo naina p jhapta per naina side m ho gayi.

Naina :- ye to mritykerni shakti h, yani kala jadoo.

Ye soche hi wo turant wo apne bag k pas gayi or apna trishul nikal ek mantra bol apna trishul us saye ki or kiya, per ye kya trishul ki roshni se usper koi asar na pada.

Tab naina ne ek mantra or pad wo trishul us saye k sine m ghop dala jiske sath hi wo saya chikte hue nasht ho gaya.

Parantu naina samjh gayi ab khatra sar k uper se ja chuka h.

Wo turant preety k pas gayi or uske sath usi samay vidhi ker ek lakshman rekha ghar k charo or ki.

Wahi tantrik ko jese hi ye baat pata chali ki uski bheja hua saya nasht ho gaya usne gusse se or sayo ko bheja lekin is baar wo ghar k bahar hi nasht ho gaye, naina ki lakshman rekha k kaaran.

Tantrik gusse se :- ni chodunga tujhe naina, ek baar jit ker ye mat sochna ki Tune mujhe hara diya ab dekh kal kese tera anushthan nasht kerta hu m.

Wahi haveli m naina jo sayo ko nasht hote dekh rahi thi wo preety se boli

Naina :- preety khatra bahut jyada bad chuka h, ab waqt sone ka ni hume abhi se hi teyari kerni hogi.

Preety :- jesa tum kaho sister.

Fir dono bahan usi samay anushthaan ki teyari m lag gayi.

Wahi dusri or.

Shakal jise kubdi ne samar ko khojne ko bheja tha p, use abhi tak samar ka kuch pata na chala, jis kaaran wo gusse se pagal hue ja raha tha.

Shakal :- aakhir gaya kaha wo kuta jamin kha gayi ya asman nigal gaya, ager esa hi chala to kya muh dikhaunga m malik ko.

Tabhi waha kubdi prakat hui, jise dekh shakal dar gaya or wo or mohalat mangne laga.

Kubdi :- murkh kisi kaam k ni tum log, ab suno meri baat mane us samar ka pata laga liya h, wo is waqt shivgarh ki haveli m h.

Shakal :- kya to m abhi use utha k lata hu.

Kubdi :- murkh, esap sochna bhi mat verma bemot marega.

Tab kubdi use naina ki lakshman rekha or anushthaan k baare m batati h to shakal bola

Shakal :- to kya karu m.

Kubdi :- wahi batane to aayi hu tujhe m, malik ne ek esi yojna banayi h jisse wo ladka bhi hume milega or trityao k dushmno ka ant bhi hoga.

Fir kubdi wo yojna shakal ko batati h jise sun shakal khush ho jor jor se hasne laga.

Aaj k liye bas Itna hi



Stay tuned.

friends sorry for late update, or ye mat sochiyega ki karan or jyoti ka romance seen mane cancel kiya h, bus wo samay ki kami ki vajah se mane delay ker diya h, kyunki mere liye sabse mushkil kam ye hot scenes hi likhna h or sath m hi story ki slow spped ko bhi bhadana tha isliye, ise m thoda free hoke hi likhunga taki padhke aapko maja aaye , jo ane wale ek ya do update m jarur aayega or next update kal ya parso tak aajayega
 
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Last benchers

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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai..
Sandar majedar Dhamkedar update hai..
Nidhi ka MN kaise badla ye to hm reders Jan gye.but nidhi je MN Mai Karn or Jyoti ke negativity kiw aai ye BT nhi smjh Mai aaya..Shani ne Jo v Kiya usse nidhi ko fayda v hua use aashirwad v Mila. Or Karan ke kaalchkr see bacha v liya...
Karan bachera romance uska suru hone SE pehle khtm ho gya. .
Naina or tantrik Mai khel suru ho gya.hai.
Udhar kubuddi.ko v khabar lg gya Samar Khan hai aisa kiy plain bnaya hai jisse Samar or tritya ka dusmna SB khtm ho jayega
Wait rahega next update ka
 

Naina

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Hmm to nidhi yeh baat bhul gayi thi ki aasha ne uski ush samay madad ki thi jab chaaro aur se sirf na umeedi mil rahi thi..

are ye jhingul trantik pagla gaya hain kya... joh the great naina se takrane chala tha... sayad ish jhingul ko apni zindagi pyari nahi.. joh jalte angaar se khilwaar karne ki koshish kar raha hai
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill Harry ji :applause: :applause:
 
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