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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Admi :- to ye dusht is had tak gir chuke h.

(Diya se ) beti m daitya shilpi or vishwkarma ka mitra may danav urf mayasur hu.

Diye ne jese hi ye suna to uski sima na rahi herani ki , use yakin ni ho raha tha , uske samne wo shaks khade h or vo bhi esi jagah per , jo guno me vishwakarma samman h or danvo k sath sath devo k liye bhi sammanniya h.

Mayasur yani daityon k vegyanik or hathiyaro k nirmata h , jese devo k vishwakarma h.

Inhone brahama k kahane per patal lok ka nirman kiya tha , asuro k rahane k liye or to or shri krishna k kahane per inhonne hi vishwakarma k sath mil , pandvo ki nagri basayi, jo indraprasth k nam se vikhyat hui.

Lekin sawal ye tha ki ye yaha kese.

Diya ne turant unko jhuk ker pranam kerte hue kaha .

Diya :- prabhu aap yaha kese , in dusto k karagrah me ?

Mayasur :- karmo ka fal putri karmo ka fal , kisi samay ye vishesh bhawan jisme in dushto ki shakti kahi guna bad jati h , iska nirman mane hi inke liye kiya or in dushto ne mujhe hi chal se bandhi bana diya , Yaha chal se.

Diya :- per kyu.

(Friends yaha m flashback ko ni khichne wala , short m nipatana hi sahi h , kyumki kuch khas ni h)

Mayasur :- iske liye.

Unhone ye bol apne dono hath aage kiye or tabhi unke hatho m ek satrangi shaktipunj aagaya or iske sath hi pura karagrah ese prakashit ho gaya.




Diya :- ye kya h prabhu.

Mayasur :- ye wahi shakti h putri jiske liye rakshak or tumhari saheli yaha aaye h.

Yahi h vo ekmatra shakti or oshadhi jisse goblin k jahar k prabhav ko bhi nasth kiya ja sakta h.

Diya :- kya per mane to suna tha ki inke jahar ka koi upay h hi ni.

Mayasur :- varsho purv esa hi tha ,parantu fir jab inlogo ka utpad badne laga to devo ne unhe parajit to kiya , lekin unka bhi isme bahut nuksan hua

Tab parampita brahma ji ne mujhe is oshdhi k nirman ka nirdesh diya, mane varsho ki mahanat k baad is oshdhi ko teyar ker liya .

Parantu isse pahale m ise devo ko somp pata , un bone pishachon ko is bare m na jane kaha se suchna mil gayi or unhone chal se mujhe bhojan ka nimantran de ker yaha bulaya or chal se karagrah me dal diya.

Rakshak jyoti jo unki shakti h , unke shaktihin hone se swayam bhi kamzor ho chuke h or pishach lok ka andher unki bachi shakti ko bhi sokh raha h .

Yadi unko apni khoyi hui shakti pani h to unhe ise dharan kerna hoga.

Lekin lakh kosiso k baad bhi ise hasil na ker sake mujhse .

Diya :- yadi esa h to hume shighra hi kuch na kuch ker ise karan ji tak pahuchana hoga prabhu , anyatha anarth ho jayega.

Mayasur :- parantu putri uske liye hume pahale yaha se nikalna hoga.

Diya :- hey daityashreshth, aap to danvo k pramukh astra nirmata h , fir aap kyu ni apni kisi rachna ka prayog ker yaha se ni nikalte.

Mayasur :- yahi to vidambana h putri , hum shilpiyo ka ek niyam kahe ya niyati , hum apne banaye kisi ashtra ka prayog swayam ni ker sakte , ager kerne ka prayas kiya to wo shastr shaktihin ho jayega.

Diya :- parantu ye karya m to ker sakti hu, hey prabhu kripya aap mujhe ye avsar de taki m apna prayashchitt purn ker apni saheli or unke sakha ki raksha ker saku.

M aapko vachan deti hu , chahe mere pran chale jaye , lekin m is shakti ko kabhi un dushto k hath ni lagne dungi.

Diya ne ye baat drid nishchay or purn aatmvishwas se boli thi , mayasur kuch der diya ki ankho m dekhte h , jese usko parakh rahe ho.

Mayasur :- thik h putri , yu to mera swabhav shigra hi kisi pe vishwas kerna ni , parantu m tumhari ankho m satya or pashchatap ki jwala saf saf dekh sakta hu, isliye sambhalo ise

Ye bol mayasur ne diya k hatho me vo shaktipunj pakda diya , diya ne jese hi use hath me liya , wo us tez punj k prakash se mano ek har naha si gayi ek shan to .

Per agle hi shan uski chinkhe nikalne lagi , kyunki diya uske tez ko sambhal ni pa rahi thi, wo jalne lagi thi uske sharir m darare si aane lagi.

Mayasur ye dekh turant us shaktipunj ko lete h or ek jadui gole type bakse m band ker bole.

Mayasur :- lo putri ab tum ise chu sakti ho, per apna vada yaad rakhna.

Mayasur ne fir apna hath uper kiya or unke hath me ek megical dhanush aagaya.




Mayasur diya ko dete hue :- lo putri ye tumhari sahayta karega rakshak tak pahuchne k liye , parantu dhyan rahe ye ashthayi h , kyunki mere pas yaha meri prayogashala ni thi , isliye m tumhare liye itna hi ker sakta hu.

Iska upyog tum sirf ek ghadi(20 min) tak hi ker sakti ho , uske baad ye apne aap vilupt ho jayega.

Isliye tumhe shighrata kerni hogi putri.

Diya dhanush lete hue :- dhanyawad prabhu , m aapke nirdesho ka smaran rakhungi.

Ye bol diya maysur k charan chuti h .

Mayasur :- vijayi bhavah putri.

Ye bol mayasur ek jagah jaker beth gaye or diya ne apne hathiyar ka prayog kerna aarambh kiya.

Usne jese hi dhanush ki pratyancha khichi to swath hi uspe ek nila baan aagaya or diya ne wo ban karagah k darwaje p choda.

Tir jese hi darwaje se takraya ek bahut hi bade dhamake k sath us darwaje k parkhache ud gaye.


Diya mayasur se :- chaliye prabhu , ab aapko yaha rahane ki koi avashyakta ni.

Mayasur :- putri tum meri chinta chodo or apne udeshya p dhyan do , tumhare pahale prayog k sath hi tumhara samay arambh ho chuka h.

Diya :- ji prabhu.

Diye ye kah shetan k mandir ki or bhagi , tabhi raste m use apni or bahut se goblin aate hue dikhe , jo shayad dhamake ki aawaz se aapahunche the.

Diya ko jese hi unhonne dekha to use pakadne k liye vo sab uski or dode.

Diya bhi unki or tezi se bhag k gayi or uchal ker ek tir choda , ttir jese hi dhanush se chuta tabhi wo ek se anek tiro m badal gaya or sare danav diya k us prahar se yamalok sidhar gaya.




Diya usike sath hi tezi se aage bhadi , kyunki uske oas time kam tha or mandir mahal k dusre kone m tha.

Wahi dusri or

Betaal ne jan chutki bajayi tabhi waha charo or roshni fel gayi jiske kaaran naina ki ankhe ek shan to band hi ho gayi.

Kuch shan baad naina ne jab ankhe kholi to usne paya ki wo ab shamsan me ni , balki ek ese kamre m h jisme as pas najar na hi khidki najar aarahe h or na hi koi darwaza.

Tabhi naina k kano m ek aawaz aayi ,

Didi

Naina ye aawaz sun chonki or piche dekha to paya ye aawaz piya ki thi.

Naina ne jhat se pita ko gale lagaya or boli :- ro mat bacha , aapki didi aapko or aapki mummy ko kuch ni hone degi.

Tabhi uske kano me vetaal ki aawaz padi

Vetal :- hihi ager bharat milap ho gaya ho to khel shuru kare ladki

Naina :- m teyar hu vetal .

Vetal :- pahala sawal thoda aasan h,

Wo kya h jiska upyog use kharidne wala ni kerta .

Or jo uska prayog kerta h , wo use kharid ni sakta..

Naina ye sawal sun soch me pad gayi ki kya ho sakta h vo

Tabhi vetal ne apna ganda khel shuru ker diya , achanak se us kamre ki diwaro pe bade bade kante aAgaye or kamre ki charo diwar apne aap un dono ki or bhadne lagi.

Jise dekh piya or rone lagi or vetal haste hue bola.

Vetaal :- utter jaldi do ladki , kahi esa na ho ki der ho jaye.

Diware naina k bilkul pas aahi gayi thi ki naina k chahre pe muskan aagayi or vo tezi se boli.

Naina :-. Tumhare pahale sawal ka jwab h kafan.

Ha vetal kafan hi vo chij h jo kharidne wala pahanta ni or jo pahanata h vo use kharid ni sakta.

Naina k uter dete hi diware apne aap ruk gayi or ye kya piya bhi gayab ho gayi.

Naina :- kya kiya tumne piya k sath.

Betaal :- hihi ab tak to kuch ni , lekin agle padav me hari to aage ka kah ni sakta .

Ye bol betaal ne fir se chutki bajayi.

Isi tarah ki ajib ajib maya me vetal ne naina ko harane ki kosis ki lekin naina ne apni samjhdari or sujh bujh se vetal ko usi khel me hara diya.

Jiska parinam ye hua ki piya or uski maa apne aap aajad ho gayi , kyunki betalo ke is khel ka nishpaksh hi parinam hota h.

Naina piya se :- chalo beta ab ghabrane ki koi jarurat ni h , chachi aap ab shanti se ghar ja sakte h.

Abhi piya ki ma kuch bol pati usse pahale hi betaal gusse se dahada.

Betaal :- itni jaldi ni ladki , aaj to m in dono ko mar ker hi rahunga.

Ye bol betaal ne 2 aag k gole ma beti ki or feke lekin ek baar fir naina ne apni trishul ki madad se un golo ko nasht ker diya or ek baar fir naina ne us betaal ko apni shakti se bandhna shuru ker diya.

Betaal chikte hue :- tu mujhe bandh to sakti h ladki per tu maR ni sakti.

Abhi naina kuch bolti usse pahale hi ek aawaz waha gunji jise sun naina chonk gayi .

Ye aawaz preety ki thi jo hospital se sidha teleport ho idher aachuki thi.

Preety gusse se :- ek mamuli sa vetal hoker itna ghamand , ruk teri ye galat fahmi m dur kerti hu.

Ye bol usne apna ek hath aage kiya or usme ek gola aagaya.

Naina ye dekh ghabra gayi uske pasine chutne lage or wo preety ko rokte hue chillayi.

Naina :- ni preety ...

Lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi , preety ka gola jese hi betaal se takraya or tabhi wo hua jiski umid naina ko thi per preety ko bilkul ni.

Betaal ko jese hi wo gola laga , usse vetal ghayal hone k bajaye or taqatwar ho gaya or wo naina ki ked se chut gaya or haste hue bola.

Vetal haste hue :- tu jo bhi h ladki , lekin madad kerne k liye shukriya.

Ye kahate hue betaal hava me uda or bijli ki raftaar se piya ko utha ker le gaya or ped m sama gaya.

Piya ki ma chilayi :- niiiiiiiiiiiiii....

Or usike sath vo behosh ho gayi sadme se.

Preety naina se :- ye sab kya h sister , us vetal ko kuch kyu ni.

Naina jo preety k yaha aane se bahut jyada gussa thi wo uspe chilayi .

Naina :- mane tumhe mana kiya tha na , to tum kyu aayi yaha, mana kiya tha na tumhe

Preety naina k gusse ko dekh ghabra gayi or boli.

Preety :- wwo sister mane socha ki ttumhari help ker



Naina gusse se :- madad kerne ya kam bigadne , mana kiya tha na tumhe mane ane se fit kyu aayi tum

Preety haklate hue :- wo mane socha ki tum akeli ho , kisi mushkil me na fas jao , isliye ....

Naina :- mushkile to tumne yaha aaker bhadayi h meri preety.

M koi pagal ni hu jo bina vajah tumhe yaha se nikala tha , tum janti bhi ho kya humara samna kis shakti se hua.

Ye koi aam aatma ni , betaal h betaal , jinka ant pavitra or deviya shaktiyo se hi kiya ja sakta h .

Na ki tumhari asuri or nakaratmak shaktiyo se , ulta in shakti k sampark m ane se inki shakti m or vridhi hoti h , jesa abhi hua , isi kaaran to braham rakshaso k baad betaal hi vo h , jinpar trityao ka bhi vash ni, isliye hi to mane veer k sath tumhe yaha se nikala tha .

Vo to shukar h uska dhyan is baat p ni gaya ki tum tritya ho verna vo itna shaktishali h tumhari bhitar us tritya ki urja ko vo humare hi khilaf use kerne ki shamta rakhta or wo tumhe nuksan tak pahuncha deta


Lekin ni tumhe to koi baat samjh hi ni aati na , har chij me jid or manmani hi kerni h tumhe.

Yu hi naina preety ko bahut kuch sunate hue dant rahi thi , piya ki raksha or preety ki security ki tension me use itna bhi dhyan na raha ki jis preety ki chinta m vo ye sab ker rahi h , anjane m hi vo khud hi anjane m apne shabd bano se use hurt ker rahi h.

Preety jo naina k kaaran batane pe jitna heran hui , usse kahi jyada vo hurt ho rahi thi , kyunki aaj pahali baar tha jab naina ne usse is tarah baat ki thi.

Subah ki durghatna ko vo hadsa man abhi bhulne ki kosish bhi m hi thi ki vesa hi uske sath dusri baar ho gaya.


Jisse is baar usse saha na gaya , or preety ki ankho se nir chalakne lage .

Naina aas pas kuch dhundte hue piya ko bachane ka idea sochte hue dant rahi thi preety ko to ek baar to uska dhyan preety k ansuo p ni gaya.

Lekin fir naina thoda shant hote hue uski taraf mudte hye bolne lagi.

Naina rukhe swar me:- acha jo hua use chodo or su..

Naina bolte bolte ruk gayi jab uski najar preety k ansu bhare chahre p padi , to naina ka dil kamp gaya or uske ankho m bhi ansu aagaye.

Jab usne dekha ki uski saheli uski pyari bahan ka masum chahra pure ansuo se bhar chuka h , uska ankho ka kajal bhi nikal ker galo pe bahane laga tha or to or wo sisak - 2 k rone lagi

Preety ki ye halat dekh naina ko bhi apni galti ka ahasas hone laga ki wo anjane m kuch jyada hi bol gayi.

Naina :- preety wo m...

Preety rote hue :- kuch mat bolo sister , tum shayad sahi hi kah rahi ho m tum logo ki madad kam kerti hu or kam bigadti jyada hu , humesha meri nadani ki vajah se hi tum or veer musibat me pad jate ho, per aage se esa ni hoga sister , m aaj hi chali jaungi yaha se.

Taki tumhe ya veer ko koi problem na ho.


Preety ki in baat me dard or tanj dono ka mishran tha , jise naina saf saf mahasus ker sakti thi.

Naina :- preety mere kahane ka vo matla...

Abhi naina aage kuch bol pati ki preety waha se apni baat bol bhag gayi ek or .

Veer bhi jo us admi ko hospital m admit kerwake vaha pahunch gaya tha vo unhike taraf aaraha tha , preety usse takra gayi.

Veer ne abhi uski ankho m ansu dekhe ni the isliye wo majak kerte hue bola.

Veer :- kya baat h meri fulan devi , itni jaldi m kaha ja rahi ho , hum to yaha h.

Lekin preety ne bina jwab diye hi veer k side se vaha nikal gayi or veer ne usne rokne ki kosis ki to usne bhi preeti ki ankho m ansu dekh liye

Abhi veer preety k piche ja hi raha tha , ki uske kano me ek or rone or siskiyo ki awaz padi.

Veer ne us or dekha to paya naina ghutno k bal bethi ro rahi h.

Veer turant naina k pas gaya or puchne laga.

Veer :- kya hua naina tum ro kyu rahi ho or preety rote hue kyu gayi yaha se ?

Naina veer ko sari baate batate hue boli.

Naina sisakte hue :- tumhi batao veer Mane kya galat kiya , mane to uski bhalayi k liye hi danta tha , lekin vo h ki samjhne ki bajaye usne galat matlab nikal liya.

Mana m kuch jyada hi bol gayi gusse m , lekin use bhi to samjhna chahiye na ki m uski dushman ni hu , vo meri saheli hi ni meri bahan jesi h , mane jo kiya uski bhalayi k liye hi kiya.

Veer naina ko gale se laga bola :- sssh shant ho jao naina , tum to janti hi ho humari preety sidhi or bholi h ,jo dil m aye saf bol deti h , to uska kya bura man na .

Galti meri bhi h naina , tumne mujhe sari baat telepathy k jariye pahale hi bata di thi , taki m use aaram se samjha saku , lekin mane hi deri ker di.

Chalo ab shant ho jao , hum dono milker preety ko manayenge , pahale hume piya ko bachana hoga.

Piya ka nam se naina kuch shant hui or fir dono lag gaye firse nayi planning m .

Back to the hero.

Karan abhi bhi goblin ki bijli ki power se tadaf raha tha or karan ko tadapta dekh kaya bhi roye ja rahi thi.

Usko khud pe bahut gussa aaraha tha ki vo chah ker bhi kuch ni ker pa rahi , or jese jese samay gujar raha h uske sakha ki jaan ko khatra bhadta ja raha h.

Wahi dusri or shetani pandito jo shetani mantro ka jap kerte hue havan kund m khun ki ahuti de raha tha .

Kuch der baad usne goblin king se kaha ,

Pandit :- maharaj bali purush ko le aayiye samay achuka h

Goblin king apne seniko ko karan ko pakad k lane ka adesh deta h.

Kaya chilate hue :- akhiri baar bol rahi hu betaal murkhata mat ker , verna bahut bura anjam hoga tera , mot k liye tadfega tu.

Goblin king gusse se apne saniko se :- ye sali bahut bol rahi h , jao iski okat ni ki ye rani bane , mar to ni sakte aaj hum ise, lekin iska vo hashra karo ki ye mot ki bhik mange , ijat lut lo iski.

Apne raja ka adesh sun sare goblin havas ki nigah se kaya ki or bhadne lage , lekin isse pahale wo usse chu bhi pate ki kaya or goblin k bich ek dhamaka hua , jisse goblin to mare gaye or kaya ki janjire tut gayi.

Goblin king chilaya :- kisne kiya ye.

Diya waha uper mojud balcony se kudte hue niche aayi or boli.

Diya :- ye mane kiya h dusht ,bahut hua tere atyachar, aaj tu marega.

Goblin king haste hue :- tu kya sochti h ladki is dhanush ki madad se tu akele meri sena ko hara sakegi.

Kaya jo aajad ho chuki thi vo waha aate hue boli :- kisne kaha ye akeli h , iski bahan iske sath h

Goblin king ne ishara kiya or tabhi waha achanak pata ni kaha kaha se kudte hue hajaro ki sankhya me goblin aagaye.

Kaya hath aage badhate hue:- chal diya aaj inhe dikhate h ki kya h hum dono bahano ki takat .

Diya hath milate hue :- neki or puch puch.

Isike sath shuru ho gaya goblin or kaya ka ek bhayanak sangram , mayasur k divya dhanush ne diya ki kafi sahayta ki or kaya bhi apni nayi shaktiyo k sath.

Uske sharir per ek lal rang ka kavach aagaya or wo dono hatho se aag barsane lagi.

Goblin king ne jab dekha ki uski sena kamzor pad rahi h to wo bhi yudh m kud pada or kaya se bhid gaya.

Or fir dono k bich shakti k golo se ek dusre k uper prahar kerne ka silsila shuru ho gaya jisme kabhi kaya bhari pad rahi thi to kabhi king.

Lekin king jyada hi takatwar tha or wo kaya ka dhyan bhatka ek shaktishali prahar kerta h kaya pe , jisse uske muh se chikh nikal gayi.

Kaya :- aaahhh..

Or wo ghayal ho gir padi.

Diya :- kayaa

Ye bol vo kaya ki or jane ko bhadi , per goblins ne use gher liya or badkismati se dhanush ka samay bhi khatam ho gaya or vo gayab ho gaya.

Fir bhi diya har na mante hue vo apni talvar se ladte hue aage bhadne lagi , lekin goblin ki sankhya bahut jyada thi or diya k samjh me bhi aagaya tha ki vo ab or ni lad sakti.

Ab usko bachne ki ek umid hi najar aarahi thi , vo thi apna hero , lekin wo to kamzori or bijli k jhatko se behosh tha.

Diya ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo kya kare , lekin kuch der baad use ek hi upay sujha or usne kaya ko dur se hi dekhte hue nam ankho se .

Diya :- alvida meri bahan meri saheli , shayad humara itna hi sath tha , apni saheli ko bhul mat jana or har bar ki tarah meri is galti ko bhi bhula dena.

Kaya ghabra ker :- ye kya bol rahi h tu diya , kya kerne ja rahi h tu.

Diya :- wahi jiske liye karan ji ne kaha tha , galti ka pashchatap.

Ye bol diya ne vo gola nikala , jisme wo shakti band thi or use khol diya , or jese hi wo gola khula pure mandir m prakash fel gaya , jisse goblin ki chinkhe gujne lagi.


Or diya bhi fir se jalne lagi.

King darte hue :- yyee kya h .

Diya :- ye teri wo mot h dusht , jise tune khud chal se apne mahal me bandi banaya tha.

King samjh gaya tha ki ye mayasur ki banayi vo oshadhi h vo turant use pane diya ki or doda , per isse pahale diya k pas pahuchta diya ne dard me tadapte hue bhi apni puri takat laga karan k pas pahunchi or wo gola uske samne ker diya , jiske sath wo shakti karan m sama gayi or diya jamin per gir dard se tadafne lagi.


Or jese hi wo shakti karan me samayi , karan ka sharir nile rang ki urja se yu chamkane laga , jese dharti pee mano surya uter aaya ho.

Kuch der baad jab roshni hati to karan ne apni ankhe kholi or jese hi usne samne diya or kaya ko is halat me dekh uska para high hone laga.

Uska tez or uska bal wapas usme ane laga tha or sath me hi uske sharir se jwala nikalne lagi , jisse pal bhar me uske bandhi bediyan pighal gayi.




Or karan aajad ho gaya , karan aajad ho ek jagah apni ankhe band ker bilkul shant khada raha , lekin ye shanti tufan se pahale ki shanti thi.

Or 5 min baad karan ne apni ankhe kholi to uski nili ankhe lal ho chuki thi.

Karan gusse se :- bas bahut hua timepass , ab apna apna dand pane ko saj ho jao dushto.

Ye bol karan ne ek second fir ankhe band ki or jese hi usne apni ankhe fir kholi , uski ankho se ek laal rang ki roshni nikal sabhi pishachon p padne lagi.

Or vo sabhi pishach roshni k padte hi yu karahane lage , mano uper kisi ne tezab dal diya ho.

Karan ne kuch shan me hi king ko chod baki sab ko rakh bana dala.

Rakshak apni sena k ye hal dekh gusse se chilaya :- ye tune acha ni kiya rakshak , m tujhe aaj ni chodungaaaaaaaa....


Goblin ne apni baat bhi puri ni ki thi , karan apni speed se uchhalte hue waha aaya or apna ghutna uske muh per de mara.

Jisse wo bahut dur jake gira or dard se karahane laga.

Karan fir tezi se uske pas gaya or use dono hatho se utha ek divar pe de mara.

Karan k sir p khun swar tha , vo kuch ni bol raha tha , vo bas goblin King ko mara ja raha tha , use baar bar apni jyoti ki vo halat yaad aarahi thi , jiske kaaran karan ne khud ko sambhalne la bikul prayas na kiya.

Karan ne goblin ko fir se uthaya or uske chahre pe mukke mar mar uske sare dant tod diye.

Karan ne king pe kisi bhi medical power ka use na kiya tha kyunki wo goblin ko tadfa tadfa k.marna chahta tha.

Karan ne uske pet me ek jabardast ghutna mara , jisse uski pasliya tut gayi or uske muh se khun ki ultiya hone lagi or wo gir pada.

Karan ne goblin ka ek hath pakadte hue kaha :- kamine isi hath se tune meri jyoti ko chune ka prayas kiya tha na.

Ye bol karan ne badi berahami se vo hath hi ukhad ker fek diya or fir usne uska ek per bhi uska ukhad feka .


Lekin tabhi king marna saran me bhi hasne laga.

Kaya :- nirlaj , mot ki shaiya p leta h or karmo ka dand pa raha h fir bhi hasta h.

King :- chalo man liya meri ye halat mere kamro ka dand h , per m ye soch k.heran ho raha hu ki is rakshak ne esa kya karm ker dale , jo iske sabse priya jan yani yani us shani or shiv ne iske sath itna bada chal ker rahe h

Karan gusse se :- kya bakwas ker raha h tu , mere mahadev or shani dev ne mere sath kya chal kiya.

Goblin haste hue :- rakshak tu sahi m bahut bhola h , tu in devo k chal ko jo na samjh paya , tere se ek bahut hi bada sach chupaya gaya h , janta h kiske bare me.

Teri ma yani asha devi k bare me.

Karan goblin ki gardan pakadte hue :- apni gandi juban se meri ma ka nam bhi mat le dust , m ab tere kisi chal me ni aane wala.

Goblin :- mere gala pakdne se sachai ni badlegi rakshak , sach to yahi h ki tere un devo ne chal kiya h tere sath , tere se ye sach chupa ker ki .

Teri maa....

Fir goblin ne jo bataya use sun karan or kaya ki herani ki sima na rahi , ye baat to confirm thi ki king jhut ni bol raha tha, kyunki ek marta hua koi bhi danav ya chudel ho wo jabhi jhut ni bolte , ye unke swabhav k virudh h.

Jese marte hue bhi rawan k mukh se shri ram nikla tha or usne lakshman ji ko niti ka gyan diya tha.

Lekin jese hi karan ne ye suna wo kuch der k liye murti ban gaya, uski ankho se ansu nikalne lage or wo chilaya.

Karan :- maaaaaaaaaaa

Karan ki ankho se nikal rahe ansu kis bhav k the , ye abhi kahana mushkil tha.

Kuch der baad karan ne khud ko sambhala or usne goblin ko dono hatho se hava me uthate hue pucha

Karan gusse se :- ager tune jo bola wo sach h to bata kaha h vo

Goblin bolne ki kosis ker hi raha tha ki tabhi achank se kahi se ek udta hua khanjar aaya or sidha goblin k dil me ja ghusa jiske sath hi vo parlok sidhar gaya.

Karan :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.

Vo goblin ko pagalo ki tarah uthane ki kosis kerne laga , jese ager use apna jwab na mila to pata na kya ho jayega.

Tabhi karan ki najar divar per bane ek nishan pe padi , jo king ne marte hue apni khun bhari ungliyon se bana diya tha.

Karan ne jese hi vo nishan dekha to use wo nishan jana pahachana to laga per use yaad ni aaraha tha ki ye nishan usne kaha dekha tha.

Karan dhire dhire shant hone laga tha tabhi uski najar kaya pe khadi jo karan k is roop se sahmi ek or khadi thi .

Karan ne jab ye dekha to pahale usne khud ko saf kiya kr apni bahe fela di , jise dekh kaya bhag ker aayi or karan se lipat gayi.

Karan pyaar se kaya k balo ko sahalate hue use shant karane laga.

Kaya rote hue ;- sakha diya.

Karan or diya turant diya k pas gaye jo dard se tadfte hue apni antim sanse gin rahi thi

Diya hath jodte hue :- karan ji , mujhse jitna ho sakta tha mane kiya apne prayashchitt k liye , fir bhi yadi mujhse koi truti rah gayi ho to bi ek marte hue ki antim icha samjh mujhe maf ker dijiyega.

Kaya rote hue :- ni diya tum mujhe chod k ni ja sakti , tumne mujhse vada kiya tha ki tum humesha mere sath rahogi.

Diya :- kaya meri bahan , mujhe maf ker de , jo m apna vada pura na ker saki , mujhe jana hi hoga , apne karmo ka dand to mujhe bhogna hi hoga.

Karan :- kaya sahi bol rahi h diya , tumhe kuch ni hoga , prayashit vo agni h jo samast papo ka nash ker deti h or jab koi pap hi ni to pap ka dand kesa.

Karan ne apna ek hath hava me ghumaya ,or usike sath hi diya per jal barasne laga.

Ye jal koi mamuli jal ni tha , ye wahi amritunjay jal tha , jisse kaya insan bani.

Shuru shuru me to diya ko taklif hui per fir diya k sare ghav bharne lage or vo bhi insan ban gayi.

Karan :- diya tumne apni nafrat ko tyag jo dharm k liye apne jivan bhi dav per laga uske kaaran tum ab pavitra aatma ban chuki ho.

Isliye m shani ansh karan tumhe is pishach yoni se sadev sadev k liye mukti deta hu , ab tum bhi kaya k sath rah sakoge.

Diya to karan k pero me gir gayi uska dhanywad kerne to karan ne use kaha.

Karan :- are are bahan ye kya ker rahi ho tum

Karan k muh se sakhi sun diya k ankho m ansu aagaye.

Diya emotional hote hue :- bahan ?

Karan :- ha bahan , jabse mane tumhara past k bare m pata chala , mere man ko ek man bhi shanti na padi.

Yakin mano bahan mane bhi kayi sal ese hi jiye , mere pas to fir bhi meri jyoti thi , lekin tumne to akele hi sab dukh dard sahe , jo aajtak sahti bhi aayi ho.

Isliye m jo hua use badal to ni sakta , lekin ek bhai ban tumse ye vada jarur kerta hu ki tumhare kadmo m duniya ki sabhi khushi rakh dunga bahan .

Bolo banogi meri bahan , meri pyari diyu.

Diya rote hue :- ji bhai.

Or ye kah vo karan k gale lag gayi or sisak sisak k rone lagi , lekin ye ansu khushi k the , jo khushi use karan k roop me ek bhai paker mil rahi thi.

Tabhi diya ki najar karan k right hand pe gayi jiski kalayi se khun nikal raha tha.

Diya ghabrate hue :- ye kya bhai aapke to khun nikal raha h.

Ye bol diya ne apna palu fad karan ki kalyi pe band diya.

Kaya mahol halka kerte hue :- are wah to bahan ne bhai ko rakhi bhi bandh di , to bhai sahab aapka bhi gift dena banta h

Diya :- mujhe bhai mil gaye yahi sabse bada gift h mere liye , tu bakwas mat ker.

Kaya :- acha ji bhai mil gaye to saheli ko bhul gayi , that's not fare.

Diya kaya k gale lagte hue :- kitna natak kerti h tu kamini , tu to jan h meri tujhe kese bhul sakti hu m.

Karan majak kerte hue:- are diyu kaya se thoda tamiz se baat kero , tumhari hone wali bhabhi h vo.

Diya karan ka sath dete :- acha ji to mere liye bhai k sath madam ne jiju bhi dhund liye .

Kaya sharmate hue diya ko marti hui boli :- hat pagli wo majak ker rahe h bas

Kaya ko sharmate dekh karan or diya hasne lage or sath kaya bhi or unhone pishach lok ko ek swatantra lok ghoshit ker nikal pade talatal ki or.

Karan to kafi adhir tha , or ho bhi kyu na , vo jald se jald apni pran priye bahan jyoti se milne ko lalahit tha.

Lekin sath me hi uska man ashant tha or uske man me abhi tak goblin ki bate ghum rahi thi.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Harry rocks

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Awesome update. Diya ke past ke bare me bhi pata chal hi gaya bohat bura howa tha uske sath. Diya mehal me dakhil to hui thi Karan aur kaya ki madad ke liye lekin khud hi phans gai aur ab yah buzarg log kon hai aur woh larka kon tha jis ne Diya ka margdarshan kiya.
Ab yah Preety kahan gayab ho gai kahin wapas usi kile me to nahi chali gai.
Bohat se points hai is update hai jin ka jawab shayad next part me mil jaye to bhai is liye next part jaldi dena.
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Harry rocks

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Gajab ka update diya he yaar. Diya ka flashback bahut hi dard bhara tha. Aur usane sahi kiya unhe maar kar. Lekin karan kaise fas gya yaha shani dev ne sahi kaha he ki bina soche samjhe koi kaam nahi karna chahiye. Lo kal lo baat diya unhe bachane gayi to khud bhi fas gayi. Ab ye karagar me kaun he. Aise suspense me na band kiya karo update bhai.
Waiting 4 next update
Thanks for your support bhai
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Harry rocks

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Nice update bro par yeh kia karna aur kaya ko hi qaid karwa diye... Ab woh kaise azaad honge?
Diya ki kahaani bhi kafi emotional thi.... Aur saath hi kaya- diya ka yeh bharosa ke karna vaisa nahin jaise logon se usey nafrat ho... Yeh kaafi saraahneey hai...
Aur uska apne praayashchitt ki taraf qadam barhana bhi... Par kia uska praayashchitt un sab ko goblins se azaad kara payega?
Woh shakhs kaun hai jo diya ko qaid khaane mein mila?
Preeti kahaan gayi? Kahin waapas qile mein toh nahin na?
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