• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


  • Total voters
    212
  • Poll closed .

Harry rocks

Well-Known Member
6,912
18,325
189
Update no :- 127
Abhi talvar utha k naina pe rani ne vaar kerna hi chaha tha ki naina k locket se ek roshni nikal ker vrushali k hath se takrayi or usko ek bijli ka jhatka laga , jisse wo uchal k dur ja giri.

Vrushali gusse se tabhi :- ye kese hua , ye kesi maya h .

Tabhi ek aawaz ne vrushali naina or preety samet sab ko choka diya.

"Ye maya ni achai ki shakti h dusht braham rakshasi "

Ye baat kisi or ne ni veer ne kahi thi , jiske hatho me vrushali ki talvar chamak rahi thi.

Vrushali :- ye tum kya bol rahe ho jaan , tum.to mujhse prem kerte ho na.

Veer :- tumhare mukh se prem shabd shoba ni deta dushtni, prem kabhi bhi china ni jata , balki prem ka to arth hi tyag hota h.

Yadi tumhara prem sacha hota to kabhii bhi mujhe pane k liye apni sammohan shakti ka prayog na kerti, jise prayog ker bhi tum mujhe na pa saki .

Vrushali :- asambhav , meri sammohan shakti se koi sadsadharan vyakti ni ach sakta , konsi maya rachi h is trittya ne tumhare sath jaan.

Veer :- pahali baat to band kero mujhe jaan kahana rakshasi , msirf or sirf meri preety ka hu.

Ye bol veer ne apna ek hath aage kkiya jisse 2 roshniyo ki rays nikal naina or preety pe padi , jisse agle hi pal vo dono mukt ho gayi or veer k is roop ko dekh ankhe fade dekh rahi thi , unhe samjh ni aaraha tha ki ye sab ho kya raha h or kese.

Veer :- or rahi baat tumhare saval ki to suno , tumhare sammohan shakti se meri raksha , meri jaan, meri pari k prem or (jyoti ki di hui mala ko T-shirt se nikal apne mathe se laga ker ) apno k sneh roopi ashirwad k kavach ne ki h .

Naina mala ko dekh chonk ker :- shiv rudraksh

Ji ha dosto aap sab ka andaza sahi tha ,veer kabhi vrushali k sammohan shakti k jaal me fasa hi ni tha.

Jiska kaaran tha preety k liye uska aatut prem or uski muh boli bahan ki di hui wo divya shiv rudraksh mala .

Hua yu tha ki naina ne vrushali ki mot ka keval ek hi rasta bataya tha , wo tha ki sabse pahale ki kese bhi ker rani se uski talvaar ko alag ker diya jaye.

Kyunki ek brahamrakshasi ki aadhi takat uske hatiyar me hi hoti h , isliye wo apna hatyar hamesha sath rakhti h, jesa ki vrushali bhi kerthi thi.

Lekin jab vo sab khud hi vrushali k jaal me fas gaye the or veer ne dekha ki vrushali ka dil us per aagaya h , tab usne ye plan banaya.

Veer ko mala ki badolat hi vrushali ki sammohan shakti k baare me pata chal chuka tha , isliye usne ye sirf natak kiya taki vo uska vishwas jit sake or uski talvaar ko paa sake.

Or esa hi hua vrushali veer ki mithi bato me aagayi or jiska natija aaj aapke samne h.

Veer preety k pass jata h or uske pas ghutno k bal bethne ko hua to preety ne use roka or rote hue mana kerne lagi.

Veer :- mujhe maaf ker de na pari , mane tumhara dil dukhaya.

Preety :- ni jaan ese mafi mat mango , tumne jo bhi kiya bilkul sahi kiya or m janti thi , ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye , meri jaan mujhe chod ker kabhi ni ja sakte .

Ye bol preety veer k gale lag gayi , jise dekh vrushali jal bhun gayi.

Vrushali gusse se :-. Dhoka , dhoka kiya h tumne mere sath veer mane tumse sacha pyaar kiya or tumne mere sath esa kiya .

Tum mere pyaar ko is ladki k liye laat mar rahe ho na , ab dekho kese m iska vadh kerti hu abhi tumhari ankho k samne.

Ye bol vrushali preety ki or badhne lagi ,veer preety ki raksha k liye aage ane ko hua to preety boli.

Preety :- ni jaan ye ladayi aapki ni meri h , mere prem k astitv ki h isliye ise m khud hi ladungi.

Ye bol preety bhi vrushali ki or badhne lagi.

Vrushali apni sena se :- dekh kya rahe ho is mayavi ladki(naina) ka ant ker dalo.

Apni rani ka order sunte hi sare braham rakshas naina ki or badhne lage , tabhi veer ne apni shakti se naina ka yantra mangaya or kuch mantra padh naina ko pass kiya.

Veer :- ye lo naina , ab tumhara ye tantra in brahamrakshaso pe bhi asar karega.

Naina to jese pagal hua ja rahi thi , lekin usne khud ko sambhala or apna yantra tham sena se bhid gayi.

Or veer bhi man hi man jyoti ko yaad ker bola.

Veer :- bahan ab kya vo vakt aagaya h , jab m in shaktiyo ka khul k pryog ker saku.

Tabhi veer k man me jyoti ki aawaz gunji.

Jyoti :- kya baat h bhai , bade dino baad apni bahan ki yayaad aayi , chalo aapko to m baad m dekhungi or haa ab aap apni shaktiyo ka prayog ker sakte ho , ab preety bhabhi ko koi khatra na hoga.

Veer muskurate hue :- dhanywad bahan.

Ye bol veer ne apni ankhe band ki or apne ander mojud shiv rudraksh ki us shakti ko jagrit ker diya.

Veer ne apna hath uper kiya or uske hatho me ek divya dhanush aagaya

Veer ne apne dhanush ki pratyncha khichte hue :- om namah shivay.

Jiske sath hi apne aap ek baan dhanush pe aagaya , jise veer ne sena pe chod diya.

Jiske sath hi us baan se agni nikal sab rakshaso ko jalane lagi , veer ne ese kayi baan chode jisse sena me hahakar hone laga

Naina bhi apna kaam ache se ker rahi thi.

Vahi preety or vrushali me bhi bhishan yudh ho raha tha , jisme dono or se bhayanak shaktiya chodi jab rahi thi , fir un dono me dvand yudh hone laga ,jisme vrushali bhari padne lagi , kyunki bhale hi vo talvar k kaaran apni adhi shakti kho chuki thi , lekin wo abhi bhi bahut takatwar thi.

Vrushali ne preety ko utha ker fek diya :- meri talvar chin k kya socha tha ki mujhe hara dogi.

Bhul mat m abhi bhi ek braham rakshasi hu or tu ek kamjor tritya, jo gaddar bhi h.

Preety kafi ghayal ho chuki thi or thak bhi chuki thi , jiske kaaran wo uth ni pa rahi thi.

Abhi vrushali preety ko marne hi ja rahi thi ki uski najar apni sena pe padi , jiski halat veer or naina ne kharab ker daali thi.

Rani :- mujhe kuch kerna hoga , verna ese to meri har nishchit h.

Tabhi uski najar naina pe gayi , jo apne yantra se sare seniko ko bhasm ker rahi thi.

Jise dekh vrushali k chahre pe ek kamini muskaan aagayi or usne apni ankhe band ker ek shaktishali gola banaya jo bahut takatwar tha or usne naina k yantra pe de maara.

Gola itna shaktishali tha ki wo gola jese hi naina k yantra se takraYa , ek jabardast jhatke k sath yantra naina k hath se chut gaya or wo 2 tukde me tut ker gir gaya.

Ye najara dekh naina ka to mano dil tut gaya .

Naina :-. Niiiiiiiiiii.

Wo wahi beth rone lagi , kyunki ye yantra uske liye sirf ek hathiyar ni , balki uske baba ki antim nishani roopi aashirwad tha , jise tuta hua dekh naina bahut aahat ho gayi.

Brahamrakshas naina ki or haste hue badhne lage , veer jaldi naina ki or doda or uski raksha kerte hue bola.

Veer :- naina sambhalo khud ko , ye samy rone ka ni h.

Ab veer akela hi bacha tha jo puri sena se bhid raha tha , vo kese bhi ker baki sari sena ko naina se dur le jane m laga hua tha.

tabhi vrushali ne moke ka fayda utha ek or waar , jo piche wale se dugne se bhi jyada shaktishali tha , naina pe ker dala , vrushali ko esa kerte hue veer ne dekh liya , ir wo jaldi se naina k samne pahunch dhal ban khada ho gaya.

Jise dekh vrushali ki hasi gayab ho gayi or vo chilayi.

Vrushali :- ni veer us shakti k raste se hat jaiye .

Per veer na hatha or agle hi pal us gole ka tez itna bad gaya ki vaha sabko dikhna band ho gaya.

Jiske agle hi second ek bahut bada dhamaka hua or charo taraf dhua fel gaya.

Vrushali ko laga ki uska vaar veer ko laga , jiske kaaran wo rote hue ghutno k bal beth chilayi

Vrushali :- veeeeeeeeerr

Lekin jab dhua hatha to jo usne dekha , usko dekh use samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo kese react kare.

Kyunki ye kya uska kiya gaya vaar veer ko ni balki preety ko laga tha .

Hua yu tha ki jese hi preety ne dekha ki vrushali ne ek bahut shaktishali vaar uski jaan or uske dost pe ker diya h.

To wo apni bachi kuchi shakti juta unki or bhagi or vrushali ka vaar apne uper le liya

Preety khun se lathapath ho piche ki or girne lagi , jise veer ne sambhala or rote hue bola.

Veer :- ye tumne kya kiya jaan , esa kyu kiya tumne .

Preety :- veer aap meri jaan hi , mera sab kuch ho , yaad h ek baar aapne bhi bina kukuch soche samjhe esa hi kiya tha, jabki aap jante the ki vo vaar aapki jan bhi le sakta tha, fir bhi aapne mujh jesi trittya ki raksha jis kaaran ki , aaj usi kaaran mane esa kiya , yani ki prem ki kathir.

M kese apni jan ko fir se apne kaaran sankat me aane deti , jaan mane to jis din se aapko apna sab kuch mana tha, usdin apni ye puri jindagi apke naam ker di thi , or jo chij meri h hi ni , use khone ka dae kesa.

(Veer k hoth chumte hue) I love u jaan.

Ye bol preety behosh ho gayi.

Veer naina ko gale se laga rone laga .

Naina jo khud ko.sambhal chuki thi , wo vrushali se boli.

Naina :- dekh rahi ho vrushali , sacha prem ise kahate h , prem ka arth keval pana hi ni hota , balki prem ka arth ya yu kaho uska dusra naam hi balidan h.

Prem koi sampati ya vastu ni h jise china ja sake , are prem to wo bhavna h jo 2 vyakti k aatma me utpann dharm rupi chetna k kaaran hi peda ho sakta h.

Dekho preety ka mujhse koi bhi rishta ni , lekin jab use pata chala ki meri jaan khatre me h , to ek ni anek baar vo meri dhal bani , kyu , kyunki uske man me mere liye prem tha .

Or ek tum ho , jisne na hi kabhi apni praja se prem kiya or unper keval atyachar kiye , kamzor manushyo ki rak ki pyasi bani tum

Yaha tak ki veer se prem bhi kiya to apne prem ko pane k liye shuruat hi adharm k marg se ki , apni sammohan shakti ka prayog ker , isliye tumne jise chaha , usise tumhe dhoka mila.

Naina k vachan sun vrushali ki ankhe khul gayi , use apni galti ka pachtava hone laga or uske aankho me jhar jhar aansu bahane lage

Vrushali pashchatap k ansu rote hue boli.

Vrushali :- tumhari kahi ek ek baat sach h naina , swarth or shakti k ahankar ne mmujhe itna andha bana dala ki m achai or burayi k bhed ko bhul khud samraat or uske bhai jesi ban gayi , ye bhul gayi ki hhum brahamrakshaso ka janm , trittyao ko rok sansar me santulan banane hua tha.

(Veer se ) ho sake to mujhe shama ker dijiyega veer ji , jo mane aapko chal se pane ka prayas kiya , naina ne sach kaha , apki prem ki adhikari mujhe jesi dusht rakshasi ni , balki preety jesi mahan aatma h.

Mane to itne paap kiye h ki m to maafi k layak bhi ni or ab jab m aapko bhi nni pa sakti to is jindagi ka kya fayda.

Ye bol vrushali ne apni aankhe band ker kuch mantra bol ek roshni preety ki or chodi , jiske padte hi preeti k sare ghav bhar gaye or vo hosh me aagayi.

Vrushali preety k pero me gir boli :-mujhe maaf ker do preety bahan , mane bahut badi galti ki , jo tum jesi sati se uske prem ko chinne ka prayas kiya.

(Veer se apni talvaar le preety ko dete hue) preety m dekh rahi hu ki samraat ka ant nikat aachuka h , jiska sadhan tum hogi , m ye to ni janti kese ,parantu aage k liye tumhe iski jarurat padegi meri bahan .

(Nam ankho se veer ki or dekte hue) veer ji bhale hi mera tarika galat ho , parantu is satya ko ishvar bhbhi ni nakar sakte ki m aapko pahali baar dekhte hi aapse sache hriday se prem kiya tha.

Lekin ab m jaan chuki hu ki aapke prem pe keval preety bahan ka adhikar h , isliye ab mere jine ka matlab ni raha .

Ummid h is janam me na sahi parantu agle kisi janm me aapka prem mujhe avashya milega or vo bhi bilkul.uchit marg pe chal ker .

Ye sun veer or uske dost abhi use rokne ko isse pahale kuch bolte usse pahale hi vrushali ne apni shaktiyo se apna deh tyag diya.

Vrushali ki mrityu dekh veer naina or preety 3no ki ankho me ashru the , ji is baat k praman the ki vo dukhi thi vrushali ki mrityu per

Kyunki vrushali ka rasta bhale hi galat ho lekin uska prem sacha tha or usne ant me apni galti swikaar ker apni mahanta ka bhi prichay diya tha

Tabhi vrushali k sharir se ek jyoti punj nikla , jisjise dekhte hi dekhte preety ne apne ander samahit ker liya.

Veer :-. Ye tumne kya kiya pari.

Preety :- jaan ye baat m bhi samjh chuki hu ki vrushali ne bhi aapse mere samman sacha prem kiya tha , or uske balidan ka kuch to inam milna hi chahiye na use , isliye mane uske ek ansh ko apne ander samahit ker liya , taki meri us nayi bahan ko bhi aapka prem mil sake mere roop me hi.

Veer preety ki mahanta ko dekh heran bhi tha or apne prem per use naaz bhi ho raha tha.

Vrushali ne apni talvaar preety ko de dali thi , jiska arth tha ki abse preety ka unper raaz ho gaya tha.

Lekin preety ne un sabko gulam banane k bajaye humesha k liye aazad ker dala or brahamrakshaso ko aadesh diya ki wo khud hi apne liye ek naya leader dhund le , jo unka dharm purvak netritv ker sake.

Preeti k is adesh se brahm rakshas bhi khush the , fir agle din veer ne apne hatho se vrushali ka apne hatho se antim sanskaar kiya

Fir naina or uske dosto ne brahamrakshaso se vida li or preety ne talvaar ko aage kiya , jjisse ek portal khul gaya or wo 3no wapas apni duniya yani prathvi pe pahunch gaye, kulbhata ganv me

Aaj k liye bas itna hi


Stay tuned




 

Harry rocks

Well-Known Member
6,912
18,325
189
Full of Action bro

Action scene ek dam mast tha bhai bole to Jhakkas karan ne mujhe Undertaker ki yaad dila di:chair:
Aur ye pret to BMC ke worker ki taraha kaam kar rahe hai:lol:

Aur ab lagta hai Veer sammohit hua hi nahi tha wo bas uski ek chal thi ab Rani ka talwar Veer ke hath Mai hai ab ayega asli maza hahaha :cigar:
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 930
 

Harry rocks

Well-Known Member
6,912
18,325
189
b

ht badhiya bhaiya mazedaar jaisa maine kha tha ki veer normal tha un powers ki wjh se vo ab sab thk kar dega or sabke saamne veer ki poweers ka raaz bhi aajaega
avenger wala part acha tha]
brilliant update
kee[ rocking bhai :)
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 930
 

Harry rocks

Well-Known Member
6,912
18,325
189
Nice one brother

I am supposed to be right
Right now as VEER ne RANI ki talwar tod di hai jisme uski shkti thi aur VEER toh kabhi sammohan mai aaya hi nhi so mai iss point pr apne aap ko shi samajh rha hoon filhaal
Joki situation ke hisaab se shi lag rhi hai

KARAN jald hi uske naye yan phir purane duahman jo uske piche pda hai uska pta lga lega aur kaand bhi kar ho dega

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 930
 

Harry rocks

Well-Known Member
6,912
18,325
189
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Rochak update khaskar naina preety or veer ka scene lajawab tha brahmrakshon ki dunia me.
Ajib sthiti ho gyi h inki .
Dekhe kya hota h ??
Or idhar , sab kuchh badhia raha.
After all ek fantastic or kamal ka update bhai.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 930
 

Harry rocks

Well-Known Member
6,912
18,325
189
Nice one brother

I am supposed to be right
Right now as VEER ne RANI ki talwar tod di hai jisme uski shkti thi aur VEER toh kabhi sammohan mai aaya hi nhi so mai iss point pr apne aap ko shi samajh rha hoon filhaal
Joki situation ke hisaab se shi lag rhi hai

KARAN jald hi uske naye yan phir purane duahman jo uske piche pda hai uska pta lga lega aur kaand bhi kar ho dega

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 930
 

Harry rocks

Well-Known Member
6,912
18,325
189
Nice update bro jaha Karan jyoti n lotne ke baad normal life shuru Kar di Hai wahi kuch log Hai jinko yah normal life bhi pasand nahi hai aur unhone abhi se apna khel khelna shuru Kar Dia hain. Aur yah kia preety aur Naina ke sath me jo unka chupa Hua trum card thaa wohi hi fas Gaya suhani aankho ke jaal me. Ab sahayd Naina ki Shakti a upgrade ho nahi to woh log buri Tarah phas chuke Hai
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 930
 
Top